Originally Posted by
Vindahl
I like to be honest, so...
I really like your effects, it is clear that you have used a lot of time on that, and have good understanding for it.
However, I dont like your screenshots in general.
I just dont quite feel that they are "Epic" moments. All of them pretty much shows the same thing, cavalry charging into infantry. And on all the pics I dont feel you have narrowed it good enough.
It gives the image some "stir" the way you have taken your screens.
Pic1 - Some elements in the pic are ruining the rest of the image I think. ( Half a lance there, some running infantry units there etc. ) Vegetation, mountains, the sky and the lightning is actually REALLY nice. All in all, actually a very good pic.
Pic2 - In my eyes, the worst of the images. I think the "photo" effect is not working on the pic. The cavalry are set good up here, it is just a really big shame that the infantry are standing as they are. Perhaps if you rotated the cam 90 degress, so we saw the infantry in front, with the charging cavalry behind them, also facing the cam. But then we would not have the wodden palisade in the back of course.
Pic3 - Nice calm picture, the sky-effect is just beautiful. However I think that the pic is too calm. The units should either be standing still or be charging. There is no action in walking units, not even on a horse! But a nice angle though.
Pic4 - Too messed up... Too few units to be a real battle scene, and too much "stir" to be an epic moment. With a pic this dark, I think the torches are ruining the feeling here.
My final advice... (Dont take this as "I-hate-your-work-you-amateur" kinda comment, I am not nearly as good as you, but I still wanted to give some contructive critisism, take it or leave it...)
I think you should take more time on finding the right spot to take the pic. If something is not working 100% Dont take the pic, wait, find a new moment, and search for a nice angle.
Personally, I dont care so much for the effects, they are nice to have of course, but the action on the pic is the most important. Vary your shots (its nice to look at a Monet painting of water lilys, but looking at 50 water lilys paintings can be quite boring, and you will not notice a lot of beuatiful details in each of them, you get me? let us see other pics than just charges, let us see other angles), be original and keep up the good work.