Search:

Type: Posts; User: Rien102; Keyword(s):

Search: Search took 0.08 seconds.

  1. Replies
    7
    Views
    812

    Re: MAARC LXXXIII - the winners!

    Congrats to all three! It is a nice reading for sure! :thumbsup2
  2. Replies
    7
    Views
    504

    Poll: Re: MAARC LXXXIII - the tie-break!

    I cannot vote so, I wanted to tell all three that I was already reading you. I like them all. Had a bit of catch up to do on one 'cause... well, it's summer and it's more family time you see...
    ...
  3. Re: "A First Command" (pretty short story - few chapters)

    ...and I must do two posts 'cause I didn't managed to make a multiquote one! lol sorry



    This! Sir, you've made my day! That is before I came to the comment about my English... I am always...
  4. Re: "A First Command" (pretty short story - few chapters)

    Am overworked atm and didn't come for about 10 days to discover two comments!

    First tks for taking the time to read it!


    I thought a lot about that and this story, as it is... There are...
  5. Re: "A First Command" (pretty short story - few chapters)

    Tks for the links and suggestions Alwyn. I took a first look but will dive into the links more during the week.
  6. Re: "A First Command" (pretty short story - few chapters)

    As I said in the very first post, this pretty much was a trial run, to see if there was enough quality in my writing before going any further...

    As for ideas for other tales, I think it might be...
  7. Re: "A First Command" (pretty short story - few chapters)

    This is the last part of the story. Please, feel free to comment...



    “Tell the 2nd, 3rd, 5th and 6th to pursue, keep the rest inside... and clean the entrance so we could close the gate…” said...
  8. Re: "A First Command" (pretty short story - few chapters)

    “The 4th is down to forty eight men able to fight, sir. Half of the dead and wounded from the archers and slingers… The 1st is down to forty two still capable of fighting” said Messinus to Dexus...
  9. Re: "A First Command" (pretty short story - few chapters)

    Story pass the half way mark with that post.


    The enemy was at the gate. Using their shields, they protected the first ram and the men using it on the western gate. The Celtiborum emptied their...
  10. Re: "A First Command" (pretty short story - few chapters)

    Already a stadium away from the forest line, hundreds of german barbarians were coming toward the camp. Walking in the snow, they were shouting and taunting the guards. Dexus couldn’t believe his...
  11. Re: "A First Command" (pretty short story - few chapters)

    Tks for the comments. Here's the next part



    “Make sure that all are well clothed, Lucius…” was saying Centurion Messinus to Centurion Lucius Pius, the leader of the 3rd Century.


    The...
  12. Replies
    15
    Views
    1,569

    Re: Nature of the antagonist

    Thank you to all who came into this discussion. It was very interesting but, mainly, you have offered me great insights and a lot to think of... form the nature of the antagonist, to the type, to...
  13. Replies
    15
    Views
    1,569

    Re: Nature of the antagonist

    That is something I find interesting... I must say I never went through a story where the protagonist is inherantly bad... Must be the North American side of things I guess ;)


    That is...
  14. Replies
    15
    Views
    1,569

    Re: Nature of the antagonist

    This was an interesting aspect that I didn't look at...



    It got me thinking further down the rabbit hole though... Do you think it could be possible to create a story where the antagonist...
  15. Re: "A First Command" (pretty short story - few chapters)

    Tks for the links Alwyn. They are bookmarked and read already!
    Here is the second part of the story.

    When Military Tribune Septimus Varro Dexus got out of his tent the next morning, he was glad...
  16. Replies
    15
    Views
    1,569

    Nature of the antagonist

    In writing in general, there usually is a clearly outlined/designated antagonist that goes against the main character(s)/protagonist(s). I still am debating though how that antagonist needs to be...
  17. "A First Command" (pretty short story - few chapters)

    Good day all,

    this is a first post. My desire would be to have some feedbacks from the chaps here. Decided to post it here first since I didn't do it as an AAR per se. Little note, I'm not an...
Results 1 to 17 of 17