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  1. Thread: Osaka · Ch.3

    by Alwyn
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    Re: Osaka · Ch.3

    You are building a vivid impression of your characters - and their tensions, struggles and sorrows. It's sad (at least for me) that Yukimura reacted to the letter with such apparent indifference.
  2. Re: A OtherRealm Productions - Men of the Mountains AAR (DCILA)

    The formation of the Renegades of the Eye is an interesting development. Good episode!
  3. Re: Written in Sand (Nabataean AAR for EBII)[updated: Oct 15]

    The connection between Mun'at would fight the Greeks, and how Zaadi would have fought Mun'at (if Mun'at has pursued him) is well done. I wonder whether Mun'at will reveal his other reason for wanting...
  4. Re: To earn a Kingdom: A Northern Dúnedain Narrative - Divide and Conquer V2.1 [UPDATE - 14/10/2020]

    I like the way that you describe Eldarion's frustration and how he emerges from the darkness of his cell to the unfamilar brightness of the Great Hall. There's a nice parallel (at least, in my mind)...
  5. Re: A OtherRealm Productions - Duchy of Athens (Tsardoms)

    Good episode, this demonstrates well the unpedictable twists and confusion which can occur in battle.
  6. Re: [Chivalry TW] From Duchy to Empire - A Bohemian AAR

    That is a challenging start, with a struggling economy and only militia spearmen and basic archers initially. I like the idea of needing to make the most of a rag-tag army, while avoiding the...
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    Re: Derc Plays Through World History

    A fitting end, indeed (for the Morini and for the campaign)!
  8. Thread: UESW 516 - VOTE!

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    Sticky: Poll: Re: UESW 516 - VOTE!

    Great pictures! Voted.
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    Sticky: Poll: Re: GPOTW 185 - VOTE!

    Cool pictures! Voted.
  10. Sticky: Re: The Winners of POTW 614 & 615, GPOTW 184 and UESW 515!

    Congratulations to King Athelstan, spiderknight, Swaeft and Hitai - as Turk said, these are pictures that fire up the imagination (thanks for hosting these competitions, Turk). :)
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    Re: [IB:RO AAR] Empire of the Unconquered Sun

    You've got me interested in how Aurelien will re-unite the Empire and in what should have been. Like isa0005, I'm looking forward to this!
  12. Re: [IB Ruina Romae] Surviving the Hordes - A Western Roman Empire Campaign

    Your plan seems to be working well despite losses in some areas. As you said, it looks like your rivals in Iberia have exhausted their strength fighting each other, presenting Western Rome with an...
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    Re: Swords Made of Letters

    I enjoyed these characters looking back at what happened during the war. After I got to know them during your story, it's nice to see that they survived, despite everything that their wartime...
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    Re: This is the Way (933 word short story)

    An intriguing and dreamlike tale!
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    Re: Scorched Earth - 800 word brooding flash

    Yes, the wordplay is well done and the idea of the main character deciding to "antagonize his own mind" is a thought-provoking one, I wonder if this is connected with the incident that left him with...
  16. Re: Throne of Pendragon. Chronology of the Great War

    I agree, this is an interesting blend of Arthurian mythology and Roman history.
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    Poll: Re: GPOTW 184 - VOTE!

    Great pictures, good luck! Voted.
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    Poll: Re: POTW 614 - REVOTE!

    Cool pictures, a difficult choice! Voted.
  19. Thread: UESW 515 - VOTE!

    by Alwyn
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    Poll: Re: UESW 515 - VOTE!

    Good pictures, good luck! Voted.
  20. Thread: POTW 615 - VOTE!

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    Poll: Re: POTW 615 - VOTE!

    Great pictures, good luck! Voted.
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    Re: The Winner of GPOTW 183!

    Cool picture, congratulations Cookiegod!
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    Article: The Ruthven Barracks

    You can view the page at https://www.twcenter.net/forums/content.php?488-The-Ruthven-Barracks
  23. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    I thought that DreamKing was a newcomer this year, but I was mistaken - DreamKing was writing before the period covered by the current Yearly Awards. I am sorry about this. There may be other...
  24. Thread: Osaka · Ch.3

    by Alwyn
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    Re: Osaka · Ch.1

    My reaction is similar to Turk's, Yukimura's condition comes across powerfully: a general without an army, a war to fight, or even the will to live - except that he can't abandon his daughter.

    I...
  25. Re: To earn a Kingdom: A Northern Dúnedain Narrative - Divide and Conquer V2.1 [UPDATE - 07/10/2020]

    Your descriptions of Middle-earth's places and people are effective, I feel as if I'm walking beside Eldarion on his journey. Travelling alone seems dangerous - he has no-one to keep watch, no-one to...
  26. Re: [IB Ruina Romae] Surviving the Hordes - A Western Roman Empire Campaign

    I had the same reaction which you had in the opening battle, I was worried that the enemy had found another way to cross the river. Initially I was worried that you didn't have many melee infantry to...
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    Re: Derc Plays Through World History (Current: Rome II - Caesar in Gaul)

    Ah, I see, silly hats aren't the same thing as funny hats. It sounds like the guy with the funny hat saved Gaul - and even the Roman republic - from a series of very strange events (with the help of...
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    Re: Wood's Guide to Whiskies

    Sláinte! A wonderfully evocative review. :)
  29. Re: Written in Sand (Nabataean AAR for EBII)[updated: Oct 1]

    Your writing captures well the harshness of the environment they're travelling through. The reaction of the Nabati to the harships they endure, and Mun'at's response, comes across well. I'm intrigued...
  30. Re: A OtherRealm Productions - Men of the Mountains AAR (DCILA)

    The fortress at 3:15 has a familiar design! It looks like the Men of the Mountains are conserving their strength, weakening their enemies without committing themselves to a full attack against...
  31. Re: [IB Ruina Romae] Surviving the Hordes - A Western Roman Empire Campaign

    Pulling back your infantry in the face of Filimer's well-equipped Visigoths, allowing more time for your reinforcements to arrive, looks like a smart move. Rome's cavalry look very effective,...
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    Re: Swords Made of Letters

    That does sound lengthy, good luck with the editing!
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    Sticky: Re: TotW Story Archive

    TotW 296 - Hero of the Hour
    crisis, panic, breathe, mask, resolve
    http://www.twcenter.net/images/content/quill/tale%20of%20the%20week/Vasnetsov_samolet_50.jpg
    The Flying Carpet, a depiction of the...
  34. Tale of the Week 296: Hero of the Hour - Winner's Circle

    << Picture of the Week | Tale of the Week | Writers' Study General Competitions | Graphics Workshop Monthly Competition >>


    Hero of the Hour
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    Poll: Re: GPOTW 182 - VOTE!

    Voted, good luck!
  36. Thread: UESW 514 - VOTE!

    by Alwyn
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    Poll: Re: UESW 514 - VOTE!

    Voted, good luck!
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    Poll: Re: UESW 513 - RE-VOTE!

    Voted, good luck!
  38. Thread: VOTM 82 - VOTE!

    by Alwyn
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    Sticky: Poll: Re: VOTM 82 - VOTE!

    Voted, great videos!
  39. Re: The Winners of POTW 613, GPOTW 181 and UESW 512

    Congratulations to Turk, Cookiegod and Swaeft, cool pictures!
  40. Re: Article: Review of ahowl11's Vanilla Enhancement Mod for Rome Total War

    Thanks for a great review, Drtad, and congratulations to ahowl11 on the recent release of v18 of your Vanilla Enhancement Mod (and thanks for the hotfix, too)!
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