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    Hello everyone!

    After reading Darkan's fantastic AAR (found in the frontpage!) I've decided to reinstall Stainless Steel and give my favorite faction another go. My schedule remains constricted, even as I write this, but I've chosen to try and keep the prologue a bit vagued untill I can commit to writing a more in-depth chapter.

    This AAR features Poland and uses Khan's Rise of Bulgaria sub-mod


    |The Polish-Roman border, 1285|

    Mieszlav parried a blow and spun on his heels, thrusting his longsword deep into a peasant's abdomen.
    To his side, Morvan and Otto both kept their ground, oblivious to the enemy numbers.

    Otto's steed was wailing frantically as the knight tried to pry a spear from its leg, only for the man to be felled by a wayward bolt.

    Mieszlav screamed. Morvan rushed to his side, blood and gore dripping from his armor, his gait uneven as he trampled on the dead and the dying.

    The horns boomed a retreat and Mieszlav could see his father's army making a quick, unorganized retreat, leaving what remained of his unit stranded.

    'We're going to make it. We have to make it.'

    A sloppy thrust parried and repaid with a punch, sending a mercenary backwards. The two stood their ground, amidst fallen comrades, torn banners and bloodied arms.

    Mieszlav's breathed in the stench of war and exhaled, his sword finding the mercenary's gut, while Morvan deflected a blow with his shield and pummeled a lesser noble to a bloody pulp.

    "I was going to propose!"

    "To Edda?!"

    "Plough that witch! You know it's Anna I'm after!" the shieldbearer replied and moved to a kneel, his shield peppered with bolts.

    Mieszlav took the advantage to lunge forward and rid the world of the shocked crossbowmen, and then quickly moved to his companion's side.

    "And now you're here, covered in blood crap and piss- and only half of it yours!"

    Morvan's weary frame shuddered with laughter, which came to an abrupt end once a heavy mace found his head.

    Mieszlav last thoughts were of his wife and home.

    -----------------

    Wladyslaw's bloodshot eyes scanned the parchment.
    The borders were decorated with beautiful illustrations of the twin-headed eagle taking flight.

    A large pool of ink formed where the pen stopped.
    He breathed, finally singing his name on the bottom of the paper and handed it to a groomed statesman.

    "All is well," he croaked, his mouth twisting with displeasure at the signature, yet stashed the heap of papers nonetheless "An Imperial envoy will come to collect young Kowan from Krakow in ten days."

    There was nothing to add. No more paperwork to sign, no more plans to groom into fruition.

    Now was finally the time to mourn the loss of his son and heir, and the loss of prince Kowan, soon to be ward under the Emperor's watchful gaze.

    "Leave me" he commanded, and only once the shuffling of boots and bodies stopped, and blessed silence dominated the throne room, did King Wladyslaw weep.


    |Krakow, Summer of 1287|

    The city has changed a lot since his departure.
    Once a bustling center for trade and commerce, where goods and fortune seekers from both the east and west crossed, the city of Krakow now laid on it's deathbed.

    Of course, there were the farmers and local industries that kept the city, and kingdom, from falling apart, but gone were the colorful stalls and flashing banners, the hymn of busy streets and construction work.

    The stranger's grim faced retinue escorted him to the palace entry, where he was promptly welcomed and asked to make haste by a nervous servant.

    Much like the city without, the Palace of Krakow stood eerily silent and bleak.

    The doors to the throne room were open, and the chamber held a large number of people, all watching in anticipation as a sole, powerful voice carried on.

    "...Which is why I sentence you, Wydlar of Krod, to death by execution, under the crime of plotting against your king, country, and fellow men."

    The man in question was held in place by two burly men dressed in red and black, his face a network of scars and recently inflicted wounds.

    "This trial is blasphemy!" he wrangled against his captors and spat towards the shocked crowd "I demand a trial by combat! I deman-"

    Wladyslaw's palm rose, and one of the burly men hit Wydlar's nape with a heavy, gloved hand.

    "I know my rights!"

    Soon, the crowd joined the man's pleas, some insisting that only God may judge a man whose crime is so severe, and others calling Wladyslaw's justice flawed and cruel.

    "Then I will be the king's sword"

    The youth found himself repeating the claim once, twice, and then a third time to overcome the jeering crowd and rabid prisoner.

    An easy, calm gait carried him through the ring of spectators while a palm rested upon his sheathed blade. He shot the men restraining the prisoner a hard look and promptly extended his hand to help the wretched soul to its feet.

    Wladyslaw exchanged a weary look with his advisors and wife, who was beaming at the robed stranger and leaned her head against the man besides her and whispered in his ear.

    "Very well," he rose "This man will fight under my name. Who will be your champion, Wydlar of Krod?"

    "I will fight for my own name, as proper men do!"

    Boleslaw found himself grinning and took a step back, sword at hand, ready to challenge the now armed criminal.

    Wydlar opened the duel with a quick jab, and prepared to elbow the man's jaw, his body already moving forward when the foreigner sidestepped the blow and ran the length of his blade through his opponent's body.

    Wydlar's body sank downwards, slumped, his life force ebbing with a disgusting symphony of cleaved abdomen and of intestines free of their fleshy cage.

    A man gagged, while another spilled the content of his bowels. The crowd muttered and murmured, exchanging accusations, quick prayers and exclaims of disbelief.

    There was a moment of silence as the gathered witnessed the prince shrug free of the man's weak embrace and clean his sword over his trousers, all ending with a graceful bow towards the seated king.
    -----------------
    In the coming days, a sudden jolt of livelihood caught the city of Krakow, as the realm shook awake by the return of prince Boleslaw, heir to the Polish throne.
    And much like his city the heavy-set monarch quickly stirred awake, sending emissaries, dispatching servants, and opening his manor with daily feasts fed nobles both high and low.
    Boleslaw mostly found himself seated with his elders and the more esteemed dukes that composed the small council. At times, however, he found himself lending an ear to the Hungarian monarch and his entourage or even a wayward Druzhina on his way to the west.
    The week-long festivities soon came to pass, yet the spirit that shook the realm remained, and the otherwise vacant streets of Krakow were now beginning to house stalls and foreigners, with the unmistakable cling and clang of crafts and metalwork.



    And it was on that day that Wladyslaw has once more summoned the small council, together with Boleslaw.
    The warm summer sun lit up the rejuvenated and reorganized chamber, and all eagerly shifted in their seats once the great doors closed shut.



    "…As all of you know, my son and heir, prince Boleslaw, has returned to the fold after a long absence in southern France," the king paused, appraising the szlachta before continuing. Seemingly satisfied by their silence, he enrolled a sealed document across the table, presenting the map of Europe.



    "Which is why I think it is high time we repay an old debt."



    A wave of murmurs and whispers suddenly filled the chamber. An unseen shadow took hold of the meeting. Men coughed or shifted with unease, and the otherwise light-hearted tchink and tchank of hoisted goblets ceased.



    "We've allowed Konrad to remain sick and bound in his abode for long enough," contributed Mathias Cvejani, "But are we sure that mustering our army northward is wise, with the western and southern borders still remaining unstable?"



    "To not take action against the vermin is to spit at the face of our sons!" countered another, rousing a loud cheer and a hymn of fists and rocking boots.



    Throats rang and ached as each noble took his turn, at times arguing with his predecessor and at times supporting another.



    Boleslaw's seated frame suddenly rose. The lithe noble towered over the rest, his eyes moving between the squabbling councilmen.



    "Men of the council," he began, again pausing to await a rowdy nobleman "I've been absent for ten innocent years, ten years where I toiled under the tutelage of the greatest minds Europe has to offer, and I come back to find my inheritance diverged and trampled- but not under the heel of a foreign monarch, but rather, by indecision and cowardice."



    As none dared interrupt the prince, Boleslaw continued, "If the lot of you fear for your own lives and enterprises, then I will gladly take it upon myself to rid this world of our common enemy."



    The prince sat back and allowed the chamber to once more echo with talks of logistics and war maneuvers.
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    This is excellent penmanship HuliganFish..., I will definitely subscribe and await for more. However busy your schedule is, I do hope it will allow you to update fairly regularly. Thank you for your kind words as well.
    PS: If not intentional you might want to edit the post as it's aligned right. A bit heavy on the eye but not a big issue.
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    Good to see you giving AAR writing another shot! I really enjoyed this first update! I really like the dialogue as it sets the stage for good character building!

    Like Darkan said, the right-justified text is a bit harder to read than the more expected left-justified. It looks like you have too few posts to edit your own, so if it was unintentional just get in touch and I or another WS staff member would be happy to correct it for you!

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    Great start! Boleslaw sounds like a skilled warrior and a decisive leader, I look forward to seeing more of him in action.

    Like Darkan and Axis, I'd prefer left-justified text. As Axis said, you will soon have enough posts (25 or more) to be able to edit your chapters. A good way to reach 25 more quickly, and to become better known among the writers here, is to post encouraging comments on other AARs and Creative Writing. (If you add a link to your AAR in your signature, this could encourage other writers to post on your AAR.)

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    Thank you for the kind comments!
    I wanted to continue writing before I dissapear for the rest of the week (where i'll probably have enough time to catch and comment on the rest of the great AARs in this forum).

    I do hope you enjoy this update!

    P.S: I would love your assistance with editing my first post by aligning it to the left :)



    |Halych, Summer of 1287|

    Anna's mind drifted.

    She found herself unable to sleep in this new, foreign bed, under a man she did not know bar the few rumors his sole existence sprung. And yet he offered her shelter and protection, with no demands in return.

    Halych was not Wroclaw. Its high walls made the stories she heard of the savages that live beyond the Polish fringes wild, and she often mistook a shadow to a cutthroat.

    And in those nights, she did not skip a beat at every flap of a curtain or flicker of a flame, she dreamt of Mieszlav.
    How was his death like? Did he suffer? Did he think of her when his body was broken beyond recognition, or cut into tiny pieces that not even the birds could scrap?

    While every dream was different, her beloved always suffered.

    She exhaled and plopped to a stand, her bare feet making little noise against the faded cobble.

    'Tonight, I will brave the doorway'
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    |Prussia, Autumn 1288|

    What first begun as a pleasant call to arms soon turned into a chaotic race, as plans were quickly set in motion, and men once more found themselves leaving their homes to answer the call of their betters.

    With each day, Boleslaw's army grew, as many Dukes were eager to see their realm and king born anew under the influence of the returned Prince.

    It seemed as if the world itself urged Boleslaw forward, as the fading Summer still offered pleasant days and bearable nights.

    And then they reached Palanga.

    The city, whose very name became so alien to the Polish people in recent years stood mighty and grim, it's outskirts neglected, and roads muddied and troublesome.

    The nights became colder, longer, and the days that accompanied the encirclement were bleak and ominous. The wind itself carried the echoes of the past, and Boleslaw's men swore they heard figureless pleas urging them to turn back and cease their work.

    Of course, the prince was quick to hang anyone who refused to cooperate, and thus, soon enough, the once proper city, jewel of the surrounding lands, was besieged and watched helplessly as the soldiers without prepared their breaching tools.

    Boleslaw sat within his command tend with the rest of his retinue and captains atop a spread illustration of the city.

    "…And here Olemn will lead his infantry. That way the will have no other choice but to sally out and try to halt our advance. Am I clear?"

    A single 'Understood' was uttered by the gathered, and the captains were dismissed to pass down the plan of attack to their units.

    The prince finally allowed himself to slump down on a cushioned chair. His eyes were sunk, tired orbs of blue, and his palm desperately searched for a goblet of wine.

    "Is it true, then?"

    "What is?" he suddenly straightened and accepted an offered goblet

    "What they say about Konrad," continued Jakob "About what happened during the war."

    Boleslaw's jaw moved this way and that as he considered his next words. He finally resettled, his body pressed hard against the worn cushion and wordlessly stretched the cup for a refill.

    Suddenly, the rest of his retinue huddled around their commander, eager for his words.

    "…What my father often neglects to mention is that Konrad, his brother and duke of Palanga, was the man whom suggested we rebel against the Emperor. In his mind, we could have capitalized on the empire's excommunication for territorial and economical gain, whilst also receiving papal support to further push into Pagan ground," he stopped and drank deeply, his eyes darting between the eager nobles "But that was a ruse. Konrad's heavy cavalry was planned to wait and ambush the engaged enemy. In truth, his forces left the field when the horns blew and turned tail towards Krakow."

    Jakob, Ulmahn and Rafal coughed uneasily, while Mislev and Joseph stared at their prince and commander in shock.

    "What the common people do know, is that Konrad tried to besiege the capital but failed once his steed was shot down by a wayward bolt. His force panicked, and he was rushed out of the battlefield."

    Boleslaw leaned back against his chair and drank deeply from the goblet's content. His retinue remained silent for a long time, digesting the news.

    "Mieszlav was a good man, my lord. I knew him well."

    "We will be meeting the enemy on first light. Get some proper sleep," his voice came off as neutral, calm, yet carried an unmistaken command.


    The morning brought little change. Again, the sun struggled to penetrate the grey sky above, and even as they formed, the wind carried a sense of dread and desolation.

    Konrad's men stood guard over the wall, the braziers and torches that kept the walls alit over the night were still burning.

    They were troubled, sickly looking men, that despite donning the red and yellow of house Bojvan, did not emanate a sliver of pride.

    The order was given, and Boleslaw's infantry advanced with crude ladders and rams, racing through the muddied field under archer fire.

    A man screamed while another wailed, as bones and flesh were pierced.

    Just as the ram was about to seal the gate, Konrad's men forced it open and sallied out to meet Boleslaw's infantry.



    With this, Boleslaw drove his own company forward and called for the men docking the ladders to surge towards the gate, quickly overwhelming the defenders and pouring into the walled city.

    The polish riders broke whatever formation the defenders tried to muster, their long lances finding flesh wherever the struck, and their swords sliced the unprotected peasant flesh with disturbing ease.



    Boleslaw quickly dismounted from his horse and hacked his way through the dwindling defenders.

    'This is all too easy. Is this all it took to really fell the man who sold my kingdom?'

    A spear found his bicep but was unable to penetrate his mail. The pain forced him back to reality, and he repaid the commoner in kind, dismembering his limb.

    "Where are you hiding Konrad?!"

    He shoved the wailing commoner aside and leapt across the strewn corpsefield, often parrying a blow and allowing his retinue to deal with what remained of the city guard.

    The cries of the dying accompanied him as he marched deeper and deeper into the city, yet slowly, as the battle concluded, only eerie silence remained, and he could only hear the occasional whimper between the trudges of his heavy boots.

    And then he found it.

    A large, wooden manor that dominated the city center, it's entry clear of any guard.

    His boot forced the door open and he rushed upstairs through empty, dark chambers, that seemed as if they haven't seen use for years. Empty bottles laid strewn across the floor and furniture, doors were open yet led into empty or cobweb infested rooms.

    After what seemed like an eternity, Boleslaw halted before a well-lit room, with its door open to a crack.
    'This is it'

    His heart pounded, his breath was quick and shallow. He stepped into the room with one quick motion, sword at hand, aimed at whatever may lurk within.

    "Greetings, Boleslaw."

    The voice came from within the room. On top of a worn wooden throne sat a well-dressed man, with oily, long black hair and beady eyes. His left leg and arm were noticeably mangled and misshapen, broken into an impossible angle even as he sat.

    "Not what you expected?" he read the young noble's expression and suddenly, a wry smile forced itself unto Konrad's features "Treachery has its price, cousin."

    Boleslaw carefully stepped forward, sword still at hand, aimed at Konrad's throat.

    "It does indeed," the prince replied wearily and stepped forward, his visage darting this way and that to survey the room "And I am here to collect your debt."

    Konrad wrangled backwards against the throne, yet his face remained set in stone.

    "Even snakes cling to life, don't they?"

    A final step carried the tip of his sword into Konrad's chest, and the man yelped in agony, his fingers digging into the worn wood.

    The instrument twisted and turned in the men's chest, it's tip hungrily devouring the pouring crimson.

    Boleslaw smirked, and left the dying noble to wither on his throne.
    -----------------
    |Halych, Autumn 1288|

    Zbigniew looked at the painting with admiration, and then past the colored canvas to the countryside without.

    Taking his time to appreciate the rising sun, he calmly leaned back against his chair and sipped from a plain cup.

    "Adam," he turned to spot the servant, whom hurried along to his lord's side "Wake up our guest. I believe it's high time we conducted a proper introduction. Have the servants arrange for a fitting breakfast, too."

    "Right away, my lord"

    Adam left the balcony with a steady, relaxed pace, his soft voice piping here and there as he ordered the household about.

    Zbigniew breathed in the sweet autumn breeze and returned to his craft, adding colors and tiny details that further fleshed the painting.

    The sun was already above the mountain peaks when Anna was seated outside.

    Before her, the table was laden with an impressive and colorful array of culinary delights and a goblet of wine. Zbigniew himself continued to toil on the painting but turned to greet his guest with a tilt of a head and a simple gesture to take a seat.

    "I suppose I owe you an introduction."

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    Another good update! Fun to see the first taste of combat for our characters, and the clip of Anna's perspective was very interesting. The cliff-hanger at the end leaves me wondering who this mystery guest might be!

    I left aligned your first post for you as well, shouldn't be too long now before you can edit posts yourself! If you do find the time to browse and comment on other AARs it will certainly help!

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    Well done, having Boleslaw take the first step in the restoration/consolidation of his kingdom. Can't wait to see where Anna fits in in the story and if/how she can influence events.
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    Boleslaw comes across as a capable commander and a skilled fighter; he has some good lines, I especially like the one about the 'the man who sold my kingdom.

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    |Krakow, Autumn 1288|


    The sound of shifting boots, furniture, and the handling of paperwork filled the chamber.


    Servants were moving between one noble to the next, taking requests or jotting down comments regarding the topic at hand.

    Wladyslaw leaned back in his chair.


    A messenger has just arrived from Palanga, informing the small council of Boleslaw's success and Konrad's demise, sending the men abuzz.


    "You ought to be proud of your son, my liege," added a man to Wladyslaw's left "He has-"


    The Polish monarch slammed an open palm upon the table, commanding the council's attention. He had to repeat the practice one, twice, each time silencing a bigger part of the noblemen, until they all turned to stare at their liege.


    "Boleslaw's success is a welcomed breath of fresh air, true- But he also wishes seize the momentum and advance against the Skalvians."


    He paused for a moment, allowing his words to sink in.


    Advancing into pagan territory was any proper Christian's goal, but that would also mean a continued sink of funds and maintaining a troublesome supply line.


    "Virgil!"


    "Yes, my liege?" piped the servant to his right


    "Fetch us a proper map of the Pagan lands. And some wine," his fingers drummed on the table "A lot of wine."


    Once the man left, chaos took hold of the people.


    "How do you suggest we maintain our own garrison while Boleslaw is prancing about with more than half of our levy?!"


    "What if the Pagans launch raiding parties at our undefended fields? You can't expect one army to maintain the peace!"


    The bickering went on, with people supporting each side of the argument. Wladyslaw's lips remained shut, his heavy posture set back against the throne as he patiently waited for the map to be fetched.


    "If I may add," another voice pierced through the racket, a smooth, pleasant addition in the sea of croaked and hoarse throats that has thus far dominated the room "Boleslaw is here-" he stopped and snatched a folded map from the hands of a surprised Virgil "Our main concern should not be our fields, because his force is large enough to demand their full attention. Possibly even unite some different tribes."


    He dipped his finger in wine and passed it over the map, much to the servant's dismay. Small, crimson lines served to illustration Boleslaw's advance and the unification of different tribes.


    "What we should worry about is the Empire to our west, as they may fully commit to advancing on our unprotected rear" his finger moved from Wroclaw towards Krakow, which he encircled. He licked off what remained of the wine before dipping his finger again.


    "My king?"


    "You may proceed," Wladyslaw allowed and shadowed his words with a gesture


    The noble's youthful features shifted to form a smile, his posture shifted towards the table as he continued to lecture the small council.
    |Western Lithuania, Sambian land, Autumn 1288|


    "Do you think the messenger made it to Krakow?"


    The tent's entry shifted sideways as a handful of burly men stepped within.


    Boleslaw, and the rest of his retinue's attention snapped at their direction, with Jakob's palm coming to rest upon the hilt of his sword.


    "No need to be so tense lads"


    "Speak," the heir spat, straightening his back


    "There is a large force encamped a four-hour march from here to the east. Their camp is not fortified. I'd say there are around five hundred pagans, five sentries every two hundred paces or so."


    "Something caught their attention?" Rafal offered with an arced brow, yet the burly men only shrugged. A heap of leaves cascaded from their cloaks.


    "Whatever it is, they're there, and we did what we were told," the scout produced a scrambled piece of paper "Illustration included. Just like you asked."


    Boleslaw snatched it and spread it upon the table. His retinue seemed to largely keep to themselves, some drinking wine, some occupying themselves with a set of bone dice or a whet stone and a dull blade.


    "Dismissed. I will call you again if you are needed."


    The man in charge of the scouts bowed stiffly and made a curt turn on his heels towards the exit.


    "What's the plan?" Jakob joined his lord's side, studying the crude map. The pagans were set in a tight square, with several points of interested circled or highlighted.


    "We split our force to four different groups, and I will distribute you lot evenly to make sure nothing goes wrong," Boleslaw shot a finger at the extreme bottom right, the point closest to their own camp "One group will infiltrate from here, another from here, here, and finally, there. Since the grounds are so heavily guarded we may simply be lucky to catch them by surprise rather than in their sleep. Which is why we've to dedicate a small number of riders to encircle the camp and shoot down any survivor that escapes."
    Jakob blinked, and Rafal left his blade aside to look at the map. Soon, the rest of Boleslaw's retinue shifted closer.

    YVY

    Night fell on the Pagan lands.


    A bleak darkness swallowed the sun whole, and the waning moon desperately tried to fend off the overwhelming starless night.
    Boleslaw's detachment advanced to the edge of the camp. He ran a cloth over his bloodied blade, which just recently claimed the life of a sentry.


    His eyes narrowed, mustering whatever light emanated from the camp to help him study his surroundings.


    To his left and right, Henry and Mathias crouched readily, their unarmored bodies tense, ready to pounce at a heartbeat.


    His men followed him further into the camp, and while he advanced onwards, men darted left and right, entering and exiting tents like mute angels of death, claiming the lives of the sleeping soldiers within.


    Boleslaw's blade found a man's throat and put him to a painless rest.


    "Pasala!"


    A voice boomed, and suddenly, the entire camp was abuzz- drums and shields battered together, tents were flipped, and confused shouts rose through-out the camp.


    Boleslaw's company exchanged nervous looks they tightened their formation. Whatever effort to maintain secrecy was thrown out of the window, and the Polish heir hoisted his blade


    "Slaughter them all!"


    Rafal lunged forward and impaled an unarmed man through the gut, while Jakob fended another. A man javelin found the neck of one of his soldiers and pinned him to a makeshift wall. Boleslaw exhaled and sliced his throat, ending the man's frantic spasm. More and more Pagans poured to face the Poles, most armed with a simple weapon.


    Jakob threw his own spear and impaled a man by the thigh, then proceeded with several other men to hack throw the flesh-made barricade.


    "Push onward!"


    Steel found steel, and what was not a moment ago a silent camp was held by a nauseating hymn of whimpers, groans, the clashing of arms and the death of men.


    The polish detachment cut their way onwards and soon came face to face with their brethren, encircled by a host of pagan spearmen. A small pile of corpses was already mounting, and the grass was sticky with pagan and Christian fluid.


    Boleslaw charged onwards with his company and hacked the men apart.


    "Olemn! Report, damn it!"


    The man in question sported several shallow cuts and bruises over his abdomen and limbs, yet when one ear was supposed to be, only a stick pool of blood remained. The commander seemed shocked at first, and he was forcefully shook awake by another comrade.
    Meanwhile, the combined Polish force formed a circle, fending off another charge.


    "Eugh...Eh- Some escaped, some escaped to the woods...We were making our way to the alter when we heard the alarm. We were caught off guard..."


    A loud war cry caught Boleslaw's attention, and he snapped his attention to the left, where a large, organized force of Pagan warriors was making a slow advance, spears at the ready while a heavily armored individual instructed the men further.


    "Men! Form a line to the rear and the right! Don't let them flank us!"


    Boleslaw formed a thin line to face the advancing Pagans.


    Their spears found several of his warriors, and suddenly, the situation became a desperate fight for survival.


    A tip found Rafal's shoulder, but he repaid the man with a jab to the neck. Jakob's heavy blade was far more suited to breaking the spear shafts than to duel the men, but he, too, sustained an injury and was forced back.
    Boleslaw's blade found flesh with each swing. His sight went red.


    Both of the lines he installed were occupied with fending the Pagans, yet their numbers were quickly dwindling.


    "Mirtis ateina Kristian!"


    Boleslaw found his line to be pushed back, surrendering more and more ground and men to the organized Pagan push. Rafal was heavily bleeding now, his movement sluggish. A spear tip to the chest ended his life.
    Suddenly, the Pagan chieftain caught fire.



    "For Poland! For God! For Boleslaw!"


    A mad charge carried a handful of poles from the Pagan rear. A man stopped to lob another torch at their formation, while their leader, one of Boleslaw's retinue leapt forward and sliced a man's arm. He hoisted a torch with his offhand and shoved the burning instrument into another's face.


    What followed was a maelstrom of violence and gore, as the two lines decimated the remaining Pagans.


    "Aleks! Report!"


    "My lord! We have decimated the eastern side and made our way here once we heard your voice."


    "We've to make it back to the camp! Gather the men and let's cleave our way out!"


    Boleslaw studied his force.


    He lost roughly fourth of the three combined companies, but the fourth was nowhere to be found.
    "We've to find the fourth company!"


    He suddenly jolted into action, and his men followed suit, trampling burnt or hacked corpses of friends and foes alike.
    The sing song clash of blades was unmistakable, and the exhausted Christians kept a mad pace to race to the other end of the camp.
    And then they came to a sudden halt.


    The fourth detachment was formed into a thick line of steel, spear tips at the ready, pagan bodies hoisted as makeshift shields.


    And around them: Death.


    At the sight of their lord, the men eased their stance, and the disturbing thuds of dozens of dumped bodies overcame the crackling flames that took hold of this side of the camp.


    "We're withdrawing to the camp. I want a full damn report of what went wrong, and the men you're missing."
    The retreat was uneventful. Even as the night slowly brightened, the sun did not soar for some time, leaving the forest dump and cold. What was once a warm layer of pagan blood became an unwanted, dreadfully cold token of war. Yet the Poles could not stop. Boleslaw urged his men further and further. Soon, word of their arrival will rouse more tribes into action.


    While the way back was a tense, uneventful torture, the fact they had to prepare for another battle made their arrival much worse.
    Many of Boleslaw's men were unsuited for combat, either until they recovered or until God took pity in their situation and granted them rest.


    He left those men capable of combat instructions to prepare and retreated to his own tent, where his retinue followed.
    They were mostly intact, with only six men missing, and two men too injured to join the upcoming battle.
    |Halych, Autumn 1288|


    "Zbigniew Piast, at your service"


    The noble extended a bleak gauntlet, taking Anna's hand in a formal gesture.


    Anna's chest collapsed.


    Is this truly Mieszlav's older brother?


    Back when she was nothing but a mere peasant, her brother and father served under the fabled Piast when they pacified Hungarian raiders.


    Their stories painted the man as a blood thirsty brute whom mistreated his captives and soldiers alike.


    But here, before her, stood a groomed, tall nobleman, that despite the network of scars and notches emanated a sense of serenity and calm.


    "A-Ann-"


    "Anna Zjatov of Bedzin, my brother's well-hidden to-be wife."


    Her mouth opened ajar, and she was about to protest when the man defused the tension with a nod "Mieszlav told me everything.

    From the day you met to how he planned to wed you despite our father's wishes. Don't fret- I am the last one to care."


    His brother carried the name so easily, yet every time it was uttered, a burning sensation jolted through her chest like a wicked lightning bolt.


    Zbige's maw moved this way and that as he studied her.


    "We've a lot to discuss. But first, I'd like to see you eat."


    |Western Lithuania, Sambian land, Autumn 1288|


    Boleslaw flexed his injured arm.


    He did not even feel the wound up until now, but luckily it was only a small cut.


    "The bindings just might hold, my liege, but you must not strain yourself."


    The comment earned the man a snort of disapproval, and he quickly rose to his feet, dismissing the blood coated medic.


    A small commotion rose from the outside of his tent, and he hurried outside, his eyes falling on the returned scouting party.


    Their faded, rugged clothing were painted white and gray, and they paced onwards, huffing and puffing from their forced march.


    "Hour, we've an hour"


    "How many?" he questioned evenly


    "Couldn't tell. Too many to count while we were being chased."


    Boleslaw let out a venomous cuss and ran a palm along his pale beard. An unpleasant sensation ran through his forearm.


    "Men!"


    Those that did not already gather around their commander did so. Countless pairs of weary eyes centered on Boleslaw, waiting for further instructions.


    "When you first joined this campaign, your thoughts were of glory, wealth and retribution. You fought and reclaimed not for me, but for the entirety of the Polish people.


    But now, when you are bloodied and weary, and your thoughts are of your home, your fields and family, I once again ask you to remember your duty to the realm and God!


    We are here because we must!"


    His head turned to view his cheering soldiers: a patchwork of wounded and tired men hoisting their arms and armor.
    He knew they would die for him. And if not for him, then for Poland.


    "We are here for our children, for our wives, and for God! We are here because no one else would take this burden!"


    Another row of applause and cheers shook the camp, while in the distance, the wind carried the faint, ominous hymn of war drums.




    The Polish banner flapped merrily against the cold breeze.


    Boleslaw's men formed on a large, snow covered hill, while the Pagan force occupied another.


    They were seemingly numberless, filthy men dressed in drab cloth, a condensed wall of armed heathens eager to slaughter his company.


    His captains moved between their respective units, giving orders and words of encouragement.


    Some men found the need to pray a second time, while others stared at the Pagans with disbelief.


    Someone on the other hill laughed, another joined him and exposed his rear.


    And then a man who could only be their chieftain stood forward and pointed his sword at Boleslaw.


    Time froze. The wind disappeared, yet the cold remained. It went past his armor and cloth and pierced his lungs.


    The horde moved.





    The Polish army stood still, awaiting orders while Boleslaw observed the advance from atop his steed. Jakob uttered something while Olemn affirmed grimly.


    Their adversaries' formation suddenly shifted, and horsemen galloped from the rear, awarding the Christians with a volley of arrows.






    "Plough it, we've to meet them!"


    Most of the arrows fell short, yet some found a shield or an exposed limb.


    The unmistakable symphony of flying arrows and screams marked the beginning of the skirmish, and Boleslaw ordered his forces forward.


    The Poles finally began exchanging volleys with noticeable success, forcing the horse archers to retreat while both sides advanced their infantry.


    Boleslaw took his own men in a wide arc around the battlefield while the melee commenced. Bow strings and the shriek of arrows echoed the ring of steel and iron.


    The heavy Polish horsemen drew the attention of the enemy horse archers, who committed to try and stop the flanking maneuver.
    Horses and men cried. Each volley took more and more lives. Men he knew from since he was a toddler now laid motionless in the cold, foreign snow of the Pagan lands.


    And then his lance pierced through the Pagan rear.





    Men panicked. Those that did not outright flee were trampled down and cut to pieces.


    The light cavalry joined the fray, but their intervention came too late: their brethren already cracked under the pressure of his infantry and rear charge, and they now stood alone against his blood thirsty angels of death.


    Each swing of his sword took the life of a rider. Each swing of his sword filled the hole of sorrow within him. He avenged Rafal, and Henrik, and Zadok, and all those men he desperately tried to remember but couldn't.


    And then he killed for his family. For Mieszlav, for Kowan, and Zbigniew. He killed until none were left to kill, and until the only cry that rang in his ears was the indifferent wind.




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    Great to read another's AAR on my favorite game! You made a point worth repeating -- protection of the fields. In the middle of the wilderness (relative) and with people not within the same political and religious strictures, food is all that separates the family from starvation. I will remember this in my future writing.

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    You describe the heated midst of combat very well, and I really enjoyed the moment of calm you interposed in between the battles with the armies arraying themselves along the hills opposite each others before the second clash. Keep up the great writing!

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    Great writing.
    As Axis stated, you are really good at describing battles. It is a great inspiration to a beginning AAR writer such as myself.
    Can't wait to see what happens to Boleslaw and the Polish Kingdom.

    Keep those chapters coming.

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    Good update, indeed! The action is packed full of the chaos and brutality of battle and there's some great phrasing, such as the line which begins 'And then he killed for his family'.

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    Hello everyone!
    After some time away, I finally have some time to continue writing this AAR!(Even though this update is relatively short..)

    As always- thank you for the kind comments. They are truly helpful!



    |Krakow, Winter of 1289|


    Haggling.


    How long was it since he heard two people argue about the price of lumber, hooves or grain?


    Peasants exchanging greetings, a husband and wife embracing one another after one's absence.

    The latter was the most prominent once he had returned.
    News of his arrival have reached the capital like wildfire, and the first face he saw was of a soldier's wife, tearfully waving for her husband to come home.


    And home they came.


    Dirty, sweaty soldiers, four limbed, three limbed, sane or broken, Boleslaw's company was disbanded, the soldiers compensated, and families were reunited.


    But ever as his steed brought him closer to the royal palace, with it's bright red roofs and imposing towers, Boleslaw did not feel like home.


    He stood nude in front of a mirror, eyeing his frame up and down.


    It felt like hours.


    His pale blond hair was cropped, long on the top and shaven on the sides, a haircut he grew fond of during his misadventures in Prussia. His beard was likewise short and trimmed, in complete contrast to his frame.
    It was bulky and broad, with visible purplish or crimson scars drawing from short notches to terrifying lines of mangled flesh and sinew.


    The man in the mirror seemed like a stranger to him.


    Eighteen years ago, he was still carrying toy swords and listening to stories about knights and villains. He would listen to Mieszlav and Kowan's lewd exchanges, to Zbigniew's loud arguments with the small council.


    And then he was plucked away.

    Was he really looking at himself, now?
    Or was he looking at an instrument of vengeance.


    The royal palace was packed.


    Goblets clinked, servants shuffled past drunk guests and trained fingers plucked the strings of too many instruments to count.


    His thoughts were elsewhere.


    "…To my brave son, and Poland!"


    Wladyslaw lowered a cup and the chamber boomed with tinkering goblets and laughter.


    He felt the monarch's heavy palm set on his shoulder


    "Quite the celebration, isn't it?"


    "Mrh," he hummed in affirmation "Quite. All of this for Konrad's death?"


    It wasn't, of course. Boleslaw studied his father's features as they shifted from joy to thoughtfulness, and then he sported another wide grin "No, it's not just death we are celebrating. Come."


    The large king slowly rose from his seat, and followed by his son, crossed the hall, shoving drunkards here and exchanging enthusiastic gestures of brotherhood there.


    Amongst the seated nobles and other noteworthy individuals that attended the festivities were tables manned by foreign emissaries, and Boleslaw's eye flicked from one colorful heraldry to the next.


    Despite his girth, the Polish king navigated the hall gracefully, and Boleslaw found himself nearly breaking into a full out jog to catch with his father. Finally- the king planted himself before a table that was guarded by several unarmed men- clearly bodyguards of the attending representatives, all dressed in blue and yellow, with the unmistakable trident of the Kievan Rus.


    "Move aside, can you not tell the King himself has come to grace us with his presence?!"


    As if shoved by an invisible hand, the bodyguards stood aside, giving way for a scrawny man that quickly moved over to shake Wladyslaw's hand.


    Boleslaw's eyes haunted the seated. There were several large men, all quite intoxicated- yet even their constant bubbling and shifting could not hide the maiden that sat at the far side of the long, square like table.


    Her frame was delicate, slender and long, foxlike features set into deep boredom as she was evidently much more interested in toying with her food than with the conversing men.


    "-Eupraxia, would you not come and greet our gracious host?"


    Boleslaw could see her lips reform to offer an inaudible sigh, and the female in question rose from her seat, elaborate blue dress in tow.


    Wladyslaw's curious eyes shamelessly explored her frame, yet the delicate creature bowed as expected.


    "Princess Eupraxia, I would like you to meet your future husband, prince Boleslaw."


    |Halych, Winter of 1289|


    Zbigniew made no sound upon exiting the bed, his feet finding the cold hard cobble even as his mind struggled with the vertigo of waking up.


    Outside, only several torches fought back the otherwise bleak darkness that surrounded the palace, easily overwhelming the slender moon that seemed to be suffocating under the gloom.
    Still maneuvering the dark room bare-foot, the noble quickly made his bed and don a thick fur coat and heavy boots to shield his flesh from the cold.


    Outside, two burly men stood guard-yet they hardly seemed surprise as their liege exited the room.


    "Povak, Andrej" a nod at each, and the two simply followed suit, following an old routine that has long been installed in the castle.


    "Have Martin wake Anna up. Tonight, she will be born anew."


    Povak took a right turn while Andrej sheepishly followed Zbi, only to take a passageway to the left, leading him to the eastern wing of the palace.


    Zbi muffled a yawn with the back of his hand, his pace slowing once he found himself before a spiraling set of stairs, leading to the bowels of the castle, where dimly lit torches spread their dying light, making the journey atop the uneven stairs manageable, if somewhat inconvenient.


    The descent only took a short moment, and the noble entered an abnormally large, well-lit room, sparse of any furniture of convenience or luxury.


    He sat down in the room's center, his legs folded, elbows resting on his knees while his breathing slowed.

    Inhale, exhale.


    The world around him sharpened and collapsed, the graceful dance of torch fire slowed, and the distant scent of lavender reached his nostrils.


    'She is here.'


    "My liege-"


    "Leave us, Martin" the seated noble slowly rose to a stand, eyes focused on Anna, while Martin made a stiff bow and turned to ascend the staircase.


    "What...is this room?"


    "This, Anna-" he gestured at the chamber "Is your new home. This is where you will sleep, eat, and learn. Until I found you ready."


    "Ready?" Anna's voice carried meekly, no doubt overwhelmed by her emotions.


    "To travel the path you have been placed on. Now come," the noble urged her to step closer "We have much to discuss."


    Anna reluctantly approached her host. In his eyes, she was like a newborn, stumbling awkwardly towards a parent figure.


    "How much have you heard of me, before becoming my guest?"


    Zbi's broad frame quickly collapsed and re arranged as he came to sit in the same manner as before while urging Anna to do the same.


    "Or rather- what."


    Anna's features twisted briefly with obvious discomfort. Her back was arced, shoulders slumped, and she would occasionally change her posture to combat her aching limbs.


    "My lord, I.." pausing, the girl collected her thoughts and exhaled, turning her eyes from the noble to one of the few torches that kept the chamber's interior visible "Your reputation preceded you. Even in our small, remote village- even there, we heard of your deeds in Hungary and across the realm."


    She paused and studied his complexion. The cobweb of scars that malformed his complexion seemed more natural now, yet his green eyes were hardened, steel-like, not betraying a single thought to a curious onlooker.


    "Go on."


    "W-we heard about Kotze and…the events that preceded the massacre," she stopped for a much-needed intake of air, yet the musky cellar-like air seemed to cling to her lungs "The maiming and humiliation of prince Geza and his wife."


    Her heart boomed in her chest in a relentless pace. Did she forget whom her host was? A man considered to be the Devil's own messenger? A bloodthirsty, brutal soldier, whom raped, killed and maimed, despite being noble born? How could this man be so different from Mieszlav?


    Zbigniew sat still, body strict and straight. He studied her in continual silence a long time after she stopped talking.


    "Why am I here, Zbigniew? If you wanted to-"


    "You are here because that is what Mieszlav wanted," the noble interfered "But that is not what you want. Then again, do you even know why you cannot sleep at night? Why your mind would not let go of the past?"


    Anna's mouth opened, yet she did not reply instantly. Her large, brown eyes narrowed, and she seemed so vulnerable now- with her back slumped, a cascading waterfall of brown falling upon her face, yet one eyed was kept half open, staring at the cracked cobblestone below.


    Yet even this delicate creature could be made to hold its own against the cruel world without.


    "Mieszlav…I, We…"


    "My brother Is dead. I am certain of that, just I trust the sun to rise come morning, and the moon to follow come night,"
    suddenly, the noble was on his feet, his posture straight and disciplined "Face your fears, Sparrow."


    Once the first tear escaped her eyes, there was no holding back the wails that boiled within her. Polished nails dug into the hard, cold rock underneath, her frame rocked back and forth as she embraced a pair of knees to her chest.
    Mieszlav isn't dead. He cannot be.


    Behind her, Zbigniew slowly closed the door shut.


    |Krakow, Winter of 1289|


    Theirs, was a formal dance.


    Wladyslaw took notice from the moment Boleslaw led the foreign princess, their palms barely touching, eyes darting about the occupied hall rather than explore the other's own. A sudden movement to his left has caught the king's eyes- the almost comical flow of a noble's dress.


    'And so, my wife leaves the hall?'


    Wladyslaw's bulky frame betrayed the steps of a gifted fencer, and he crossed the hall in pursuit of his wife.


    "I wish to be alone."


    "Well, that is no way to treat your husband- and not to mention, king."


    Queen Agness' eyes stubbornly remained glued to the window, her frame moving up and down in a steady rhythm.


    "I had no damn choice woman!"


    Wladyslaw's voice suddenly erupted, startling the woman, whom turned to stare daggers at her husband.


    "If it weren't for your ambitions, your cowardi-"


    "Call me a coward one more time, woman, and I will slap some sense into you!"


    " Mieszlav died! Your own son, your own son…You left our son behind…" Agness slammed a fist against the window frame and quickly turned to look at her husband. She had the same look she bore all those years ago, when he returned from the battle.


    "And as if it wasn't enough, they took Kowan. They took our Kowan!"


    Wladyslaw stared at his wife. His arms shook by his side, palms clenched into a fist.


    "What were I to do? Would my death over our son be enough to appease you, Agness? Would yours, and our land's?"


    A fist rocked his frame.


    Another.


    Agness slammed her palm against his shoulder, again and again. Her eyes, which were only a moment ago a slate of blue steel, became clouded and wet.


    "They took them, they just came and took them, my sons…My two beautiful sons…"


    Wladyslaw cradled Agness into his breast and leaned against her. His queen protested meekly, shaking this way and that, only to finally give into his embrace.


    Without, the party went on indifferently.


    Boleslaw's eyes flickered about the princess, who gave him the same inquisitive look.


    To his surprise and pleasure, they were both content with the silence of the balcony, and each other's.


    She was clearly still weighting on the merits and downsides of their political marriage.


    "You have been very tame, for a crown prince."


    "How many of us have you met?"


    "Oh," she erected two digits "Several."


    Boleslaw's brow arced, still deciding against following her lead.


    "Your father is a powerful man."


    "He is," she answered evenly "Backed by a wise woman."


    He hummed something in agreement and turned to survey the starless night.


    They sat there for a long, silent night, occasionally turning to mutely appreciate the person their elders chose.


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    There's powerful drama here, the scene with Zbigniew and Anna is particularly effective.

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    |Western Lithuania, Sambian land, Spring of 1290|

    'Come the rise of summer, and the death of Father winter,
    Come the rise of glory, and death immeasurable,
    Come the time to march, and the time for war.'


    Part one; Duel at the gates


    Boleslaw dipped the quill and leaned against his shoulder, eyeing the penmanship. He carefully placed the parchment aside and returned to his earlier duty: a status report to his father.


    'The road back to Palanga has been without incident. My orders to pave a pathway between the city and all the other hamlets have been fulfilled, and thus, our way back has been quicker than last time.

    The men are restless. It is not religious zeal that hastens our march- it is fear. The Pagan populace refuses to be wholly integrated, and despite the ease of travel, I suspect resistance from the local populace while campaigning.
    Considering this I humbly request for the recruitment efforts to continue should reinforcements be in need, and that organized patrols will be made across our supply lines.


    Regarding Eu-'

    "Pollak!"


    A shout bellowed from without, catching him off-guard. A bleak pool of ink formed where his quill stopped, rending the parchment useless.


    'What in the name…' he was already on his feet, palm the sheath of his sword. His warrior instincts carried him away from the secluded study and into the hallway, where he was joined by Henrik and Zlotan, both sharing the same grim expression.


    "Looked out of the window- there's a damn fool screaming nonsense."


    "Pollak!"


    The castle shook awake. Servants ran past him from one room to the next, carrying orders or armaments, tools of war or of the forge, while the castle guards supervised the fiasco with what seemed like morbid anticipation.
    Finally, one man came to his presence, wheezing and bent, blindly asking for Boleslaw's audience.


    "Pollak!"


    "Speak man, what's going on?!"


    The man forced himself to breath slowly- a poor attempt as he tried to deliver his message in full.


    "Dhu-dhuel…pagan, pahagan wants a duel..."


    Boleslaw flickered a glance at his now full retinue, whom exchanged worried expressions with their liege.


    "It's a damn trap, that's what it is."


    "For once, I agree with you. There's no trusting a Pagan when honor is involved. They'll likely ambush you, or some-"


    "Silence," the heir spat, moving past the messenger and his warriors towards the large, oaken doorway "I will see what the man wants, and I will decide for myself."


    The sun was at it's zenith when he stepped outside into the courtyard, and much like within, men were busy attending to their duties, running from one place to the next, preparing the castle for a siege or stocking the walkways with ammunition.

    He couldn't help but feel proud.


    "POLLAK!"


    Smooth, even steps, that were no doubt repaired and chiseled after the siege, carried him to the battlement above. His company caught up to him, and the ebb and flow of soldiers came to an odd stop, as all eyes carried up to the noble born.


    Below, a company of horsemen stood outside the gates, with one armored rider well ahead of his fellowship.


    "And so, you come out!"


    The warrior's voice rang out, bellowed even, from the behemoth of a man before him. He was large, covered head to toe in heavy armor. His steed was large and likewise covered by steel.


    "And to whom do I owe the pleasure?"


    "Aha, Pollak! You speak to Liubartas, brother to Teniorta and the now slain Svarnak of house Gediminas!"


    His heavy frame came to lean against the stonework.


    "And you're speaking to Boleslaw of house-"


    "I know who you are!"


    Liubartas' armor clinked and clanked as he marched forward, planting his sword unto the fresh soil before him and spreading his arms.


    "And I challenge you, Boleslaw, to a duel!"


    Boleslaw's frame rose stiffly. A pair of blue orbs narrowed down upon the pagan below, appraising his figure. He was huge, his armor- clearly of western design – likely stolen from a felled knight. A Teuton?


    Liubartas' company shared excited looks, and they exchanged chips and chatter in their foreign tongue, that sounded very much like the grinding of rocks and the gurgling of a dying animal. They were all young, able bodied men- much like his own company, and likely even in skill and experience.


    "And I accept your challenge," the reply came out formally, catching the man below off guard "Just here, beyond the gate?"


    "If you're not afraid of coming out, then I am not scared of coming in."


    "I am a gracious host," Boleslaw's frame straightened, palm eased on the hilt of his sword "And so I will allow you to choose the location."


    The sun slowly began to descend, yet the air was oddly warm and inviting. A bird sang in the distance while some of the local barn animals protested to being pulled back into their cage.


    "Outside it is!"


    He affirmed with a simple nod, and casually trod down the battlement and to the courtyard, where countless bewildered eyes sank into him like tiny, colorful daggers.


    A sense of anxiousness urged him forward- as if this very duel was the first test of many, like the first hammer strike upon the still hot iron.


    "Open the gates."


    "But, sir-"


    A smooth motion summoned his blade from its sheath, and the menacing longsword hissed angrily, as if cursing the man whom disturbed its slumber.


    "This is an order. Man the walls. If the Pagan tries anything but sue for an early grave, shoot him and any who dares interrupt us."


    Henrik and Zlotan exchanged weary looks, then snapped at the lot "Get this damned gate open!"


    What was moments ago a silent staring contest turned to a weird, confused rush to allow the noble's departure.


    "…He's a bloody madman…"


    "Shutup, he can hear you!"


    The gates of Palanga groaned and moaned as they closed behind him.

    The inviting, warm gale that urged him to accept the duel remained, now tapping his back and pushing him towards the Pagan warrior.


    "And so, you came."


    "Would you ever doubt a Piast?"


    Liubartas snorted and spat a vile concoction to the side, and with one dramatic move summoned his blade from the ground, holding it towards the Pole.


    "Today, I avenge the death of my blood brother, and those brave men you so cowardly trampled. Today, Polak, Perkunas will deliver me over your false god!"


    A loud row of applause and cheers of encouragement came from his back, and they only grew louder as Boleslaw stepped towards his adversary.


    "Are you so cocky that you wouldn't even don your armor?!"


    "You talk too much, Pagan," he hoisted his blade and met the man's own instrument at edge-point "I thought your God has already decided my fate?"


    Liubartas made a sudden lunge, the sword sliding towards Boleslaw's neck with a menacing hiss. The Polak, seemingly anticipating the blow, side stepped the lunge, tilted his shoulder and hacked the blade aside.


    Liubartas easily held his sword and steel met steel once more, as now both combatants exchanged and parried one another in an unsteady rhythm, with the Pagan obviously favoring his weight and reach, while Boleslaw occasionally gave ground and evaded an incoming jab or hack.


    Up above, the men were awestruck- each jab of either sides shadowed by a row of cusses or loud boasts and words of encouragements, and as some gambled over the victors, others knelt in prayer.
    Liubartas' made a clumsy hack at the noble, whom again, hacked the blade aside with little effort, and skittered backwards with his sword pointed towards the goliath.


    "Perkunas, guide me!"


    The heap of steel and iron charged at Boleslaw and waved his blade in a wide arc which forced the Christian into a defensive posture. A second jab was parried, and the followed fist missed the sword dancer.


    Boleslaw ran a palm over his sweat covered forehead. The sun was slowly descending, and his shadow extended into a tall, bleak spire, while the Pagan's was a shapeless mountain of bleakness.


    The pagan's breath was curt, shallow, his voice strained and hollow from underneath the visor.

    The two hammer-like eye holes remained still and unmoving, yet the eyes that reflected from within were tired, weary.


    "What are you so afraid of, Piast?"


    Boleslaw's broad frame stiffened, and he inched towards his adversary.


    "Fear does not guide me" a step carried him forward, and the familiar sound of pierced flesh and splattering blood rose above the commotion. The armored Pagan gasped and tried in vain to wrestle the blade out of his disturbed bowels. A thin layer of blood cascaded down his visor and unto the beautiful craftsmanship that was his chestplate.


    "It guides my sword. Your brother died at dusk, and so will you, and your father, and all of your kinsmen." Boleslaw freed his blade from the pagan's abdomen and ran its length over a cloth piece.


    Liubartas' entourage rushed to their wounded commander.


    "Shoot them."


    Boleslaw turned to enter the castle, the wind no longer to his back.
    The sun was now gone, and the only sound that filled the air were the screams of the dying.

    |Halych, Spring of 1290|


    Part two; Behind the curtains



    Anna crashed on the floor like a sack a flour.


    "Get up."


    The dagger clattered further away from her reach. Each breath sent a jolt of pain through her chest, and her shallow, frantic intakes were barely enough to answer the demand of her body.


    "Get up, Anna."


    The first time he struck her shocked her to the very core- her well-mannered, if reclusive savior, the man who took her in and sought to protect her from the threat of the empire- that very man backhanded her without a single token of remorse of pity.


    And yet she obeyed. And yet, despite her body being broken by starvation and abuse, she crawled to her dagger and stood up.


    Zbigniew bowed gracefully and held his own wooden dagger upwards, with his free hand shadowing it's twin.
    She circled her opponent, her large eyes- now besieged by a circle of bleakness- appraised his stance, hungry for a weak spot.


    Zbigniew suddenly leapt forward dagger first, aimed at her core. Anna jerked aside and instinctively mustered a stab towards her adversary's unprotected ribcage. The noble's heavy palm jolted to hold her wrist. She tightened her core and closed her eyes, preparing to sustain the impact to come.


    "I think we sparred enough for today."


    Anna's eyes widened, taking in the warrior's frame as he knelt to collect his boots and a simple cloth tie which he used to arrange his hair.


    "Sleep well, Anna."


    Her ribs spasmed painfully even when she exhaled in relief. Her delicate frame, now bruised, covered in bleak and bluish spots ungracefully cluttered to the floor.
    After what felt like hours the pain in her chest subsided, and sleep finally came on her.




    The door to her prison chamber creaked loudly, and a wisp of light invited itself into her unnaturally lit cell. A hushed exchange was made by several folk, and finally, the shuffle of boots and the sound of something heavy being placed on the floor made Anna jump to her feet, startled.


    "Ooph, you poor soul, what has he done to you?"


    A large elderly female crossed her arms and eyed Anna's frame critically while clicking her tongue in disbelief "Never have I seen a sorrier looking beauty as yourself!"


    The woman's accent was the first thing to have struck her interest- It was heavy, rural, and unlike any of the castle inhabitant's.


    "Well, there's no point talking- come on, skitter over here," she gestured at the large object to her feet- a wooden bathtub, filled nearly to the brim with steaming water.


    'Is this a test?'


    She assessed the maid from the safe distance between them, but the ordeal seemed safe once the heavy-set female showed clear signs of impatience.


    "Well, took your time. Here- let me help you," fat, calloused palms eased Anna out of her rags and urged the woman to enter the tub "Mind you, they had to yank me out of the kitchens so I could give you a proper bath".


    Anna was still dumb founded, and most of the one-sided exchange became a distant blur as her skin touched the water. The sensation calmed her, eased her of the pain and exhaustion that dominated her life ever since she was led into the bowels of the castle.


    "Not the talkative type, are you?"


    Cupping her palms and spraying some of the water unto her face, Anna turned to the maid, her features set into a deep crimson.


    "Forgive me…"


    "Ewa," the maid's feature slowly turned to form a scorn as they scoured the youth's frame but did not see fit to let her thoughts manifest. Instead, she took hold of a worn sponge and dipped it in the tub.
    A long, awkward silence took hold of the chamber, with only the brush of the sponge or the occasional, curt command by Ewa for Anna to lift or lower a limb to disturb it.


    "He may be harsh, but," Ewa groaned as she squeezed the sponge and returned to her task "He's as good a noble as you may ever find. Makes sure we're treated well by those few guests that come by, we're allowed to eat as we see fit and a whole other privileges other commoners would only dare dream about."


    "Then why is he keeping me here?" Anna's large eyes rested on Ewa "Why is he forcing me to do all of those things?"
    Her voice broke, and from the cracks a sincere tone of distressed creeped into every word.
    "He told me I would be safe here, and that this is Mieszlav's wish! And now…and now I'm trapped here, barely fed, beaten on daily basis, with no explanation as to why?! Why must he torture me? If it was my body he wanted, he would have…he would have taken it. But instead-"


    Ewa's palm eased itself unto her shoulder. Her anger abated, the wrathful spirit that has taken her mind seemingly banished. The large, elderly woman let out a burdened exhale and cleared her throat.


    "Lord Zbigniew wasn't always like this- I am sure you know. Every time he came back from the field, he'd have us scrap his and his retinue's blood drenched attire clean. Now, the folk whom flocked under him were not good folk. But down under, they were still men. We'd scrub the feces from the unmentionables. Makes sense for a man to…soil himself in battle."


    A series of lines and cracks formed atop her forehead as she narrowed her eyes, now looking away from Anna.


    "But not our lord. He knew what he was doing, and he was proud of it- not a flick of fear took over him on the field- not from a sword and not from God, should he see his unjust deeds and strike him down. We'd scrub off blood. And me, being a good servant, once asked for our lord's health. Ought to be a good servant's duty if he sees clotted crimson over his liege's unmentionables."


    Anna cleaned her throat, obviously signaling her discomfort, yet Ewa did not bother to look at her, small beady eyes staring at the torch light as if under a trance.


    "It's virgin blood, Ewa, he said. And I do not know what gave me the courage to ask, but I did- so I bowed my head, and asked him: 'my liege, whose blood, so I may pray for their soul?' he stepped forward, and as calmly as possible, while chewing on a ration, said 'Princess Zofia, while Geza watched'.


    "I heard of what he did, but…For him to be so calm about it..."


    Ewa shook her head, as if forcefully banishing the thought from her mind. She looked troubled and a tad bit paler than before but nonetheless returned to scrubbing Anna's back.


    "We truly thought him a demon. Many did. But, he changed after the war."


    Anna's posture stiffened.


    'It all goes back to that war. To the day Mieszlav went missing. Just how deeply did it strike the Piasts?'


    "Came back with a soulless look in his eyes and one arm less. T'was an odd thing, seeing him skulk in his study, turn away wine and lasses."


    Anna blinked and turned to the maid "I am sure he has two, unless we've been talking about someone else?"


    "Oh, no no dear," the maid shook her head, as if stating a common fact whilst scrubbing the woman's neck "It's not flesh and bone. A simple wooden thing covered by his shirt and glove. Once his father, king Wladyslaw, god spare him, denied him as an heir since he lost his arm, our lord took a several of his retinue and left," Ewa groaned while squeezing the sponge, and Anna found herself impatient, nearly cussing the woman for stopping "Returned a different man. A better one, mind you," she added and shook her head, as if scolding herself "No more scrubbing virgin blood or feces. Just fetching colors or canvas for his paintings, dress a room for a way ward guest, cook."


    Ewa's body collapsed with a heavy exhale, and she gently placed the sponge within the tub.


    "Thinking my job is here done, and that I ought to check on how the other maids have been treating our liege's dinner," the once lively woman seemed exhausted, drained, as if bringing up the past has taken a heavy toll on her mind "Someone'll come later to fetch you some pieces and hoist the tub away. Best make use of it why it's still here, eh?"
    Anna nodded in affirmation. She felt like a child again, sheepishly following the words of her parents.


    Ewa mumbled some inaudible jumble as she opened the door and exited the chamber, leaving Anna to submerge in the tub's warm embrace.


    It paled in comparison to Mieszlav's own arms, surrounding and pressing her petite frame like impenetrable castle walls.


    'And here I am, having a hot bath while my beloved is out there, hungry and cold…'


    "She was rather talkative."


    Anna's mind was forcefully pulled into the present, her eyes darting in the now sparsely lit cell.


    "But I am somewhat relieved you know this treatment does not come out of malice."


    Zbigniew's stood by the door's hinges, his face to the wall, arms tucked in a casual cross of his arms that gave the otherwise stoic man a sense of uncharacteristic ease.


    Anna's complexion grew pale. A sense of dread swept over her, and despite the intense heat, she found herself shuddering, while her eyes remained stapled unto the noble's back.


    'Did he enter while we talked? Just how long did he stay there?'


    "Rather," he began to pace away from the door, back still to his undressed captive "You know why both you and I are in this very room."


    Anna bit her lip. She was at a complete loss of words, and instead followed the noble's every step while hunching into a small ball.


    A short-lived silence dominated the room. Zbigniew stood in place motionless, and then trod to the door with the same graceful gait that all Piasts seemed to possess.


    "Goodnight, Anna."


    What started as a trickle quickly turned into a pitiful sob, and Anna was left to cry as the torch light dimmed into a dying flicker.

    |Krakow, Spring of 1290|

    Part three; An uncertain future



    "This is outrageous!"


    A fist slammed upon the table, followed by a wave of bellows and loud, heated exchanges.


    "You had us raise the levies for this silly war up north, and now you request us to raise even more men?!"


    "And the taxes!"


    "Do you take us for fat cows, waiting to be milked dry?!"


    Wladyslaw leaned back against his chair, his otherwise pallid complexion now crimson.


    "Order! Order in the damn assembly, or I'll have the guards chop you lot down under the threat of treason!"


    The threat did little to subdue the mob, and Wladyslaw had to signal for the four guardsmen that kept watch to step over and physically restore order.


    "…Now the next man who raises his voice…" his calm voice rang in complete contrast to his grotesque, reddened face "…Will lose his head. This is a matter of state, and we can ignore the reports coming from the border no longer! The Hungarians are mustering en masse, and will, without a doubt, capitalize on Boleslaw's absence. We all know the Hungarian viper has been sitting in wait to exploit a weakened border."


    "And yet you sent your son with the majority of the levy?" the man whom shouted before seemed to greatly restrain his reply, his fists clenched "Wh-"


    "The Hungarians can be contained," Wladyslaw's eyes flickered at the man, "While we make progress in the north before the Teuton Order could fully assimilate the Pagan lands. Of course- I do not trust you to make such calculations, since your duty is to supply me with troops and florins as the situation demands, and not ask silly questions."


    Wladyslaw's eyes surveyed the gathered nobles- all seething, pouty, double-chinned men that he personally groomed and cultivated.


    "Which is exactly what you will do once this meeting comes to a close."


    |Western Lithuania, Sambian land, Summer of 1290|


    Part four; The prince of death



    'Endless pyres weep black smoke,

    Endless yet they are not enough,
    Countless fingers raise to the sky in question,

    Countless yet no answer comes'


    Boleslaw placed the parchment aside and slowly disrobed to observe himself in the mirror.


    A finger traced along the lines of a purple spot, and then a curved line of clotted crimson by its side.





    'They nearly had me.'

    His eyes darted from the mirror and to his sword, resting by his bed like a loyal guard dog. It was a polished, sharp and wicked thing, with a leaf-shaped guard.

    He found himself drawn to it. The unmistakable hiss whenever it joined his side, and the terror in the eyes of his enemies when it reached for their throats, like a hungry, gaunt demon.

    The prince hunched over and sat on his make-shift bed while admiring the blade.

    'How many lives did you take, and how many did I?'

    Even if it held the answer, the blade remained silent. But something in it's reflection shifted.

    The long shadows within the tent moved- and suddenly, the entry to his tent tilted sideways.

    Henrik entered deftly, yet the two captives he held were far from quiet- and Boleslaw found himself thinking they were bent on keeping the entire camp awake.

    The knight shoved the two towards his liege, his arms crossed, and a large smirk was set on his complexion.
    "Good, you're nude. Means you can skip the formalities."

    The two bound prisoners struggled to stand, yet Henrik's heavy boot prevented from on to even attempt standing.
    "I am not in the mood. Fetch them to the men."

    "Why, this feisty thing-" his foot shoved a fair-headed female towards Boleslaw's bed "Already had a round. The other lass didn't- figured you'd want to have at her yourself?"

    The barbarian, still struggling, was hoisted upwards by a pull of her hair. Much to the knight's delight, the thing turned to bite his palm, seething and spitting.

    "Whoph! Didn't know she was a biter! Suppose we can't have a eunuch for an heir."

    "Take them away," the prince commanded silently while pushing to a stand and moving over to the simply constructed study, where he returned to stacking his paperwork into a neat pile "I am not in the mood."

    "The men have been talking, my liege. They're worried. And now I am worried."

    "Worried that your liege is too tired to have a good time?"

    "You've been acting up," Henrik waved a finger at him, the smug smirk vanishing, it's place taken by a worried frown "And you know exactly what I am talking about. The killing is good as ever, aye- we've been making steady progress while cutting these barbarians"

    Henrik kicked one of the prisoners and eased a yelp out of her mouth.

    "But you're not the same man."

    Henrik hoisted the two to a stand and dragged them out of his tent, mumbling a string of swears.
    Boleslaw ran a palm over the bridge of his nose and exhaled.

    'Does one man's well being count more than his brother's? Why should a man feel pity, when the wolf does not?'



    'Why should a man fear, if his fate is predestined?'



    His mind snapped.

    The ram had already reached the walls, and his men were hammering at the gate relentlessly.
    He knew the man commanding the ram well- a lowly peasant, a married man whom barely kept his family afloat by selling lumber.

    And yet he was one of the bravest he commanded, and without a doubt the same could be said for his loyalty.
    On the other side of the city, a similar effort was raised in order to trap the Pagans within.
    By his side, Henrik and Jona seemed impatient.

    "ARGHU!"

    The besiegers howled and with one final blow shattered the gate open, sending splinters and makeshift barricade support beams flying.

    "Infantry first, Cavalry, follow my lead!"

    The besieged Pagans had already poured their infantry to the fore in order to sustain most of Boleslaw's own forces.
    Yet the Pagans resolve remained unbroken.

    King Teniorta banged his sword against his shield, and those remaining nobles that gathered at the courtyard followed his example, chanting in their vicious tongue.

    "The Gods do not accept cowards!"

    Their steeds were covered in blood-marks and signs, as were their faces, all struck with unearthly euphoria- their tools of war raised high, reflecting the warm summer sun.

    And then they charged at the Polish Infantry.



    The ensuing Melee would have been one-sided if it wasn't for the Pagan ferocity. Even as their numbers dwindled, even as men and horse alike fell to spear or arrow fire, the defenders held still, refusing to give the intruders an inch.



    Boleslaw deflected a blow and lodged the length of his sword into the depth of a lightly unarmored horseman. He withdrew it, and sent the blade's tip to his extreme right, catching another pagan off-guard and claiming his life. By his side, his own retinue was busy doing the same bloody work, culling the heathens with what felt like disturbing ease.
    The majority of the Pagan forces retreated back to the city center to reorganize, their withdrawal allowed by a stubborn line of heavily armored nobles.

    This, however, allowed the Polish archers to man the occupied walls and rain arrow fire undisturbed, while Boleslaw spat commands and saw his men reorganize into formations.

    Most of his infantry was still locked in a losing battle at the city's front.

    He hoisted his blade and turned to survey his men.

    They awaited, eager, hungry for his command.

    'These are not men. They are my warriors. They are my wolves, and tonight- we dine on sheep.'

    He wordlessly ordered his steed forward into a slow trot, and his company and men followed suit, blades spears and daggers at the ready, chanting prayers or spewing cusses.
    The trot turned to a charge, and the Lithuanians braced for impact.



    The massacre ended at dusk, and Boleslaw's own bloody hands hoisted the Polish eagle atop Vilinus' walls.

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    Good chapter! The duel is well done, I enjoyed the contrast between the suspicious reactions of the retinue and the participant's calm resolve. Boleslaw seems to face each challenge with iron determination and considerable skill.

    (I know that it can feel artificial to keep adding '[character's name] said' when writing dialogue, but I suggest telling the reader who said each line. For example, I was confused for a moment by "Infantry first, Cavalry, follow my lead!" because I wasn't sure who was speaking. Of course, you don't need to do this when you indicate who spoke by mentioning the speaker's action - for example when you mention that 'King Teniorta banged his sword against his shield' before a line of dialogue.)

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    Two great chapters! Your character developments are wonderful especially the effects of war on both Zbigniew and Boleslaw. Harsh and hard men for harsh and hard times.

    Wel done good sir! +rep

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    Hello everyone!
    There are too many reasons for me to blame my absense on, so I will simply ask you to forgive my lack of activity on the forum.

    I had to write this small follow up on my phone as I've been away from home for the last month, and will likely remain abroad for the following weeks.

    |Western Lithuania, Sambian land, 1291|

    Part One; By the Campfire

    Stefan drunkenly stumbled towards the campfire. Two beefy arms embraced a handful fo bottles and casks against his chest, and he would occasionally cuss whenever his boot nudged a rock or met a vilinous root.

    "Hrnfh, D-damn this F-forsaken for-resst.."

    The men were having a loud debate, comparing the women back home to the Simagotian slaves.

    Stefan had a clear opinion on the matter, one that he quickly shared with his companions:

    "You sinnin' lot and your heresy! T-there-" his heavy body found an empty seat before the bonfire "..There none be a lass fairer than a faithful Polish spouse!"

    Thomas slapped his knee and took the opportunity to spit aside a disgusting brew, catching the pious Stefan off guard.

    "You're a pup of the clergy, lad. Haven't known the world as I have. Hear me out lads; Our liege is the smartest of this doomed bache. Those Rus' to the east are where God's splendors are the easiest to see-"

    The bushes surrounding their bonfire raffled, and the entire group nearly shook to a stand- only to crash down as Mathiew's red, puffy face emerged, mouth practically locked around a bottle's maw.

    "Damn bastard, thought you were Boleslaw! So, these Rus-"

    Mathiew's brow furrowed

    "Y-y-you're all hopeless l-lot..Boleslaw's sitting in his tent writin' home."

    Thomas shouted triumphantly: "Hah! To his Rus lass!"

    "..'Snot right. 'Snot right fer him tah merry one o' em heresy-doers.."

    Yantek's voice was low, perhaps afflicted by fear yet more likely held in check by the brew he had been sipping religiously.

    Several men nodded in agreement and downed their drinks, greedy palms swating at Stefan's stash of bottles.

    "What.." Jonas rubbed his eyes tiredly "What o' em? Him here, her there, ain't likely for our liege tah be called back to wed her."

    "Aye, but the looks they gave one another.." Menek, arguably the least drunk of the bache piped and paused to review his craftsmanship: A wooden horse, its legs too mangled to actually capture the beast's noble spirit, yet nonetheless easing a smile off his lips "Boleslaw is smitten. Imagine all the broken hearts lads! You all know he's a wanted man!"

    Thomas reviewed Menek's work critically.

    "Whatahells is that man?"

    "Are you blind?!" Menek hoisted his work for all to see "It's my steed Seraph!"

    A row of booming laughter and jeers followed suit, and Thomas nearly soiled himself.

    "Looks like tah blasted Devil!"

    Czibor stared grimly into the fire, his tankard remaining largely untouched.

    Vihren, the only other pagan to have joined the company after Czibor tapped him on the back.

    They were thinking of home. Their family, traditions. Of lost loved ones and fresh wounds.

    Lechin said, grimly: "Anyone else noticed his odd behaviour?"

    The camp quieted at once, and all those present stared at the young knight.

    He continued, as if oblivious of their stares:

    "He has changed. Something moved. Our force is a bastard child of vengeance and ambition, and we are the messengers. Boleslaw..No, he was never pious. Never cruel, but he was warm."

    He paused, staring longly into the brew at hand while none dared disturb the silence.

    Lechin continued: "I remember when we were..Twelve. Him, Kowan and Mieszlav came back from a hunt, all bloodied and messy. Mieszlav claimed a boar, Kowan a deer, and young Boleslaw spared the life of a mother wolf. The two teased him endlessly, but you should've seen the fire in his young eyes. Our queen ruffled his hair and had a servant fetch a wet towel to cleanse his bloodied hands, while king Wladyslaw, God bless him, shook his head with defeat.
    I suppose being as far away from heirdom as possible does that to you, but.."

    Stefan exhaled heavily and poured his own wisdom.

    "Now that Mieszlav is dead and Kowan is captured, and the Bloodied wolf is God knows where..Aye..He has a lot of weight on his shoulders."

    Radvok's hoarse voice silenced the commotion.

    " 'Tis almost a prophecy waitin' to be unfolded. The lord loses his sons, the sons lose their life n' limbs, yet Boleslaw stands untouched so far. But father death is counting the sand on our liege's hourglass paitently..If you ask me, there are no victors in t'his war."

    Thomas cussed and spat to the side, and the companions each took turn exhuming old tales of a beaming Polish prince and of childhood long, long gone.

    ________________

    An impressive stack of papers sat on his workdesk, half of it already subjected to his royal seal of approval. Many parchments remained scattered across the table, parchments accounting his expenses and income, reports of the weather, morale, battle plans. The words 'Red treaty' were neatly and boldly aligned on the top of one paper, although much of it's contents was buried under several other reports.

    His eye shot a glance at it's content: "...Treaty... at Vilinus..Land...Split by.."

    The parchment before him was of an entirely different nature. It smelled of wild flowers and berries, and the thin neat letterwork was of a wild contrast to his own.

    "Boleslaw,
    I have received your letter. I can sleep soundly knowing you are alive and well, and that you will soon return to Krakow.
    There hasn't been a day where my mind does not drift to a world where we were together-"


    He stopped, arcing a brown. Was this letter truly written by Eupraxia?

    "..I eagerly wait for your return, so our fate could finally be sealed as husband and wife."

    He placed the letter aside, just at an arm's reach, and returned to completing a rough sketch of the woman. He managed to capture her long hair and large eyes, albeit the two looked somewhat off.

    'God, she looks like Zbigbiew now.'

    He knew how it felt to miss a person, let alone a woman- yet the dull ache that pecked at his abdomen was different than anything he experienced before. It accompanied him when he slept and greeted him when he woke.

    The Polish heir exhaled and dipped the feather in the well, now leaning over a fresh new parchment.

    'Zbigniew..'

    |Halych, 1289|


    Part Two; Kreawan

    He remembered the first life he took.

    Stojve's eyes were bloodshot, wide- maw open in a mute cry of pain as Kreawan's fingers dug into his core.

    Ennika's blood still painted his fingers, from that day he pressed a cloth against her gushed throat.

    Stojve tried to scream, but Kreawan's palm pressed against his mouth. He leaned closer and whispered a gratitude, before forcefully yanking Stojve's entrails onto the floor. The criminal spasmed violently, a beautiful, lively dance of death, before he too departed to the lowest depths of hell.

    From that day on, Kreawan knew no sound sleep. He knew not the pleasant warmth of the hearth nor the chilling cold of Halych's frozen streets.

    An unearthly drive has kept him from joining all those men he killed in Hell. He haunted them on their wake and smothered them in their sleep. He became what Ennika and Halych needed, yet what they both despised and shunned.

    It was several hours after night fall. A quiet day that soon turned to a maelstorm of emotions when he heard her scream.

    From roof top to roof top he rushed towards a side alley, where three men pinned a woman against the wall, dagger at hand.

    'Ennika?'

    He swooped down like a shadow, talons spread wide, digging into the nape of one of his adversaries. The thug yelps, but the talons dig further, finding flesh and severing vital cords.

    The two turn and quickly leap towards the masked shadow, allowing the woman to sag against the wall, leaving a trail of blood on her descent.

    "It's the Fox!"

    "A soon to be corpse!"

    They were quick, disciplined- different than all the other men he hunted before.

    Were they expecting him?

    A dagger finds his forearm but bounces away once striking the concealed wooden slab underneath.

    The man stumbles back, shocked- and his neck is clawed and slit.

    Years of trading blows for a living had made him ready for the time he took the mantle of the Fox. Years of starvation, poaching, years of being in love, and what seemed like an eternity of nothingness once Ennika has been taken away from his embrace.

    Did he say nothingness?

    The thug yelps as his arm is bent backwards in an impossible angle, and the Fox runs his taloned fingers along the exposed nape.

    "Pl-please! I will tell you everything!"

    There was no nothingness. Only pain.

    The thug struggles to breath through the sprouting fountain of blood and slowly collapses to his feet, spasaming violently.


    He shakes his head and once more returns to the present. The two candles illuminating the stairway to Anna's chamber have been gnawed to nothing but a thin column of dung.

    Zbigniew was taking his time.

    The two had their differences about how to treat the woman; Zbigniew believed that a spiritual journey must come before a physical one, so the mind will be exhausted before the body.

    Kreawan saw it differently but remained silent, as obedient as he has ever been since being rescued by the prince.

    'Prince.'

    Calling Zbigniew by anything but his name made him cringe. In Fact, the idea that the man he served was, infact, of nobility, seemed like an obscure twist of reality.

    Zbigniew was not formal, spoiled or plagued by the sense of entitlement most noble-born were afflicted with. He was hardy and stern, harsh yet brotherly, charming yet imposing.

    He was careless.
    It took the militia several months, but he finally slipped. Five men dragged him away from the town and the surrounding hamlets, away from where prying eyes might see what would surely come upon his flesh.

    He expected a torturer, an executioner. He expected yo be bound by heavy rocks and tossed into a river.
    But instead he found Zbigniew, and through him, redemption.


    "Your life for eternal service"

    Kreawan spat.

    "No royal dog will ever command me."

    "Shall we settle this with a duel? The winner has his way."

    He looked so peaceful. The man they called the Bloodied wolf, butcher of men and children, rapist, a lost, enraged soul.

    "Ha!" Kreawan's bound frame shook with laughter

    "Do you really think you could overpower me, Prince?"

    Zbigniew's stance widened, his predatory eyes narrowing dangerously.

    Kreawan was set loose and lept at the man, ready to smother the royal fool into submission.

    Zbigniew's fist hit the brute straight in the face. A torrent of blood gushed down his broken nose, but the beast hardly seemed to notice and renewed the assault.

    His fist collided with the noble's jaw, but the man repaid him with a kick that knocked the air out of his lungs and forced him into the defense as he soaked a flurry of fists.

    The spectators watched eagerly and cheered loudly once the prince knocked Kreawan to his feet.

    "You're stubborn."

    "Pike off."

    Zbigniew held a palm, and Kreawan's bloodied hand painted it red.

    Days turned to weeks.

    "She is gone, Kreawan. Accept it. Let me help you."

    Snow thawed, and the forest was washed in green and orange.

    "Accept it. The blade had struck, the blood trickled. Now it is your turn to cleanse the pus.”

    Months turned to years, yet the pus still flows.

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    A great chapter! A chapter about reminiscing and pain. I especially liked the part with Kreawan and his part in the story. An interesting character and I hope to see more of him in future updates. +rep

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