What is going wrong with mad orcs writing .Tell it honestly .Point the accusing finger at me .

[Owlparrot3]

I want some answers .If you follow my stories then tell me if my stories have any problems .It is okay to accuse my stories here .I want brutally honest reviews .Even if you are inexperienced its okay
but don't give general answers
go and dissect my stories tell me specifically problems about MY stories .

[Tigellinus]

I'll take a look at them over the weekend and see if there is anything I can dissect.

Although, you do know you can hire editors for this? XD

[Owlparrot3]

I don't want editors I am not that big .It's just that I Nedd some criticism which is lacking nowadays .