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    Default A Conquest of the Stars - Chapters Seventeen - Twenty-One Updated

    Hello readers, this is the updated First Post.
    Because It's finally over. The rewriting is complete and ready to be posted here!

    I'll also state, on a less important note, that this has now become an experiment.
    A few months ago I was doing some reading and research, and I found a term I hadn't heard before Web Novel. Which is pretty much what we all do here in Creative Writing anyway. But, after further researching into it, I found that it was actually quite a big thing. There are competitions, forums, a lot of things about it. It's actually quite interesting.

    Anyway, I decided to try my hand at this Web Novel thing. So, I went to Bluehost and bought the web domain https://www.acotsserial.com and started posting the updated rewrites there every Friday. While doing this I also applied for WebFictionGuide and posted the updates on RoyalRoadl, Wattpad and Spacebattles (now defunct), all linking back to the site to see what would happen.

    Now, this Web Novel experiment is feeding in to a larger experiment. I intend to finish ACotS, edit it and have it professionally edited, and then self publish it. Not because I think it's actually going to be worthy of publishing or reading. but because I'll learn from this experience. After all, I intend to make a living as a writer, at least someday. So, these experiments will all be a good start.

    So, that's my little explanation about the situation. If anyone wants to go to the site and read the Chapters there, you're welcome to:

    https://www.acotsserial.com/table-of-contents/

    (WS Staff, if linking to it isn't allowed, let me know and I'll remove it ASAP )


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    Stolen from his home, Eleusis is forced to wage a war against his brother. He now serves the ones who killed his father and stole him away. With the hope of creating a better universe from the ashes of the old, he will be forced to do terrible things.


    Having risen to power as the Champion of Her Majesty, Kaldratos must unify a divided Imperium and save his Empress from the foes surrounding her. Faced with debauchery, assassinations, duels and plots; he must bring stability to a splintering Empire, or forever be remembered as the one who lost everything.


    Narrowly escaping the destruction of her home; Risa finds herself entangled in the plots of the Imperium as her saviours fight to destroy it from within. Caught between her fear of death and her loyalty to the ones who saved her, she must find her own path amidst a web of deceit and betrayal.


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    Wow, it sounds like your thousand words a day plan led to a very productive time for writing. I am interested in the two brothers and what kind of military leaders they will be. I am also wondering what divides the two factions: are they fighting because of different political or religious beliefs, to seek revenge for past wrongs, of cultural differences or misunderstandings or for a different reason? On one side, at least, it seems that vengeance is the motivator, but I wonder what caused the actions which led to this desire for revenge?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Alwyn View Post
    Wow, it sounds like your thousand words a day plan led to a very productive time for writing. I am interested in the two brothers and what kind of military leaders they will be. I am also wondering what divides the two factions: are they fighting because of different political or religious beliefs, to seek revenge for past wrongs, of cultural differences or misunderstandings or for a different reason? On one side, at least, it seems that vengeance is the motivator, but I wonder what caused the actions which led to this desire for revenge?
    Some of those questions will be answered in the first few chapters. All will be answered in the course of the story XD

    Glad you find it interesting, Alwyn! Always a pleasure to hear your comments!

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    Part One:
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    "Your mercy? Your mercy has doomed us. Your dream has killed us. They will wreck vengeance upon a million stars for your failure to kill just one man!"

    - Ravings of a Madman
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    Caillagh was kind enough to help me edit this Chapter, so that's why it stands above the rest of this story! XD

    Thanks for your help, my friend!

    Enjoy the Chapter!


    Eleusis - Chapter One

    Eleusis
    Chapter One


    “Bloody hell!” I swerved as the plasma bolts exploded around me, sending snow and dirt and rocks hailing around me. I could hear the sounds as the rocks beat against my Frame, as they clanged off the metal exterior. “Monika, send Darren’s unit around to flank them, we can’t hold this position much longer!” God damn, Orno, if only you had listened to me.

    “We’re being beaten back, sir.” Monika’s Frame moved into my view, her weapons blazed through the blizzard, slicing through the snow as she desperately tried to strike at our invisible foes. I could smell the dampness of the air, and I saw the heavy pelting of ice that fell upon us like blades from above. I heard the cracks as they beat against my Frame, as the ice shattered against my machine of death.

    Yet snow fell also, in flakes like peaceful raindrops floating towards the ground.

    Beauty amidst all the horror.

    I looked down to my radar, seeing the enemy’s formation and position. Yet, even so, it was like firing into an abyss. Nothing was there. A void. If I looked up, the sight that greeted me was both beautiful and horrendous. The blood-soaked snow, swiftly covered in the blizzard. The cool winter sky, splashed with red and the fires of destroyed metal.

    I sighed. I leaned back in my chair and switched my Frame over to automatic command. I tapped my fingers against the side, they hammered out the sound of a bitter drum. I need to think.

    I checked the radar once more and looked over the positions of my soldiers. I saw Casper’s unit as it advanced headlong into an enemy formation. His blue dot glowed vibrantly for a second and then it faded. Extinguished.

    My hand drifted to the empty space on my hip. I grimaced when I realised I did not have my blade with me. It felt unnatural, as if I had lost a part of myself, as if something that made me who I was had disappeared. I spared a glance to my wrist; a small blue light emitted from a mark, signalling that the teleporter was active.

    I shivered and a tremble ran through my body. The thought of abandoning those I cared for made me sick. Those who do terrible things for good reasons, are they just as terrible as those who do terrible things for terrible reasons?

    The thought coiled within my head for a few moments. My eyes darted to the radar showing my foes; they were encircling us now, our flanking manoeuvre had been cut off. The one chance we had at victory here had been crushed before my eyes.

    “There has to be some hope. Some way that their lives can be spared.” I whispered this plea to myself, and I hoped against everything in my mind that said there is none. Against every logical reason. I held hope.

    “Myron,” I commed him and my friend’s face appeared before my own. His brow was strained in concentration as he focused on his enemies, and on talking with myself amidst it all. The battle raged on. I saw rockets scream past my Frame, kicking snow up uselessly as they failed to meet their targets. All around me my soldiers fired, aimlessly, blindly. Hopelessly.

    “Eleusis!” My friend’s voice was thick. Regret? Anger? A loss of faith in my abilities?

    I looked at his face, my memory finding all the times we had shared a drink. My mind racing to the time I had met this strange and loyal man. How I had been dumped straight off Supreme Commander Ignatios’s ship and shoved in to the line of recruits that were marched towards the barracks. I had been starved and dehydrated. Afraid and alone. Alone except for her. She joined me too, and yet I couldn’t protect her from Ignatios’ hate. Hatred of us Nobles. Myron had seen our poor shape and had given us food and water, he allowed us to stay within his barracks. He did not know us; he did not care who we were or where we had been. He had helped us because it was his nature, to defend the weak and to aid those who needed it.

    A good man. Far better than myself, I knew. Far better than the man I would be forced to become, I feared.

    “I’m sorry.” I said my goodbye, my apology. I saw his eyes widen as it dawned on him. I, the arrogant prick who claimed I could never lose, saw no way out. There was nothing I could do. I killed the communication, and sat back against the seat.

    I watched as my old nationmen dashed themselves like waves upon rocks against my defensive formation. They strove forward through the blizzard, coming for us like a starved pack of wolves. They came at us again and again, persistent until death. Each one of theirs taking ten of mine before they were silenced. In this war of attrition and lives, I was losing.

    “The Imperium, ever grand, ever victorious.” I allowed myself a smile, one that dripped with sorrow at the thought of my family. After today, I cannot return to you. After what I will do, there will be nothing that can save my soul.

    I could feel the heat that pierced my skin, the sweat that rolled down my brow and wet my cheeks. My head thumped like a hammer, it felt as if my skull was breaking. I clutched my head between my hands and tried to steady my mind as the pain shot through my skull. It had no mercy as it assailed my nerves, as the pain swept to the rest of my body, paralysing me in agony. The memories came back vividly. The smoke and Flames. The ash that burned that stuck to my feet as I fled through the woods. The burned clothes that barely covered me and the smell of soot that had assaulted my nostrils. Even now, as the memories returned, the same stench returned to me.

    My heart broke, shattered by the knowledge that I would betray all I loved for my own personal greed. For power. But power with a purpose.

    I snapped my head up, the pain making everything distorted. I can still win. I can save them. If I am to become a monster, then my one last deed may as well be one of an angel.

    I sat back into my seat, tapping my control panel, and regained control of my Frame. I glanced at my wrist, at the blue tinge, and a sense of dread swept through me once more. I grimaced, still unable to accept the burden that I had placed upon myself. The mantle that I had accepted from Randera’s hand many months ago. My mission, in Randera’s eyes, is to defeat those I once would have died for. My mission to myself is to make sure that those deaths are not in vain.

    “I will create something better, Randera. Something that you cannot even comprehend.” My voice sounded hollow even to my own ears as I charged up the mountain, passing by all of my soldiers. The steep incline made my Frame groan as it sliced through snow.

    “Myron,” I commed him. My friend’s eyes locked with my own; a pit of sorrow opened between us. “We can win. Follow my exact commands.” I listed my orders to him, telling him precisely what he had to do.

    When I gave him his final order, he snorted and shook his head. But, then his gaze met mine and his mirth fell away. “Oh. You’re serious.” I nodded, and my friend tried to hide the fear beneath his gaze. Yet it did not escape my notice. My hands curled together, as they used to when I prayed to the Emperor each morning, thanking him for my life and for the boons granted to me and mine because of our status s Nobles.

    Your Majesty, if you ever truly listened to these prayers. Forgive me.

    “My friend,” I whispered, unable to meet his gaze. “Should either one of us be dead by the end of this day. You have become my family, brother. Know that, all the good you have done will not have been in vain.” I ended the communication as my friend began to reply. I will die, but I will not allow you to believe me dead without having your value known to you.

    Ahead of me, snow was blasted into the air as rockets fired past, explosions burst ahead of me as the rockets hit their mark. The fire was focused on the flanks of the Imperials, forcing the soldiers to close together as our rain of rockets began. The formation changed as Myron gave out my orders to the captains and my troops. It swept from a half-moon to a three-pronged attack to a recurved bow formation.

    The Imperium’s soldiers faltered and failed, their advance stopping as my soldiers came together in one final struggle to achieve victory. I needed one last thing, something to turn the tide entirely. The reserves. The thought cut through my haze, and I immediately opened communications with the Chain.

    “Get me Orno!” I snapped to the woman who appeared on my screen. She turned, abruptly transferring me to Orno’s communication panel. His ugly face greeted me with a stern look.

    “Vixiua,” he drawled, his voice like grating sandpaper. “What do you need?”

    “The reserves,” I pleaded, “Mora through to Serllo. The heavy weaponry units. I need them.” I gestured to the battle that raged around me. “We have them in a deadlock, but I just need an edge, and then we can begin to push them back.” I allowed the desperation to enter my voice, I allowed him to see my fear that we could lose. Please, if you have ever had a single bone of remorse in you, grant me this.

    “No.” His voice cut like a knife. Yet, his face did not hold the malice that I had expected from his tone. He looked startlingly sombre. “I can’t do that, Commandant. Those forces are needed for the left wing. I’m having them transferred as we speak to try and hold the last line of defence.” The man’s gaze darted to the ground, then back to me.

    General Mallius Orno saluted his greatest Commandant. “I’m sorry, Vixiua. No help can come for you.” The communication ended. I felt a chill sweep over me. I let out a strangled gurgle of despair and reclined in my seat, hunching down as if looking away would make it less real.

    I have no choice now. There is only one last option available to me. I looked to the teleporter. Three taps and it's activated. I shook my head.

    My Frame screeched as the ground erupted beneath me and my Frame was thrown down the hill. The sirens roared within the cockpit as my Frame automatically tried to steady itself, grapples firing out, ploughing through snow to lock onto the rock beneath.

    My head bashed against the side of the cockpit, and blood obscured my vision as my gaze turned red. I felt the warmth wash over my forehead, and for a moment darkness took me and then a bright light.

    Then reality.

    I watched as the Imperium’s soldiers came from the flanks, having overrun my last line of defense. I watched, helpless, as my soldiers were obliterated, as the men and women I had commanded for nearly a year were blasted away. The Imperium’s men were merciless, killing all that they found through the curtain of white and the howling blizzard.

    I opened a communication with Monika. My gaze was met with dark eyes that spoke volumes. She shook her head, anticipating my order. “There is nothing my unit can do. We have nearly depleted our resources of missiles and we can’t break through. There is no retreat now.” She shook her head. I could see the shiver through her face. “I’m sorry, Eleusis.”

    “Never be.” I shook my head. “This failure is mine to bear.” I looked away, ending the communication with my lieutenant. I opened Myron’s channel.

    “Execute my Final Order, Myron. I failed.” My friend objected, stating that there had to be another way, that I could find some way to victory. I could not. If there was any way for me to salvage this, without this act that will likely end in your death, I would. But, there is nothing more I can do.

    “See it done.” I steeled my voice. I would not allow him to object; the guilt for this act must be mine alone.

    Silence.

    “Very well, Commandant Vixiua.” Lament filled my friend’s voice as he accepted my command, as his unit turned. I had kept Myron’s missiles in reserve for this reason alone. So that I had one final blow against the Imperium’s soldiers.

    From where I was, now far below the mountain, it was a beautiful spectacle. I saw the streaks of fire as the missiles fired out and the trail of flashing sparks as they were unleashed. I saw the missiles as they wreaked havoc; tore through the cliffs at the top of the mountain, shredded through the stone and the clay and dirt and melted the ice with the heat of the explosion and weakening it completely.

    I did not hear the mountain roar as the cliffs began to tumble. I saw the sheets of ice as they collapsed, I saw the snow as it burst forth in a great wave. I looked to my wrist. I tapped. One. The snow continued to belch forth, the sound coming to my ears now as the snow screeched, its battle cry louder than the shrieks of metal and the blasts of flames and the cries of the dying.

    Two.

    I saw the snow collide with my rear-guard, Frames uplifted and swept along as it moved like a charging current. The avalanche devoured all in its path; my soldiers, infantrymen desperately battling against the Frames of the Imperium, were torn apart by the mass of snow. I watched as men were squashed beneath its wrath, their blood a small speck upon the rolling thunder of the Gods.

    My eyes fell upon my radar with a heaviness that could have shattered a world. I watched the blue dots be swept away, vanishing into nothing. I couldn’t even imagine the terror that shot through my soldiers as they died, wrenched apart by the strength of nature.

    A section of the avalanche broke off, as if it had seen me and wanted to feast upon my soul as it had theirs. I looked toward the rolling death. The snow that foamed like the sea, the boulders that split apart beneath its anger and in my ears the sound of a howling wolf, ready to strike at its prey.

    Three.

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    Second Chapter.

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    Kaldratos - Chapter Two


    Kaldratos
    Chapter Two





    “Don’t be absurd, Octavian. Balerian would win, no matter how skilled Gillian is. It’s simply in the blood.” Cassandra’s voice was a soft melody, harmonic with its venomous tones. My friends watched each other, arguing as they frequently did.

    “The day we decided that someone’s worth is proven by their blood is the day that our Impeirum lost its grandeur.” Octavian shook his head, his eyes glancing my way, as if I would involve myself in the conversation. “The First Knights Royal has five brave knights from the Common Class.”

    “Five, out of nineteen,” Cassandra mocks, rolling her eyes as if it was all too easy. “Octavian, face it. We Nobles rule because we were born to. We are the best that the Universe has to offer. Men and women may rise from nothing, but the day I was born I had already risen far above all others.” Her eyes fall on me, and she offers me a caring smile. “After all, not anyone can protect our lovely Empress’s Champion, can they?”

    “Careful, Cass.” Brandon lays a hand upon his wife’s elbow, giving me an apologetic nod. My eyes remain fixed on Cassandra until she nods as well.

    “You’re right. Apologies, Your Highness.” She turns to our fourth companion. “Jascol, what are your thoughts?”

    The First Sword of Roslim lies back, his hands clasped at his stomach. His eyes closed to the solar lights which act as a replacement to the natural stars.

    “In the end, my opinion matters not, Cassy. I thought you’d know that by now. Neither does yours, actually. The only one here who can ever change a thing is our esteemed lord, Kaldratos Vixiua.” His jiggles his hands in a starry motion, a light smile playing upon his lips.

    Octavian snorts, he turns to me and opens his mouth to speak.

    He never gets a chance.

    My eardrums thrum as I hear a thunderous roar behind me. I dive for the ground and roll, when I’m up, I’ve drawn my pulseblade. It shines crimson and black in the false light. I hear screams around me, half of the café that I was seated in has now been demolished, with smoking rubble and charred remains the only indication that there had once been anything.

    My four companions surround me, pressing against me, shielding me with their bodies. I hear them all shouting, yelling into their comms for my guards. I drown out the sound, pushing past Octavian when I see through the smoke. I see, half a kilometre away, the smoke rising from another building.

    I hear a cry beside me, and see a woman trapped underneath a fallen pillar. She is trying to crawl her way out, but her legs are shattered. I rush forward, yelling for my friends to help me. We heave and lift the thing off her, while Brandon pulls the poor women free. The pain that shoots through her body knocks her unconscious.

    “Call for a medic.” I say, absentmindedly. My eyes turn back to the burning building around me. “Jascol, evacuate everyone from here, now. Get them away!” I turn to Cassandra, wanting a report.

    “Praetorian Legionnaires are enroute to our position, Your Highness.” Cassandra speaks in my ear.

    “Redirect half of them to Sector 7E. There has been a second bombing.” I look to Brandon. “Into your Frame, now. This is more than some failed assassination attempt. Go.” I look to Octavian. “Inform Jascol that he has command here until the people are safely evacuated, and the medics have seen to everyone. Then he is to follow us in his Frame and rendezvous at Sector 7E.” The two men salute, sprinting in different directions. Brandon leaps from the walkway. If he had not called his Frame, he would fall a hundred-kilometres to the surface of Capitallium.

    I start off at a run, my jetboots kicking into gear as I leap from the edge and shoot forward. I don’t look behind me. I know Cassandra and Octavian will be following me. Somewhere close by, I hear the deep rumble of transport shuttles, and I know that the Praetorians are on my tail as well.

    I can make out the rushing of the people. Many of them are Noble men, women or children. Most of them have never had to fight for their lives. They have lived a life of comfort and luxury, with servants and bodyguards to protect them and see to their needs. Even now, I see them huddling into little packs, like frightened dogs. Heads of families yelling at their retainers, or other family members, trying to find someone to blame. Some few start breaking down, realising that some of their family are still in the building.

    When I land, the burning has stopped, but the air is no less menacing. The poisonous smell of burnt flesh and blood. I see bodies littering the ground. Some charred, and some few shot through with plasma boltors or gas-powered rifles. What happened here? Soldiers?

    “This is much more than a bombing.” I turn to Cassandra, a worried look crosses her face for only a second as she takes in the horror of the scene.

    A voice interrupts my thoughts.

    “Excuse me, Sir. But, you need to leave. The Praetorians have ordered a perimeter to be secured, and no civilians are allowed within.” My gaze falls upon the man, and only then does he realise who I am.

    I am Kaldratos Vixiua, Champion of Her Majesty Catherina. I outrank every man and woman aside from Catherina herself. I hold more power than anyone aside from Her Majesty and the members of the Royal Family.

    His change is immediate. He falls to one knee, hand crossing over his chest. “Your Highness, my sincerest apologies, I was unaware it was you.” I nod past the pleasantries, grabbing the man and heaving him up.

    “Who is your commander?” Years of discipline snap back into the man, and he salutes, and begins speaking at once.

    “Sergeant Commandant Hellia Kingsley, Your Highness.” He turns on his heels and leads the way.

    “I always love how the soldiers squirm when they realise who you are,” Cassandra drawls to me, a devilish smile on her face. Her sympathy evaporated in seconds to give way to wry amusement.

    I ignore her, and follow the Praetorian. Behind me, I hear a low moan as Brandon arrives in his WAR-FRAME. The Nobles arguing with the Praetorians scatter like rabbits as they see the hulking military vehicles.

    A pseudo-command-point had been set up in a transport shuttle. A dozen men and women are huddled inside, arguing and yelling at each other. There are no sentries as we stride through. No organisation or security. It’s a disgrace.

    Silence dawns when I entered the shuttle. One by one they look up from their bickering and look to see me. Each and every one of them has heard of me. Most will have watched me from their holovids. They would have seen the romanticising of my battles, of my Triumphs. To them, I am a myth, a legend, and to see me in the flesh is something they will tell their children about.

    “Status report?” I begin, I feel Cassandra roll her eyes at the lack of organization. The arguers scatter, all trying to get their reports and form some kind of coherent idea of the situation. All but one.

    She salutes, “I am Sergeant Commandant Kingsley, Highness.” Her olive coloured lips reveal gleaming white teeth as she looks at me. “Thought you’d be taller.”

    I allow a smile. She continues, leaving her advisors to fail to collect themselves.

    “We originally thought the bombs were assassination attempts. Your Highness was targeted, as was Lord Calliar Cersey.” That takes me aback for a second. Cersey? He’s one of the few Nobles that wants better rights for the Commoners. Why would anyone associated with them target him? “Both you and he are prime targets for the Resistance, who we think are the man perpetrators behind this attack. However, our original assessment has been disproven. There are assailants holding the remaining survivors as hostages.”

    She glances to the side. “There are a hundred and fifty-seven survivors. Thirty-one of those are of the Nobility, the rest are their attendants. There are forty-five armed hostiles, our analysis has determined that they are the Haegis Demons, an Executor unit.”

    “An Executor unit? Here? Why the hell would an Executor unit be working with the Surface Dwellers?” Cassandra snorts. Kingsley opens her mouth, but is interrupted before she speaks.

    “Kaldratos,” Octavian taps my shoulder. I turn, and look past him. What I see makes me flinch. I go to one knee, within a breath everyone else has followed suit.

    “Your Majesty,” I speak, as I am the highest rank. “May I ask why Her Majesty’s own sister has come here?”

    Why are you here?

    “Kaldratos,” Her voice brings the promise of tears, and only then do I realise. Her son, he must be with the hostages.

    “I’ll bring him back, Genna.” I whisper, so that only she can hear. She nods back at me, and then turns away, her husband is the only one who may see her tears.

    “Please,” She whispers, and then more loudly. “Kaldratos Vixiua, as Champion of Her Majesty, my sister, it is your duty to eradicate these enemies of the Imperium. You speak in Her Majesty’s name, let all who disobey you know that they disobey my sister, and such an act means death.” She strides away. The two women are very different. Genna is softer, loving and kind. When one meets her, they are enamoured by her love for all. All think her kinder than Catherina, wrongly. Catherina is fire, furious and commanding. If it was one of her children captured, she’d personally lead the rescue team to free them.

    I turn back to Hellia, swift in executing my orders. “Send a message to the Valiance. I want a hundred of my Deathtroopers here within an hour.”

    I look to Octavian and pull him and Cassandra to the side. When they hear that Vespallian is a hostage, they both go pale.

    Crown Prince Vespallian, only eight years old. I have barely begun to teach him how to use a pulseblade. He is a kind child, yet I know that it won’t last long in this world. He would someday rule an Empire, kindness was a flaw in one who had to control the lives of trillions.

    Hellia draws close, a question upon her lips. I shake my head, “Classified information, Sergeant. Once my soldiers arrive you and your Praetorians will need to vacate the area.” She raises an eyebrow at that, but does not question it.

    I leave the shuttle, my retainers behind me. The rest of my Knights were assigned to the Valiance, overseeing my Armada while it held within the orbit of Capitallium. Everywhere I looked, an air of tension and fear was held by the Praetorians. They were used to dealing with bombs, with hostage situations and criminals. They were not used to seeing a First Knight Royal.

    “I wonder what they want,” Octavian mused. Cassandra makes a dismissive noise. But I don’t miss her gip tightening on her pulseblade. For all her air of hardness, she cares for the Crown Prince as much as the rest of us.

    “They cannot know it is him,” I whisper to her. She nods, but her eyes dart towards the building. Like a fearful deer waiting for the predator to come out of the woods.

    I walk towards the captain of the perimeter. Hundreds of Praetorians line the formation. Rifles aimed at the building. Strategical analysts argue the best approach of breach: where they should send their troops, approximate casualty rates of their soldiers, civilians. Everything. All oblivious to the knowledge that they are now playing in a game far superior to them.

    “I wonder who orchestrated this, because it sure as hell wasn’t the Resistance.” Lord Calliar Cersey’s voice carries over the guardsmen. None of them acknowledge our conversation. It is a topic that they had no business in, and so they turned themselves off to it.

    I pull Cersey to the side, dragging him to where Brandon and Jascol wait with their Frames. He glances at me, showing a worried smile. He is not a handsome man, age has taken that from him. But his sharp face still looks menacing and predatory to all who look at it. It suits him fantastically, as he’s a man who breaks families as others break sticks.

    I have Brandon scan for any bugs or cameras. Only when I’m satisfied do I speak. “We both know that the Resistance can’t get this far. The Haegis Demons, aren’t even supposed to be alive. They all died in the Atmospheric Invasion of Uraeli.” I told him this, because I know he is loyal. Because he is not my enemy, not today. He mused for a minute, making a show of it, fingers stroking his chin.

    “Records can be changed, so can names. Deaths can be faked. It isn’t uncommon for Executor units to go rogue and try to make money for themselves, selling themselves as mercenaries. Hell, it’s how most of the lowbloods protect themselves, by hiring deserter Executors.” He turns away, looking at the building. Brandon bristles at the derogatory term for the Lower Nobility, but I ease his anger with a pat of the arm.

    He looks at me with a playful smile. “The question, Kaldratos, is who knew that the Crown Prince was inside that building?” Almost immediately my retainers have their pulseblades drawn. Cersey smiles, loving the theatrics of it all.

    “Oh please, I am Lord Sovereign of Heraea. I am of the gens Cersey. Of course, I know. Though, today, I’m not your enemy. Today I am as much a victim as you, and our dear Crown Prince.” His smile dies on his lips.

    “The next few weeks will be bloody. You know what this means. A Purge. Nobody’s supposed to know the exact location of any of our Royal family, which means thousands will die. Some guilty, most not.” He wrinkles his nose in what I think is disgust. “So inefficient.” He looks up as we hear a rumble.

    A single shuttle comes through the atmospheric shield of the city. It bears the circle of nineteen swords with a crown in the center. The sigil of House Vixiua, my soldiers have arrived.

    Cersey sighs, leaning against Brandon’s limegreen Frame. “One must wonder whether killing more people is going to solve all this death.” He gives me a pointed look, and then walks away, tapping his ear and speaking to someone on the other side.

    “Bastard. Wouldn’t shock me for a second if he did this.” Cassandra fumes. I am already moving towards the shuttle that just landed.

    The ramp slides down, and a hundred of the most heavily armoured and best trained soldiers in the universe march off. Each one is armed with a pulserifle, a plasma boltor, micro-rockets on their wrists and a durasteel blade for close quarters. A select few of them carry Obliterator rifles, which work similarly to the Frame that is their namesake. They would fire small explosive rounds; dozens of them per shot, fantastic at destroying walls, or formations of enemies. They are armed in red and black Shockforce Gear, some of the best armour that the Imperium had to offer.

    And today they are going to earn their name.
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    Eleusis
    Chapter Three

    I open my eyes, to see a familiar chamber. It worked. The damned teleporter actually worked!

    A cold chill strikes me. Myron. Monika. All of them. I don’t know if any survived. If my last-ditch effort succeeded, most of the Imperium’s Frames on our flank would be buried beneath snow and ice and rock. It would all depend on luck as to whether my friends would have escaped the avalanche’s wrath.

    For a moment I allow myself a silent prayer, a hope that they were alive. If there is any good in what I am to do, then please, survive, my friends.

    I turned my thoughts to what was to come. My body shakes with anticipation. My hands, when brought to my face, vibrate as the fear and the thrill intertwine within me. “Randera,” I whisper, hoping to find some meaning within her name, some guidance.

    Nothing.

    Can I really do what she wants me to? It was a question that I had mulled over the last six years. Ever since that fateful day when she told me her vision for me. Can I truly sacrifice myself for this? For this goal of hers? Is she willing to risk that much?

    “Free the Universe, or see it burn.” My voice shudders as I utter her order to me. I shook my head, clearing the thoughts away.

    A beeping from my terminal breaks my trance. I look at the ID, and flinch. The private line of High Lady Randera.

    My fingers tremble as I tap the screen and accept the call. Her face appears before my screen. Her dark face seems lined with age, her pale lips pursed in a sad line. Her brown eyes find mine, and a dormant hatred awakens from them.


    “Vixiua,” She whispers my name, as if merely speaking it pained her. I understand; standing before her was the last-living son of the man who killed her father. The man who tore through her fleets and brought everything she had worked for to its knees. Yet, here she was. About to hand me the greatest mantle of power. She trusted me, yet she loathed herself for it. The task she had given me, the dream she wished for me to achieve. She believes it is worth suffering me.

    She will be wrong.

    “Why does it have to be me?” I ask, and her face snaps to attention once more. She hesitates, so I speak first.

    “I’m risking as much as you, Randera. Your dog killed my father and brother. I –“

    “Which is exactly why I question my decision in trusting you, Eleusis.” She looked defeated, as if she feels as if everything was now veering from her control. As if she could no longer see what the future would hold for her, or her people.

    “You need me,” I state, “I need her protected.” Randera shook her head. A slight smile crept upon her lips.

    “So, you are willing to do all this so that no harm comes to her?”

    I bark a laugh. “No, I do all of this because I crave power.” I hate myself for the words I say. “The power to make certain that nothing happens to the ones I need. I need her, protect her. I will see your dream come to fruition, but if anything happens to Lelliana, I will see your Universal Collective burn.” I set my mouth in a hard line, the sincerity of my threat burning beneath my eyes. I feel her searching me, weighing me. Trying to find the same young boy who she could manipulate and toy with as she had six years ago.

    “Do this, and you’ll have your power. You know our agreement, Vixiua.” She opens her mouth to say more, but she hesitates. “We have our differences, the disparity between us is great. But, you are a better man than those who came before you.”

    I allow a smile. “Tell that to me in a year, we’ll see if you mean it with as much sincerity as you do now.” I raise my right hand to my chest, the salute that is usually saved for the Majesties. “Thank you, High Lady Randera.”

    I end the call and sit back against the bed. I look to my hands, calloused from months of training, from years of duelling and from the gruelling work that comes to one who must fight to survive. You took everything from me, Randera. Everything. All I have left of who I was is her. But I will do this. I will sacrifice my soul.

    I sigh, and rise from the bed. I go to the wardrobe by the terminal and open it with a code. The wardrobe opens, and behind it a second container that unlocks with it. What is revealed inside is he last remaining artefact of my family. A pulseblade, the one my father gave me when I was younger.

    The hilt is intricate in design, with the guards coiling out and down, like the roots of a tree. When activated, the guard extends down for a third of the blade. In the centre of the roots is a small blue crystal. Locked within the confines. When my hand touches the hilt, the crystal glows a deep blue.

    This blade is special. It can be activated with a thought, and can take the length of a longsword, or that or a shortsword or dagger, depending on what I require. It is a versatile, deadly, weapon.

    Feeling the lightness of this relic of my past brings tears to my eyes. Kaldratos. I can only hope that, in whichever plane you walk now, you have turned away from what I am to do.

    I gently place the pulseblade on the bed, and the glow of the crystal stills.

    Turning back to the wardrobe, I pull out a coat traced with gold. It was extravagant, the type of thing I would have worn daily had life not taken the course it did. I felt… unworthy of wearing it. I had not attended all the feasts, I had not studied all the histories or the philosophies. I was born a Noble, but I felt little more than a common criminal.

    I strip off the officer’s shirt that I wore and disposed of it. I watched as the flames lick at the grey shirt and know that my old life is dying with it.

    Tonight I will be born anew.

    I turn, and my eyes land on the mask that hung in the wardrobe. As soon as I put it on, I will be someone else. Everything will change. I find myself wishing to hear my brother’s voice again, to know his advice. To hear him speak his mind, far too honest for lies or manipulation, he would have told me dead-on whether or not I should take the path I was about to.

    But, Kaldratos isn’t here. Nor would he ever be by my side again.

    My hands tremble as I reach out and grip the mask. Plain, cold grey steel. I always hated the colour grey. It shines back at me, completely clean, completely clear. I see myself in the reflection, my deep green eyes, the eyes of my mother. I see my dark blonde hair, covering half my face, shaggy and unkempt as it was. I do not look the Noble I should be.

    There are no holes for the eyes, no hint of a nose. It is completely smooth, save for a small line where the mouth would be that would allow me to breath. It would filter the air, so that I could survive even in toxic or poisonous environments. The mask is unadorned, grey as the rest of my dull room.

    I take the mask from the stand and hold it in my hands. It was lighter than expected in my grip, but I knew it would be far heavier when my face was behind it. I release a shaking breath, I flit between a desire to put it on my face and smashing it into the ground, rejecting the road that it would take me down.

    “I was a Noble,” I shiver, my mind made up. “I was the son of a respected man, a good man. Once, I would have chosen for nothing more than to be with my family, to be with those who I loved.” I turned the mask around and raise it to my face. I feel the dampness of tears as they run down my cheeks. “Now, I choose to become a monster.”

    I feel the weight of the cold steel as it imprisons my face. I see only darkness. Then the mask comes to life as it senses my breath, the inside of the mask glows red. I set the voice parameters so it changes my voice, and then set it so that the mask is completely transparent to me. I see normally. Others would see the emotionless stare of grey steel.

    The edge of the mask extends, coiling around my head until the two sides meet. They click, and I hear a small whir as the gears lock themselves together.

    My cage is complete.

    I ready myself for what is to come. For the task that has been set before me. I let my hand slide down to the pulseblade at my waist, I find comfort from the hilt. Comfort from the knowledge that whether I fight or die, my life is in my own hands. I still have control over my own life, if not the path I walk.

    My blood turns to ice as the cold of the military base comes at me in full force. I look towards the hallway that leads to the Command Centre, and I spare one last glance at my blade.

    “Time to begin the end.”




    I stand at the end of the corridor, eyes watching the two guards by the door. Calvins looks alert, worried. Followed by annoyance. It is a weird mixture of emotions that cycle over his face. Irritation that he is stuck in here, then joy that he is not out in the battle where hundreds are dying.


    His friend looks much more sheepish, his eyes cast down, his rifle held skittishly in his hands. I try to decide what to do with the two men. Can I kill them? Would it at all be wise to let them live?

    I sighed, I am not prone to blatant aggression on a whim. I am methodical, a strategist. I was always the one who looked towards the future, the one who looked deeper than one act, and planned several. Killing them would gain nothing.

    I step out into the corridor and stride down towards the Command Centre. I walk with as much confidence as I can bear, trying to hide the swirl of worry and uncertainty that flows within me. Calvins tenses as he saw me coming, he has no idea who I am. He only knows that some random man in a mask is heading straight towards the Command Centre which he guarded.

    “Who in Hells name are you?” His voice writhes, escalating from firm to fear. I am a full head shorter than him, but I carry an aura of command.

    His friend raises his rifle to me. both steady themselves as I continue to walk forward. I stop short of their rifles. Calvins has a look of irritation, mixed with fear. His friend looks me up and down, taking in my mask, the pulseblade at my hip. He’s never seen the weapon before. His eyes light in curiosity and fear.

    He takes an involuntary step backwards as the command centre rumbles as flak and warheads batter it from the outside. They still don’t know the base’s exact location, just that we’re somewhere here in the mountains.

    “I’m not here to hurt you,” I begin, “General Mallius Orno has made a mockery of the Universal Collective and is a danger to our success. I am here to rid us of that danger.” Calvins face scrunches into a glare. I know he hates Orno, maybe even more than I do. But, he is a soldier, and he follows orders. For that, I can respect him.

    “Why would they send someone now? Why would the High Council get rid of Orno in the middle of a in’ battle?” Calvins questions, but his friend just stared at me in fear.

    “Because they won’t need to send aid once I am in command. I can win, High Lady Randera knows this, and so she chose me to lead in Orno’s place.” Maybe I can turn foe into friend.

    Still, Calvins glares at me. If you move to speak into your comm, I’ll cut you down. I do not want to kill you, but I cannot risk losing before it has even begun.

    The building roars around us, cracks dart across the walls and steel bends. Calvins eyes jump up as he looks at the roof, at the cracks that had appeared and the dust that had settled on his face. “We’re losing,” He states. He nods towards me as he realises that Orno has lost the battle, and that he cannot be allowed to stay in command.

    He salutes. “General, please enter the Command Centre. Bring us victory.” Calvins begs, and I stride between them. I turn to him, surprised by the humility in him now, the rational. There is no hatred, nor envy, or even anger. He is calm in having done a good deed.

    “You are a good man, Calvins.” I stride on and the doors slither open for me.

    Orno does not turn to see who has entered. He simply assumes that it is one of his officers having returned.

    It is not. I stalk towards him. His Guards turn as they hear footsteps nearing their commander. I see one as his eyes bulge, as he tried to fathom how an armed individual entered the Command Centre.

    He does not get to find out the answer. There is a low hiss as my pulseblade hisses. I swing upwards, the man’s right arm falls from the elbow, a cauterised stump in its place. I waste no time silencing him by cutting off his head. His friend has reacted by now, readying his rifle. I flick my pulseblade, and it moves like wind, extending half a meter as my will commands. The blade slices through the weapon and cuts through the man’s chest, slithering out the other side in a spray of boiling blood. The man sinks to the ground.

    Orno looks at me now. Everyone’s eyes are on me as my pulseblade sizzles with blood. He looks on in horror as he sees his dead guardsmen, his friends. He knows there is no one who can save him now.

    Yet he is less coward than I thought.

    “No,” he states, defiance in his eyes. “I am not going to die to some unnamed assailant! Take off your mask, cur!” He moves to draw his pistol.

    I am death.

    My blade slices through his shoulder and his arm comes off as I carve the blade from his body. He gasps, his other hand going for the stump that is now his shoulder. His blood screams against the heat of my blade, evaporating into red mist.

    I fall into defensive posture, my blade aimed at his throat. His eyes search my mask, trying to find a reason, trying to find the person.

    There is nobody but a hollow monster now.

    I want to hate him, I want to want to kill him. Yet, all I see before me is the terror in this wretched man’s eyes. I don’t hate him, I pity him. That doesn’t make it any easier. This man has a family, people who love and care for him. I look to the bodies at my feet and my stomach sinks as the guilt presses down.

    “On your knees,” I command. My voice sounding fierce and twisted, distorted by the mask. I sound feral, animalistic. Dark. I watch as Orno trembles as he slides to his knees. His resilience gone. His face holds only fear and regret.

    “Please,” he begs of me. Tears brim beneath his eyes he realises that he is to die. I see the exact moment it clicks in his head, that his life was forfeit.

    “I’m sorry,” I whisper. I hesitate for just a moment, but I tap against my mask. I reveal my face to him, so that he will at least know the face of his killer.

    His eyes widen and his mouth quivers. Shock spasms across his face, followed by anger. He opens his mouth.

    “Vi-“ I plunge the blade through his throat and end his life. His eyes lock with mine as he gurgles and spit blood. It flows from him like a violent sea in a storm.

    Then he stops.

    I feel a cold chill crawl up my spine, his eyes had not left mine as he died. Fixated upon the man whom he had the hated most.

    You always envied me, Mallius. Now you die at my hand, and yet it is you who is free, and I who is caged.

    I stare down at his body before me; at the blood that pools at my feet. I tap the mask again, and the grey barrier returns. When I look up, most had returned to their duties. He was not a loved or even liked man.

    Many seem glad he’s dead.

    They don’t care who commands them, so long as the one who does can lead them to victory. The realisation strikes me coldly. This how you win in this Universe. You kill, you butcher, you plot, and you beat all who stand in your way.

    I will win. I will doom this Universe to fire and blood, death and sorrow. But I will win.

    One woman watches me with heated eyes, she thumbs her pistol in its holster. Her gaze is one of a woman who watched one she cared for die before her very eyes. “A lover,” I murmur, a small smile crept on my lips. Orno, maybe I shouldn’t have felt so guilty for killing you after all.

    “You traitor!” She roars at me, spittle flying against my mask and chest. Heads snap as she screams, nobody had expected a confrontation. The fact that I had been allowed into the Command Centre meant that I had at least some soldiers on my side, and Orno was already dead, there was little anyone could do now.

    Behind me, there was a single shot. Her mouth opens, but instead of words, only blood comes out. She spits it forward, spraying it over the ground as she falls, clutching at her chest. Her fingers claw as she tries to stop the bleeding, as she desperately tries to save herself.

    Instinctively I go forward, trying to help her. I stop half way, half kneeling before her. I look to see who saved me from the woman who attacked me.

    Calvins looks at her, his eyes wide in horror. He stares at his shaking hands that hold the rifle. His rifle is still raised.

    I go for him, silent as the grave. I lower the rifle.

    “I couldn’t… I couldn’t just let her-“

    “It’s alright,” I reassure him, my voice as calm as I can make it. Yet, even so, I hear the crack. “Thank you, Calvins.”

    I turn back to the Command Centre. Most have turned to watch us now, usurpations of power are common, but even so, seeing such death in the Command Centre was a rare thing.

    With this mask, who I was before must be stripped away. I must disregard all weakness, all doubts, all fears. “I must be stone,” I whisper as I try to seal away my heart.

    “I will introduce myself,” I take a small bow. I choose who I will be. “My name is Hannibal, and by right of strength, I have claimed this army and the fleet above as my own.” Not necessarily true, I did just appear from nowhere and cut General Orno down. “This is not a rare occurrence for you, as I know. Likely Orno got his position by executing his superior officer also.” I receive a few nods that confirm my suspicions. “Because of this, I have a question for you all. Why do we fight?” I ask them. “Why is it that each and every one of us bleeds for the Universal Collective? Why do we give so much?”

    “Is it because we fight for Democracy? For the right of all the peoples to be free, not just the rich and wealthy? Or, is it deeper than that? What drives you to fight?” I look at them all, heads had bowed, all had begun to think over what their reason for fighting in this war was, all whilst our lines crumbled. But, I need them now. Not in a month when they trust me. Now. Or else we’re all doomed.

    We hear cracking sounds above us as the battle draws closer. The Command Centre shakes violently. I hesitate.

    “When I was younger, all I ever wanted was to do my father proud, to live up to the name I had been born with. I wanted to honour my family, to protect them, too.” I allow a small, hollow laugh to emerge from my lips. “I used to fantasise about fighting with huge Armadas with my brother. How we would stand side by side, united against our common enemy. How, we would be heroes, how we would bring victory where others brought defeat…”

    “This war took my brother from me, stole his life. Stole my dream.” Their eyes are rooted on me now, relating my pain with their own. The friends that they had watched die, the family members they had lost, or who they had left behind. All of them thought that I was speaking of how the Imperium had stolen my brother, not a soul here but me knew that I was speaking of their own cruelty.

    “That is why I fight, to bring about an age where my brother won’t die at the age of thirteen, to make a Universe where peace is eternal, where all men and women are free to do as they will. I need you now, I need you tomorrow, and I need you in ten years from now. Together, we can stand against our common enemy, and we can win.”

    There were no cheers, no outbursts of loyalty. Sombre nods greet my plea for aid, nobody speaks. They turn away, ready and willing to fight to the end.

    “General, what do you need?” Calvins asks, his voice like shattered glass.

    Time, and maybe a miracle. “To know how many on the right wing survived.” Myron, Monika. Please. “Find it out, and when you know, report to me.” He nods and I hear him run down to communications.

    I click my fingers and the screens come to life before me. An overview of our army, an topographical map of the terrain, the enemy’s formation, individual units and casualties also. Everything I need to form some cohesive plan.

    We don’t have enough. I feel the fear welling in me as I realise everyone here relies on me.

    The left wing had all but fallen, the right wing was damned and drowned beneath an avalanche I caused. This battle cannot be won. I see that winning this battle would be unlikely, that it had already progressed to the final stage.

    Change the paradigm.

    Calvins taps my arm. “Commandant Eleusis is unaccounted for, Lieutenant-Commandant Myron survived and is gathering the remaining Frames and we cannot make contact with Lieutenant Monika, she is likely dead. Three thousand Frames survived. All infantry units were destroyed in the avalanche.” He salutes, and stands to the side, his rifle gripped in his hands. My stomach sinks as I realise that I had caused her death, Monika would never rise to greatness as she had planned, that she would never return to her home, never tell her father and mother that she loved them.

    I subdue the sorrow that sweeps through my chest. I blink the tears away and lean forward. A new determination sparks like flint within me. For your memory, Monika. I will avenge you.

    “Have the right-wing retreat to the final Trench, deploy all reserves to that flank under command of…” I glance at the roster of men who were now my subordinates. “Commandant Galvian Morne, he is to take command of the entirety of the right flank and is to hold at all costs.” I drum my fingers against the railing, my mind races. Every possible solution opening upn before my eyes.

    In this world, I am its God. I will do this. I will succeed.

    If only those heavy infantry units were still alive on the right flank. I grimace. My ploy to eradicate a large portion of the imperium’s forces had worked, yet at great cost to my own soldiers.

    “Get me Lieutenant Myron,” I order, a moment later a signal was connected and his face appears on screen. His eyes are narrowed as he strives to see forward, flashes of purple and orange beam against his face as plasma bolts and missiles are fired by the remnants of both sides. On the screen before me, I see that the survivors from my unit had linked with Myron’s. A visual appeared. A Frame advances under fire as its pilot tries to save two comrades buried beneath snow. There is a burst of flame from the right arm, and a second from the cockpit a moment later. Plasma bolts decimate the Frame, and then the other two explode into flames and shrapnel as well.

    So much death, and all for nothing.

    Seventeen soldiers die beneath the snow while I watch Myron. They scream, trying desperately to free themselves or their comrades before death’s cold hands grip them by the throats as he tears them into the underworld.


    “Lieutenant Myron,” I speak, and his gaze locks with the screen for merely a moment. Yet, then he turns away and cries into a different channel.

    “Monika! Can you hear me? Monika?” I watch as my friend bashed at his screen, cursing and begging for our friend to answer. If he found her channel, then she could be alive, but… She could also be buried beneath a thicket of snow, losing breath and dying.

    “Lieutenant Myron!” I roar. He ignores me, merely leaning back against his chair. A pained look crosses his face.

    “You’re not General Orno,” He states. Dumbfounded by the death that had happened so quickly.

    “No,” I continue, “I’m the person who’s going to lead you to victory.” I try to believe my own bravado, but it is difficult when I could see the casualties mounting around me, I see entire squads were being gunned down in seconds by the Imperium’s soldiers.

    “With Commandant Vixiua dead, you are now in command of his forces. Firstly, you will –“

    “Myron!” A crackled voice comes through the communication, Myron’s eyes immediately turns away from my orders and to Monika’s comm. A breath wavers as it leaves me. Monika is alive. She won’t die, not yet.

    But both of them will die, all of them, if I do not figure out a way to save us from this.

    We had the high ground, we had the numbers, still. They had the technology, the determination, the breeding. Everything. The men and women that I was pitted against have been trained from birth to be soldiers, I would know, I was trained with them. I knew their strengths… and I knew their weaknesses.

    The idea hit me like a punch to the stomach. I felt the breath leave my body as I knew what I would have to do.

    “Myron,” I interrupt his reunion, “take a thousand Frames, head straight for the city of Ravnall. We broke the right flank of the Imperium, we have a clear path straight to the city. When you reach Ravnall, storm to the Palace and demand the surrender of the entire planet or you will bring about the death of the entire city.” He looked at me in confusion, and then in anger.

    “Whoever the hell you are, are you an idiot? We’re in the middle of a battle! We can’t just leave!”

    “We’re in the middle of a battle we can’t win. Our only chance is to get the surrender of all Imperial soldiers here.” He opened his mouth to argue against my point, but I raise my hand, silencing him. “Lieutenant Monika, you will work beside Morne to command the two thousand remaining Frames. You will-“

    “Smash into the flanks of the Imperium’s Forces attacking our centre. Rout them, kill them, then reorganise the soldiers so we can beat the Imperium’s dogs from the left flank also.” Her face appears on the screen, a ruddy grin splitting her face, pleased to feel like we would make some progress.

    I nod, a small smile beneath my mask. “Very good, Lieutenant. But, interrupt me again, and I’ll have you imprisoned.” She nods, the communication ends.

    Myron’s eyes linger on my mask. I can see the gears work beneath his head, see how his mind processes everything I had commanded and whether or not he would do it. He must, it is our only hope and chance to win this damned battle. Please, Myron, succeed in this.

    He nods to me, and I release a sigh of relief. “Very good, all officers, to your stations, keep your units organised and everyone in coherent formations. We have jobs to do, see them done. Onward, to victory.”
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    Kaldratos - Chapter Four
    Kaldratos
    Chapter Four




    We enter in from the roof. We’re all equipped with cloakers. Every now and again I see faint flickers as my troops move around the room. Silent as death’s own spectre. Octavian throws up a jammer. There’s a low beep as it comes in, creating a small ten-meter bubble that stops all noise from getting out.

    Downstairs, Cassandra has the exits surrounded. I command a squad of twenty-five, Brandon controls another twenty-five, and Cassandra has command of the rest. Brandon will be entering from the ground floor, breaching silently as we are.

    I move towards the door and motion for a drone to be sent out. A tiny object, barely the size of a thumbnail, darts past me, a soldier watches the screen intently. Behind me, another man sets down a small block, and checked light spreads across the floor and up the walls. It would be spreading out across the building, taking note of all lifeforms. It would help us pinpoint the location of our enemies and soldiers to one another.

    The man with the drone looks up at me. He raises his hand, four fingers raised, then points to the room over from us. I nod. Faint flickers dart forwards. Three lifeforms fade, and like separate strands of smoke, my flickering soldiers return.

    Four less lifeforms in the building

    I look down at the cube, a detailed map of the building and all life within now stares back at me, updated every three seconds. The hostages are one floor down from me, and three up from Brandon and his squad. I send a coded order for him to clear out the lower level and prepare our escape.

    There are seven more on this floor, but then there are twenty-one hostiles on the next floor down with the hostages.

    I have Octavian divert with a few Deathtroopers and order him to clear this floor. I then make my way down the steps to the third floor. I see one of the Executors. The Executor wears grey armour, unembellished. No sigil, no markings, no unit sign. A completely blank canvas. The man laughs with someone to his left, their voices distorted by their helmets, their laughter amplified.

    It fills me with a certain kind of cold anger that these men would just sit and laugh while others lives hang in their balance. I walk down until I am right by the first man. Close enough that if he threw his arms out wide, he’d hit me in the chest. I grip my pulseblade in my hand, fully aware that if I start this prematurely, there was a good chance that Vespallian would die. My optics in my eyes shows me my unit fanning out. There wasn’t enough of us to kill them all in a single shot, now that Octavian was clearing upstairs. We had to prioritise. The hostage room was to be cleared first.

    When I receive confirmation that everyone is in position, I give the order. I leap forward, pulseblade swinging out. I cut the first man in half and stab the second through the throat before the first man’s body hits the floor. All around me I hear the piercing whines of boltors and pulserifles.

    Death screams in my ears.

    I hear a smash as one of the hostiles moves just as a Deathtrooper fire. The wall smoulders and crackles where the blast tore a hole through it. The Executor rolls, bringing his rifle up. He pulls the trigger. Bolts screech out, like paper tearing.

    My Deathtrooper stumbles backwards, his armour taking the first blow. His aegis glows iridescent blue, and then red, as it overloads. I hear a crackling sound as my soldier is torn apart by the bolts. Shredded. His blood boils on the ground as his mangled torso falls.

    Hostages wail.

    Crack. The sound echoes through the room as a rifle bucks and the man’s head jerks forward, a splash of red coating the wall and floor beside him.

    All hostiles dead.

    I deactivate the cloaker, as do the rest of my soldiers.

    I look towards the corpse of one my fallen soldier. Where his body isn’t torn apart, there are places where the metal fused with the flesh due to the heat. His body boiled from the inside.

    I drag my eyes away and head straight for the hostages. Desperately I search for Vespallian. Please don’t be harmed. Please. Please. Please.

    “Kaldratos!” The young boy leaps to his feet and runs for me. Men and women turn at my name, their eyes alight with hope. Even so, many cry as the stench of death and blood settles on the area. In my ear, I hear Octavian requesting leave to begin releasing the hostages.

    I cannot give that order,

    One of the Imperial Family had been captured. After the show of affection and the call of my name, the people here would pieced it together. They’d know, and Vespallian would be a laughing stock. I knew this, and Catherina knew this. You don’t come back from that, once men snigger about you behind your back, once you become a joke to the people, your rule is a fragile one. Short.

    Some of them realise this too, one woman cries, they can feel it in my own tension and self-loathing. The fact that I know what I will be ordered to do. The woman begs no one in particular. Another kneels before my soldiers, head bent forward, silently weeping as he realises that he will never see his children again.

    “Kaldratos,” Cassandra’s voice is soft. Her eyes are wide, her hands are shaking as she grabs my arm. I look down on her, and yet she looks to me with such hope.

    “A Black Order. No survivors. I received it just now.” She whispers, afraid that we’ll be overheard. Oblivious to the panic that already sweeps like a wave across the room.

    “Kaldratos!” Vespallian interrupts, grabbing at me. I give him my warmest smile and pick him up. I kiss his forehead, and dispatch a message to Genna, stating that her son is safe and will be with her shortly. I pass him to Cassandra.

    “Take him outside, and don’t let him back in.” She nods, but her arm lingers. She squeezes my arm, knowing I hate what I’m about to do. Her eyes say a thousand things.

    “There’s no way to cleanly kill a hundred people, Kaldratos.” Octavian reads my thoughts. I sigh and nod. His orders go out to my Deathtroopers. Almost immediately the hostages catch on. The mood changes abruptly. Panicked chattering turns to wails and begging. A few, select few, remain silent and unblemished by tears. Even faced with their deaths, they hold themselves strongly, comfortable that they are the epitome of society, and that the best do not weep, nor beg. Nobles to the end.

    I activate my pulseblade, the crimson point centimetres from touching the ground. Men and women scurry away from me. All around me, my retainers activate their weapons, my soldiers prime their rifles, preparing to kill innocents who do not deserve to die.

    “Black Order received,” I speak into my comm, the link goes back directly to Imperial High Command. “Black Order operation beginning.” I swing almost lazily, my blade carving through the closest hostage, My troops open fire, and Octavian lunges forward, stabbing a women through the chest, and then slicing off a child’s head as she cries into her mother’s arms. Her mother takes several pulsebolts to the spine a second later, ripping her body apart.

    Men and women and children cry out, begging changes to hysterical screaming as death approaches. There is no clean way to kill. There is no honourable way to kill. It is a bloody business.

    It is over quickly. Most aren’t even recognizable. The weapons used are meant to face soldiers and enemies in heavy armour, equipped to the teeth. It rips through civilians wearing silks.

    Octavian spits, Brandon looks horrified. None of us have ever had to do this before.

    None of us speak.

    “Black Order…. Completed.”

    I walk out, and Cassandra holds Vespallian by the hand. Behind her, a shuttle waits, nobody but a few Royal Guardsmen disguised as my House Guard. Catherina wants this quiet and locked down.

    Cassandra gives me a sorrowful look. I cannot fathom any sort of reply, so I just get on the shuttle. Octavian dismisses my Deathtroopers. Only one allied casualty. Statistically, this operation was almost a perfect success.

    Statistically.

    I am barely aware as the shuttle lifts off and makes its way towards the Summer Palace. Twice Octavian has to tap me so that I notice Vespallian trying to speak to me. He looks at me with concern written all over his face. He is kind. Far too kind.

    Everyone but Vespallian seeks solitude at this moment. Brandon and Cassandra sit on opposite ends of the ship, both wishing to be alone in their contemplation.

    Darkness swallows us from the viewports, and I know we’ve landed in one of the secret hangars that leads straight to the Summer Palace. The ramp lowers, and it reveals the entire Royal Family waiting there. Genna rushes forward, elated that her son has been returned safe and unharmed.

    “Thank you, Kaldratos.” It is the only balm to soothe the burn of anger I feel. I round on Catherina, and she gives me a look that stops me in my tracks. Not here.

    “You are dismissed,” Catherina talks to my Knights. They kneel, and then stride straight back to the shuttle. Her eyes meet mine, and there I realise there is a distance there. Not between us, but between her and her conscience.

    Everyone leaves, taking the cue that Catherina wishes to speak alone. She sighs, resting her hand against her pulseblade. Unlike her sister, Catherina wears full military uniform. She’s never been to war, but she knows the value of playing her part.

    “I’m sorry for that,” She shakes her head.

    “They were our own people, Catherina.” She looks up at my tone, an edge setting on her face.

    “No. I’m not sorry it was done. I’m sorry that you had to do it.” She releases, and starts walking away.

    “What? There were children in there, Catherina. They –“

    “You think I don’t know?” She lashes backwards, her anger a swift and deadly thing. “You don’t think I don’t know every single one of their names? It was necessary. I rule the Imperium. Weakness gets you killed.” Her anger slacks, and for a moment there is nothing but sorrow.

    “He never said it was like this,” She clutches at herself. “Father always said that it was a blessing.” She shakes her head and laughs to herself. “I live the most luxurious of lives. I am surrounded by people who would die for me, people who adore me and admire me for my family name. But never, in all my life, have I ever felt this alone.” I do not console her, she is not one who needs the assurances of others.

    In a single moment the self-doubt disappears and her façade returns. She gives me a tight smile, and turns away. “People die, I can’t save them all. I can’t even save most of them. It is my duty to see that the Imperium lives on. Whether a billion lives are lost, or even a trillion. If I stop to count all the corpses I’ve created, I wouldn’t be half done by the time I was dead.”

    She waits by the Elevator that will take us straight to the centre of her Palace estate. “I will do what must be done. Whatever is best for my nation. Personal feelings must be put aside.” When I reach her, I can see she is shaking. I don’t mention it.

    “You know, we’re going to have to kill a lot of people.” She nods at my words, “We don’t know who attacked Vespallian. But the Executors didn’t seem to know who he was, which would hint that whoever did this didn’t want him dead, they just wanted a message sent.” She clicks her jaw, working it as she thinks through it all.

    “Cersey knew, didn’t he? There isn’t a reason for us to trust him when he states that he isn’t our enemy.” She laughs to herself, “No. He’s far too intelligent to reveal that to you if that was going to get him killed. He’ll be clean. Or at least it’ll appear that way.” She leans against the wall as the doors close and the ascent begins. “Maybe he’ll have to die anyway. He’s dangerous, whether he is our enemy or our ally.”

    She shakes her head, leaving that problem for another time. “There will be a Council of Lords because of this. The news will spread. Those people will have died for nothing. The Resistance will be blamed as a front, and millions will die.” There is a tremor of anger in her voice. She is Empress, she has the power to annihilate planets, but she cannot stop this political manoeuvring.

    The doors open and the beauty of the Rosal Gardens looks on us. Two lines of gold stand to attention on either side of us, the Royal Guardsmen saluting their Empress. Behind them spread a flurry of cherry blossoms and waterfalls, manipulated so that they create different shapes and intertwine before the water falls to the surface. Obsidian and golden pillars weave around the gardens. Upon the edges of the path, weird and wonderful creatures sit and stand. A mermaid with a tail made completely of silver, destined to forever sit upon the edge of her pool, never being able to swim. Behind her, others swim, tails woven of the thinnest of gold. Grotesque amongst beauty. Opposite her sits a lion with ambers for eyes. Its body is shaped like a large eagle, with the feathers different shades of purple and blue.

    At the end of the pathway, half a dozen of my brothers-and-sisters-in-arms stand. Six of the First Knights Royal, waiting to escort Her Majesty.

    Catherina does not turn back to look at me as she strides forward, but I see the anger in her step. The anger that stems from having so much power, but being unable to wield it in ways which she wants.

    I trail after her, stepping beside her as is my place. I do not know what will come, but I know that death will follow in its wake.

    Brother.
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    Eleusis - Chapter Five
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    Chapter Five



    My troops march through the streets of Ravnall. The infantry parade in the centre, while the Frames line the flanks. The civilians of Ravnall watch us with fear glistened eyes, many try to lock us out. Shutters are closed, doors barred and sealed, and yet still children find ways to lean out and watch as my soldiers march victorious through their hovels called homes.

    I watch it all from the roof of one of the towers. I have no interest in parading with the soldiers, I am not one for avid celebration or extravagance, it matters little to me.

    Ravnall is a city of spears piercing the heavens. Skyscrapers and towers rising kilometres high. The wealthiest live in the fine tips of these spears, while the lowest members of society live on the bottom. The wealth disparity between the people at the top, and those at the bottom, is comprehendible.

    They probably have enough resources to feed these poor souls for their entire lives if they truly wanted to. Will it be any better now that we’re here?

    “Lieutenant Myron is the hero of this victory, at least in the eyes of the men.” Commandant Galvian muses. “Our own contributions to this victory will have been forgotten.” I feel his deep blue eyes drill into my head. The man does not overly care that he was memorised in the history books, merely that the part he had played was remembered.

    “Commandant Myron,” I correct him, “After what he accomplished, he will replace Vixiua as the Commandant of the First Unit. And, yes, you are correct, nobody will remember how you stoically held the line against all odds. Nor how Monika managed to rally an entire army and crush the centre of the Imperium’s forces. Nobody will speak of how our soldiers bled and died within the forests and snow, how we held out against those who should have eradicated us. They will tell of how Myron took an entire planet with merely a thousand Frames.”

    “They won’t mention that it was your idea, either.” Galvian nods to me. I have decided that I like the man, he seems the good sort, the type that wouldn’t obey an order simply because I had commanded him to. If I can win him, then I can win them all. Loyalty. Loyalty and blood, that is how this war will be won.

    “No, but that isn’t the point. I don’t care what the histories say of me right now. In the end, Myron will be a Commandant, and I will rule the stars. A fair trade, I say.”

    Commandant Tarvitz shakes her head, concerned at my words. “Do you mean that you will someday rule the Universal Collective?”

    “That’s not a very high bar,” I tell her. I laugh at her angered face. “Not yet. Not unless High Lady Randera believes I am worthy to hold the mantle of leadership.” She does not look convinced. She doesn’t like me.

    “What do we do now?” Commandant Alvarine asks. The man is a brutal and hardened warrior. A scar crosses from his earlobe across his cheek, ending just below his lips. It makes his face taut, frightening.

    “If you want to be like the soldiers, revel in this victory. Enjoy the fact that we have done the impossible.” I shake my head and turn back to the three. “Or, as you like, we could begin discussions of what do when the Imperium’s fleet arrives.”

    “Surely that can wait, General?” Tarvitz asks, “Our soldiers won this day with their blood. And they want it returned in kind. They are baying for the blood of that Noble family here, the Governors of Tythandor.”

    Galvian, for his part, looks unimpressed at Tarvitz, and nods to me. An eager gleam in his eyes. Curious at what I would do.

    My stomach sinks as I realise that I have a choice to make here. A choice that could lose me the war, if I show leniency to the Noble Family of Tythandor, then my soldiers would see me as weak, as a fool and as an Imperial sympathizer. If only they knew the truthA laugh nearly escapes me.

    My mind searches; the Planet of Tythandor had once been ruled by House Maverllin, an influential House of the Lower Nobility, until they joined in Lacaius’s war and the entire family was massacred by my father. But, afterwards, who…?

    “Olvin,” I mutter, “That Noble Family is House Olvin, a Patrician Family, mostly filled of traders and bankers. They rose to power after the destruction of the Maverllin family.” Both Galvian and Tarvitz look at me in surprise, shocked by my knowledge of Imperial hierarchy and their Houses.

    “How can I expect to win this damned war if I don’t know the foe I am facing?” I dismiss their shock and walk towards the elevator, where my Guard is assembled. “Come, I have a family to end.” I grimace beneath my mask as I pray for a way to keep this House alive, to help their name live on.

    ………………………………………………………


    When the four of us approach the building, the crowd parts like the seas. Each and every man and woman stands to attention as I near Hope, hope and a taste of the blood to come. That is what I have given these merciless killers. On the other side awaits an aged man with his son and daughter at his side. Awaiting behind them are two dozen menacing looking Guards. All unarmed. They wear coats of gold and red, with a golden oak pin upon their breasts.

    “General Hannibal,” The old man bends down as low as he can, and his children bend considerably lower. “It is an honour to surrender my planet to you, good Sir.”

    I look at them, all three of them look resplendent. The father wears a robe of patterned gold and red, matched with black and white, contrasts of light and dark, a gorgeous mixture. The son, to the man’s right, wears a black army coat, that stops just below his waist. He wears dress pants and military boots, and a ceremonial sabre rests above his thigh, in place of where a pulseblade should be. The woman is dressed in a gown of violet and ivory, with long streaks flowing down the gown, radiating off in shimmering lights.

    Each of them holds themselves with more honour and decorum in defeat than any one of my soldiers in victory. Despite being on opposite sides now, I feel a lightning shock of pride for my home-people. How they stand so strong and worthy, even in defeat.

    “Good evening, Governor Olvin. Shall we go inside and discuss the terms?” I clasp the old man’s hands in mine. His relieved eyes meet the emotionless gaze of my mask and falter. He flinches, unused to having no idea as to who his opponent is.

    He nods to me, and his son and daughter lead the way to the entranceway. I pass by grand columns, topped with glorious capitals of angels striking with golden spears, and a frieze running along the architrave, depicting old heroes of the Imperium wearing the armour of Nobles. It is painted gold and blue, and the frieze has each figure holding miniscule spears or swords, the women are adorned in beautiful emeralds and rubies.

    Destroying that and melting it down could likely pay for an entirely new armyI only consider it for a moment before I walk onward, I cannot bring myself to obliterate the history of my ancestors, not even when I am against them. My brother is dead; my father is dead. The only one who remains is Lelliana, and she fights the same war as I, she understands. Even if the dead will not.

    When we enter the extravagant Palace, I am met by Myron and half a dozen guardsmen, all wearing polished silver uniforms. “General,” he salutes me, alongside his soldiers. I nod to him, and his men form around me. This is his honour, as the hero of the battle.

    The Palace’s interior is lucratively decorated, Romantic paintings adorn the sky-blue walls. A central staircase forks off at the top, turning around and climbing higher until it meets the last level of the Palace. I walk up the stairs, my army boots stomps muffled by the velvet strip of rug that flows down them.

    “Take me to his private chambers,” I command. Myron glances to one of the soldiers, and the man sets off up the left side of the staircase. We follow along, the aged and frail man lumbering behind me. His children flank his steps, their eyes doing their best to bear holes in my head.

    The chambers are noticeably more conservative than the rest of the palace. However, it still holds all the luxuries of power. I see a study to my left, stacked high with papers. It gives the air of an administrator, someone who cares for the running of his planet.

    But opposite that sets a pleasure chamber, with a large heated pool in the centre. Marble flooring adorned with flecks of gold and crushed jewels.

    I wander around.

    A massage parlour branches off from the pleasure chamber, and then I find a sauna, and then another pool. Columns ring the second pool, and lilies dance in the centre, blooming orange. Beside the pleasure chamber, a second corridor banks off, leading to a heavy scented room. Servants scurry away from me as I enter, men and women alike, all barely clad in anything at all.

    None of the servants speak, they simply run away. They know not to talk unless spoken to.

    The whole sight makes me sick. Is this the type of life that would have ensnared me if I had stayed? Would I have been like this man, this family?

    “We’ll have this set up as your chambers immediately, General.” Myron salutes once more and two of the soldiers leave. I have half a mind to beg him not to.

    Daughter and son share a knowing glance.

    “Regalia won’t help you two kill me,” I nod to them. The daughter regains her composure the quickest, merely shaking her head and staying silent. The brother opens his mouth to speak, but a pale hand grabs his wrist and clutches tightly.

    Regalia. A mixture of social manners and deadly martial arts. It encompasses everything from how to interact at a feast, to how to kill someone with a single swish of your hand. How to target the vitals, the pressure points. From diplomacy to violence.

    Or, more over, all diplomacy. Some using words and body language, others using hands, legs, knees and your head.

    The old man’s watery blue eyes beg a silent plea for his family. I raise my chin, the only acknowledgement I am willing to give.

    “Time to discuss the treaty.” I clap my hands together, and the three Nobles step back, fear shooting across their pristine faces. The father looks to me, his deep eyes searching for some sort of mercy. All he sees is his own reflection. Weakness. Weakness and lust and greed. You old fool.

    “Your planet is now under the sovereignty of the Universal Collective of Allied Planets and Systems. I will meet with administrators and a few selected people today to create a body of leaders who will represent the planet of Tythandor in the High Command Assembly. You will be stripped of all ranks, your armies and men will disarm and submit themselves to Universal Collective Law, should any disobey, decimation will be enacted and one in ten will be executed by bludgeoning.” The father shivers in revulsion at that idea, but he nods, accepting my terms.

    “Before you say anything else, General.” The former Governor tries to hold himself strong, but his age and weakness do not go well with having his planet stolen from him. His body trembles.

    “A body of citizens approached us this morning and asked if, in the event of a defeat, they could be transported from Tythandor as refugees.”

    “We would need them for the workforce…” I kill my objection. I nod, “Very well, I will give my consent on the matter, and will provide transports should there not be enough.”

    “A few more things: The Imperial Captain who fought against us today, I want him brought to me.” The Governor opens his mouth, but his son beats him to it.

    “His name is Quillian Velhk,” he motions to one of the unarmed soldiers behind him. The man steps forward and takes off his military cap. He looks to be barely thirty, but has thinning light-brown hair makes me think of cellular rejuvenation.

    “Seize him, I’ll speak with him later.” My guardsmen clasp the man and force him from the room.

    “Now, there is one last thing I will need of you.” I bow my head, questioning how to break the news to the Family.

    “Our lives,” the old man croaks out.

    “Just yours, actually. Your children can live.” I hear one of my Guards suck in his breath. My skin chills as I feel the anger radiating from him.

    “We should-“

    “Silence,” I cut off the man who speaks.

    I wait for them all to quiet down, Myron removes another soldier, leaving me with he and one other in the room. The daughter glances my way, I turn to her, my hand resting upon my chest. I tap it once, to let her know of the armour beneath it.

    I walk towards her, leaving my small party on the opposite side of the room.

    “I have given you and your brother your lives, so that your heritage and family history is not extinguished. Strike at me, and I will not show mercy.” The daughter’s eyes are afire, burning with the same vengeance that Lelliana’s had the day we were forced to flee. She does not look away from me, but she does step back, signifying her compliance.

    I walk back, not willing to turn my back to the girl. Judging by her age, I know she’d easily have the skill to send a dagger flying into the back of my spine, or to slice through the tendons of my legs. All these Nobles are dangerous, even when they look submissive and soft, all of them are trained to kill.

    “Thank you,” I hear the old man whisper. His eyes brimming with tears. I watch as his daughter, so rough before, breaks. She clutches at her father, wiping away his tears. She stops, realising she is showing such weakness in front of her enemy. I nod apologetically to the man.

    “Commandant Myron,” I command, extending my right arm, raising to point at the family. “Seize him, he will be executed an hour past dawn tomorrow.” As he seizes Governor Olvin, his daughter snarls. Feral and wicked, a promise of violence. Her brother gently pulls her away. He offers me a slight tilt of the head, recognising that I could have had them all killed.

    Even so, the woman’s hatred is bitter and clear. Her eyes tear the mask from my face, demanding to know who has the audacity and cruelty to sentence her father to death.

    One of you. A Noble, someone who should be standing beside you and aiding you, that is the monster who is going to kill your father.

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    Just seen this Tig, looking forward to giving it a read! Looks like you've got a good story and detailed world on the go.
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    I enjoyed chapter 1, Eleusis Vixiua is a bold commander and an interesting character. My only concern is that chapters are appearing so quickly that readers might not be able to keep up.

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    Thank you both for the kind words!

    For Alwyn: you make a valid point, and the updating schedule will likely change to once every week, or once every two weeks, due to school.

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    I'm back all! The story so far has progressed to Chapter Ten, so I am still a fair way ahead of updating, which is nice.

    Due to the occurrence of school, I will be updating this once every two weeks. Which, will give me enough time to write new chapters even with school, and will give the readers enough time to read without being swamped. The new schedule will be Monday every two weeks. So, next Monday I will update

    Hope this doesn't inconvenience or disappoint anyone.

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    Here's Chapter Six!



    Kaldratos - Chapter Six
    Kaldratos
    Chapter Six





    A crowd of bickering crows yells around me. Catherina sits to my left, her head leaning against her fist. Her eyes and ears miss nothing. Seven times she has interjected in the bickering, ending a discussion with a sentence, or merely a steeled gaze.

    The Council hall is filled with the Upper Nobility, or close family members who are here to represent the heads of their Houses. I represent myself, but as Champion of Her Majesty, I have no say in political discussions, I merely follow the prerogative and command of Catherina.

    “Whether the Resistance is responsible or not, we need to put them down! You don’t let a rabid dog keep on living. You put a bolt through its head. Best for you, and for it.” Lord Mandwain beseeches to the Council. Lord Cersey rebukes him with a scornful laugh, having only just entered the hall.

    “Oh, Claudian. If only you were half as intelligent as your wife, you’d see things in a much different light.” He gives a wink and takes his place. “No. The Resistance is not to blame here, and even so, striking at them now gains us nothing.” He leans back against his buffered chair, his daughter seating herself beside him.

    They are all that are left. House Cersey had once been a large house, yet now all that remained of them was Lord Cersey and his heir, Lady Rebekah Cersey. He glances my way, “The true concern should be for the safety of Her Majesty and of Prince Vespallian.” His eyes meet mine. “We need assurances, Champion, that the Royal Family is being protected to the best of your ability.”

    Catherina rises from her seat, her left-hand glides, indicating for me to be silent. “How very gracious, Lord Sovereign of Heraea. However, my safety and the safety of the Royal Family is of no concern to you or yours.” A smile flickers across his face at that, he snatches a glass of champagne from a waiter who comes hovering by.

    “Your Majesty, with the utmost of respect. It is indeed my concern.” His daughter squeezes his arm. “Prince Vespallian was attacked. His life was in danger. Where were the First Knights Royal? If it were not for the quick intervention of His Highness Kaldratos, what would have become of the heir to our Imperium?”

    “Our?” Catherina’s tone is dangerous. Around her, the First Knights Royal place their hands on their blades. Prepared to strike at the slightest provocation.

    “Ours,” He nods. “Your Majesty, may your rule be eternal and bright. The Imperium is ruled by you, but we are its foundations.” He waves around to the Nobles in the hall. A few nod in agreement, the members of House Cavantale noticeably. However, there are many others who look on Cersey with venomous eyes. Claudian Manderwain is one such man.

    I kick off from my place, my jetboots having me soar through the hall. I land gently a few meters before Cersey. His eyes never leave Catherina, but his daughter, places a hand upon her pulseblade. She looks up at me with almond coloured eyes. Were she anything other than a Noble, one would think her innocent, sweet, just by the look of her. But she is a killer. Like me.

    Cersey’s eyes land on me with such gravity that I stop moving towards him. “Lord Vixiua,” His smile is brief. “Do you believe that she would rule without us beside her? Without us unified behind her?” He gives away nothing, yet the very question he asks begs for death. “Killing innocent people to appease a few is a poor strategy, and a poor way of keeping a crown. The true threat is not the Resistance, but the ones who knew about the Crown Prince’s movements.” He stands from his seat, and his daughter stands beside him, purposefully blocking my path to her father.

    “Remove yourself, girl!” Someone yells from behind me. She does not flinch. Her eyes stay fixated on me, daring me to move against her father. Daring me to cut her down and cause a civil war that would tear the Imperium apart, just when we need unity the most.

    Cersey brushes his coat and fixes me with a smile. Deep down, I know that he is not an evil man. Dangerous, but not evil. Over the short time I have known him, he has been an ally, and an enemy. But he has always stood for what is good, in his own way.

    He seats himself, and his daughter follows suit. His point has been made. The incident is forgotten almost as quickly as it begun. The lords and ladies return to their argument, and Calliar Cersey watches all; judging all, knowing the depths of each and every person in the room.

    In the end, there is a unified stance. Annihilate the Resistance. Blame the Resistance and use this as an opportunity to eliminate an opponent, while focusing on who is truly behind the attack. Lord Manderwain leads the coalition that makes this demand. Cersey is vehemently against it. All pretense and games gone from his voice as he pleads with Catherina to see reason.

    “Slaughtering millions of people? This is how you answer to an attack, that couldn’t even have possibly involved them?” He waves around. His few supporters steadfast with his approach.

    “Oh do shut up, Calliar.” Lady Bellarae coos from her own seat. “If the Resistance had such resources, they’d undoubtedly use them.” She waves a hand dismissively. “We should have rid ourselves of those rats months ago. Now we have a chance. After Capitallium is truly secure, we can focus all attentions upon catching the ones truly responsible.”

    Cersey’s laugh is bitter and twisted, and a blackness settles over the room as he draws himself up. He is not a tall man, but he commands authority and attracts the gaze with his very presence, his aura of command. “We are The Nobility! Our Ancestors bled and fought and died for this? For us to act as barbaric animals who will slaughter indiscriminately? I am Calliar Cersey, of the gens Cersey, my House stretches back seven millennia. It was my family who crowned the first Emperor. I will not sit here and allow the Impeirum to degrade itself by falling into barbarism. I will share no part in it.” He moves to leave. Demodocus, the Vampire Knight, moves to intercept him, but Catherina waves him down, allowing Cersey to go.

    Despite her disagreements with the man, I know that she secretly agrees with him, even if she cannot openly, or ever, admit so. Catherina rises from her throne, and all the Lords seat themselves as she does so. All watch her.

    “I see merit to both sides. On the one hand, this is a key opportunity, and on the other, millions of innocent people will die in the attempt to eradicate the Resistance. However, in this case, the need to eliminate a foe outweighs the lives of those whom are innocent. Lord Sovereign Kaldratos Vixiua of Saldeth, Lord of House Vixiua, and mine own Champion, will lead the units to destroy the Resistance, once and for all.” I kneel, and she places her hand upon my head. “Furthermore, this council’s discussions of warfare and of our true enemies has enlightened me. Lord Vixiua will lead his Invictus fleet against the rebellious fools calling themselves the Universal Collective. After the immediate threat of the Resistance has been dealt with.”

    I try to hide my surprise. Even so, my fist clenches as I control myself. I am not afraid for myself, but for Catherina and Vespallian. But I know if anyone can protect themselves, it is Catherina.

    There are no cheers of approval, this is not a crowd which Catherina must toy with, using sweet words and lavishing them with exaggerations of our grandeur. Everyone here knows what this means. Many Nobles merely nod at the decree. A few frown, wondering how Her Majesty is to be kept safe if I am gone leading invasions of planets. It shows how little they know her.

    “My Lords and Ladies, I appreciate your support in this dire event. You are permitted to return to your duties now.” She seats herself back upon her throne as the attendees bow and stroll away. It is all politics, men and women showing their position through the extent of their respect. Bowing deeply means respect, but bowing too deeply is an insult, a curt bow is as close as one can go to disrespecting the Empress.

    When they had all departed, Catherina gets up, refusing to meet my gaze as she stalks forward. “A few of the Nobles petitioned me to send you away. You are the Imperium’s greatest warrior, and so your skills should be utilised in the field of battle.” I open my mouth to speak, but she holds up a hand. “I am not the Imperium. I am Empress. If I die, there will be someone else to take my place, Vespallian.” She lifts her head up, the indecision swept away in a matter of moments.

    “I have already said that I will do what is necessary over what is right. If that means sending you to win us this war, then so be it. No matter how much I may hate it,” her voice softens, but her face remains impassive. “I am Empress. I will do what must be done.”


    I follow, and we stride away from all the faces, from the rest of the First Knights Royal.

    “Is this the ruler you want to be?” I question, “You realise that you’ve just taken orders from your lords? That you have allowed them to force you into this position?” She does not turn. “Catherina?”

    “What do you want me to say, Kaldratos? Of course I know. But Calliar is right. They are my foundation.” I have to quicken my pace to keep up with her. “I need them,” She storms through the doors to her outer chambers, breaking through the doors until she reaches the balcony. She breaths deeply, taking in the freshness of the outside world. In her view; the Summer Palace blossoms around her, it’s beauty incomparable. I see her eyes dart below, to where her people live and work until they die. Below us, like the bristles of a porcupine, skyscrapers kilometres high and kilometres wide strike towards the sky. The lower you go, the worse the conditions get, until you reach the very bottom. I can feel the weight of their lives on her now, and know that everything she does is for them; for the hope that she can lead them to a better future.

    She leans against the railing, her hair falling forward as her head lulls down. She is shaking, but with anger or sadness I do not know.

    Once again I am struck with the incredible strength of this woman in front of me. Her father was lax in his teaching of her, he always thought he would have more time. Yet here she is, ruling with all the strength that she has, doing all she can.

    “My father was weak,” She whispers. She straightens herself, tugging on her shirt and twirling the edge of it in her fingers. “A good man, a lovely father. But a weak Emperor. Your father, he was strong. Everyone talked about him, even when I was younger. The great Magnus Vixiua, the one who proved his worth during the ArenGarla Folly, at the age of eight.” She turned back to me, but could not meet my eyes. “What will they say of us when we are dead? The Champion who broke the largest Rebellion in our history? An Empress her brought her people from suffering? Or will they tell of how we failed?”

    I stay silent, now is not my place to speak. Her eyes dart this way and that, as her mind works through every option, every choice and variable and decision.

    She stops.

    “So many things are out of my control, so many things could go wrong. I could be killed tomorrow, or you could die fighting. I have Armadas so vast I can eradicate systems. I have Legions of men and women who would die for me without hesitation, and yet I cannot protect those I love.” She looks to me, for some answer, some reply, some form of assurance.

    But I cannot give her any. I have seen too many people die; I have watched my own father die, felt as my brother was stricken away from me to be killed by rebels. I do not have much happiness left.

    “Go,” She shakes her head, sighing to herself. “Your Empress commanded you to destroy the Resistance. See it done, eliminate them. Then rid me of my enemies so I can finally rest in peace at night.”

    I kneel, my head bowed forwards, my right hand crossed over my knee. Her hand rests upon my head, and then it is gone. I rise, and stride away, intent on fulfilling Her Majesty’s command.

    “Kaldratos,” She calls after me, “don’t die. Please.”

    “Yes, Your Majesty.” I walk to the door of the chambers, and press my hand against it. A small grating sound replies to me, signalling it has been locked down. What the hell?

    “Catherina!” I immediately turn to the defensive. I rush back and grab her, my eyes scanning for any opponent or threat. The lights flicker for a moment, and then they deactivate.

    The backup generator comes on immediately, and it as if nothing has happened. Except over Catherina’s shoulder is a cloaked figure rushing toward her.

    I shove her down and extend my hand outwards. My weapons react to my commands, and from my wrist shoots a short blade on a steel cord. I whip the hand to the side and the blade catches the man in the side of the head before it returns to me.

    Her Majesty has her pulseblade out and activated and now stands beside me. A determined look enters her eyes as it dawns on her that a misstep here could mean both our lives.

    I hear the whisper of a footstep behind me and turn, ready to kill. My enemy raises his own hand, and I’m thrown backwards as a Gravityfist hits me.. I strike the wall. I feel a sharp pain through my back as I crumple to the ground. Catherina calls out and rushes to my side. I try to rise, but a second later a shock ripples through my body. I try to talk, but a gurgle is the only thing that escapes my lips.

    Her eyes scream of worry, yet she reacts like a true soldier. She readies herself for battle, pulseblade readied in an offensive posture. She glances back at me, and her body shifts to one of a defensive stance. As I can see, there are two enemies, one on either side. She is unwilling to leave me undefended and gain the advantage in positioning.

    This simple symbol of affection would normally make me glad. But my mind slows to a crawl as I envision her body, bloody and lifeless, all because she wished to protect me. My body convulses, and more gurgling comes out as I try to tell her to get away. To leave me and get out!

    She doesn’t answer my silent wish, and instead stands firm. The enemy from the left readies a metal blade. Whether it is a he or a she I cannot tell, but they hold the weapon with familiarity and the knowledge that it can hold against a pulseblade.

    A laugh that grates like gravel erupts from the one on the left. Distorted by a mask, it sounds twisted, horrific. The voice laughs at it strikes forward, blade aiming for my chest.

    A purple blade meets it and throws it to the side. Three swift jabs and the enemy has retreated. Catherina ducks backwards, striking at the enemy from the right, while trying to keep the laughing bastard in her sights. The man breaks off his attack and goes for me, aiming for an arm, meaning to cleave it off. She lunges forwards, forcing the man to end his attack as she slices through his side. I see her react to the blow she knows is coming, and her body twists. But the laughing enemy cuts through her uniform and leaves a bloody gash on her shoulder.

    She steps away, naturally trying to create distance between herself and her opponents. Her eyes widen as she realises what she’s done. A wordless shout comes from her as the laughing fool stabs his sword through my leg, twisting as he laughs.

    I can’t feel the pain; my body has locked down due to the shocking that’s erupting through me. But I see as Catherina’s fury rains down on him, she strikes with abandon, rage driving her forward. I can’t cry out as I see the man coming up behind her.

    He grabs the back of her head and slams her against the wall. The blade drops in surprise. He smashes her against the pillar once more. A muffled scream reaches my ears. Twice. Silence. Three times.

    He pulls his hand back for a fourth, and I surge upwards. Blinding pain shoots through me as my leg nearly fails, but my pulseblade moves on its own accord. I slice downwards, and then twist, striking to the side. I cleave through his arm from the elbow down, and then carve his body in half. His two halves fall to the ground as blood flows at my feet.

    The laughter has stopped now. My enemy looks at me, head cocked to the side. It raises its hand again, but I duck to the side and slash wildly, my blade glances the hand. It pulls its hand back and readies its blade, but I stab through the throat. I hear an animalistic growl as I plunge my blade through the bastard who had attacked us. I realise it comes from my own mouth, deep within my throat as my fear and anger mix into one.

    My enemies are dead. I fall, my stabbed leg failing me now that adrenaline no longer pushes me onward. I drag myself to Catherina, and a sob wells in my throat as I see her broken face. Her nose is shattered, blood covers her face from her caved in skull.

    I cradle her body, holding her against me.

    “Catherina…”

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    Default Re: Universal Dynasty - Dusk of the Old - Updated 06/01/2017

    Looking forward to your next update, whenever your RL commitments make it possible.

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    Thanks Alwyn I've written up to Chapter Ten already, so barring any horrible incident, the update schedule should stay on track for every two weeks on a Monday.

    It has been updated! I hope you all enjoy!

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    Chapter Six is done well, particularly Myron's outburst against Hannibal and Hannibal's dialogue with Moore. Hannibal's losses are horrific, this reminds me of First World War battles and explains what Myron said.

    I wonder if the outcome of the next phase of the battle will be different, with the Admiral leading the attack personally. Perhaps the one-sided outcome of the first battle was because of the ferocious storm and the fact that the surface of Haren is mostly water, or is the commander of the defending force a brilliant leader (or both, or is there a different explanation)?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Alwyn View Post
    Chapter Six is done well, particularly Myron's outburst against Hannibal and Hannibal's dialogue with Moore. Hannibal's losses are horrific, this reminds me of First World War battles and explains what Myron said.

    I wonder if the outcome of the next phase of the battle will be different, with the Admiral leading the attack personally. Perhaps the one-sided outcome of the first battle was because of the ferocious storm and the fact that the surface of Haren is mostly water, or is the commander of the defending force a brilliant leader (or both, or is there a different explanation)?

    There is still time for everyone to submit nominations for the Writers' Study Yearly Awards 2016. Also, everyone is invited to vote for your favourite story in the MCWC XIV.
    Thank you for the support, Alwyn! Do you have any suggestions for improvements? Any messing up with tenses? Lack of descriptions? Anything you've noticed?



    I have written a Prologue now, and will update the first post with it. I realise its a bit late, but I decided that a Prologue was needed, just to explain a few things. Will post it tomorrow.




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    Default Re: Universal Dynasty - Dusk of the Old - Updated 23/01/2017

    Hi, Tigellinus!

    Sorry - it's taken me far too long to get round to commenting on this.

    Since you've asked Alwyn for specific comments, I'll stick my nose in and have another look through (probably not today) and see if I can spot any of the things you've asked about.

    I, too, particularly like Chapter Six. It's good to see that Hannibal isn't completely unbeatable, and also good to see people challenging his "kill everybody, even if they're on our side or civilians" approach to warfare. It's all very dramatic!






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