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    This will as the name implies be the bloody tale of the orc Malthur. He lives in Mordor in the Third Age mod with the Massive Overhaul Submod 1.6.1 + all the other changes I have made privately to my own installation. They are mainly new unit cards and unit statistics, and of course the portrait of the protagonist.

    MOS is a compilation of a lot of submods which has gone on for quite some time now. It is rich in scripting but also offers the player the option to use or not use many of the features which I personally find very commendable.

    Campaign and Battle difficulty is set to Very Hard.

    Happy Reading!
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    Chapter I. The rise of a chieftain

    Gorgoroth. What a snotfilled sack of snagas maggot eaten heads of a pile of troll dirt that left you here in charge of this no good pack of slugs of a pathetic excuse for even the weakest of builders! The Uruk overseer kicked a nearby black stone in frustration. Nearby the stunted working orcs toiled with picks and shovels to keep the road between Barad Dur and the great mountain clear of the ash and stone that the mountain regularly would throw out in rumbling heaps of fire. The work never ended and never lightened.

    The uruk angrily drew out his sword on a whim. Like that was of any use here! Why did he even carry sword and shield around any more? His dagger was enough to cut the dusty filth of maggot eaten grey gravel that went for bread in these parts and whatever scraps of leathery meat that might be found after the regular troops had had their share. Now, that would be the place to be posted, one of the great fortresses perhaps, or the towns and outposts south around the lake Nurnen where the great rows of supply wagons of food came from. Or maybe join a raiding party and see some of the outside loot and enjoy fresh meat for a change. He suddenly knelt down and rammed the blade deep into the ground. There! There it could stay for all time for all he cared! And if any of those useless maggots would even think about standing up to him he would tear its arm of and beat it to a pulp with it! He needed no sword to keep those wretches in line!

    He looked up as he thought of them. One could never leave the lot unwatched for long, always some new mischief brewing as soon as you turned your back on them. If it wasn't some new way of loitering or sneaking off from the digging it was gossiping like aged humans from the south. And if anyone higher up would hear a whisper of that it would be short work to find the responsible overseer to blame. And this latest talk, then! Minas Morgul itself, assaulted by those accursed Gondorians! Stormed, some said. Under siege, according to others. No, the Nazghul drove the enemy away. No, they fell into an ambush. No the Gondorians had all gone mad from the foul sorcery of the town. Damn it! It was hard enough to find trustworthy information even for him.

    Apparently some filth of a captain named Himdir had fought his way to the fortress of a city and for some reason he could not fathom it was defended by a rabble of stinking rats with just about only the general and a company of the city's armored spearmen being properly equipped.



    Minas Morgul lies deep in the dark vale that leads to the pass above it, the smaller entrance to Mordor with the hag of a spider lurking in the tunnels below. The fortress itself is high and mighty enough but offers not too much in the way of defenses for a small force.



    Ufluk, the talentless scum, retreated to the inner walls almost as soon as the enemy showed their snouts near the gate. Probably saved his hide. He had two banners of the little archer scouts that plague the land like some vermin someone has yet to step on, and these were sent to the walls to hold their positions and support the boys down in the yard.



    They soon had a lot to busy themselves with as our fine guests from across the river hurried inside. Mostly motley levy but also some stinking regulars from Pelargir or whatever other places their damned fleet uses as the home base. Burned like anyone else, though.



    Believe it or not, the little buggers even managed to rout a couple of sallies to the wall with their flaming arrows. Only good thing coming from serving under the gaze of that chilling tower that looks over the whole place.



    While our boys inside busied themselves with the growing attacks the tardy reinforcements from Cirth Ungol were marching downhill to make themselves useful. The road runs around the whole city and then to the causeway to the front gate so they sure took their time getting there. The Gondorians sent a pitiful weakened cavalry banner against them but that was too little to stop even that ragged bunch.



    While the pressure was building in the courtyard the archers had more fun with the occasional militia trying their luck on the rooftop. Why the enemy sent such badly equipped weaklings to do something that important beat him. Can't have valued their skins too much at least. Not even much of a distraction.



    Now, these armoured spearmen were the best troops Ufluk had, good uruks with some fancy black plating. It's said that number one himself set up the regiment, as a mockery of the human elite that guarded the fortress ages ago. Ain't that petty? Whatever they are supposed to mimic, these boys held their position for the whole battle and let the archers cut down and rout enemies in droves with their arrows around them.



    In the end, there were just about a dozen left, huddling together with their shields up and spears out. Now, that's true fighting spirit! And equally bad generalship.



    Now, however they managed it, our reinforcements did at last arrive and pushed their way through the shaky remnants of militia on the causeway that had spent themselves running from our arrows inside, and then pushed in through the gate.



    Last to fall were some accursed elite archers with biting great swords too, and the spear hurling infantry from the Pelargir fleet. Both being infamous for their troublemaking.



    How could this happen, then? Because the black land had borders without any sort of scouting nowadays, worse than in many years but at least before the enemy stayed away from Mordor since the big ones kept low. No longer. And that filthy river was offering them free transportation because those lazy sods of the south, that treacherous cowardly pirate scum of Umbar, just sat in their harbours eating figs or raiding fishermen further south. Little help did one have from the likes of them! Ancient Gondorian descendants they were, too, many of them...

    If anyone more competent made the call the land would be swept clean of these rebels and troublemakers, Minas Tirith sacked and the corsairs put firmly in line. Someone sensible of the ever vigilant Uruks, yes why not Malthur himself? And here he was, wasting away overseeing the road leading up to that dusty old cave in the fire mountain and patrolling the road between here and Barad Dur! He turned angrily away from looking up towards the mountain top...and immediately tripped on the sword hilt now firmly lodged in the ground. The cursing and swearing echoed far and away.

    Still, an idea was beginning to take shape in Malthurs head. A blurry and unfinished one but growing clearer each moment. Outward security measures were not the only one being insufficient these days. Perhaps the inner ones might be bent a little as well, for the greater glory of Mordor of course.





    Two days later an opportunity presented itself. As always, the road was frequently travelled and one smaller war party of whipped scouts with a whipping commander soon came running into view. Malthur hurried down to halt the newcomers.

    "Hold up there!"

    The leading orc put up his fist and the trail of panting smaller orcs stopped, breathing heavily and only welcoming any moment of rest.

    "What's the meaning of this!?"

    "I was going to ask the same! What's your name and number?"

    "I am Ugdush! Commanding the third banner of the second regiment of Seregost! Heading for Durthang. And who are you to question me, you little worm?!"

    "What do you expect?! You're late! I expected you a long time ago."

    "Ah! What can you hope for, with these sorry rag-tag louts!"

    A safe bet, Malthur thought for himself. Orcs were always late for one thing or another, and always angry about it and a bunch of other things. Now he just had to keep the momentum.

    "Now, then, might I ask what the hell you are doing here?"

    "What do you mean!? This is a the road to Durthang and I am marching my unit there, you fool!"

    "Then why didn't you turn north two miles past? The main road is blocked, idiot! Rockslide. We've only dug out a narrow little trail yet. There's a reason you are later than you should have been, because a large column of supplies and more from down south will be passing here and they need the road cleared without any others meeting them. So you were supposed to get your maggots past using the small north trail!"

    "What are you babbling about? North trail?"

    "Didn't you see the scouts I posted? The trail runs around the mountain area, rocky and long but safer from blocking. Then it turns west again."

    "Stinking filth! I met no one!"

    "The lazy sods must have crawled away and slept then. I'll rend the skin from their bones once I find out who, but you have a bigger problem. You're going to be a day behind, at the very least. I don't fancy being in your position if any of them Nazghuls decide to look into the matter."

    The mention of the wraiths was a sure a way as any to get a surly orc in an even worse mood. The captain Ugdushs eyebrows lowered as he racked his brain with the unpleasant prospect of having the wraiths sniffing about, as the orcs would put it. Ill appreciated were they, while feared and perhaps respected in battle for the way they struck terror into the foe. But in Mordor they were the nightmare of nightmares for any commander with a suspicious record to show. Malthur continued his ill boding speech.

    "Heh, so you are in a bit of a fix now, Ugdush, aren't you? I suggest you find that trail soon."

    "Then send some guide with me!"

    "Now listen here! I have already wasted time I don't have on you and your sorry pack! I don't have men to spare and even if I did I wouldn't send them off on their own so they can just run away afterwards like the rats you should have met evidently did! But if you want to go look for the trail I suppose I can keep an eye on your boys here while you're away."

    "No bloody way. I'm sending some scouts of my own."

    "Your choice. They can hardly miss it. Two or three miles from here on your left obviously. But now that you're here, why don't you and your watching thugs go get some rest and refreshments from over there, behind that outcropping? You look like dirt."

    "Huh, we might do that, actually."

    The three orc officers strolled away in the pointed direction. Malthur watched them closely and immediately waved to the nearest of his workers.

    "Go get two dozen of the boys with their tools here at once. Then you will lead them to behind that outcropping over there, where you will find three big fellows waiting for you. Beat them to pulp and bury the bodies deep. Or eat them if you feel like it but hide the rest well. There may be some returning scouts from the east in a while, you may deal with them in the same way. And not a word to anyone ever about this, or I'll flay you alive and roast you over the flaming mountain itself!"

    The subordinate orc recoiled slightly when hearing the orders but a dangerous, hungry glimmer sparked in his eyes too, and he scurried away without question. Malthur also hurried away, down to the road where the scout detachment rested.

    "Up with you, you lazy slugs! Break time is over and now it's on to Durthang at double pace or you will feel the sting of my whip! Formation!"






    In the gloomy fortress of Durthang, the sentries reported that an approaching column of troops was sighted. Ladok, the commander of the place, walked down to inspect the newcomers at the gates. He was an enormous uruk, towering over almost any other orc, and stubborn to the core if not too crafty. In a way, the ideal subcommander and deputy. Durthang occupied the northern end of the pass between Ephel Duath, the Mountains of Shadow, and the inner ridge, Morgai, being something of the last defence of Mordor against attacks from the west. From the fortress ran two important roads, one east down towards the centre of Mordor and one south to Cirith Ungol and Minas Morgul. Durthang was in this way ideally suited as a training and marshalling ground, far away from the main routes in and out to not be in the way but quite close should the need arise for quick reinforcements. Lastly, the mountains around it were home to no small number of troll cages and pens. In time, their inhabitants might make their dreadful contribution to Mordors ultimate victory.

    "Halt! Who goes there?!"

    "Malthur! Commanding the third banner of the second regiment of Seregost."

    "Seregost, eh? You're late, scum! You were supposed to be here a day ago!"

    "We were waylaid by some rabble near the mountain! They got Ugdush, our commander, and some of the boys in the front before we drove 'em off!"

    Ladok regarded him coldly for a while.

    "So, you know Ugdush at least. Good enough. Get your unit into the west wing to camp. Then come up to the tower and report to me."



    Ladoks quarter was a circular room with stashed weapons, ancient loot and other useful things. He was looking out of one of the narrow openings that counted for windows when Malthur entered.

    "Tell me about them rebels on the road then. Numbers? Armament? Origin?"

    "Some smallish sniveling types, with tools and smaller arms, perhaps some bows. Don't know where they come from but they seemed familiar with the ground so I suppose they've been nesting there for a while. Crap, you expect the roads in the bloody middle of the country to be clear, what, just about in front of..."

    "That's gonna be hell to explain later. But this is Lagruds turf! Stinking idiot, he is supposed to keep watch from his little camp and make sure these things do not happen!"

    "He in charge of that big camp next to the road here?"

    "Huh. And in charge with overseeing the roads and the rest of the dusty plain of his for that matter."

    "You want something done you need to do it yourself." Malthur shook his head as in disgust. "Maybe that's the solution?"

    Ladok looked suspicious.

    "What are you babbling about?"

    "What I mean is, if this Lagrud can't manage the roads the task should go to someone more competent. Someone in charge of a proper fortress and not some little mudcrawling maggot of a forsaken camp who could only find his way to the cooking huts by the smell of them."

    Ladok looked thoughtful but didn't seem to disapprove. Malthur continued.

    "Besides, is there not something to be gained in it too? To be the decisive commander who stamps out these rebels? Might even make Durthang and it's chief wield influence even on the plains so to say."

    The chief of Durthang looked even more thoughtful.




    Near the foot of Mount Doom, orc archers were spreading out with their officers behind barking orders. They formed a wide line and moved slowly forward, all scouting for the bandits they had been told to find. Most looked only tired but some stared warily at every cliff and stone that could hide an ambusher.

    The overall commander of the expedition was Grat. He eyed the newcomer and guide Malthur with suspicion.

    "So this is where your precious little robbers would nest, is it? I don't see a thing for my part."

    "You approach with a line that can be spotted from a mile away, not even bothering to take cover, and you blame me if you find nothing? Is that a head on your shoulders or is it a sack of dung?"

    "Why you miserable little..."

    "Give me twenty lads who can march without tripping over themselves and I'll chase those scum out, right into your arms here! Just hold and remember to aim towards the enemy."

    Grat pondered over the proposition. On the one hand, the possibility to be done with this worthless assignment as soon as possible. On the other, the risk of getting rid of that upstart piece of filth that thought himself some kind of commander just because Ladok had sent him along to act as a guide.

    Grat took no risks, though. He called up all the other officers to make sure they overheard who gave orders to who.

    "Lads, I'm sending the rookie around with twenty men to see if he can chase those maggots out into our line as he claims. So hold your positions and wait for the sounds of uprooted little rebels, yes? To your places!"

    The twenty archers in the vanguard waited uneasily for the new officer to order them out. To them, one barking Uruk was as bad as the other, especially since this one in his new armour and the Durthang insignia and new spiked helm covering his features was indistinguishable from any other, not to mention from any former orc commander that might have marched from this place earlier.

    "Attention! As you may have heard we have the glorious task of getting into that nest and luring them out. Nice, huh? We follow the road and then enter the hills from the north, to flank our supposed foe. You will split in four groups of five, sweeping a lane each from enemies. Middle man scout ahead, left man left and right man right. The other two scout in between. You find anything, you keep your mouths shut, stop, hide and signal for assistance. I want every enemy dead after the first volley, do you hear me?! No screaming for help and no one gets way. Move out!"




    A hole it was in the black of the night. Darkness deeper than the darkness, and an unseen gaze sweeping over chilled onlookers that most of all wished to crawl away and hide.

    Behind him rode two dozens of guards in plate armour of ancient design and masklike helmets. They were not there for safety but to carry out the lesser tasks of their lord, whose only visible armament was a wide black cloak along with boots and gauntlets that protruded from under it. Immortal and older than most living things and indeed most cities and nations of Middle Earth, he had little need of a bodyguard. Few things escaped him in the district he held responsibility over and those that did counted themselves lucky. The unauthorized expedition from Durthang was not among those.



    "Bring me the officers engaged in this...expedition."

    Khamuls unseen glare froze the bone and the soul of all he questioned. Through their stuttering answers he learned that Ladok had ordered the expedition. Or if he had received orders from somewhere? No, he would never listen to advice from others. No, he didn't do anything he wasn't told to.

    Who had taken part in the attack? Some usual officers no doubt. And that newcomer, who acted as a guide. Sent to draw out the foe, indeed? Apparently cleared the place thoroughly with just his scout group. Did he have something to do with the expedition apart from having reported the attacks to start with? No, not as far as anyone knew. Why would Ladok have listened to him? What about the authority of Lagrud? Oh, that...the good people of the stronghold just did as Ladok told, the great lord Khamul must understand.

    The archers of this Malthurs group were not special in any manner, they just happened to be ordered that way. By Grat. Yes, everyone heard that. Grat's idea, it would seem. Yes, they had found some rebels, and surprised them completely. No survivors, as per Malthurs command. Yes, he had probably commanded smartly. Split his group in a somewhat tactical way. No, he hadn't done anything that seemed suspicious since. Handled a portion of the watch in Durthang without complaint. The lads said he reported on time and kept his mouth shut otherwise.

    And so Ladok was attempting to outmaneuver Lagrud, was he? Growing a bit too fast here in Durthang, aren't we? Not good enough, just running the fortress for the great eye? No, that was not the case, the good lord must not think. Never. It was Ladoks idea. Nobody knew anything about his plans. Or...maybe heard something once. Yes, lord Khamul shouldn't think all in Durthang to be disloyal dimwits. Oh, no. Actually, one could never be sure about that Ladok. Big fellow with big thoughts and big ambitions. Too big for his place. They said he wanted to be master of the Black Gate as well. Of all of northern Mordor as one great district. No, he probably had his sights set on Barad Dur. Might even have wished to oust lord Khamul and his mighty kind from their fine city.



    As it happened, Khamul did look out of the same window as the rooms former master once the last visitor entered.

    "Soo...the newest of officers approach. I trust the assignments have been to your liking?" The nazghuls metallic voice was barely above a whispering hiss.

    "I serve the eye in what way is required, lord."

    "That you do. As do Ladok, who will now be dragged in chains to the courtyard. There he will be slain for all to see and his head mounted as a fine warning for anyone even thinking of stepping out of line in this little hole. So will he serve the eye in the capacity that he is fit for."

    The orc chieftain remained silent.

    "Will it be your head that keeps him company soon? What do you think, orc?"

    "I think that you have more important things to do than listening to my opinions, lord. I am eager to get to work."

    "The whole fortress is filled with treacherous curs who could not remember their place if their lives depended on it. They will have to be kept in line and away from causing further trouble. Your only redeeming feature is that you have served the shortest time and therefore may seem less implicated to the outside if nothing else. You assume the position of overseer of Durthang from now on. The rest of the officers remain. They will not obey you wholeheartedly of course. Especially not since your first assignment as overseer is to prepare an expedition east. Twelve companies, of bow and sword. That you will lead into the deserts."



    "With respect lord, what good is an overseer miles away from what he oversees?"

    "Little. So you will do well to leave such tasks in the hands of more immediate assets. The great eye will not tolerate failure, regardless of the excuse."

    The orc kept staring silently with his eyes hardly visible through the eye slits of the helmet. Khamul continued.

    "Make no mistake, Malthur, you will never climb higher, nor will any of those who succeed you. You will all be made examples of for all to see and remember the old overseer of Morgai who believed he could overreach without the eye noticing it. All who look upon you will know that they gaze upon the weakest and least among chieftains and why it is so."

    "And what would the eye have of this low and ill reputed servant then?" asked the orc with a barely concealed sarcasm.

    "The variags are unruly. Tribute is flowing but it is too little and too uneven. They don't hold the great eye in such regard as would be wise of them. They will be shown the error of their ways. Five columns will sweep through the land with specific goals each. You will command the southernmost. Your mission is the town of Ammu Khand, close to Mordor. Take it, and make sure the people know what is expected of them."



    "And does the eye expect them to...live?"

    The nazghul regarded him with its invisible cold stare for a moment.

    "The aim is to ensure tribute and the pacification of the region. However, you may dispose of any unruly elements as you see fit. They will learn to fear the eye or know the price of disobedience."

    The orc chieftain bowed and left the room.





    They were screaming. Raising their shields and weapons. Banging them together. The sunlight glittered in all the metal and shone on the fine armours and helmets. Ammu Khand would not fall soon with such a force mustered! It had taken every bit of sharp objects in town to equip the militia but it had surely been worth it. The filthy orcs would surely think twice about rushing in once they got closer with their rams. The wall was just a palisade but at least stopped a head on charge and when the foe tried to squeeze through the openings they would be surrounded and cut to pieces from all sides!

    Ilg of the militia fumbled with his large shield and spear while waiting. It was exciting and frightening at the same time but he had complete confidence in his towns lord. Someone that high and mighty would not fall to these bandits. That was how the world was made, it was, as sure as the rise of the sun.

    "Stand still! Take deep breaths, you need to conserve some strength." said Od next to him.

    "But I'm so thrilled! We'll slay those monsters and then we will be like heroes!"

    "We need to slay them first" Od retorted, and continued in a hushed voice "and it doesn't look that good from where I stand."

    "What?"

    "They're waiting us out. Look at it. We have nearly no bowmen, and the enemy is just standing there, taking their time."

    "That's good, ain't it? They're frightened!"

    "They're smart. They know that they're dealing with militia unused to long battles and able to keep up a short burst of bravery but lacking the guts for a drawn out contest. Since this banging and shouting started, it's our men that's been tiring themselves out, mark my words."

    Ilg looked around. That couldn't have been true, could it? The stout folk of Ammu Khand would not give in like that, used as they were to work long days in the sun. He looked around more closely. Was it as much clamour now as earlier? Maybe quite not. Some men were drinking from their water skins already. Could Od be right? Ilg walked backwards so that he came a bit higher up and managed to glimpse over the palisade. The orcs...were sitting on the ground. Or most of them at least. Some were walking around, apparently distributing drink and some food among their ranks. The human militia on their hand were still waving their weapons and shouting, with hoarser throats, dreading the absence of their sound as if it would signal the end for them all. Ilg slowly started shaking his head.

    Then the cry came in from further to his right side.

    "Fire arrows!"



    Ilg could not breathe! He was being pressed by bodies from every side and could neither turn around nor move. The remnants of the militia cowered around him, keeping their shields up and involuntarily staggering back into one another as if searching for some measure of safety. Orcs swarmed around them, no, it was more like a black lake of orcs rolling over them like a sandstorm, blanketing every open spot of the streets. Ilg could only turn his head but knew there was only walls behind the humans. He should have run when Od said so earlier, even if Od had been hit by an arrow and stumbled shortly after trying to get away from the walls. The orcs had not killed him but the panicking militia had trampled over him and many others in their flight back to the town square where they had reformed. And now Ilg would suffer the same fate. If only he could get back and turn and maybe he could scale that wall? Maybe the orcs did not have any bowmen here, or they had run out of arrows? Maybe the other side of the house would be empty and he could get away now, or hide until the night?



    The orcs suddenly roared an indistinguishable war cry and charged. Someone behind Ilg faltered, and Ilg too lost balance. He stumbled and fell to the ground on his back just as someone stepped on his leg. He heard the bone snap and could not think as the stupefying pain hit him.




    Shagrat, lieutenant of Malthur, marched arrogantly across the still very bloody town square. Something smelled delicious from the cooking pots outside. Malthur greeted him by tossing him the helmet of the fallen enemy captain, all gilded steel.

    "What do you make of this, eh?"

    "What do I make of what? It's a bloody helmet."

    "And what does it tell us? Read the signs, Shagrat, and tell me."

    "Huh...so the wearer was rich, then. Since the scum was lord of this little pile of dirt of a maggot nest I wouldn't be too surprised. Can we go get some eating done now, captain?"

    "Idiot! Do you have slugs nesting in your head or what is wrong with you!? The lowliest snivelling little tracker could tell me more. Look at it!" He pointed angrily at the helmet again. "The steel might be decent underneath, or at least passable for this land. That gold is not. No smith that clumsy can afford the material needed for covering a whole helmet in gold like that, and none would hire one so clumsy if he was rich enough to buy the gold needed. Get it?"

    The Uruk lieutenant stared back at him blankly. Malthur shook his head in disgust and kicked him hard in the stomach. Towering over the knocked down orc he continued. "These amateur smiths and little worms of pretender princes have neither wits nor bits to buy the material needed to craft armours like that. That tells us one thing. They. Found. It. Get up, and get the shiniest batch of prisoners you can find here. There's gold in these hills, and we're going to find it."



    Malthur stood seemingly casually and picked out dirt from under his nails with his dagger, or perhaps it was more like a very short sword. He had never been able to understand this. Of all things to be frightened of, humans would pick this ludicrous gesture to shiver from. Ah, well, all the easier to intimidate the pack.

    "You." He pointed at the foremost of the prisoners brought forward. "There is gold in these lands. More than is expected in a small hole like this. Where does it come from?"

    "We....we ain't got no gold, lord, I swear..."

    Malthur lashed out with his dagger in the blink of an eye. The prisoners speech faltered in a gurgling of blood as he collapsed with his throat cut.

    "I will ask again. Once. Where does the gold come from?"

    The mines lay southeast of the town. It was really more of a series of holes but the gold vein seemed to continue downwards. It had been discovered less than two years ago and the lord of the town had been intoxicated by his dreams of a prosperous future for the town and especially himself. The smith who made the clumsily ornate armour was among the fallen in the battle. It was a couple of weeks track to the mining grounds.

    "See, Shagrat? Something to dig up from this maggot nest after all." He turned towards the unfortunate Khandfolk. "You lot will accompany this lieutenant of mine and the fine gentlemen of his guard to this mine of yours. For your sake I hope it really is two weeks from here, or you might find out just how hungry my boys can get from a hard march in the sun."





    The town of Ammu Khand was quiet now. It's inhabitants hurries to and fro, going about their daily business as quietly as possible. There wasn't so many as one might expect but on the other hand there were a lot more of the black armored orcs than one would have guessed from looking at the town. The shadow of the sharp mountains of Mordor, jagged compared to the rounded ones further east, loomed darker than before over the town.


    Orcs patrolled the streets, stood guard at town squares and gates and the wall, and on the whole made their presence very much known and felt. Regarding the latter, there was in a sense one exception. The grim captain of the occupation force walked surprisingly quietly through the streets, the same being true about his two bodyguards.

    "Inspeeection!" he barked, coming up close behind two sentries that had slackened in the shade next to the western gate.

    "Huh? Chief! Nothing to report!"

    "That so? Big surprise there, ain't it? Keep your eyes with you!" he growled and swatted the sentry on the helmet with his gauntlet, producing a ringing sound like a small bell.

    "Aaaoh! Aye , chief!" the unfortunate orc yelled and kept shifting his gaze in confusion, wondering how his day had taken such a bad turn.

    "Like our new boots, do you? the orc captain asked maliciously, and lifted his boot, with double layers of sheepskin tied to it underneath as an extra sole. "Might make our infantry be able to visit a town at night without waking up every defender within the nearest ten miles. In the meantime, you runts can focus on keeping watch instead of listening for the steps of an officer."

    The inspecting captain continued his tour, leaving behind a trail of straightening and stammering guards, eyeing their surroundings nervously.



    The central square proved to be more difficult to approach undetected, with open street in every direction. Something more would be required.

    "Here, give me your helmet, and walk in front of me casually like you're off duty" he said to his bodyguards, lashing his own helmet to his belt. The bodyguards complied, but still were so unused to behaving "casually" when patrolling that the result came to resemble a bad actor trying to look relaxed or someone trying to falsely pretend nothing was wrong. The effect was in fact quite comical, Malthur thought, but it would have to do. They approached the town square and the chatting soldiers that did not seem to recognize them as their talking continued. One of them even waved lazily. Malthur did not recognize that one but the other two he knew were called Caillagh and Alwyn. They were coming close enough to hear the conversation.

    "...bloody crafty, with those fire arrows" said the wave man in a guttural tone.

    "He's a devious one, I heard he just walked in and talked himself to control of all of Durthang, all sneakiness" said Caillagh.

    "No, it was one of them wraiths who put him in charge, apparently the old guy was being topped off and Malthur somehow had the quick wits to come out of that as new boss" said Alwyn.

    Malthur contemplated using the same approach as previously, but on the other hand it might be useful having some in the lower ranks that did not hate you completely. Still, he would like them on their toes lest someone would came up with any unhealthy ideas for troublemaking, even if they were unlikely to be s coming from such, should we say, people "less than nimble intellectually". He would settle for a compromise here.

    Malthur waited until they had passed by and just out of sight. Then he quickly changed back to his own helmet.

    "You're damn right, so you better keep your eyes open so you live long enough to remain in this noble company for some more time! For I am both crafty, witty and devious!" he roared and tossed the startled debaters a half filled wineskin taken from the loot of the town.

    His companions chuckled at the expressions of the confused town square sentries but the uncommonly merry gathering was interrupted by a runner hastening towards them.

    "Chieftain, a company or so on foot's approaching. It looks like it might be Shagrat's raiders."



    The eastern gate was a mess of excitement with babbling and shouting mingled. The Uruk guards had to wade through the commotion using the flat sides of their swords to clear a path for their captain. The exhausted foray party panted with red tongues hanging from their mouths and leaned on their knees in the merciless sun, even though it was still morning.

    "Hey, Shagrat! Dug something up lately?"

    The dusty orc looked up and grinned trimphantly. He gestured to his closest guards, one which was carrying a heavy sack.

    "They had a shiny little hoard just waiting for us. Oh, and some dutiful workers too, not expecting us. Damn, you should have seen the look on their faces when we stormed in!"

    "Good. Send your boys to the cook pots and follow me. We have some things to talk about."



    Later the two orc commanders stood alone up in a watchtower. Malthur turned to face his lieutenant.

    "Last time I looked, I seemed to spot a number of prisoners marching with you. Humans, it might have been. Does that ring a bell?"

    "Oh, those, hehe! We decided to lighten our load on the way home. And fill our bellys at the same time. As you said we could, of course, captain."

    "As I said you could, provided the journey there took longer than two weeks. Did it? For if so, you've sure been running on your way back here."

    "Ah, no, but what good were they now that we had found the place? Me and my boys were getting scorched, captain! You think the path here through the cliffs has been hard? That is nothing compared to that sea of sand and rocks out there!"

    "Aye, that sure must have tried your tempers, mustn't it?" The captains voice had become deceptively low. That sort of low that boded quite ill for the one addressed. But either the sun and heat or the long track had dulled Shagrats senses of immediate danger that usually were present.

    The hit sent him flying across the platform of the tower and crashing into the wall behind. Shagrat crawled up with his head ringning and spitting blood. Malthur had backhanded him with his armoured hand, wearing his full armour at all times as was his habit, including the heavy gauntlets he favored.

    "Be thankful, Shagrat, that killing you would seem outward as a concession towards our prisoners and undermine my authority here. As would demoting your worthless hide once we were still here. Be thankful for that whenever you feel the urge to disobey my orders again. Now get out of my sight, maggot."




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    Chapter II - The rise of an army.

    Siege warfare was never the orcs favored strategy. Just as much as their foes treasured their stone walls and majestic display of craftsmanship so did the orc accomplish little in either fortifications or the art of breaking them down. Whether it was the infighting, the impatience or the sheer cowardice deterring them from even contemplating serious attacks against well defended targets, never did they manage much when they were not under the command of a greater will than the common chieftain or captain. Yet now, all of that was about to change. Timber rolled in from the east on wagon after wagon, sturdy wood of the eastern lands that would not break or grow weak from the extreme climate of Mordor. Iron and stone flew in a steady stream from countless mine shafts and the toll of innumerable thralls burying into the mountains for material.

    At the foot of the Morgai mountain range all of it gathered. Clumsy wheeled catapults and slimmer but more complicated ballistae along with the enthusiastic orcs set to crew them. For while lazy and notoriously untrustworthy, almost every orc shared an eagerness and a fascination when it came to machines and devices for the wreaking of havoc and destruction. Even more so when it came with the possibility of doing it from behind the ranks of someone else.

    Great shooting ranges were dug out and crude targets mounted for the practice of the crews. Day and night, the air was rent by the creaking o wood and rope and the crashes of stones upon the ground and the mountainside. Under the watchful eyes of the Uruk overseers it happened that some of the lesser orcs distinguished themselves and were given the command of a smaller unit. A command that had its own dangers.

    The dreaded overseer of all Morgai and lord of the fortress of Durthang invoked fear whenever he showed himself. The sight of his spiked helmet was the signal to hide as best one could and otherwise strive to perform exceptionally well. As he entered the campsite it was the sight of him that opened a path between the crowds before anyone had given the order, and not the sight of the enormous creatures following behind his bodyguard. His will was the only law known for the time being and all the lesser commanders hurried like mad to obey his summons. Without stopping to look at anyone, he turned towards the practice range where the catapult crews now hastily gathered before him.

    "Crew captains, listen up! Each of your companies will be assigned two trolls. I don't care what trolls you get but you better do that. You have until we march out to teach them to handle a catapult - moving, loading, aiming, firing. How you do it is up to you. You'll want to put your brave little hearts into the task, for when the time is up one of two things will happen. Either the trolls handle their task and you get a place as company commanders in my army. Or the trolls mess up something and I will use your heads as ammunition or let the trained trolls eat you, depending on how well the other groups have done. Any questions? Didn't think so. Get started!"



    Under his helmet, the orc eyes blazed with the unseen anger that would be directed towards each and everyone close by in Durthang these days. HE had brought the Variag town down. HE had discovered the hidden gold caches as a neat bonus on top of it all. HE had organised the expedition and its supplies through trackless wastes, circulating repairing crews and water carriers up and down the long column and scouts ahead of it that had at last been berated into doing a half descent job of not only watching for enemies but also for steady and stable ground where the wagons could continue.



    And then, after reaching the road west into Mordor, the soulless and eyeless stare, there to greet him. Endless questions and accusing implications and always that cold gaze through his very bones, making even the sunlight seem faded and sending shivers through his body despite the heat. The retainers were trying their best to give a similar impression in their metal masks, but could not match the presence of the unliving wraith, as much as their contempt for the orcs was visible for all to see.



    That had been but the beginning though, lasting only until Khamul drew a thin dagger with a grinning skull decorating the hilt. Two of the Numenorian guards kicked out his legs from under him as their master swiftly cut the straps of his armour and seams of the clothing underneath until his upper body was bared. The dagger was a Morgul blade, Khamul remarked, which had the repulsive ability of seeking out the heart of its victim on its own accord to some extent. Thrusts would seem to penetrate deeper and easier in that direction, even if that effect was usually less noted since the only known wielders were the nazghul, who could more often than not pierce whatever armour and flesh they wished thanks to their unnatural strength. A Morgul blade would also splinter on occasion, leaving a smaller piece in a wound that would slowly eat its way towards the heart.

    "Let's see what truths and lies we can discover beneath the surface..."

    Khamul had almost seemed amused as he hissed out the remark. As much as something not living could seem anything. His first thrust pierced the shoulder, leaving a flesh wound that would ache tenfold from Malthurs head twitching in pain and cold from the following ones. Khamuls second pierced the chest, scratching against a rib and holding still as if contemplating whether to bore right through it or not. Again and again he stabbed, always making a show of examining the tip of the dagger as if to see if any part had broken off and remained in the wound. Cold gripped the orc and his breathing was a labored struggle while limbs burned and lost their strength and then sensation. It was impossible to say for how long it went on, not least since the repeated questions and comments always circled around the same subject like a perpetually turning wheel. For whatever reason, the nazghul finally tired, or if it had been Malthur that had passed out from the loss of blood.



    Slowly regaining consciousness, his first sight was the blistering sun and the second was that of Khamul adressing a large crowd, made up of nearly all of the officers of the orc horde. He was hanging limp between two of the black Numenorians of Khamul who held him up between them as the nazghul adressed the crowd.

    "Commanders in the service of the great eye: I have reviewed your latest "achievements". Pitiful. For now, the dark lord will show you mercy, as responsibility does not lie on your shoulders alone but more so on your commander. You will prove yourselves worthy of some of the spoils under captain Shagrat now. Under his command you will march to Cirith Ungol, taking up your duty as garrison troops. Leave the wounded and the weak. March!"

    The pathetic scum had cheered and with hitherto unseen speed hurried into line, not even looking at their former captain. The only spectator was now Khamul and his guard.

    "You still have your orders. Lead these sorry remnants back to Durthang...overseer. I am sure the entire fortress is awaiting your return with anticipation..." the nazghul hissed and made a mocking bow as his retainers laughed with hollow and mirthless voices, dropping the orc unceremoniously into the sand.



    The orc chieftain shook his head as to shake off the memory.

    "But you did not kill me Khamul, did you? You went through all that trouble to humiliate a captain instead of picking another one and sparing yourself the trip to western Khand. Did it please you that much, or do you find yourself so short of able chieftains these days?" he whispered to himself. "Whatever reason it was for, you will regret it one day..."



    There would be need of able commanders soon enough if the recent rumors held any truth. Gondorian raiding parties were seen closer to Minas Morgul yet again and even scouts from the men of Rohan, Gondors northern ally, patrolled the land. The newcomers were holding the defenses of the river Anduin, so the scouts said, but for what reason? Gondor was mustering its forces further south, on the plains of Ithilien bordering the lands of Harad as well as Mordor. Would they strike at Minas Morgul another time? Did they intend to sweep through all of Ithilien north to the Black Gates?



    Insects. They looked like bugs crawling and climbing down the winding stair and the mountain slope underneath it far, far below Malthurs vantage point. Orcs and trolls and piece after piece of siege machinery, lifted down using improvised cranes and platforms on the few larger flat spots along the great stair. Beams, barrels of smaller parts, wheels, rocks to load the catapults with, spears to load the ballistae. It had been thought ludicrous but he had done it! He had made an army climb down the mountains with their artillery in their pockets, not to mention passing right under the very nose of her. Indeed, that had been a concern fervently voiced by the loudest of critics, until Malthur had given the very same individuals the important task of making sure she was distracted. He hoped she had enjoyed the meal.

    Malthurs army, he did have an army of sorts now, was in truth one gigantic siege regiment. He held no illusions that that had not been the main reason why it had been sent to the Morgul Vale, something which would have undoubtedly made any other orc forget any notion of bringing artillery with them. Deprived of their greatest asset, it would have been a lackluster victory or a disgraceful defeat waiting downhill. But not now...

    A runner made his way up close to him, panting from the climbing.

    "Chief, we have nearly all catapults on the ground. Where shall they be assembled?"

    "Nowhere. Form up along the road to march out as soon as the rest is on the ground."

    "Uh..."

    A harsh glare silenced the whatever doubting comment the scout could have been about to voice. Malthur sighed and began walking towards the stairs. Explanations, explanations, those were the fate of all who had to work with underlings bereft of vision or wit enough to recognize the superior planning of their betters.



    "Company commanders, to me!" the orc chieftains voice thundered as he reached the last step of the stair. "Now, I hope you have all been told to form the column along the road, otherwise old She will be getting even fatter tonight!"

    "Chief, are we not to use the artillery?"

    "Sure we are, but not from here."

    The blank stare meeting him annoyed the chieftain to no end.

    "THINK, maggot! What is out there?" he grunted and pointed out west beyond the vales entrance.

    "A meekly force, about two hundreds reinforced by some five hundreds. Sure, we can smash them, but why not soften them up a little before?"

    "Which we will, but again: not from here. Pay attention! That is a raiding party, a blocking force preventing scouting patrols from reaching the river and the roads south. When we start flinging fire they will turn and bolt to warn the other whiteskins and huddle up in their stone cities somewhere behind. I would have them run into Mordor instead, so here is what we will do: We march out of the vale, taking the abandoned northern trails through the forest, coming out behind the whiteskins. Then we assemble these pieces of junk and start the fun."

    The other orcs looked at each other for a moment but some, and soon all, quickly remembered to nod.

    "What of the road, ain't it supposed to be broken down and abandoned as it is?"

    "I've never heard nobody give a damn about it. Since when should WE depend on broken roads or hidden trails for our defence?! We are the Uruks! We serve the great eye! We ATTACK, we do not defend! Now, move out."




    Malbeth of Dol Amroth surveyed the road ahead of him once again. He was commanding half a thousand of Gondors armies, many hailing from Dol Amroth like himself. Their mission was simple enough, to watch the road ahead of them fro large enemy movements, and they were aided by his deputy Himdor ahead with 230 men as a vanguard and first line of scouts. There had been reports of movement out of the Morgul Vale the whole day before but apart from skirmishes with orc archers no attack was coming. What were they up to? For the tenth time this day he wondered if the right thing to do would be to send a rider back to Osgiliath but for the tenth time he admitted that he did not know what to write. That he had a bad feeling and had reports of uncounted but apparently very unnerving masses of enemies doing nothing in particular up ahead? Even with the recent sightings of orcs in the forest north of them it was not something that would convince anyone of anything.

    The sky was cloudy but it did at least not rain. Yet. Suddenly he heard thunder, a loud bang from somewhere behind him. It did sound quite close...was that screaming? Could it really had struck someone in the camp?

    Malbeth turned his horse around. It was not thunder.

    "To your posts! Form up, Gondorians!"


    Himdor ran. His armor weighed him down. His mail was a net that caught his limbs and pulled at the opposite direction he would have them move. The fine, even artful, work of a master that it was, forged by a craftsman with possibly decades of experience, for the people of Gondor still lived far beyond most other men and the forging was one of the few professions that had not entirely degenerated since the days of Gondors full might, before the plagues and the infighting had left its old borderlands easy prey for Easterlings and Southrons. Himdors helmet was strong. It's crest was reinforced, offering the drastic yet potentially life-saving ability to absorb a blow by tilting the head slightly forward, supposedly catching the force on the helmet and the extra padding underneath that spot. It weighed his head down and strained his neck. His breath was caught by the cheek guards of it, and he could not seem to ever inhale enough air with each breath. The greaves fitted his calves flawlessly, or at least they did some years ago, and now he felt them like stones on his feet. Bent and formed into an artistic wave-like top, he had always admired the skill it must take to make the different parts of an armor piece and make them work together. Much like an army should. But now this army was fractured, and one of its hands hurried too late to help the other hand and the head and heart of the army. His breastplate shone like the sun itself under his meticulous care, with the light reflecting off the smooth surfaces, never offering a single point where an opponents blade could hit properly but dooming it to glance off with spent force. It represented the ultimate proficiency of the master armourer, with no flaw and no weak spot left open. And it hung so heavily from his shoulders and back and made it so hard to take another mouthful of air.

    They were nearing the main encampment, at last. There was a repulsive smell off burning in the air and smoke rose over the treetops. Beyond the coming ridge was only flat ground for half a mile and then they would be there to help Malbeth. It was just short, short climb left. Himdors legs trembled from the effort but he stumbled one more step ahead, and another, and another, and the he was over the ridge. If only the downhill slope would carry them all the last bit on to the camp for the final charge into the enemy. Surely the orcs would be exhausted by now and easily routed when faced with a new force. And then they could regroup and rest and Himdor would demand that forward scout forces would be made up exclusively of the light infantry instead.

    And then the sky rained fire.


    Orcs scurried across the camp like an unruly colony of ants. All carried various pieces of loot or were going back for more. Their chieftain oversaw it with a satisfied glare. He had only had to behead a dozen or so of the most insubordinate pillagers, clinging to the honoured tradition of keeping all they could find for themselves. Now it was being neatly assembled in different growing piles sorted by the type of loot, ready to be used and distributed at his command alone.

    "Not bad, not bad..."

    "This will fetch a mighty shiny price back home, won't it chief!?"

    "Damn right...hold up! What's that you're dragging over there?"

    "This be some stinking Tark armour. Looks like it was with one of them high Tark folk here. Much good it did him..."

    "That so? Bring it here! Is the thing intact?"

    "Would think so. Damn hard to hack through, this stuff. Me and some pals tried once after that mess in the wraiths tower. Broke our flaming swords, we did! Flaming ridiculous!"

    "Wash the human stink out of it and bring it to my tent. I want a closer look on this swordbreaking wardrobe of theirs."

    The armour in question was indeed intact. It was certainly of superior quality compared to what the orcs could hope for. Mordors smiths could be skilled enough but the endless numbers of the Eyes armies meant everything had to be focused on massed production over any fancy craftsmanship. The only exception was the Black Numenorians who had their own human smiths tending to armour and weapons.

    In fact, that suit of plate didn't look too bad. If one dyed it black or covered it with leather or hide it would pass as any other orc armour. Some straps might have to be loosened a bit, well, maybe two bits, but otherwise that could actually be made to fit. But not the helmet. That looked flaming stupid. And it would be far too tight over the ears.


    Now, these puny excuses of a vanguard had come from somewhere south. That he was certain of. It was something with the river city that just screamed "SHUT" these days. Maybe it was the strawhead banners that were seen flying. On the other hand, the Tarks and the strawheads were supposed to be allies. But there were still no sign of tracks going west. They turned south, further into the forests of Ithilien, following the road that went along the huge river. It was time to send out some scouts here and there.



    The castle of Ostithil had never been a major stronghold for Gondor. The castle had been constructed during the golden age, after Saurons fall and the Last Alliance. In those times the threat was bandits or renegade orcs left from the scattered hordes of Mordor, and the surrounding wilderness had been a blooming farmland. Then came the long decline and waning, with plague forcing the population to abandon the castle and surrounding areas and corsairs from the south raiding the coasts. Ostithil fell into ruin and only birds nested inside its walls. Only under Denethors reign had the place been reclaimed, now by the Gondorian army to be used as a forward gathering point and fortified camp. In a few years a small village of workshops and quarters had sprung up and lately a strong wall had been added around it all. The wall was still made of wood. though, and the garrison was small. It had served its part so far.

    Ostithil guarded the border where the highlands of central Ithilien would flatten into the lowlands of the south, which even further south gave way to meadows and steppes as Gondor became Harad. The ground around the castle was open for the most parts, a remnant of the farms that had once occupied the area, and the ground was dry and hard. It was good ground for marshalling large forces, and to lead mounted forces in a battle.

    On the rooftops and towers stood several scouts, of which one was Bregil, the son of the castellan Beregond, and his lowborn friend Pip. They had viewed the large black army with equal parts contempt and fright.

    "They are so many..."

    "You're such a craven, Pip, those are just orcs. My father will smash them, he will."

    "Those things at their stone slingers are no orcs. I saw them earlier. It's trolls! They stand twice as tall as a man. And are stronger than a dozen. And they eat people. I've heard about..."

    "Like you'd know anything about it! Listen, I heard from one of the scouts that the archers captain said that there are Rohirrim hiding in the forest on the other side! Then, when those orc scum has set themselves up the riders will sweep them off, and my father and his men will sally out and fire arrows into their backs from the other side when they have been hit by the riders!"

    "Those trolls will just laugh and grab for their horses I think. It's like a big feast for them, like midsummer."

    "Hey, are you on our side or what!?"

    "What's wrong with you, course I am! But that's not gonna matter if the trolls eat us."

    "Can you quit yapping about your stupid trolls for just one day? Didn't I tell you that my father is down there with the garrison, preparing to go out and rout the enemy? And the riders are led by a great hero of Rohan. They won't lose to some simple orcs! Or some stupid trolls!"



    Now was heard the sharp horns of the Rohan riders, and a large cloud of dust and the beating of many hooves heralded their charge around the west side of the wall. But a large part of the contingent was actually dismounted, as the Rohirrim had been sent to Gondors aid as a garrison force in the first place. The riders stormed onward to great cheers from the walls, seeking to hit the enemy as soon as possible and fix his attention so that the rest of the force could march up and fire at the disorganized remains. But the orcs were not a ragged pillaging band sent to harass some outlying farms. Even worse what that the many ballistae that stood in front of the orcs acted as effective impediments, especially so since the orcs had the habit of mounting large wooden shields on the front of their artillery pieces, with spikes on top of those.

    "Breg?"

    "Yeah..."

    "Shouldn't our men be sallying out now?"

    "Yeah... Maybe they just wait for the riders to disorganize the enemy more..."

    "Breg?"

    "Yeah..."

    "Aren't they getting surrounded out there? And where are the footmen?"

    "There! But they are turning towards the walls instead! What are they doing!"

    "Look! The trolls!"



    The orc chieftain surveyed the bloody remains of the Rohan riders. It was a hopelessly inferior force. None the less, they had stormed into his ranks without hesitation and indeed managed to buy their comrades some time, which the latter then had squandered by neither attacking nor using the time to make a run for the river or the forests. It was a futile gesture of defiance from the enemy, but he could respect the courage of the strawheaded leader and bodyguards.

    His troops were rearranging for a new clash or to storm the castle. Malthur waved the closest captains to him.

    "Have the lads settle down and take turns watching the castle. There won't be any new sally now that they've realized their precious cavalry was no match for us. Two companies stand guard with the catapults, have the rest set up a camp on the eastern side of the walls and get some fires up. I don't know about you lot but I'm in the mood for a bloody feast!"

    "As you say, chief!"

    "We'll do, chief!"

    "Why are we moving to the other side, chief? I mean, with the meat piled up nice and easy down here?"

    The orc chieftain smiled a wicked smile.

    "Feel the wind. It's been blowing from Mordor for four days now. I want each and every whiteskin in that tower to feel the delicious scents of our dinners roasting while they wait for our catapults having them join their pals. Let the wind carry the sweet aroma of their impending destruction."

    "Aye, chief!"

    "Once everyone's fed and watered, continue bombardment and start burning the place down. Aim for the courtyard and the houses closest to the castle. See if you can make the smoke drive them out."

    "We're not gonna seize the place, chief?"

    "This motley pile of gravel is near useless. We're too far away from any of our own and it's too small and weakly fortified to make a suitable supply camp. It's as unworthy as it's garrison."

    Looking over the battlefield again the orc chieftain felt his mouth water. He could already imagine the smell of meat roasting over the fires.



    They were shouting. Bregil couldn't understand why they were shouting. They should be at their posts. They should defend the walls. They should defend his fathers castle. But they just stood in the courtyard, or rather the open square before the castle, and banged at the door and shouted things about Gondor and his family and the loyal defenders of the keep. They were cowards! And Pip was hardly better.

    "Breg! We've gotta do something! Look, someone's locked the gate! We must tell your dad or someone!"

    "No, we mustn't! Shut up, Pip."

    "But look down there! They are dozens! Maybe hundreds!"

    "Yeah, like we need a hundred more mouths to feed! Is that what you want, Pip? Starving because we let in some hundreds more unwashed peasants from the north. You don't know anything about sieges, do you Pip? It's all about the food and water in the end."

    "What's wrong with you?! There are people down there! Our own people, Breg! And allies who came to save us. The riders fought bravely."

    "Then they should go man the walls and save us!"

    "That's really the real point, isn't it? "They should" and "them". Not "we". Because you and all you highborn think you are above everyone else and should have all done for you by others. And others don't really matter because they are just tools for you. Isn't that right, Breg?"

    "Shu...shut up! That's traitors talk, Pip!"

    "What're you gonna do, lock me out with the rest of the common soldiers? The rest of our soldiers that you and your father and your family just have BETRAYED!"

    Bregil really only meant to make him be quiet for a while. He really just wanted a little rest from everything. And make that stupid lowborn show some respect. Here he was, being friends despite being of a proper family and what did Pip do to repay his kindness? He should have broken Pips nose, that was no more than he deserved. He just didn't mean for Pip to spin around and stumble over the crenellations. He looked down on his hand. There was blood on it. Maybe he had broken Pips nose after all? If so, Pip must be alive. Otherwise he would be dead and the dead could not have their noses broken. Bregil repeated the thought in his mind with every step he took towards the wall. He peeked over the side, and there was Pip! He was lying on a sloping roof underneath, holding on to some edge of the roof, looking dazed and exhausted.

    "Hold...hold on, Pip! I'll get someone!"

    Pip seemed to move a bit. It looked like he was attempting to shake his head.

    "No...get...rope... Do...yourself..."

    Bregil realised that he didn't know where to find rope. Nor did he know how to tie a good knot with the rope he didn't know how to find. Then suddenly the castle shook and the sound of stones crashing onto stones and the smell of something burning was everywhere, so much closer than the horrible smell in the wind that had been there since just after the battle. Bregil looked down again.

    Pip was gone.

    Bregil looked up and out towards the wall. There weren't any defenders on it. There was only fire.



    Bregil suddenly wished his father would open the doors. Even if it was bad for the supplies. Even if they were no more than lowborn. He just didn't want to hear them screaming.


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    indeed, great stuff here!

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    Good read, keep it up!

    Out of pure curiosity, how did you deploy your army in Battle?

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    Ballistae at the front because they don't shoot well over friendly trrops. Catapults behind and archers in the middle behind the ballistae (they act as palisades against enemies too) with infantry spread out to counter what enemy infantry that reaches the lines. Trolls are often best at flanks because they are needed to smash flanking riders. The Morannon guard is useful as a forward decoy and bait due to their better morale and armour, standing in a thin spread out line to halt enemies with minimun own casualties and give the artillery time to destroy them.

    Ballistae are a bit fun to use for flanking raking shots but that sort of requires an infantry body that can stand its ground very long time with minimum effort and only Isengards pikemen possess the required abilities for that among the followers of Melkor.
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    Chapter III - Gondors Southern Armies

    Beyond the great river lay the old city of Pelargir, the most important base of Gondors fleets. From the window of one of the city's towers a shape of uncommon height turned to look back into the rest of the room. In it where four more Gondorian commanders, seasoned veterans all, along with himself. They were seated along a table covered with maps and some of the later reports and notes about details of their coming campaign. It was a room for planning and council, secluded with only one stair and as well guarded as anything could be these days. The assembly would not let too much be seen through their facade of militaristic self control, but it was apparent that they were hoping to begin whatever it was that the meeting was for. As to humor them, steps were heard through the door and the two last partakers entered.

    The tall officer eyed them with a satisfied glance and gestured towards the table.

    "Ah, Aravir, Cirion, take your seats."

    He then turned towards one of the other occupants, a young Gondorian with a worn face of someone quite older.

    "We will begin this meeting with a thorough briefing of what has transpired so far and the situation as it stands. First, I would ask you to tell us all the whole story as you previously told me, Daugon. Take your time and omit nothing, feel free to call for refreshments if you need to."

    Daugon took a steadying breath and began to speak. The room was dead silent apart from his voice.

    "I was a sergeant in the army of lord Dinethor of Amon Eithel. As you no doubt know our objectives were to hold Tir Ethraid and the river against the Haradrim, while providing a marshalling ground for reinforcements coming from Pelargir and further west. To that end, we had to hold a fairly broad strip of land, allowing our reinforcing armies some space to retreat from any approaching enemy force without marching right into the other. The idea...was that our gathered strength would allow a stronger and successful surprising push north to retake Minas Morgul. All this while our allies of Rohan held the river up north.

    The army as a whole was organized in three parts, the southern watch guarding the bridge at Tir Ethraid and the town itself, the northern watch and the main contingent in between. The plan was of course that the latter would support each of the other two and for them to hold until assistance could come through. As such, we were fairly well supplied with balanced forces all over to counter all kinds of enemy compositions. At least we thought so when he struck the northern watch.






    "The commander was Glarion and he took up positions just as the books and protocol teaches. Cavalry covered the flanks and the centre was reinforced to allow a bit of reserve troops to be ready should any part of the line be breached. Most was militia but he had one company of seasoned citadel guards as well to strengthen the resolve of all around them. But since he lacked missile troops save for a company or so he would make a showing of his grand army and thus keep the orcs at bay until reinforcements arrived. It was just that the orcs did not give a rotten piece of anything about protocol. They rolled out catapults.



    I don't know how long it took but the survivors claim that just about every flaming rock was hurled towards the middle where Glarion stood. And he just stood. And stood. And he was struck down and burned for all to see as his bodyguard were cut down by the rain of fire.



    The army stood bravely for a while until it disintegrated."

    The rest of the gathered winced at the thought and the full meaning behind the sparse description. It was by all means not unknown nor uncommon to face fire in the many battles against Gondors enemies, especially at sea, but to have an entire army crushed by it was yet unheard of. Daugon continued.

    "We did not know all of this then of course - I was serving in the middle army that was supposed to have helped out - but what I have told is what we pieced together afterwards. The army had readied itself and was about to march out when the first survivors appeared. They looked terrible! Blackened by sooth in some cases and terrified and disbelieving. They hurried along the road or through the plains around it, which were thankfully easy to cross with the sparse vegetation and lack of swamps and rivers.

    We stopped in our tracks, not knowing what to do. The news of an army destroyed by raining fire did sound ludicrous and I confess that I as well dismissed it and thought the routers fools or cowards and that they had concocted some wild tale to excuse themselves. Our commander was Colfinnon who decided to hold position and send out scouts. And here was the most unbelievable thing - they rode ahead as fast as they could along the road to where the northern watch had been encamped. They ran into more routers and expected the vanguard of the enemy at any time. But none came to meet them."

    "And where had they gone?" interrupted Aravir, with an impatient tone. "Pardon me for speaking out, lord, but this tale is becoming quite hard to believe."

    "Aravir, show patience." said Cirion. "The man has been through a lot. It's no wonder if his story would baffle us who has not seen what he has." he added with a compassionate look in his eyes."

    "And you will do well to remember not to speak out of place as well, Aravir." admonished the leader of the council. "Only because I had similar trouble believing it at first will I tolerate this misstep. Daugon, forgive my impatient captain here, please continue."

    Daugon looked at the table in front of him for a while before starting to speak again.

    "Unbelievable. Unthinkable. That's what we said too. Things like this could simply not happen, could they? And when they did happen none knew what to do because of that. That came later. When they appeared right next to us the next day at dawn."

    Even with their commanders reprimand fresh in mind the rest of the gathering cast doubtful glances at the narrator.

    "There is a smaller wood close to that field, east of the road, isn't it?" The speaker was a seasoned, lean and weatherworn Gondorian in a naval captains garb.

    "How would you know that, Istdor? I thought you had only had eyes and ears for the sea since the world was made" the leader of the meeting remarked with surprise.

    "I grew up there, in the now forgotten time Ithilien was safer. When it was lost I had no home to defend so I turned to the sea. My ship is my home now, my fleet is my fief."

    The tall Gondorian nodded to Daugon as to ask him to continue his tale.

    "Yes, they had come through the woods. During the night they had marched south parallel to the road after hiding for the better part of the day after the battle with Glarions vanguard. Then they would have crossed the last stretch over open ground during the latest parts of the night where all watches are less vigilant."

    "And those cursed orcs have their night eyes like cats!"

    "So they came at us, at dawn, before we had the opportunity to gather our full strength together.



    "Lord Colfinnon was no fool though, and we took up a position close to the top of a nearby hill. It would cover us from most bombardment by their catapults. Then we would hurl ourselves over the top and on to their lines before they could work too great an evil with their siege machinery. And there we stood, again, just like Glarion had done, and waited. Our scouts on the top of the ridge reported great movement but as the sun was still low the northern side still lay shadowed and it was hard to spot anything with certainty.

    As the time passed we were starting to hope that our friends under Arador would be able to catch up. Time was working for us. With two armies we could crush those beasts between us. Then the sun rose higher and we saw the bulk of the orc army, not north but west of us, having circumvented our shielding hill. We were hearing a great deal of noises and banging of wood against wood which we could not comprehend. Admittedly, even Lord Colfinnon was puzzled and we did not react with proper haste. It turned out that the orcs had been assembling their artillery pieces."



    "Assembling? In the middle of a battle?"

    "Not in the middle of it, think of it, they held the initiative there."

    "They must have marched through the woods in that manner, there is no way you can roll catapults through a forest. But why would they wait until after rounding the hill to do it?"

    "They must have known that they had the advantage of surprise and our men would wait to attack given the previous defeat. But what I don't understand is how that artillery could be built out of nowhere like that."

    "It can be done. Think of how quickly a ships crew can patch up a punctured hull or in the worst case mount an emergency mast."

    "By orcs?"

    The conclusion left an uncomfortable silence among the gathered. Orcs did not do these things. Orcs did simply not act in this way. Again, the leader of the meeting motioned to Daugon to continue.

    "After the initial volleys, the whole orc army advanced. We braced ourselves, thinking the time had finally come to do proper, honest battle. The first line was spearmen, with metal clad shields and what looked like fairly heavy armour, not the usual rags of the orcs. They stood in a loose formation, covering behind what little stones or bushes they could find. Our archers shot at them but wasted many arrows due to their thin formation. Just as we thought they would get ready to charge they stopped again. This time, their volley ripped through our ranks like a farmer ploughing the earth, tearing up huge gaps in our ranks. The centre had both stout mariners of Pelargir and even a company of the Fountain Guard, but none of them could resist flames and hurled boulders better than any other man.



    I served on the left flank and I was able to escape thanks to that. We were not the most targeted but as the line buckled and companies routed and rallied we had our fair share of fire. We lost our commander and then decided on our own to make a ruin for it.

    I know we betrayed our oaths and should have stood and fallen. But then, I'm in good company seeing as a third or so of the army made it out together to meet up Aradors advancing relief army.

    Arador, in any case, was quite shaken by the state of our sorry lot and the rapidity of our defeat. He still pressed on though, and might have though he would take an exhausted orc horde unawares. The trouble was, loading a catapult isn't nearly as exhausting as swinging a sword while expecting to be hacked apart the next moment. The orcs were ready, I have been told, and just waiting for more of us to march into their maws."



    "Thank you, Daugon." the assembly's leader said. "As I have heard your tale twice now I can answer whatever questions my captains may have, and you may leave and please have whatever we can produce in terms of meals and refreshments."

    Daugon rose and bowed, walking stiffly down the stairs.

    "Now, the rest I have from Dinethor, lord of Amon Eithel, who as you know held overall command of the southern Ithilien army."


    "Where is lord Dinethor? I have been told that he did face the orcs in a terrible battle but still lived to tell the tale. Yet nobody seems to know any details."

    "All will be explained, Cirion."

    "Yes, please forgive my impertinence."

    "Indeed, Dinethors fate is not to be shared with anyone outside this present company. The reasons will become quite clear. But first, I should continue where Daugon left. Arador did find the orcs ready for him, now occupying the hill and ridge that they had so neatly circumvented early that day. Seeing their line of spearmen unsupported by archers in the front Arador reacted according to protocol and paused to let his archers do their work. Unfortunately his force was like the others severely outmatched in terms of ranged capabilities.



    Arador himself fell to a bolt from a ballista. So did his second and third in command, having taken up their prescribed stations next to him. Without proper leadership, fear was infecting the army and none had the stomach to sound the advance against that imposing hill. Casualties were mounting and everyone covered behind their shield waiting for the flames to stop raining.

    It was a disaster, no, this was nothing else than humiliation.



    When the orcs eventually charged and scattered the remains less than 400 escaped of an army of over 2800. The enemy casualties were by all accounts negligible, probably no more than four dozen.

    Dinethor, meanwhile, had been readying his southernmost forces near Tir Ethraid. He was met by the scattered remnants of his three northern armies. He has assured me that he did not for a moment disbelieve them, their despair was so profound and so sincere that it dispelled all possible doubt. He marched his men north immediately, with little hope except for revenge for the great shame suffered at the orcs hands."

    "But why didn't lord Dinethor call for reinforcements, now that he had had word of the magnitude of the threat the enemy posed?"

    "That he should perhaps had done. But far easier is it to realize from far away than in the moment, when the failure overwhelms you and the men under you. Dinethors force was the core, with the highest proportion of professional troops, seasoned regulars with good equipment. They marched swiftly expecting battle to be joined soon but found the orc army returning north again. Dinethor sent word for the few settlers to prepare to evacuate Ithilien in case he would fail and continued north with all speed, to catch up with the orc at every cost, to the point that he did not even stay to retake the burned shell of Ostithil that now served as an enemy encampment. And eventually they did, or if the orcs had been reinforced and turned south again. For whatever reason, both armies met in the highlands north of Ostithil.



    The highlands are as you no doubt know quite barren, with only grass and stubby bushes growing, between the occasional valley with a stream and trees around. On one such stony hill the orcs held the high ground but this actually worked in our men's' favor. For the hill was so steep that their catapults could not aim at our men below and even their archers had great trouble to aim properly, letting many arrows fly inaccurately from the sky.

    Dinethors cavalry managed to surprise the orcs and initially charged the catapults and scattered the orcs manning them. However, they soon came upon those manned by trolls, and orcs with axes and long hammers surged around them. To make matters worse, the catapults themselves acted as an effective barrier, impeding the advance of half of the companies.



    Further down, our infantry marched up in a dense column, which worked well now that they could not be hit by the enemy artillery. Dinethor had many mailed infantrymen and troops from the fleets in Pelargir and from Lossarnach, seasoned marine infantry and city guards. Their advance was a slow grind upwards, bleeding with each step, but so did the foe. Orcs with axes and bows blocked the trail, aided by the great trolls. but our men cut a path up to the plateau.



    Here the resistance stiffened and Dinethor sent his reserve cavalry and his bodyguard to break the orc lines. Their infantry was spent and almost broken, and some of them indeed turned and ran from his wrath."



    There was a deep silence in the room. None of the listeners had heard how the story truly ended.

    "The enemy then withdrew his archers, keeping our men occupied with the trolls meanwhile. A few of them seemed more eager to close in than others, it would seem that not all are trained for handling their catapults. Their strength was terrible and Dinethors ranks were thinning out dangerously. Still his men stood fast against Mordor and our own archers were sending torched arrows against the enemy, hoping to make the trolls run amok. For a time it seemed that our force might still break through but then the arrows and the clubs of the trolls were thinning out our lines more and more. Our push had lost its momentum in the blood and dirt on that now very slippery slope.



    Even in defeat, our soldiers held together to the last. For myself, I believe this to be in no small part due to lord Dinethor still being alive. But they were taking grievous losses and being forced down the hillside step by step. Lord Dinethor attempted to cover the retreat as best he could but he had his horse cut down under beneath him and fell to the ground with many wounds, being dragged along by the orc chieftains bodyguard.



    With the army broken, the enemy ran down some of our men that were retreating but luckily they lack any cavalry and their trolls, while fast, were exhausted. Dinethor has told that he was dragged to the orc chieftain himself."

    The listeners shifted uncomfortably. The notion of having a senior commander taken captive was something unheard of for decades, let alone by filthy orcs.

    "This chieftain is of course of colossal interest to us given the grief he has inflicted upon our people and our lands. I am therefore very glad that Dinethor choose to accept his offer."

    "What are you saying!? My lord, pardon me, but I know about lord Dinethor, he would never..."

    The tall officer nodded with a grim expression.

    "Contrary to previous battles, where thankfully few of our men ended up as prisoners, the orcs did spare them this time. Their chieftain sent four of Dinethors closest retainers yet alive with demands of gold for the lives of the prisoners."



    "How would they do that!?"

    "Treason!"

    "Flaming curs!"

    The collective outbursts earned each speaker a disapproving glance.

    "Have you not already grasped, gentlemen, the magnitude of this? Have not Daugons tale left at least a speck of impression on your minds that this is something we have not seen before? Be thankful that we have the knowledge that we do, and that 151 of our brothers could return home. Besides, would you rather this army was known but as the ghostly bringers of fire that it had so far been? Dinethor, while he failed, did prove that whatever the novelties of their organization and tactics the enemy is still just orcs and trolls and they die like any other."

    "With all due respect, my lord, is this perhaps not colored by the wishful thinking of the defeated?"

    An odd smile seemed to twitch in the corner of the lords mouth.

    "If our side is not to be taken as a credible source, what would you say about the other ones opinion, Aravir?"

    "Please, I do not follow you at all, my lord."

    "Believe it or not, Dinethor actually spoke of the orc chieftain commending the viciousness of our men, speaking with what seemed like pride and admiration of the fact that over 500 of his men lay dead, even though it had come at the cost of above three times that number. In his words, he was pleased to have found a whiteskin worth fighting and would not see such an opportunity wasted.

    But Dinethor is not a cur, nor a traitor, that can be flattered or intimidated by mere words. However, he did out of pride and defiance declare who he was when brought before the chieftain, and the chieftain argued that only by accepting the offer of ransoming would he be able to save the people of the now exposed and defenseless Amon Eithel from complete destruction. None other of the prisoners with ties to the town had the rank and influence that would be required to convince the people of the necessity to abandon their homes and flee west and north to Gondor proper. So Dinethor in the end sent trusted companions to ask his kin in Amon Eithel for the gold to ransom him and his men from the orcs. And that they did."



    "I do not know all that took place and what was felt or heard by those who were there. It is not my place to judge them. But whatever we may think of lord Dinethors actions it is a relief that the town was saved, for the men and women of it should not suffer for the deeds of another."

    A round of approving nods and murmur seconded the statement.

    "A noble sentiment, Cirion. Alas, it is already too late for that. Whether it was due to carelessness or treason, or simply the sight of so many families leaving hurriedly, word spread to the Haradrim tribes of the south and seeing how little of our troops were in the area a band of the Southrons mounted an attack one night. The few defenders were cut down. The town was looted.

    Dinethor arrived with a handful of retainers a few days later after hard riding and was greeted with nothing but the despair and shame of the ruined town. Do not judge Dinethor harshly. Thanks to him, we know what we are facing. And for whatever faults of his, the man has suffered enough.

    Now, it falls to us to avenge our fallen and remove this blight upon the world that takes the shape of an orc!"

    "Yes, lord Duinhir!"



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    Deployment and Battletactic sounds reasonable.... especially those raking shots are very satisfiying

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    Chapter IV - Cirion

    It was not a bad idea. Not in itself. The camps palisade was covered on the outside by densely packed earth, occasionally held together by hollow wicker pillars to give it more stability. On the inside, wooden beams set up at an angle towards the wall gave it increased support. It was in the middle of winter, or at least what was winter up in the White Mountains and the north, and after experiencing the frost of the last two nights the men had poured water over the wall which had frozen and made it even harder to dig apart or set on fire. It had been the source of much grumbling but now more than one could be found glancing at it with a proud look.

    Cirion paced restlessly along the outside of the wall. It covered a sizeable area, twice as large as the usual Gondorian camps. The camp was situated on a ridge and the ground sloped down on this northern side, which was the longest. The rectangular elongated shape allowed the defenders to take full advantage of the ridge and could also enable them to move troops from one end to the other and concentrate their forces at any location without showing it to the enemy outside. It was not a bad idea, either.

    Cirion and Aravir held command of one half each of the camp, leading a sizeable army each. It was a moment of glory for him, no doubt about that. Yet he could not dispel the doubts about whether this would not end in an inglorious and futile death as well.

    Passing the northwestern corner, Cirion nodded to the sentry. There were lookouts posted at intervals, all according to the military protocols, and scouts out in the countryside. Any orc horde should be spotted well in time for the defenders to be prepared, and then have terrible time hurling itself against the walls. There it was again. Orc horde. After the terrible testimonies of the survivors they had shared, how could this be? How could Duinhir be so blinded and how could Aravir be so thick? This was no orc horde! It was an army, more disciplined than anything seen in centuries, it was something new! Was Cirion the only one who had been listening? And while the improvements to the strategy and the encampment were all good ideas, it reflected such a fundamental and terrible ignorance of the enemy's abilities. That thing out there was not something that would be defeated by doing the same things as had been done before even better. When faced with a superior foe, you had to do something new!

    Cirion turned to follow the southern wall. It was supposed to be of equal strength as the northern one, but Ciron knew it was just slightly thinner, lower and less thoroughly built. It was just as with all the other signs. They did not take this seriously enough. As if the orcs would not have the wits to move to the southern side? Why even bother with a southern wall in that case? Or why not have just a palisade if you thought the mere look of any kind of wall would deter them from moving their catapults around? Coming to the southern gate, Cirion nodded to the guards.

    "Still no word of Duinhir?"

    "None, captain. A courier did arrive close to an hour ago but did not appear to bear dire news judging by his demeanor. You will find him near the command tent I think."

    "Very good."

    Duinhir, holding overall command, was not here. What a twisted jest it was. To Amon Eithel he had gone. Amon Eithel! A provincial small town in the disputed nothingness that was Harondor, the borderlands between Gondor and Harad. With neither resources nor strong fortifications or strategic position to warrant even half the attention that was now lavished on it. All for the fact that Dinethor, the brave and stalwart commander who even Cirion agreed had given his all, hailed from it and had seen it ruined as a final act of torment upon him. It was not completely without reason, certainly not. Some kind of ofrce needed to patrol the southern border to watch for more Haradrim surprises and prevent any such incursions to jeopardize the operations of the larger and much more important northern army sent to face the orcs. But not a third of the forces, including the commander and several of the most elite troops, not least among them the archers of the Blackroot Vale, which could possibly prove to be of key value for bringing down those trolls!

    Maybe, just maybe, Cirion thought as he walked up towards the command post, the orcs will do everything we hope and will sit on their asses waiting for us to gather and assemble at our own sweet pace. Maybe...

    The courier was a middle aged, short and broad Gondorian showing clear traces of Lossarnach blood. He saluted as Cirion approached.

    "Captain, I was sent from lord Duinhir to report that Amon Eithel has been reclaimed. The army has detached parts of it to watch the border while the main force march north."

    "And how soon can they be here?"

    "Twelve days at most, captain."

    Twelve days... Twelve unsure days of dreadful waiting at best. At worst...

    "Thank you. We will be happy to join forces with Lord Duinhir. See yourself to the mess tents and get yourself something to eat."

    Cirion spoke absent-mindedly. Something had caught his attention. A patrol was riding in from the northern side, with great speed. Too great. From the distance he could not hear their calls to the guard at the main gate but he hardly needed the confirmation that quickly followed with the ringing of the bells in any case.

    "They're here..."



    The ball of fire rose like a tiny spark far away. It turned towards the spectators and appeared to hang still on the wall that was the cloudy sky, not really moving but growing in size. Then, as if deciding that it had become great and terrifying enough, it started its descent, as if eyeing the ground for an unfortunate prey to fall upon. Finally, as it closed in, its speed appeared as if multiplied and it crashed with terrifying force into a stand of spears next to a tent. It went up in a cascade of flames, and burning fragments sprayed nearby tents which started to smoke uncomfortably much.

    Cirion willed himself to look away from the spectacle of falling fire. It was transfixing, no, it was simply hypnotic.

    "Put that tent out! And clear that lane of debris!"


    Fire breaks were maintained between the blocks of tents, kept clean of everything that could catch fire by the efforts of the soldiers on watch. The rest were catching some uneasy hours of rest behind the wall, propped up against it like travelers seeking shelter behind a large rock or a fallen tree.

    The walls did their part. Unfortunately, nothing could prevent the orcs from simply overshooting the wall and set the tents, supplies, wagons and whatever else they could hit on fire inside the walls. The position on the top of the ridge ensured that any projectile passing over the wall had a good chance of hitting the ground rather than overshooting the camp. Cirion considered briefly whether it would have not been wiser to position the camp on a downward slope for that reason, but then scolded himself. He was thinking like the rest of his commanders. The enemy would only have to move to a different side to be able to fire directly into the hillside with nearly no chance of missing.

    New volleys soared over the walls. Cirion watched for new fires to put out while catching the sight of messengers relaying news along the wall. Since they intended to keep as few as possible out in the open, messages were delivered from hand to hand among the soldiers huddling behind the wall. At least we do not shout our letters out, Cirion thought ironically, like a twisted version of the children's game where a group of them relay a message by whispering it to the next to see how distorted the message will finally become when reaching the last one in the chain. The letter from Aravir was short.

    "Meet me at the gate after sunset. Those artillery crews should have a harder time picking a target by then.

    Aravir"

    Cirion eyed the message again and wondered if Aravirs western side had fared as badly as the eastern one. In the corner of his eye he noticed a group of soot-blackened soldiers carrying a pair of stretchers towards the medical tents. Cirion noted with a sickening realization the blackened stump hanging limp from one of them which had hours ago been the leg of the unfortunate man. Suddenly it occurred to him that this was indeed odd to bring the wounded back when the healthy crouched behind the walls for cover. Why did they keep doing that? He had given no specific orders about it, he realized, nor regarding the supplies and camp followers. Couldn't they think for themselves? He breathed in to call out an order to move them all when he felt and heard a new volley of fireballs passing over the wall. Close to him. Too close.

    The medical tent!

    Cirion closed his eyes, knowing that all hopes and prayers for a near miss were in vain. He heard with heart wrenching clarity the impact, the initial smash of the boulder against the cracking tent poles and the ground, and the ignition of the flammable substances it was impregnated with, now reacting with the fresh dose of air that had come in contact with more of the thing after the impact sent it splashing around, and the cries of terror and anguish of the luckless soldiers burning to their deaths, wounded and caretaker alike.

    Aravir had better have something good to share.



    The firing had died down now. There was only occasional shots, still enough to keep everyone on edge and keeping them all from a good nights sleep. However, the darkness hid perfectly the black armour of the orcs and they had sent forth archers that scouted in the dark, their night vision making it easy task, and would shoot at anyone showing their silhouette against the light of a torch or the dying fires from the tarred boulder and debris set aflame by the previous bombardment. There had only been a few men hit by arrows but their presence added yet another thing to watch for and worry about. It was depressing, how downtrodden the Gondorian spirit had become. Usually, the camp was supposed to be lit up from the torches at the prescribed interval, signifying that this was the army of the realm bringing light into the darkness and not the other way around. The present state felt like fugitives hiding in the shadows, scurrying from cover to cover.

    Cirion was making his way along the wall with two bodyguards, one going ahead and one behind holding a shield on his right arm against any unseen arrows. They passed the breaches after waiting to listen and look out in the darkness, Cirion running first across, to take advantage of the surprise. So far, neither he nor his retainers had been shot at but the whistling of arrows could be heard now and then, invisible in the night.

    The gate was at a small decline, a kind of hole which would make an enemy breaching it have a difficult time pressing forward up the slope if the defenders held with sufficient numbers. It also made it somewhat more difficult to hit with a catapult than the rest of the wall. It was a good place to meet. Aravir was waiting with a dozen of guards. Cirions mood brightened somewhat. It was good to see the others alive, despite all that had happened.

    "Cirion. How have you been?"

    "We...have more cooking fires now. And you?"

    Aravir looked into his eyes and nodded grimly, confirming the grave situation that they both tried to maintain control over in their minds.

    "They have hit us hard initially. I think they put much effort into breaking down the morale of our men with this initial firestorm, so they may entrench themselves outside and set up their encampments unmolested." Aravir continued.

    "Well, I can not argue with the effects, however much I would like to say that our men are eager to retaliate with righteous fury. The morale is shaky, to say the least."

    "None of us were prepared for this, that is true. What do you think their next move will be?"

    "As you said, fortification. Then they will continue their barrage tomorrow and the coming night until our walls are completely broken. By then our men will have had close to no rest for over two full days and who knows how much of our supplies will be left? Then the trolls will come for us."

    "Come, I want to show you something."

    Aravir signed to one of his guards who approached them carrying a sack. He emptied it upside down, the contents proving to be seemingly uninteresting pieces of wood.

    "Wood, Aravir?"

    Cirions skepticism was written plainly in his features and caused Aravir to almost smile.

    "Wood indeed, my good sir. No, listen, I know this might sound far-fetched but I have a conclusion I want to share. You were always the better of us at reasoning about things. My men have been able to find these remnants of the enemy projectiles, shattered as they were but not drenched in flaming liquids like the ones earlier today. You see where I'm going here?"

    Cirion nodded slowly.

    "So I reason to myself like this; why do they start throwing pieces of wood at us? They must be after the resin of the pines outside. That stuff can burn even before you cook pitch and stuff from it, and if they had been slicing up enough trees early today they might have been able to cut and prepare these smoldering wooden stubs to throw at us. Still enough to set our tents aflame but they wont do too much against the walls anymore."

    "I'm with you there. They're conserving their stones now, and preparing replacements from the material at hand."

    "So, you see?! They are running out! We've outlasted them, Cirion! The scum thought they could break us with this night of burning hellishness and damn it, we have been bloodied but we ain't broken yet!"

    Aravir was good at this, Cirion knew. He could see soldiers from both of their companies standing straighter and nodding.

    "It will take more than that to bring us down, captain!"

    "Come morning, we will show those monsters what true Gondorians are made of!"

    "They'll taste our steel!"

    "And bloody choke on it!"

    Cirion suddenly had an ill feeling about the situation. They were all acting as if something had been decided, in everyone's heart at least, and now only awaited the confirmation, not to say formality, of an explicit order to carry it out. He looked at Aravir, who thrived seeing his men's confidence rise as they did seeing his. That was Aravirs great strength, his ability to inspire. Not by words, but by his presence and the absolute conviction is his voice when he had set his mind upon some grand enterprise. But now his strength was betraying his reason.

    "Aravir, I agree with you about the orcs conserving their ammunition. But I'm not so sure about the conclusion you come to. How do we know they have run out of their normal stones? Wouldn't it be prudent to save enough to repel a sally if you were in the orcs' position?"

    "Perhaps, yes, but as you agree they have put everything they have in their initial push to utterly shatter us tonight."

    "No, I am the first to agree that they have almost succeeded with doing that, but that is not the same as them having used up every last stick and stone to do so. We don't know anything about what reserves they might have kept."

    "You give them far too much credit, Cirion, they are creatures of a single mind, they set their thoughts on one and only one thing at a time..."

    Cirion despaired inside. Not this. Not this again. This scourge, this sickness of his people! They had lost half their camp, by all that they held sacred what would it take to make his people take these orcs seriously?! Over four crushing defeats had been inflicted by this very foe that now laid siege to them and still they turned themselves blind to all things but those that fit their predetermined conclusion that the orcs were mindless savages that would be swept away if only good honest men would just spit in their hands and get to work. What in all of the world would it take for them to learn?



    Dawn was breaking. The time of the orcs was passing, the time of men arriving. Or so we would like to think, Cirion said to himself. He was standing on a small platform behind the wall closest to the gate, a risky position but one that allowed him to view the field outside and sign and signal to his officers further back. Aravir and his men were lining up now, pressed together to find as much cover as possible. Cirions half of the force was waiting further away, dispersed to lessen the impact of bombardment. He was moved by their determination. After enduring that indescribable night, they still lined up to do their duty and would stride out in the face of an enemy commanding mountain trolls. Maybe Aravir had been right after all. Cirion had tried to dissuade him for almost an hour, then leaving the meeting with an angry confirmation that he would do his part the next day and even managed to steal a few hours of sleep. It was astounding what one could get used to, sleeping through fire falling from the sky as if it was mere thunder in the sky.

    The passage through the gate was the most critical moment. If the enemy had ammunition left the gate would be their funeral pyre. Of course it was not the whole force, just enough to fix the enemy's attention. The bulk of their army would sally through the other gates and then form up in front of the camp and attack immediately after that. They had debated gathering behind the entire camp but one way or another the army would need to approach the orcs and the safest way would be in a scattered way, but not so close as to provoke a charge by their trolls against one isolated group. It was a complicated move, coordinating the movement of three separate groups, but if it worked the enemy would not have little time to fire before they were ready to charge ahead. Once they had reached the infernal machinery the Gondorian numbers and equipment would decide the battle.

    The militia hurried through he doors, throwing frightened glances to their sides and ahead. The regular troops were steady, but walked with haste still. Their armour made them feel safe but their rationality ensured them they were not. Still, the sky was quiet. The morning was misty but surely the sounds of the rallying of Gondorians would be heard. Cirion saw the advance guard form up. They were ready. Now they just had to await the reinforcing columns from the sides. Still, the morning was eerily quiet.

    Cirion had started to count the time but had been interrupted thrice by the preparations of his own half of the force, reinforcements to sally out once the gate was secure and there was space enough. He suspected he would have reached several hundreds by now, but there was the tramping of the other two columns! They marched with pride around the camps corners like a parade and linked up flawlessly with the centre. His mood soared. Maybe Aravir was right after all. They had not been fired on. Perhaps the orcs had run out and were even breaking the siege? Now came the orders for the general advance. Horns were sounded among the companies, and the rest remaining behind the walls took it up as well. The Gondorian army marched forward.

    Orcs rose from the ground.

    It was a loose line of spearmen, Cirion could see. They had shoelds of medium size, and seemed covered head to toe in armor. Anything else was hard to make out at this distance. The troops outside hesistated for a moment but then raised shields and marched on with determination. They would sweep away those few adversaries in minutes, thick armor or not. Why were they there, Cirion wondered. They would only halt the enemy for a short time on their own. What would be the point of sacrificing a company for that?

    The answer came to him as the first fireballs rose through the air.


    Cirion heard yells of dismay and fear, fury over the disappointment. Aravir bawled orders to continue and waved the formations ahead with his spear. It was time for Cirions reinforcements to sally out to reinforce, and he raised his hand to sign for an advance. Still, he hesitated. This was wrong. The orcs had not been surprised by the sally, in fact they had surprised the sallying garrison. Still they had waited until the garrison had come clear of the gate, where they might have crushed all units coming through it out...or in.

    Cirion hurled every curse and insult known to him at himself. The orcs had spotted their scattered advance, and therefore waited until they had gathered again in one spot. And if, if Aravir could not break through now, his troops would rout in panic and trample over each other to reach the closest gate, the central one, blocking the way for Cirions men and each other. Then the orcs would fire into their backs...

    What if he sallied out quick enough? No, just one or two of their catapult companies could keep the gate under continuous fire. His troops would never make it out in good enough shape to be useful. They depended on Aravir closing in to silence that artillery first. Then he must hold off the trolls until Cirion could reinforce him.

    The militia was breaking through the spearmen now. But there were terrible, burning holes in their ranks. Cirion could smell the flesh burning now. The mist was lifting, being driven by a light breeze. He could see the orc army now, impeccably ordered among the sparse trees ahead of Aravirs forces. The trolls towered over the rest of them.

    They would never break through this. Cirion lowered his hand.





    The night was not dark as the black of an autumn night, more of a dark blue. The moon shone faintly over the treetops but Cirion still felt as if he was alone with his little patch of light from his torch in a world of dim forms and void. Was this how the dwarves felt, alone in their tunnels and shafts? He remembered every ghost story and frightening tavern patrons tale of the orcs night vision, eyes of cats and ears of foxes, smelling the fear of a lonely human. But he was still also far too close to his own lines. The soldiers were loyal but no simpletons. He was not were he was supposed or expected to be. That was damned true. He was not at all supposed to be out here, no good Gondorian should! It was a waste of good men's lives and when left with no way out, who could blame a capable man for forging a new path, the only path, out? Was it not truly the men who put their subordinates in such impossible circumstances who should be held accountable for the consequences?

    The day should have come with relief, but all had turned to despair now. The mist had cleared completely and the field, littered with burned and crushed bodies, was mercilessly visible. Cirion had dispersed his half of the force along with what remained of Aravirs, to decrease the impact of the catapults. Aravir was gone. Cirion missed him deeply. Aravir would have known what to say. He would have known how to set an example that restored the spirit of the camp. Aravir got things done and Cirion knew what things to do. That was how it should have been. If Aravir had only listened to him. Or if he had only thought about this. If that would have mattered? The orcs had catapults and ammunition and plenty of it and that was that. Which Cirion had also warned about. Although, if they had sallied out through the other gates and retreated? Could they have done that? Maybe. But they would have been caught in the open by those long-legged trolls. And been without supplies. But if Duinhir was close, they would only need a few days rations each.

    Cirion mentally pushed all thoughts out of his head. Or at least made an attempt. His mind was going around in circles when he should focus on the situation at hand. He had rallied those few that still showed any sign of spirit and the few horses, his own Stripes included, not injured or frightened into uselessness and organized a sortie to scout the surroundings. If there was anything Mordor lacked it was cavalry, and if they just kept their eyes open most should be able to avoid the enemy patrols. Most of them Cirion had sent south to determine where Duinhir was and bring the news of what had happened to him. The lesser part he had sent nort and west towards the enemy, with orders to scout the positions and for signs of reinforcements. He himself, along with the fewest, had fanned out east, with Cirion taking the northernmost trail.

    It would bring him dangerously close to the enemy positions.

    The road turned coming around a small hill with rocks and scattered pines. It would do, Cirion thought. The rocks would make a better cover than the trees and the ground would be easier to clear. He now had to make the first hard choice of the night; bring his horse with him, risking injuries from a misstep in the dark, or leave Stripes at the foot and run the risk of discovery from the whinnying that the loneliness and the sounds of the forest would surely provoke. Cirion decided in favor of the former. Dismounting, he squinted his eyes and attempted to make as good a guess as possible of where the path held the least of sharp rocks and treacherous holes and slopes.



    The flagpole was the easiest part. Binding two branches together with a cord was the most menial task imaginable for the lowest of camp followers and even in the dim light it was something he could do properly without thinking. The painting was the harder thing. Cursing himself, Cirion had realized that he had brought no paintbrush or anything else to serve in ones stead. After trying in vain to carve the odd tree branch into a useful tool he had settled for cutting a part of his cloak and rolling it around a short stick, serving as the crudest of pencils. Although, considering the motif in this case, crudeness was not out of place.

    North of the small hill were a small plain with bushes and shrubberies. But it was flat ground. On the other side, further north, were another hill without trees with dense forest to the east side. Cirion choose to follow close to the rim, but not the highest path lest he would be seen against the sky. It was almost peaceful. There would probably be trails to be found in the daylight here, and birds to be heard. Ithilien was a fair country. It was a country worth protecting... Cirion stopped. He had not yet gone anywhere else than into the wilderness. Should he turn around? He could still go back... Back to what? Certain death, no doubt. He would never see Ithilien again, or any other part of the world. No, he would not give in to that. He would live.The road was close now. It was deserted, of course. Anyone with the slightest sense would have left before those damned orcs came.

    There was a rustle to his left. Something whished in the air and impacted on Stripes. The horse stumbled and cried out in pain, making it a few steps more before falling. Cirion threw himself out of the saddle and nearly made it. His right leg got caught on whatever is was in the dark, and he felt something hard of the saddle bite into it. Worse, the sudden stop jerked him off balance and he landed heavily with the air knocked out of his lungs, instead of rolling to deflect the force of the impact.

    Shapes in the dark approached.

    Cirion felt something smash into the back of his head. It was not enough to knock him unconscious but the pain made his head spin and he collapsed to the ground. He felt sick and imagined his helmet ringing like a bell. Strong arm heaved him off the ground and started to drag him along the road into the dark. Cirion turned his head to the left and could see more of the dark shapes. They were orcs, carrying bows and clad in black or dark grey plate armour of some sort. His guess would be that they were uruks, the strongest and darkest of the orcs of Mordor. There were perhaps a dozen standing guard near the road.


    Cirion had counted to four hundred and seventy when they arrived at the orc camp. Its sides were marked by tangled fences and ditches, far from the stout palisades and moats of a proper Gondorian camp. However, it seemed as it some of the siege machinery and what seemed like timber or spare parts were stored along the perimeter too, acting as improvised walls. Cirions captors dragged him with his feet bouncing against the ground towards the middle, where some tents were set up and torches were erected. The smell of cooked meat was notable. Cirion did not want to guess what kind of meat it was. As if by an invisible sign, the two orcs dragging him let go of his arms and he fell with his nose into the ground. Cirion clenched his jaws and crawled back up. He would not face the orcs prostrated on the ground like a slave. Another uruk in black armour stood before him. He had a shield hanging on his back, and carried a sword and daggers in his belt. Otherwise his amour was similar to that of the scouts except the helmet which was slightly lighter and metallic rather than black. It had a row of spikes protruding out of it. The orc chieftain, as Cirion guessed he must be, motioned towards something on the ground and Cirion turned his head to see that there were some thick logs set up, no doubt acting as benches. He sat down, warily eyeing the orc who now began to speak in a deep voice. It was the common tongue, and understandable, although without any beauty of a human voice and melody.

    "You, my friend, are lucky I have wanted guests from your fine camp for a long time. I think we will have plenty to talk about, in fact I am quite sure about that you have many things you would like to share with me. Is that not so, whiteskin?

    "Why do you call us that? Shouldn't it be pinkskin, or brownskin, if you refer to the men of the south?"

    The orc chieftain let out a deep laugh.

    "HA! Of all the things to say! Is that what you have been yearning to ask one of the hated black chieftains if you ever met him? Look around you then, whiteskin, and remember what kind of company you're in. Believe me, when your people are close enough to see clearly, there's naught but white left in 'em. And now, I believe it's my turn to ask, and your turn to answer. We would not want our conversation to end too quickly, would we?

    "Wait, wait now... I did not come here as a scout, I came to treat with you. Look at my banner! Didn't your sentries see it?"

    The orc made a sharp gesture towards of his retainers who presented the black cloak painted with the eye of Sauron, except in white paint instead of the customary red of the dark lords servants. The orc chieftain laughed again.

    "Hohohoha! But pardon me, brother and kinsman, for I thought for a moment you were of our enemy! Say, what tribe is it you belong to, the blind eye? The eye whites? The dark lord must be flattered to be portrayed like that, mustn't he? The chieftain continued laughing.

    "In any case, it did still work since I am here and wasn't shot."

    The orc eyed Cirion with what seemed to be an amused look.

    "A word of advice, whiteskin, if you want your banner to be first someone sees you should garb yourself in something else than polished plate that shines from a mile away. Also, my scouts don't stand in the middle of the road, they watch from the sides, so holding a flag in front of you all the time won't do you much good. But as I said, they had orders to bring me a guest. And now, what can you tell me about your esteemed friends back at your camp? How many are there left inside, for example?"

    Cirions mind raced. Here it came, the point where he would have to tread on a slippery line between withholding and revealing too much of his knowledge.

    "Our side took heavy casualties, that is true. But you did spring your trap a tad bit early, I must say, and only caught the vanguard, the arrow fodder. Or catapult fodder if you like."

    The orc made a show of mock bafflement.

    "Is that so? It appears I have been outgeneraled, it does, by you fine fellows in the camp then. So tell me, what is your next master stroke? I suppose the crumbling of your little walls is just another clever ruse, to goad careless little uruks into some heinous trap?"

    "Actually we don't need one. Duinhir, lord of Blackroot Vale, is on his way and will be here in perhaps as little as a day. We "fine fellows" just need to stay put until he charges from the rear to squash you like an overripe plum against us."

    A cold and contemptuous glare revealed how much impression Cirions threat had made.

    "If you wanna try to bargain, you better learn how to lie without smelling like a whelp who's just stolen the biggest grease stick he could carry. As for your little lord, I know he will come. I know also that he will hurry, trying to save your sorry lot from roasting in the fireplace. So much in fact, that he might not be too careful about who or what he runs into on the road to get here. So before I spit you over the fire here and then burn down your pathetic little palisade, is there anything else you have to say, whiteskin?"

    "You...you are wasting your time! Why do you want to spend your shots on tearing down reinforced field fortifications when you could have the army out in the field just like the van? I can give you that. For a price. What do you say?"

    "I say that you bore me, whiteskin. I will broker no agreement with you, you little maggot, unless you cough up something better than those fancy tales. Go back to your camp and await the end that is in store for you. However, if the remaining army sallies out and if the captain then would keep it stacked in the centre to the point where I don't have to waste as many of my shots on that scum as I otherwise would, that captain would do well to keep his right wing weak and stay with it. The he might live long enough to surrender to me. Now get the hell out of my camp!" the orc chieftain growled and waved with his gauntleted hand as if entirely dismissing the most unimportant of matters.

    Cirion walked out of the camp with a knot in his stomach, between rows of orcs that eyed him maliciously and jeered, with looks promising both swift deaths for him and a tasty meal for the orcs, but he was not stopped. They will breakfast well enough on Stripes, Cirion thought bitterly as he trekked back through the woods the same way as he had come.



    It was easy to lie. Cirion had never lied for real since he was a child, not counting occasional half-truths to defuse a socially awkward situation. But this was an all-out deception, with his life at stake. And...he just had to tell the truth about the ambush and about the road he had taken on foot back, omitting the smaller details about where and in whose company he had been in between. His men nodded to him, showing their condolence over a comrades rotten luck and the loss of a trusted mount. Cirion burned with shame inside. It was for the better, he told himself. At least some would be able to be saved now. He straightened and called out to his officers to gather around him.

    Then he gave the order to break camp.

    The preparations went surprisingly well. Only a few ballista bolts flew into the camp and none were killed although two were severely maimed. Perhaps the orcs had spent their ammunition after all, or perhaps they were so lulled by the failed sally and , by all means, his own pitiful appearance before their chieftain that they did not deem the increased activity worthy of any greater concern. Had he fooled them, Cirion asked himself. Was his traitorous night visit what really had been needed to deliver them all? He would not have to be a traitor! He wasn't! He could hold his head high, really, among the other captains of Gondor and fathers and mothers of the realm would thank him for their sons' lives. Now the south and east gates were opened.

    The pikemen were the advance guard. They could form a dense spear wall to keep the enemy at bay while the rest of he army deployed. The professional cavalry followed, ready to strike at advancing elements of the enemy that would stray ahead of his formation. The came the militia regiments, his stout countrymen who had taken up arms for others when danger threatened. The sun shone and the snow glittered like glass. If there ever was weather that was the humans and not the orcs it was now. Cirion briefly conjured a vengeful image in his mind of uruks sweating under the sun and squinting their eyes, blinded by the light from the sky and the snow. The army was out now. The infirm and the most necessary supplies followed, coming out into the middle of the formation. Still no sight of the enemy. They would make it out of this!

    Cirion saw the vanguard lengthen their stride to scout ahead of the army and be able to give the followers more space. They were coming up on the large ridge south of the camp, a nice plateau with a fine view of the northern road. Cirion saw them halt and form up. It was a bit early for that, he thought. Then he noticed the outriders galloping back, far too fast...

    "Nooo..." Cirion whispered. He looked around. They were still in a column but not terribly strung out. They could perhaps make it back to the fort. And then what? No, there was no use going back.

    "Form a line!" Cirion shouted and spurred his horse.

    The right wing. The right wing, he had said.


    The lead element of Cirions army was a company of marine archers of Pelargir. Along with a small group of rangers they were the only missile troops he had to contend with the Orcish artillery. The enemy lead element were the armoured spearmen that had blocked Aravirs army. Cirion thought it incredulous that they would consent to take up the same risky, no, suicidal position as in the previous battle.

    He reined in along with his bodyguards of a dozen riders, so few were there in his force. The main cavalry push should come from the left, where the regular Gondorian cavalry had taken up position. Fireballs were crashing down into the pikemen and militia in the centre now. They left deep burned tracks in his ranks, like wagons in a muddy road or a farmers plow in the earth. Men walked over or across the sizzling corpses of their friends, sometimes even family. Militia regiments tended to be divided together based on their origin and many units took pride in representing their town or their village in the struggle for Gondors survival. They were losing too many...

    Now the cavalry charged. A second line of spearmen braced but without the help of a densely packed formation they were run over. At the same time, the main enemy formations let loose showers of arrows, hundreds of the black clad archers targeting the horses that were without armour. The charge faltered and lost its momentum. Scattered riders and riderless terrified horsed crashed into the catapults and orc infantry. Cirion sighed. The cavalry was the best striking arm they had. He looked out over the infantry, hearing the screams and the crashes of boulders falling into the ground. It was too far to shout and too slow to send an officer but he raised his spear and waved it forwards and backwards to his side as a sign that they must spread out. He saw some soldiers here and there look up towards him and point and shout to their comrades around them. The companies started moving... Backwards. They shuffled back faster and faster and not to the side. Then one turned around, Then the next, and the next. The companies at the front wavered, and the panic spread outwards from the points of origin. Now the first soldiers started to run. The rear ranks melted as the soldiers left, seeming as if bricks gradually transformed into grains of sand. The rout was a fact.

    Cirion bowed his head and shook it. The fools. Maybe they would stand a better chance making it home alone like this. But the wounded would not.

    This was it. Cirion turned to his bodyguard.

    "We are done here. Ride and take what wounded your horses can carry behind you. Ride and warn lord Duinhir of what's coming."

    "Captain, what about you?"

    "I have one last ride left here today. It might even buy you some time."

    Taemes, the grizzled commanding sergeant of the guard, rode forward.

    "With all respect, my captain, were you go so will we."

    "Taemes..."

    "Besides, a lone rider will not give them pause. A dozen may, though. It will be something of worth to give our lives for. It has been an honour, captain Cirion."

    There would be no other way out of this, Cirion saw. He nodded and turned his horse.



    100 paces. 90 paces. 80. They were raising their bows. 70. Cirion straightened in the saddle. His mount hesitated but the instinct to run with the others was stronger. 60. He pulled the reins towards him. He was dropping back, falling behind the others. 50. The horse slowed down and turned its head angrily left and right, scared and frustrated of the situation as well as not being allowed to follow the rest of the herd. 40 paces. Now the orcs let loose their volley. Cirion saw his brothers in arms fall and smash brutally against the ground as their unarmoured and terribly vulnerable mounts were shot down underneath them. He reined in completely, his own horse shuddering and eyes shifting this way and that in fear. Not knowing anything better to do, Cirion dismounted. The enemy was closing in on him, bows raised. Cirion swallowed and unbuckled his sword belt. He lifted the scabbard up in the air for all to see, then slowly lowered it to the ground. Then he continued towards the enemy, leading the horse instead of riding it and hoped it would be enough to show his peaceful intentions.

    "I am Cirion! I have met with your chieftain, and would speak with him ag..."

    Cirion had no opportunity to finish the sentence as an Uruk fist knocked the air out of his stomach. He staggered and leaned forward from the impact, only to be met by a knee in the chest that knocked him backwards down on the ground. Two uruks promptly lifted him up by his arms and started to drag him back to the rest of the orcs. A familiar voice greeted Cirion as they neared the black lines of infantry.

    "Well, well, aren't we about to make it a habit of dragging lost strays into our midst? Let him go, boys, I know this one. My esteemed guest graces me with another visit."

    Cirion, for the second time since the day before, crawled back up from the ground. The orc chieftain continued his mock welcoming.

    "Last time I believe we spoke regarding this little affair on the fields here today which I must admit has been concluded amiably, while admittedly not in the way I planned. So, do we have more business with each other, whiteskin?"

    "You...you got what you wanted. You have the field. Now let me go."

    The orc let out a laugh.

    "Who's stopping you, whiteskin? You have my most humble and express permission to leave!" he said and waved magnanimously with his arm across the field. "Truly, the glorious nation of Mordor thanks you for your assistance!"

    Cirion paused. Now what? Was the orc just toying with him or did he really intend to let him go like that? More importantly, did he even have anywhere to go?

    "Not too eager to part ways yet, huh? Intending to sign up for the army? We do have some open spots presently."

    Cirion felt almost as if he was watching himself from a distance as he took a breath and opened his mouth.

    "Yes. Yes, I'm joining you."

    The orc chieftain stopped, baffled by his answer, the same being true about the nearest orcs who had listened to the conversation with much amusement. Then he let out another booming laugh.

    "Excellent! Welcome aboard, whiteskin! However, we can not let just any one fortune seeker join our glorious company. Have to keep the standards up. So I will require a tiny bit of a test of your seriousness here. Come on!"

    The orc gestured for Cirion to follow. They walked just a short bit to where Cirions comrades lay dead along with their horses.

    Only, Cirion saw now that they were not all dead.

    Taemes.

    He had a sickening feeling of what awaited him.

    "So! A minor task not new to a seasoned veteran like yourself! Finish him."

    Cirion could not think. Taemes was barely conscious. His armour seemed to be staved in, in some way. His face was bloody. But Taemes was Taemes. He was a man to look up to, he had been duty and loyalty incarnate. He had followed Cirion to the death. He had deserved better. Cirion could not will himself to move.

    He felt someone come up closer to him from behind.

    "You're running out of time, whiteskin" the orc chieftain almost whispered. "If it helps you, do you think the man would prefer a clean cut or to end as the plaything of my boys for knowledge of your armies whereabouts? Or by roasting in his own armour for their amusement?"

    Cirion shuddered, as if having just woken up. He was ready to threw up. He looked again at Taemes, then he closed his eyes and took a step forward. Then another one.

    Taemes still had his sword and knife in his belt, having fallen before he had been able to use his lance. It was a quick act. Cirion hoped it was quick. It could never be called clean. Then he fell over and threw up all he had ever eaten in snow. He vaguely heard the orc chieftains laughter.

    "That's more like it! Fall in line, whiteskin recruit!"

    Cirion turned around and grasped a handful of snow. He took a bite of it and spat it out, hoping it would clean his mouth somewhat.

    The orc chieftain gestured towards the army which was preparing to move back to the camp. The majority of the orcs were busy looting the dead and stripping the human corpses of clothes and armour.

    "Feel free to join our grand feast to celebrate these victories. But, oh, it occurs to me that we have little need of a cavalryman for the moment. So I'm afraid that you will have to use those legs in the future." With one swift motion the orc chieftain drew his sword and sliced through the throat of Cirions horse. It whinnied in terror and collapsed to the ground, the life flowing out and seeping into the snow. "Besides, I have been told that your kind might not favor the main dish of tonight" the chieftain concluded.
    Cirion wished at that moment that he had just charged to his death with the others. If only not to have to hear that abominable laughter.

    "Who are you?"

    The orc chieftain turned around.

    "I am Malthur!" he said, suddenly without a trace of cheerfulness or taunting.

    "I am Cirion." And I have survived, he added to himself.

    "Cirion." the orc nodded. Then, as if something immensely amusing had occured to him, he added: "My own Black Numenorian!"


    Cirion did not know what that was supposed to mean. He had no blood ties to the houses that became the corsairs of Umbar as far as he know and he was quite sure no orc would have the slightest interest in the ancestry of Gondorian houses. He knew only that he was alive and he did not intend to give up yet. Even if it meant spending the day butchering the carcass of his horse with a belt knife looted from the corpse of his former brothers in arms.

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    Chapter V - Gondors Southern Lands

    Malthur watched the columns of orcs and trolls tramp beneath the stone he was standing on. The snow was beginning to give way to spring mud. It would slow them all down but his enemies equally so. Perhaps their cavalry could use it to their advantage if the followed the untrodden plains beside the roads but they could not do much on their own when he had trolls to counter them. Besides, his infantry had proven that they could handle cavalry, at least if they had the catapults and ballistae to take cover behind.

    It was three weeks since the battle against Cirions army, as he liked to call it. He had expected this Duinhir to appear by now. It was about time they acquire some new meat... In place of a good battle with the Gondorian chief, Malthur had settled for at least raiding their southern outpost in Ithilien, Tir Ethraid. The town would hold supplies that he was starting to need desperately. They might also use it as a camp when awaiting reinforcements and ammunition from Mordor. There had been some costs and while Cirions people had apparently underestimated his supplies of stones the battles had taken their toll.



    Tir Ethraid had wooden walls. It would not stand long against catapults. The trick would be more in the manner of taking the town before some would-be hero of the garrison thought of torching the supplies. There would always be the garrison in itself of course, but such meat did not last long, as welcome as it was.

    A larger part of the defending force had been crushed a couple of days earlier in the field. They had assaulted the orcs position from a disadvantageous upward slope where they did neither have the benefit of cover or a particularly good line of fire.



    After the grand success earlier this meager siege was unsatisfactory. Malthur would have much preferred going on chewing off chunks of Gondors finest, but he did not have the resources yet. And the goal should be Minas Tirith, not these worthless plains. If anything, they could try leveling Osgiliath completely and roll the stone into the river to cross on. Then his catapults could show those Pelargir maggots who was master of the place. On the other hand, being stuck as some kind of coastal patrol while all the others had the plunder wasn't a very attractive prospect.

    The town ahead was ringing bells and sounding horns. Worthless. What were they expecting, that an allied army nearby would be too lazy to spot the orcs on its own? Much help one would have from such allies! It would only be a matter of hours now. The catapults were already assembled and were being rolled in the front towards the walls. The crews had orders to focus on one section of the wall exclusively and the infantry to advance on the sides of the corridor of fire, without stopping. With a bit of luck the enemy would be excited about the chance to shoot a few arrows into his infantry and not take their time to fall back and scorch the earth, well, scorch the granary at least.

    That granary. There should have been wagonloads being carted to him since long now. Bread and biscuits from the lake Nurnen where countless thralls tended the fields with the ashes of Mount Doom usually falling like a gentle rain from the sky. It was said to make the earth better for planting things, stupid as it sounded. Malthur didn't really care, as long as the fruits of the labor ended up under the gaze of his quartermasters. But that was the thing not happening at present. He had sent five waves of messengers north to request supplies and reinforcements. Nothing had come back.



    Tir Ethraid was in shambles. The town had not been leveled to the ground or burnt, but the aggressive search for food and ransacking by the orcs had damaged most buildings and the sturdier ones had been stripped for spare material for the catapults and supply train. The inhabitants that had been spared, or perhaps it would be more aptly called saved until later, huddled in the far side of the town and watched with growing relief as the orcs packed their belongings to march out. The army would march north again, and root out whatever little filth of bandits or deserters that prevented the messages and reinforcements to come through. There was a peculiar whiteskin expression for this sort of thing that Cirion had used once; getting to the bottom of something. Malthur thought it was a flaming stupid thing to say for a people who prided themselves of being such great seafarers. They would want to avoid ending up on the bottom at all costs, wouldn't they?

    The first part of the road would be safest, both because they had travelled it recently and because the terrain was open, with only a smaller hilly area on the northern side to hide in. Then they would pass yet again into the mixture of woods and meadows and grassland where Malthurs army itself had used the cover to surprise the enemy before. There Malthur would send out patrols of about half company strength to scour parts of the surroundings. If they brought up nothing the army would continue further north to Mordor if that would be what it took to link with the reinforcements.



    The first batch of scouts had ranged a days march ahead before returning. They had nothing to report. The land was empty, and quiet in an eerie way. They had found the encampments of some of the former scout patrols but all were deserted. Two of them did however look turned over even if someone had hastily tried to set thing in order again. Either brawls had broken out, or someone had wanted to make their sudden appearance and disappearance go unnoticed. Malthur pondered over the reports. He would have to be patient to find this unknown foe and not rush into something he hadn't noticed. But the same foe was most likely faster than the orcs too, and with some decent knowledge of the land. He had to keep sending out scouts even if they would walk into traps.

    The next group of scout parties departed with the same instructions, range ahead of the army for a day and then return. They were in the woods now, with bushes and undergrowth masking the surrounding, and trees obscuring the view in most directions.



    The land held some plentiful game, the orcs could see and smell, frequently coming upon tracks and trails of a deer or a hare. The deserted Ithilien had neither humans nor orcs hunting or driving the beasts of the forest away by settling and cutting it up for timber and land. Many birds were also heard. The orcs generally cared little for animals, except those they could get their hands on to slaughter or press into their service as mounts or pack animals. The northern orc tribes had riders of great wolves and wargs among them, but the beasts had never been able to thrive in Mordor, whether it was the hot and dark climate or the ashy dust of the air they could not stand. For that reason, the orc scouts paid little heed to the birds as they called to one another, coming steadily closer and closer, surrounding their inexperienced prey.



    Among the long lines of marching troops, the absence of a scouting party or two was not really noticed yet. But the chieftain and a group of subordinate Uruk officers conferred a bit away from the ranks, visibly dissatisfied with something. No matter, the assembly apparently concluded, there was always another scout party to send and find out what had happened.



    Further away, one of Malthurs patrols passed a slope lined with bare stones and the cracked cliff. The orcs had walked for long hours seeing naught of the mysterious enemy and the initial nervousness was beginning to give way to boredom and the dull efforts of a long march and watch. The patrol walked in a column, keeping watch ahead and to both sides. Opposite the cliff were low bushes and deep grass. As the patrol passed halfway past the cliff, there rolled a stone the size of a hand down the side.

    The lead orc immediately held up a clenched fist, the rest of the patrol stopping and turning downwards the surroundings with wary glances. The next stone was the size of a head, and was hurled down rather than rolled. A figure in a dark grey hood was momentarily visible above the line of the cliff. The patrols captain barked orders, and four of the scouts broke off to climb the slope a bit to the side, the rest nocking arrows and searching for yet more foes among the rocks. Just as the advancing four had begun their climb, more cloaked figures rose, but from the bushes and the grass instead of the cliff side. Their mantles of grey were adorned with grass, leaves and branches, forming a simple yet obviously effective camouflage. With the precision from years of practice, they raised large bows, drew back and loosed a volley. Every arrow found its mark, most of them piercing the mail and crude plate of the Orcish mail shirts and hauberks.



    It took half a day for the scout patrol to be missed. It took another half for the news to start a riot. Some said it started near the cookpots, others that a group had gotten their hands on some strong drink, wherever they would have got that. Still more claimed it was an argument between returning scouts sent out to look for the patrols, or between guards at a gate. What all agreed upon, however, was that by the coming dawn there were exactly four dozen orcs slain in the brawls or by Malthurs guards. The army marched on north and west in search of its tormentors, demoralized but cowed for the moment.


    "Cirion! Get over here!"

    "Yes?"

    "Talk to me, whiteskin. What kind of flea-ridden pile of maggot is this out in the woods? You know them, you have to have some bloody guess about who's doing this. And how do we get our paws on those goat lovers?!"

    "Having trouble in the woods?" Cirion replied, having difficulty hiding his smug tone.

    "Nice of you to catch up, whiteskin. Out with it. Who are the and how do we nail them real good?"

    "It would seem Duinhir has come at last."

    "And that's supposed to illuminate me how exactly? What's with this Duinhir then and how do I make him come out and play with me on the field?"

    "Duinhir is not some common captain. He's the lord of the Blackroot Vale. It is home to the fiercest rangers of all Gondor. You've met them when forced into the confines of a conventional army, being just one bow company among the others in the lines. Now you face the beast in the wild, free of fetters and free of rules. Think your men are prepared for that?"

    "My men are prepared to gut any and all whiteskins they can, regardless of allegiance, if nothing happens quite soon. So why don't you drop that secret pleasure act and get to the point before that happens, now?"

    The words were spoken calm enough, almost quietly, in what Cirion had had by now dubbed the tone of Malthur, deceptively quiet.

    "Duinhirs men are irregular skirmishers. Irregular does in this case by no means equal unprofessional. They disrupt enemy communications and supply lines, seeking both to impede his - our - progress and create fear and discontent."

    "Like making that rat pack wet themselves at the sight of a deep forest?"

    "Yes. That's how the rangers work. Make the enemy reluctant, crouch behind his shield, avoid going to far from camp. That way, Duinhir can cover much more ground than he really has men for. And we will be easier targets, huddled together as we try to stay clear of the deep wilderness."

    The orc chieftain looked thoughtfully across the camp.



    "Attention, you fleas!" the chieftain barked in front of the scout parties captains in front of him. "Right, so far the enemy, whoever he is, has been having the time of his life playing with our foray parties at his whim. The pride of the dark lord, aren't you, you maggots? But this ends now! If we need a hammer to squash that irritating insect then a hammer we will bring! We will send out double scout parties this time. Four parties to range ahead in the usual way, four to follow them. Those who follow will stay within hearing and smelling distance of the leading party but no closer. If the lead party is attacked they will fight their way out and report. Failing that, which I suspect given the last days flaming pathetic feats of ours, the second party will be able to investigate and report back. To that end, the second will no, UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES, engage the enemy except if attacked. If so, you will put a third of your force to delay the enemy while the rest scamper back to report. If you would spot the attacker and he has destroyed the first party, the same third will track the enemy while the rest report back. Is that understood?!"

    "Aye, chief."

    "Yes, chief!"

    Fear of the commanders wrath kept any of the scouts from lagging behind, but those in the first line eyed the surrounding nervously, feeling more than a little that they were running to their doom that had already been determined.



    They were in a clearing in the woods. A younger oak to their right spread its branches over the open ground, but otherwise there was just the grass and small bushes and the wall of leaves that was the wood behind. The clearing was at the end of what was almost a trail. To one side was hills with more and higher bushes, to the other a stream that had dug deep through the ground over the years, behind which was thicker forest.

    The orc patrol poured out in the clearing. The closeness of the forest oppressed them, seemed to wish to come ever tighter around them and swallow them. Although they did not enjoy the sun, they welcomed the open space. All slowed down and stopped, as if having reached the unanimously agreed upon goal. Their commander looked around with suspicion. There would be some good spots here to get fires going and have warm food for a change.

    Then the trees started falling over the trail that was barely a trail. And the arrows started falling on the clearing that was not a place of rest or respite.





    While bleeding, the orc army made its way north and west, both making its way home and being lured towards the coast by its relentless enemies. The coarse laughter and Boasting that characterized all orc forces that camped died out and mistrusting orcs glanced ever around them. Once, an arrow had flown right into the camp itself. None had been hit but the archer had been seen, a cloaked ranger that was gone as quick as he had appeared. Of course, that had sparked an outrage and some dozen orcs had rushed after, frantically wishing to capture the ranger they had for once seen. And just as predictably it had been a trap. First the orcs had given chase, running themselves exhausted in the daylight that they despised. As they finally realized that none had their enemy in sight and that they were about to lose sight of each other in the woods, the impetus crumbled and one by one the pursuers turned back, becoming the pursued. It was not long before the first fell with an arrow in the back of the head, having taken his helmet off in the unbearable warmth of the sunlight. The others stood for a moment without being able to decide whether to resume the pursuit or continue back. As another one fell the latter alternative found favor and a quick march turned into an exhausted sprint, and in the end a panicked rout. None could tell the size of the enemy force pursuing them.

    When the state of the returning orcs became clear, their chieftain pushed the closest sentry out of the way and grabbed his bow in the same motion. Quickly nocking an arrow, he let it loose point blank against the closest spent scout.

    "Shoot the cowards down!" he bellowed, the grim order quickly followed, disregarding the panicked yells of the former comrades.


    Cirion turned around in disgust, and also slight bafflement at the uncompromising brutality. If this kept going on, the orcs would do the work for them and Gondor could really just sit back and watch. Too late he realized that his thoughts were all too plainly written over his face.

    "Something of particular fun today, whiteskin?"

    "Nothing more than usual" Cirion quickly replied, thinking frantically about a way to divert a conversation that promised to be dangerous.

    "Well, I have an even funnier thing for you to think of. When my boys here realize that the enemy will kill them before I do, they will sooner or later mutiny and sneak back to our holes and walls in the mountains. When that happens, someone like me can expect a knife in the back. Someone like you though...how long do you think it will take you to die if they were to string you up over a fire and roast you until your armor turned red and burned through your clothes and skin?"

    Cirion grudgingly had to concede the point. Without the protection of Malthur he would be left to the patience and mercy of a lot less crafty and imaginative kind of orcs, with all the increased likelihood of groundless violence and cruelty that followed. Malthur continued speaking.

    "Find me a way to crash the day for Duinhir. What does he want to achieve on a large scale here? He's stalling, and wearing us down by all means, but that's that for now."

    Cirion hesitated. He had to come up with something.

    "Well...in all likelihood Duinhir does not have enough men to engage directly, in a field battle. Otherwise he would risk a lot with a lengthy strategy of attrition as it makes it more likely every day that you will receive reinforcements."

    Malthur nodded, as if acknowledging the conclusion. Cirion continued.

    "As he is understrength, he must seize the advantage in other fields. That is what he is doing now, in mainly three ways. First, his rangers is keeping their eyes on us and where we go. Secondly, they prevent us from scouting and finding out where Duinhir has his camp and masses his troops. Thirdly, they maintain the moral advantage by inflicting constant casualties and denying us any opportunity for a decisive battle or even a smaller victory."

    Cirion worried that his short analysis might sound too pompous but was again surprised to see the orc chieftain seemingly consider what he had said, but the cold eyes where very hard to read, even without the shadow of the spiked helmet that obscured them.

    "When you first visited our camp you were looking for us, but you still did not spot a single one of my sentries, right?"

    "And I'm no ranger."

    "And just how superior are those at night, really? Are they elf-scum, who can see like us in the dark? I think not."

    "I've never met an elf."

    Cirion was getting the feeling that Malthur had gotten something out of their talk. He didn't really know what, but whatever it was it was likely to be a bad thing.



    The next day the scout parties went out at sunset instead, and the army started moving at the same time, instead of making camp for the night. Later that night, a long ranged patrol returned, with bent backs but eager eyes.

    "Chieftin! We found something!"

    "So I see, maggot. What, apart from the mud you've rolled yourselves in?"

    "We did as you say, chief, and kept tabs on the boys before us. And they were sure done in by those stinking cloaked whiteskin swine! But we lay low, and we sniff them out in the dark later, and follow them trails. And we come upon their camp, we do! A hidden palisaded place, it is. We can go there and whip them now!"

    Malthur shook his head dismissively.

    "No we won't. They will hear us and run away. But now we know where they are, and somehow, somewhere, this Duinhir must have patrols and messengers going in and out. We'll surround him, and when it's dark, we strike at his messengers, and his rangers, and let them try to spot us without the sun to help them.


    The tense situation continued without much development for a couple of days more as far as Cirion could tell. The tensions had calmed somewhat with the rumors spreading about the enemy being revealed and the expectation that the army would soon undertake some sort of great attack, or rather hunt, that would catch them once and for all. The following morning, a scout patrol reported something back that warranted a runner sent for the chieftain, who waved Cirion over as he passed the human portion of the encampment.

    Cirion had initially been surprised to find fellow humans in Malthurs army. The thought that anyone would freely spend time in company with such loathsome creatures as the orcs he found to be incomprehensible, until grudgingly admitting that his current position could be said to be that of someone doing just such a thing. And furthermore, the others were even less free than him, being little more than thralls that carried supplies and repaired broken equipment, which was always plentiful. The characteristic laziness of the orc could - evidently - be tempered and beaten out by a determined commander in the heat of battle but they remained ill suited for craftsmanship that required patience and attention to detail. Orcs slaved in the massed labor industries of Mordor that focused on quantity over quality, with simple and numbingly repetitive tasks for each that left as little need and room for independent thinking as possible. The human workforce and the few more reliable orcs maintained the smithies and workshops, and humans tilled the crops around lake Nurnen in southern Mordor and carted the grain north.

    Malthur had a few dozen with him that kept to themselves as much as they could, going about repairing the things thrown to them with downcast eyes and hidden grudges. Cirion made camp next to them for lack of a safer place to rest. They did not welcome Cirion but would at least not spit him over a fire at the first opportunity. The orcs viewed them with contempt but accepted their presence, much like they viewed the lowliest and weakest of their kin. It was the ultimate insult among orcs, Cirion reckoned, to be considered equal to a common human.

    "Chief, they dug up these from that scout" the subordinate orc announced while holding forth a couriers bag and pointing towards one of the directions in which scout parties had sallied.
    Cirion was confused by the direction, as it was right behind the orc army.

    "Let's take a gander, shall we?" Malthur grunted with a surly lack of enthusiasm.

    The bag contained some pieces of dried meat in wrappings - sloppy, Cirion thought - but also a typical roll of papers in the common waxed cylindrical case. Malthur waved him forward.

    "Let's hear the poetry of your countrymen, recruit. And take your time. It would be unfortunate if we found you had forgotten any passage..."

    Cirion took the paper. His throat was dry, he noticed. One more step down into the abyss of treason, a voice shouted in his mind. What has to be done to ride out the storm, another voice retorted.

    "It's a requisition order. It specifies that the recipient, who is not named, which is a common security measure, is to provide a moderate amount of supplies at a certain date...16 days from now I think. Shall I name them explicitly?"

    "Sod it."

    Cirion was struck by how overlooked this shortcoming of the orcs was. They could read, some of them, but their reading and writing was as crude as their speech, even when they used the common tongue, or rather their perverted version of it. You would just have to keep using the most complicated and academic terms you had, and messages would become twice as hard to interpret by the enemy. Except for the black Numenorians and other high ranking humans in service of the black tower, but the orcs did most clearly not wish to bother them if they could avoid it. Cirion took up the requisition order again. He could not deny a lingering professional curiosity about what kind of force would need these supplies. He had spent enough time with quartermasters to be able to guess that with decent accuracy. Cirion took a closer look. This did not seem to make sense. Grain for three weeks for a company, dried meat or salted for one, spare weapons and parts for four months, wagon parts for a year? The list went on. It did indeed not make sense. The text did not shed any light on it either. The Cirion realised what he held in front of him. He went numb, and cold. The cipher. Duinhirs cipher.



    Gondor had used ciphers and hidden messages for long periods in the past. The practice had fallen out of favor with internal struggles and betrayals, being an unpleasant reminder of the darker and shameful sides of humans. It was also complicated to use on a broad scale without either risking that some link in the chain forgot or misinterpreted something or that code keys and translations fell into enemy hands. Besides, the simple minded, if savage, orcs that tended to plague Ithilien were until recently considered too primitive to mandate that kind of secrecy. Duinhir had revived the practice as part of the campaign against the new orc army. Cirion and the rest of the captains had rehearsed the simple mechanic of it time and time again. No written key was ever to be made, to eliminate the possibility of the enemy intercepting and understanding the messages. Seeing the cipher here, Cirion was certain the recipient was a captain with an independent command like he and Aravir had held. Also, the captain would be someone operating under Duinhir.

    Cirion pocketed the message, his mind heavy with the decision. Tell or not? He would be influencing events to come in a great way now, more than before. The orcs, and particularly their loathsome chieftain, would benefit. That was indeed bad. Alternatively, the army could possibly be surrounded if this was some sort of new and better scheme conceived by Duinhir. If the orcs were cut down or slowly shot and whittled down by ambushes, they would surely slay Cirion rather than let him escape back to Gondor. And if Malthur would for some reason ever find out that he had withheld the knowledge the outcome would be the same, undoubtedly. Still, was it worth the risk of altering the fortunes of the war so? On the other hand, nothing had sufficed against the enemy so far. Why would it suddenly change? It was no point clinging to false hopes - superstitions, even. It was a time of troubles and each man had to fend for himself as best he could.

    "Chieftain!"

    "Hrm? What about, whiteskin?"

    "There may be something more to this message."

    The orc chieftain walked back, somehow towering over everyone despite not being of exceptional stature.

    "Spit it out. What are we looking at?"

    "The numbers make no sense, for a mere requisition order. But they fit a cipher, a code that was taught to me and the other captains. It is simple, based on a set of basic commands and meanings communicated by numbers in a certain order."

    Cirion explained how the cipher worked and how the limits and simplicity also made it easy to remember without any written form. The chieftain listened with what for once seemed like interest, but also a great deal of skepticism.

    "And so, what news does this little requisition order really bring us, then?"

    "It tells the recipient that Duinhir is using stalling tactics - not seeking a decisive engagement but drawing us in, or north as it is now. Said recipient is supposed to use the opportunity to secure various locations in the south... They are a couple of roads I recognize, some fords and...a town."

    "Which town?"

    "Tir Ethraid."

    Malthur whirled around on the spot.

    "Company captains, assemble!" he bellowed, and the cry was taken up by those who heard it and spread through the camp.

    There were a bit over a dozen captains. Cirion recognized most of them but were, to put it mildly, not one to count them among his friends.

    "Alright, shut your jaws and listen. The bloody Tark high command has been kind enough to share their plans with us through a cooperative little messenger that passed by lately. It seems this flaming little trip through the woods is something of a feint while the real push is coming in the south to take back that backwater dung pile of a town that guards the fords south. So we will turn right back and damned quick too. At best, we catch the little whiteskin army before they reach the town, otherwise we trap them inside and burn the place down. We will march hard this time, along the roads and with minimum rest. I will not wait for stragglers so you lot better keep your stinking units up to it."

    "Eh, chief, where did you get hold of this? Not meaning to disrespect b...

    "Which you just did, maggot, so count yourself lucky that we're out in the field and short on company commanders for the moment. But let's hear our new soothsayers own words, shall we? Step up and enlighten my captains about your kins fancy tricks, recruit!"

    Cirion had a profound sense of unreality washing over him as he stepped forward. Here he was, trained and educated in Gondorian tactics, teaching intelligence warfare to a bunch of savage abominations in service of Gondors eternal enemy. He doubted that they would be a very receptive audience, though. As he had predicted, the reactions were less than appreciative.

    "How do we know this is right? They might be pulling us from one end to another, to stretch us thin in this damned forest and cut us up piece by piece, I say."

    Malthur nodded.

    " Always a risk. But this makes sense. We've crushed them in the field all the time, even Tarks are bound to learn some time. Killing our patrols and destroying supplies is the only way they can beat us, and if they take that town and other camp sites and holds they can more effectively bleed us dry here in the woodland."

    "I ain't trusting any word of a whiteskin 'less it's beaten out of 'em!"

    "Yeah, why don't we start roastin' him a bit and see if there's any truth to it?"

    Malthur looked at them with contempt.

    "And just how much will you find out when he starts to sputter out the name of every town in Gondor, do you think?"

    "Well, he'll tell the truth eventually, won't he?"

    "No, he'll tell us what he thinks will make us stop. So we might as well pick what we think would be the most probable target and go for it, and save time."

    "Have ye gone soft, chieftain?"

    Malthur whirled around and locked his gaze on the leery captain, who felt the others edging a bit away from him, as if wanting to stay out of the way.

    "No, I've gone smart. That's why I am chieftain, and you are a sniveling maggot who will do what I say. Otherwise you, like the whiteskins and those scouting cowards might find out just how soft I have gone..."

    The onlookers hooted and laughed while the orc captains eyes narrowed but he remained silent, well aware of the unsteady ground he was treading.

    "Turn the army around! Back to Tir Ethraid!"


    The first unit in the column was the Uruk archers, scouts and vanguard combined. They could more easily deploy than halberdiers and make the most of a good spot compared to the swordsmen. Half of the heavy infantry followed, being ready to reinforce the vanguard fairly quickly. The trolls occupied the middle of the column, not because they required a lot of protection but since they had little affinity for spontaneous disciplined actions when under attack, and would be quick to drop their burdens and charge if they faced an ambushing force. In a regular battle, they had a clearer task to occupy their limited span of attention, and that intellectual deficiency could actually be beneficial, as they were too focused on their task at hand of loading and aiming to spare much attention for the rest of what was happening. The same thing was true for the battle trolls to some extent, as they required careful supervision and clear and most of all loud commands, preferably not more complex than "move" "wait" and "smash". Trolls were followed by the most of the supplies, followed by the rear guard with similar composition and of course inverted disposition as the van.

    The march followed the flat ground close to the great river, which had turned rather steady after a few days of frost, being in what would count as winter in this southern climate. It was comparable to a road, and had less woods to pass through. Perhaps because of the open ground, or the urgency and haste with which the army marched, or due to the fact that only a few rangers had been seen the last days, neither the vanguard nor the rest of the column paid as much attention as they should, and their thoughts were turned to the inland wood and not the river. It was too late to realize the mistake when Gondorian horns sounded, signalling that the enemy was already waiting for them further ahead.



    Cirion had seen the orc chieftains malice, mockery, cruel cunning, intimidation and downright iron fisted tyranny, but until now he had not been aware of the orcs capacity for completely infernal fury. Malthur walked towards him with the lengthy stride of a mountain troll it seemed and swatted aside a halberdier with his shield without even noticing, sending the other flying backwards to the grounds. Cirion was searching frantically for something to say or do to keep himself from his path but before he had time to utter a word he felt his throat grasped by the black iron of Malthur gauntlet.

    "Care to explain this coincidence, you little ?!" he grunted and hurled Cirion down unto the ground. The air was knocked out of his lungs and Cirion gasped, trying in vain to form a retort before Malthur boot forced the air out of his lungs again. "Is this your fine plan, maneuvering us into position for your precious rangers to strike?"

    Cirion pushed with both hands, trying to edge the orc foot away so he could speak.

    "It is...not...rangers..."

    Malthur kept staring coldly at him, watching him struggle with most of his weight that was leaning on the foot on Cirions chest.

    "Come from...river! Landed...beach..."

    At last the orc chieftain leaned back slightly, taking some of the weight off Cirion.

    "Speak, you maggot! What's a flaming beach got to do with it?"

    "Istdor...fleet commander. His fleet must have landed the army. This is...one of the few places you can quickly land a huge force from the river. Open ground...and no sand banks in the river blocking the ships like most other places..."

    "Pathetic. Why then, would those sailor scum not just anchor further out and row longer to any spot on the shore?"

    "We...Gondor...have too small rowboats. It would take too much time to row back and forth from the middle of the river and people get lost there too. Besides, at this time of the year it's cold out there, damn it! You don't drag out a landing in enemy territory if you can avoid it!"

    "So, the whiteskin's showing some guts, huh?"

    Malthur finally stepped away from Cirion, and turned around on the spot. Cirion dropped back on the ground, panting with exhaustion and staring at the sky with unfocused eyes. He heard the orc chieftain bawl angry commands at this captain or that.

    "Form ranks, maggots! Line up the ballistae, infantry behind them! Gather the catapults at this hill! Trolls to the back, archers to the front! Push those Tark worms back into the river! Attack!"





    For the fortunate orc selected to load and operate the ballistae, life was often a tiny bit safer than the rest. When another was sent to skirmish enemy formation at close range or storm forward into waiting lines of armored infantry, the ballistae was meant to exchange their fire from a relatively secure distance. The sight of burning palisades and foes also inspired enough cheer that they would enjoy some measure of respect despite their less than heroic role. But when they found themselves in the front and the enemy did not wait patiently to be cut to shreds where they stood, the position of artillery crew suddenly seemed like the poorer choice and more than one eyed the thick armour and long pole arms of the heavy infantry with longing. When the line of shouting humans with shields raised and swords brandishing grew clearer at close distance, more than most decided that they would spend this particular battle among the infantry instead.


    Malthur was furious. The battle had turned into a mess and a protracted slugging match where infantry lines had connected all along the width of the field and his catapults stood near useless, having only the scattered enemy archers to fire at. To add to the stinking day the halberdiers were too far behind the ballistae as well and the light Gondorian infantry surged in between them and then spread out in a full line, instead of being halted and funneled through the space between the pieces.

    The Gondorian levies wore round wooden shields, steel helmets and leather armor, wielding swords. The infantry from Pelargir was much the same, except for the elongated and narrower shields and the light mail shirts that reinforced their armor. At the Gondorian center was as usual a couple of companies of regular infantry, with pikes and heavy mail, and behind them all the hated Blackroot rangers. The orcs infantry held but the casualties were mounting compared to the more favorable battles when the enemy had stood still and allowed himself to be crushed by bolts and stones. Malthur looked again. Where were those catapult crews? He would flay them all when he found out!

    A great howling interrupted him. The mountain trolls, the close fighting unit of those creatures, had smashed into the enemy right flank. While the militia was being tossed and kicked apart like dolls, the trolls were shot by the rangers behind, and occasionally one lucky militiaman would manage an effective blow. Some of the trolls had already fallen. Was that the general idea? Without the trolls, Malthurs army would be easy to ride down if the enemy could get around the siege engines, and there would be little heavy infantry left to deal with cavalry after this battle. Damn it, it was the orcs who were supposed to wear the enemy down in that manner!

    There! The stunted orcs crewing the catapults were running towards a hail of arrows, coming from some group behind Malthurs lines. How had they gotten there? Had his scouts kept such a bad watch that they could go around the entire army at will? Flaying would be to good for them! No, those must be the rangers that had trailed the army for days. So, this was their game. Bleeding him of the most important parts to leave the army being little more than the common orc rabbles that had raided Ithilien. Well then, in that case it would not do to leave out the best parts of the bite this ranger scum thought they could take out of him.

    "Catapults! Cease firing!"

    The order was only heard by the nearest of the loaders but they signed to the rest that there was something more important to focus on near them.

    "Drop the slingers for a while and go out and smash those Tark bowmen on the hill behind us! Hunt them down!"

    "CHIEFTAIN CALLS! WE SMASH!"

    With a deafening roar, over forty mountain trolls rushed forth with clubs, rocks and bare fists. The rangers of the Blackroot Vale fought to the last man, but face to face not even they were a match for a troll. They wielded their greatswords masterfully, dodging the swings of clubs as best they could, but sooner or later everyone would make a mistake and after the first blow, there was no second chance.

    Duinhir was with his men. He was older than most, but he was still an imposing figure, broad, swarthy and grim after long months of deaths and losses. He fought with desperation and bitterness this day, holding his rangers together under the overwhelming onslaught. Always back to back and shoulder to shoulder, the finest of Gondor ended that day, giving their lives to delay Mordors armies so that others, perhaps, could reap ultimate victory from the bloody seed of their sacrifice.




    To the victor go the spoils. The ancient truth of soldiers and crooks alike, Cirion thought. In this instance the difference between the two kinds was also indistinguishable. Orcs spread all over the battlefield and looted corpses as well as hacked off chunks of meat, bringing it to spontaneous fires to cook or grill over the open flames. The hunger had made them frantic, and undisciplined. Even the human contingent took part in these grisly deeds but they restricted themselves to the dead horses and the food supplies that had been salvaged. It was not much, for the army of Duinhir had not had time to unload the majority of its provisions. Malthurs army was hungering, and discipline was breaking down when every member considered the enemy at long last beaten and themselves deserving a good long meal well earned.

    Malthur knew all too well that was not the case. The Gondorian other army, possibly the last one of Duinhirs forces, was marching steadily towards Tir Ethraid while his lazy slugs were sitting down feasting and sleeping. He needed to get the army moving again. Once it was on the move, it was always so much easier to direct it where you wished. Far more complicated was that he needed the army to move fast and soon, which meant with the lightest of packs and only the barest of supplies. And here was a field of meat waiting to be gathered and cooked and feasted upon. He needed to get the army packing, and the slothful damn sods would only move to eat. There was always the chance that lopping the heads of a part would make the rest fall in line but that could take time and a lot of fighting and beating and such methods did at one point become risky. That point was reached by now, Malthur determined. Besides, he was after all short on men.

    His train of thought was interrupted by the hurried approach of one of his captains, Muzul, that commanded a company of the heavy infantry.

    "Chieftain! The boys are just scattering to eat and sleep like some lazy swine! I mean, you can see that, so...what are we gonna do about...uh, what are your orders?"

    Malthur was about to offer a sharp retort but held up. The captain had after all shown some initiative. Perhaps he could prove useful now?

    "And what about you Muzul? Haven't you thought of carving yourself a nice steak for tomorrow too?"

    "Grabbing the meat someone else has just carved is faster. They can take the time to slice another bite."

    Malthur chuckled quietly.

    "Right then, let's get this lice-ridden slug nest up and kicking, shall we? Gather a couple of dozen of your unit and have them bring those flaming deserters here. Tell them that we're going to gather up all this fine meat properly before it starts to spoil. That should get them listening."

    "Aye chief! You lot, come with me!"



    Malthur was quick to the task. The grumbling and red-eyed uruks and other smaller orcs that Muzul kicked up and sent to him were immediately dispatched to bring up a large part of the mostly empty supply wagons. They were all moved next to the field, where a few wagons with spare stones and pitch and oil for the catapults had been left. Others were assembled in their respective units, which in most case were of only partial strength. Malthur directed them to start gathering and chopping up meat to fill this wagon or that, all systematic and without any hesitation and seemingly following a clear plan. The mood brightened somewhat, as everyone could see the wagons slowly but steadily filling with fresh meat for the coming days. Along with sending newly roused units to gather more meat Malthur would on occasion call up a unit and send it off along the road with orders to start constructing one or another part of a new fortified camp.

    "Keep in mind, we don't want those Tark armies that are left down south to come up and be able to just walk in while we have dinner. I want a good ditch and palisade on each side, and towers at the corners and gates. And you will keep patrolling the area, if there are any of those rangers left in the woods."



    During the evening, more and more of the companies were sent away to the camp site. Muzul was organizing the moving of the wounded and most of the camp followers when Malthur summoned him.

    "Seems like we have got the slugs moving for now."

    "Aye, chief. I'll have them throwing up the camp walls in no time!"

    Malthur shook his head.

    "I have no need for that camp. We are not going to stay and get fat here."

    Muzul looked at the chieftain with confusion and wariness. Malthur continued.

    "We won't be able to bring that load of meat with us either if we intend to catch up with that Tark force, which I damn well do. So here's what you're going to do. Bring a few of your best boys here, some who can do as they told and keep their jaws shut about it. See to it that someone that we can manage without accidentally trips with a torch next to that wagon with ammunition, and that the meat wagons are left close enough to catch fire. And I don't need to add that I want our little troublemakers silenced the moment they are done. Do that quickly, but make sure everyone still around here sees or hears it. Everyone in the camp must know what has happened and there must be no doubts about it. Understood?"

    Muzul recoiled a bit, but seemingly in surprise rather than repulsion. He saluted and waved to his closest subordinates.

    Less than a count of four hundreds later, Malthur heard angry shouting and arguing from the wagons. Suddenly the darkness was lit up by a sharp light, as wood and oil burst into a mighty flame. More shouts and sounds of fighting could be heard, and shouting that shifted into yells of pain and fear.

    "Not bad, Muzul...not bad at all..."



    Rumor spreads quickly, even compared to a hurried march by a determined uruk company. A mob was forming near the entrance to what was going to be the fortified camp. Tired and dismayed, the common orc soldiers demanded answers while their officers bawled commands to get back to work while at the next moment harshly question the closest newcomer about what was going on. If one had superior night eyes, which orcs did, one could spot a faint glow in the dark far away, about the place where the battlefield was. The orc chieftain walked quickly through the crowd and up to a small mound where he was somewhat visible and able to address most of the crowd.

    "Listen up! Some stupid rats tripped over at the wagons and managed to set a wagon with oil and pitch on fire! The flames spread and nearly the whole damn supply is bloody ashes!

    There was a storm of cries of outrage and roars along with angry murmur and banging of weapons against shields. It took a long time for Malthurs bodyguards to make the worst shouters shut up.

    "We have a simple choice! We move or we starve! Gather all of the remaining meat you can, and pack it with you. We will force march with only the most essential gear, no wagons, only the artillery. We will catch that Tark army before Tir Ethraid, and then we will have a bloody good feast!"







    Thirst. Malthurs head was filled with the word, the feeling, the need of drink.

    He had been wrong. The army could pack what they needed to eat for a few days, but they had not the water they needed. And neither did they have the time to search for a lake or river, lest the Gondorian army ahead would escape their grasp. In these southern parts of Ithilien, the springs were few and far between for the landscape was already giving way to the open ground that would become the plains and steppes of Harad. He had lost scores to the thirst and the sun, always despised by the orcs and always a torment without ample food and drink to give you the strength to stand it. The stragglers were left as they were, he hadn't even bothered to make examples of them. Some might catch up later, but probably not.

    The uruks marched with heavy steps, struggling forward. The lesser orcs dragged themselves along, wheezing and panting with hanging red tongues. None cared about formations or scouting, only the road and the sun and the thought of fresh meat and water at the march's end.



    Pilimor, captain of Gondor, steered his horse to a hill beside the road. For the tenth time today he imagined seeing distant shapes coming up behind them. He held no illusions that they were the last. If Duinhir had been successful he was sure that he would have heard of it several days ago. It had been a hasty message delivered by an exhausted courier that had told him to make all haste towards Tir Ethraid and take it back to hold against the enemy. Duinhir would attack to buy him what time he could. His gamble had failed, but it had been worth a shot, Pilimor still thought. Duinhirs plan had been to lure the orc army into the wilds while Pilimor led his force to strike at any outlying camp and outpost far away from the armies, denying the enemy shelter after shelter until dissent and starvation would force them to retreat. Then Duinhirs rangers would torment them for every step back.

    But something had not worked out with the strategy. Pilimor didn't know what. He admitted to himself that both he and his people probably knew less about the orcs than they would care to admit, and had allowed prejudice and tradition to fill the spots that their experience, or lack of it, left open. The catastrophic early battles and the dreadful encircling and siege of Cirions and Aravirs combined army had proven that. Pilimor held few illusions as to his chances to achieve victory on his own now. But he would not relent. He would push hard and take that orc nest that the town had turned into, and he would make them bleed for it and then he would torch it before seeing it back in enemy hands. Even this enemy that seemed to defy every rule of conventional warfare would crumble after that. Then others would come to finish what he had started, no, what Duinhir had started and he continued, and Gondor would endure.

    Gondor would endure and remember them.



    One last hill. One last step. Water. Meat. Blood. Rest. One last step. One more breath...



    Pilimor had lost count of how many times he had gazed back. He should be riding backwards, he thought dryly. At one time he had imagined seeing something move over this hilltop or that. But he was experienced enough to recognize when he was starting to see things that weren't there, and when it was time to trust in others eyes along with his own. That would be Gondors strength. Her people fought for one another and not to grab the heaviest sack of loot like the orcs or southrons did.



    Malthur had not even the energy to kick the panting scout in front of him that couldn't find his breath to report. He caught the eye of the subordinate orc and pointed south towards the nearest ridge that the road passed over as if to ask. The scout nodded, drawing wheezing breaths, and pointed in the same direction, as if to confirm. Malthur straightened with his back aching and shoulders stiff and numb from the weight of the plate and held up his fist for the nearest part of the marching column to see. It took a long time, long enough to provoke a violent response under usual circumstances, but at last the column came to a halt. Malthur pointed ahead, to the right, to the side of the wood that grew next to the road and the open fields on the other side. The column started to move again.



    The fore riders said that Tir Ethraid was near. It was not in sight but it was less than a day ahead. Out of the woods where rolling hills and ridges littered the plain, almost like the sand bottom of an ancient sea. And over those ridges rolled death in a black mass, round the forest and intercepting their course, battle line formed and artillery deployed.

    Pilimor glanced at his lieutenants. He nodded at them.

    "For Gondor."

    "For Gondor."

    Gondor would endure.




    The last of Pilimors men had scattered, a third, half a thousand. The rest were slain or lay dying on the field, only left with the hope that they would end before the first orc reached them. Malthur had descended from the ridge and stood among several hundreds of the remaining parts of his army, which now only numbered around a thousand, having paid for the victory with two and a half hundreds, almost all of them infantry. Malthur stopped for a moment, letting it drag out for a bit, and then drew a deep breath and shouted as loud as his dry throat would allow.

    "Well, looks like meat's back on our menu, boys!"

    With cheers, mad roars and hoarse cries of triumph the starved horde threw their equipment aside and gave in to their hunger. On this field, none bothered to cook any meat, nor to make sure it's owner was definitely dead. Only the chieftain contended himself with hacking off a slice of tender, bloody flesh from the nearest cleaner whiteskin and started to walk determined towards the area where the Gondorian commander had been stationed. He knew there had to be something here, something that they would have wanted to keep from him. The Gondorians had not had time to burn it, he had kept his eyes on their commanding staff. In a sturdy leather cylinder, Malthur found what he hoped.

    The map was a sturdy booklet containing a large scale general map of a region, such as Ithilien, followed by a few more detailed ones of specific parts of the region, such as the plains of southern Ithilien, the central parts along with Osgiliath and the Morgul Vale, which the Gondorians knew precisely from the ancient days when it was Minas Ithil, and the northern parts bordering the marshes and the road towards the Black Gates. Not only the lay of the land and the towns were featured but also what seemed to be small notes about suitable camp sites, seasonal obstacles that were likely to hinder one path or another as well as pieces of advice about crossing various types of terrain. All scribbled in the language of the humans, but that would not be a problem as Malthur had access to a human interpreter these days, he thought with a wicked grin. Dragging that pathetic whiteskin along might have proven just what was needed to tip the scales in his favor here in the south. Or rather in Mordors favor, as a dutiful commander should send the map immediately to his superiors to be used in accordance with the wishes of the great eye. An obedient commander would waste no time letting the maggot dung of Nazghuls and their bootlickers enjoy the spoils of his labours.

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    Chapter VI - Gondors Fleets

    Malthur looked down at the marching columns with satisfaction. New, fresh and eager ranks of uruks marched along with the old catapult crews and old and new trolls. It was a sight far from the half-starved and ragged army that had marched back north a month before after the last battle near Tir Ethraid. Not only had they resupplied and rested, but the morale had soared when they had finally made contact with Gorbags reinforcing column from Minas Morgul. All knew that at this time no force outfought, outmarched or outmaneuvered Malthurs army, limited as it might be but with the striking power far beyond its numbers. Its configuration was also changed. The ballistae were gone, being replaced by a larger number of catapults and heavy infantry. Orcs in mail armor with axes gave way to uruks in black plate with swords and halberds. He had a new full company of the Morannon guard too, to hold the line wherever he needed to buy time.

    Malthur rather liked Gorbag, despite him serving at the city of the wraiths. Their mutual contempt for the unliving masters served to bridge the gaps set up by their different positions. He didn't really trust him of course, nor did he know the whole truth about why Gorbag had appeared here and now. Malthur would bet his boots that the wraiths were involved to some extent, but that was about as obvious as betting that the ashes from Mount Doom were involved in the dark clouds that perpetually covered the northern parts of Mordor. Speaking of which, Malthur noted that Gorbag was indeed approaching, flanked by a few of the black plated spearmen that guarded Minas Morgul, the heaviest armoured of all orcs in Mordors service.

    Malthur tossed a skin of wine towards Gorbag, who caught it in one hand. He had little fondness for human stuff but drink was drink and it was readily available. Gorbag sat down next to Malthur against the hillside overlooking the road.

    "Chieftain."

    "Chieftain."

    "What's happening?" Malthur asked deceptively lazy.

    "Yuh, that's sort of where I was getting to. You know, I'm in a flaming fix thanks to you, you stubborn sod. You were supposed to be dead, you know." Gorbag replied, but not in a hostile tone that matched his words.

    "Oh, really? I'm devastated to disappoint you, of course. Who are the other goatlayers that has such faith in us?"

    "They're...ah...sod it, I think you can guess."

    "Black cloaks and big boots, sitting on their fancy horses looking down all day?"

    "Yuh, those."

    "Flaming cowards. Why can't they crawl back down to their rotten graves and their worms any day?"

    "Dangerous talk."

    "Like stumbling around in the woods here with those damned Tark archers hiding under every stone is any safer? Alright, let's hear the whole miserable story. Spit it out."

    "Well, yeah..." Gorbag took a deep swig "...me and my column were supposed to mop up remaining whiteskins up and down the eastern shores. Whiteskins that were supposed to have destroyed all our armies in the area earlier. Especially so since no reinforcements were sent south - we all lay in wait holed up at the Vale."

    "Curse those stinking maggot scum traitors! We were getting picked apart, damn it! You didn't even send any messengers, did you?"

    "Hey, don't pin this on me! I had nothing to do with that! Those bootlickers of scouts around the Vale only answered to the wraiths so I don't know nothing about who sent what message. But are you really surprised? Thought actually never crossed your mind that the higher ups weren't that eager to see you make it out of the woods alive?"

    "Eh, I reckoned those rangers had every trail in their sights or something. Didn't really bother with messages until they begun waylaying all my patrols. You mean the unliving wretches were sitting and hoping we would be nailed good even before those cloaked...those OTHER cloaked scum had begun having their way with us?"

    "Quite flaming so. Lost count of all the enemy armies you waded through already? Your boys've grown famous. Some aren't too eager to see an orc in that kind of position. Thinks that might be giving other people the wrong ideas. Thinks it might be convenient if some of us didn't make it back."

    "Dangerous talk." Malthur took a deep swig.

    "Dangerous talk." Gorbag swallowed an equal mouthful.

    They drank in silence for a moment until Malthur resumed the conversation.

    "What now? Back to Mordor and the boot over our heads?"

    "I guess so. Now that you lot aren't so dead as you were supposed to I suppose everyone should be trudging home."

    "Not too glorious, that. Or too much loot to be had."

    "Nah. But what're you gonna do?"

    "Say, your orders, what were they again?"

    "Can't hold our drink, can we? Haha! What is this stuff anyway? It's not common whiteskin drink?"

    "It is. With a bit of our own booze mixed in it."

    "Ha! Cheers! Anyway, my orders were to clear out any remaining enemies in the area. The area being pretty much all of the woods here down to the steppes and the southrons."

    "Then those orders should still stand, shouldn't they? Only now as you have found me 'live and kicking you can hand over command to me and report back for other duties bearing this good news. And if the wraiths are displeased you can always say that the rogue Malthur nicked your entire column and made off. Cheers!" Malthur tossed Gorbag another wineskin.

    "Cheers! Wouldn't that be a sight! But who's left to hunt down? Haven't you sent every last Tark scurrying home?"

    "There's one last piece left. It's over there!" Malthur pointed out towards the southwest, towards the river.

    "And you're gonna swim out to 'em or wha'?"

    "You could say I have an...appointment with them. I have got my hands on a neat little invitation..."

    "Yuh, that's the Tarks, righ, polite flaming sods...even 'en we mail...nail...tho'sche maggots... Cheers!"

    "Cheers!"



    Gorbag grudgingly opened his one least bleary eye. He had just started to decide whether he could remain on the spot or if the sun was getting too disturbing already when he noticed how quiet all was. Too quiet.

    Gorbag rolled around and up in one motion. Sure, he was still half drunk and his head thundered like a smiths hammer on the anvil but he was an orc captain and none survived long enough to reach that position without a substantial dose of suspicion and caution. He squinted and looked around. His bodyguards were still drowsing. He should have them flogged, but for the moment he was more concerned with the rest of his force. There were only a third left.

    Malthur. That damned flaming rebel had really done it and stolen himself a whole new damn army. Just like he had suggested, the miserable sneaking rat! Great. Just flaming great. It was flaming worthless.

    Gorbag suddenly caught sight of something on the ground next to him. It was a good deal of wineskins, probably a dozen or so. And there was a great chunk of meat lying next to them. It even seemed to be warm still. That meant some of them couldn't have gone very far. He should be able to catch up with them if he roused his guards now and set out at the double. On the other hand... Gorbag looked down again and picked up a wineskin.

    After all...that could perhaps wait a day or two. There would be plenty of time to catch up with that flaming soldier-thieving brigand later. Flaming cur. Gorbag downed a mouthful. It was in fact flaming hilarious. He wondered where Malthur was going. What was it that he had mumbled about? Something about the river. And a Tark horde that he claimed to know where it would appear. How the hell would he know that? Gorbag took another swig. Flaming ridiculous.





    The night was dark and foggy. The ship was a cold, damp place to be, and navigation at this time was dangerous at best. The ships of the fleet were anchored, though, and the Anduin was still and quiet. Or at least mostly quiet. The order was out to make ready for landing and on half of the ships Gondorian soldiers and militia was preparing to embark the smaller rowing boats that could take them ashore. Muffled muttering and cursing was heard, but none raised his voice and they climbed down the rope nets and ladders with determination. This was not a hastily thrown together new army, but a bloodied and grim company of survivors of the calamity that had befallen Ithilien. Istdor viewed them with respect. He was not one to start hoping easily, having always been somewhat reserved and eager to act rather than talk, but he saluted their will to make another effort. The force that now disembarked under his command was all of the hale, well, reasonably hale, survivors from the battles with the Orcish monster that now terrorized Gondor. They had elected to stay rather than retreat, to make one final push to rid the world of that terror.

    The first half of the force, all that could fit in the rowing boats, was led by the captain Colfinmen, a former company commander under Dinethor of Amon Eithel. It was a good choice, Istdor thought, as Dinethor had been able to inflict the most severe harm unto the enemy in a pitched battle, even though Duinhirs tactics had been the better choice in Istdors opinion. Unfortunately the sack of Amon Eithel had been publicly known and it was whispered that an ill fate awaited all who would face the orc tyrant, and that no course could for long prevail. Istdor despised such prophesies, but he could argue that things so far had not done much to encourage anyone, to say the least.

    With Colfinmen was two companies equipped with dismounted catapults from the larger warships. Now the enemy would have a taste of his own brew. If o part of the army fortified a hill along with that artillery, the rest could spread out and harass the foes lines with archers while cavalry watched against quick sallies. And if the worst should happen and they had to retreat, this shore would be the gathering point. It was unremarkable from land, its lack of sand banks and underwater rocks further out being unknown to the landlubbers. But just to be safe, Colfinmen had orders to march inland for a couple of thousand paces and set up camp on high ground there. Then Istdors half would be on their way to land after him.

    The boats were off into the mist. Istdor waited, standing motionless with his thoughts drifting back to better days. Even to the war council in Pelargir when Duinhir presented the plans to destroy the orcs. It had been a moment of such strength and cooperation, of mutual trust and energy. It seemed so long ago now. Duinhir was gone, caught at last in the open with his peerless archers. The promising captains, such fine lads, Cirion and Aravir, holding their camp heroically without aid. War had robbed Gondor of them all it seemed, the future generation that should have been there to lead it to greatness again.



    When the first rowing boat came back, Istdor sighed with relief. He did not need to ask to know that the landing had gone as planned. The oar strokes were steady, telling of calm and concentrated rowers as sure as listening to their breathing next to them would. Istdor turned and signed to the ships captain.

    "Prepare the second wave. We disembark immediately."



    The beach lay in between two low ridges. The country sloped very gently down from both sides. It was both good and bad. On the one hand, it was harder to spot anyone in between from far away. On the other, if someone actually went up on one of the heights the view from there was very good. Of course that did not matter now, as the fog was still deep and the dawn was still half an hour away. It was no mean feat, Istdor thought, to land with an army in the dark of the night, form up and be ready to march out in a blink.

    Even in the calm, the contact of the boats with the sand of the shore triggered the burst of movement and action that was always the case. It never differed. All the time sitting and waiting and wondering if this shore would be the one that turned into an ambush and if the enemy was far away or waiting with a small force, or an overwhelming one, all the anxiety was a relief to cast off and drown in sudden explosive action. Once it was time to unload the supplies and other cargo, the extra energy had usually dried away, Istdor dryly remarked in his mind.

    A light breeze was starting to blow. The sun was almost visible and it promised a beautiful day. Perhaps a day of hope. The sea had always sheltered the free peoples from orcs and other foul creatures, and the dawn and day was always the time of men rather than the light-hating enemy.

    Istdor took the time to look around at the surroundings. The fog was liftning from the meadows around them. Were it not for all the noise from the unloading of their cargo and the forming up of the army it would have been a rather peaceful site. He viewed the northern slope again. Something in the mist had caught his attention. He squinted his eyes. Something among those low trees.

    A very, very uncomfortable knot had been tied in his stomach. Now Istdor could see that he was not the only one staring at the mist. Were they all imagining things now? He rather hoped so. Otherwise...

    A slight gust of wind created a rift in the mist. The sight caused the men next to Istdor to murmur and point, and more joined them, having forgotten their chores for the moment. He had to have mistaken, he had to. This could not be.

    Then, as if to convey that the sky had now had its fill of taunting them, the sun rose ever higher and the breeze increased, and out of the mist came the dreaded silhouettes of catapults, infantry and the towering, horrifying mountain trolls.

    Istdor felt as if all fire he had ever had inside him flickered and died at that moment. He had had one chance and he had squandered it. He had led them to their doom.

    "Formations! Form up, Gondorians!





    A captain has three duties that count. The rest is either means of fulfilling the three or superfluous details.

    Protect the crew.

    Protect the ship.

    Save everyone else.

    They are, in that order, the only things that matter in the situations where the captains title and authority truly matters. All else is pointless ceremony, petty and shallow. Anyone who will not do his uttermost to fulfill those obligations is a disgrace to the vessel he commands and the title he bears, and no real man at all.

    Protect the crew. The position was untenable. They would be crushed by the prepared artillery. Istdor signed to his officers.

    "Turn about and move it a thousand paces back, and be quick about it! I don't care if the lines tangle, they must get out of the fire!"

    Protect the ship.

    "Signal the boats to retreat out and warn the fleet! We have no chance to embark again here, we make contact again with the fleet near the beaches further south, which they must keep their eyes on!"

    Save everyone else.

    Istdor sighed. Around him was chaos as the infantry was turning and sprinting, boat crews hurrying to their oars and the quartermasters and their marooned deck hands stubbornly trying to gather up what little of the supplies they could carry on them.

    "Leave it!"

    "We can take some with us, captain! We can't run or fight on empty bellies!"

    "You can't take anything with you if you're dead! Leave it! Colfinmens unit will provision us!"

    Istdor hurried with them after the infantry. Colfinsmens half had been the vanguard. They had not brought many supplies with them except for tools and materials to fortify their position. Colfinmen had been supposed to cover Istdors deployment, not the other way around. But the orcs had outmaneuvered them once again and struck at their soft belly, quite literally in this case.


    They were at least not too fast, though, Istdor noticed. The Gondorian infantry outpaced the enemy, who followed in a controlled manner, keeping their formation. They would have some time before the enemy caught up. They had to use that time wisely. In fact, it was rather simple. They had to get away from the orcs and they had to retake some of the supplies. So the first measure had to be to retreat further from the shore and lure the orcs away from the discarded baggage.

    "Commanders! Turn the army east, by a quarter of a turn! We will link up with Colfinmen at the road!"

    East over the waves of grass the ship of men now steered. Istdor waved and nodded to the rightmost two companies, which broke off south. He hoped they would be able to stay out of sight.

    The army was coming over a taller ridge now. Istdor took the opportunity to climb a rock near their path and looked west. The orcs were steadily following, in formation and prepared. Their ranks was a carpet of black, crude and misshaped swarthy shapes that blighted the countryside. But what was that... That was a taller shape, even if it was hard to make out in the distance. Istdors eyes had been the best on every ship he had served on, but a lifetime of wind and sun had taken its toll even on him. There...he could see the strange orc again. He had grey armor, not black, and he was tall. Was he one of the accursed men who served Mordor? Probably, but there was something with him. Something that had made Istdor think of something. He just could not put his finger on what.

    He could not stay where he was any longer. There was an army to save.



    Colfinmen had taken up position on a hill with excellent view west. His force had been alerted and was waiting in formation. Istdor ordered his force to spread out and combine with Colfinmens, and then walked straight up to see the other commander.

    "You heard about the landing?"

    "Yes, my lord. They were waiting for us, all the time?"

    "They must have been. They let you walk past, even though they could have smashed you at the shoreline, and allowed me to land as well. They want to catch us all here and cut us off from our retreat."

    "Makes sense."

    Istdor viewed his sparsely spoken colleague inquisitively.

    "I mean, that is the kind of strategy that they were reported using before, isn't it? Like when they besieged Aravirs and Cirions army and let them take the time to walk into the trap properly before closing it."

    Istdor did barely hear him, for his thoughts were racing back and around and around to that moment early in the night.

    "Istdor waited, standing motionless with his thoughts drifting back to better days. Even to the war council in Pelargir when Duinhir presented the plans to destroy the orcs. It had been a moment of such strength and cooperation, of mutual trust and energy. It seemed so long ago now. Duinhir was gone, caught at last in the open with his peerless archers. The promising captains, such fine lads..."

    No...

    Not him... Not him.

    Istdor ran. He stumbled, he was deaf to the shouts of his men. He was blind to everything but the next hilltop. He must reach it, climb it, spy from it, he must see, he must know...

    He sensed younger and faster men catching up and slowed down. He would not reach the hill if they thought him mad. Glancing sideways, he saw their worried gazes but they followed him as a retinue still. There was the hill. He must know. One more step, and another...

    The orcs and trolls were still too far away. Istdor sighed.

    The first thing you could see as a thing of its own in the black mass was the trolls. The second was the catapults. Thirdly, different companies and units were becoming visible. Then the different armament of the orc infantry would become possible to discern.

    Istdor suddenly realized that he had lost count of how long he had stood and watched in that same place. He took in all of the picture of the orc army advancing in the midday sun. There came halberdiers, archers, swordsmen. Catapults manned by orcs and those manned by trolls. Clusters of trolls on their own with only their giant clubs, hardly even needing a weapon to wreak havoc among enemy ranks. Istdors eyes darted from one to another, black helmet after black helmet... Where had he seen him before? Was it a specific company? Not with the bowmen, he was sure of that.

    Istdors retainers were watching the sides, nervously shifting this way or that, clearly displaying that they thought it high time to fall back. He took no notice of it. He was, admittedly, transfixed by the sight of the orc army. Their order was almost immaculate. The speed was not bad for a force with field artillery rolling with them. But he could not see what he searched for.

    Istdor felt a hand on his shoulder. As if from a great distance, he heard the call for them to go back. He lingered. He could watch for a little time more.

    The archers were spreading out now, perhaps wary of Istdors group signaling an ambush. They were almost in range. A brave fellow grabbed him across the chest and started to drag him backwards from the hill top. Istdor struggled. He had to see. A group of the orc archers appeared to make ready their bows. Istdor sighed, and let go of the struggle. He would let the others lives go to waste just for his own sake.

    Walking back with heavy steps, Istdor turned around to look one last time before they descended from the hill. Just one look.

    Then Istdor saw him. Close to a company at the back, possibly the orc commanders.

    Time stood still and Istdor perceived nothing but the other one with the rest of the world as a blur around the tunnel of his sight, but in it he saw with every bit of clarity of his hawkeyed youth.

    Not him... That compassionate soul, concerned for a tired stranger telling a hard to believe tale. That noble heart, not wishing to condemn Dinethor based on rumors and unproven claims.

    Not him...



    Istdor had known it deep down. There was in truth no other explanation. The orc chieftain was good, no doubt about that. But nobody could appear everywhere at the exact right moment by being a good field commander.

    Betrayal. It was not the first time in Gondors history. But it was the first time as far as Istdor knew that someone would sell them all to an orc. It was...degrading.

    Colfinmen approached, staring at Istdor with a frown that said a lot of his thoughts about his private scouting sortie.

    "What the hell was that supposed to be, my lord, if I might ask!?"

    "Colfinmen, I have learned something. Something that I must bring to the ears of Gondor."

    Colfinmen stared quietly at him for a few moments more.

    "You know that we can't outmarch them. Not forever. We must stay together to keep them from sending the trolls running in and butcher everyone at will, and that will make us slower. Besides, we have almost no provisions."

    "If we can lure them here, I have a plan for that. And we don't need to outrun them indefinitely, only so we can make it to the next shore and signal for the fleet."

    "Won't do, captain. They are closing in on us."

    "We just need..." Istdor sighed.

    "A head start. I know that too, captain. I ain't blind." Colfinmen sighed too, then straightened his back and seemed to grow solid, to a rock in the ground. "I will give you the head start you need. I have my own catapults, or your ships, rather, and those mongrels wont like to march their precious trolls too close until we are silenced."

    "Don't... Don't throw away your lives without a reason. You take what supplies we have left here, and you pack it with you and make a run for it when they come close. Take to the woods and split up. They can't take you all."

    "Those of us still standing by that point, that is. There will be raining a lot of fire here today before we are done... Make it count, captain. Protect the crew."

    "Protect the crew."

    Colfinmen was turning around, seeming to Istdor now as a statue of stone, immovable, solid as the mountains.

    "Catapults! To me! Let's give those beasts a taste of their own brew today!"


    Malthur smiled viciously under his helmet. This had been a good fight. It had not been the largest battle, but it had challenged him. The enemy artillery had indeed posed a threat even to his trolls and he had been forced to take special care to spread his own artillery out to aim the maximum number of pieces against each of the Gondorian ones that came into ranger. Needless to say, his crews had won the duel. The infantry had held a hill to their right meanwhile, discouraging the enemy from making any sudden charges, and luring him to focus his attention on the infantry while the trolls bombarded him.

    Still, there were too few enemies here. The bulk of them had got away for now. But he would hunt them down. Not even rangers would stop him from that. He was just about to give the order to disassemble the artillery to march quicker when he noticed scouts running to them from the rear. It was odd, running in this sun. Something was going on.

    "Chief! They have taken the shore again!"

    "What?! Who?!"

    "Those Tark footmen! They came around from the south, two companies strong at least, and chased us off away from the coast. They seem to be retaking their food and such at that place!"

    Malthur silently applauded the human commander. It was a sound plan, distracting him here while the rest made off and took back their provisions. He also cursed himself for not having burned those supplies earlier during the day. Sloppy. Now they could have a long march ahead of them. But they had marched before, and not all the woods in Ithilien could shelter the one that Malthur marked as his prey. For the second time, Malthur breathed in to order the army on the move when he was interrupted.

    "Chieftain! Riders be comin' up on us from the north! They're a host o' them!"

    "Who are they?! What kind?"

    "Heavy plate, chieftain. Black horses. They look like the ones...the ones that ride with the wraiths..."

    Malthur saw from a distance how his infantry parted, giving way for the riders, indeed not showing any will to remain close. He looked intensively for their captain, burning with hot fire at the thought of the wraiths. But the leader was no wraith.

    A tall and evil shape, mounted upon a black horse, if it was a horse, for towering and horrible it seemed and its head was a mask of horror, more like a grinning horses skull than a living head and flames burned in its eye sockets and nostrils. The Lieutenant of the tower of Barad-dûr he was, and his name is remembered in no tale; for he himself had forgotten it, and he said: 'I am the Mouth of Sauron.' But it is told that he was a renegade, who came of the race of those that are named the Black Númenóreans, and he entered the service of the Dark Tower when it first rose again, and because of his cunning he grew ever higher in the Lord's favour; and he learned great sorcery, and knew much of the mind of Sauron, and he was more cruel than any orc. He reined in his horse in front of Malthur and his captains, measuring them and let out an echoing laughter.

    "Is there any in this stinking rout with authority to answer to me? Or indeed with wit to understand me?"

    Malthur discreetly counted the bodyguard and took note of the Black Númenóreans armament. They were the best equipped troops of Mordor, but they were still only men and their horses had little protection. He did not doubt that they would make an impact when charging, but trapped they would be easy to unhorse, especially for the trolls. Perhaps seeing or guessing the chieftains thoughts, the Mouth of Sauron continued speaking.

    "Malthur, Malthur, what did you think? Did you believe yourself out of the great eyes sight? You are nothing, overseer, not worthy of the time of those better than yourself. Did you believe you could somehow go as you pleased just because some farmers ran before your little fire sticks?"

    Malthur remained silent, his eyes deep pools of darkness under his helmet.

    "It is time you relearned your place, orc. Or someone would perhaps be given the pleasure of reminding you of it..."

    "A wiser man would have shut up by know, Tark."

    The rider looked around, hissing with malice, but continued his speech.

    "I serve the great eye! Raise steel against me and it will be a nazghul you see riding into your camp next time!"

    "A little skittish, aren't we? Why don't you get out of my camp and continue serving somewhere out of my sight before one of your lackeys does something very foolish?"

    "The eye has orders for you, Malthur! If you still claim to have any measure of loyalty to the Dark Lord, that is! The corsairs of Umbar do not display the fervour that we would have them. The fleets of Gondor and her allies sail unhindered. March to Umbar and bring them in line. Show the Haradrim that crossing the Dark Lord is death!"


    Malthur watched the last of the horses disappear behind a ridge. He pondered the orders delivered by the little Tark maggot. He had been tempted to give the order to butcher them all, but he suspected that there was a grain of truth hidden somewhere in the threats of wraiths. The Black Númenórean had after all found his camp uncomfortably fast and his army was not the easiest to hide.

    Umbar. It was the real capitol of the Haradrim even if their chieftain sometimes resided elsewhere. Umbar held the fleets, the slaves, the loot gathered through centuries of pillaging...

    If Ammu Khand had been farfetched then Umbar was ludicrous. The deserts of Harad were said to be without end and only fit for snakes and scorpions. And the Haradrim were said to be unbeatable in their home terrain. It was a sensible plan, Malthur admitted. He would be lost in the deserts and any reputation would die a mundane and unremarkable death with him. And his army would soften the Haradrim up for the bootlicker hordes that would follow.

    On the other hand, if anyone would ever find a way to the gilded cities of the southrons...

    He smiled and produced the rod-like leather case he always kept on him these days and opened it. Harad was large, no doubt about that, but not large enough to be entirely without trails. They seemed to follow what had to be rivers, and those rivers would have dug out ravines. Ravines meant shade.

    Indeed, if anyone would ever find a way to the gilded cities of the southrons...then it would be him!

    "Form up, you maggots! Prepare to march south, to riches beyond imagining!"


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    A captain has three duties that count. ...
    Protect the crew.
    Protect the ship.
    Save everyone else.
    Somehow I imagine the corresponding Mordor policy to sound something more like
    Priority one
    Insure return of expensive vessel.
    All other considerations secondary.
    Crew expendable.

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    Awesome read, really enjoying it!
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