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    Default [Award] Robin de Bodemloze for Phalera

    I nominate Robin de Bodemloze for the Phalera award. I've listed his contributions to writing on TWC below, but want to bring some select points about why he has been long overdue this award.
    - All the work he has contributed for has been of top-notch quality flavored by his unique way of writing. This is something you develop only as a seasond hand at work.
    - He has also provided excellent advice to the new writers in form of his CQ reviews. And he also is ready to provide some good feedback should anyone request it via the writing course.

    Contributions
    AARistry The Wings of Destiny - A FotS AAR

    My second attempt at a S2TW AAR - using Fall of the Samurai as the setting this time.

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 
    Beppu Shinichi is but a man, trapped in the turmoil of his times. The hills of Kagoshima, the shimmer of the bay, the laughter of children. All seems tranquil now, but whispers of change could already be heard in the shadows. To survive, Shinichi must make sure he and his clan remains at the forefront of a bloody struggle, and remain victorious.

    Growing up Shinichi had trained daily to become a samurai, but in these times of uneasy peace, what did it mean to be a man of the sword? What was the destiny of such a man in an age where bean counters and foreign guns ruled the day? Triumph will ensure his legacy, perhaps, but at what price?


    Takeda - a Shogun 2 AAR

    After 18 months and almost 200,000 words, my AAR is done. The thank you's and sentimental stuff are best read in my afterthoughts thread here. It was my first AAR of any TW game, and I can only say I am utterly humbled by the experience. I'd like to thank everyone who read, commented, and voted for me in four MAARC victories. Coming third in the AAR of the Year Competition was a massive honour and I'd like to thank everyone for making that happen.

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    The winter of 1544 was a harsh one, and as I travelled through the valleys of Kai, the hardship it must have brought the people was quick to my mind. It was remarkable, then, that the cold spring air was filled not with despair, but an excitable buzz, a feeling of anticipation. The snow was still melting away under my feet, but families had already begun their preparation for the year to come. There was a sense of optimism, hope that in these tumultuous times, big things were destined for the young man who led them and their glorious clan. His clan was the Takeda, descendants of the ancient Minamoto, and his name was Harunobu.

    I’d once met Harunobu before when I was sent as a young monk to deliver an invitation to the daimyo of Kai. The young master, who was maybe fifteen summers old, had bow in hand, and was sending arrow after arrow into a target erected outside the daimyo’s residence.

    “Minamoto no Harunobu?”

    “No. My name is Takeda Harunobu.”

    The rest of the conversation is blurry in my memory, and frankly matters for little. However, the assuredness and pride with which he had corrected me of his name, belied his tender years.

    Some years ago, Harunobu had become daimyo of Kai, displacing his father as the head of the clan. The Takeda were rightly feared as master horsemen, but years of internal strife and struggles against the Hojo and Imagawa had weakened it to the point where Kai itself was under threat. As I walked through the countryside struggle was nowhere to be seen, however, reflecting the improvement in conditions since those godforsaken years. Word was that the Shinano warlords will come again soon, but the quiet industry of these people seemed to reflect their confidence that the Takeda would be ready, and Harunobu would lead them to greatness.




    BAARC
    BAARC III: Furinkazan: Rise of a Legend - Winner!


    Critic's Quill Herein lies some of the articles and reviews I have done for the Critic's Quill:

    The Critic's Quill: Issue 30
    AAR Review: Courland - The dream of an independent baltic state

    The Critic's Quill: Issue 31
    AAR Review: Land of the Midnight Sun
    AAR Review: Una república en Dios
    AAR Review: Times full of Distemper
    Article: Writer's block

    The Critic's Quill: Issue 32
    Interview: SeniorBatavianHorse
    AAR Review: Filii Martis
    Article: AAR Writing - A Technical Study

    The Critic's Quill: Issue 33
    AAR Review: Liberty or Monarchy - an American AAR
    Article: Casting call: characters in AARs
    Scriptorium Competition Review: Artistic Representation

    The Critic's Quill: Issue 34
    AAR Review: Fry those Furballs! A Video AAR for Wing Commander Saga

    The Critic's Quill: Issue 36
    AAR Review: Ukita no Yabou - A Shogun 2/Sekigahara Campaign AAR

    The Critic's Quill: Issue 38
    My first issue as editor - link.


    TotW A selection of my TotW entries:

    TotW 120: Calm before the storm
    TotW 123: The March
    TotW 125: Goodbye
    TotW 126: Prometheus - Winner!
    TotW 130: For the shogun
    TWC@10 Special Edition: The Writers' Study
    TotW 187: From Another World


    Other work The AARtistry Course

    Co-hosted by Radzeer and myself, the course aims to help budding writers enter into the world of AAR writing. I don't hold myself out to be some expert writer, but perhaps some will find the lessons useful.

    Lesson 1: Starting out: the dilemmas of AAR writing
    Lesson 2: Character development
    Lesson 3: Advanced AAR writing techniques
    Lesson 4: Visual aids
    Lesson 5: AAR Management

    Product reviews:

    [Android App] doubleTwist

    Other random stuff of mine:

    Takeda - a work in progress video for my AAR
    AAR Anthology - a published periodical of AARs, of which mine is one
    A random thing

    I hope this information should suffice for this nomination; else please let me know and I'lll work on it.
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    Default Re: [Award] Robin de Bodemloze for Phalera

    Can't say I like the guy but AAR reviews are a to write. And he's very active on the creative writing scene (including the script competition).

    Gets my stamp of approval.
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    Default Re: [Award] Robin de Bodemloze for Phalera

    Impressive work. I had a look at some of the contribution,.... IMHO, the "how to" is equivalent to tutorials for modding.

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    Default Re: [Award] Robin de Bodemloze for Phalera

    So much to say, so little time. I actually always wanted to put this proposal forth myself, and feel there's no one more deserving than Robin for Phalera. I'll give a detailed explanation on Wednesday, as I'm away travelling now.

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    Default Re: [Award] Robin de Bodemloze for Phalera

    Support.

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    Default Re: [Award] Robin de Bodemloze for Phalera

    the state of the art of writing, in both quality and quantity. Easy support for me
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    Default Re: [Award] Robin de Bodemloze for Phalera

    So..... what's that guy's last name again?......

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    "de Bodemloze "

    Yep... dat's what I thought..... {and this one will make it three...}


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    Default Re: [Award] Robin de Bodemloze for Phalera

    That's only because you breed like rabbits
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    Default Re: [Award] Robin de Bodemloze for Phalera

    Quote Originally Posted by Doctor Shuu View Post
    That's only because you breed like rabbits
    Ts true...and I am very grateful for that....


    OT: I am truely humbled to be in the proximatey of a great writer. I pray that this small trinket is at least partial payment for all that you have done here...

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    Default Re: [Award] Robin de Bodemloze for Phalera

    Under the patronage of Flinn, proud patron of Jadli, from the Heresy Vault of the Imperial House of Hader

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