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    Eranshahr, the Star of the East


    {First off, This really only contains the intro. I have decided to stop work on it in favor of a Shogun 2 AAR}





    My brother


    I am sure that you will be pleased to hear that I am in good health despite the recent events. We were harried fiercely as we marched down the coast of Outremer, making for the Holy City, and plagued by Infidels at every step, yet King Richard has repulsed them in disarray, as you will likely have heard, and our wise liege realized that he could not, in fact, hold Jeruselem itself, and so bartered for Christian passage to the city. To this end I have traveled to the Holy City with many of the other brothers and many of the lesser men-at-arms. While here I stumbled upon an ancient and vast library and a scribe who has translated for me an ancient treatice about these lands, focusing on Persia, or Eranshahr. I have sent you a copy and pray it finds you in good health and that it will entertain you and Terise, for if I recall correctly she is fond of reading, as is your son Bernardt, and perhaps even Guy will find it interesting.


    Yours faithfully


    Guillame





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    Right, so I'm starting another one! It;s going to focus on Eranshahr, or the Sassanids, and will delve into alternate history before the campaign starts, primarily in that I'm moving a socio-political religious issue to happen earlier. I'm also going to be a bit more flexible in this writing in that I won't restrict myself to following the campaign as closely as I do in The Tin Isles. I'd probably lose it if I tried to do two AARs that way.

    As for mods, I can't remember them all, but I have Radious, double unit sizes (my poor computer), no fog of war on the campaign map, and double garrison sizes and a mod to make units less colorful. Also vanilla imperium levels and lower cost to resettle desolate regions, but I think I'm going to disable that one. And influential faction leaders

    No fog of war: I just love seeing what every faction is doing and I think it helps with my writing and in-world immersion. I'm chalking it up to the Sassanian merchants being awesome information channels

    Double Garrisons: I've got this one running for two reasons, if I recall correctly. Basically, I don't want the WRE to get blitzed in 5 turns. Rome wasn't built in a day and it sure as hell didn't fall in one day. Or one year. They're still in a rough situation and I should probably edit my save file to make some hordes a little bigger, but all in all its working out well. Also, as the Sassanids I start with 8 or 9 vassals, so without this mod they'll instantly steamroll other factions.

    That being said, here we go! I went through a LOT of games to get a start setup that I approved of...

    Playing on very hard because legendary is inconvenient

    Double unit sizes: one stack = between 6000 and 10000 men; 7500 being a good estimate. So one a one-region faction can field around 10-15000 men plus a garrison, which seems reasonable to me (sans the far north perhaps) and makes for some nice screenshots
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    A brilliant opening! I like stories which mix real historical elements with the writer's own ideas. You have a good eye for a screenshot. Good luck with the campaign and the AAR - I will be reading this .

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    Thank you Alwyn. I'm certainly going to need that luck so I can have some "bad luck"- the Sassanids are pretty easy. Either that or I'm going to have to get better at save file edits

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    Quote Originally Posted by waveman View Post
    Thank you Alwyn. I'm certainly going to need that luck so I can have some "bad luck"- the Sassanids are pretty easy. Either that or I'm going to have to get better at save file edits
    On VH, you'll no doubt lose or phyrric draw a couple of battles, which will be good to see. On H I haven't even played through the Sassanids, it's too insulated, so I'm really interested in seeing screens of their later tier units
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    I'm certainly looking forward to that kind of thing. And I've figured out how to stop client state spam - I just had to edit the army comp in the save file to 1 man per unit so the army would back off to replenish, so I think I'm good to go

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    Brother - enclosed is the introduction to this writing. It seems to have been written by a young noble of Persia, or as the locals call it, Eranshahr. Within I have enclosed several maps, with both the Latin and local names, to provide a better context. The Latin ones will come first, as all have been painstakingly copied by myself and some of my novices to break the glorious tedium of copying only religious texts, for as you will see this manuscript is quite different...

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    My name is Shapur. If you do not know that name, then you must be from very far lands. Perhaps the distant western isles, shrouded in mists, or the cold northern lands, all mountain or sea. Or perhaps the vast plains, of grass to the northeast or sand to the southwest, or even from the far cities of the east, past great rivers and mountains and a near endless desert, one that has swallowed entire countries. Or so they say.


    I am Shapur, of a line of kings. There have been many great men before me. The founder of our great empire named his son Shapur, and he was a mighty king. My grandfather, too, was called Shapur, and he too was a great thinker who tried to reform the empire before his assassination. His father was also called Shapur and he fought many great wars. So perhaps my name is why people expected so much from me.


    My story really begins in the year the Christians say came 400 turns of the seasons after the birth of their God. There are many ways of marking the years, but for now this will suffice.


    As I have said, my great-grandfather's name was Shapur, defeater of the Romans and Arabs, and he revitalized an empire on the brink of destruction. He had three failings, or so his sons said. First and formost he was like Hannibal. He could crush the Romans but could never take and hold any of their lands. Secondly, he persectuted minorites in a patchwork empire, while at war, leading to unnecessary unrest. And third, the gods saw him to be worthy of great tests, for he was to fight not only the Romans, who in their arrogance call themselves of the East, and the Arabs, but also the nomadic tribes northeast of Persia.
    These he defeated too leaving the groundwork for a mighty empire.
    His sons and grandsons Bahran and Yazdegerd were quite different from him. Bahran, the elder of the two and my uncle, inherited the empire from Shapur's son Shapur, and for the beginning of my young life we knew peace. My father Yazdegerd hated war, often stating that it was good for absolutely nothing. I think his outlook influenced Bahram a lot, for he was not the best of rulers. He was not particularly weak, but he was very suspicious of others, which can be a good thing for a king. Especially a King of Kings. He was, however, easily swayed by his advisors.


    For our Shahanshah was just that: a king of lesser kings. Our own lands spanned the provinces of Asoristan, Spahan, ancient Persis, and the eastern part of Osroene which was our border with the Romans. These lands were ruled directly by my family and their vassals. And then there were the other kings.
    I shall now describe things as they were in 393, to give a background to our story. I was at this time 14 and Bahran 40.


    To the north on the shore of the Caspian sea was Atropatene, ruled by Balashi, who was at this point 28. He was a friendly man, which was good, for Atropatene was a strong kingdom. Its ancient capital of Ecbatana had strong walls and the Atropaten


    To the north of Atropatene, on the western shore of the Caspian sea was Armenia, the focal point between many of the squabbles between the Sassanians and Romans. It was ruled by Vardanes, a harsh man who had seen 45 winters and was usually distant from the main court; he was watched closely.


    Lazica's king Izates was an old man who owed his allegiance to Constantinople; his lands were north of Armenia, as were the Kartli. They were and independant people, strong, and ruled by Osaces, with roots in the northern steppes. East of them, again bordering the Caspian, was Arran , ruled by Aryu, and while technically we were allies, they were essentially our vassals.
    Albania


    East of the Caspian were the horse lords and the realms of Chorasmia - Afrighids, Parthia, Hyrcania- Abarshahr and Aria, ruled by Shamash-shum-ukin, Ubar, Parthamaspates, and Hunzuu. of that lot only Parthamaspates of Hyrcania was really trustworthy, and Chorasmia was nearly independant.South of them was Makran, ruled by the yar old Ishme-dagan, a man who simply wanted to keep his lands peaceful.


    Across the Sea of Parsis in Arabia were our last two kingdoms, Mazun Maca and the Lakhmid Kingdom. Mazun was rulled by Anmar, a fickle but man whom I found agreeable enough and only ten years my senior. Then there were the Lakhmids. King at just 21, Al-Nuaman professed his loyalty loudly, but in truth... well, we'll get to that.


    That leaves only the smaller kingdoms of the area: the Homeritae - Himyar in southern Arabia and the Ghassanids of the northern desert; Axum and Nobatia along the Nile.

    At this point these men were all just names to me, save for Balashi. Since Atropatene's capital Ecbatana was close, he came to Ctesiphon frequently and was a big man in both girth and height; he had an impressive mustach and a magnificent beard and his hair was, like most of us, black.



    My family consisted of more than just the Shahanshah and my father, of course. Bahran's queen was called Zakiti and was 10 years his junior; she came from Atropatene and her frequent expenditures undermined Barhran's power, but only to a small extent. Their son Khosrau, my cousin, was born 2 years before me and set to inherit the position of Shahanshah on Bahran's death. He was darker than I and at sixteen was beginning to cultivate what would become a magnificent mustach, and he was already married to an intelligent girl called Gemeti, daughter of a Deqhan the East. His younger sister Ahati-waqrat would soon ready to marry as well.


    My father Yazdegerd was 38, his second wife Shushandukhi younger though they were quite different; my mother had passed to Azur during childbirth when I was two. My father was mild until sufficiently provoked, and as i have mentioned before, he hated war, and could be relied upon to keep his word. He did, however, allow me to train to be a warrior as all of our nobles do. Shushandukhi was a vile woman and had our servants beat unmercifully. She ruled the household with an iron fist, which in my eyes was unnecessary. Our servants accepted the lot the Gods had given them at their births. My younger brother Bahran was 12, named for our uncle, and hated the sight of blood; his was slim and kept his hair very short.


    As the year 393 drew to a close I had just turned 14. I was tall, proud, revelled in my education in both the arts and war, and on my way to the meeting of kings. My hair, as ever, was long and I let it fall to my shoulders, and my skin was bronzed from the Mesopotamian sun.


    I was on the training grounds, under the watchful eyes of Narsieh. He was the noble in charge of the governance of Asoristan and lived in Arbela, as did I at the time, for I was under his tutelage for all things: warfare, management, and indirectly religious duties. My father had sent me north from Ctesiphon for "I had to learn from others and outside of the capital's walls." And so I had, and I am glad of it.


    Narsieh was a good teacher. He was a strange man and I think that is why my father liked him, for he was not afraid to thrash me if I was lazy and would do it himself. I learned to listen to his word, to be ready for work at all times, and eventually to respect him. He was also a follower of Mazdakism, a teaching that would soon be the subject of heated debate.


    During this time I became close with his son Farrukhzad Kosrau.


    In any case, we were on the training field, around 300 or so nobles' sons, when Narsieh waved us over. I barked a command and my detatchmen of 80 horsemen broke off from our maneuvers and trotted over to him. I'd like to say it was done smoothly, but moving a formation of men and horses outfitted in heavy cataphract armor is difficult. Which is why we practiced day in and day out, for our cavalry was the iron-plated heart of our armies.


    When we arrived in front of him I was not surprised to see my father. He visited often enough. But I was surprised to see him so richly dressed so far from Ctesiphon. He was accompanied by a royal ceremonial escort, horsemen in rich armor with long, bright banners. He smiled as he watched our approach and said something to Narsieh, which made him laugh.


    "They are performing admirably my friend," Narsieh said, which was a surprise for he rarely gave us compliments. "I could not compliment you too often," he said, having evidently noticed my surprise. "It would inflate your egoes."


    My father nodded his agreement. "Shapur," he said, "your uncle and I have decided that you will come to the meeting of kings this year. Chose 20 companions to come with us as your guard. Be ready in two hours."


    And with that he rode away. "Two hours?" asked Farrukhzad. "Why would he need so long?"


    I turned to Narsieh. "Do I need to arrange for my company's food and travel?" He nodded, and I sighed. "Very well. Farrukhzad, with your father's permission I would have you come. And Aram, Ohrmazd, Hardar, Hamun, Aydin, Isatvastra, Erfan, Amavand, Hamid, Erfan, Faamarzm, Farbod, Hadish, Nima, Nariman, Nader, Balash, Haldita, and Artostes.


    Within an hour I had my men drawn up alongside my father's and the servants bringing our supplies. They were picked from the best of us, my closest friends, and the sons of my father's staunchest supporters, as well as Amavand, whose family we hoped to earn some gratitude from.

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    I like the new AAR so far, waveman! The beginning seems very formal in style - all the explanations of who is who, and so on - which I think feels very appropriate. I'm looking forward to seeing where the story takes us...






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    II

    The size of the libraries here fill me with awe, brother. My knowledge of their language and script is increasing every week, as it must if I am to send these stories and the knowledge in other writings to the West. Be sure to show them to the king, for I have no doubt they will earn you some favor with him...

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    The meeting was held to the east in the province of Persis. As we rode, my father explained to me why. "Shapur III is has not been dead for long. He was a powerful man, and some of the kings now doubt Bahram's power. Would you have held this meeting in Persis?"


    I thought briefly. "Yes, I suppose so. There are great holy centers there which can show our favor of the Gods. It is also an ancient capital and so right for the rituals to come."


    My father nodded. "But there is more as well."


    Our other companion, Balash, nodded. He was the governor of Persis, the province where the meeting of kings was to happen, and another of my father's close friends. While Shahansha Bahran kept his friends close and around Ctesiphon, my father seemed to only have them in the outer reaches of the empire. "There's great turmoil," he said solemnly. "Many kings wonder if they can regain their lands' freedom. So, we make the far ones, the rebellious ones, walk the farthest. The Parthians, Chorasmians - those unruly horsemen must ride three times as far as us, and the Lakhmid king, and the Vardanes the Armenian."


    "He may know the teachings of Zoraster and Aristortle and be alble to ride a horse well, but my son has much to learn of politics," my father said.
    "Best you speak as little as possible at the meeting," said the Lord Bashan.


    The journey took many weeks. As it progressed I began to understand why this meeting of kings took place so infrequently. Frequently we stopped at various dehi-qans' estates to share news and so they could host part of the royal family.

    We passed the fertile banks of the Tigris, one of the two great rivers that fed the fields of Asoristan. We rode through low mountains and hills where sturdy plants clung stubbornly to life, and we rode through a vast desert before reaching Persis. I could not compare it to anything that I had seen yet in my life, for the sand seemed to spread out into eternity .


    When we at last reached the Stakkr, capital of Persis, we could see that we were amongst the last to arrive. That was my father's way. He was brother of the Shahanshah, loyal to a fault, and had no time for the petty men who would seek his favor. We were quickly ushered into the palace and settled into rich quarters. They had draped silks of many bright colors, grand murals and statues, food and drink at a moment's notice, and a grand view over the sprawling city. Balash bade us farewell as he was lead to a different portion of the palace, for he was very nearly a king himself yet still not a member of the Shahanshah's family.

    As the various kings and their entourages prepared for the opening ceremonial rites, I walked to the city walls with my companions to watch the arrival of the last few minor kings. Some of my men, although at the time I thought it strange to call them my men and we were still boys at that point, were busy with the various persuits that one can find in a great city, but eleven accompanied me to the walls. We rode through the bustling streets and while I was accustomed to the tumult of a great city - I had, after all, grown up in Ctesiphon - Stakkr had entirely different undercurrents. The air was drier yet not uncomfortable, the spices different, more eastern languages were spoken; I saw far more traders from Industan and the lands of the Djin than could be found in the capital. As we reached the crenelations we could see two large troops of horsemen converging on each other, both with many colorful banners, and a smaller group just behind them.


    "Who are they?" Farrukhzad asked to no-one in particular. Hamun answered him before I could:
    "The smaller party in the back is Osces of Kartli, a kingdom in the far north, past Armenia. He likely wants to discuss trade or some such matter."


    "I hear he has a few daughters...." said Nima, thoughtfully.


    His brother Nariman elbowed him. "I could certainly use a wife! Or something!"


    "Anyways," continued Hamun, frowning, " in front of them there are several kings. Vardanes of Armenia, Aryu of Arran, Al-Nuaman of the Lakhmid Kingdom, and Anmar of Mazun. Anmar must have left late to arrive with them for he could have sailed most of the way."


    Now I, too, was frowning, for three of these kings had been described to me as being untrustworthy. But the Mazun king and the Kartlian king were enigmatic, they were...


    I was brought back to reality by the excited conversations of my companions. It seemed that they wished to meet these people who were nearly foreigners, despite being our subjects. Or at least it seemed that way to us at the time. After all, we had barely travelled anywhere at that stage in our lives and had not touched the dangerous game of politics.


    We descended from the walls quickly to intercept some of the younger members of the party before they could be led off. In this we were successful, and we had a brief but cordial exchange with several Armenians and a Lakhmid page before they were lead to the palace.


    Later that night as I sat in my chambers with my friends, we discussed our predictions for the upcoming meeting. I was certain that nothing important would be spoken of, only token reassurances of loyalty as the Shahanshah asserted his dominance over our disparate holdings. Nima, a tall boy with powerful eyebrows thought they would also discuss trade, and spoke at length of how important it was to the empire, and how we needed the heathens to conduct it for us, for mercantile persuits did not follow out teachings of Zoraster.


    This sparked a heated debate which lead Nima and Aram to leave the room, so at odds had they been; Aram had argued against Nima with the teachings of Mazdakism, but most of us disregarded what he said.


    Hamun was of the opinion that many diplomatic marriages would be made; at this Nariman perked up, as did Aydin and Erfan, while Isatcastra shook his head. "You want a mariage this early," he said. "Not to one of those girls, better first to find a chagar wife, and then find a better match later."


    "Now is the best time!" insisted Erfan. "When is such a meeting going to happen next? And you can just get a chagar later. Think of having the daughter of a king for a patikasi wife!"
    The debate continued on similarly.


    Farrukhzad did not participate for he was studying for and exam secured by our fathers for him.


    As it turned out, each of us was a little wrong and a little right.




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    * A patikasi wife was the privileged wife, who had more rights than others and more power. The amount of freedom allowed to her varies by source
    *A chagar wife was not privileged and was more of a possession to be used as her husband saw fit
    *A third type of wife,, the independent wife, also existed; she would have chosen her husband and refused others chosen for her, and would have reached a certain age


    Thank you Callaigh. I was going for a feeling of that sort, for Shapur is a prince of a great empire...

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    I agree with Caillagh that the formal style of the first chapter works well and this contrasts nicely with the style of the (presumably) younger Shapur in the second chapter. I enjoyed the political intrigue about the location of the gathering, the descriptions and images of the journey and the great capital city, the conversations between Shapur and his friends and also the historical details, such as the the references to Mazkadism and the words for different wives. This is very enjoyable writing .

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    III


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    The Meeting of the Kings began, as it always had for centuries, at dawn. I had struggled out of my bed and dressed in my ceremonial robes and stumbled to the central throne room. Incense filled the air and the only sounds were the rustling of cloth and the hymns of the magi. When the signal of the First Sun's Light came they began the prayers to the Divine Ahuramazda. After the sun had fully risen the magi were cut off mid-sentence and the meeting could begin in truth for now we had the Gods' favor and would talk in the light of Day and Good. The only other sign that could perhaps be more auspicious was a sudden rain fall, for water was always precious.


    The room the meeting was held in was both vast and elegant. Frequently during the meeting I found my eyes wandering from the ornate bowls and rugs on display to the colorful costumes of the attendees, many of whom seemed deep in discussion with each other. As I had predicted we bagan with the usual professions of loyalty from the various kings, even those who were here on diplomatic business, for all were servants of the Shahanshah. This took several hours for every king and his family had to swear their undying fealty and each had to do it with the proper solemnity and flair, so as to not be outdone by his rivals. We broke to eat a spare meal, then returned to the opening ceremonies. Now it was the time for gifts to be given: each king brought forth great treasures to the Shahanshah, who nodded his head to each and in return gave some small token of wealth. Great hordes of gemstones were had from the Arabian kindoms, the most elegant horses I had ever seen from the East, from the northern kingdoms fabulous pottery and metalworks. This, too, took several hours, for horses had to be brought in and chests of precious materials carried carefully to Bahran.


    Finally this ended as well, and with it the day's proceedings. Except Bahran had a surprise. He called me and my cousin Khosrou to stand beside him. I was so startled by this that Erfan had to push me forward towards the Great King. "These two young men hail from my royal house. They are here at their first meeting of kings. My heir: Khosrou. My nephew: Shapur."
    He gestured at the assembled nobility, and they all knelt before us. Thankfully I did not have to say anything, for I am sure I would not have been able to in front of all of these great and powerful men.


    Later that night I lay in my bed remembering the sight of so many kings kneeling to me.




    The next two days encompassed debates on religion. By this time the meeting had already lost my young interest and I longed to be out riding. The Armenian king Vardanes was there as a courtesy for his state followed other gods, but most of the kings followed the Light of Zoroaster. It was in these talks that the magi were most active, though they made sure their voices were heard in all matters. On the third day of this something finally caught my attention.


    They were talking about the last war with the Romans! While it ended decades ago the threat of war with Rome was always a possibility. They had made aggressive moves when Bahran was crowned and so he had agreed to pay them not to attack for the empire was having civil problems. A man called Mazdak had been preaching an alternate form of Zoroastrianism and despite being labeled a heretic gained many supporters. Shapur II had him executed but his teachings continued to spread. His wife apparently continued to spout this heresy, and now these great men were discussing it. Nima looked ill to hear our leaders discussing Mazdakism, for it went against many of the rules proclaimed by the Magi. Many other men did as well, or angry.


    Mazdak had claimed that people were created equally. He insisted that wealth be distributed and that the magis' power be checked, and that women not be used as property anymore. He wanted to reorder the system.


    Naturally this called uproar. As the arguments raged back and forth many men looked as if they would fight each other. I found myself standing out of the way next to a familiar looking boy a year or so older than me. "Crazy, this?" he said, gesturing towards the arguments nearest to us. "It is. Not at all what I expected."
    "I hope those Magi, those priests lose," he said vehemently. I looked at him quizzically.
    "I'm Armenian," he said, shrugging. "They have tried to force their religion on us dozens of times!"
    "But don't some of your people lready follow Zoraster?"
    He paused for a second. "Well, yes. But we don't want your corrupt magi. I am Datuvahya. What is your name?"
    "I can't blame you for that. I follow Zoraster and Ahurmazda, but these priests overstep themselves. I am called Shapur."
    "The one that the Shahanshah introduced the first day?"
    "The same," I replied.
    "I - I beg your forgive-"
    I cut Datuvahya off. "Easy man. I took no offense. A man is entitled to think what he wants. To an extent."
    And so, apparently, was a woman. To an extent.


    I spent the remainder of that day with Datuvahya and Farrukhzad, mingling idly with the other young nobles who were present and yet had no voice in this assembly. We were here for support, to run errands - especially the delivery of messages around the room - and make acquaintances.


    When a final decision was arrived at, Mazdak's teachings were adopted, albeit in a roundabout way. First and foremost, the power of the Magi was to be greatly reduced, their lands redistributed- except for the temple lands, of course. This caused great uproar. For myself I could not understand why; the temples still had their land and it was easily enough to support them. Our class system was to remain: Nobility and the priesthood, the artestar and asrons; skilled workers and artisans, the hutuxsih; peasants, the wastaryosih; and merchants, although a man could change his status now if he was truly exemplary. Thirdly, women were to regain some of their ancient rights, and rights that many of the northeastern tribes still observed: a certain degree of autonomy, right to some legal proceedings, and they were allowed more freedom of socialization and even work. They also regained their right to have a say in marriage negotiations, which they always had in name at least, if not in practice, and in some instances could claim an inheritance. The three types of wives were to remain: the patikhasi wife, the privileged, main wife; the chagar, subordinate wife; and the khwasray, self-entrusted or independent wife, although even the chagar wives would be given more honor now and would have more of a say in their fates, and that of their children.


    In the end Bahran had overuled all opposition, and there had been a lot, stating with his booming voice "I AM THE SHAHANSHAH, KING OF KINGS. I SPEAK FOR AHURMAZDA ON THIS EARTH."
    So the issue was settled.




    That night my father searched me out to ask me what I thought ofthese new changes. I answered him truthfully, saying I did not understand them entirely but that they seemed for the best.
    "They are, and we approached them in the true steps of Ahurmazda, with both Good and Evil. We sorted through Mazdak's misguided teachings to pull out the best parts while discarding those that would overturn our society, and in dealing with the Magi and nobles obtained many important concessions, while allowing some to fail. It is the good way. Now, have you noticed anything important this week?"
    "Not yet," I answered. "Perhaps. I will talk to you after the first day of feasting."
    My father nodded and walked away. Tomorrow was the beginning of the end of the meeting, a time for people to gather and to socialize or make agreements. Tomorrow I would talk to two kings. I sat nervously on the veranda contemplating the stars and the task I had given myself.


    A cacophany of noise filled the banquet hall. Hundreds of people were being fed the richest delicacies and finest drinks from all corners of the empire and beyond. Mouthwatering scents of meets, fruits and spices pleasantly assaulted my nose as I searched for my two targets. Another man my path and slipped me a scrap of parchment before disappearing into the throng. I did not need to read it; I recognized the pattern on it: it was an invitation to come to the side-room of the Kartli. Every kingdom had one of these, even the guest kings. It was a place to conduct private business and it was a severe breach of custom to enter one without an invitation. The Kartli either sought to honor me or thought that I would be easy to manipulate. So I did not go immediately. Instead I accepted an invitation to the side room of the Mazun who were friendly enough but complaining about the new changes and their neighbors. King Anmar was apparently offended by the trade terms recently sent to him by Al-Nuamen of the Lakhmid Kingdom. And the Himyar, another small kingdom in the Arabian peninsula, were as hostile as ever. It seemed that all of the Mazun despised these two other kingdoms. King Anmar also had his family with him: his son Mudi, about my age, another son called Zuraq who was several years younger than us, and his daughters Usaimah, Dalkiya abd Bilqis who were between five years older than me and half a year younger. I talked with Mudi for some time, though he seemed to think about all of his answers to my questions for some time. We spoke mostly of our journeys to Stakkr - his by sea for the most part, mine by horse, and concluded that both were good ways to travel, and that pirates and bandits should go west to trouble other peoples..


    I had thought that I was careful and seemed innocent, but as I left I could feel several pairs of eyes burning my back. And so I obtained invitations for Erfan and Nima and sent them in to that room in my stead. I talked next with Shamash-shum-ukin, king of the Afrighids. His people were loud and vibrant, the women beautiful and revelling in their new-found freedom in the city (for they had had it in their own lands before) and he invited me to sit next to him immediately, and I listened as he and the others recounted great feats of horsemanship and battle tactics. It was invigourating and much of the formality of the previous days was missing. I was introduced to Shamash-shum-ukin's children, his Assur-ah-iddin and his daughters Betjat and Behnaz; both were beautiful, wild-looking, and I could not for the life of me tell them apart. Their only request was that I bring a man of theirs into my sevice, which I accepted. His name was Bahmanyar, and he was my age.


    I finally made my way to the room of Osaces of the Kartli. He sat there in his room with few attendants. My guess was that they had been sent to make as many deals with the other kings as possible, for Kartli was a relatively new kingdom. They were a semi-nomadic tribe that had settled in a well-fortified region of the Caucasus mountain range. To Osaces' right sat his son Gundaparnah, a tall and strong looking young man wearing simple clothes. Farther down were his daughters Nidintu and Beletsunu. Both were appealing to the eyes and I began to wonder if the kings only brought their attractive daughters or if I was just fortunate. We talked for some time ......... and I was given a scroll with a proposal to give to my father.


    I met many girls that day, mostly from the northern kingdoms. The restrictions on them had been lightened and Bahran had been adamant that they be brought to the feast away from the women's quarters, and so they had been. I met Balashi of Atropatene's niece Chalipa, a petite girl with large eyes, Delbar, as distant relation of Lazica's Izates who ever desired peace; the twins Lalan and Kiana who were daughters of a renowned Parthian warlord who gave me a gift of 100 fine horses, Anmar of Mazun's daughters and many more.


    I also met many men and boys, but in itself that was not strange - I saw them everywhere and always at important meetings.




    *****************************




    In the end I did not have much to offer my father, save that Anmar of Mazun in Arabia and Osaces of the Kartli did not seem to look upon Armenia and the Lakhmids favorably. He nodded, then asked me about Bahmanyar.

    I shrugged. "Shamash-shum-ukin asked me to take him. He was very entertaining, so I said yes."


    My father sighed. "Shapur, many of these men want nothing more than to get close to the royal family. For anything. Favor. Rewards. Power. Assassination. They will sell their daughters and enslave their sons so a smart man is careful about his choice of companions."


    "Like you choose your friends?"


    "Perhaps."


    "Well then, I shall keep him, for I could use a friend among the Afrighids."


    At this my father looked puzzled. "What for? We have only a tenuous claim to their lands and loyalty."


    I simply shrugged for I had no answer, save that it seemed like a good idea. Then, inspiration struck me. "What if we brought Mudi with us? He could train and learn in Ctesiphon for a year."


    My father nodded thoughtfully. "Yes, yes I suppose we could. I shall speak with Anmar about this."




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    THank you Alwyn.

    Lugo, I played a few years more of the campaign today and it got interesting real fast! I am wondering what you meant by it being insulated though

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    You do an excellent job of conjuring up an authentic-sounding world, with its arcane rituals, theological/political disputes and jostling for connections with powerful people

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    THank you Alwyn.

    Lugo, I played a few years more of the campaign today and it got interesting real fast! I am wondering what you meant by it being insulated though
    I was actually playing the Sassanids earlier last night. What I mean is you're comfortably surrounded by buffer states. It's a cocoon of +200% tribute from satraps Lazica and Armenia usually declare war when you enter war with the ERE, but there's only a war on one or two fronts, counting the Ghassanids, who your vassals dispose of in any event. It requires skill to win, but I can't think of a scenario other than Legendary This Is Total War, where you would lose the campaign as the Persians. I'm looking forward to the excellent story telling continuing. I'm glad it got interesting! Shapur always dies in my Persian campaigns btw.
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    Oh, oh now that's just sad! And yes, you are correct about that, but I've found that I can effectively "send my vassals home" by reducing their armies in the save file.

    And thank you Alwyn, that's good to hear. I meant to look up a couple cultural facts and ended up doing a few hours of research into Sassanian culture
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    Good updates. I especially like chapter III - it really conjured up the atmosphere of the meeting, with people conducting business in their different rooms, all hoping to gain some advantage for their kingdom (and themselves, if possible). I'm looking forward to discovering the consequences of Shapur accepting Bahmanyar, and of the presence of Mudi. I hope, despite Lugotorix's experience, Shapur won't die just yet...

    And I can completely understand the research thing. It's amazing how hard it can be to stop once you start looking things up!






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    IV
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    A year and some months passed. I came to know the lands of Asoristan and its people better. I felt the first real fear of combat as I faced some rebellious dehkans, but Narsieh persuaded them to return to their estates and disperse their men. The changes decided upon by the Meeting of Kings caused equal parts of joy and hate, although I was more or less unaffected. Even Nima did not not seem too hostile to them, for as he said, "The teachings of Zoraster have remained, only the interpretation of them has changed." The nobility was pleased that the power of the magi had been reduced, and if the priests wanted to stir up rebellion it could really only be done in the country, for the lot of the common people had improved as well.


    We were constantly busy. We were being trained to be warriors and statesmen; no soft pampered lives for us. When we returned to Ctesiphon we were looked upon with a mixture of amusement, contempt, indignation, and approval, depending on the source. Those young nobles who never left their cool palaces looked at our callused hands and sun-bronzed skin and called us uncivillized, although we were not. We spent hours riding, fighting mock battles and tracking, honing the arts of archery and hand to hand combat; we spent many more hours learning from the works of great men such as Aristotle, Kaesar, Zoroaster and Mazdak, Suhn Zu and Shapur I.


    Of my companions, several were quite close to me, and as far as I could tell it was not for any political gain - as it were, most of them needed little, if any of that, although favor with the royal family was never a bad thing.


    Nima was quite average looking save for two features: he was as tall as I was and had a piercing gaze. He did not seek out unwarranted attention and was the most cultured of us.


    Aram, whose name meant peaceful, was a great bull of a boy, clumsy until he was put on a horse - then he was nearly untouchable.


    Erfan was quiet and wickedly clever; he was responsible for most of the trouble that Aram got into, yet it was never malicious. He enjoyed outsmarting his opponents and would have endless arguments with Nima, which they both claimed to hate - although I believe they enjoyed them.


    Mudi, Prince of Mazun, was built like Aram but smaller, and both had begun to grow heavy beards. His family were the Persian rulers of that Arabian kingdom, and had no love for their neighbors. He was friendly and nearly as good a horseman as I; he had spent much of his time in his father's fleet and so did not ride as often as I, and the heavy cavalry training he received while in Ctesiphon was utterly foreign to him. He described desert wars as sandstorms: light, quick, and everywhere, seeking to sting the opponent to death. He had wanted to see Ctesiphon and the mountains of Armenia and Atropatene, and so his father had allowed him to come with us. I liked him.


    Bahmanyar was slight, and, being from the Afrighids, was easily the best rider and archer among my men. Often at night we would listen to him describe the great open plains of the north and the dancing alliances of the steppe tribes, and the women who could ride as well as any man. While many of us were skeptical of this last claim, it was an intriguing idea nonetheless.

    And Hamun, who despite his arrogance was unfailingly loyal. He, like me, kept his face clean-shaven and wore his hair long, and he had the best grasp on the politics of the empire. He was also distantly related to me.


    Farroukzad was also a good friend, but he had been gone for some time for civil service tests.


    There were others in addition to these seven, but for now they will suffice.


    These men, for we were all on the cusp of manhood at the time, would be traveling with me on to make a deal with Osaces of the Kartli. Mudi, however, was returning to Mazun for ceremonies that would be held in his honor, for he was the most promising son of his father Shahrdar Anmar. We parted ways in at the Moon Gate of Ctesiphon, on the western side of the city, him to go south and myself to go north.


    "You should come visit Mazun," he said. "It is a desert kingdom, yes, but not so barren as the one in Persis that we rode through a year ago. And the hunting!" He waved vaguely, as if mere words could not articulate the grandeur of the sport in his kingdom.


    "I would like that," I replied.


    Mudi insisted that I come, for he wanted to prove that "not all of the northerners were as arrogant as father thinks." I laughed at this. "Besides," he said, "you would like my family, and I would appreciate you taking one of my brothers to Ctesiphon for a better education. We could, ah, possibly lift some taxes on your traders," and smiled almost mischievously.


    "Alright," I said, clasping his arm. "I will speak to my father. I will see you in a few months."


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    We rode north, through Media-Atropatene, and Balashi sent an escort to augment my party, as he was obligated to do as Shahrdar of Atropatene. The noble who led it was called Artaxshasa and he was not given much to conversation. This was fine, for Erfan seemed to know the names of many of the plants and beasts to be found in the hills we were riding through and talked enough to make up for our silent escort. Artaxshasa did brighten when I called a stop for a two-day hunt, in which we brought down several ibex and very nearly a magnificent leopard, but it was able to dance away from any weapon cast in its direction. I gifted half of the horns to Artaxshasa on his departure at the border of Armenia, and we continued on.


    We continued northward into Armenia, until Nima stopped me. "Shapur, there is no escort." He cut me off as I began to reply. "No, there is a guardhouse down the left fork of this road, and that is where we were to meet them. They are not there."


    Frowning, I turned to the man in charge of my escort, another of my father's friends called Perozes. He squinted down the road, but could not see as far as Nima. He jerked his head toward the house and five men broke from the formation to scout the area. They returned shortly, reporting that it was deserted and showed no signs of occupation or a fight.


    Now Perozes looked worried. "Should we continue?" I asked him.


    "Yes," he said hesitantly. "Yes, but we will take the right fork. It will take longer but we will be in territory of Arran, and we have no reason to suspect them of foul play."


    "Do we have enough reason to suspect Shahrdar Vardanes of that?" asked Aram.


    "Do we not right here?" muttered Hamun.





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    Shahrdar - a client king



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    I like the way that you introduce the companions of Shapur, I hope that we will find out more about what happens to them in future chapters . I find the explanations of historical terms such as Shahrdar helpful.

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    You are a talented writer. Please keep them coming. I just found this series a couple days ago, and I was so intrigued that I read them all in an hour. Thank you for the incredible amount of effort you put into it.

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    Thank you for your kind words; I shall endeavor to continue!

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    "Welcome to the lands of the Kartli, Wizpur Shapur. What business of Shahanshah Bahram brings you here today?"


    I sat for a moment before replying. Osaces was a powerfully built man, thickly musced and strong in all senses of the word. Neither of us were required by etiquette to bow to the other. Or, rather, I was, but for him to insist upon it could bring the wrath of Eranshahr upon the Kartli, for I was a Wizpur, a prince of the royal blood and he lord of a small mountain kingdom.


    "I bring greetings, king, and two gifts, if you will have them." I lay the first on the floor: an olive branch, which was ferried to Osaces by a servant. He picked it up, examined it briefly, and then returned it to the servant with a nod. The servant then brought it back to me, and I smiled. "Thank you, Osaces, the Shahahshah will be most pleased. Secondly, I bring the gift of wealth." I placed a small gilded box in the servant's hands. It contained valuable dyes and spices, and represented trade. Osaces examined this too, and did not return it to me, signifying his acceptance of the proposal. My father had been right about him. I motioned Erfan forward from the wall of the chamber and directed him to speak to Osaces' vizier about the details of the trade agreement.


    Osaces led me back to the King's Wing of the palace, a finely decorated area, though of course it paled in comparison to Ctesiphon and Stakkr. His family was waiting. "You remember them of course?"


    "Yes, I replied. Gundaparnah, well met again." Osaces' son nodded. "And Nidintu, words of her beauty have spread across the lands." She smiled faintly. "And Beletsunu, the younger sister, equally as beautiful. I hope I have the honor of spreading the first words of her beauty." She smiled, and Osaces grinned.


    "You have a way with words, Wizpur Shapur. If my son spoke as well as you he need not to have become such a fine warrior. Now, come," and with that he led me back to the throne room, for Erfan and Perozes had finalized the terms of the trade agreement. With that success, we were dismissed to our rooms.
    We departed in the morning, for I had business to attend to.


    We returned to Ctesiphon without incident and made our report to Bahram. His son Khosrou was also present, for he was being groomed to be Shahanshah after Bahram. I had not seen much of my cousin, for I had been outside of Ctesiphon often for my training. I departed to Bahram discussing an alliance with the Kartli against Vardanes of Armenia.


    Before I departed to Mazun, my father suggested a marriage to one of Osaces' daughters. "The Kartli seemed to favor you, and we need an ally in the north."


    "We need allies everywhere, father, but I would not be opposed to such a marriage."


    He nodded, thoughtfully, and waved me away. And so I began to prepare for another journey, this time to the south.



    A short one, but something soon to follow that is not directly related to this arc
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    Interlude I

    394 AD, Autumn, Sextus Balvenius Perennis, Aquitania, Legio VI VICTRIX et al


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    "Almighty and eternal God, those who take refuge in you will be glad and forever will shout for joy.


    "Protect these soldiers as they discharge their duties. Protect them with the shield of your strength and keep them safe from all evil and harm. May the power of your love enable them to return home in safety, that with all who love them, they may ever praise you for your loving care. We ask this through Christ our Lord."


    "Christe eleison" was the reply, chorused from twenty thousand throats.


    The legionaries dispersed back to their tents and began the arduous task of breaking down the camp. The air was tense - there was a battle coming. Every drop of rain seemed to be heavily laden with the tension, only adding to the burdens of the milites.


    Callistus and Liborius finished stowing their gear, then moved to their positions in the rapidly growing column of soldiers. Callistus, whose name meant beautiful, was ironically anything but that. A stocky man with a squashed nose and missing an ear, he had the look of a grizzled veteran despite being in only his second year of service. Liberius was much taller and compared to his companion looked to be far too thin to be a soldier, yet a soldier he was. For Roma, ancient glorious Roma, was faltering and needed any man who could fight to keep the eternal city eternal.


    The column began advancing, each unit chanting "Nobiscum Deus" thrice as it exited the camp.


    The men marched on, leaning into the chill wind that sheared unmercifully through their tattered cloaks, heads bent, focusing on putting one foot in front of the other.
    Most were silent, but there was some noise besides the clank of armor, the squish of boots sinking into mud. There were occasional oaths and muted conversations. To the right of Liberius in the column, another man called Donatus was muttering to himself: "Near forty-fecking-thousand godforsaken pagans, and there's but only what? A not even twenty of us? Daft. Mad and daft and foolhardy. How do they expect us to..."




    Liborius lost track of his words as the man droned on, criticizing the foolhardy natures of the generals, the officers, Augustus and even God Himself. To his left Callistus was quietly praying.


    "...teacheth my hands to war, and my fingers to fight: my goodness, and my fortress; my high tower, and my deliverer; my shield..."
    Silently Liborius followed along, for while he was not so adamant nor so loud of a believer as Callistus, he could use all the help that God in His grace could provide. They all could.


    After an eternity that was over too quickly, the army began to deploy into their lines. Under Sextus Balvenius Perennis, the Dux Armoricani, they had quick-marched to the coast to intercept a vast Suebi horde and now were about to engage them. Down the gentle, almost imperceptible slope of the hill and beyond a small copse of trees the Suebi chieftains were also deploying their men, albeit in a less organized fashion.


    Once set, the Romans grounded their shields and leaned on them, glad for any rest before the engagement began in earnest. Already small groups were skirmishing, cavalry, slingers and the like poking and prodding at each other, trying to sniff out any weakness in the enemy's formation. It did not last long.


    The Suebi, no doubt emboldened by thoughts of the richness of Iberia, the beautiful women and plentiful fields, surged forward. Liborius paled, his grip white-knuckled on his lance while Callistus crossed himself.




    "Ready!" came the preparatory order.


    The ordinarius in charge of the 71 men in Callistus and Liborius' unit , down from the full strength of 80, shouted "Help us," as did every other ordinarius down the line.


    "O God!" came the reply in unison, leaping from twenty thousand throats. The sound checked the Suebi, if only for a second, before they resumed their advance upon the Roman lines.


    "Form!" roared the ordinarius. 71 shields were hefted, straps checked one last time. "Check your weapons," the ordinarius had said back in Lugdunensis, "and then check them again." Every man was remembering that now.


    "Testudo!" With a collective noise between a grunt and a shout of defiance, the company formed the formation, as did the rest of the Roman line, causing a dull rumble as shields bumped each other and men rattled them, ensuring that they overlapped to provide full coverage from missiles.


    In a few minutes they were doing just that. A hail of arrows and stones bounced of the testudos; virtually no Romans were injured. This changed when the Suebi javelin-men came within range. Their heavier missiles pierced some shields, killing or wounding the owners outright or opening them up to further missile fire by weighing down the shields. Shrieks of pain rose, dispersed throughout the line.


    "Here it comes!" shouted Liborius. God but he hated enduring the storms of missiles the Germanii were so fond of. Through narrow gaps in the Testudo he could see the Suebi infantry closing, breaking into a run, howling as they came.


    "...and scatter them: shoot out thine arrows, and destroy them." As Callistus prayed the Suebi broke into a sprint to close the last few yards between them and the Romans. As if in answer to Callistus' prayer a shower of javelins streaked over the testudo and sliced through the front ranks of the charge as men crumpled and fell. The impetus of their charge disrupted, the Suebi met the Roman line rather softly. The braced Romans had no problem holding their formation.


    To the far right horses were screaming and all around there was the great clamor of war. The men in the front ranks of both armies heaved at each other with their shields, occasionally jabbing at each other with spears or sneaking a slash with swords and knives. Then men behind held shields above their heads to fend off the ever-present missile fire. Callistus was in the front rank engaged in a deadly pushing contest with a similarly-sized German when the man to his right took a javelin to the face, falling instantly in a spray of blood. Donatus stepped forward to fill the gap in the line; luckily the spray of blood had blinded the German in front of him. Donatus dispatched the man easily with a spear thrust into his unarmored chest. He too, was soon engaged in a pushing match.


    After several minutes of grunting and heaving, Donatus yelled "Callistus. On 3 a big one. 1,2, 3!" Both men heaved, giving their all, and three Suebi warriors stumbled back ever so slightly. But in was enough. Liborius jabbed his spear forward into the throat of one, ripped his spear out amidst a font of blood, then rammed his spear forward again only for it to deflect of his target's helmet. The man's head was knocked back violently. Another soldier down the line took advantage of this and crushed his face with the pommel of his sword. The German was held there for several minutes, his face a mangled mess, pinned by the crush of men between the walls of shields.



    The struggle continued. Exhausted men pushed at each other and flailed their weapons at each other. Every so often a man would fall screaming to add to the pile of bodies beneath the combatants' feet. Callistus tripped over a corpse and a Suebi slammed his spear into his gut, throwing the Gallic Roman back into the formation. From the second line of the formation Liborius took advantage of the man's overextended arm and sawed his spearhead over the crook of the German's elbow, laming his arm instantly. Liborius stepped forward to close the hole left by Callistus.


    Unexpectedly the man with the lamed arm whipped his head into Liborius'. They both reeled back and another German snaked his shortsword at Liberius' face. The blade, while pitted and dull cut through his face easily. Half-blinded Liborius dropped spear and shield and grappled with the man, opening him to attacks from other Romans' blades. As the German was pierced with multiple blades both he and Liborius collapsed into blackness.


    As the darkness closed around him, Liborius heard a victorious cheer and an chorus of screams from far to the left.





    So..... yeah. I had originally planned on writing about the WRE, but then I changed my mind. Still, I thought I might as well use this bit of writing, and who knows, maybe I will do the WRE at some point in the (distant) future

    Alwyn: thank you, and if I saw the terms such as Shahrdahr without any context I would have no idea what they meant. I feel like they lend some authenticity. And we shall be seeing more of Shapur's friends. Also Mudi will be returning in the next update (as soon as I rewrite it)
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