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    Default The Stormy Skies (Discontinued as of 19/08. See last post for details.)

    Before any of you ask, no, I have not gotten bored of Empire and Republic (I do not speak for my audience on this, but hey, I hope people like it!). I actually have written a few chapters ahead, but just need a little bit to think about where to go with the plot, as well as take a break from that sort of thing. So, I decided to try my hand at something different. As it so happens, a short story (not that short, but it's hardly epic fantasy) came to mind.

    I, like any other post pubescent male, love pirates. I mean come the hell on, it's pirates! So, I began to pace and when I pace comes character, comes plot, comes story, comes setting and bingo, we have enthusiasm and ability to write! So please, enjoy it, it's set in a world full of airships that conveniently look like 19th century style sailing ship. (I must figure out a plausible explanation for them being able to fly, or I could just ask you to suspend your disbelief.)

    Prologue: The Encounter
    “Captain! We’re gaining on them!” one of the sailors shouted above the wind, as the Sickle sailed through the sky like a huge, wooden, lumbering bird. Captain Grant Calrich stood at the helm, watching the other ship in front of them. A dual propeller schooner, it was the same class as the Sickle but its propellers were spinning noticeably slower and the crew on board were beginning to come into view, getting bigger every second.

    We haven’t done any damage to them…maybe they’ve given up?

    As they began to pull closer, a small white flag was hastily pulled up above the opposing ship.

    “Hold fire men!” Grant shouted as he pulled up alongside, taking care to ensure that the enemy crew saw each and every weapon on board the Sickle. The weapons were mostly rifles and some small explosives, but even standard Navy ordinance struck fear into any pirate. His men stood to attention, all of tgem armed with the rifles, three of them sat in the rigging.

    As they pulled up alongside, Grant left the helm and shouted over the side of the ship,

    “My name is Grant Calrich, Captain of the Free People’s Navy and Overseer of the Fifty-Sixth Region! I demand your surrender, and your ship, your crimes will be dealt with in a court of law.”

    There came a long, drawn out, throaty laugh and on the other ship stepped up a man with a lot of stubble, and grey hair. He wore a headband, and in one hand was a sword, the other a pistol, an ornate thing that looked every bit as worn as he did.

    “And my name is Lauf Cryoson, First Mate of this fine ship, master of these Free Men. We bow not to your laws, nor to you, no matter what you and your masters think. Would you like me to wake the Captain for you, he has a finer way with words than me and could probably speak plainer. Though, if you’d be so kind as to look at the name of this ship, you won’t be so keen to have him wake.”

    Grant peered round the side of the Sickle’s wheel, in the distance by the prow, he could see the name of the enemy ship written in thick black letters.

    Dominus

    He felt his breath slow. Dominus was the ship belonging to the one person that no self-preserving captain would ever wish to face on the Thin Sea. Carson, the most feared of all pirates.

    His first mate, Stephens, stepped up behind him, his face filled with concern.

    “We might be in a pickle here Captain. Orders?”

    “Give them hell.” Grant muttered back. If he was going to die here, he’d die with his pistol in one hand and Carson’s throat in the other.

    “FIRE!” roared Stephens and every rifle responded by opening fire at Lauf and the Dominus. The pirates dived for cover as the gunshots rang out, followed by a brief pause, and another volley.

    Two more shots before reload. Then we pray that they forgot to bring theirs.

    “So, no reasoning with such ground lovers eh?” Lauf roared after the second volley, his voice reaching Grant’s ears. “Fire back!”

    The pirates pulled out an assortment of firearms and opened fire in return from behind whatever cover they could find and smoke filled the air between the two ships, drifting down past the keels and into the empty air below. Screams and other terrible noises followed and as the smoke cleared Grant saw three of his own crew lying on the deck, blood covering the deck around them. He himself had used the ship’s wheel for cover, one shot whistled past his face. Looking up, he saw the Free Men jumping the small gap between the vessels, swords in hand.

    Offensively minded eh? Well, we’ll see if they have a chance at beating a trained naval crew!

    “Draw swords!” he roared at his crew, who duly obliged, rushing the pirates as they

    He grabbed at his pistol, quite ornate looking, but technology had moved on over the years and this thing could shoot six shots before requiring reloading. His own men drove the Free Men towards the sides, uttering blood curdling screams as they did. But then Lauf leapt onto the Sickle and drew his sword, driving back Grant’s men with expert blows.

    He sure can move fast for an old bastard.

    Grant aimed and fired four of his shots at Lauf, but the shots were wild and hasty, he knew the moment he fired them. Two smashed the deck at Lauf’s feet, another sailed over his shoulder, and the fourth buried itself in the shoulder of a snarling Free Man. He silently cursed himself and moved into the melee. He slashed at one Free Man and cut him down, grimacing as his uniform was spattered with blood.

    Suddenly the battlefield seemed to clear and Lauf stood opposite him, pointing his pistol at him. Grant’s eyes widened, pulled out his own and they both fired one shot. Time seemed to stop, the very battle itself seemed to stop and Grant’s heart couldn’t help but stop as he expected the ball to pierce it.

    There was a moment of silence amidst the carnage, and Grant looked down, and realised that they both missed.

    “Bah, guess I need more practice.” Lauf shrugged and put his pistol back, before rushing at Grant with his sword. Grant hastily put his pistol back and raised his own and parried the first thrust, before responding in kind. Lauf threw himself behind the mast to avoid a wild swing, before jabbing twice. Around them, the fight continued to rage, gunshots still coming from the rigging and bodies falling left and right.

    And then there was a loud bang. A huge thump upon the railings of the Dominus that stopped the fight dead. Lauf turned, his eyes widening in shock, his mouth open. Grant turned his head slowly to see a long haired man standing there, a mischievous grin on his face, one fist clenched where he’d smashed it onto the railings. He stepped onto the Sickle, while slowly removing a pistol from a holster at his side. He walked straight up to Lauf, ignoring all of the armed men around him as if they were phantoms

    “Lauf. What did I tell you about disturbing my rest?”

    “Forgive me Captain, this lout tried to board us. I slowed us down to stop ‘em from putting a small hole through your room.” Lauf jabbed a finger in Grant’s direction.

    Carson turned to face Grant, his grey eyes scanning him up and down. Grant felt himself start to shake. How many men had he known that had fallen to Carson? At least a dozen, and he’d heard tales of his cruelty that made even the bravest men shiver.

    “You really didn’t realise what you were dealing with here, did you? With the Dominus, a name so feared that tavern singers piss themselves when they sing of it and most of all with me, enemy to the Free People’s Navy and to this feeble excuse for a country.”

    Grant nodded slowly. He figured that he was probably best not to argue with him.

    “And you dared to fight its crew and to stir me from my well-deserved rest. That is true duty to your Navy. I like you for that. And because I like you, plus the fact that I’m in quite a hurry, I’m going to do you a big favour and let you live.”

    He turned to Lauf, who seemed surprised by such an act of generosity.

    “Gather up the dead and take them on board the Dominus.”

    Lauf nodded and waved at the surviving Free Men, who began to drag their dead and wounded off the Sickle.

    “Oh and…whatever your name is, do try to avoid crossing me again, or I will send your ship plummeting from the heavens with you tied to the mast. Good day.”

    He turned to go but then stopped, turned again with his pistol drawn.

    “On second thoughts, have a small gift from me.” he said with a soft smile, before firing a shot that went straight through Grant’s left hand. He cried out in pain and fell to one knee as the pirate leapt back onto the Dominus.

    “Onwards my shipmates! We’ve wasted enough time on this load of scum!”

    The Dominus began to move, beginning to descend, sweeping lower and lower, before disappearing into the mist far below, which covered the land beneath like a blanket.

    Grant stared into the space for a while, before grunting and turning to Stephens. He had a small cut on his arm, but otherwise seemed unharmed.

    “How many dead?”

    “Six dead, twenty wounded.”

    Half the crew. Despite their simplicity, the Naval ships simply weren’t designed to be flown with so few people.

    “Take us back to Crowltown for outfitting. Deal with the wounded, keep the dead in storage until we arrive back in port.”

    “Aye sir.” Stephens started to repeat the orders to the crew, as Grant headed inside, to his cabin.

    He sat down at his desk as he calmly wrapped a bandage round the wound in his hand. Fortunately, the ball had gone clean through, so there’d be no need for anyone to dig out the bullet with a dirty penknife. He leaned over his logbook and began to write. It would certainly be longer than the previous three days’ worth of entries, and it would certainly boost his standing when it came to dealing with other Captains. After all, who else would say that they fought Carson and lived?



    On request of the absent minded Shankbot, here is a list of all the ships that appear in the story, who they belonged to if named and whose side they are on. (Note, these ships are ones currently appearing in the story, more will be added over time)

    Free Navy


    Tyrannous: Grand Admiral Tarkon
    Daven's Heart: Admiral Loran
    Stormcloud: Admiral Crowl
    Sickle: Grant Calrich
    Elenchi: 68th Regional commanderRaven: 56th Regional Forces
    King's Bane: 56th Regional Forces




    Pirates


    Dominus: Carson
    Flint
    Four Wind: Pirate with a large hat



    The Kingdom of Isim


    Fidelis: Supreme Commander Sykil
    Gale: Captain Patricia Davenheart


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    Great work. I wonder what will happen now.

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    Flying pirates? Great idea and an enjoyable start!

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    Brilliant start! I hope we see Carson again he is very much a Blackbeard type character. Love the theme and setting as well.

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    Grrrreat start! It took me a moment to figure out why do they have to store the fallen but then it dawned on me

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    That's a fun beginning - I'll look forward to more!






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    A talky sort of chapter, give it another 2 and I'll fit in some more violence.

    CHAPTER 1


    “Port ahead Captain!” came the shout from the rigging and Grant responded with a hearty wave up at the man in question. From the cloud banks appeared Crowltown, capital of the South-Western Quadrant.

    “Blue flare!” He called out. It was the universal symbol for a docking request, and sure enough, up went the blue flare from the deck of the Sickle. From the city looming ahead came the response, a green flare rising high into the air. They went closer and closer, approaching the nearby skydock.

    “Descend to below dock level!” He shouted out to Stephens, who duly repeated the order to the men in the engine room. The response was instant, the ship fell about 20 metres and the dock’s shadow began to cover the ship. Above them, a huge hatch opened, large enough to hold a ship five times as big as the Sickle.

    “Ascend!” Grant called out. Once again the ship responded, rising up through the hatch and hovering in place. The hatch closed beneath them and on the outer face of it was a makeshift dry-dock, for the ship to rest on without toppling over.

    The ship slowly descended, landing perfectly on the dry-dock and coming to a rest. Grant gave a small sigh of relief as he let go of the wheel.

    “Good job, men.” Grant called out as he descended from the poop deck down to the main, where his men were already lowering ladders to the dock below.

    “Most of the boys that got killed were local lads.” Stephens said, following Grant as he checked various things on the deck.

    “Would you mind visiting their families then? You’ve always been better at this than me, plus I think it would upset them if I went to see them with my uniform bloodied like this.”

    "Sure thing Captain. I’ll send them your regards as well.”

    Grant gave a nod and headed towards one of the ladders, ready to climb down onto the deck below.

    He headed down Calrich Street, one of the four main streets in the city. He couldn’t help but smile that he had a street named after him. But he focused, keeping his head down, his uniform covered in a black coat. At last he came to his destination, the Naval Headquarters.

    He headed up the marble steps, nodding at the guards as he passed. As he entered into a huge entrance hall, a young man carrying a lot of books nearly crashed into him.

    “Oh, terribly sorry, I didn’t-“
    He froze as he realised who was standing in front of him.


    “Mr Calrich sir, forgive me!”

    “No bother Jeremy. Is the boss in?”

    The boy bowed his bespectacled head once more before pointing up the nearby staircase. The lad was the admiral's secretary, nervous as a rabbit but he was like a walking font of knowledge.

    “Yes, he’s just looking over some notes on the 25th anniversary celebrations.”

    Grant nodded and headed further into the complex, up three flights of stairs to the top floor. As he reached the final door marked ‘Admiral’ he reached to knock.

    Suddenly there was a loud bang

    Gunshots?


    He pushed open the door to find a gaunt looking man sitting in a chair, a pistol in hand, aiming at a small target on the wall. He turned as Grant peeked round the door and gave a small ‘humph’, before turning back and firing another shot into the wall.

    “Admiral Crowl.” Grant nodded.

    “Ah, Cal! What other wonderful news do you have to bring me?”

    “Wonderful news sir?”

    “Yes, whenever you come to see me you have something miserable to report, like pirates and robberies. Surely you have something to report that’ll be interesting.”

    Grant casually removed his coat, revealing the blood spattered blue uniform. Crowl’s eyebrow raised in response.

    “Oh? The overseer of the fifty-sixth region actually got his hands dirty? How surprising.”

    “I received a messenger bird about a pirate ship, so I decided to set out to intercept them personally, all of my subordinates were off escorting convoys or on leave.”

    “Is the bastard rotting on the ground with his own ship mast driven through his gizzards?”

    “No.”

    “You let him get away? You, the most stubborn pursuer I’ve ever met? Are you really the same Cal who pursued that pirate for two months before the scum gave himself up in despair?”

    “It’s difficult to win when your opponent is Carson.”
    Crowl laughed, a long drawn out laugh as he smashed his hand on the desk repeatedly.

    It’s wonderful he finds my near death so amusing…


    “You ran into Carson? And you really are a living, breathing man? Ahahahahahahaha! That, my old friend, is incredible!”

    “Not really. He let us leave, not before putting a hole through my hand. If he wanted to, I imagine we’d all be dead.”

    “Why didn’t you clear this with me before you went out? I would have loved to have a crack at Carson, even without the other Birds of Prey.”

    That would be a battle.
    The Birds of Prey were the collective nickname of the four Quadrant Admirals. The four used to be part of the same regional fleet and their exploits were the stuff of legend and Grant had seen more than the legend tellers ever had.

    “I’m not entirely sure you could have taken him. We all basically gave up when he emerged on deck, and from what I’ve heard...”

    “Heard, ha! I’ve had the privilege of witnessing Carson in action. He took down three ships and managed to behead my predecessor before making his dramatic escape. Not even us four Birds could clip his wings. I’d love to meet him again, if only to put six bullets in him.”

    “So I hear you’ve had lots of paperwork regarding the 25th anniversary.” Grant said, changing the subject as he noticed the obscene amount of paper on his desk. The admiral didn’t even glance at the paper, as if he was afraid of it.

    “Unlike a good fight, paperwork never ends. After the first 50 sheets, it starts to get to you. I wonder if it’s even worth the bother of holding these celebrations. I can’t even imagine what the other Birds...Gods, I don’t want to imagine what sort of madness the Grand Admiral has to deal with!”

    “Come now, 25 years of freedom is worth celebrating. It’s a big deal, quite a nostalgia trip for old bastards like you and me.”

    “If you told me 25 years ago that I’d run from a corrupt, broken excuse for a monarchy to end up doing paperwork in a flying city, far from any action, I’d have rather stayed and been executed.”

    Grant smiled and drew up a seat, facing Crowl. He noted yet more paper under the desk.

    Jeremy must blow a gasket over this organisation.


    “Anyway, I just thought I’d come as courtesy really, so how about that drink you promised me last week?” It was an old saying ‘A sky captain who’s sober on duty isn’t doing it right.’

    “Fair enough.” Crowl shrugged and grabbed two glasses, filling them with brandy from an expensive looking bottle.

    “The Grand Admiral’s finest. I got my hands on some about six years ago after a particularly notorious pirate walked straight into a trap and we captured him. A drink fit for a true sky captain.” Crowl downed his in one, Grant sipped his in response. It was strong, very strong, but the nice kind of strong that sets the back of one’s throat tingling.

    “Speaking of the Grand Admiral, he gave me a task that I might just delegate to you.”

    “Oh?” Tasks from the Grand Admiral were usually dangerous but usually quite lucrative as well.

    “There’s a trade convention being held down below. Apparently merchants and Navy alike have been invited, because some fellow says that he has a technological breakthrough to show us.”

    “Not another one….remember the last time this happened?”

    The last time Grant had been to a supposed ‘technological breakthrough’ a man claimed that he could control the power of the winds by waving a piece of wood. The Grand Admiral had also been there, halfway through he ordered the man to be thrown off a Skydock as punishment. The stick failed to provide an updraft to save him and they found his body scattered over about five acres.

    “Apparently it’s the real deal this time. The grand Admiral wanted me on guard duty, but as we all know that isn’t my style. So, I’ll have you and the 55th deal with guarding the place.”

    “The 55th are run by an incompetent captain, he’d be better off guarding his bank account than lives!”

    “Use him as a human shield then, remember the shoot-out in Crikensby?” Crowl said with a shrug.

    “You mean the one where you grabbed the fat bartender, shoved him through the doorway where the pirates were hiding and then charged in once they’d used up all their shots on him? Because I still have no idea how we weren’t questioned about that.”

    “Either way, they are your orders. Complete them using all the powers at your disposal. This includes the right to shoot on sight.”

    “Of course, sir.”

    “Also, get that uniform cleaned up, the last thing merchants want to see is Navy types covered in blood.”

    “Anything for you old friend, anything for you.”

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    A very good talky chapter. Love the relationship you've set up between these two. +rep
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    I concur with Shankbot, a very good talky chapter with two interesting characters and some nice back story. Wonderful stuff.

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    I thought I'd add one more chapter as a little tease and then continue sometime next week, just to keep you all hooked. In any case, enjoy this prelude to violence.

    Chapter 2
    The Sickle passed through the mist, revealing the bustling city of Kraulaw. Though many of the Ground Dwellers lived in the untapped wilderness, trade with the Free Nation had caused many trading hubs to form, driven by the vast deposits of such things as wood, iron and silver. Kraulaw was one of them.

    Grant squinted through a telescope as they approached the nearby docks on the south side of the city, similar to the ones in Crowltown except fastened firmly onto the solid earth. There were dozens, more even than usual due to the supposed technological breakthrough. Behind the Sickle sailed two other ships, the Raven and the King’s Bane. Both were members of the 56th Regional forces, and soon Grant noted four ships belonging to the 55th docked below.

    He approached Stephens, who was busy calling out orders for the final approach.

    “Moor the ship, then arm some of the lads. I want rifles and swords covering the Town Hall’s front.”

    “What about the fellow ships? I can have them circle the town if you want, to prevent an approaching pirate or other such annoyances.”

    “Good idea, signal them to do so. I want the 55th to take the brunt of any attack, we’ll take clean up duty if necessary.”

    “I’m not sure how Mr Darmen will like that.” Stephens said cautiously.

    “He can dislike it all he likes, it’s more of a plan than he could ever come up with.” Darmen was the head of the 55th and, in Grant’s opinion, a complete imbecile.

    “Eh, not my place to question the captain’s orders. Take her down boys and signal the other ships to circle!”

    The ship touched down onto one of the docks, ladders went over the side immediately and Grant was one of the first to touch the bottom. His legs felt slightly wobbly as he began to walk, it had been a while since he’d last been to the ground, but the feeling faded quickly and his stride began to pick up pace.
    He noted a number of merchant ships as he passed them, mostly all Sky Dwellers but a few rich Ground Dwellers had also made the journey. Some of them noticed him as he passed and began to whisper. He wasn’t surprised, his name had made the rounds more than once in taverns, among merchants as well as ne’er do wells. Though he wouldn’t be half surprised if some of them were involved with said ne’er do wells, some of the pirates seemed to be well funded and equipped.

    As he entered the city proper, he saw his destination, a huge building referred to as the Town Hall. It was also the centre of business, auctions and trade.
    Making sure his coat covered his weapons, his trusty rapier and pistol, he headed towards it, passing a group of drinking men in Navy uniforms. One of them noticed him and nearly choked on his drink, tapping the other men on the shoulders. They all turned and stood at attention as he passed.

    So half the guard contingent are drunk. What kind of squad is Darmen running?


    He ignored them and headed into the Hall itself, bustling with men with cloaks drawn up over their heads. Some of the merchants clearly didn’t wish to be recognised, and it was also used to prevent tactical bidding to try and outbid hated rivals. They were all heading for Auction Room 1, the largest of all the auction houses and generally home to the most valuable items. As he approached the doors, following the hooded crowd of men, he spotted Captain Darmen.

    A wrinkled old man, Darmen was one of the longest serving captains in the navy. Unfortunately, he was also a joke, forgetting things left and right and as a result had lost the respect of his men and the discipline. Grant often wondered why Crowl hadn’t retired him, though when he mentioned the subject, the admiral simply said that he ‘didn’t have the heart to tell him.’

    “Ah. Captain Calrich. Good to see you.” He said, and they headed into the room, pushing their way through the throng to the wall opposite the door. Multiple chandeliers hung from the ceiling, a balcony overlooking the entire hall lay above the door. The two leaned on the wall, while six others from the 55th covered the rest of the hall, two by the door, another two at the back by a huge stained glass window and two more protecting the stage itself.

    “I see you pulled out all the stops.” Grant said, keeping one hand inside his coat at all times.

    “Indeed. Where exactly are your lads?”

    “Out the front, covering the surroundings. No one is coming in that way.”

    As they spoke, a short man shuffled onto the stage, carrying a great many books and parchments. The room fell silent as he began to speak.

    “Greetings, friends. For many a year there has been a conundrum regarding the use of cannon on-board ships. Now, current ship technology is incapable of carrying cannons on ships, due to destabilising the ships propellers and making the thing slow and difficult to control. However, today I can announce that this problem is solved.”

    There was a murmur through the crowd and a lot of excited talking. Grant scanned the crowd and then froze, his eyes boring into a blurred face in the crowd. It looked like….no, it had to be Lauf Cryoson.

    “What’s he doing here?” he muttered to himself. Darmen turned his head.

    “What’s that? Speak up now, I’m not as young as I used to be.”

    “Stay here, I just saw an old friend.”

    He pushed his way through the crowd, until he ended up just behind what definitely appeared to be Lauf. His hood wasn’t nearly as covering as it should have been and his face was now quite plain to see. He reached out and placed a hand on his shoulder, the crowd still talking around him, he was sure none of them would care.

    “Lauf Cryoson.”

    The man froze and turned, hood falling back as he did.

    “What of it-oh. It’s you.”

    Grant gave a grin, before feeling two prods in his back. Lauf turned back around as Grant lifted his hand. The two hooded figures behind him clearly had come with more than money in their pockets.

    “Before you ask, yes, those are loaded pistols.”

    Grant didn’t feel like calling the bluff, so he restricted himself to asking questions.

    “What are you doing here? This is bold, even for you.”

    “An honest day off. Even we scum enjoy a bit of relaxation. Now, what to do about you interrupting my fun?”

    “You can’t shoot me here. You’ll be dead before you’ve run a foot.”

    He thought for a moment, before motioning to the two men behind Grant. The pressure on his back lifted instantly.

    “Over zealous bastard. Can’t a man just watch a valuable auction in peace? Honestly…”

    Lauf rolled his eyes and headed for the door, pushing through the crowd with his two men following behind him.

    That seemed too easy.


    The man at the podium began to talk again and the room fell silent yet again.

    “Through my own brilliant design I, Lazarus, have managed to create a working plan to fit an existing ship with small cannon, nothing too huge that we’d have on the side of a flying city, but enough to punch holes in an enemy ship. So I come to you today to sell you my notes, which details everything needed to create such a ship. I cannot stress the importance of this enough. So I’ve set a starting price of five million credits.”

    There was a murmur again around the auction room. Five million was beyond most merchants.

    “Who will start the bidding at five million?” Lazarus asked.

    One hand shot up.

    “Five million from the gentleman on the right.”

    Another hand shot up.

    “Five and a half million from the man in red there.” Lazarus’ eyes gleamed with glee, with more than five million he’d undoubtedly be set for life.

    The bidding continued, up to twelve million credits, by now it was clear that a Naval representative was there, only the richest investors or the state itself could afford such things.

    “So, on twelve and a half million, the bidding seems to be over. Do I see any advance on twelve and a half million? Any more-“

    And then the part of the wall where Darmen was standing was blown apart, scattering masonry and bits of the captain across the room. There was a moment of silence, followed by panic, which was augmented when three chandeliers’ supports blew apart, sending them into smashing into the crowd.

    One unfortunate was thrown backwards into Grant, sending them both spiralling to the floor. As he looked up, the men on the door seemed uncertain, this uncertainty was replaced with panic as the doors behind them burst open and armed men rushed through, shooting both of them. The two at the front dropped their weapons and tried to surrender amidst the panic, and were unceremoniously executed. Grant couldn’t see the two at the back, but there was more shooting from above, the armed men clearly had managed to get onto the balcony.

    And in through the hole in the wall, twirling a cutlass, came Carson. As he entered the shooting from above stopped, the two guards were probably dead by now. A deathly silence fell over the room as the merchants realised he was there.

    “I’d like to place a bid.” Carson said calmly, surveying the destruction like how a king surveys his kingdom from a tall hill, like a proud piece of work of his own creation.

    “That bid being zero credits and a large amount of violence.”
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    Default Re: The Stormy Skies (Updated 10/04)

    Carson's a freakin' badass.

    Interesting to see the ramifications if he gets hold of those plans.
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    Lets see some bloodshed now! To me, Carson is a lot like Blackbeard in AC4 and believe that is a compliment for a pirate character.

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    It worries me how much I enjoy writing Carson, though to be fair I love writing all the characters in this. But Carson in particular. Cheers for all the wonderful feedback so far. Pirates seems to be a brilliant way to attract readers

    Chapter 3
    Grant pulled his coat tighter, hiding any sign of his uniform. He doubted that he could take Carson alone, let alone with a dozen of his cronies.

    One of the pirates by the doors shouted across to Carson,

    “The other lot are busy causing chaos out front, we got ourselves five minutes at least.”

    “This shouldn’t take that long.” Carson responded, climbing up onto the stage, past the body of one of the dead guards. He motioned and two of the pirates grabbed all of Lazarus’ research notes, placing them in sacks.

    The man was shaking as he stood to face Carson his face a mixture of fear and outrage.

    “Now-Now what do you think you’re doing?”

    “Ah yes, I’d forgotten about you. This is the part where we steal your research and then kill you.”

    “Wait, what?” Lazarus started to shake further, his face turning a sickly pale colour.

    He fell at Carson’s feet, clutching at his coat.

    “Please sir, you can’t kill me. I-I have knowledge that will be useful for you if you take me alive. I can help you create this, nay, research further and make you more powerful than you could possibly imagine!”

    Carson raised an eyebrow, before laughing. He extended a hand to Lazarus, who took it, pulling himself up.

    “An excellent case, Mr Lazarus. Very well then, I’ll let you live.”

    “Oh, thank you sir, thank you.” Lazarus said, a beaming smile on his face.

    “No need to thank me.”

    “No, no, I insis-“

    He was cut off by Carson pulling out his pistol and shooting him straight through the face at point blank range.

    “Honestly, no need to thank me. I was joking.” He said to the corpse, before turning on his heels. He headed for the hole in the wall, as more of his men, clearly having rushed from the balcony, entered through the doors.

    “We’re pulling out. Move it, men!”

    The pirates rushed through the door, leaving a stunned crowd behind them. The shouting began the moment the pirates had left, mostly complaining about how their fellow merchants had ruined their clothes by bleeding on them. Grant stood immediately and rushed to the stage. Lazarus was dead, there was no doubt about that. He pulled out his pistol and headed for the hole. Peering round the corner, he saw the pirates heading to a nearby alley.

    We should have seen this coming.


    As he prepared to go after them, he felt a hand on his shoulder. He turned to find a woman smiling at him, which he would’ve been comforted by if she hadn’t also been holding a rifle with a spring loaded bayonet. Then came the moment of recognition.

    It can’t be!


    “M-Melissa?” Grant blushed as he spoke. She responded with a quick kiss on his cheek, before saying,

    “Yes Cal, it’s me. Now, are you going to ogle at me forever or are we going to kill some pirates?”

    I’d quite like both to do both…
    He quickly cleared his head of such thoughts and cleared his throat to speak.

    “Of course, let’s kill some pirates then.”

    The two ran down the street, placing their backs to a building as they approached the alley. Grant peered round, before ducking back as a rifle shot flew past his face.

    “Two in the alley. They seem to be covering the rest.”

    “Right, three shots each round the corner.”

    Grant and Melissa turned round the corner and fired, he his pistol, she her rifle. One of the pirates was hit before he could react, tumbling backwards as his friend retreated round a corner, firing as he went.

    Three shots from me. Three more left.


    The two headed forward, this time she poked her head round the corner.

    “No-one, he’s run into the street. Where do you think Carson docked the ship?”

    “This place isn’t that big. He might have put it straight into the ground on the East Side, the guards will let you do that for the right price.”

    They rushed out into the road, and headed down it, as one of the four main roads it led straight out of the city into the wide plains of the south eastern quadrant. Sure enough, as they exited they saw Carson and his crew boarding the Dominus, with two other ships sitting beside it. There were no docks here; the ships had been expertly landed on the ground so that they wouldn’t topple over to one side.

    “He came with friends apparently.” Melissa muttered as she checked her rifle’s remaining shots.

    “He had one of his crew in there beforehand, probably checking to see where the guards were, or whether the tech was worth stealing. I’m not really surprised he’d come with help.”

    “So how are we going to get the notes back, a suicidal charge straight at the Dominus?”

    Grant didn’t have to answer, at that moment there came a huge roar of a ship’s engines. A shadow fell across the town, across Grant, across Carson. As his gaze turned skywards, he saw a huge ship, with three huge decks.

    “A Skymaster class? You’ve got to be joking!” Grant shouted above the roar, as the wind whipped past them.

    “I wondered when he’d show up.” Melissa said, reloading her rifle.

    The ship descended, hovering feet above the ground, a mere few dozen feet from the Dominus but with careful precision so it didn’t topple over. On the side of the ship, written in red paint, was the name of the ship.

    Tyrannous

    At the side of the ship appeared a man in a blue cloak, garbed in full naval uniform. With him appeared a few dozen men with rifles. They trained them on Carson, who looked unfazed by the whole situation. Melissa motioned and Grant followed, she dived headfirst into a crater, where another ship had landed over the years, close enough to hear the conversation between the ships.

    “I am Grand Admiral Tarkon, leader of the Free Nation and head of the Free Navy. I suggest you use your last minutes of breath to beg for mercy.” The man at the railings of the Tyrannous shouted out, his voice stern and impatient.

    Carson laughed, his own men seemed less certain, as they were by far the smaller ship.

    “I thought you’d show up, dearest brother. I see you’ve pinned a few more medals on yourself and given yourself a little too much to eat to celebrate!”

    The Grand Admiral seemed annoyed, as though even being reminded of his relationship with Carson was an embarrassment. He drew his sword, and pointed it straight at the Dominus. The gun ports on the side of the three decks opened, and from each port appeared a rifle.

    “It ends here Carson. I intended to take the research by force, but your insolence seems to have given me an added bonus. I get the tech and you get to swing.”

    Carson pulled out his pistol in response.

    “All these years and your banter has yet to improve. It’s always the same, we start to really have fun and then you spoil it by threatening me with death.”

    There was a moment of silence before the Grand Admiral lowered his sword.

    “I assume you won’t surrender then.”

    “That’s the first thing you’ve gotten right this side of the decade.”

    “Very well.” He turned to the men on the deck and shouted out, his voice booming out. “Open fire, I want every shot aimed at the leader’s pretty face.”

    “Too pretty to scar.” Carson said, grinning, before diving behind the railings as the rifles opened fire. All three of Carson’s ships returned fire, but Grant doubted all three combined could hope to match the Grand Admiral’s handpicked men, especially in the numbers a Skymaster could hold.

    As the battle raged, Grant heard the engines of the parked ships start to whirr into life.

    He’s trying to escape? Good thing we put the other ships on patrol duty. He’ll be harassed all the way through launch.


    Melissa suddenly shouted above the gunshots, pointing behind them. Running down the road was Lauf and the pirate rear-guard, pursued by the 56th and the remnants of the 55h. Stephens was there, firing a pistol at the fleeing pirates.

    Melissa turned, took aim, and fired as the pirates ran past, striking one in the chest and sending him tumbling. She fired again, hitting another in the leg and leaving him howling on the ground. Ladders lowered from the Dominus as the pirates dodged more rifle fire, some coming from the Tyrannous now as the men noticed the easy targets. They ran, more falling to bullets, leaping onto the ladders and scrambling on-board. Grant noted with some disappointment that Lauf had managed to survive, he noticed his headband as he fell over the railings and to safety.

    Stephens and the rest of the ground forces rushed up beside them, taking cover in the same crater. Grant noted the old sailor was covered in blood, but most of it looked like it didn’t belong to him.

    “Sorry it took so long captain. Bullets came out of nowhere, from the front of the Town Hall mostly, but the 55th suffered badly when groups of ‘em snuck out of alleys and shot them in the back.”

    “Good job on surviving. Any news from the Raven or King’s Bane?”

    “I shot them a flare. They’ll see the battle and come to help no doubt.”

    He then seemed to notice Melissa and he gave a respectful salute.

    “Ah, Miss Melissa joins us I see. What made you want to fight with us unwashed savages once more?”

    “Navy business, you know how it is. Now, who wants to go capture a ship?”

    “I see the years haven’t fixed her insanity.” Stephens said, reloading his pistol as he spoke. He didn’t seem surprised. Then again, neither was Grant.

    “Listen, how many engines do you hear?” she said.

    Grant listened closely. The humming and roar of the engines began to separate, he heard the low rumbling of the Tyrannous as its engines began to fire up and then the sounds of two schooner class engines, slightly higher pitched.

    Only two?
    The thought began to dawn on him. Melissa grinned as she saw his expression.

    “You see? One of the ships’ engines must be a little slow. Let’s make sure they don’t fire it up!”


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    Excellent writing, top notch stuff! I can imagine the fun you could have writing Carson, he's an absolutely great character. And this Melissa chick is an interesting twist as well. Were her and Grant ex-lovers. And what a twist with the Admiral being Carson's brother, I love nothing more than some sibling rivalry. Will definitely get you some rep when I can for you definitely deserve it.

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    Default Re: The Stormy Skies (Updated 12/04) WARNING: recent chapter contains mild 12A violence. If you even care.

    As Merchant said, an excellent chapter.

    I loved the arrival of the Tyrannous, very imposing. Liking the new character, although I have a feeling she'll end up getting Grant in trouble, somehow someway.
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    Chapter 4
    Grant, Melissa, Stephens and two other men skirted around the nearby schooners, as the battle above raged. The Tyrannous’ higher decks were proving to be an advantage, as the crew had the height advantage and could fire down onto the decks of the opposing ships.

    From their distance it was easy to see which ship had the engine trouble. The Four Wind was the name on the ship and as the Dominus and the other ship began to rise she was still firmly stuck in place in the mud. The group quickly rushed against the hull to keep them from being spotted, all the attention was focused on the Tyrannous.

    “The schooner’s the same class as the Sickle.” Stephens pointed out.

    “Hmmm… Then there should be the perfect place to enter….here!” Grant said, pointing at one of the hatches on the ship. Most of them were used for firing positions, but this particular one…

    “Leads to a storage cupboard if my memory hasn’t gone funny.” Stephens said, opening the hatch to look through.

    “Right, what’s the plan once we enter?”

    “Enter the engine room, kill the guys there and smash the engines to pieces. Then the other half of the group enters and we come up from below decks and attack them from behind.” Melissa said,

    Grant nodded in response. Such audacity was why he’d fallen for her in the first place. Stephens pulled himself through the hatch; there was the sound of a soft thump as his feet hit the floor. After a moment, he called back out.

    “It’s alright. Only a load of fruit in here, nice scurvy free landing really.”

    Grant and Melissa followed, and the two 56th men came last of all. Grant placed his head against the door once they were ready.

    No noise out there. Seems fine.


    He motioned and opened the door, Stephens and Melissa taking point as they headed down the corridor to the engine room. Fortunately, knowledge of schooner structure meant that it was incredibly easy to find. They waited outside the open door, listening in as a pirate with a ridiculously large hat berated the men working there.

    “What do you mean the engine isn’t causing the keel to rise?”

    “The sap’s isn’t heating as fast as it should. We’re working on it captain, give us a few minutes.”

    “We’ve got the Grand Admiral baying for our blood out there! We don’t have time!” the man shouted, sweat visibly caking his brow.

    Captain’s there. Perfect.


    Grant nodded and all five burst into the room, pointing their weapons at the captain at the engine crew.

    “Grant Calrich, 56th Regional Overseer. You’re under arrest.” Grant said, he noted Melissa rolling her eyes at such a dramatic entrance.

    One of the engine room men didn’t take the hint; he rushed at Melissa, wielding a hammer. She turned, shoved her rifle into his gut and pressed the button near the trigger, the spring loaded bayonet thrust forward, directly into the man’s gut. He collapsed, his blood covering the engine room floor.

    “One dead. Who else wants to die?” Grant asked. There was silence.

    After motioning in the rest of the 56th and 55th, Grant and the group waited at the ladder leading to main deck. The pirate captain had two pistols pointed at his head and was hauled up to the front of the group. He looked visibly shaken; he was sweating even more than before.

    When everyone was prepared, Grant pushed the hatch open and the Captain was shoved out, flanked by two members of the 55th. The rest followed, forming an intimidating looking group. One by one the pirates began to notice them and paused as they saw their captain held captive. The gunfire stopped completely and Grant fired a green flare into the air, just to convince the crew of the Tyrannous that they were friendly.

    “The Free Navy now has control of most of this ship. Your engines are smashed beyond repair and we have a force of a hundred waiting below. Surrender and we will treat you with clemency.”

    The pirates looked at each other and then back at Grant. Faced with the situation, trapped next to the most feared ship in the Free Nation, one by one, they dropped their weapons. Grant fired another flare just in case, before the rest of the group rushed out and grabbed as many of the weapons as they could piling them at Grant’s feet.

    The pirates were then bound and led below decks, some howling in rage as they realised that the hundred man army didn’t actually exist. Then he focused back on the battle. From his viewpoint, the high decks of the Tyrannous towered above him, across from him he could see the Dominus, fighting a clearly losing battle. Carson was nowhere to be seen, likely he had gone back to his cabin or the engine room to prepare for launch.
    Sure enough there was a roar as the Dominus and the other ship, its name now clearly visible as the Flint, accelerated upwards started to pick up horizontal momentum as well. In response, the Tyrannous roared upwards, though much slower than its enemies.

    As they rose, the pirates on the Dominus fired a few parting shots, finally able to hit the upper decks of the Tyrannous. The Grand Admiral stood on the poop deck near the wheel, watching them rise, bullets whipping past him. And then he smiled. Grant frowned and looked up, and he laughed at what he saw.

    “The Raven approaches!” he shouted and the rest of the crew cheered as well as the two decker frigate stopped above the fleeing pirates and fired shots at the from above. The Dominus took evasive measures, twisting to the left to avoid the huge bulk and rising past the bow, before speeding off eastwards, carried by a strong wind. Grant felt a sagging disappointment as he watched the schooner disappear.

    Damn that Carson.


    And then he realised exactly where the Flint was heading. Maybe the captain was so focused on what was below that he’d forgotten what lay above. The Flint rose steadily and though it tried to change course it was far too late. It smashed itself into the stern of the Raven, splitting itself in half and sending it crashing down, one half ignited as some of the explosives on board went off.
    The Raven began to nosedive towards the ground, the impact had torn a huge hole in its engine room and the engine had clearly been damaged. It was slowed slightly by the non-damaged parts of the engine, twisting and turning as the man at the wheel tried in vain to save it. It fell at least a hundred and fifty feet before it hit the ground, smashing its starboard side to smithereens.

    My God.


    Stephens stared at the wreckage, crossing himself several times as the fires from the Flint continued to burn. By now the Tyrannous had given up pursuit and had landed, its crew rushing out to deal with the Raven’s crash site.

    The Grand Admiral stood on the poop deck, staring out at the debris with a look of sadness and rage plastered onto his stern looking face. Grant was dreading reporting to him, but he had little choice but to in the situation. He gave orders to Stephens to secure any maps and charts and then take the prisoners outside to keep them behaved. Then, he hurried down a ladder from the Four Wind and headed towards the Skymaster.

    It’s been a while since I saw one of these…God, they are massive!


    He climbed the ladder leading up to its upper decks, and he could scarce remember a climb that had ever taken this long.

    “This is why I prefer schooners.” He puffed as he reached the top.

    “You’re out of breath already? Takes me right back to the old days.” Melissa said, rolling her eyes as she overtook him.

    Touché…I didn’t hear you complaining at the time.


    Grant glared at the back of her head as they headed up to the poop deck. The Grand Admiral had his back to them, his cape fluttering in the wind. Grant noticed a few holes in it from the battle, and one of his shoulder pads had been blown off. As they approached, he turned, his short greying hair fluttering in the breeze.

    He doesn’t seem like he’s going to court martial me. As long as we can keep him in that mood.


    “Melissa. Apologies for not arriving quicker, this was a complete cock up on my part.” He bowed his head as he spoke in apology.

    When did he become less hard headed? Is this what age does to you? My word, I’m only a few years younger than him!”


    “Pff, blame him if you prefer. He was supposed to guard the whole event.” Melissa said with a shrug, jabbing her thumb in Grant’s direction.

    Grant shot her a glare as Tarkon turned his head towards Grant.

    “You’re…Calrich….Yes I remember you. You were that eighteen year old who captained a ship during the Exodus. Crowl’s friend. So that layabout put you in charge of things did he?”

    “Correct, sir. Well, me and Captain Darmen.”

    “And where is the old coot?”

    “Scattered across Auction Room 1. Your brother blew a hole right where he was standing.”

    The Grand Admiral growled as Carson was mentioned and glared up at the sky, as if hoping to pull Carson back to him by sheer force of will.

    “I’ll give you credit for capturing that other ship, that was a nice bit of initiative.” He responded after a few moments. Apparently he didn’t want to talk about Carson.

    “We weren’t able to stop Carson though.”

    “I’ve become convinced that old age alone could stop Carson. He fled like a whipped dog this time, don’t feel ashamed.”

    “But he got away with the-“

    “I’ll call in support and send scout ships across the quadrant. He’ll not escape the net. Now, Melissa. For your work, I’ll give you seven days leave. I want you back in Central by then. Calrich, take this.”

    He pulled out a sealed letter and handed it to him.

    “Make sure Crowl gets this. Also, tell him that if I catch him using his budget to buy alcohol, I’ll break his drunken spine.”

    Grant nodded, tucking the letter into his pocket.

    “And Calrich.”

    “Yes sir?”

    “I’m sorry about the Raven. Send me a list of their names and I’ll send their families something to ease the pain, as well as a place on the 25th anniversary memorial. Any survivors will also get a place at the banquet, as well as all medical bills paid at my own expense.”

    “Thank you sir. Very generous of you.”

    Tarkon nodded and turned away. Grant gave a respectful bow, before leaving the poop deck, Melissa in tow, while Tarkon continued to glare at the wreck, his brow furrowed in concentration.
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    Some more great combat descriptions but damn Carson got away. Melissa and Grant's interchanges were nicely done as well, I hope we see more of them both together.

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    Default Re: The Stormy Skies (Updated 14/04)

    “You’re out of breath already? Takes me right back to the old days.” Melissa said, rolling her eyes as she overtook him.

    Touché…I didn’t hear you complaining at the time.




    Great update, I had a sneaky feeling it would all be too easy if they managed to capture Carson. Can I ask for a list of all the ships you've mentioned and whose side they are on? My mind goes fuzzy trying to remember.
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    Default Re: The Stormy Skies (Updated 14/04)

    Oddly enough, having a guy like Carson be arrested and executed would have been lame and all two of my loyal fans would have sent me angry letters.

    Also, I added a list of the various ships that appear thus far. There's about seven so far....it will increase...

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    Default Re: The Stormy Skies (Updated 14/04)

    absent minded Shankbot


    Hit the nail on the head there.
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