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    You Really Think So?

    I saw you on the other day,
    however we had different way.
    Yet I thought I saw a dream,
    pinched myself - still you ate ice cream.

    I stepped up and tried to say hi,
    all you did - you said bye.
    I asked myself - you really think so?
    Then I understood, it'll have to go.

    But, no I couldn't sleep later at night,
    because I won't go without a fight.
    I waited, waited and still waited,
    there was no you to be sighted.

    Once again my hope, my muse,
    where are you, my only energy fuse?
    Then again, I realised - it'll have to do
    and I asked myself - you really think so?

    Where it all is and where it all starts,
    also there it all sadly ends.
    I think, break and cry,
    I wish I could go and fly...



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    I quite liked this.

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    I liked this too, a sombre ending if I interpreted it right. Wished it was a bit longer though.

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    The planet, geography and the world


    Once there was one big "ball",
    yet no one knew what should we call.
    Because it all started long time ago
    and really - no one wasn't around tho.
    One day there was name of worth.
    Let's all of us call it the Earth.

    Going many-many years forward
    there was no one to explore onward
    All thy hope was almost gone.
    And everyone living animal was done.
    Suddenly someone talked scientifically...
    "Lets call it us all geography!!"

    Today - what can we equate and what not?
    Can Earth
    = world...or is it just a plot?
    Or is the equation kinda "flop"?
    Nope, no flops, but the world is on the top.
    All this seems like it's swirled,
    but ultimately, we have Earth, geography and the world.



    ​PS! Thanks for the +reps Something more fun now to read...

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    An entertaining poem! What have you got lined up for us next?
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