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    Years ago I learned about Takeda Shingen, the lord of Kai. He always fought against Uesugi Kenshin (those were some decisive battles!) and then I read Robinx's Takeda AAR and fell in love with era. Add that to the Tale of Nobutada, I wanted to write a Sengoku Jidai period work. And here it is. One where instead of marching against Kenshin, he marches against Hojo after the death of his heir on a border raid by the Hojo.

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    Yaemon: Born in 1545 to a poor ashigaru and a farmer’s daughter, he was raised in a village on the border between Kai and Suragmi. His father was killed in a Hojo raid when he was ten and he has been wanting for vengeance against the Hojo for five years. He is honorable and has a respect for samurai.

    Yamamoto Kanzo:The adopted son of Yamamoto Kansuke, he was injured in a battle outside of South Shinano. His wife died of a fever, leaving him with his young daughter Akiko, and a heavy heart. He doesn’t like sending his people to die in Takeda Shingen’s wars, but he realizes that he owes Shingen his life.

    Yamamoto Akiko: Born in 1546. she is the only child of Yamamoto Kanzo, she is the playful, graceful, and beautiful. She grew up in the village and is known for her beautiful flute playing. She is nearing marrying age.

    Nobutu: Born in 1543 to a ronin, he was left in the village. His father died while trying to fend off bandits, he was raised by...less than reputable characters. He is known for his resourcefulness and his great sense of humor. Best friend to Yaemon.

    Takeda Yoshinobu: Killed in a Hojo raid on a border fort between Kai and Suragmi, his death sparks a war between Takeda Shingen and the Hojo.

    Yamamoto Kansuke: The strategist of Takeda Shingen, he is responsible for the war strategy against the Hojo.

    Taetyori: Born in 1544, he is the eldest son of a peasant farmer who had once fought alongside Yaemon’s father. A bookish boy, he doesn’t want to fight, but will do anything for his father, even if it means fighting in a war he doesn’t want to be in.

    Obu Tora: The son of Obu Toramusu, he is arrogant, overconfident, and brash. He is loyal to the Takeda clan and one day, hopes to take over command of the famous red horse cavalry that his father leads.

    Satomi Ujizawa: An old samurai in service to the Hojo, he lead a raid on Kai that lead to the deaths of both Yaemon’s father and Takeda Shingen’s eldest. Known for his prowess in battle, he was the one who slayed both of them. He betrayed his original clan and family.

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    Takeda Shingen: The daimyo of Kai, he has declared war against the Hojo because of the death of his heir. Brash, prone to anger, but a caring and effective lord, he is sending his considerable army to test the Hojo resolve.

    Takeda Nobushige: The brother of Takeda Shingen, he is the more patient and cautious one of the Takeda brothers. Incredibly loyal to Shingen, he leads the vanguard against the Hojo.
    Uesugi Kenshin: The daimyo of Echigo and known as the Dragon of Echigo, he is a honorable and dutiful man. He also dislikes the Hojo and is rival to Takeda Shingen.

    Hojo Ujiyasu: The daimyo of the Hojo, he is an ambitious man who is looking to take over all of the Kanto. He is willing to do anything it takes to spread his rule and may be looking towards to claiming the Shogunate for himself.


    Chapter One
    Simple waves of death
    Coming to take sons away
    A cloud of sorrow.

    Spring 1560

    They were here. Like the four horsemen from the Christian book those silly priests used to talk about when they wandered into town, the four men on horseback were clad in armor too rich to be from around here. They rode with a swagger that only came from years of experience of fighting or years of pretending to know how to fight. Katanas and other swords hung from their belts, their black scabbards too shiny and polished to be old. I looked at them with wonder.

    On their backs they carried their clan markings. Four diamonds in dark black, on a field of red. Takeda. These were Takeda retainers. What were they doing here in a tiny village that was perhaps out of the way for rich samurai like them? It wasn’t as if the village was rich; most of the townspeople lived in tiny huts and fished for their living. I should know, my father...my late father was one of them. We all lived on a small lake, the source of water and much of our daily food. Nobody was rich, but nobody was poor either. So it made all the more suspicious of the Takeda samurai and the question on everyone's lips were why they were even in the village in the first place.

    I knew that my village was under the control of the Takeda. When my father was alive, he used to tell of tales of his adventures as a young ashigaru in Takeda Shingen’s army, before his death at the hands of Hojo samurai during a raid. I was barely a boy, watching as the ashigaru valiantly tried to beat back the coming tide of samurai. Dozens of them were killed. And my father was one of them. I had always wanted to have vengeance on the Hojo, to find whoever killed my father and kill them. It was not honorable to kill an ashigaru in hand to hand combat. But that samurai. That had been five years ago...five long years.

    Now I stand here, waiting. I am fifteen years old, old enough to be drafted into Takeda Shingen’s army. All the fighting men in Kai were being mobilized for something, I have heard, whispers stolen by my ears as I fished along the lake with my mother. But why would they come to this village? We only had a few young men, myself included. The retainer in charge of the village was not very significant to Lord Shingen, I would think.

    I bowed before them, as I was taught, as samurai were our ‘betters’. The four continued to ride, their faces covered by masks that hid their true intentions. They started to approach the center of the village, where the retainer lived. Two ashigaru guards, armed with yari, parted before them, as the four dismounted. Soon, however, they started to beckon for all the villagers to approach.

    “Come! Come! Come!” one of them called out. I looked at my mother. She was a fragile flower, barely forty, but looked tired, from all the years of fishing and taking care of me. Wrinkles lined her face as she frowned at the four samurai.

    “Go. Come back in time for dinner,” she said sternly, watching as I walked towards the men. She had never forgiven any Takeda samurai, for they were the ones who had arrived too late to save my father. She had wept for days, only coming out to fish or to farm. A lot of women had done that on the fateful day of the Hojo raid.

    I looked as the retainer, our lord, Yamamoto Kanzo-sama, emerge from his residence. He was a son of Yamamoto Kansuke, a famous samurai who had once fought against the Tiger of Kai. Now he was one of the daimyo's most trusted men and a part of Takeda Shingen’s retinue. That was what allowed the lord Yaeko-sama to be retainer of the village.

    “All non-married men between the ages of fifteen and twenty-five must report to Kofu in three weeks. The daimyo Takeda Shingen-sama has ordered it,” the first samurai announced. Murmurs of speculation rushed throughout the crowd. I was struggling to watch as Lord Kanzo, followed by two of his most trusted men, started to speak.

    “I am asking that the people of this small fishing village remember who we owe our lives to. Just five years ago, the Hojo attacked us. We were poor and downtrodden, not able to fight back. The proud ashigaru who were here fought back valiantly until our lord arrived. Now we have a chance to honor them. Lord Shingen has taken to the field against the Hojo, in hopes of defeating them and making sure they do not trouble us again,” Kanzo-sama said, his voice filled with compassion. Despite being significantly wealthier than most of us here, he was a good lord, never treated us badly, and would continue to be a good lord.

    And then I remembered. The Hojo. Lord Shingen was going to war with the Hojo. There had only been the sporadic border clashes that erupted ever so now and again. But if Lord Shingen was going to war, what did that mean for us? This village was just a few miles away from the border between Kai and Sagami. If the daimyo of the Hojo clan decided to mobilize and march into Kai, my mother and this village would be at risk.

    I had to sign up. I needed to sign up. Now. The Shinto gods and the kami would look after me. My father used to me tell stories about the kamikaze that had decimated invaders from the sea, who had attempted to destroy us and our ways of life. The divine wind had saved us both times when they attacked.

    Lord Kanzo continued to speak.

    “I will allow any men who wish to go with the four to head to Kofu now. They will depart within two hours.”

    And with that, the four samurai mounted back on to their mounts and waited. Men chatted amongst themselves, while women went to gossip about who was going. I was going to be one of them. To avenge my father. To destroy the Hojo. I was dreaming of dueling the daimyo of the Hojo when I didn’t notice that I had bumped into someone.

    “Oh!” came a feminine gasp and I reacted quickly- much quicker than I thought possible- and caught her. She smelled of cherry blossoms and richness of earth and I couldn’t help but feel a slight tinge at my heart.

    "I'm sorry!" I rushed over my words. I looked her over. Dressed in a green and white kimono was Yamamoto Akiko, the granddaughter of Yamamoto Kansuke and the daughter of Yamamoto Kanzo. Her black hair was tied into a bun, while her attendants started to curse at me. Her brown eyes fluttered with amusement as I put her down and bowed.

    “I’m sorry Lady Akiko!” I quickly apologized once more. One attendant, a small girl about two years younger, was battering her tiny fists into my shoulder. It hurt a little, but I continued to allow her to do it, just to avoid my head being cut off.

    “What is your name?” she asked, waving for the tiny fists to stop. They relented and then retracted. My name? She wanted to know my name?

    “Er...Yaemon,” I said quite stupidly. It was not everyday that an average fisherman like myself came into contact with someone like Yamamoto Akiko. Slender...beautiful...she shone like the sun. It was said that she was to be married off soon, and I quite hoped that maybe...just maybe I would be able gain enough honor and prestige to marry her. And I knew right away that would never happen. Eh. A boy can dream.

    “It is a pleasure to meet you Yaemon,” and I was shocked. She had just addressed by my name! What in Izanji was going on? I bowed quickly once more.

    “A pleasure as well Lady Akiko,” I rushed once more. She giggled. She giggled.

    “Goodbye Yaemon. Have a good day,” she called over as she left. I smiled stupidly. Somewhere in the back of my mind, I let it run wild. But now was not the time. I bowed once more and left to the house where I lived in, opening the door and closing it. My mother was in the middle of setting up the table, bowls of rice and other foods assaulting my nose. She saw me.

    “Well Yaemon, what was it?” she asked impatiently. I looked down in shame. I was her only son. The only lineage of a line of ashigaru that had served Takeda for generations. My grandfather had died in the campaign against Shinano and my father had died in the Hojo raid. I was the last son. The only son.

    “Lord Shingen is conscripting all non-married men between the age of fifteen and twenty-three. I am going there now with the four samurai that arrived here just a few minutes ago,” I said quietly. She looked at me. Her eyes were strangely lacking any fury or anger; just sadness. I suppose it was just seeing off brothers and my father to war.

    “Lord Shingen has been sending my family to die in his wars for years. Only my elder brother survived. Your uncle. He’s now a merchant in Kofu. I want you to promise something Yaemon. Don’t be like your father and don’t be like your grandfather or the majority of your uncles. Be smart. Use that brain of yours. I taught you how to read. You know more than most boys your age. Don’t be an idiot. Your father and your grandfather sought glory. They were brave, they were gallant, and they were seeking glory for us. And they died.”

    My mother’s words stung me. She was not so harsh on my father nor my grandfather. I looked at her straight in the eyes.

    “Of course mother.”

    "Your father would be proud. He always talked about how you would outshine him and your grandfather. Kai has prospered because of Lord Shingen. I thank him for that. But remember my son, you are a peasant. You must remember your place. This is not a dream. You will be fighting for your life when you go out there. Remember, do what you must to survive. The tales your father told you...they are true, to an extent. Do not allow yourself to slip. Be as fierce as fire, but silent as the forest. To be swift as the wind, but as immovable as the mountain," she said softly.

    And then she got up, kissed me on the top of the head, and left to her room. I heard slight whimpering from the room and saw her slump down to the floor, depressed and wishing that her only son would survive.

    I left without another word, only pausing to put food and drink into a bag for the long journey to Kofu. I silently marched to the four samurai. One of them wore all red and looked at me and smiled.

    “Well. It seems as this young one seeks to join us. What is your name farm boy?” he asked, smiling as he did so. His red armor was a testament to his loyalty to Lord Shingen.

    “Yaemon my lord,” I said and bowed. The samurai laughed. His laughter echoed throughout the village.

    “My lord? I’m no lord. I’m a samurai, sworn to Lord Shingen. My name is Yamagata Masakage. And I think you’re going to be a good ashigaru young Yaemon. You’re strong looking. You got a fire in your eyes that I have never seen before. Not since...not since that time. Come young Yaemon. It is time to show you the ways of war,” and he spurred his horse forward. I joined fifteen other men, most of them boys my age. I knew most of them, though only one of them was someone I truly called friend.

    “Nobutu!” I called out and he smiled and gave a wave. Nobutu was the skinniest boy I had ever seen. With brown hair and brown eyes, he looked just like any other fisherman.

    “Ah Yaemon! It is nice to see someone that I know. Those uptight samurai won’t tell anything and the rest of the men don’t like me. I feel like a wild boar, about to speared!” he jested and I joined him in chuckling quietly. It was going to be a long journey to Kofu and I needed someone I know to make the journey easier. Little did I know what was to transpire on the way...


    Hope you guys like it. If there is anything that I can do to improve, please let me know! Historical inaccuracies, grammar, anything really. I'm really excited to write this.

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    Wow I really like this. A very interesting start and it shows lots of potential. I like this Yaemon guy, he seems a good choice for protagonist. Love the setting and I'm glad to see another Feudal Japan writing piece up here. Please, please, please continue this.

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    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 
    The road to Kofu was clear. The workers who had worked for years on the project of connecting Kofu to major fortresses, had created a network of roads that lead all fortresses to Kofu. We continued to go from village to village, recruiting more and more men. Soon a ragtag group of twenty-two samurai, all lead by Masakage-sama and some two hundred men were heading towards Kofu. Only one week left. And I would be training to go to war with the Hojo. To finally gain some sense of vengeance against the vermin who killed my father.

    “Yaemon, I heard some whispers that we are going to be given some weapons. Rumor is that there are bandits. Groups of ikki,” Nobutu whispered into my ears.

    Ikki, or the Ikko-Ikki were a band of peasants like me, with religious monks and other dissatisfied with samurai rule. Nobody liked them, not even simple farm and fishing folk like me or Nobutu. They raided farms, raided fishing villages, killed the very people they were supposed to represent. Bandits. And they roamed the Kai countryside. Lord Shingen of course was directing all available forces to combat them, but he needed his main army to confront the Hojo. And that is where we were coming in.

    On the third day of the march, with four days left, a large merchant caravan was coming through, laden with weapons and food. Masakage-sama stopped and conversed with the merchant, and I heard shouts of anger and hatred coming from the merchant’s throat. It got so bad that two of the samurai had to go in and defuse the two, as if blows would come between them. But Masakage-sama kept grinning like a madman and the merchant kept spouting curses. Finally the merchant gave up and accepted a bag of silver from the samurai and departed, angry words. It seemed that respect and honor did not adhere to the merchant class. What a pity.

    The merchant had his men unload great bundles of weapons and even armor. There, Masakage-sama grinned his usual grin and then waved goodbye to the merchant. The merchant then replied with a gesture that made four samurai leap up and almost draw their swords.

    As the day turned into night and the Kai plains were a lit by the moon, men started to get weapons. Yari. Spears as they were known. Elegant weapons, it was the first time I had ever held a weapon. It was light, yet deadly in my hands. As the ashigaru, as we were now called by Masakage-sama, looked at their new weapons, Nobutu grinned. Masakage-sama came and got our attention.

    “Listen to me you backward peasants! This is a yari. This is perhaps the only weapon you will ever receive. Of course the illustrious merchant decided to part with it for a...paltry sum it could be said. But with the rumors of those traitorous ikki roaming the countryside and the army still forming, it would not sit well with me that I gathered two hundred men, only for them to be slaughtered by poor bandits looking for a quick meal. So, we will start your training here. A yari is a spear. The art of using a yari is called sojutsu. You will not be learning that. You will be learning the always wonderful art of standing in formation and fighting with the man next to you,” and I grinned at Nobutu and another boy by the name of Taetoryi.

    “For now, here are the simple orders. You will lean down. You will wait for them to reach you. You will then thrust,” he demonstrated by thrusting into the open air with his yari creating a deadly hiss,” and hopefully kill them with that thrust. If that doesn’t work...then good luck. Rely on the man next to you and maybe...maybe, you will survive the coming days.”

    That was not the greatest preparation speech. The other men were looking at each other as Masakage-sama mounted his horse and spurred us forward. We stopped for four hours and he drilled us on the techniques, telling us that it would save our lives. I didn’t think it would and it certainly felt that I would die because of the constant usage of the yari.

    Masakage-sama decided to stop in a field for the night, overlooking the road. As we set up camp, he drilled us even more, burning into our minds that we needed to thrust and if that didn’t work, parry and then thrust again. He seemed to take great pleasure in making our lives more miserable than it ought to be.

    We ate a bowl of rice and a thin strip of meat that was probably horsemeat, before resting for the night, and fell asleep. Sentries, most of them new recruits like me, used torches to make ways around the camp. Armor, armor they had just gotten that afternoon, jingled and groaned. I slept on a worn straw mat that I taken with me from one of the villages we had stopped by, when a strange rustling noise awoken me to something.

    The moon guided me to my weapon. Masakage-sama had camped in the middle of field, the green grass reflecting the silver light shining upon us. I grabbed my yari, trying to remember Masakage-sama’s words. You will lean down. You will wait for them to reach you. You will then thrust. I leaned onto my right knee. I would not allow myself to be killed by some ikki bastard who decided he was rebelling. I never liked samurai, but vengeance against the Hojo would not happen if I joined the ikki. I would probably die and my mother would be lost without her only son. I would not allow her to have that dishonor. And as I prepared, a savage howl was heard across the camp and from the plains not covered by the torches of the sentries, came maddening cries. Glints of steel and madness came from all sides.

    No. There seemed to be hundreds of them, surrounding us. Just two hundred men and twenty-two samurai against what seemed like hundreds of them. Howls, snarls, and general crazy sounds came from them. It was if we were facing off against animals and not humans.

    Up! Up! Get up you lazy dogs! The enemy is upon us!” came Masakage-sama though his voice carried steel, it was tempered. It almost seemed as if he was...expecting the ikko-ikki to come. His red armor in view, I was unarmored; just dressed in a kimono without armor. Then something was thrown at me. A conical shaped hat, made of what seemed to be lacquered leather, landed in my lap. I looked up to see Nobutu grinning as usual.

    “A gift from a friend,” he said simply and put on the hat. They were called jingasa and would provide good cover for me if any of the ikki got a swipe at my head. As the camp awoken, the samurai herded us into lines. I was placed right next to Nobutu and Taetoryi. This was good. We were still surrounded it seemed, but least I was going to fight besides friends.

    I must admit, I was nervous. This was not going to be fake, like when I used to spar with father before he died. This was actual warfare. People were going to die. And I, hopefully, was not going to be one of those people. I felt a growing pit in my stomach as I looked as the first ikki came into view. Following him were dozens of ragged men, all of them armed to the teeth with various weapons, from yari to straight-edge swords, to even a tessen. I was amazed and awestruck by the general variety of weapons these men carried.

    “Stay strong men of the Takeda! These are but vermin, dishonorable vermin that prey on your families and loved ones! They are not worth living! They are cowards that would rather fight against woman than real men! You are all strong, able to fight! Fight! Fight!” Masakage-sama shouted at the top of his lungs. We roared back and with new found vigor, I faced the approaching masses of ikki.

    None of them had bows. That was good, I supposed, because that meant we weren’t getting shot at. They started to run, hungry for battle. I steeled myself and knelt down. All the other men did the same as I did and I readied myself for the first battle I would ever partake in. Would I survive? The answer was simple. I sure hoped I did.

    “Ready yourselves! Here they come!” shouted Masakage-sama and he fell back into a stance. The other samurai did as well. This was going to be a bloody battle.

    The first ikki who reached our line was cut down by a katana before he could even raise his weapon. I was stunned by the sudden ferocity of the attack of the katana and looked over to see a samurai covered by a mask. He turned his gaze towards me and gestured to face the oncoming horde of bandits. I gulped and looked forward.

    At least one hundred ikki streamed towards us in mobs of a dozen or so. The first mob reached us, their weapons raised.

    Thrust!” came the order and after hours of having drilled into my head, I, with savagery that surprised me, thrusted my yari straight into the chest of an incoming ikki. The man gargled as I wretched my yari and then watched him die, fountains of red spurting from his chest. He seemed to gasp and look at the heavens, but nothing but moonlight and dark clouds greeted him. Nobutu shouted and I saw him locked in combat with a heavier man that smelled like hadn’t bathed all of his life. Knowing the vile ikki I doubted he had even heard of the concept.

    I raised my yari and with a yell, plunged it straight into the chest of the man, the spearpoint emerging on the other side. He howled and dropped down, where Nobutu’s yari came crashing down, ending the evil man’s life with a single stroke. And with that, a dozen bandits who had been terrorizing Kai’s farms and villages had their lives taken away by men who had started training that very same day. Makasage-sama’s voice came roaring over the general clash of steel upon steel. Raising his katana, which was now drenched in blood, he cut an ikki down with a single slash. The sword flashed and it felt like a second had passed.

    “They are still coming! Do not let your guard down! Remember! They are vile savages! You are Takeda men! Ashigaru, kill them for your daimyo!” came the order, but this time from the masked samurai. It was amazing to see two hundred men hold off how many others, especially since we had just started training that very night!

    The second mob reached us, this one much more cautious, along with a third mob, and then a fourth one. They were starting to use their numbers against us and even I could see that this was very ill-advised for us. I kept low on one knee as I was taught and then came up, my yari thrusting. The third opponent I faced was not as inexperienced or stupid as my first ones. He blocked my thrust with a flick of his wrist and then attacked me with a straight-edge sword.

    I panicked. Knowing that the sword had an advantage in the close-quarters fighting that we would devolve into, I spun my yari around, blocking his attack. I was amazed and what I had just done and so was he, because he paused for moment. That moment of hesitation allowed for me to attack him with my yari, sinking into his arm. He yowled with pain, the hard steel easily bypassing the soft cloth he wore. I grinned savagely in the soft light, basking in his misfortune. Taetoryi, who was next to me, killed him, visibly shaking. We had both killed tonight. And the killing would not stop until they were all dead.

    The ikki continued to stream forward, bashing themselves against our yari wall. Everytime they did so, I got a little more tired, a little slower, a little more sloppy. I kept remembering to lean down and thrust into their chest, my yari the only thing between living and dying. It was quite ironic I thought, that I was being saved by a weapon meant to kill.

    Brace...thrust!” came the order once more and once more an ikki impaled himself on my yari. Masakage-sama then raised his katana and with a mighty yell, killed a monk with ease, cleaving the naginata staff the monk used in half.

    “Masakage! I know you are there! Come out!” came a brisk voice over the sea of bodies. The samurai looked over us and I turned to see a an imposing figure, cut in the finest armor I have ever seen. Black as night and with a mask similar to the other samurai, he was built like a boar, a savage gleam coming from the katana in the moonlight. The ikki were still coming and they were still dying in droves for this man.

    “You want to fight! Then let us fight!” Masakage-sama’s reply came, throwing all caution to the wind. A shout came from the giant boar-like figure, and the ikki parted ways, as the red armor of Masakage-sama came roaring in. The two men met as their swords clashed.

    I watched in amazement as the two fought. It wasn’t like the brutal fighting, the bloody spear rising again and again to kill the streaming ikki bandits. This was more like a dance. Their movements were fluid, as if water was flowing from stream to stream. Masakage-sama’s sword flashed in the darkness, the light reflecting off his katana as he thrusted forward, only for the blade to be slapped violently aside his opponent.
    The two continued to fight, their swords a blur. Masakage-sama would press the attack, only to be driven back by a flurry of blows. His opponent would attempt to drive past his defenses and Masakage-sama would easily defend himself. It was stalemate.

    Then Masakage-sama launched into a twisting, confusing attack. His sword leapt from side to side, the sharp blade whistling through the air. He then cut off part of the mask, revealing nothing, for the darkness covered it. He then sliced downward, his blade meeting steel once more, and the duel was back on track.

    I continued to watch with giddy anticipation, gladly forgetting that we had been battling it out just minutes before. But as I watched, I saw a lone figure start to approach, clad in black. In the figure’s hands was a short knife, a tanto, and he had it outstretched, pointed towards Masakage-sama’s back. I couldn’t believe that this man would try to end his life! By a knife in the back! I would not allow anyone to die dishonorably. My father might have died, but at least he died fighting his opponent honorably, not with a knife in the side.

    I let something overtake me. Screaming, I raced towards the figure, my yari raised. The man, at least I presumed to be a man, looked at me, and rolled to the side as I came crashing, my yari plunging into the soft dirt. I whipped it out and soon started to attack this man. He dodged and rolled, but couldn’t close the distance between us. My yari was too long and his blade too short. I tried to stab him once more, but he continued to elude me. I grew frustrated. Couldn’t this man stay still?!

    “You involve yourself in events that do not concern you peasant! Don’t make me kill you!” he suddenly threatened. I was stunned. Events that do not concern me? I responded by thrusting forward, my yari touching the black cloth. He rolled back and then parried the spearpoint with his knife, sending me back.

    “You were trying to kill Masakage-sama! I will not allow you to give the man a dishonorable death!” I cried and then slashed, my razor sharp yari cutting deeply within the cloth, but not touching the skin of the black-clad man. He grunted and then shuddered. I pressed my advantage and then slashed upwards, the tanto barely blocking it. Using my superior length, I stabbed forward, only for him to grasp my yari, and pull. I stumbled and his eyes gleamed with victory.

    “Time for your death,” he gloated and I grunted, not wishing to die. Clenching, he took the yari from my hands and then tried to stab me straight in my heart. Only with the blessing of the Gods was I able to dodge the stab and with the utmost cry, I kicked with all my strength. The yari came into the air, and he was distracted. I then barreled straight into him, my desire to live and not die making me stronger. Twisting, I dodged his desperate response to stab me, and I grasped his right hand and refused to let go.

    I was not prepared for his headbutt. I stumbled, only to cry out as his tanto came screeching, cutting me across the shoulder. This was the first time I had ever been seriously hurt. Even as the blood started to seep through my clothing, I couldn’t let the pain overcome me. This man was trying to kill me. Adrenaline and the desire to live were what allowed me to swiftly twist like some kind of cat to avoid his next attack. He screamed with savageness in his lungs before lunging towards me.

    This was his first and last mistake. A blade came out of nowhere and severed his head from his body, the bloody cartwheel of his head landing at my feet. Looking, I saw a samurai clean the blade with a cloth and he looked right back at me. This man had just saved my life. This samurai, had risked his life for me. I turned to see the tide of battle turn. The bandits that had tried to kill us were scattering in all directions, horses neighing and swords dancing, I saw what turned the tide. Masakage-sama stood victorious over the boar-like man.

    The red horsemen of which Kai was famous for had arrived. I turned to the samurai.

    “Thank you lord,” I said gratefully, bowing. He looked at me before speaking.

    “That was a brave thing you did there. Trying to hold off a fully-trained ninja? Amazing. You managed to save Masakage-san’s life while he was dueling. Those bandits will not be bothering anyone more,” he said, his thumb pointing to the hundreds of bodies around us.

    “What is your name?” he asked and I looked, stunned. Once more, a samurai had asked me my name.

    “Yaemon lord,” I responded.

    “Well Yaemon, I guess you should join back with Masakage-san’s column. If you are ever in Kofu, ask for Hara Mastane.”

    “Thank you my lord,” I said, shivering. I have been spoken to by two samurai. What else awaited me?

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    Second chapter is posted. Thanks to MerchantofVenice for his support!
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    A dramatic and enjoyable chapter (+rep). I hope that you can continue this story.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Alwyn View Post
    A dramatic and enjoyable chapter (+rep). I hope that you can continue this story.
    Thank you! I will try to post the third chapter soon.

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    Really enjoyed the last chapter. I liked the honour of our protagonist and Masakage seems to be an interesting character that i hope you continue with.

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    Always enjoyed these settings! Great work man, hope you update soon! (+rep)
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    Do you feel the pressure of two awesome pieces of work being your inspiration? (I wouldn't from the comments I've read you seem to be doing a great job! )

    I'll read this when I get the chance and try to get Robin to pop in and drop a few lines to see what he thinks.
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    Wow...I can't thank all of you enough for the support. I'm working on the third chapter right now, though school is starting tomorrow for me , I will hopefully get it out sometime this week. And Shankbot, that would be awesome. Please tell me what you think! Merchant, always nice to see your comments, and Ussaid, thank you!

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    Its been too long since I have ventured into the Creative Writing study.

    Ironic, I must say, considering I used to spend all my time here, ah, good memories.

    Now, now I have returned, and what do I see?

    I see a most excellent piece of writing! I see a tale set in one of the most intriguing time periods to exist! I thoroughly enjoyed the two chapters! (I read them last night but I had to sleep so I didn't comment!)

    I second everyone else here, please, please continue this epic tale!

    +rep to encourage you to continue

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    I hope you will manage to find time to continue this - I'd like to know what happens to Yaemon.

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    Chapter 3
    With fresh rain fallen, we made camp just twenty miles outside of Kofu. Nobu went to do his business around the camp. That left me and Taetoryi around the tent we all shared. I decided to clean my weapon, seeing that it still had some smatterings of blood left on it.


    Taking a rag, I wetted it and started to clean. The cloth felt good in my hands and it sang to the blood, luring it off the blade and into the rag.

    As I cleaned my yari, Taetoryi was crying. How could he be crying? He had just survived his first brush with death. My heart was on fire and I had helped to save Masakage-sama from a ninja. We were alive, we were fed, and we didn’t have much to worry about. But I had to do something about it. I mean, what are friends for?

    “Taetoryi why are you crying?” I asked, abandoning my yari for the time being. He looked at me, his eyes stained with red and his cheeks stained with tears. He was not a very strong individual, looking slightly sick every time I saw him.

    “I....I don’t know. All I can think about right now are the men I killed. I killed today Yaemon. I took someone’s life and I...I don’t know how to deal with it. I feel so guilty. I feel as if their blood will choke me as their blood did for them. I can’t get their screams out of my mind. Their life was decided by my hands...how could I have taken them?” Taetyori sobbed. He grasped at his arms, desperately trying to console himself. I was shocked. How could he feel any sympathy, however veiled, for them? They had been killing our people; simple farmers, fishermen, merchants who never asked for this. They were soulless people who killed for the fun of it.

    My stomach groaning, I glared at the crying boy. I raised my hand and with quickness that my mother had bestowed upon me, slapped him straight in the cheek. A resounding smack thundered across the encampment, though a jolt of laughter from the main group of men covered the sound. In a startled whimper, Taetoryi stared at me, scared of what I would do to him. In a murderous whisper I started to speak.

    “You cannot have any sympathy or guilt for what you did today. You protected people; innocent people. Those men were bandits that killed for fun. They slaughtered men and women as if they were animals! If you don’t see it, others killed today as well. We lost dozens of our fellow ashigaru to those bandit bastards. We barely survived. I will not have their memory tarnished by a crying boy who thinks that they deserve any pity. You took them because you had to. Killed or be killed,” I finished. Taetoryi looked up to me and shivered.

    And I as well. My head filled with violent thoughts. I wanted to murder every single ikko-ikki that dared attack Kai, leave them in a field of nothing but their own blood. I couldn’t describe the hostility I felt for them. They were little less than monsters. They were dead. That was what they were.

    Why?” was Taetoryi’s simple response. I glared at him, anger coursing through my eyes and heart.

    “Why?
    This is not some romanticized novel Taetoryi. We are in a war. People will be killed. We either allow ourselves to be killed or we kill them first. I will not allow you to endanger yourself because you refuse to kill. Because you refuse to accept the fact that your actions are positive,” my voice grew softer. “Taetoryi. We are in the battle of life and death. There is no second chance, there is no mercy. You need to be as fierce as fire, otherwise you will be buried in the forest.”
    And with that, I left, hoping that Taetoryi learned from the mistakes of his thinking.

    We needed to live. And I would ensure we would, even if it meant beating defeatist thoughts out of my friends.

    Kofu, Kai


    (CHANGE OF POV TO YAMAMOTO KANSUKE)

    Yamamoto Kansuke was watching all of them.

    The old man continued to watch as the arguments continued to stream from the council members. The old man was laughing on the inside. They were all gathered to discuss the Hojo threat and the daimyo’s decision to deal with it. Just a short few months ago they had all been gathering to discuss Kenshin in the north.

    Now they were discussing the Hojo threat to the south. The death of Shingen-sama’s heir was a blow that would be felt throughout generations. The young man was a learned one and a great warrior and it had been a great shame on him when he heard that the young man had been slayed in his pajamas. Some of these men are true, some of these men are idiots, but they all want the same thing; vengeance. Hojo Ujiyasu was a fool for provoking the Tiger of Kai. He seeks to hide behind his walls. But we will have our justice for the unjust slayings.

    “And I tell you that the ikko-ikki are a great threat. Only now are they rousing themselves from the temples to the north. They are the biggest threat to us!”
    That was Obu Tora. The young samurai was the son of Obu Toramasu and a very arrogant man. He was determined to lead the famous red cavalry of the Takeda clan just like his father. Despite his arrogance and his youth, he has a good point. The ikko-ikki have been attempting to formant rebellion and civil strife here for years.

    “We don’t have to deal with the ikko-ikki right now because of Masakage-san’s plan and actions that defeated them just a few days ago. That bullheaded rebel leader will be decorating the walls of Kofu until the summer. I say we go with the plan to invade the Hojo lands. Sagami lays ripe for the takings!” said a relatively new member to the council, Ichijō Nobutatsu. He was the younger brother of Takeda Shingen-sama, but wasn’t held in high regard like Nobushige.

    The daimyo himself was aloof, watching with amusement as his council argued. Takeda Nobushige was positioned right next to Baba Nobuharu, a giant of man who had never received any wound in any battle. He, along with Nobushige, were the most trusted advisors of Takeda Shingen.

    Along with Yamamoto Kansuke. Ah, the arrogance of youth. Each plan has its merits. I already know that Shingen-sama has his mind set on marching to Odawara. However, he would want to hear about Kenshin. The young man is dangerous and a proven battle commander who knows his opponents. We need a plan in case young Kenshin decides to march against us while we deal with the Hojo.

    “The Ikko-Ikki are our greatest threat. Not the Hojo! For all we know, they are still trying to ferment rebellion among the peasants!” Toru retorted strongly. Foolish boy. Yes, you have valid points, but we need not worry about the peasants. The sins of the Hojo must be answered.

    “I refuse to believe this. We have reports from our castle commanders that the bandits and rebels have faltered after the battle. We have cleared out the main bandit force and more and more bandits are dying every day. Masakage-san is a great commander and he has done this clan great services. What *more do you need?” Nobutatsu responded strongly.

    Enough!” the shout resonated along the council hall and shook Kansuke out of his thoughts. In front of him, Obu Toramasu was speaking. The middle-aged cavalry commander had the respect of the entire council and each one was willing to hear his words.

    “Here we bicker like children. Are we old fisherman’s wives, haggling over salmon to put in our sashimi? No! We are Takeda men born and bred. Yoshinobu was the heir to Shingen-sama. His death demands one thing. Vengeance! The ikko-ikki threat is finished. With the death of their leader, they will go back to their heathen masters in their gods’ forgotten province to the north. But Hojo Ujiyasu must face the consequences of his actions!” Toramasu said strongly. He had never been an eloquent speaker, Kansuke mused, but he knew when to hit the spot.

    The debate continued, with most of the council siding with Nobutatsu to defeat the Hojo. But one thing still lingered in Kansuke’s mind. ***What of the Uesugi? Kenshin is marshalling his armies and us as well. No doubt he has scouts reporting this. But we will not go to Kawanakajima again. Three times my daimyo has met him. And three times we have accomplished nothing but indecisiveness and needless deaths.

    “What of Kenshin?” he heard someone speak out, as if they could read his thoughts.

    That had been Kōsaka Masanobu. The Nige Danjō was one of the closest compatriots to the daimyo and was considered one of his best and most trusted commanders. He was named Nige Danjō because of his cautious tactics and skillful tactical retreats; skills he had used in border skirmishes with the Uesugi in the north.

    “What of him? He is still gathering his men. We believe he will march against us this year or early next year,” Saegusa Moritomo spoke up, his arrogance showing. The young samurai was the son-in-law of Yamagata Masakage and a new addition to the council as well.
    That was when Takeda Shingen, the daimyo of Kai and head of the Takeda clan, spoke. His fiery voice was mixed with the somber tone, still feeling the death of his heir. What is it now tono?

    “Tsurugaoka Hachiman-gū is where he got the name Uesugi. It is a powerful name. And he knows that if he marches against us, he will be destroyed. His adopted father, Uesugi Norimasu-san has been pressuring him to attack the Hojo and seize control of the Kanto. We will not allow him to do so. But there are benefits.”
    The council looked confused.

    “We will march against the Hojo vermin and root them out of every castle, every village, and every crevice where they hide. And with that, we will burn Odawara to the ground and hang Ujiyasu for his crimes. And Uesugi Kenshin-san, Dragon of Echigo, will be joining us in defeating the Hojo.”

    Kansuke was the first to recover from the shock. He knew that the prideful Shingen would never allow himself to ally with Kenshin. Who convinced him? Who showed him that path? And as the council session ended, the former ashigaru-taishō and now one of the most trusted advisors saw Shingen move down the hall, joined by his brothers, when he saw a twinkle in Nobushige’s eye.

    Kansuke smiled. Nobushige had always been the cautious half for Shingen. And it seems as if that half had won against the raging battling one, the one that wished for nothing but death and destruction for the Kanto.

    And now we see how long we shall caution wins over the desire to kill all who stand in our way.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tigellinus View Post
    Its been too long since I have ventured into the Creative Writing study.

    Ironic, I must say, considering I used to spend all my time here, ah, good memories.

    Now, now I have returned, and what do I see?

    I see a most excellent piece of writing! I see a tale set in one of the most intriguing time periods to exist! I thoroughly enjoyed the two chapters! (I read them last night but I had to sleep so I didn't comment!)

    I second everyone else here, please, please continue this epic tale!

    +rep to encourage you to continue

    Thanks

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    Tigellinus, you are one of the best writers I have seen on this site. And I can't thank you enough for your words. They mean a lot to me. I will continue!

    Quote Originally Posted by Caillagh View Post
    I hope you will manage to find time to continue this - I'd like to know what happens to Yaemon.
    I will find time and I hope to post more updates faster than I usually do. Yaemon will continue to progress as we continue on this journey.

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    I loved the first part of the chapter, I hope we see more of Taetoryi's internal strife. However, I was a bit confused with the second half of the chapter. Was it written in the perspective of Yaemon or of the old man? But good chapter and terrific dialogue nonetheless!

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