I know, don't worry! I was criticizing myself, since I'm not happy with some things in the story, since I know I can do better. But this format and this style works, inasmuch that it keeps me invested in writing it, so I'm learning to accept its faults for the better of the story in general.
But I definitely DO want an exciting story, where no one - not even I - know what's going to happen next, because it's fun to write and hopefully fun to read. The story is written very much off the cuff and off the top of my head. Although I have plans and ideas for future acts, they're actually only just single scenes (usually huge plot twists) that I want to write - everything else I make up as I go along, in order to reach those points. Take Act 2 for example. I knew it was going to end in Osaka on a train. Over time, my ideas of what I wanted to happen changed and eventually I had the idea of reintroducing Suzushi - something I wanted to do anyway. So I had the idea of Suzushi meeting Shinji on the train, pretty much that entire scene, planned out months in advance. Everything from Matsusaka to Nabari was just improvised. But without that improvisation, we wouldn't have Ryukei, the Red Rider or Mashira - they all just popped up out of nowhere in order to advance the plot. Hell, that's pretty much where Suzushi came from as well. I like this method though, since the characters just kind of naturally appear and write themselves. They also provide me with other ways and methods to reach the future scenes I want to write.
Of course there a plot holes to be filled in with this kind of format too, but I also try to work that to my advantage, so many of the twists and turns will be answers to questions people have nearly forgotten about, which adds to their impact hopefully, then everything gets explained one bit at a time, like a jigsaw puzzle. But I also know that even if the story and the logic seems clear to me, with the format it might not to you guys, so I worry about that sometimes.
Edit: We're also at 10 pages now! Crazy. Only 1,000 views until we surpass Kyoto too. I'll definitely do something special when we reach 10k views. Then we'll start catching up with that pesky Merchant fellow