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    Tale of a Young Knight
    The story of Sir Gilbert Reyne




    Before Henry "Hotspur" Percy & William Marshal, was a young knight who set the standard for gallantry and general heroism. A man of the people, a soldier of God, and the epitome of a good knight.

    This is the untold story of The Knight of Normandy.



    Table of Contents
    I - Capturing Fame
    At the battle of Lincoln, Gilbert's daring ambition quickly turns to a prestigious outcome

    Flashback - A Teacher and his Student
    Gilbert breaks bread with his master tutor, and talks of his journey

    II - A Knight to Remember
    At court in Gloucester, Gilbert spectates from court, as Empress Matilda presides over matters

    Flashback - The Road to Boulogne Pt. 1
    Gilbert nears the end of his caravan protection contract. Just one roadway leads to his pouch of payment.

    III - The Laughing Lion
    A night of drinking to celebrate Gilbert's knighting takes a turn for the worst, at the behest of a laughing lion...

    IV - Consolidating an Image
    A judgment is given to Gilbert and his men...

    V - Rowan's New Weapon
    Gilbert and Rowan converse over his new weapon.

    Flashback - The Road to Boulogne Pt. 2
    The bandit assault continues, and the situation for the caravan party looks grim

    VI - New Additions
    The party of four reaches Arundel, where they seek to add to their numbers
    Last edited by Dance; September 16, 2014 at 05:55 PM. Reason: New chapter

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    Characters
    Protagonist

    Sir Gilbert Reyne (Age: 16)
    Title: Knight of Normandy
    Allegiance: Angevin

    Gilbert was the 7th and last child of Amaury Reyne, a renowned English Norman architect, and Margaery, a lady-in-waiting to the Lady of Rouen.

    In 1132, Amaury moved the family to Marseilles, France, under a long term contract to repair aging architecture.

    Gilbert, aged seven, was given to the tutelage of a seasoned, and now retired French knight, Sir Tancrede Larogue, along with his older brother, Robert. The agreement was bartered for services to Tancrede's residence and associated property, as well as Robert's commitment to join the French army, upon completion of his training.

    Amaury left Marseilles in 1138, and at his son's personal request, Gilbert was allowed to remain a final year with his knightly tutor, to continue his training. Gilbert's brother had long been part of the French military by this point, and his two older brothers (juniors to Robert) were builders, like his father. He was alone.

    In 1139, Gilbert left Marseilles, joining a merchant caravan headed for England, giving his service as a bodyguard to the caravan, under mercenary contract.

    In 1140, Gilbert reached England, completing his original contract. He enlisted with the Angevin forces, at Dover. He relocated to the western stronghold of the Angevin forces, based out of south-west England. Here, he was now a soldier in the Angevin forces.

    Progress in the Story (Timeline of events)
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 
    February, 1141: Gilbert participated in the Angevin forces, during The Battle of Lincoln. He killed several soldiers in this battle, and captured the usurper King of England, Stephen.

    April: He was knighted in Gloucester, by Geoffrey V, Count of Anjou, in the months following his gallant antics at Lincoln.

    May: Gilbert used what wealth he had to buy supplies and provisions for his newly formed retinue, consisting of his friends; Rowan, Hugh, and Reynald.



    Retinue of Sir Gilbert

    Rowan (Age: unknown)
    Title: None
    Allegiance: Angevin

    The hot-headed friend and companion of Gilbert. Rowan has a crude sense of humor, often making comedy out of a serious situation, and renowned for his incessant hedonism and general debauchery. He is highly skilled at arms, and prefers the use of a long spear as his primary weapon.


    Hugh (Age: unknown)
    Title: None
    Allegiance: Angevin

    Another of Gilbert's retinue, Hugh is a quiet, reserved, but devilishly skilled swordsman in the service of Gilbert and the Angevin forces. He us undoubtedly loyal to Gilbert and his close friends.


    Reynald (Age: unknown)
    Title: None
    Allegiance: Angevin

    Reynald is the final member of Gilbert's three-man retinue. He is mildly slow intellectually, but he makes up for his lacking of intelligence with his brutish strength and massive size and stature. His monstrous size of 6'11, 300 pounds, and built of a very impressive physique, gives off a mostly threatening first impression of the gigantic man. Unnatural in size for this day-in-age, Reynald is more of a gentle giant than anything, until he's angry. He has an affinity for the afflicted or different.


    Known Associates of Sir Gilbert:

    Sir Tancrede Larogue (Age: unknown, but elderly)
    Title: Knight of France
    Allegiance: France

    Tancrede is the Marseilles-based childhood tutor of Gilbert, and his older brother, Robert. He taught Gilbert the ways of knighthood and trained him at arms, military stratagem, general education, and manhood.


    Francis de Voy (Age: unknown, but elderly)
    Title: Merchant
    Allegiance: Independent


    Francis is an elderly French merchant. Gilbert was in his service, during a caravan venture across France, where they parted ways upon arriving in England, in 1140.

    Francis has grown an affinity for the young Norman man, during Gilbert's service to him.


    Other Characters:

    Matilda (Maude), Empress of England, wife of Count Geoffrey V, and mother of Henry.

    Geoffrey V of Anjou, husband of Matilda, and father of Henry. He is the Count of Anjou, and a very important figure in the Angevin ranks, during The Anarchy.

    Robert of Gloucester, half-brother of Matilda, he is the Earl of Gloucester, and chief military commander of Angevin forces.

    Stephen of Blois, usurper King of England, head of the Blesevin faction, during The Anarchy.

    The Heckler, a local of Gloucester, he is responsible for antagonizing Gilbert's party into a violent melee, at a Gloucester tavern, which ended in nearly a dozen arrests.
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    Tale of a Young Knight
    The Story of Sir Gilbert Reyne


    Chapter I

    I - Capturing Fame


    Angevin and Blesevin forces engaged at Lincoln

    In 1135, Henry, King of England, died without a legitimate heir. As such, Stephen of Blois, the king’s nephew seized the throne by force, for himself, despite the claim to the throne of Henry’s daughter, Matilda, and her two-year-old true born son, Henry.


    Crowned in December of 1135, Stephen’s move of usurping the crown of England, led to a war of rightful succession that would become known as ‘The Anarchy’.

    In the first years of Stephen’s reign, the unsettled movement of his generally disdained claim, led to conflict, and for the majority of his reign he would not see a long period of peace.

    Dealing with the aggression of the Kingdom of Scotland, Welsh conflicts, and widespread lack of support for his reign in England and outlying territories, Matilda and her husband, Geoffrey Plantagenet, the Count of Anjou, invaded England from Normandy, in 1139.

    The invasion had the intention of dethroning Stephen in favour of Matilda, so that she might secure a smooth transition in the future, for Matilda and Geoffrey's now six-year-old son, Henry.

    In early 1141, Stephen’s forces surrounded Lincoln Castle, besieging it, as well as Empress Matilda, who was hold up inside.

    Robert of Gloucester, Matilda’s half-brother, led a relief force to break the siege.


    February 2, 1141
    Lincoln, England


    The horn was blown, and the forces of King Stephen were made aware of a sizable force approaching to relieve the besieged castle.

    The king, fully adorned in his armour, mounted upon his steed, and leading what cavalry force he possessed to meet Robert, and with less cavalry, he marched out to a clearing southwest of the castle, aided by his larger force, of mostly footmen.


    Through the clearing, the Angevin cavalry led the fray, a force full backed by footmen of equal number to the king’s own force.

    With little hesitance, once facing across the field at one another, and without parlay for terms, both sides were confident of the impending victory that was envisioned by both sets of commanders.

    The charge was ordered, and battle soon met.

    A young soldier in the Angevin ranks, Gilbert Reyne, born in English Normandy, and raised in southern France, was one of the newest additions to the rebel forces of Empress Maude, armed with a spear, and sparsely ringed, boiled leather armour, with only a leather cap fastened by a strap around his chin to protect his head from what little it could, followed in full foot charge behind the advancing cavalry, led by Robert himself.

    The clash was met, steel upon steel, in what seemed to be half the combined cavalry of the two forces having been sent man to the ground, or with horse as well. The wall of carnage was soon met by the advancing foot soldiers of both sides. Into the clash they went, Gilbert bravely being one of the first to arrive, buried his spearhead into a dismounted Blesevin soldier’s upper chest, piercing his armour with the force of all his weight behind it, the spear glided through the man’s body, as he let out of a shriek of anguish.

    The one weapon he had with him, not even a sword, a one-handed flange mace, was quickly drawn from the tie of his belt, and with it, he continued his forward push by releasing the spear and arching back the mace, he slammed it with crushing force directly into the man’s face, the head of it buried deep into the man’s face to where once had been his nose, and causing a crunch of broken teeth to exit his open mouth in flows of bloody spittle, followed by a spew of blood, quickly sending him to his back, while the mace was raised once more and buried into the man’s shattered eye socket, crushing in his irreparable face, and a forcing the utterance of a last grunt from the almost lifeless man. One of the first corpses of this great battle laid in position.

    With a quick jerk to release, Gilbert retrieved the mace, and looked for his next fight, spotting a spear man driving his killing blow into one of Gilbert's Angevin brothers, and proceeding to what aid he could provide, without hesitance, Gilbert had nearly caught the spearman off guard, but he turned in time to swing the butt end of his spear into Gilbert’s stomach, sending him to his knees.

    Gilbert quickly left no time for another blow, and slammed his mace on the man’s right foot, crushing the man's defenseless foot, causing him to drop the spear, and stumble backwards. Quickly recovering his blow, Gilbert relentlessly smashed his mace into the side of the soldier’s knee, with two hard swings, dropping the mace, he gripped the fallen spear, the soldier having now fallen on his buttocks, Gilbert swung a return blunt blow with the shaft of the spear against the soldier, sending his torso crashing to the ground, and positioning the point, he quickly drove it furiously into the soldier’s exposed gut. The blood-curdling scream sent a chill up Gilbert’s spine, but without waiting, he thrust his knee into the wedged spear, snapping it in two, and taking the broken piece, he jabbed it with both hands into the man’s throat, for the kill. The man spat up blood, and began to choke.

    Proceeding forward, he picked up his mace, and turned to look through the intense melee, where he spotted a mass of a man, crown ringing his helm, it was the usurper, Stephen. An opportunity so rare on a battlefield, it wasn’t worth a whisper, Gilbert had fixed his eyes on the king, and began to walk towards him with hastening step.

    A bodyguard with a long sword stepped in front of him, taking a swing at Gilbert, the sword was met by the shaft of the mace, and a knee driven into the soldiers’s stomach, Gilbert then bringing the mace down with force into the back of the soldier’s exposed neck, sending him crashing to the blood-soaked dirt, Gilbert pulled his arm back and struck a full force blow on the back of the soldier’s neck, hearing a loud crunch, having broken the man’s cervical, yet not breaking his view longer than a few seconds of Stephen, he continued forward, seeing the king engaged in a sword fight with another ambitiously bold Angevin soldier, of which Stephen had the upper hand, having just withdrawn his blade from the defeated soldier's chest.

    Another soldier attempted to thwart his advance at the king, but with a quick parrying of the soldier’s lazily raised sword, Gilbert connected a clear bash to the side of the soldier’s face, he dropped to his knees, Gilbert using both hands to grip the lower shaft of his mace, so as to launch a more intense strike, he busted the soldier’s cheek bone, nose, and a good portion of teeth, causing the soldier to spin a full circle, still on his knees, a hand dropped to dazedly balance himself, Gilbert heaved back his mace, driving the head of it right into his neck, shattering the soldier's Adam’s apple, and causing him to fall, rolling right off the jagged flange spines, and down to the trodden, marooned grass below.

    Tightening his grip on the mace, Gilbert charged, running full speed at Stephen, the king having turned just in time to raise his sword, and the two connected parries and then several strikes more over, the sheer force behind the king's sword being felt with each strike met, as all of the king’s bodyguards were busied, Gilbert, risking it all, knowing little time could further be wasted in this rare moment of advantage, charged in close to the king, to render the king’s long sword useless in closer quarters, he slammed his mace head into the king’s mailed gloves, causing the king’s blade to drop loose from the his grasp, and hit the ground, the king bending over, as Gilbert took advantage and slipped around him, and hooked the mace shaft underneath the king’s throat, pulling up heavily, so as to secure less of a reaction, he forced the king to an unspoken submission, the king’s arms raised in surrender, whilst Gilbert drew with his left hand a simple dagger from the rear of his belt, putting it against the king’s throat, he screamed aloud for all to hear. “I claim Stephen in the name of Empress Matilda!”

    The words rung out to the battlefield, and all the chaos seemed to cease in an instance, as the words were bellowed with such ferocity from a man not quite yet in his sixteenth year, that all in the vicinity had heard and turned, the Blesevin forces quickly beginning to disperse. Uproarious cheers of the Angevin force ensued.

    “I claim Stephen the Usurper in the name of Empress Matilda!” shouted Gilbert, once more, a wide grin finding its way to his mouth, as the king grunted in anger, now solely at his mercy.
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    What a start! The hero captures a king in the first chapter. Something I've definitely never seen before. Very interesting read mate, I really enjoyed it. Your description of the battle and duels are very good. Extremely true to life and gorey without being ridiculous. I look forward to the next chapter.
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    The story is based on true events that occurred. How the king was captured was factual. King Stephen was captured in this battle. This event sets up my story well (for wherever it may lead). Describing combaT 'to the T' is something I take seriously. It gives you an exact idea of how I intend the fighting to be, as if you were watching a motion picture. Or, at least this is the goal .

    Thank you for the support!

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    Another well written piece by a member of my staff! How exciting! Great opening chapter! I was surprised as well to see the king captured so soon but the unexpected makes for a better story. The combat was well done as well. Keep this going!+ rep
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    Thank you for the kind words, SK. Appreciated as always!



    ***

    Tale of a Young Knight
    The Story of Sir Gilbert Reyne



    Flashback I

    Flashback I - A Teacher and his Student


    House of Sir Tancrede Larogue, retired French knight


    Late Summer, 1139
    Marseilles, France


    It was a simple home down a filthy alleyway in Marseilles, but it had a courtyard. No larger than a tavern in size, it was just the size required for Gilbert’s training.

    Sir Tancrede Larogue, a retired French knight was his trainer, tutor, and friend. For it was not a squiring he was serving the old knight, but rather military-based tutelage being served to him, at cost. For six years he spent nearly half his day, everyday, in the company of the old knight. To his father’s dismay, it was a costly education. But, one that would serve the ambitious young Gilbert in what fascinated him the most. Warfare, poetry, love, prestige, and a humbly pious life of service in its good name.

    In return for infrastructure servicing to his property, Amaruy bartered with Tancrede his services, as Tancrede took in Gilbert and his older brother, Robert, for tutelage. Supplies were additionally bartered to the old knight for continued services, as the boys’ father was a very prominent and successful Norman master builder, serving the city on contracted service. Amaury ensured all of his sons were well educated. Seven in total; three long into adulthood, from a previous marriage, with his most recent four; two interested in lives of soldiery, two in their father's footsteps, the art of building.

    Robert, who was eight years Gilbert’s senior, did not remain longer than four years, before he left to join the French army, as was also agreed upon with Tancrede.

    It was now Gilbert's final evening with Tancrede, after seven long years, his training was completed. He could now contend with any other boy his age; squire, noble, or not. He had received the same training as the average common squire, and his swordsmanship was excellent. His archery was adequate, his stratagem, exceptional, and his general education of numbers, writing, poetry, and history, efficient. Now, they would have their last meal together.


    Tancrede poured a bowl of rabbit stew for Gilbert, and seated himself across the table from the young man, a boy of fourteen.

    “Tomorrow, you will join Francis on his voyage, Gilbert. Departure is at mid-morning.”

    “A man of his pampered wealth does not sleep late?” asked Gilbert, after swallowing his first spoonful of soup.

    “It could take months for the journey. You will be well supplied, and very well compensated for this undertaking. It has been arranged. You should be thankful for this opportunity.”

    “I am, Tancrede. Believe me, I am. It has been a dream of mine since I was a boy to travel to England.”


    “You’ll find nothing but famine and death there, Gilbert. The wretched stench of burned bodies and foul taste of a thick, odorous blood will make you think twice about a serenely peaceable first visit.”


    “I want to take part in the war. It is my duty—”

    “—duty? What do you know of true duty, Gilbert? You’re still a boy. instilled with the knowledge and skills required to be grow into a good man. Use it when required. Not for ambition,” snapped the stern knight, pouring himself a cup of wine.

    Gilbert gazed into his bowl of soup, turning over chunks of rabbit meat in the broth, and submerging them with his spoon, as he pondered about what to expect on his upcoming journey, and, what to expect in England when he arrives. He tilted his head to the side, and with a quick jerk, flicked back his loose blond bangs, to remove them from the front of his face.

    “I wonder where Robert is. Father, mother.”

    “When you walk out this door on the morrow, Gilbert. The world will be yours to explore. Perhaps one day it will lead you into their lives again. Until then, you can only move forward and grow to be the best man you can be,” replied Tancrede, dipping his bread in his soup and taking a bite, a thin dribble of broth seeping down the right side of his mouth, he wiped it with a rag, and continued eating.

    Gilbert nodded, and ceased playing with his soup to eat it, taking a piece of bread in one hand, and proceeding to dip it in, as Tancrede did. He too, poured a cup of wine, and the rest of their meal they ate in silence.


    The next morning…

    Gilbert fixed his carrying sack, throwing the strap around his neck, the sack resting comfortable on his left shoulder, slung behind him. From the house’s foyer, Gilbert retrieved his spear and round shield from the side, and fastened the strap of his shield underneath his carrying sack, to make it easier to travel with. He had not even a blade, just his spear. He proceeded out the door, Tancrede still upstairs.

    He shut the door behind himself and proceeded up the street to the caravan post he was assigned to.

    From above, Tancrede stood on the balcony, his arms resting against the railing, overlooking the busy street, street shops set up, selling wares, peasants walking in all directions during their conducting their daily business; a hunter, noticeably strolling by with four pheasants foot-tied to a walking stick, slung over his shoulder. Tancrede watched most notably his young pupil, strolling away, head to the cobblestone road, almost without earshot, due to the loudness of an average morning on the streets of Marseilles.

    “Gilbert!” he shouted, his voice gruff as usual, a sign of his aging body.

    Gilbert turned around, taking a few steps closer to the man, standing just a dozen meters away from the balcony.

    Tancrede threw a sheathed dagger to him, and then also a small pouch.


    Gilbert hurriedly ran towards the falling dagger, catching the sheathe with his free hand, putting it under his other arm, and then also catching the small pouch. By the feeling, and clacking of contents, it was a pouch of coins. He didn’t bother to open it, to see how much, he just reached around, and slipped the pouch under the flap of his carrying sack, dropping it in with the rest of his possessions.

    The two just exchanged an awkward glance for a few moments, before Tancrede nodded in approval of his distinguished pupil, then looking away to the opposite side of the street, a sign to Gilbert that he may go.

    Gilbert turned and headed on his way up the street. Tancrede turned, to watch him leave.
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    Looks like knights are becoming popular once more...yeeees...the domination of knights shall begin soon...

    Anyway, exceptional story! I expected as much from The Writer Formerly Known As Dance, and I was not disappointed. +Rep for you, ser.

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    I'm also quite happy about the popularity of knights. Your story has inspired me to go and read up on the Plantagenets and this period especially.


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    Thanks for the commentary, Gents! Much appreciated.


    ***



    Tale of a Young Knight
    The Story of Sir Gilbert Reyne

    Chapter II

    II - A Knight to Remember


    Gilbert Reyne being knighted by Geoffrey Plantagenet, Count of Anjou


    April 21, 1141
    Gloucester, England


    Bowing his head, the peasant turned and took his leave from the makeshift throne room, where the official court of (the Blesevin-contested) Empress Matilda, reigning monarch of England, was being held.

    Matilda sat on the throne, her brother, Robert, to her left, standing proudly, overlooking the crowd before them. The newly re-implemented royals of England were holding court in Gloucester, temporarily, with the recent arrival of Matilda's husband, Geoffrey Plantagenet, in company. Robert bent down, and without words, nodded towards Gilbert, who stood behind two men, just barely visible through them, his face just above their shoulders, a boy just shy of sixteen years, tall for his age at six feet in height.

    Matilda nodded, and looked to Gilbert, her head stretching up slightly. “Gilbert Reyne, you have an audience. Approach.”

    Gilbert’s eyes widened, and the two men before him parted enough for him to slide through them, sideways.

    The boy, no facial hair yet sprouting form his bare, smooth face, approached. His skin was tight to his face like a drum, and his jaw could be seen clenched, a sign of his nervousness and subconscious fortitude, as he swallowed, approaching in silence. He was adorned fully in what armour he owned, as simple as it was, it was his.

    Robert did not break eye contact with him, and watched him approach, and kneel, bowing to the Empress. Robert noted his nervousness, as might be expected of the lower class, in the presence of high royalty. He puffed out his chest, then looking out to the spectators, many of whom had drawn queer expressions across their own faces, unsure of why this young boy, still just a foot soldier in the Angevin ranks, was to receive this audience, despite the passing of whispers around England of a young boy who captured the king, many having heard the whispers, but were not present at Lincoln two months prior to confirm the truth of it. Even though they all knew him as the rumoured boy who captured King Stephen in battle, it was an odd sight to witness.


    Matilda took a deep breath before speaking. “Gilbert. It goes without saying, of course, that you distinguished yourself on the battlefield for all men to see. Your daring and bravado will not soon be forgotten on that fateful day, when your country needed you most. You heartily joined battle against a hardened and determined enemy, and distinguished yourself through your own merit that day. I hear from my closest advisers that you fought with absolute confidence and fearlessness, and by capturing the usurper, you granted our cause a bargaining chip, a priceless one at that.”

    “You have done all that would be befitting of a man of knightly status. You have done your country a great deed,” she finished, turning to her husband, Geoffrey Plantagenet, the Count of Anjou, who moved in front of Matilda, and drew his sword, resting the blade upon his own shoulder, as he moved before Gilbert.

    “Gilbert Reyne, do you swear to uphold the values of which a knight is expected to demonstrate; being merciful, courageous, fair, selfless, and will not shy from protection of the weak, sick, poor, young, or delicate? Will you put the innocent above all else and swear to my sword, with the witnesses of this court today, in the name of your rightful liege, my wife, and the Empress of England, Matilda, and our son, Henry, and all in direct succession of our line, but most importantly, dedicate yourself to the protection of the innocent above all else? And in the name of God, do you swear to abide by the righteousness of His word, and live yourself a true Christian life?” said Geoffrey, holding the sword upright.

    “I do,” said Gilbert, his bow low, and in full respect, as Geoffrey placed the sword upon Gilbert’s right shoulder, the boy’s face trembling, as he stifled a grin, his head too low for any to see his face.

    “In sight of the heavens, and with these bystanders as witness to these words, I dub thee, Sir Gilbert, of the House of Reyne. Arise, Sir Gilbert, and be recognized.”


    The crowd began to clap, with sparing cheers louder than what seemed a monotone of sound, a congratulations, much of which could be construed as expected, due to the situation before them.

    Gilbert turned to the crowd, smiling, he could not conceal it. He then turned back to the Empress and Count, and bowed humbly once more, as he slowly walked back to the rest of the court, and then turned, sliding back through the two men who by this point ceased clapping, and gave him queer expressions as he slid back into the second row of the court.
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    Tale of a Young Knight
    The Story of Sir Gilbert Reyne

    Flashback II


    Flashback - The Road to Boulogne


    The road to Boulogne, a common caravan land route through France


    Spring, 1140
    Outskirts of Boulogne, France


    The caravan slowly made its way up a heavily trodden dirt road, the hooves of the first horses sloshing through the newly formed puddles below, a heavy rain having fallen the night before, and another just beginning with the earliest hints of a light fall.

    The caravan, seven wagons in length, one of which served as transport for the merchant, Francis de Voy, himself, was headed towards the French port town of Boulogne, where the voyage had planned to make passage across the English channel to Dover, England, so to continue business to the relatively isolated nations of the British Isles, trading his exotic wares, imported from all corners of the Mediterranean. It was a long trip from his original outset, his trading command post, in the French port city of Marseilles.

    Accompanying the merchant and his caravan hands, were hired mercenaries, paid to protect the caravan and all associated safely through the jagged route they had taken, through inland France and Normandy. Most of them were former soldiers picked up from the brothels and taverns of Marseilles, strung out to sober up, and hired for exceptional wage and adequate supplies, for the journey. Some were veterans paid in past services to this merchant, the captain of his caravan, Sir Louis de Poitiers, being one of the most distinguished. A French knight, operating as a mercenary, for the better pay than one might receive in the royal army, itself.

    Having already foregone several deadly confrontations with a group of bandits following the caravan, in prior months, the journey was nearing its completion. Boulogne would be reached later in the afternoon, as all were beyond tired and weary from travel, the last week of which was basically a forced march, but so they might soon have their rest.

    “What are you going to do with your purse, when we get to Boulogne?” asked Rémy, putting his hand on Gilbert’s shoulder.

    “Keep it close,” joked Gilbert, cracking a smirk, shrugging off his friend’s hand, as he raised his own to run it through his long, blonde hair, to push the overcrowding bangs away from covering his face.

    There were thirty hired soldiers left with the caravan, the rest having died in the past encounters they faced on their journey, or having been paid for partial company. There was no real similarities between any of them; what armour they wore, and weapons they possessed, were of their own. Some had mailed armour, others boiled leather. Some had nothing more than cotton padding inside a linen shirt, Gilbert being one of the poorest of the bunch, and as such, his equipment a reflection of this. He had but a simple short spear, a plain, circular wood buckler with little support aside from a simple strap that fastened it to his arm in use, but was now just strapped to his back, whilst the spear he used as a walking stick with an iron-tipped point. He had a simple iron dagger, sheathed on his belt, and simple linen leggings, with old leather boots that wore more with each step, despite there not being much more damage that could come to them.

    The caravan’s employer, himself, was in a pulled carriage, fourth in the convoy, with a top cover, being fanned by a servant inside, the curtains drawn back, so as he might enjoy the brisk rain that fell with outside. Still, in the coldness of the rainfall, beads of sweat still descended down his wrinkled and milky skin. It was not the heat that troubled the old merchant, but the hope of remaining without any further difficulty for the duration of the trip. Once at port, and on sea voyage to England, his property would be secured and ready to turn in a large profit for him.

    Most of the hired soldiers walked, Gilbert included, whilst a few had been mounted. Ahead, a mounted soldier took point, so as to ensure the safety of the road ahead, but within earshot and sight of the rest of the caravan.

    They had not stopped longer than a few hours in a town, since Montreuil, five days earlier. Gilbert had no quarrels, however, as he was a man on a mission. He had heard the tales of war in England, the land of his forefathers. Born in Normandy, both of his parents were in fact born in England, and subsequently moved the family to Normandy, where he was born, just outside of Rouen.

    The family moved to Marseilles when he was young, and due to the father’s work, as a reputable master builder, Gilbert and his siblings were well educated youths, provided by their father’s deep pockets. Six years after their arrival, the family packed up to Bordeaux for a new contract, but Gilbert remained behind, completing the last year of his education, before finding an opportunity to join a caravan headed for England.

    It was widespread gossip in France, that England burned. Its nobles warred with each other, Scotland fought with English nobles, the Welsh raided the western earldoms, and there had been no legitimate heir to the throne of England for nearly half a decade, upon the passing of the last stable king it had, Henry.

    For over four years, a war between the usurper king, Stephen, and Henry's daughter, the former Holy Roman Empress, Matilda, ensued. Having longed to return to the land of his roots, Gilbert took up what little possessions he had; some mediocre weaponry and tattered clothing, and he joined Francis’ caravan, headed for the Norman port of Boulogne. It was his ticket to England. It was all he had on his mind.

    “Water, my son?” asked a priest, travelling with the caravan. His question had broken Gilbert’s dazed stupor, both drenched from being exposed tp the rain, a light mist having turned to a fair fall. A long, raggedy cloak concealing much of Gilbert, the hood not covering his naked head, the rain moistening his long, dirty blond hair, as it had just recently began to fall from the deeply grayed skies.

    Gilbert looked to the priest, and making the sign of the cross, he accepted the container of water, stopping in his tracks, he upped it, emptying the contents down his throat. He was parched, hungry, and tired. But in a few hours time, his long journey will have paid off. He drank his fill, and handed the container back to the priest, who continued back towards the rear of the caravan, Rémy having fallen back some to converse with another.

    There was a consistent breeze that rustled the tree leaves, the wind giving the raindrops a fair detour, down to the side, and the wind gliding still through the unkempt grassy hillside. There was no reason to expect anything else from a safe last stretch to Boulogne, until a shout was heard up ahead. It was the scout ahead of the caravan. The shout could not be deciphered, and there was no clear indication as to what was bellowed. Three soldiers in the front of the caravan rushed forward to investigate, another on horseback passing by both of them, while another of the mounted soldiers ran down the side of the caravan, hastily checking the perimeter.

    Francis poked his head out of the carriage and inquired as to what was amiss. “S-soldier, what is going on?” asked the stuttering merchant, some wine having run down his mouth, wiping it with his sleeve, as if he was startled by the commotion, mid-drink. The men began to talk among themselves, with only some remaining utterly quiet.

    “I’m unsure. There was a shout from the scout ahead,” replied Gilbert, taken aback by the question having been directed at him, as he looked, ahead, pointing to the direction of the shout, but quickly realizing the merchant disappeared back into the layered drapes that hung over his carriage.

    Rémy ran up front to Gilbert. “Bandits?” he shouted, well louder than he should have.

    “What!?” screamed the merchant, from within the carriage.

    Gilbert rolled his eyes at his friend’s immediate assumptions. He glanced over to the drapes of the merchant’s wagon, seeing that the drapes had not been closed well enough, and he saw a good hand width of an opening sliver in the drapes, seeing the merchant rustle around with something. He slowly moved closer, as to get a better side angle view in, he could see the merchant shutting a small lock box, and placing it inside his rear-facing bench, shutting the seat, the hollowed center holding what appeared to be a small on-the-road treasury, for the merchant.

    Francis turned to Gilbert, seeing him peering in, he immediately shut the drapes tighter, so as to provide no more view of the interior of the wagon.

    “Hold your ground!” a shout was heard in the distance, as two mounted soldiers could be heard charging by on the opposite side of the caravan, headed towards the front of it.

    Rémy and Gilbert turned outward to the trees, where only a rustle could be heard, but now seemed to be aiding in the veiling of an advancing threat.

    Four other foot soldiers were beside them, the six tasked with the protection of the merchant and central cargo carriages. Six others were posted on the other side of the caravan, Gilbert having looked between two of the carriages, now stopped, and seeing one of the men pass by, spear in both hands, as he looked out to the opposite side of the road.

    An arrow flew by the left side of Gilbert’s face, striking the wooden frame of the merchant’s carriage. He had fallen down, having been startled by the close call. Two more zipped above him, one entering the carriage, the other striking the outer wall of it.

    Getting back up, with the help of Rémy, Gilbert saw two figures crossing by the hedgerow, on the side of the roadway.

    Several more arrows were fired from the bush, and Gilbert quickly grabbed Rémy and the two rushed for the grounded outcrop of a raised tree root, on the side of the road. As they moved, one of the other soldier’s was struck with an arrow to the groin, he bellowed curses in pain, dropping to his knees.

    One of the soldiers charged just beside Rémy and Gilbert’s location, but his sight fixated above them. He was charging at one of the assaulting force surrounding them. The assaulter was right above their position, but did not see them. A quick click was heard and faster than they could see, a crossbow bolt was in the chest of their charging comrade, the man having collapsed to the mud, landing half submerged in a giant puddle, rolling over in agony, covering himself.

    The attacker jumped down, dropping his crossbow, and having a spear in hand, he approached the helpless hired soldier.

    Another could be heard above them, moving, as dirt came through a hole in the root-supported mound. Gilbert tapped on Rémy’s shoulder and pointed up with his spear, then hitting his own chest and pointing to the man who was going for the killing blow on one of their fellow hired hands.

    Rémy positioned his spear to pierce through the hole in the protruding roots above, right into the man that crouched there, an arrow having been fired from the spot above, the man an archer.

    Gilbert rushed out, so as to surprise the spearman from behind.

    The man above shouted, but was quickly impaled from below by Rémy’s spear, a shout of warning being quickly turned to an agonizing wail, Rémy twisting will full force, and pulling the spear, so as to clear it from the impalement.

    The spearman turned around to meet Gilbert, and he jabbed at the young hired hand, the spear just barely missing a turning Gilbert. Gilbert, with both hands, whacked the man across the chest, forcing him to the ground, but quickly finding point and impaling the supposed bandit in the chest.

    All over, in what could only be assumed a bandit ambush, men flooded the caravan and clashed with hired soldiers and other hired hands of the caravan, in what had quickly become mayhem.

    Gilbert’s eyes turned to scan the entire area of the fighting, and it seemed as though their own men would soon be overwhelmed…
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    Another great chapter. Really liked the cliffhanger you left at the end and against the gorey battle descriptions were good.


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    Tale of a Young Knight
    The Story of Sir Gilbert Reyne

    Chapter III

    Chapter III - The Laughing Lion


    'The Laughing Lion' Tavern, Gloucester, England


    April 21, 1141
    Gloucester, England


    The tavern was alight, every candle burning bright, the hearth upon flagstones, central in the room, crackled and popped, whilst uproarious laughs erupted in short bursts around the warmed tavern, not a chair in the place empty. The mead flowed and the bread was aplenty. Meat and cheese were also surprisingly in abundance.

    There was no smell of barn stink, instead the barmaid was continuously directing her adolescent son around to wash the stink of dung from the floors, dragged in from the street, as new travelers entered. It was a well-kept inn, relatively clean, with a lack of moldy food, and hence a drier scent of musky stink from what lesser kept taverns would have.

    With a room upstairs, paid already, Gilbert was enjoying this night of drinking, play, celebration, and possibly drunken debauchery, the night of his knighting, he celebrated with what new friends he had made during his time with the Angevin forces.

    Reynald laughed, spitting out bread crumbs everywhere, slamming his tankard back on the table, throwing his head back, beginning to cough, choking on some mashed up bread that started down his throat, he threw his head down, coughing furiously, but smiling eat to eat.

    “And she had the honey smeared all over her tits, I had to stop licking it off when the crazy coot walked in, saw his innocent little darling, with her other hand on my pecker and his face,” said Rowan, stopping to chuckle, tipping up his cup of mead to his mouth, downing a swig, wiping and finishing, “it was right damn unforgettable.”

    The others burst out in laughter, as they had done all evening. “Did he give you the deer in a torch light look?” asked Hugh, widening his eyes, stretching them furthest with his own fingers. “Like this!” he jested, the rest continuing to laugh uncontrollably.

    Reynald laughed so hard he began to choke. His throat closed up and he couldn’t catch his breath. He pounded a clenched fist on his chest in a vain attempt to try and clear his throat.

    “Okay, okay!” shouted Rowan, his hand resting on Gilbert’s shoulder, the other smacking a reddened Reynald on the back. “Enough, or poor Reynald will be pigs food by morning.”

    A man watched them from the bar itself, his elbows rested upon the bar, back against it, giving them a look of interest—but annoyance. He had listened to them belch, laugh, eat, and belch some more all evening. He had clearly had his fill, as he reached over, grabbed his cup of ale, looked inside it, shook the contents around inside, and downed the rest, dropping his cup. “Oy!” he shouted at them, conjuring up a mucous-mixed wad of spit, strengthening the viscosity of the one already in his mouth. He tilted his head back, keeping the wad in his mouth, and with a slightly muffled tone he said, “I 'bout had ‘nuff of your damn sound all night. You sound like a mule needing be put out of ya misery,” finishing with a smile, winking at Reynald, and spitting towards him, the wad landing just shy of their table.

    The heckler's friend, next to him started to chuckle, as he too now turned to the direction of Gilbert’s table.

    “I about had enough of this one,” said Reynald, lowly, stabbing the rest of the meat on his plate, looking to Gilbert, his jaw clenched. “That’s the third time he’s said something to us tonight.”

    “Why don’t you go shut him up, you old woman,” said Rowan, cracking a smirk, as Hugh gave him a light shove, believing him only to be instigating a reaction.

    “I just about had enough of this arse’s commentary, also,” admitted Rowan, finishing what drink he had left in his tankard, tipping up his tankard, showing he had no drink left. “Time for a new one!”he continued, standing up from the table, he walked around the one between theirs and the bar, and proceeded to the heckler at the bar, separating the two friends from each other, barely. “Refill please, madam?” he asked the barkeep.

    The heckler turned to face him, giving Rowan a dirty look, though it was not Rowan that he targeted with his incessant jests, but rather Reynald. Rowan, however, in company with Reynald made him all the same to this man.

    “What’s your name, gentle soul?” asked Rowan, as his tankard was refilled.

    “What concern is that to you, ya Dunce?”

    “A man of many names?”
    replied Rowan, sipping the newly poured tankard of ale. “No, I’m Rowan,” he continued, smiling, as he took a small sip of his tankard, then turning it, flipping the cap up, throwing the cup’s contents over his shoulder into the man's face behind him, then kicking out the stool from underneath, with one fell swoop, the heckler's friend fell with it. He wasted no time drawing back the tankard, slightly, and bashed the heckler in the face, forcing his head to hit the bar, face smashing against the hardwood surface, he was slightly dazed. From there, Rowan grabbed his left wrist, held it out on the bar, gripping it tightly, forcing the man to open his hand flat down on the bar, he bashed his tankard several times onto the back of the man’s hand, causing the man to shriek out in pain.

    “Seems my friend isn’t the only joke now, huh?” screamed Rowan in the defenseless man’s ear.

    Hugh shot up from the table and ran towards Rowan to help him, when another man at a table between them, pushed his seat back, turned to Hugh, and leveled a clenched fist right to his gut, sending Hugh to his knees, then quickly grabbing Hugh by the hair, he open-handed slapped him—this one clearly being associated with the two Rowan just embarrassed.

    Reynald rose from his seat, the monstrous 6’11, bull of a man flipped his party’s table right over, and charged towards the other giant-of-a-man who held Hugh at his mercy. Another of the men stood up, this one attempting to confront the charging bull of Reynald, but with one shove of the head, the monstrous Reynald sent this other companion of the heckler over their own table, crashing into another nearby.

    The man who held Hugh backhanded him, releasing him to take on Reynald, when Reynald grabbed a vacant chair and with full force he broke it over the man, sending this other giant to his knees, attempting to still land a punch on Reynald, Reynald quickly countered by grabbing the man’s clenched fist, mid-air, and then grabbing the man’s other arm by the wrist, he pulled him close, and head-butted the other party’s giant, sending him to his back, then with a quick stomp, Reynald landed a foot right to the man’s face, busting some of his teeth out, and putting his head right into the wood floor, leaving a good indent in the wood.

    Rowan spun around, smashing his tankard into another man's face, the one who’s stool he kicked out, who had gotten back up to confront him. The man was sent right into an abandoned table, as those not involved quickly backed out of the melee.

    Another of the heckler’s company joined in by raising his chair and breaking it over Hugh, who stumbled to get up. Hugh had a gash in his head, and was knocked unconscious, blood steadily flowing from his head.

    Reynald flipped another table over, hitting two of the heckler’s company, one falling on his buttocks, against the hard floor.

    The heckler bellowed obscenities in pain, as he held his bleeding and broken hand, leaning over two vacant stools, whimpering.

    Another man coming into the tavern seemed to be of association with the heckler's company, because he shoved the barkeep’s son to the floor, who tried to take his weapon away, and with sword quickly drawn, the man charged forth at the melee.

    Gilbert who stood idly by, as he realized Reynald and Rowan needed no help with the men they'd already disabled, heard the man charging across the floor behind him, having let out a huge war cry in his charge, ignoring Gilbert, as he was not part of it. As quick as spit, Gilbert turned and swung his leg right for the charging man’s own legs, striking him in the right knee, he forced the man to collapse, sword coming free of his hands and sliding across the floor.

    Gilbert took his chair and with the backside, held by the two rear legs, he smashed it on the fallen man, busting it to pieces, and also busting the wrist of the man’s raised arm.

    The last of the heckler’s men jumped on Reynald’s back, and began to strike him repeatedly in the head with a wood cup, Reynald’s arms flailing around. Gilbert ran up, grabbed the man by the shoulders, pulled him down off Reynald’s back, forcing him to kneel, and delivered several right jabs to his exposed face, breaking his nose and causing a fountain of blood to poor from his face.

    The man who Rowan kicked the stool out from scrambled across the bloodied floor for the sword, grabbing it in two hands, he swung it right at Reynald’s legs, slicing his thigh, and sending the colossal man to the floor.

    Gilbert took a broken chair leg and approached the man with the sword, who now slowly got to his feet. The man, with both hands, took several swings at Gilbert, who, carefully parrying the swings, kept him at bay. Rowan grabbed a jug of ale, and coming from behind, he smashed it against the sword-wielding man’s back, sending him forward. Gilbert took a two-handed swing of the chair leg, cracking it to an almost clear snap, right on the side of the man’s head, sending him to the floor.

    Just as they had ended the fight—Hugh and Reynald bloodied and injured—guardsmen of the local sheriff entered the tavern, spears and swords raised, and surrounded the group of fighters.

    Gilbert dropped the chair leg and held his hands out, Rowan joining him in surrender, as the other two of their companions laid near still, exhausted and beaten from the fight.

    “So much for your first night as a knight,” jested Rowan, still somehow finding humour in their situation. “About those beds. We’d like a refund, madam,” he continued, winking with a sly smile at the barkeep.
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    Tale of a Young Knight
    The Story of Sir Gilbert Reyne

    Chapter IV
    Chapter IV - Consolidating An Image


    Gloucester Dungeon, Gloucester, England

    April 21, 1141
    Gloucester, England

    The dungeon was dank, it had the smell of fermented urine and hints of char. It was musky and the air as stale as little to no ventilation existed here. It was a small dungeon, but large enough to hold a good sized brood of cretins, of which on this day, Gilbert and his companions were among the likes of them.

    Ten arrests were made during the brawl at ‘The Laughing Lion’, four in Gilbert’s party (himself included) and six in the heckler’s party, including he who instigated the melee.

    The heckler’s men were kept in the same section as Gilbert and Rowan, joining a small group of local peasants and bandits who seemed to have little in common with these men, aside from shared lodging. Reynald and Hugh were kept under the care of the infirmary, on and upper level of the castle, whilst they both recovered from their wounds sustained during the brawl. In fact, most of the heckler’s lot had seen the same temporary lodgings, with just two of the six actually in the dungeon itself.

    “I’m a knight, now. Is there not some sort of higher condition keep for my retinue and I?” asked Gilbert, boldly.

    “Retinue!” barked Rowan, laughing, almost entirely forced. “You’ve been a knight for a little over week. Let it go,” replied Rowan, who picked underneath his finger nails with a stone chip, attempting to quell his spaced out chuckles, as he contemplated Gilbert’s pretentious comment.

    Gilbert just laid there, making the best of the stone floor, laying upon his back, his arms nestled underneath his head, as he stared up to the blank stone ceiling, its dark stones lined with the fading silk of spider movements.

    “I’ve said it before, and I’ll say it again for you. We’re being kept here not to await a trial, but to show what happens when you break the law. Perhaps, for me, I am saved some further punishment, given that you were recently knighted, and, well, he who pushed for it, is actually who is lord of this castle,” said Rowan, nodding and giving that sly and quick smirk he is so famous for. “Robert knows your here—we’re here. He’s attempting to teach you a lesson. You just watch,” he finished, now using the stone chip to pick at his teeth.

    The inner door of the dungeon keep opened, as a gaolor let in a few men, who came down a winding staircase to where the cells were, Gilbert actually creeping closer to the cell bars, to see who descended.

    It was Robert himself, followed by two in his retinue—even in his own castle not taking a chance with local rabble. He removed his cloak, the cloak drenched, as it was pouring outside.

    The gaoler led Robert to their cells, while other men nearby begged at the lord for release, he all but ignoring them.

    “Sir Gilbert. Arise,” he spoke the words, motioning for Gilbert to rise, with his cowhide gloves. “Can you explain yourself?”

    Rowan was about to speak, his mouth opening, as Gilbert kicked him gently, so as to send the message to keep quiet.

    “My Lord. I apologize,” replied Gilbert, a seeming loss for words, his sheer embarrassment far worse than he anticipated it to be. “A heckler got the better of my party, and one thing led to another—”“Excuses are for the peasants, Gilbert. I expected a more honourable reason from you,” snapped Robert.

    “You’re right. I apologize. I allowed the fight to get out of hand.”

    “I could keep you down here a year, Gilbert. I could strip your title, and see you beg in the streets for your next meal if I wished it. The snap of my fingers and I could bend and fold you whichever and however which way I wish.”


    Gilbert gulped, but slight enough for none to see it but him. He could not believe how quickly he had botched the prestige he garnered through his own merits at Lincoln, a couple months earlier. He couldn’t bring himself to even connect eyes with the man standing above him.

    “You and your men are to be released. This blip in your service will be viewed of as a removable stain. Bystanders confirmed the report that it was a night of heckling done by the other party, and your men acted out of respect—despite the idiocy of starting a melee in my holding. I will not be so lenient should a similar situation reoccur,” said Robert, lending his hand to Gilbert, so as to help him rise to his feet. The gaoler, similarly, got the message and assisted in helping Rowan to his feet.

    “I—I am speechless, My Lord. Disgraced—”

    “—Youth. A commonality. I hope it was not a mistake speaking up for you to Count Geoffrey and Empress Matilda. They have a high regard of you, now. There is promise in your image. The story of your capture of Stephen at Lincoln is spreading like wildfire. Names like yours will serve as a face for our cause,”
    continued Robert, looking to Rowan, a man seemingly much older than Gilbert, and one of his retinue. “You will need to surround yourself with loyal compatriots, Gilbert. It will be essential in the coming years, but, if God wills it, hopefully by year’s end, Stephen will sign a treaty in exchange for his freedom, to which the rightful royals will owe such a swift end to you,” a smile creeping slowly up his aging face, the laughing lines of his face, caverns forged by displaced skin.

    “I owe my title and whatever comes from it to you. Nothing will change that. I am Angevin until my last breath, this I swear to you. The sheer embarrassment of that incident at the tavern has me ashamed,” replied Gilbert, turning to Rowan and placing his hand on his shoulder. “I accept full responsibility for my own actions and those of my companions.”“This, young Gilbert, is why I put word forth of you.” He placed his hand around the young knight’s neck, and pulled him closer. “This generation’s Godfrey of Bouillon, in the making, perhaps?” smiled the Earl of Gloucester, then tapping light slaps on Gilbert’s face, as a show of personal forgiveness for a laughable stain on the young knight’s infant career, having been imprisoned less than 24 hours after his knighting.

    “Release them from their bonds,said Robert, ushering in the gaoler. “I need to propose something to you, Gilbert. But, it must be done in privacy, of course,he continued, beckoning the young knight to follow him out of the cell, and they had quickly ascended the stairs to the main level of the castle. There were no words uttered as they climbed the spiraling steps, one level after the next, until, about six stories later, they reached a long hall, walking down it, so beautifully kept, candlelit sconces guiding their way, although the natural light of mid-day made it quite an easy walk. Gilbert wiped his eyes, not used to the immense lighting, as opposed to that of the dungeon cells below, for which he had not seen much natural light in well over a week.

    A guard stood at a pair of double doors, knocking on the door, so as to signal two men inside to open them for their lord and his guest. Robert entered, followed closely by Gilbert, and the two men inside bowed, as the one who did as they entered, and quickly they closed outside the doors, shutting them tightly, to give a private audience to their lord.

    “Please, take a seat,said Robert, his hand opened towards the long table in the center of the room, Gilbert seated himself, two down from the end, where Robert's seat undoubtedly was. Robert proceeded over to a small table adjacent the long table, off to the side of the room, near the windows, open in full, as they allowed a brisk spring breeze to enter this higher level of the castle, four stories off the main courtyard. Gilbert looked around, taking in the beauty of this magnificent castle's interior in all its splendor, still awestruck, despite having seen the throne room once already, when he arrived to his knighting near two weeks prior.

    “These are tumultuous times, Gilbert,started Robert, taking a break from pouring two goblets of wine to look at his guest, and assuming that a commoner who was knighted, despite his age, likely wouldn't understand an enhanced vocabulary, as so he sought to reiterate his terminology, to dumb it down for the boy. “Diffic-

    “-Difficult times, My Lord, yes,
    snapped Gilbert, with little caution for his tone, catching on quickly as to what Robert intended, but quickly realizing his boldness. “My humblest apologies, My Lord.

    Robert just laughed, taking no offence. “How does one as young as yourself obtain such prowess in battle. Such, elegance and confidence with weapon craft? I have seen grown men piss themselves when faced with a hardened and determined foe. How did you handle it so hardily? Or even find your way into this conflict? I assume you are of commonest roots?he asked, inquiringly. “No offense intended.

    “None taken. My father is a master builder, in Normandy and France,
    replied Gilbert. “He is originally from England, however. As was my mother. Up until last year, I had never myself been to England. I was raised in Normandy, and for the latter half of my life, Marseilles.

    “Marseilles. I have been there many times. Beautiful city, beautiful weather, beautiful women,
    said Robert, with a nod and wink. “So you trained under a knight, in Marseilles?

    “Sir Tancrede Larogue, if you've heard of him.

    “Cannot say I have... But, he must be quite the knight to have trained you,
    said Robert, proudly, as he nodded and raised his goblet, before taking his first drink from it.

    “He certainly is,said Gilbert, doing the same.

    “Look, Gilbert. It's no secret that you have made a name for yourself, at Lincoln. That is the kind of soldiery that will keep the mens' spirits high. That is the kind of soldiery we need. You were indestructible in that battle. And you ended it decisively, with the twist of a mace.

    “What would you have of me, My Lord?

    “Head east with what men you possess. One of my captains, Sir Reginald Hartley, or Reginald of Chichester, as he's often referred, is building a special contingent of soldiers to strike at the heartland of Stephen's holdings. Even now, the Blesevin forces prowl the border regions and strike with impunity. This force I am endorsing will move into enemy territory, ahead of the main force, and put the Blesevins to the heel, frustrating their management, and demoralizing their forces, until I can lead the main force to liberate castle upon castle, stone after stone, if it comes to it. It is an essential thing that no proper supply lines are forged for a rebuilding of their forces. Even with Stephen imprisoned at Bristol, we lack the ability to completely seal a firm victory over his supporters. Can I rely on you?


    “Consider it done, My Lord. For the Empress and England.

    “Excellent,
    replied a thrilled Robert, pulling a sack of coins from his belt holster. “Get yourself some better armor. Perhaps some upgrades for your men as well. It will be needed.

    “Thank you, My Lord. For God and my vows sworn, I shall lay my life at the altar of justice and deliverance,said Gilbert, realizing that having heard what he was needed for, he stood up, pushed in his chair, took a bow before his lord, and took his leave.


    Later that afternoon…
    Streets of Gloucester


    Gilbert was dressed in some impeccably impressive fine linens to match his new knighthood, for a landless knight, having collected a good bounty from war booty from Lincoln, walking side by side with Rowan, the two made their way through the busy marketplace of Gloucester square, along crackled cobblestone roadway, uneven with poor upkeep, due to the prolonged war, with puddles crossing the length of the road, they trudged through with little regard for the dampness in their feet.

    “When Reynald and Hugh are out of the infirmary, we’re heading east. We’ve sat around too long, gotten fat, undisciplined, and now in trouble. It’s time we shape up. Robert’s right. This war could be over soon, and if it is, we’ll just be footmen in a larger army,” said Gilbert, fixing his wrist cuffs, as the two of them turned and wedged themselves through the crowded market.

    “I would have to agree, my good friend. We haven’t yet established ourselves… Where are we headed?”

    The two entered a blacksmith’s shop, the rear wall lined with weaponry, among scattered armour.

    Gilbert reached down, untied a pouch of coins from his belt, and threw it on the countertop, before the blacksmith’s assistant, turning to his friend. “Pick what you want.”

    Rowan was momentarily aghast, turning to Gilbert, throwing his arms up around him, and tightly hugging him, lifting up the young knight, and spinning him around.
    “Sir Gilbert the Generous!”
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    Going strong my friend.

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    Quote Originally Posted by General Brewster View Post
    Going strong my friend.
    Always, my friend. I will try and keep my motivation for this story up until its completion. I will split it into several 'books', in order to give a better divide to it, as this seems to be a common practice these days.

    Great to see your face (or more accurately, your account) here, still!

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    Very interesting, especially the colour differentiation for the dialogues.


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    Very well paced story. I'll be looking forward to more.
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    Quote Originally Posted by m_1512 View Post
    Very interesting, especially the colour differentiation for the dialogues.
    Thank you for the kind words, my friend. I thought it helped the story smoothness, pertaining to clarity! I'm glad it has had some positive effect.

    Quote Originally Posted by Lugotorix View Post
    Very well paced story. I'll be looking forward to more.
    Thank you, Lug. I am trying to pace it well. I have ideas for the future of it, but, as of right now, this small fellowship is having a good time!

    I am also in the process of revising past chapters, and editing them, rewording spots, adding additional detail to the story. It's kind of a pet project of mine at the moment! Not sure where it's going to be headed chapter to chapter, but its fun to write!

    You're in luck! I just finished the Vth chapter! Enjoy



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    Tale of a Young Knight
    The story of Sir Gilbert Reyne

    Chapter V
    V - Rowan's New Weapon


    Gilbert's party's new wagon, departing Gloucester


    Weeks later...
    The King's Highway


    A white steed, adorned with a fine chestnut saddle, and sacks that hung from the rear of it, gently, almost stilled as the steed walked. Cowhide gloves clenched the reins of the steed, tightly, and atop it, Sir Gilbert Reyne, leading a small wagon train, consisting of four men, himself included.

    Gilbert, leading, was flanked to his left by Rowan, atop a white steed, adorned in brown splotches throughout it. Their simple saddles and reins being all that really accompanied their majestic rides.

    Behind them, a two-horse drawn wagon cart, Reynald at the reins. His boulder-size arms stretched the seams of his sleeveless shirt, his tendons tightly bound by the skin that stretched the length of his arms. The wagon was small in size, enough room for their contents in the rear, covered by cured, purified hides, so as to slide the rain right off their baggage to the ground below. Hugh was asleep inside, covered completely beneath large woolen blankets, as if he needed sound to disappear, the wagon not a steady ride, as it bounced and shook, but somehow, Hugh's deep slumber did not break, even with a ruckus that could alert a Blesevin fort twenty leagues away.

    "Oh, sure. We'll take one of these wagons, he said. We'll take that one, he said. We don't own the supplies close to filling its capacity, but, we will obtain them before we depart the city, he said," mocked Rowan, pertaining to Gilbert's purchase of the obstreperous behemoth. Gilbert sighed.

    "How much do you have left? After all of this..." asked Rowan, inquiringly.

    "Not very much. There was a substantial amount—what having saved from my journey to England, my spoils from the battle at Lincoln, and my knighting bursary. It seems enough for us to get to where we're headed in style," replied Gilbert smartly, as he didn't break his scanning of the open hills around, and the rocky dirt road ahead.

    "Four horses, a wagon, some comfort supplies, rations, new boiled leather armour for the lot of us, and a new weapon each. I'm afraid to ask what this has done in debt to you."

    "A knight needs his retinue. And a retinue's financial situation lies in the debt of its lead. Plus, all we have, we owe to the Almighty. That said, our we have been granted the freedom of making our own path, under His watchful gaze."


    Rowan steadied his horse forward, and turned to look upon Reynald, who with one hand clenching the reins, had an apple in the other, chomping away on it. Three bites in his massive mouth and it was a core. Hugh had not surfaced from the wagon yet. "How does the bloody man do it? Asleep so peaceably, with that ruckus?"

    "With a cleared mind, and internal focus, sleep can be done in any environment, Tancrede once told me. Perhaps he's found his peace, near Reynald's backside. If only we all were so fortunately able to find such peace," joked Gilbert. Reynald only smiled, lifting one side of his buttocks to release internal gas, with such a noise, Rowan raised his eyes, turning back to see if his friend was alright.

    "Must be fking nice, a little nap for our princess, whilst the lot of us keep an eye out for danger, in a land rife with bandits and Stephen's men," replied Rowan, smirking, as Reynald roared with laughter, tossing an apple to the man, who caught it with a free hand, and bit into its juiciness, chomping joyously.

    "Are they not one in the same?" said Gilbert, in a manner implying a mockery, but in actuality, littered with seriousness, pertaining to the Blesevin forces as men of a usurper king, and not the truest blood of the rightful ruler, Matilda, and her true born son, Henry.

    "Bandit, Blesevin, bumpkin. Doesn't matter to me. I'll spill the blood of any man who stands against our cause, my friend," said Rowan, with bits of apple shooting out of his mouth, accompanied by its juice, as he continued to strut his horse along, chomping the apple down to its core.

    Gilbert smirked, and turned to his friend, noticing the rather large spear he had slung to his back. He gave Rowan a queer expression, having not asked the question he had been meaning to ask earlier on. "What's with the spear? You could have had any blade in that smith's shop, and you picked an overgrown spear, with an absurdly large headpiece?"

    "I prefer the spear. It has the length I need, and the mobility to strike at multiple foe from a distance," he said, pointing at his friend, with the apple core dangling in his spare fingers, "in case you find yourself surrounded, with no friend near, and you need keep them at a distance, what better than to have a weapon you can control easier than a sword?" he winked. "A sword you can swing with two arms. One, if your Reynald," he turned, winking too at his wagon-steering friend. "But," he continued, giving little room for comment, "should you find yourself alone, you will want a weapon that requires little full arm motion, and one that you might control, and strike multiple targets easier, and, if using both ends, strike twice at the same time, whereas, with a sword, my good friend, you cannot," he finished, tossing the apple core to the ditch beside the road.

    "And just how good are you with a spear?" asked Gilbert, cautiously.

    "About twice as good as you with a mace, my knightly leader," he winked again, steering his horse back, to cross behind Gilbert's steed, and to his other side, as Gilbert's horse wandered too close to his own.

    "Is that so?" asked a smiling Gilbert.

    "Yes, and, you see," replied Rowan, gripping the shaft of his spear, displaying its thickness, "it's made of hardened yew wood. Hard, durable, lighter than others. This makes for a very swift and deadly spear. Just how they should be."

    "I've never seen you use a spear in the way you boast of."


    "Nor would you have. A short spear? No, my friend. I prefer lengthier ones. A good spear and a good shield, that's all you need. A short blade for close combat, or the odd case your spear breaks. But, these spears are what I learned to fight with, down in Spain. The moors institute a similar spear into their arsenal, as well. I was trained with this by my grandfather when I was just a lad. I know how better to fight with this than a sword, and I am grateful for that."

    "And the blade? You had the original one removed and replaced with that monstrously misshapen one?"

    "The jagged edges are for slicing. A spear is not just for jabbing. The head on this one creates an intense slicing capability that allows for more durable usage and unpredictability. The last thing you'd want in the heat of battle is a spearhead you cannot retrieve from some fool's breastplate, as both of your hands and your energy are combined to retrieve it. This design allows for more leverage to withdraw a strike from armor, or, better yet, bone and sinew."

    "Are we almost there?"
    said a voice from the wagon, recognized only as Hugh's more light, and higher pitched tone, compared to the brutish, monstrosity of a deep voice that is signature to Reynald.

    The men kept forth, making good ground as they headed east to the heart of the Blesevin strength.
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    Tale of a Young Knight
    The story of Sir Gilbert Reyne

    03/08/14 original flashback
    Flashback - The Road to Boulogne Pt. 1


    Flashback - The Road to Boulogne


    The road to Boulogne, a common caravan land route through France


    Spring, 1140
    Outskirts of Boulogne, France


    The caravan slowly made its way up a heavily trodden dirt road, the hooves of the first horses sloshing through the newly formed puddles below, a heavy rain having fallen the night before, and another just beginning with the earliest hints of a light fall.

    The caravan, seven wagons in length, one of which served as transport for the merchant, Francis de Voy, himself, was headed towards the French port town of Boulogne, where the voyage had planned to make passage across the English channel to Dover, England, so to continue business to the relatively isolated nations of the British Isles, trading his exotic wares, imported from all corners of the Mediterranean. It was a long trip from his original outset, his trading command post, in the French port city of Marseilles.

    Accompanying the merchant and his caravan hands, were hired mercenaries, paid to protect the caravan and all associated safely through the jagged route they had taken, through inland France and Normandy. Most of them were former soldiers picked up from the brothels and taverns of Marseilles, strung out to sober up, and hired for exceptional wage and adequate supplies, for the journey. Some were veterans paid in past services to this merchant, the captain of his caravan, Sir Louis de Poitiers, being one of the most distinguished. A French knight, operating as a mercenary, for the better pay than one might receive in the royal army, itself.

    Having already foregone several deadly confrontations with a group of bandits following the caravan, in prior months, the journey was nearing its completion. Boulogne would be reached later in the afternoon, as all were beyond tired and weary from travel, the last week of which was basically a forced march, but so they might soon have their rest.

    “What are you going to do with your purse, when we get to Boulogne?” asked Rémy, putting his hand on Gilbert’s shoulder.

    “Keep it close,” joked Gilbert, cracking a smirk, shrugging off his friend’s hand, as he raised his own to run it through his long, blonde hair, to push the overcrowding bangs away from covering his face.

    There were thirty hired soldiers left with the caravan, the rest having died in the past encounters they faced on their journey, or having been paid for partial company. There was no real similarities between any of them; what armour they wore, and weapons they possessed, were of their own. Some had mailed armour, others boiled leather. Some had nothing more than cotton padding inside a linen shirt, Gilbert being one of the poorest of the bunch, and as such, his equipment a reflection of this. He had but a simple short spear, a plain, circular wood buckler with little support aside from a simple strap that fastened it to his arm in use, but was now just strapped to his back, whilst the spear he used as a walking stick with an iron-tipped point. He had a simple iron dagger, sheathed on his belt, and simple linen leggings, with old leather boots that wore more with each step, despite there not being much more damage that could come to them.

    The caravan’s employer, himself, was in a pulled carriage, fourth in the convoy, with a top cover, being fanned by a servant inside, the curtains drawn back, so as he might enjoy the brisk rain that fell with outside. Still, in the coldness of the rainfall, beads of sweat still descended down his wrinkled and milky skin. It was not the heat that troubled the old merchant, but the hope of remaining without any further difficulty for the duration of the trip. Once at port, and on sea voyage to England, his property would be secured and ready to turn in a large profit for him.

    Most of the hired soldiers walked, Gilbert included, whilst a few had been mounted. Ahead, a mounted soldier took point, so as to ensure the safety of the road ahead, but within earshot and sight of the rest of the caravan.

    They had not stopped longer than a few hours in a town, since Montreuil, five days earlier. Gilbert had no quarrels, however, as he was a man on a mission. He had heard the tales of war in England, the land of his forefathers. Born in Normandy, both of his parents were in fact born in England, and subsequently moved the family to Normandy, where he was born, just outside of Rouen.

    The family moved to Marseilles when he was young, and due to the father’s work, as a reputable master builder, Gilbert and his siblings were well educated youths, provided by their father’s deep pockets. Six years after their arrival, the family packed up to Bordeaux for a new contract, but Gilbert remained behind, completing the last year of his education, before finding an opportunity to join a caravan headed for England.

    It was widespread gossip in France, that England burned. Its nobles warred with each other, Scotland fought with English nobles, the Welsh raided the western earldoms, and there had been no legitimate heir to the throne of England for nearly half a decade, upon the passing of the last stable king it had, Henry.

    For over four years, a war between the usurper king, Stephen, and Henry's daughter, the former Holy Roman Empress, Matilda, ensued. Having longed to return to the land of his roots, Gilbert took up what little possessions he had; some mediocre weaponry and tattered clothing, and he joined Francis’ caravan, headed for the Norman port of Boulogne. It was his ticket to England. It was all he had on his mind.

    “Water, my son?” asked a priest, travelling with the caravan. His question had broken Gilbert’s dazed stupor, both drenched from being exposed tp the rain, a light mist having turned to a fair fall. A long, raggedy cloak concealing much of Gilbert, the hood not covering his naked head, the rain moistening his long, dirty blond hair, as it had just recently began to fall from the deeply grayed skies.

    Gilbert looked to the priest, and making the sign of the cross, he accepted the container of water, stopping in his tracks, he upped it, emptying the contents down his throat. He was parched, hungry, and tired. But in a few hours time, his long journey will have paid off. He drank his fill, and handed the container back to the priest, who continued back towards the rear of the caravan, Rémy having fallen back some to converse with another.

    There was a consistent breeze that rustled the tree leaves, the wind giving the raindrops a fair detour, down to the side, and the wind gliding still through the unkempt grassy hillside. There was no reason to expect anything else from a safe last stretch to Boulogne, until a shout was heard up ahead. It was the scout ahead of the caravan. The shout could not be deciphered, and there was no clear indication as to what was bellowed. Three soldiers in the front of the caravan rushed forward to investigate, another on horseback passing by both of them, while another of the mounted soldiers ran down the side of the caravan, hastily checking the perimeter.

    Francis poked his head out of the carriage and inquired as to what was amiss. “S-soldier, what is going on?” asked the stuttering merchant, some wine having run down his mouth, wiping it with his sleeve, as if he was startled by the commotion, mid-drink. The men began to talk among themselves, with only some remaining utterly quiet.

    “I’m unsure. There was a shout from the scout ahead,” replied Gilbert, taken aback by the question having been directed at him, as he looked, ahead, pointing to the direction of the shout, but quickly realizing the merchant disappeared back into the layered drapes that hung over his carriage.

    Rémy ran up front to Gilbert. “Bandits?” he shouted, well louder than he should have.

    “What!?” screamed the merchant, from within the carriage.

    Gilbert rolled his eyes at his friend’s immediate assumptions. He glanced over to the drapes of the merchant’s wagon, seeing that the drapes had not been closed well enough, and he saw a good hand width of an opening sliver in the drapes, seeing the merchant rustle around with something. He slowly moved closer, as to get a better side angle view in, he could see the merchant shutting a small lock box, and placing it inside his rear-facing bench, shutting the seat, the hollowed center holding what appeared to be a small on-the-road treasury, for the merchant.

    Francis turned to Gilbert, seeing him peering in, he immediately shut the drapes tighter, so as to provide no more view of the interior of the wagon.

    “Hold your ground!” a shout was heard in the distance, as two mounted soldiers could be heard charging by on the opposite side of the caravan, headed towards the front of it.

    Rémy and Gilbert turned outward to the trees, where only a rustle could be heard, but now seemed to be aiding in the veiling of an advancing threat.

    Four other foot soldiers were beside them, the six tasked with the protection of the merchant and central cargo carriages. Six others were posted on the other side of the caravan, Gilbert having looked between two of the carriages, now stopped, and seeing one of the men pass by, spear in both hands, as he looked out to the opposite side of the road.

    An arrow flew by the left side of Gilbert’s face, striking the wooden frame of the merchant’s carriage. He had fallen down, having been startled by the close call. Two more zipped above him, one entering the carriage, the other striking the outer wall of it.

    Getting back up, with the help of Rémy, Gilbert saw two figures crossing by the hedgerow, on the side of the roadway.

    Several more arrows were fired from the bush, and Gilbert quickly grabbed Rémy and the two rushed for the grounded outcrop of a raised tree root, on the side of the road. As they moved, one of the other soldier’s was struck with an arrow to the groin, he bellowed curses in pain, dropping to his knees.

    One of the soldiers charged just beside Rémy and Gilbert’s location, but his sight fixated above them. He was charging at one of the assaulting force surrounding them. The assaulter was right above their position, but did not see them. A quick click was heard and faster than they could see, a crossbow bolt was in the chest of their charging comrade, the man having collapsed to the mud, landing half submerged in a giant puddle, rolling over in agony, covering himself.

    The attacker jumped down, dropping his crossbow, and having a spear in hand, he approached the helpless hired soldier.

    Another could be heard above them, moving, as dirt came through a hole in the root-supported mound. Gilbert tapped on Rémy’s shoulder and pointed up with his spear, then hitting his own chest and pointing to the man who was going for the killing blow on one of their fellow hired hands.

    Rémy positioned his spear to pierce through the hole in the protruding roots above, right into the man that crouched there, an arrow having been fired from the spot above, the man an archer.

    Gilbert rushed out, so as to surprise the spearman from behind.

    The man above shouted, but was quickly impaled from below by Rémy’s spear, a shout of warning being quickly turned to an agonizing wail, Rémy twisting will full force, and pulling the spear, so as to clear it from the impalement.

    The spearman turned around to meet Gilbert, and he jabbed at the young hired hand, the spear just barely missing a turning Gilbert. Gilbert, with both hands, whacked the man across the chest, forcing him to the ground, but quickly finding point and impaling the supposed bandit in the chest.

    All over, in what could only be assumed a bandit ambush, men flooded the caravan and clashed with hired soldiers and other hired hands of the caravan, in what had quickly become mayhem.

    Gilbert’s eyes turned to scan the entire area of the fighting, and it seemed as though their own men would soon be overwhelmed…

    New Update! 06/09/14
    Flashback - The Road to Boulogne - Pt. II

    Flashback - The Road to Boulogne Pt. II


    The bandit assault continued...

    A bandit emerged around one of the wagons and charged, long spear tipped down, towards Gilbert, who waited, spear in both hands, held sideways in front of him, in a defensive pose, as if waiting to redirect the bandit's spearhead.

    "Aghhhh!" bellowed the bandit, as if a war cry would demoralize this simple, young boy, caught up in a profession for men. An easy kill, so he might assume.

    Gilbert waited, patiently, closing out the rest of the fight, for this man to reach him, not realizing himself stepping forward slowly, then picking up pace, before he was in full charge himself. "Let's go!" he shouted, the two charging one another, Gilbert keeping his fix on the target before him, the bandit not changing the position of his spear, believing the young boy before him unable to best him.

    Gilbert took full advantage of the bandit's inadequate preparation, and with his spear, he jammed it into the mud, just before the clash, right between where the bandit's legs would run over, so that the spear was parallel with the bandit's groin, throwing his body sideways, the spear just slightly missed his stomach, he dropped his weight, both hands clenching the spear, so that it wedged between the bandit's legs, snapping, and forcing his attacker down to the mud below, an immense splash replacing the man's war cry. Gilbert, himself, having fallen back to the mud, quickly got up, using the broken shaft of the spear, to drive the shard right into the bandit's back, just beneath his left shoulder blade, the target, the man's heart. A splurge of water erupting from the man's mouth, as the strike was synonymous with the bandit pulling his face out of the muddy water, cringing at the fatal wound dealt to him, his face landing right back into the water, his body jerking several times, but his fate determined.

    Quickly gathering up the man's spear, Gilbert looked ahead, seeing his friend, Rémy, climb the short drop to the roadway, to level himself with the bandit archers who assaulted from the southern side of the roadway. Burying his spear into another one, and finishing him with a short sword impaled straight into the man's chest. Gilbert knew his back was covered with his friend dispersing the bandit archers. He turned, the bandit's spear in hand, and hastily ran towards the wagon, to give himself protection from the open roadway, as archers on the northern side still fired arrows sporadically.

    Before reaching the wagon, a mounted bandit turned around one of the far wagons, eyeing Gilbert, he proceeded to charge for him, having been relatively defenseless, with just a mediocre spear, not even tipped with iron, but instead more of a sharpened stake. Gilbert slowly dropped back, as if it would be more defensive to prolong the charge, eyeing the man charging him, trying to figure how best to get himself from the situation. He decided to throw his spear, as a javelin, to trying and impale the rider, before he reached him. He arched his arm back, preparing to throw the spear, the rider was undeterred, spear dropped down, level near with Gilbert's head, it was the perfect height to deal a killing blow to him. He garnered the fortitude to throw the spear, but, it having not gone straight, slipping from his hand, due to the rain, the spear turning aside, the point no longer a threat to the rider, it glided past him, just slightly forcing the rider to duck below the lazily thrown spear, Gilbert readied his hands, an arrow passing before his face, causing him to hit the mud, naturally, just getting up in time, to roll aside, before being trodden over by the horse, he reached up, not seeing clearly, grabbing the shaft of the spear meant to impale him, he pulled down on it, causing the rider to lose balance, and fall head first into the muddy water, his grip on the spear coming lose, it slammed into the water, the rider dazed from the fall. Gilbert grabbed the spear up, pointing it at the fallen rider, who got onto his knees in an attempt to confront him. He drove forward a few steps, forcing the spearhead into the bandit rider's gut, twisting it furiously, trying to drive it in further, as the bandit attempted to hold it from going in, the spear's slick shaft, slipping through his hands, as he helplessly was unable to prevent its impalement. Gilbert drove it straight through the other side, out the man's back, causing him to shout obscenities in response. "You fk!" he shouted at Gilbert. "You ct!" he continued.

    "Diiiiiiie!" shouted Gilbert, throwing his weight against the shaft of the spear, to try and force the bandit down to the mud again, the bandit within range to grab Gilbert by the throat, Gilbert raising his hands to block the other hand, grabbing the bandit's wrist with his right hand, the two fell to the mud, the bandit managing to get his hand on the back of Gilbert's head, forcing his face into the water, both trying to gain the upper hand in momentum. The struggle ensued for a few moments longer, both having gripped each other's throats, attempting to strangle or drown one another, whichever option best seemed closer to their grasps.

    With the spear still lodged inside the bandit's gut, Gilbert drew his knee up, and kicked the shaft of the spear, causing it to wedge against the bandit's flesh, forcing him to wretch in agony, as he used this to gain the upper hand, throwing his body onto the bandit's side, and using both hands against his face, force the bandit's head into the mud as deep as he could, only half-submerging his face, he managed to turn the head enough to cover both the man's nose and mouth, holding him there, as a struggle continued, putting all the weight he could on his arms, as the man reached out, grabbing Gilbert's neck, and getting one good scrape at him, scratched his neck, drawing blood, but unsuccessfully forcing Gilbert off him. Gilbert's efforts continued for minutes, in what had seemed mere seconds in the heat of the fight. "Diiiiiiiiiiiie!" he cried out. The bandit's movements slowed, until he gave up all fight. Still, Gilbert held his face underwater for a few moments longer, until it was clear the man drowned.

    Rolling off him, Gilbert was fully covered in the muddy contents, his face having rolled right over a pile of it, he rested on his back, using his fingers to scoop the mud that concealed his eyes, pulling it off, as he tilted his head sideways, so as to prevent the rain from striking his eyes, piercingly, he garnered what strength he had left, attempting to recuperate it from the melee he just endured, he vainly attempted to grip at the mud, trying to help himself up, his hands sliding through it. He used the back of his hand, as muddied as it was, to push the mud away from his mouth, so he could open it, to help himself breathe, as his nostrils were clogged with mud, he blew out, attempting to clear them. He slowly climbed up, staggering back, and falling to the mud again, he turned, seeing the man he drowned half submerged in the muck that was to be the road. He struggled to reach the partial safety of the wagon, covered and seemingly invisible in the muck that surrounded them. He saw in the distance, remnants of the defensive force attempting to hold off the much larger force of bandits that engulfed the caravan from all angles.

    Reaching the wagon, he put his back to the immense wheel, looking side to side, to see any more attackers revealing themselves, or posing an immediate threat to him, he saw none. He did, however, overhear commotion in the wagon to which he took cover by. It was Francis' traveling wagon, and he heard the deep, thick Frenchman's voice utter curses to assumed would-be kidnappers. He edged himself closer to the opening on his side of the wagon, and saw the curtain concealing the inside imprint out, as a struggle ensued inside. He heard two men, besides Francis, arguing with his employer, as it seemed they were trying to capture the merchant, and pull him from the fight. He heard a splash to the other side of the wagon, the two bandits having forced Francis out of the wagon, and attempting to drag the portly merchant from the roadway, to the relative safety of their strong side of the road.

    Drawing the curtain back, Gilbert noticed a blanket concealing a chest, only revealed from his side, clearly missed by the bandits. It was Francis' personal chest, no doubt filled with readily-available coinage and other valuables. It was his for the taking, likely enough to retire to a lavish lifestyle on the French countryside... But, he felt a compelling force in him, a desire not for the gold, but for justice. For what he had been hired to do. Protect.

    Jumping into the wagon, he emerged out of the other side, the bandits not having seen him, as they were busied by dragging Francis across the muddy roadway, he charged at them, they only having noticed him when he neared them, not quite in time to react, Gilbert struck one of the across the face with the hilt of the spear, sending the man back, losing his grip of Francis, and into the mud, sliding a foot, as the rain intensified since the assault was launched.

    The other bandit quickly tried to draw a dagger, in order to react, but Francis, from the mud below, bit the man in the leg, through his light linens, causing the man to react with a backhand to the merchant's face, but giving Gilbert enough time to bury his spearhead into the man's stomach, causing him to cover the spear shaft, now at Gilbert's mercy. Drawing the dagger he had been given by Tancrede upon his departure, Gilbert jabbed it into the man's throat, and with both hands, withdrew it, in a slice action, to try and open the man's throat, having met mediocre success, opening the throat slightly, but enough to cause a gush of blood from his throat, squirting in multiple directions, and falling back to the mud, clenching the opening, in a vain attempt to cease the flow. The other bandit arose, and Gilbert threw his arm under his right arm, around his back, and jabbed him seven times in the chest, creating a mosaic of bloody openings, before throwing the man to the mud.

    Grabbing Francis, Gilbert hauled him up on his feet, not sure where his strength had come from. "Move, now Francis!" he shouted to petrified merchant, forcibly dragging him back to the wagon, and helped him up into it.

    "I owe you my life, soldier," Francis had gotten out, still mortified by the assault, and his near kidnapping.

    Across the road, an archer notched an arrow, drew it, aimed it for Gilbert, and released, the arrow piercing the heavy rainfall with such speed, it tore through any resistance from the water, and struck Gilbert in the lower back, just beneath the back of his stomach, forcing the young man to grab the wagon's bottom, in an attempt to keep himself up from falling, his legs buckling below him, losing the sense of feeling to stand, momentarily. He heaved himself up, to regain his footing, the archer notching a second arrow. "Get to the back, now! Away from the opening!" he shouted, noticing the exterior doors had been broken off by the bandits, during their attempted kidnapping of the man. The words were out no sooner than his inability to keep his footing, and then a second arrow struck him in the left thigh, he fell, the arrow in his back snapping as he fell upon it to an angle, causing a surge of pain from his lower back, he fell to the mud, powerless to stand again. He looked to the side of the road, where the archer notched a third arrow, drawing it to his direction.

    Just then, a spear impaled the man from behind, withdrawing as quickly as it entered, sending the man to the road below. It was a soldier, Gilbert assumed sent from the local sheriff office at Boulogne, perhaps a group hunting this bandit party. All over the roadway, soldiers emerged, striking at the overwhelming group of bandits, causing the rest of them to disperse, as the road was littered with the corpses and wounded of both the bandits and the caravan guards. Horsemen shouted war cries, as the poured upon the caravan, sending the bandits on foot to flee. Several were caught before they could reach the safety of the sides of the road, away from the cavalry. Others were met with spear and sword, as they attempted to flee the cavalry. The bandit party was crushed as quickly as they had sprung their attack.

    Gilbert laid on his back, the rain striking him in the face, his eyes shut, as cold, sharp piercing rain pegged him, sending what seemed a continuous, brief respite from the pain of the arrowheads embedded in his body.
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