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    Chapter I, Prologue: Exiles and Envoys

    (4th Year of the 127th Olympiad ~ 269 BC)



    “...and thus came the God-king Alexandros to the fractured satrapy of Baktria, known to the Persians as Bāxtriš and in the far eastern lands as Dàxià, a land which to those people of silk and cat-like eyes seemed just as mythical as their own realm was to the Hellenes led by this prince of Makedon. It was a region which had suffered greatly since the death of the King of Kings but which, being a land visited by both mighty Herakles and virile Dionysos, remained one of vast fertility and a rich reward for anyone that would reach out and take it. This being what Alexandros did, clutching it to him like a mother with an infant, embracing the people on his way to the Caucasus Indicus, every town and village he passed being better for his benevolent presence. It was Alexandros who first saw the worth of the region, a place where he could settle men in comfort and trade with foreign peoples, but it was to be his diadokhoi that would rule what he had first pressed his mark upon.”


    - Fragment of in inscription found on a temple wall in ruined Baktra, the author is currently unknown, dated to circa 277 BCE.



    There had never been so few of us as there were then, never had our numbers dwindled to such a low ebb of blood and muscle, never had the city without walls been defended by so many dwellers around and so few of the Spartiate peers who had defended it for centuries, ever since its founding. Now we were few, numbering in the lowest of thousands, a far cry from the numerous mora of Spartiates that had marched to battle at Plataea and against out sea-faring cousins of Athenai, or even resisted Phillipos and his arrogant son Alexandros when they demanded that Sparte kneel before them in supplication. Such was my misfortune to be born into one of those dwindling bloodlines, that of Herekleios, my father always telling me of how our forbearer had been honoured by that great demi-god and thus had borne the name ever since.

    Our great name was not enough to stop my fathers exile, and thereby the continued dwindling of the homoioi, the ephors and gerousia agreeing entirely that he had turned his back to the enemy in battle and disgraced both himself and Sparte with his actions. I had barely completed the agoge when he left, my body hardened and my mind sharpened as only a true Spartans could be, returning home to find my mother dangling from the creaking rafters of our simple homestead. In my minds eye I can still picture her dishevelled hair, and her blank, staring, eyes. What truly disturbed me were her blue lips and the pale face which glared accusingly at me when I crossed the threshold, expecting to be welcomed home.

    Tell me then, unknown stranger, how could I have remained in a city that had turned my life into a living realm of Hades?

    No, I had been raised in the traditions and education of my city, of my forefathers, but I could not and would not remain if it meant having to enter the mess and look upon those that had driven away my father and driven my mother to soul-polluting suicide.

    Always will I remember that it was a calm, almost lazy, day when I left the Eurotas valley and began my journey east. The water of the life-giving river which runs through my homeland was glistening, a hand raised to shield my eyes from the sun as it rose over the mountains which act as a barrier against attack or invasion, a flock of birds rising slowly from the reeds growing in the water and scattering to four winds as I watched. Few possessions had I taken from my home, a simple building of wood that my father had built by hand in his youth, but those that I had bought with me now clothed me or were placed on the ground around me, forgotten as I became absorbed into my own thoughts.

    Foremost of these was a bronze helmet made from a single sheet of bronze, a family heirloom that my pater used to say was worn at the Hot Gates by one of our blood. It still bore the blood-red crest of horsehair, a relic in this new age to be certain but one that I wished to accompany me on my travels. Over my torso I wore a simple thorax of leather and linen, a style made popular by the Athenians, one which spread across the known world and even to the farthest corners, broad pieces protecting my shoulders and neck. At my waist, silent and sheathed for the moment, was the infamous 'Spartan blade' made famous in a hundred battles of the past, the aspis which was just as notorious leaning against my thigh as I took another deep breath of the morning air and clutched at the hem of my crimson cloak to wrap it closer about me.

    “Farewell, land of my fathers. If I should not return then let my shade fly on fleetest winds, to plant ethereal feet back onto this sacred ground once more.”



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    Taking ship from Gythiom, I sailed for nearly a week aboard a merchant vessel and alongside a number of other unfortunates like myself. Together we went, making landfall at Ephesus and up the coast to Chios, before finally ceasing our voyage at that greatest of Ionian cities – Mytilene.

    If one thing could be said for the constant power struggles between the diadokhoi, it was that no man who could bear arms and shed the blood of his brother would ever be out of work and short of coin. The polis itself, if not the entire island of Lesbos, was a current of business activity and propositions between two parties. It is naïve of outsiders to believe that we Spartans, especially in the days I speak of, were still ignorant of the perils of foreign interaction or that the laws of Lykurgus still bound us to particular behaviour. While it is certain that I followed his laws as closely as I could, clipping my speech and toughening both my body and my mind, I nonetheless was a curious youth and easily fell into company which my ancestors may not wholly approved of.

    One such day was when I met him.

    His name was Dion Nysaios, an unassuming and balding man, sitting alone and silently at a table within one of the many taverns to be found along the vast harbour-side of the sprawling port-city. I was uncertain about approaching him and yet something drew me to him, a man much more with the appearance of a sophist than one who I was to discover had the power to influence powerful nobles and direct nations.

    “Greetings to you,” he said without looking at me, noticing my shadow falling across him and speaking before I could take a seat, “what brings you to Mytilene? A Spartan, if my eyes do not deceive me.”

    Why I told him my entire sad tale I will never know, but something about his openness and smooth Attike dialect tinged with something else forced it from me. He listened in silence, stopping only to offer me a drink of water-cut wine, which I took willingly to drench my parched throat, glancing at me often but never revealing what he thought by his expression or opening his mouth to speak. Not until I had finished.

    When I had waned into silence once more, averting my eyes from his own out of some feeling of shame and humiliation, he spoke to me in a voice like a passing breeze. It was a voice honed by decades of oratory, and in this moment it was turned toward persuasion. He told me that an upbringing such as I had endured should not be wasted on aimless wandering, on going from place-to-place without an end in sight, telling me that I must have chosen Mytilene for a reason and that he believed it to be a desire for war which could not be removed from me by any means.

    Using words, phrases, and gestures he explained that he came from far to the east, from a land where Hellenes and Persians lives side-by-side and fought, bled and died as one brotherhood. To my Lakedaimonian mind such things sounded almost fantastical, but he assured me that he spoke the truth. There were men there, he claimed, with skin as black as coal dragged from the earth, others with eyes like those of felines, and some that sat in silence for hours and performed amazing feats. All this I listened to, keeping my thoughts to myself and nodding as he went on. Then he spoke of that which might interest me most, of the thousands of spears and swords drafted into the kingdom in exchange for patches of land, and the solid essence of golden coins, of a land where a man could become anything he wished.

    Inwardly I saw myself, older and yet with the same bearing, standing beside a farm and looking at a trickling river as it snaked its way down into a pool at the edge of a narrow and golden valley. From behind me came the sound of a female voice, a voice calling me for our evening meal, to come and tell my son and daughter of how I had travelled from Hellás and forged my destiny in the eastern satrapy by the strength of my arm and the courage of my heart. In spite of this I could think of only one singular purpose to go there, to a satrapy that was in the actions of becoming a kingdom of its own, one that might one day rival its former master and rivals, and that was redemption.

    If I went into the east, to this ever shifting land, I could cleanse myself of my fathers wrongdoings and perhaps even outrun the curse that my mother had unwittingly set upon me by the taking of her own life. Surely, if there was anywhere at all where it could be done, in Baktria I would find my answers.

    “Thanks to you, friend,” I said humbly, rising from my seat and wiping a hand across my bearded jaw, “remember the name of Paramonos Herekleios, son of Theron. If you travel back to your own home then you may well hear it on the lips of many.”

    We had known one another for hours at most, but the blue-veined hand of the older man grasped my own roughened palm before I could leave, his watering eyes looking up at me with such confidence that I almost flinched, “I am certain of it,” he prophesied, “I am certain.”
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    Chapter I, Part I: New Found Friends

    (4th Year of the 127th Olympiad ~ 269 BC)



    "They were said to be largely red-haired." The Thracians "were large, powerfully built men, ... and a skin white, delicate and cold; and they had a tendency to put on flesh. They are spoken of as straight-haired and with their hair dressed in a kind of top-knot. The chin-beard of the Thracian ... is characteristic of his race ... the cheeks are shaved, apart from short side-whiskers."


    - General physical description of the Thracian Peoples, C A H Vol VIII, p 544.




    Once I departed Mytilene, in the company of many like-minded Hellenes, Thrakians and those of other less known peoples, I could not help feeling as Alexandros may have when he left his beloved Makedon for the same lands that I would soon be marching through. Our ships captain had informed us that it would take nearly a month to reach Pontus and the polis of Trapezous, that we would be stopping at a number of coastal colonies founded by fleeing Greeks in a time long before the greatest war of all time, that between Athenai and Sparte, and that when we reached the final Milesian colony we would be required to pay a fee. It was something that very few of those aboard the vessel intended to do.

    “When we reach the shore is when we do it, I pay no man.”

    On the last few days of sailing, a group of rugged xenoi had gathered at the prow of the ship as it slid through the waves, cutting apart the surf as a blade cleaves through flesh, and muttered among themselves while casting nervous glances at any others.

    A pair of grey eyes, hard eyes, the eyes of one who had seen death and killing on the snow-scattered peaks of Thrakian mountains, and the slaughter of entire villages by one tribe against another, fell on me and would not cease their gaze. Having never backed down from conflict before, the agoge teaching me that to do so was to invite ridicule, punishment, and even death, I met his stare and would not even blink though my eyes began to itch. Eventually he turned back to his fellow conspirators, a broad-shouldered man with a tattooed face and arms, long red hair and an equally fiery beard giving him the aspect of all that we Hellenes feared and reviled about the world beyond our borders and our mountains.

    Here was a true barbaroi from the nightmares of the Greek people, and he was only feet away from me.

    As sure as his coarse origins were the actions that he and his companions were going to take, an action that, when the time came, I am not ashamed to say I took full advantage of.

    We had just reached Trapezous, and the ship moved sluggishly into the harbour. Once all was still once more and the ship was tied securely to the dock our dear captain received a lesson in two things. Firstly in trust, or not to trust your fellow to do the right thing, and secondly a short and sharp lesson in pain. By the end of the beating he received, his rowers attempting to interfere on the side of their employer but making little difference against a mass of tempered sell-spears, getting their turn to be pummelled into submission, the captain would never receive his promised payments or transport any xenoi across the waves for the rest of his days.

    In the midst of the violence and confusion I saw my chance and took it, slipping with all stealth over the side of the ship and into the streets of the Milesian colony. I did not notice the figure shadowing my steps until it was too late, one that had seen into my eyes and stalked me as a predator followed its prey, ignoring the hustle and bustle of the afternoon streets, where merchants sold their wares and hetairai invited keen young men to their chambers.

    The first I knew was when I was spun about by a forceful shove, a fist connecting immediately with my nose and spraying blood over a shrieking pornē. Though slightly dazed, my vision blurring and my feet unsteady, I had not passed through years of the Spartan upbringing to be beaten by a complete stranger in the middle of an eastern polis.

    Planting my feet hard onto the ground, I took up the fighting stance of a pankratiast and swivelled to face my opponent head on. When my eyes had cleared I could see that it was the Thrakian from the ship, a cut on his head showing that not all had gone as planned before he fled to dry land, his eyes moving from my open hands held up before me and my own face which showed nothing of my intentions. His next blow was quick, but I was quicker, stepping inside and slamming my elbow into the side of his head to watch his legs turn to water, my feet turning about and my last strike hitting the back of his head with all four knuckles.

    Looking down at the crumpled Thrakian, faces gawking at the scene, and others stepping back when I glared at them, I could not help but feel sorry for the man. Unlike myself he had been raised in a society without laws, without control, and his style of fighting represented perfectly the culture from which he came. All knew the tribes of Thrake to be unpredictable, disorganised, savage and wild. This man was no different.

    “You...fight well,” he said groggily, a hand raising itself to rub the back of his head, his voice rasping and his mouth clearly not used to forming the strange Hellenic words “like a cornered mountain lion.”

    I could not leave him there, stooping down to pull him back to his feet and supporting him with a shoulder, his legs still not completely solid beneath him.

    “You are strong,” I complimented, “but you lack...”

    His eyes were not very understanding, his mouth set in a grim slit, and I could tell that anything I said to him would need to be carefully measured. So I shrugged.

    “Never mind, where are you heading?”

    It was his turn to shrug, just a small one, a flicker of movement at the shoulders.

    “Do not know,” he said in the same gravelly tone, “Media? Hyarkania? Kilikia?”

    “Come with me,” I said with a smile, “come with me to Baktria, and I will teach you everything I know. You will not have to pay in anything but your blood and your obedience.”

    Those grey eyes narrowed into slits, and his mouth ground from side to side as he thought about my offer, his shaggy mane finally moving as he gave a sharp nod of his head and a sign of his agreement.

    By the time we stopped walking, or by the time my new found companion could walk by himself, we had reached the agora and found somewhere to cool our bodies and our minds beneath the shade of some trees.

    “Jason,” grunted the highlander as he jabbed a thumb at himself, “my name is Jason.”

    There was no way in Hades that it was his true name, but who was I to refute his claim or even care? I was sure it would be easier to pronounce than whatever garbled and gargling birth-name he had been given by his own people.

    I could see that he was waiting for my reply in kind, expectant and eager to know, and so I could not disappoint him.

    “My name is Xenophon,” laughed I, that very name meaning 'voice of a foreigner', but I was not surprised to see that the historical significance of my fraudulent name was lost on him, “yes...Xenophon.”

    He tried the name out, rolling it around his mouth as a man tastes a wine or that brown swill that barbarians drink, mirroring my smile and extending his arm with an open hand. It was a hand that I took readily, grasping his forearm in the 'warriors hold', and wondering even then what the Fates had in store for me.

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    Chapter I, Part II: Life In The Sky, Part I

    (4th Year of the 127th Olympiad ~ 269 BC)



    How many stades we travelled I cannot rightly say, crossing vast swathes of rugged terrain from one end of the lands under the dominion of the descendants of Séleukos to the other, constantly heading farther and farther into the expanses of a land little visited or even seen by those not of the native peoples.

    During this time I was forced to rely on and trust in my abilities to scavenge once more, my Thrakian companion helping as best he could in the endeavour, our stomachs constantly growling with hunger, gnawing at our innards, and forcing us once more to raid some outlying chicken coop or one of the free-wandering herds of sheep or leaner goats that the former subjects of the Medes seem to favour. These raids we conducted by night, keeping as silent as Thanatos on his blackened wings, padding forth from a sheltered position and taking what we could without alerting the shepherds or farmers.

    This was how my nights passed, more often than not, but my days were filled with bodily exertions as I attempted to show my willing ally the finer points of dispatching your adversary with or without the help of weapons. Many were the purple bruises and swelling of the face that we received, his wild and unpredictable style of combat a perfect match to my more fluid and measured form. After weeks of travelling, with little rest and even less food, passing through such regions as Kappadokia and Armenia to reach our end, our bodies and our minds became hardened to the elements and the perils of the Seleukid territories, and by the time we reached Hyarkania and its craggy heights each of us had regained muscles and strength that we thought lost before setting out on our journey together.

    When we reached Hyarkania we rested for a few weeks, communicating with the local population using gestures, much as we had been to one another, and receiving portions of what little they had quite willingly. An elderly village headman, apparently the distant relation of one of the Makedonian settlers taken into the Persian Empire by Megas Alexandros, acted for the length of our stay as an interpretor, speaking in broken Greek mingled with parts of the local tongue. It was a custom, so he said, that among the Hyarkanians it was considered extremely rude not to offer a guest the full acceptance of your home and food, but that it was just as likely that a man would be robbed and found dead on one of the many mountain trails.

    With a mixture of hand movements, expressions, and what little Greek I could make him understand, I asked about Baktriana and what we could expect on arriving there. Where they like the Hyarkanians, I asked. Did they speak a dialect of Greek? Who was their ruler, and would he accept foreign mercenaries into his service?

    What he did tell us was interesting, and I shall recount it here for you, reader.

    Theodotos, the satrap of Baktria, was a man to be feared. It was said that although only two-and-forty years of age he was nevertheless a ferocious warrior, one with strong ties to his army, and a way of speaking that could make you change your mind about something within moments of meeting him. Throughout the empire he was known as a just ruler, a loyal and sturdy man, a stark reverse of his eldest son Diodotos. This barely man-grown individual was known to be selfish and arrogant, as well as paranoid and ill-educated, but to be full of ambition, vigorous in getting what he wanted, and above all loyal to his father whom he worshipped above even the Gods themselves.

    It was unfortunate that his subordinate, a Theban named Patrokles, was seemingly a poisonous snake ready to strike at the neck of his master if it meant advancement for himself; this Patrokles was a vein and silver-tongued councilman, a man who would smile in public and curse a name in private, an agitator of the highest order who all the same was said to have the ear of the satrap and the scheming mind to use it to his advantage.

    The last man, at least the last of note, was one that had entered the satraps family by marriage and now sat at the side of Theodotos always, a pale-skinned Asiatic who promoted his own deeds while remaining sober, handing out his own wealth to the less fortunate than himself, and pouring advice into the ear of his father-in-law that could only benefit the satrapy as it was.

    Of the climate in Baktriana we were also informed, the elder revealing to us that the satrapy of Parthia had but recently asserted independence from their Seleukid masters. In doing so they had bought wrath down on themselves, Theodotos ignoring their pleas for military aid but sending them coin, and making excuses to the envoys of the Seleukid basileus. Sometimes it would be that he needed more time to gather his forces to him, other times that he had not enough coin yet 'harvested' from his population to enter into a full campaign at the side of his brother Hellenes. Deep down he wished for that same freedom, sending Patrokles and his eldest son to reclaim the rebellious settlement of Alexandreia-Kapisa, or Alexandria in the Caucasus, from a once loyal nobleman by the name of Yazdaban.

    This Yazdaban was young, the youngest of a large family his older brothers all slain in battle against the inhabitants of the lush eastern jungles and fertile valleys there. In spite of this, and his lack of forces with which to repel Diodotos, he made to withstand the siege of his mountain home and see off those he saw as interlopers in his peoples rightful land. With nearly thirty-thousand men, mostly native Medes, and phalangites composed of a mixture of origins, Diodotos took Patrokles into the eastern Caucasus Mountains and massacred the thousand or so men that attempted to resist. With this victory he reclaimed a crossroads into the lands of the Indus, a pass through which all trade from the Kophen valley and beyond must flow, as well as a town founded nearly sixty years earlier and still even inhabited by the offspring of Makedonian and Greek veterans. In a commanding position on a large hill, far above the fertile plain which helped its settlers to produce wheat, grapes and more, Kapisa was a smaller representation of the brotherhood which Alexandros had wanted to create in the form of his empire.

    “That is where we are going,” I said one night, with a grin, to Jason, “we shall travel to Kapisa.”

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    Chapter I, Part II: Life In The Sky, Part II

    (4th Year of the 127th Olympiad ~ 269 BC)





    Have you ever seen them, you who reads this now? Ever seen the towering heights of the great mountains at the edge of the world? Oh, but what a sight! No image I could conjure in your mind would allow me to tell you accurately what I saw on that day, as Jason and I stood open mouthed and shivering on an icy peak and surveyed the lands around and below us.

    “They say Prometheos is chained to one of these mountains,” I said as my teeth chattered, unable to even guess at which mountain that could possibly be, “and each day his liver is pecked out only to regrow the very same night, to be torn from him eternally.”

    Wisps of air showed where my own hot breath left my mouth, the Thrakian and I each wrapped in the thickest garments we had been able to buy - or steal – as we wandered ever closer to the pass in which Alexandria of the Caucasus sat nestled among the peaks. That half-colony half-settlement of the great man that was, according to all, as far away as any Hellene should want to be from his homeland. Even the army of Alexandros, a force of hardened men and grey-bearded veterans, had nearly bought his march and therefore his ambitions to an end when they saw the mountains and believed to a man that no mortal could cross them.

    “There...that is it, yes?”

    My eyes followed the pale and extended finger of my companion, squinting as a beam of pale sunlight blinded me momentarily, shapes of rooftops and figures that looked as nothing more than ants to us visible to me. No noise came to me, no scent, but I could see merchants with their caravans and farmers with their harvests making their way along the rough and rugged trails which acted as roads here. That was where we had to go, that is where we would go.

    “Follow me,” I grunted as I had already began to slip and slide in the settlements general direction, the lighter footsteps of the mountain-born barbarian barely noticeable behind me.



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    Alexandreia-Kapisa stretched out before us, rising ever higher as we neared its walls, the entirety many stades long and the mixture of peoples and languages a barrage against my ears and eyes. Ahead of us rode a half-naked Indian, his brown skin so different from our own, and his long hair tied into a top-knot on his head, varies paints daubed onto his skin and that of his stout mount. Behind, winding up the trail to the gates of the polis like some slithering snake, came a mass of peoples who were clearly the descendants of the Makedonian and Persian populations planted like so many crops into the area.

    Far from being an inhospitable region the city stood instead in a fertile plain where many things grew, my eyes taking it in as my mind still told me that I was not where I thought I was. That was at the edge of the world. Here, beyond even Baktria, was a land that was said to have rivers that flowed with honey, giant ants that mined gold, and where the people ate their own parents. All this I told to Jason as we trudged ever upwards, half walking and half climbing, an amused utterance being the only thing that passed his lips even after we entered the city.

    “Truly this is the end of civilisation,” I coughed, strange smells stinging my nostrils, and the press of bodies against me now that we moved through the city streets agitating me, “I do not like this, let us find somewhere to rest.”

    With the agreement of the Thrakian we forced a path through the milling crowds, our direction carrying us to where the agora would be in any sensibly built Greek settlement. Though mostly alien to me this was seemingly something which the place shared with my own homeland, and very soon we found a place to sit and simply watch the colourful and the strange go about their lives.

    After a few moments, my eyes closing almost by themselves, Jason gave me a nudge and nodded to someone sitting on the steps of what outwardly appeared to be a temple. It gained my interest when I saw the large amount of clearly armed men gathered about the entrance, some moving into and out of the inner temple, some just reclining against a marble statue of the patron deity of the temple – Ares.

    “That man,” hissed Jason, “that man watches us.”

    Trying to look as unconcerned as possible, I peered through the shifting bodies, and met a pair of icy-blue eyes staring right back. The man was tall, not too tall but large for a Greek or native, his shoulders broad and his torso rotund like the trunk of a tree. As for his face his jaw was square and hard, his expression set in a grim gaze and his mouth no more than a line across his face. Yet what I noticed was that he wore armour, an aspis at his side, a xiphos blade peeking from a baldric beneath his armpit and a pair of well-worn Boeotian boots on his feet. He was a fighter, there was no doubt about that, and perhaps he simply recognised fellow killers? If so, why was he now rising and coming toward us.

    “Good day,” he announced when he was within a spears length of us, his dialect matching his boots, the rough and rasping accent that of the flat Boeotian plains, “what would two men like yourself be doing here then?”

    It was lucky, I considered, that I had taken the liberty of having an Ephesian shield-painter erase the highly noticeable lambda from my aspis to replace it with the head of a snake-haired gorgon. Not only this, but my crimson cloak, a discernible symbol of Sparte even this far east, was now stowed away in a leather pack that adorned my torso.

    In my finest impression of the coarse Perioikoi idiom I replied, not wanting to be known for who or what I was, not wishing to bring shame on my people or my family if this stranger was to discover a Spartan sitting before him.

    “None of your business,” came my biting retort, my shoulders squaring themselves, “we simply seek employment in a land not our own.”

    At first I believed he would strike me, draw his blade and cut me down, but slowly a smile split his leathery features in two. This was followed by a loud bark of laughter, the Boeotian throwing back his head and letting his greying hair fall about his shoulders.

    “Are we not all?” He said eventually, small tears forming at the corners of his eyes, “I guess, by Ares blood-stained shaft, that it is your lucky day! It just so happens that I am the Xenagos for Prince Diodotos himself. Perhaps if you tell me your names I might be able to find a place for you in the ranks somewhere...perhaps.”

    A Xenagos could be anything from a simply mercenary captain to a recruiter of men, like a form of slave buyer and seller, but this kind traded in lives and pounds of expendable flesh, a parasite indeed. This man was certainly the latter, his eyes lighting up at the prospect of a few gold coins from his employer when he informed this Prince of his find. It now made sense to me that the temple of Ares was being used as the place where foreigners came to sign themselves into the service of Diodotos Baktrios, the boy of four-and-twenty that had retaken Kapisa from the rebellious strategos Yazdaban, absorbing it once more into the Baktrian sphere of influence.

    “Xenophon of Pellana,” I told him without so much as looking away, “Jason,” came the deep voice from beside me and another laugh from the Boeotian, “a Thrakian, ey? Not seen one of you lot since I was killing them in the hills back home. That would be, oh, seven years or so ago.”

    I could not tell if Jason knew or cared about what this man was saying, his face like a block of pure stone, but he had our names and as far as all three of us were concerned that was enough for a 'contract' of types. Papyri-work came later, signing of contracts proper and the like, but for now he knew our names and he knew our faces and we were therefore part of the army of Diodotos.

    Before he returned to his position on the temple steps, one carefully chosen so that he could see potential soldiers like ourselves, I asked him what the situation was in Baktria and much to my surprise he told me.

    “Diodotos, that's the older one and father of the Prince, is a satrap for the Seleukids and therefore regent of Baktria. The duty is his to protect the northern borders from nomadic savages, Skythians and the like, while keeping the people happy and stamping the name of our beloved and distant monarch onto the coins hereabouts. Course, because of that, he can pretty much do as he wants around here. That's why he sent his son here to take the pass, a move some say toward making himself basileus of a new kingdom.”

    A wink and a slap on the back was all I got, the Xenagos whistling out of tune as he started to move away, turning back only briefly to yell something at me.

    “There is a parade tomorrow, a parade for Diodotos, make sure you are around to see it.”

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    Thank you for the message you left me on my profile, Yes it was a good one btw. For some reason TWC wont let me post a reply on there so ill just do it here.
    Im thinking of picking my Spartan AAR back up and will begin a new one with Rs2.6 with the Roman empire, have a bit more conqureing to do first though.
    I judt now got finished with the 2nd rebellion before posting this.

    Ill start reading this AAR aswell.
    +rep(edit: gotta spread some out first, but ill be back.)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Evalation View Post
    Thank you for the message you left me on my profile, Yes it was a good one btw. For some reason TWC wont let me post a reply on there so ill just do it here.
    Im thinking of picking my Spartan AAR back up and will begin a new one with Rs2.6 with the Roman empire, have a bit more conqureing to do first though.
    I judt now got finished with the 2nd rebellion before posting this.

    Ill start reading this AAR aswell.
    +rep(edit: gotta spread some out first, but ill be back.)

    That's cool, I look most forward to seeing that. I'll give you some rep too...when it's posted!

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    There is nothing I can't say about this AAR. It has everything. While I used to wonder why people waited months for updates, this has revived my faith in TW writing. You also saved me from quitting EB. Take this rep good sir, and may your next update be on swift wings.
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    Chapter I, Part II: Life In The Sky, Part III

    (4th Year of the 127th Olympiad ~ 269 BC)





    Parades of any sort, except those in honour of the Gods, are rarities in Hellás, and to my eyes and ears what I was to see on the day that Diodotos the Younger left Alexandreia-Kapisa was something that I had never contemplated before. Spectacles of the sort that I was to witness were reserved in Greece for tyrants and foreign rulers who wished to impress, such as I imagine Pyrrhos had done with his elephants when facing the Latins for the first time. For myself, I had never actually seen an elephant and would not get to see one on that day either.

    It was the custom of princes, kings and satraps, so I was told, to hold such processions as shows of power and dominance over others. Such concepts were alien to me, coming from a land where frugality was encouraged, but that had nonetheless been infiltrated by wealth and power ever since we Spartans had accepted the help of the Great King against the Athenians, and I could not comprehend why these clearly powerful figures would wish to prove their authority over their subjects with such wasteful behaviour.

    Looking back, such views seem naïve now, knowing what I know of the Diadochi and their ways. At the time Jason and I stood among crowds of people lining the streets from the steps of the hastily constructed palace to the gates of the city and beyond, Diodotos the Elder, satrap of Baktria, ordering his son to return to Baktra and leave Patrokles Marakandaios as his own governor of this border outpost. Even I could see that this was political strategy, as I did not doubt Marakandaios could as well, for this Patrokles was known to be disloyal and bear no love for his satrap, as arrogant, venal and corrupt as the worst eastern noble though his roots were planted in the dry soil of Greece.

    The sun had risen to its highest peak when the progress of the procession began, musicians and dancers skipping ahead of the vanguard to liven the crowds and whip them into a frenzy of adoration for their satraps eldest son...as well as their conqueror and new master. These dancers, young girls and boys both, attracted a lot of attention from the various xenoi in the crowd and I heard calls in a hundred different dialects from Boeotia alone, mostly sexual offerings and the like. I had no doubt that the mercenaries were drunk, the strong wine produced in Baktria and the lands about known to have been given to the inhabitants by Dionysios himself on his journey west. Emotion stirred within me as I remembered the chorus' of Sparta, deep male voices rising to the heavens in unison and perfect harmony, boys and girls dancing together with the stamping of feet and the swaying of limbs. It was well known outside of Sparta that some of our dances, though performed without intimate intentions, are danced in a manner both arousing and violent and I could only sigh as these amateurs swept past and the first ranks of tramping Persians came into view.

    Before the death of Alexandros he had left behind many garrisons to see to it that his legacy, a coexistence of east and west together, was secure. Since then the mainly Greek settlers had risen up twice, both times to be put back down. Now I saw with my own eyes line after line of eastern youths and men in their prime walking past clothed in robes of dull grey and bearing both a bow and a spear, their beards and locks oiled and gleaming beneath the noonday sun in a way that made a Spartan proud, their eyes fixed ahead and mostly unblinking. Behind them came men that I believe my ancestors would have faced at the Hot Gates, Medes dressed in bright colours and flowing trousers or linen, turbans wrapped about their heads and curving bows carried in their hands. Seeing them go past, their shadows falling on me and Jason, I could feel something uneasy about being so close to them, something buried inside me but still present.

    Here was where Diodotos showed himself, surrounded on all sides by horsemen of his personal guard, the leaves of some foreign tree swaying back and forth as they trotted through the streets filled with those who not so long ago had seen their menfolk slain by these same riders in those same streets. Each of them looked magnificent, their eyes sharp and ever on the lookout for dangers to their charge, their horses strong and well-fed, and their unusual armour arousing my interest above all else. I am a Spartan, and like all of my kin I care little for decoration, for horses, but a fine suit of armour and a sturdy blade are to me things of beauty.

    What then can I say about Diodotos?

    The man who rode tall and proud on a Nisaean mare, waving slowly at all those around him, his thorax of linen clearly Greek and his bearded countenance as still and expressionless as a statue of bronze. He looked to be in the prime of his life, healthy and strong, a man who most saw as vigorous if selfish but who all saw as fair and just. Soon enough he was swept away and gone, my paymaster and the man I would follow from Kapisa that very afternoon, the tips of a thousand spears quivering like a forest as the foremost weapon of Alexandros and his conquests appeared from around a corner and paraded past in close order.

    “Natives,” half-yelled Jason at my side, “not a Greek among them.”

    Jason was right, the more I looked at them the more I realised this, their skin too darkened by the sun and their short-cut hair too black for any son of Hellás. While it was clear they had discipline, for without it they would not have been able to march so well at all, it was also equally clear from their corslets of quilted linen and their cheaply crafted helmets and shields that they were not related to the hardened force of Makedonians left behind nearly seventy years ago.

    “Here we are,” I replied a moment later, a smile on my face, “real Greeks.”

    Oh I do not doubt that there were any number of Thrakians, Keltoi or other foreigners in their ranks, but the phalanx that bought up the rear was certainly what you would call 'Greek'.

    Those that marched in that formation stood tall, their small aspides covered a dozen or more symbols, dozens of cities and homelands far away, their armour varying from man to man and their step perfect. Only then did I wonder if I too would be forced into their ranks, given a sarissa and told to fight as the Makedonians did?

    “Xenophon!” Barked a commanding voice at me, our Boeotian recruiter pushing through cheering masses to reach us. When he did, dressed as if going into battle, he slapped us both on the back and grinned a wide-mouthed grin, “get your things, we leave in a couple of hours.”

    “Where do we go?” Questioned Jason, his shoulders squaring up to those of the shorter but wider man.

    “None of your business, Thrakian. Now, do as I say and we'll get along fine. Two hours.”

    So began what I guess could be called the beginning of my contract in the service of Diodotos the Younger of Baktra, and where we were going I could only imagine.

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    I wonder what unit they will be in?
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    Chapter III, Part I: Hellene to Hellene

    (Spring, 1st Year of the 130th Olympiad ~ 260 BC)





    Nine years. For nine whole years, a long time in the life of mortals, I had toiled as a xenoi for the growing satrapy that was that of Baktriana. In those nine years I must have traversed the entire expanse of the nominally Seleukid province thrice over, and still I never grew bored or became angered by the same familiar sites or sounds, something which to most of my Lakedaimonian kin would have seen me shamed and likely exiled from the city, had it not already been so.

    These nine years of my life also allowed my mind to change toward the Asiatic, the Easterner, those people that we Hellenes defeated at the side of the boy king and where we were pressed into remaining to protect his rear from Persian shafts. Where once I had believed they were nothing like me, just soft and effeminate farmers who relished the easy way of life, I now looked at those who marched with me each day, especially the horsemen and curious rows of warriors that were both archers and spear-men. Before I came to Asia I knew that a Persian child was taught to fire a bow before being able to fully walk, but to actually see such a sight is really something to open your eyes wide. No doubt, should it come to pass that this record is revealed openly, I will be burnt alive by historians and philosophers of the future, but I say let them do their worst! I have seen what they will never see and Gods curse them if their words bear venom.

    Can you imagine, reader, how wealthy a man I was after nine years of payment from the Baktrian mints? I say 'mints' because, by my fifth year in the east, another mint had been built by Diodotos the Younger before he went even further east and has been pressing silver and gold into coins ever since. Let me tell you with what food and shelter Jason and I were given, a clutch of slaves to both of us, and the two drachma a day pay with a bonus for services, by the end of nine years of marching, exercising and doing little else, I had more wealth than a most of the Spartiates in my own polis. Nearly a mina a month, therefore nearly thirteen mina a year, which comes to nearly two talents of coin by the time of which I write. Two talents is some eight-thousand drachma, and when you've little else to spend that on except buying meat and engaging in relations with the local merchants, well, it soon adds up.

    What could have happened in nine years, I hear you say. What great deeds were accomplished and foes slain? I shall give you your answer.

    By myself and the lochos of thureophoroi into which I had been enlisted, led by our doughty Boeotian who I found to be called Agathokles, there were none. We ate, we drank, we used our slaves and we told tales of our homes, our lives before heading east, but except for alley murders and tavern brawls there was no fighting for us.

    At first we were under the employ of Diodotos the Younger, as I have said, but soon enough we were marching west again and into the camp of a half-Persian half-Greek named Philipos Zaraiaspaios. He was an arrogant man, or so I thought, though a sober man who never touched a drop of wine and a devout follower of Zeus Thunderer. None of the lads took to him at first, but as the years of inactivity drew on without the relief of war and the shedding of blood, we rallied to him and became like him morose both in expression and thought. Of course we remained confident, with so much happening in the favour of Baktria and Diodotos the Elder how could we not? We just happened to not be a part of it.

    The fortunes of the families of Baktrios and Marakandaios swelled as the years past; Patrokles Marakandaios achieved victories at the Olympic games, a marble statue raised to him in the agora of Alexandreia-Kapisa by the citizens there, his sons growing up in that same settlement and flourishing into manhood before taking steps to be away from their celebrated and wealthy yet seditious father.

    Soon enough the eldest of these was following his fathers closest advisor, an Athenian by the name of Atrosokes Nikátōr, onto the very heartland of India and all the way to the city of Takshashila. It was only in the winter of the fourth year of the one-hundred-and-twenty-ninth Olympiad, after nearly three years of besieging the religious centre and central settlement of the region, sending horsemen out to ravages the countryside and cut off both supplies and reinforcements, that Takshashila capitulated, most of its male population put into shackles of rope and chain and sent west into lands where they had never tread. It was an action, beside the slaughter of hundreds, that would haunt the dreams of the youthful Zoilos Marakandaios for the remainder of his life and which he would ever regret. The following year his younger brother Antialkidas would join them both in the community that was swiftly beginning to rebuild itself.

    So are the adventures of the Marakandaios line, as told to me by those that were there, but what of the royal family and their exploits? What of those that bore the name Baktrios?

    After marching from Alexandreia-Kapisa, Diodotos the Younger changed the direction of his march and headed north-east in pursuit of nomadic raiders and their home. They were Skythians, those that Hēródotos calls 'milk-drinkers', horsemen that were tied to no one place and which could ride as swiftly as the breeze on the plains. Their arrows unerring and their mounts restless. There among the mountainous territories, lands bordering those where no Greek had yet set foot, Younger Diodotos wrestled with the nomads and smote them into the ground. How did he do this? By using the wealth of Baktra to form a horde of his own, bound not by blood or by one faction or another, but like myself by the cold and gleaming site of coins and spoils. All manner of horsemen he had, barely a Greek among them, from the northern steppes, from Baktria, from the Gods knew where, even men with the eyes of cats. Driven back, but far from crushed, he now gathers further hippotoxatai to him and prepares to ride deep into the lands to the east where they say only witches and horses dwell.

    My own victories have only just begun, this very year, this very spring.

    It was a light day and Jason had just returned to my tent with a skin of strong wine, I have developed a taste for it uncut with water, such is the barbarian in me, when a rider galloped into the camp. He and his mount were both covered in sweat, the gelding clearly blown and in need of rest, the rider sliding from his saddle and ignoring those of us that gathered to watch him approach the temporary dwelling of our leader. No-one spoke, every activity ceasing as the minutes went by, murmurs and even a bellow coming from within the tent. I was busy swallowing wine when the silver-haired half-greek emerged from his tent, three-and-fifty years old by now, a slave strapping his armour around his body as he glared at us all.

    “It appears that, after nearly a decade of walking from one end of this satrapy to another, we now stand upon the very soil of a fledgling kingdom.”

    At this he raised his hand into the air, a single shimmering silver drachma pressed between thumb and forefinger, “behold your Basileus,” he announced and turned to show the coin this way and that.

    Letting the wine drop to my side, moving forward and squinting, along with many others, I could just see the head of the man that must be Diodotos the Elder. I had never seen this satrap, or King as he now was, but he had a strong face and curled hair tied back with a band around his head. On the reverse stood the naked form of Zeus Keraunios, of the Thunderbolt, holding aloft his chosen weapon of retribution and a laurel wreath to represent victory, and there it was, surrounding that image ΒΑΣΙΛΕΩΣ ΔΙΟΔΟΤΟΥ – of King Diodotos – imprinted into the coin as plain as day for all to see.

    “Where once our ruler bowed his head to the Seleukid King, now he is a King of his own. Where once our armies marched and conquered in his name, they now expand the borders for the good of Baktria and all those herein. Where once we were slaves, now we are free. On this day you will each receive three mines for your troubles.”

    Once the cheering had subsided, blades banged against shields and rattled on the rims, a smile appearing on his beaten features, Philipos loudened his voice once more and for the final time.

    “Make no mistake, we are now at war with the Seleukian menace; they are fierce, their numbers are vast, but the Pahlav to our west – our firm allies and strongest friends – and the satraps of the Pontic Poleis have taken up the call. Now we march south, for Alexandreia-in-Aria, and war with our fellow Hellenes. Take up your spears and make steady your shields. By noon we march.”



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    “Xenophon! Stop daydreaming and get in the line, Zeus' hairy scrotum, you are a sorry lot!”

    Agathokles, our Xenagos, disciplinarian, and the most colourful blasphemer I has ever had the pleasure of listening to, would accuse men of anything and curse at every opportunity. Our formation was near-perfect, myself as sharp and alert as ever, yet that was never any reason for the squat Boeotian to lapse into silence. Indeed, compared to our fellow thureophoroi, nearly one-thousand Hellenes, Makedonians and Thrakians armed and trained in a new way of fighting, we stood tall and proud and without fear in the face of our enemy.

    Ahead of us rose the palisade of wood that acted as the walls of Alexandreia-in-Aria, the former colony itself large enough to house thousands of citizens, but not strong enough for the weakened Seleukid garrison, composed mostly of spear-armed citizens itself, to defend it all. Within those walls they cowered and gathered together, rams already touching the walls and splintering holes large enough for our forces to filter through, prayers to the same Gods we praised on their lips and bodies shaking with fear. Women clutched children to their breast, the elderly wept bitter tears at their lack of youthful strength and vigour, and those that could fight for a land they saw as their home made themselves ready to sell their lives at the highest price.

    I hefted my thureos, lighter and taller than my own shield, wood and leather with a central metal spine, the same glaring face of the Gorgon painted onto the hide stretched across the face of it. For months Jason and I had been training in this style of fighting, more flexible and somehow more 'serious' than that of fighting side-by-side in a phalanx. In the phalanx there were rules, there were ways to incapacitate a man without killing him, but when you fought as a thureophoroi such thoughts of honour and mercy quickly dissipated as a morning mist. It saddened me that my inheritances, handed down through my family for generations, had to be left inside my tent with my skeuophoros - a tall and grumpy Kelt named Attikus - while I carried to battle the linen thorax, simple bronze helmet, a spear and a brace of heavy javelins. Not since my days in the syssitia, among my peers and my elders, had I felt so naked or vulnerable.

    “Listen up, you dogs. Our venerable leader in his infinite wisdom had decided to send in the pretty Persian boys first, saving the real men for the second line of attack. So, we let them pluck away at their strings and loose a few arrows, then we surge forward to mop of the survivors.”

    Each of us was lost in his own thoughts, such being the way before a battle, muscles tensed and blood beginning to course through limbs as they gripped spear and shield. Unlike those around me I had been hardened against such things from the time of my birth, bathed in wine and allowed to live; since the age of seven I had entered into a academy of warfare the likes of which this eastern world knew so very little, a pupil in a school of bloodshed and violence, of the weak against the strong, and of a thousand ways to kill a man quickly or slowly. No, my mind and body remained relaxed, my hands holding my equipment as a newcomer to war – or so it would seem to the uninitiated – each moment passing before me with the precise judgement of one who knew his occupation better than any other.

    With such eyes I watched as the 'Persians', an assortment of Skythians, Syrians, Baktrians, and more, paced forward and knocked arrows to their bow strings. Raising them to point nearly into the sky they loosed the shafts, a hiss puncturing the air as the white feathered missiles rose ever higher only to fall over the walls of the city and in amongst its defenders. How long this went on I am unsure, the cries of the dying and soon to be dead striking me as a feather against an elephant. Such things were far beyond me, as they were below me.

    It seemed an age before the Persians, brave men all, let their bows become silent once more and took up their eight-foot spears. With a roar and a cheer to Diodotos and Zeus-Ahura Mazda they went willingly through the breaches in the walls, their steps kicking up dirt from the dry earth of the ground, until they disappeared completely from view to be obscured by both things I have mentioned.

    Not long after, his head-wrapping askew and a broken shaft in his hand, a Persian made himself seen and waved for us to advance with the blessing of Philipos. On his order we did so, trumpets blaring and feet stamping, into the opening and into glory...



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    “There they are!” Bellowed a gaunt Syracusan, the first of nearly two-hundred half-trained citizens to appear around the corner of a street between the wooden walls of the city and the houses of the interior, “do not be afraid brothers and sisters, let the Gods give you strength!” Here was a man who put fire into the bellies of his fellow Arians, here was the man who would die first and by my hand.

    “Tighten the line lads, tighten the line and press forward.”

    Locking our shields together, just over one-hundred xenoi against an avalanche of poorly trained and poorly lead fools. Nonetheless, for all our training, they had the advantage of numbers and did not seem to be in any hurry to cease their charge into us. We met them in kind, pausing only one to loose a volley of javelins into the foremost of them, bodies dropping as if their life had suddenly been snuffed out and the wounded clogging the street with their pathetic forms. When the two lines met there was an almighty crash, those in our front line being pressed between those behind and the enemy before us, men thrown straight from their feet or impaled onto a weapon by the weight and momentum of their bodies alone.

    There he was, that Syracusan bastard, a wickedly sharp axe of a Skythian design in one hand and a small pelte in the other. He was a gangly one, his black hair lank and his eyes wide and full of the excitement a man feels when gripped by battle. Calmly I pulled back my spear, aiming the tip over the shoulder of the man to my front, and with a single grunt skewered this demagogue through his eye-socket. In one fluid motion I withdrew the eight-footer and sought another target, my half-closed eyes picking out a young man who opened his mouth to shout something, something that he never got past his teeth, the iron tip of my spear already bursting from the back of his throat to shower his fellow Seleukid settlers in gore.

    On my right I could see Jason, the Thrakian locked in the grips of a primal blood-lust, his shield thrust forward to hammer a man back before a single step forward and the raising of an arm allowed the man’s life to drain from his body and out onto the dirt of the street. The next never saw the highlander, this savage warrior splitting apart his features in a series of cuts. Weeping tears of blood, hands pressed to his face, the slashed Hellene fell to his knees and was trampled to death by those of his friends that sought to reach us and die in their turn.

    By the time a cheer rose from the agora of the settlement, voices proclaiming a victory for Baktria, my muscles were burning and even my breath came raggedly from my parched throat. Looking about, ignoring the sea of moving and motionless bodies all around us, I could see that no matter how bad a state I believed I was in that there were others who were far worse. Some simply stood and stared into the sky, others squatted with their backs to a wall, others yet sank straight into the waves of the corpse-ocean and looked as one of them, too tired to move or even to care.

    Spartan...”

    At first I thought I had heard no more than a voice in my head, until something touched my leg and I twisted around with my spear raised.

    “Agathokles?!”

    There, pallid and quite clearly dying, was our Boeotian. In my mind I remembered seeing him fall, but in the heat of battle thought nothing of it. Now he lay before me with his shield asunder, his spear shivered and a hole torn through his gut. How he stank, having loosened his bowels across the floor and mingled it with ill-scented urine, but I knelt beside him and cradled his balding head even so.

    “Thought you could lie to me, ey? Though I didn't know? Old Agathokles always knows!” A cough racked him and made him groan in pain, his eyes rolling back into his head, “I liked you most of all, Xenophon...tell me...tell me, what is your true name?”

    “Paramonos, son of Theron,” I admitted in a hushed tone, never taking my eyes from his face even as his shade left his body, “exile of Sparta and born to battle.”

    I do not know whether he heard me or not, but I would like to believe so.

    Now I must rest...yes, rest. There will be more tales and more battles, for those exiled from Alexandreia-in-Aria, some two-thousand rebels and plotters, I had no doubt that the pain and torture had just begun. We were at war with Arkhe Seleukia, and the this one settlement was only the origin of what would become a war that would engulf the east.

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    Wow. You add a lot of confusing elements. Now, I don't know whether Agathokles is a wise man or a senile god or something.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ownager View Post
    Wow. You add a lot of confusing elements. Now, I don't know whether Agathokles is a wise man or a senile god or something.
    Agathokles is dead. It shouldn't be confusing, just read it and imagine. It isn't complicated much Although I realise, without visual aids, how it might get a bit confusing. Just read it, check the map of the game, then piece it together. If needs be I can post some screenshots to help.

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    Default Re: [EB Baktrian AAR/Tale] In the Land of a Thousand Tongues [Updated: 13/01/2014]

    I probably should read this in detail. Again. And again. And again. Seriously, you are turning my favorite came into a book. I'll try not to destroy the Baktrians as Saka, though I can't promise thee anything. Just watch to the north, as the bane of the Greeks is coming. At the head of a host of men...........
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    Default Re: [EB Baktrian AAR/Tale] In the Land of a Thousand Tongues [Updated: 13/01/2014]

    Quote Originally Posted by Ownager View Post
    I probably should read this in detail. Again. And again. And again. Seriously, you are turning my favorite came into a book. I'll try not to destroy the Baktrians as Saka, though I can't promise thee anything. Just watch to the north, as the bane of the Greeks is coming. At the head of a host of men...........
    If you dislike that, should have picked a different AARtist to read! Never made any bones about my 'methods' - prose all the way - so choose wisely whether you wish to keep going. Does say AAR/Tale at the top. As for destroying the Baktrians, well, that's just one of a thousand realities.

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    Default Re: [EB Baktrian AAR/Tale] In the Land of a Thousand Tongues [Updated: 13/01/2014]

    Ohhhhhhhhhh. I just read the whole thing head to toe. I must look like a complete idiot. No, It's just that I didn't see that last paragraph. I barely skimmed through it, eager to pour in more praise. See, this is the first to live aar I ever read, and I didn't want it to fail. Obviously I didn't know your history, but I visited your Crannog. About the Saka crushing the Baktrians, it may be the most likely.....
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    Default Re: [EB Baktrian AAR/Tale] In the Land of a Thousand Tongues [Updated: 13/01/2014]

    Quote Originally Posted by Ownager View Post
    Ohhhhhhhhhh. I just read the whole thing head to toe. I must look like a complete idiot. No, It's just that I didn't see that last paragraph. I barely skimmed through it, eager to pour in more praise. See, this is the first to live aar I ever read, and I didn't want it to fail. Obviously I didn't know your history, but I visited your Crannog. About the Saka crushing the Baktrians, it may be the most likely.....
    It's cool man, I hope you enjoyed it as much as I enjoy writing for people.

    Then again, to go to your last point, the Saka did indeed overrun Baktria eventually soooo I guess it would be correct to the actual history.

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    Default Re: [EB Baktrian AAR/Tale] In the Land of a Thousand Tongues [Updated: 13/01/2014]

    I just can't stop blushing in embarrassment and slapping myself. A senile god? What? That was the second biggest mistake I made on this Forum.
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    Default Re: [EB Baktrian AAR/Tale] In the Land of a Thousand Tongues [Updated: 13/01/2014]

    Quote Originally Posted by Ownager View Post
    I just can't stop blushing in embarrassment and slapping myself. A senile god? What? That was the second biggest mistake I made on this Forum.

    I wouldn't slap yourself too hard, I have included Gods and deities in my stories before (as in actual personifications). It wasn't as bad a guess as you'd think really.

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    Default Re: [EB Baktrian AAR/Tale] In the Land of a Thousand Tongues [Updated: 13/01/2014]

    Slap yourself 'too hard'.. I have brought the box of shame. I hate myself. I shall forever be remembered as the fool of The AARs.
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