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    I am posting this to Royal Rumble.....wait, no. Royal...battle? No that's the wrong structure. I do know this one. I do. Royal Wedding!
    But seriously posting this to Royal Road

    PART ONE
    CHAPTER ONE
    The BEGINING
    I: Jane sat on the bed; a layer of blood soaked into the sheets and stained them red. It ran into her clothes and her hair and gathered in a pool around her apart from the few drops that got though the mattress and dripped onto the floor. The blood was caused by her but the reason behind it was her father, a small pudgy man who was scared of the world and made himself feel big by beating up his daughters and his wife. He did not tell anyone about this however because it was not exactly a thing you bragged about, but it still gave him the satisfaction.


    Jane shivered, she felt cold as the blood from her wrists ran out in a plentiful amount but it was not just the loss of blood that made her feel cold. An unnaturally cold bite was in the air, one that belonged to the heart of winter, not the eve of summer as it was. Jane thought it was an important point-if summer didn't come, the plants would die and the bees would not come and if there were no plants and then there would be less oxygen and more Carbon in the air, which would be bad for people as a whole. She laughed softly and then cringed in pain as her wrists protested against the movement by shooting fiery pain all across her body, it was amazing what things she thought of when lying half dead on her bed, but then she had had even more abstract thought patterns.


    Tears escaped her deep green eyes, not that she wanted them to; they simply appeared and ran down her face, like small, salty drops of water. Which, thinking about it for a second, was exactly what they were. Not that Jane could think properly right now, she didn't have enough blood to think properly and so things that were meant to be obvious where not really such. She wondered if this sort of thing would happen if she had a Familiar to protect her, but then, with the way Shadow could be, she doubted it.


    The reason she had cut her wrists - again, it was a regular thing for her- was a result of her father's actions and Jane knew he was going to punish her for trying to kill herself but she would cross that bridge when she came to it. She was too busy bleeding and worrying about the weather. It annoyed her that no matter how she cut her wrists or how much blood came out she never passed on, there was several times when she bled so much that a normal person would not have a drop left in their body but she still awoke the next day. She would still collapse from blood loss and still feel the great amount of pain that was associated with slashing any part of your body open with a sharp Implement, but never die, a fact that irked her a lot - what was the point of not dying if you were still going to collapse and shiver from the other side effects of slashing your wrists wide open and watching the red river run out onto whatever you happened to be around at the time?


    She never knew why she had such a thin frame either, it was not like she was underfed - her father tried but she always got plenty of food to eat, mainly though Eliot's adventures in the kitchen - but no matter how much she ate she always stayed thin and weak, it was like the world was taunting her with a combination of weakness and an inability to die and she did not like being taunted in the slightest, it was one of her peeves, along with her dad's continued existence and broccoli, whoever invented broccoli must have really hated everyone with a taste-bud. But then, Mr Broccoli Inventor might not have had taste buds.


    The things the mind thinks of when laid in a pool of blood and nearly in the grasp of unconsciousness are far beyond the control of the person whose mind it is - not that Jane had much control over her mind to begin with. She just had to go along with the ride and hope it was not too bad. This time she thought of her second father - not an official father but one who had adopted the mantle none the less - and his Familiar. She thought of Eliot and Silverfang’s tomfoolery. She thought of times when Eliot cooked a plethora of different foods. She thought of times when she watched a movie, using Silverfang or Eliot as a cushion to lay her head on. She also thought of times when her sisters, Beth and Nehvna, would come round and they would have a party. These were the happy days away from this drab and dreary household. It was better than thinking about where she was. She also remembered - too much lesser delight, not that she had the energy to complain about it right now, being so far into the grip of unconsciousness- days with her mother, they were nice but she had left Jane all alone with her father and for that Jane eternally disliked her mother. Or at least wished to, but she knew if her mother turned up tomorrow, she would throw her arms around her and leave with her.


    The blood had managed to get though the mattress in a much larger amount and was now pooling on the ground, despite her strange inability to die she was in no way immune to unconsciousness, something that happened to her in the middle of her memory of happy days.




    II: Jane woke the following day, and sat up, her body ached from last night, and her wrists still had ugly slashes on them, but they had stopped bleeding at least. Jane ran her fingers though her hair, matted and marred by blood, sweat and dirt. However, despite the blood she had leaked out earlier, her hair was not as stained as she thought it would be.
    "Heh, so I got blood-proof hair now" she muttered to herself, before stripping out of her blood stained clothes. "Good job there's no P.E today" She further commented. Jane then looked over at the wardrobe, and sighed. Another day of school was not necessarily a good thing. Sure it got her away from the house, but the kids at her school where s all the same. She did have a few friends there, but they were few and held no sway over the popular kids, and where basically friends to have friends rather than any meshing of personalities. Throughout the course of dressing, Jane wondered how the school day was going to turn out, until she came to the skirt. She always thought that the skirt was far too small to be practical, since it barely covered her ass, and any stray gust of wind made it reveal everything. But then that was probably why her dad had bought it, for that amusing thought. Never the less, it was the only skirt she had, and so she put it on, and finished with a set of socks, and her shoes. All the clothing she had was tatty and ragged, since her dad never replaced anything, even when it was falling apart, and there where holes in it. Jane tried not to think about it, since it was pointless to complain or moan about it. Jane then looped the tie around her muggy white shirt and wondered who thought it was a good idea to tie a noose around their neck for whatever reason.


    Lacking a better option, and without the ability to jump out of the window - something she had thought about, but they were stiff and she couldn't get them open however hard she tried - Jane headed down stairs, and immediately saw her father, Mark. He was all fat and no brain, but that wasn't why Jane hated him. He was dressed smart, as if he was going out to a high class work, or probably just to taunt Jane, which was his favourite pass time. Jane flicked her eyes to the clock, which read just past eight, plenty of time to get to school.
    "What are you doing in that getup?" Mark asked, his tone slurred as if he had been drinking already, which would not be surprising.
    "I am going to school, dad." She told him, politely and formal, but with a distinct monotone; something that always irritated Mark. Probably because it was how her mother talked to him
    "What'tha 'ell you going there for on a Sunday?" He asked, or rather demanded. Mark never asked anything of Jane.
    "It's Monday, dad" she replied, in the same tone, picking up her school bag, if the dilapidated mass of fabric she was using could be called that. When she turned back, however, Mark was right in front of her, which made her flinch and then he slapped her, a rough crack across her face.
    "Dun ya call me a liar, ya lil " He ordered, before grabbing her chin and dragging it to meet his eyes. "Na ya get 'ome time-like today. Got summat ta do" he slurred, the smell of his breath making Jane want throw up, or at least grimace, but that would just have gotten her into more trouble.


    "Yes, dad" she told him, and got slapped again, more roughly this time, the blow leaving a harsh red mark on her face.
    "An’ don ya be usin' that tone!" he growled. Jane lowered her head, keeping her eyes to the ground and kept silent, but the drunken Mark took offensive even to that.
    "An’ don ya be lookin' so bad!" He exclaimed, raising his hand to slap her, however, it never came, and the only sound that Jane heard was Mark's confused grunt, and then an acknowledging grunt, before waddling back off to the kitchen. Jane looked up, and met the soft smile of Shadow, Mark's Familiar. Somehow, he managed to make that smile look warm, and menacing at the same time. Jane would have preferred to be slapped by Mark all day, than be saved by Shadow. He was wearing his usual black over-coat, frayed at the edges, and looking much in the same condition as Jane's clothing. She wondered if it was Mark's idiocy, or constant inebriation that made Shadow appear, scruffy, but she was too scared to ask, the implication of Shadow being scruffy would not be well received.
    "I hate it when he does that to you. Nothing worse that bruised fruit" He muttered. The scar down one eye moved softly as he spoke, and Shadow absently raised a finger to scratch it, before moving to stroke Jane's slapped face.
    "Shadow, I...” she started, before the black-clad Familiar placed a finger on her lips.
    "Save your words, dear. They are not needed here. Now go to your place of learning, and return as Mark ordered, he is taking you to work again tonight" Shadow told Jane, his tone soft, and his words harsh. Jane knew exactly what he meant, and knew that it entitled, but somehow she just didn't care.
    "Ok. I’m going now" she muttered, in her standard tone. There was no reason to use anything else for Shadow.
    "Learn well, and save your energy, you know how he hates it when you drop to soon" Shadow told Jane, opening the door for her with that weird smile of his, and then shutting it behind her, not even mentioning her lack of words as she walked down the path to the gate.


    It took Jane a good half-hour to get to the school, mainly because of the cold - she always shuffled when it was cold - but also because she was pondering why she didn't see anyone else, walking towards the school. When she arrived, however, the question was answered by the large clock. It read '7:32am' or there about. Analogue hands where hard to read precisely. But it was clear the clocks at her house where set forward an hour, another one of Mark's schemes - Shadow was never so childish and surreptitious, when he did something, it was out in the open - just to get her out of the house. Or even just so she had an hour to wait at school for things to start. Seeing no reason in standing around in the cold, Jane headed inside, and was greeted with the noise of a Buffer, polishing the floors before the children came in, stomping their boots all over the floor. The Caretaker at the helm of the Buffer seemed as if Jane knew him, and not in a 'seen him around school' kind of way. But, Jane could not put a name to the face, before he turned around, letting out a soft sound of surprise.


    "Ahh, didn't expect to see anyone else here so soon. You really that eager?" he asked, switching off the Buffer to have a conversation.
    "No, my clocks where just set forward an hour, something else my dad thought would be funny, or some such. Never really been able to keep up with him." She replied, causing the man to lean on the buffer. His clothes looked rather expensive -if well worn - for a Caretaker, but she didn't bring it up.
    "Sounds like you and your dad don't get along" He commented, a fatherly tone, as if he had raised more than one child in his time. Jane laughed at his comment, and took a breath.
    "Well, put it this way. You don't randomly hand out super powers that let me pull peoples arms off, do you?" She asked. The man stroked his chin a few times in a classical thinking pose.
    "Hmm, I did. But then I got in trouble for it, and so I am currently suspended from randomly handing out super powers that let people pull off other peoples arms." He told Jane, which made her smile in amusement. "Hehay. A smile, we are getting somewhere" The Caretaker continued, fluidly moving from behind the Buffer and appearing in front of Jane. "So, this odd red mark that is rather out of place with the rest of your cold-flushed cheeks. Did your father think that would be funny?" He asked, his tone suddenly turning icy, and deadly serious. Jane knew there was no point trying to avoid the subject, and so she shook her head.


    "No, that was because I told him it was Monday, when he claimed it was Sunday. And then because I sound like my mother. My mum and being told he is wrong are two things that he really doesn't like" Jane told the Caretaker, with a sad, but relegated tone. The Caretaker, who had been listening intently, nodded.
    “Right. So, kind of guy you’d wish would fall down the stairs into a pool of acid, with acid-breathing piranhas in it?” he offered, to which Jane laughed, it was a very amusing idea.
    “Where are you going to find acid-breathing piranhas?” She asked.
    “Hmm, possibly Generia. They have some great tea, and some weird wildlife” He commented.
    “Right….So, what’s your name? I feel bad calling you ‘The Caretaker’ all the time.” Jane admitted.
    “Ohh, names. Right. I’m Kaban Saal, nice to meet ya” He said, holding out a hand, rather well-manicured, considering he was pushing a Buffer all day.
    “Lovely to meet you, Mr Saal. My name is Jane, Jane Everwood” She told Kaben, shaking his hand, before shivering. She hadn’t really noticed the temperature before, but now it was really getting to her. “Do they not switch on the heater or something?” She asked, rubbing her arms.
    “Na, they don’t do that till about eight or so. Saves money. If you want, I can show ya a place I like, when the school is being all cold and ” He told Jane, who contemplated it for a while. It couldn’t exactly be any worse than being in here, so she nodded, and followed Kaben to this ‘place’.


    She was led down a few hallways, and took a couple of turns to a part of the school she had never been to before. It was old, there wasn’t any classrooms around, and there was a basic feel of neglect. However, viewable though the window was a beautiful, luscious garden. It was amazing that the garden could florish in such cold, there where even a few tropical trees, where the country never got hot enough to grow. Jane stared at the garden in wonder, and Kaben picked up on this.
    "Lovely place, no?" He asked, grinning as they approched the door.
    "Yea, it is. How do you even get it like that?" she asked, expecting some sort of greenhouse idea.
    "Ahh, i just ask it nicely" he replied, to which Jane scoffed.
    "Yea, like that ever worked" she said skeptically.
    "Well, maybe they just didn't ask the right questions" He told her, before opening the door to the garden. It was very warm, warm enough to make Jane forget about the bitting cold of a few seconds ago. "Ok, i'm impressed" She exclaimed, sitting down on a chair, fashioned in the shape of a log stump. It had a high back, enough for Jane to lean back comfortably.
    "Yep, it's pretty cool. So, just chill here for a while, I gotta get back to work" He said before waving. "Don't be late for class" He coo'd on the way out.
    "Tsk, how could I be late? I got nearly an hour" she muttered, before leaning back. It was very relaxing, and didn't take long for Jane to fall asleep.


    Nearly an hour later, Jane was woken by a loud bell echoing though the school. It always rang ten minutes before the start of every class, to give students enough time to get where they where going, but it was still a shock.
    "Sleep?" she asked herself, still not quite beleving that she had pulled it off. Most nights took her hours to drift off, and other nights it never happened at all. So, to be taken so quickly, in such a short time, was a miricle. As the sound of the bell died away, Jane could hear...whispers around her. Mostly incoherent muttering, but there was one thing she heard, repeated thoughout the entire garden, by whatever it was that was talking. 'She's here'. Suddenly the garden felt a lot less relaxing and comfortable, taking on a more ominous aura to it, which made Jane very uneasy. Hastily wiping away the drool from her sleep, Jane made a quick departure from the garden, with the whispers following her down the hall, and until she got to the main part of the school. There, she saw people milling about, getting to their classes and groaning about the day ahead. Jane didn't recognize must of them, and some she wished she hadn't made eye-contact with, because that would lead to some problems later on in the day. However, one girl - rather down cast, with her eyes on the floor - did spark a slight smile in Jane, and so she walked over to the down-cast girl.
    "Hey Emily! Good to see you" She said, snaffling the girl in a hug before she could react. It let to a sharp 'eep' before Emily relaxed, and returned the hug.
    "O..ohh, h-hi Jane" Emily stammered, always being a shy, retiring sort of girl.
    "So, crappy weekend?" She asked, to which Emily nodded.
    "H-how many?" she asked, a question vague, but Jane got it right away.
    "Three" she replied, adding a sad atmosphere to the convosation, before grinning again. "But, can't let that bother us. We got class to get to. So, lets get to it" She exclaimed, Emily gave her a look - that look that wondered if the person was all there, or even there at all - but followed her down the hall way, talking about the girls of today, and how they look as if they put on make-up with a shovel, about guys who have more fingernails than brain-cells, and about general life. Eventually they got to the tutor room, and there they all had an annoying twenty minutes before school actually began to see who was in and who wasn't. Both Jane and Emily had the same opnion of it, and that opnion would have been used to allow the garden Jane was briefly in to grow more than it already had.


    Entering the room, Jane saw that her and Emily where the last ones in, the tutor was giving them the look of annoyance, since they where so late - not late exactly, but they where the last - but it was ignored. Jane found her place and Emily sat next to her, prompting the tutor to start blathering about stuff that was suposably important. However, ten minutes into this, when the tutor was realling off up-coming events that no one was going to go to, something clattered into the room. Of course, everyone leant over to see what it was, and where all blinded by the onsuing flash that emmitted from it. There where many cries of suprise, some of pain, and then sight began to clear again, but, there where two men, big and ugly looking in the room as well.
    "Glad I got your attention. Now, we are looking for someone. Someone special. Shouldn't be to hard to find her, but I do need your attention here" The man in the front said, before pulling a pistol - with silencer - from his jacket and killing the tutor, spilling her brains all over the wall. The ensuing pandamoniumdid not hider either man, as they grinned and headed though the sea of students, pushing over whoever got it there way, until they made it to Jane's seat. "Well hidden" he muttered, ignoring Jane's look of confusion - her and Emily didn't seem to be running around screaming like the others, just staring - before pointing the gun at Jane and pulling the trigger, but the gun never fired. "A jam, now?!" He asked generally, but clearly annoyed. The click seemed to bring Jane out of her haze, and so she flipped her desk in the man's direction, who made an inchoerent curse as the desk flew towards him. She then turned to Emily, so they could run together. Emily was the one person in this school Jane wanted to protect, and she would do anything for that oppertunity. However, behind her, there was the muffled sound of two silenced gunshots, and then Emily was covered in blood. Jane's first thought was that Emily had been shot, and this made her extremely angry, but her vision started to gray, and her legs felt so weak. Realization dawned on her, just as she fell foward, into Emily's lap, to die.



    II: "Going to sleep the day away, or something?" A voice asked, to which Jane slowly opened her eyes, and frowned. She was, in the reception, Silverfang's grinning face looking down at her. All she could do was stare, and mutter 'wha' a lot, so Silverfang took the initative.
    "Apparently you and a few of your classmates just suddenly collapsed in Tutor, so they brought you down here, and called the people listed to come get you - of which I am very happy it was me and not him." Silver explained, the last word dripping with venom. "I was at home when the call came in, Eliot had gone to do some Eliot stuff, so I had a free to come get you" he explained, but Jane simply shook her head softly some more.
    "But..no..Emily, she.." Jane said, trying to explain what she had just seen.
    "Ohh, Emily is fine, she wasn't one of the ones that took an unplanned nap" Silverfang joked, but Jane was still shaking her head.
    "I..died in her lap.." Jane uttered softly, plastering a confused, but rather worried look onto Silverfang's face.
    "Sound's like one 'ell of a vivid dream" a man said from behind them, as Jane looked around, she saw it was the Head Teacher, rather exotically named 'Laas Nebak'. A very friendly tone, but also a great disdain for the letter 'h'. She wondered how this man had ever gotten such a high position with his informal tone, but maybe he had a different tone for more important stuff. He was, amazingly, making a prestine suit, perfectly ironed, look scruffy. "But, don't worry, no matter what you saw there, it didn't 'appen" he explained, before looking to Silverfang. "So, your 'er guardian, right?" he asked, to which Silverfang nodded. Silverfang had a look on their face, like He knew him from somewhere, but couldn't quite put his finger on it. "Well, take 'er 'ome then. Don't do anything to rough for a while. Just, chill" He suggested.
    "Ok." Jane replied, still groggy but awake enough to stand. "Right, then lets get back to the house" she exclaimed, slurring a word or two but remaining steady. Silverfang stayed at her side to keep her stable. Jant still had a strange, confused look plastered on her face, but she managed to keep her thoughts on the road ahead, instead of on her very confused mind.


    It took them a lot less than she though to amble back to Eliot's place, but that was probably the cold giving them a great nudge. But then, the cold always gave people nudges when it came to getting somewhere. Once Silverfang had opened the door and escorted Jane to the couch, he then took off into the kitchen to get her a drink. Jane closed her eyes for a second as Silver potted around, she was so sure it had happened, unlike any other dream, it wasn't fading from memory. She could clearly see Emily's face, so terrofied.
    "Here you go" Silverfang announced, snapping Jane out of her not-quiter-asleep state. Jane smiled and took the drink, sipping it a few times before placing it on the nearby table.
    "Thanks by the way" she said to Silver with a shy smile.
    "Thanks for what?" He asked.
    "Bringing me here, being supportive. Helping with my confusion and -you haven't done this one yet, but I hope you will - not telling Eliot the details." She said, reeling off each reason for thanks.
    "Ohh, sure, espeically the last one. You can count on me" He told Jane, who smiled and moved in close, planting her lips on Silver's. He seemed a bit shocked at first, but then let himself relax. It was a warm kiss, different from anything she had ever had before. With a hint of dog breath. She could feel her heart pounding against her chest as they locked their lips together. This was one of the best feelings she had ever felt and knew it must be that strange emotion she never thought she would feel. Love.


    Howver, it was cut short by a key entering into a lock, which swiftly broke up the kiss.


    "Anyone home?" Eliot shouted, opening the door.
    "Yea I'm here and I got a carry-on as well" Silverfang told Eliot, who laughed a bit.
    "Aren't you meant to be at school?" Eliot asked Jane, keeping the door open for another girl to walk in.
    "Ohh, I got this bug thing along with several other people, and so they let me go" She explained, smiling at the new girl. "Morning Beth" she said, waving rather groggily at her.


    Eliot stood at an average height with an average build and average length hair. He was very average to look at but it was his heart that set him aside from everyone else, he never turned down anyone who needed help and never hesitated extend his hand to any who needed it. Beth, however, was physically Eliot's opposite; she stood a foot taller than most people in the street and had a wide chest - with equally big breasts - and broader shoulders than most girls had. She seemed to have the physique to handle herself in a fight, but Jane never found out if she had the mentality for a fight either.
    "Hello Beth, how are you?" Silver asked, also grinning like a goof. Beth made everyone grin like a good.
    "I've been good thanks, work has been rather nice lately as we are fully staffed" She told him, before walking over to were Jane sat and hugging her. As much as Jane tried to hide it Beth always knew how her baby sister was feeling without her ever saying a word and right now there was something seriously bothering her but she decided not to press the point just yet.
    "Where are Nehvna and Satyr?" Silverfang asked Beth as they followed Eliot into the kitchen as standby in case something he was cooking blew up, it was not easy cooking for seven people on your own especially when Eliot had a habit of experimenting with the cooking ingredients.


    "Nehvna is trying to convince her little angel to come outside when we left, she told us she would catch up but she hasn't yet. Satyr is somewhere else, probably reading a book or something" Beth told Silverfang as Eliot started telling them what he was going to cook and read out the ingredients needed for the dish, he always liked help in the kitchen.


    III: "Sorry I was a pain to everyone I really didn't mean to be" Avrion said with a sad face that looked like it was about to cry, but then every face Avrion pulled looked like it was going to cry. That and the fact that her frame was more akin to a stick than an actual person made Avrion look very weedy but that was not the case. For the most part, Nehvna would usually tell Avrion - in several different ways - to stop being so depressive and smile more. Then she would follow it with a compliment about how nice Avrion's smile was and how she would love to see it more often. However, this particular time, she was more interested in - and worried about - Jane's arms, who had gotten up from the couch and was milling around randomly. As luck would have it, Nevhna happened to glance over just as Jane was brushing some hair behind her ear, who had shown off the top part of her wrist, and looked like it carried on a lot longer than just her wrist.
    "What the bloody hell happened to your arms?!" Nehvna demanded, nearly screaming as she saw how far they went up her arms, to the elbow.


    "Oh nothing to worry about it" Jane said with a nervous smile, Nehvna was always kicking off about every little scrape or bruise so cuts running all the way up her arms would not put her in a good mood.
    "That is some cutting Jane, what do you mean there is nothing to worry about?!" she screeched again before grabbing Jane by the hand and dragging her upstairs.
    "Ow, that hurts you know" Jane said, being yanked upstairs.


    Once upstairs Nehvna sat Jane down on a stool - despite her protests - and simply stared wide-eyed at the cuts for a few seconds before muttering to herself and turning to a box labelled 'Jane's Box'. Something that Eliot had been keeping around since she often came - or was brought by Silver - sporting a myriad of wounds. She picked out some disinfectant and poured it onto a cotton bud, then began to dap at the cut, ignoring Jane's sharp intake of breath that signalled it was hurting. She dapped it all the way up her arm, and then the other arm, and showed no interest in the glares she was getting as the treatment hurt, a lot.


    "First I need to get you some clothes while you get a shower" She told Jane, who noticed her school outfit was now rather bloody from her wrists, and messed up with some sort of mud, from when she had leant to far on SIlver without him expecting it, and fallen over. "I have been a bit preoccupied to notice my clothing" she told Nehvna, who shook her head softly.
    "Into the shower with you, I'll pick something out" she told Jane, walking into the bathroom and fiddling with the shower before getting it to a good temperature. Emily stripped off to her nude, and pretended not to see Nehvna's look of horror as she saw all the caked blood on her back, but did move more quickly to get into the Shower.


    She let the water run on her body for a while before turning to the shampoo. She reached out for the bottle and squeezed some onto her hand before working it into her hair and washing it off, the soap came off a odd red with brown as the water cleaned off the tinges of blood that had soaked into her hair, as well as all the dirt that had come from months of not washing.
    It took her a while to actually get some semblance of cleanliness due to her lack of being able to have a shower at her own house; her father didn't like her having any sort of luxuries that might make her life in the slightest bit easier. She repeated the lathering a few more times, cleaning her back in the process, until the water returned to its natural colour, she then grabbed the conditioner from the shelf and began to rub it into her mass of now pink hair.
    When she was finished Jane turned the shower off and stepped out, rubbing herself dry with a towel before wrapping one round all the hair she could manage to fit in it. It was a good feeling to be clean and she did not get the feeling very often so every time she did she cherished it because it would be a long time before she got another chance.


    Jane then headed into the bedroom to check what Nehvna was pulling out of the wardrobe.
    "You are one serious mess" Nehvna said as she took off Jane's towel and began to blow dry her hair, Nehvna was not bothered in the slightest by the total lack of clothes that Jane was currently showing since she had been around her and other naked women a lot so she was comfortable with female nakedness. "Come here, your arms need bandaging" She told Jane, who sat down on a stool - the same stool she had sat down on before - and waited patiently while Nehvna rubbed a cream into both cuts and all the way up her arm before wrapping the entire length up in bandage once again. Nehvna brooked no arguement when it came to Jane's well-being, and so sometimes used a less than friendly tone on her, but Jane never really took offense to it. When it came to knowing Jane, everyone had a certain amount of skill in First - aid; it was required when you lived around a girl such as her.
    After that was done, Nehvna ran a comb though Jane's hair as she dried it, making sure that each part was properly dried and combed before moving onto the next part and working on that.


    "You could defiantly be a hair dresser or something to that extent you know" Jane told Nehvna who blushed at the complement.
    "I am not that good Jane" She told her, it was not true since Nehvna was amazing with all things hair, Jane's hair was originally brown but it was Nehvna who dyed the whole length of it pink.
    It was extremely hard work considering how much there was but Nehvna managed to do it perfectly.
    "You are better than good Nehvna, you are amazing" she said as Nehvna finished combing through Jane's hair and switched the blow dryer off, she then picked up two sets of clothes from the bed and held them up so that Jane could see them, Jane picked the plainer set of clothes - a simple t - shirt and jeans - and put them on. Nehvna preferred the brighter, flashier style of clothes and so she always wore a long dress that complimented her tall frame. After Jane had finished putting the new clothes on, being careful of her wrist and - with the help of Nehvna - gotten all her hair out of the back of her t - shirt she and Nehvna headed down the stairs, Jane's layered mass of hair swaying slightly as she walked.


    IV. Back at Jane's house, her father was very drunk, and doing his usual drunken blathering about what he was going to do when Jane came home from School. However, one of his many friends/henchmen had called him up to say he had seen Jane leaving the school early with someone else, and that he would have chased her down if he wasn't doing his job at the moment he saw her. Mark let out a few drunken mumblings, before cursing. He then turned to Shadow, and slurred drunkly.
    "Were'd ya go 'f you'd leave?" He asked, criptically, but Shadow got it.


    "Well you can always try the Library, she seems to frequent that place a lot. Failing that, I don't really know for certain where she could be, there are a lot of places around for her to be. She could even be hiding in one of the houses" He explained, sighing slightly as he spun such a tale that even someone that was not a complete idiot like Mark was might believe him. Mark grumbled for a bit about not having a definite address then headed downstairs to get his coat and shoes. His mind was filled will all the nasty things he would do when he finally got his ungrateful daughter back. He thought them just punishment for running away rather than spiteful - and pointless - violence. Even Shadow was getting bored of it and he loved to fight things. But what Mark did to Jane was not fighting and as such, he was glad that the time had finally come. It had taken a while, but it was here, at last and was well worth the wait.


    Shadow nodded as Mark headed out of the door and down the road, waking at a pace that was brisk but not hurried. Shadow then left though the back door and headed down the opposite road, he knew exactly where he was going and his pace was casual. He arrived when he wanted to arrive, even if he did not want to arrive at that time he changed the time he wanted to arrive to the time he had arrived. It was a principle thing and he wouldn't let anyone change it, not even Mark, whose hold over Shadow was a lot more tenuous than what he thought it was. Shadow couldn't help smiling as he walked down the road, he was about to do all the things he enjoyed, all in one day. It was a good day. But then, all days when he got to break into somewhere, beat people up, kidnap someone, break stuff and even bring much needed pain and subsequent death to the obnoxious, nasty dislikeable man he had been forced to spent a good deal of time with was a good day. Little could ruin this day. Except the weather, Shadow's smile disappeared in a grumble and he wished it would hurry up and warm up, all this cold was not something he liked, but then he cheered himself up again by realizing he didn't have to put up with it for much longer. He didn't have to put up with much more here for much longer. Shadow's smile returned as he continued down the street. Today was going to be the best of days.


    V. Jane sniffed the air as she walked down the stairs, Eliot had obviously gone to the kitchen and was adding the finishing touches to his cooking as it made the air smell rather nice, this does not mean the actual food was nice however, simply that it smelt good. "What you got cooking Eliot?" Nehvna asked as she walked into the Kitchen, leaving Jane to go to the front room where she quickly snuggled up against Silverfang, feeling very close to him now. She was still a bit embarrassed but tried not to make it show.
    "Food. It will be done soon" Eliot said, he never gave a definite answer of what he was cooking before it was done.
    "Well I hope you are not going to try that puke flavoured risotto again." Nehvna joked as she got out a collection of glasses and began filling them up with different drinks.
    "Don't worry about that, I am making meat this time" he said, throwing a few more herbs in to the pan.


    "Ahhhh, it has been a rough today" Jane said, not caring about proper speech as she snuggled into Silverfang who starred at her.
    "Rough today? I think you need speaking lessons" Silverfang joked, earning him a punch in the arm from Jane.
    "I am allowed to have crappy speaking." She told him as Eliot came into the room with a massive plate piled high with nose - caressing meat.
    "Grubs up" he said setting the large plate down and putting some smaller plates next to it.
    Everyone attacked the pile of meat and piled their plates high with it before sitting back, despite the large amount everyone had taken there was still a fair bit left. Jane bit into one of the chicken pieces and the flavour exploded in her mouth, the herbs went perfectly with the meat and made the whole thing beautiful.


    "This is great Eliot; you really can cook well sometimes can’t you?" Jane announced loudly, backed by agreements from everyone else.
    "Well I just got lucky that's all. I threw a load of leftover meat into a pot and chucked in a ton of herbs. The result was not too bad" he said with a big head, popping a piece of beef into his mouth before there was a knock at the door.
    "Who are we missing?" Eliot asked himself, heading to the door and opening it. As he opened it, however, he was greeted by the sight of a fist, which quickly connected with Eliot's face, knocking him back from the door and sprawling him out on the carpet. His tattered, pitch black overcoat swaying slightly in the breeze and his one eye - the other had a large scar over it and the eyelid was shut - scanned the room, taking in each person in it calmly. Shadow then shut the door as if he had just entered a room full of friends rather than a room full of people trying to cause him serious harm.


    "Hello" He said casually actually greeting the room like he wasn't about to fight half the room's inhabitants as Silverfang growled. He had gotten up from his seat and his fists where clenched, ready to fight. Nehvna, Jane and Beth had all gotten off the couch and backed against the wall, as if it would do anything when Shadow took out the Familiars and walked over as he obviously would.


    Silverfang had sprouted fur and his fingers grew into claws, his teeth grew longer and sharper, till they resembled a set of wolf teeth rather than human teeth. "Sit down, pup, I have just come for Jane, you don't need to get involved" He told Silver obviously highly confident of his skills and the inevitable victory he would have if Silver tried to fight him. However, a plate of meat flew at his face and showered the room with bits of food. The plate itself was a problem though, so he battered it away, shattering it into shards as an angry Silver punched Shadow in the kidney.


    As Shadow was recovering from the blow, an arrow penetrated Shadow's shoulder and forced him back, reeling in pain from the combine assault. Shadow let out a grunt of pain as Silverfang moved in to take advantage of the long - shafted distraction, dropping another powerful punch into the open side. However, Shadow was not going to let himself get beaten by some half - arsed wolf and a bow wielding whatever Avrion was. He blocked the incoming strike with his left hand - grimacing as the arrow in his shoulder painfully reminded him that it was still there. Then, with his right fist he sunk a vicious punch into Silverfang's gut, and the followed up with a cross to his jaw from the left hand. The arrow was really irritating him now, but from the way Silverfang collapsed onto the floor, it wouldn’t be a problem for much longer.


    He then turned to see who had shot an arrow at him as a second arrow - obviously waiting for a clear shot - grazed his cheek. Avrion hastily drew a third arrow but Shadow was no longer there to shoot when she had nocked the arrow. Avrion frowned for a second before Shadow - who had re - appeared behind her - punched her in the side, cracking her ribs. Avrion's face contorted in pain as she collapsed, her bow clattering to the ground, now useless.


    With both Familiars out of action Shadow sighed and gripped the arrow shaft, he then pulled it out with something that was a mix between a growl and a cry of pain as he realized the arrow was barbed and had caused more damage coming out than going in.
    "Dam, that is sore" he muttered casually, not hurrying since the other two that could do anything against him where on the floor in rather large amounts of pain. He rolled his shoulder a few times and wiped away the blood before stepping over Avrion's body and turning to look at the three girls. Nehvna was looking at Avrion with a look of concern and fear, but she couldn't move with Shadow in front of her. Beth looked distracted, cursing silently for some reason but Shadow didn't bother finding out what. She also appeared to have a small look of fear, as if unsure what Shadow was going to do now, but not nearly as much as Nehvna, who was on the verge of tears. Jane, in contrast to her two sisters, was glaring at Shadow determinedly, as if she could stop his advance with a glare.
    "Well, you're coming with me now Jane" Shadow said, equally as casual as he had been since entering the house and fighting the two Familiars.


    "Like hell I am" she growled, swinging a rather inexperienced punch at Shadow who, a lot more experienced that Jane, swatted the punch away and returned one of his own, punching her the same way he had punched Silver. The effects were also similar, as Jane creased up, gasping for air. Shadow did not deliver a second punch though, instead he picked Jane up and there her over his shoulder before heading for the door.
    "Good day" He said generally to the house hold as he reached the door, his tone was polite and had no trace of sarcasm in it. Shadow then opened the door and stepped through it; still remaining as casual as the moment he had walked in.
    Last edited by LillyanaKabal; May 14, 2018 at 04:06 AM.

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    Default Re: The Earth Daughter.

    Hello, LillyanaKabal.

    Let me be the first to welcome you!

    Overall, I believe you have quite a creative imagination, so you've certainly found the correct subforum on TWC for this.

    You are certainly on the right track for descriptive support for your dialogue, that part seems proper. One recommendation I would make for your dialogue would be to cap it off with a period, when it's completed. For example:

    Before:
    “You are one serious mess” Nehvna said as she took off Jane’s towel and began to blow dry her hair, Nehvna was not bothered in the slightest by the total lack of clothes that Jane was currently showing since she had been around her and other naked women a lot so she was comfortable with female nakedness.
    After:
    “You are one serious mess,” Nehvna said, as she removed Jane’s towel, and began to blow dry her hair. Nehvna was not bothered in the least bit, by Jane's nakedness, since she had been around her, and other naked women before and was comfortable with it.
    - Consider alternative ways to present visual support (as I often refer to it). There are often numerous ways to present the same idea, as in writing, immersing your readers into a scene is very important, in creative story-writing. You want them to be able to visualize a scene wholly. Above, I recommended some alternatives, though small changes, can definitely help present this more clearer.

    - Adding 'said' after each piece of dialogue is not prohibited, or bad grammar in anyway, but it can be aesthetically repetitive in use, however. I would recommend changing up the words now and again to spruce it up a little. Replacing said, with remarked, commented, or different verbs that correlate to the emotional nature of a scene, or to easily describe a speaker's moods and emotions. Barked, screamed, yelled, cursed, etc, would be good examples of this. This will most certainly add a special 'zing', that may not seem very important at the outset, but subconsciously, it may make your readers more inclined to recall such events, as opposed to 'he said, she said' all the time. I too struggle with this, quite often. It's just a small writer's bane that we must learn to cope with.

    - Be sure to add commas, in between dialogue, and periods when writing dialogue. Periods, and commas, are very important in the story. There are numerous sources online you can google, as where to use them, in dialogue, and prolonged sentences. I highly recommend checking some of these sources out. Here's a good one to get you started:

    The Do's and Don'ts of Dialogue
    http://edhelper.com/ReadingComprehension_33_85.html

    Full sentence:
    John took his dog for a walk to the store.

    Full sentence, with a comma:
    John took a walk to the store, with Bethany, to acquire a football magazine.

    Full sentence, with dialogue:
    "Hello, Bethany," said John, as he tightened his grip on his dog's leash.

    Full sentence, with divided dialogue:
    John tightened his grip on his dog's leash, "Enough, Fido," he yelled, struggling to control his dog. "Let's go, now."

    “That is some serious bandages Jane, what do you mean there is nothing to worry about?!” she screeched again before grabbing Jane by the hand and dragging her upstairs.
    “Ow, that hurts you know” Jane said, being yanked upstairs.
    - I would also recommend spacing out dialogue into new paragraphs. It is possible to give multiple dialogues in a same paragraph/sentence, but it is a pretty advanced form of writing, that not even I tend to mess with. Splitting dialogue into separate paragraphs will make it look more visually appealing, and clearer to your readers. One thing I have found while writing here, and elsewhere, is making visually appealing writing styles is always a huge bonus to catch a reader's attention! It works, and is another subconscious maneuver to haul in readers.

    If you alter constant dialogue between two speakers, I would recommend a new paragraph, even for one-word dialogue, to clean it up, and make it an easier read. By doing this, as well, you can continue dialogue, without actually having to describe whose talking, if it's back and forth between two people. This will make it a quicker read for your readers.

    Overall, you have done a great job for a first piece! Though, perhaps this is premature, and possibly ignorant, on my part, to having no knowledge of former pieces you submitted, which I may not have read, yet!

    I would recommend finding a good author you enjoy, and gander at how they present dialogue, and prolonged sentences and paragraphs. My personal favorite, is G.R.R.M., who wrote the A Song of Ice and Fire sage (recognized widely as 'Game of Thrones'). By finding a novel, you can get tips on grammatical fixes, how to present sentences (even from different perspectives), and ideas for how to present an idea better! Reading is certainly a key asset to obtain when becoming an author yourself, most great authors will attest to this!


    Great work, keep it up! +Rep.
    Last edited by Dance; April 21, 2013 at 09:10 PM.

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    Default Re: The Earth Daughter.

    I can tell you have done this thing a lot :p. This is the first part I have published, and you are the first person to ever give any feedback aside from 'its good' or the less common 'its nice, but dark'. I will have a look at your sources and make changes according to your ideas.

    To your suggestion finding an author, I like Robert Jordan, who has written the Wheel of Time series, the first large book I have read, beforehand most of my books where by Darren Shan and Derek Landy. Starting a whole paragraph every time someone speaks seems a bit excessive, a new line is fair enough-it allows you to see that someone else is speaking, rather than the same person- but a whole paragraph would make it a very disjointed block of lines in my opinion. I thank you for your feedback and shall apply the knowledge to the rest of my writing, then post the refined material.
    Last edited by LillyanaKabal; April 22, 2013 at 03:31 AM.

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    Default Re: The Earth Daughter.

    CHAPTER TWO: THE KIDNAPPING
    I. Jane thrashed, kicking and punching and screaming as Shadow carried her down the road, Shadow however, was rather bored at the fact that she was still resisting. After several minutes he decided to say something about it, not that what he said was very nice, but then he had just kidnapped her from the house and carried her over his shoulder like a package down the road - the few cars that passed ignored him, which he was grateful for - and that was not very nice, so he was not going to start being nice now.


    "Please stop them butterfly farts you call punches, it's getting slightly annoying now." He said, huffing at the effort it required to kidnap one girl. Not that it was a very tactful kidnapping, but then he was not a very tactful person. As he walked down the pavement - Jane did not give up her punches despite how ineffective they were - he saw someone, stood in the middle of the pavement, clearly waiting for Shadow. The most peculiar thing was that he had a sword in his hand, but from this distance he could not make much of the sword's details out. Nor anything about the person, which he did not really like the idea of. He huffed again, wondering who this person was. The man appeared serious however, so he dropped Jane - she let out a short scream before she hit the pavement and was knocked breathless - and dropped down next to her.


    "Don't move, I got to deal with this" he said, clipping on some pitch black handcuffs , the same the same colour as his coat, around her wrists. Jane didn't see where they had come from, but then he could have an entire utility vest under his coat for all she could see. Shadow then stood up and faced the man, who was closer now and walking towards him slowly. From this distance Shadow could make out the blade was sheathed, the man had not drawn it yet, which was odd. With a sigh this time rather than a huff, he drew his own sword, its blade so black it stole light from the surroundings and it made his coat seem a much lighter colour in comparison.


    The man had significant muscles and his stance showed that he was obviously experienced with the blade despite not drawing it yet, so Shadow adopted his Familiar Form, the tattered overcoat he wore grew darker, till it matched his sword in contrast and the frayed edges of it turned into a pristine, fully buttoned version of itself. His face changed as well, the area where his eye was scared and shut turned skeletal, which made his calm look all the more menacing.
    "Such hassle" he muttered to himself, striding towards the man who was completely unfazed by the sudden change and - from what he could see - was wearing a fox mask.






    Beth punched the floor in anger, Nehvna was trying to take care of Avrion and had diagnosed that Shadow had broken three ribs with his punch.
    "He didn't even switch, Two Familiar in their forms and he took them both out while still in his Human form." She growled, slapping Silverfang to get him to wake up, a method a lot less refined than what Nehvna would have done, but then Beth was a lot less refined than Nehvna when it came to medical stuff. Silverfang woke up with a groan and stood up, stumbling for the door.
    "Got….to save…Jane" he said, opening the door and stumbling out of it, despite Nehvna's protests - and Beth's, but less enthusiastically - which caused Beth to simply sigh and move on, slapping Eliot now rather than Silverfang.
    Silverfang stumbled down the road, clutching his side from the pain, his jaw also hurt, but he would have looked rather stupid clutching his jaw and Silver didn't want to look any more stupid. He already did that enough as it was. Silver stumbled down the road, holding onto a garden wall at one point and taking a breather for several seconds, he hadn't been in this much pain for a while, that Shadow really packed a punch, he saw now what Jane meant by he couldn't get past her father's Familiar.


    After several minutes of stumbling and leaning on wall to keep himself standing he reached Jane, who was lying in the middle of the road, he quickened his pace from amble to quick stumble, gritting his teeth at the increase in pain. He arrived and got down on his knees next to her. She was shivering from the cold and so he took off his jacket and wrapped around her, hoping to warm her up slightly. With that done, he scouted the surrounding area and found a few, rather interesting things. Half an immensely black blade - so black it made darkness seem light - was laying on the ground, scrap marks leading up to it showed that it had landed at an angle and at some speed as well. Oddly, there was no blood around, but then Jane's whole body shivered quite violently and Silverfang was beginning to feel the bite of the cold as well, so he put the questions to the back of his mind and picked Jane up, immediately putting him down again as his side roared in pain.


    He had ignored it before but it had now come back with a vengeance. He clutched it and cursed a few times, then looked down at Jane again. There were some shards scattered around Jane, black as the blade shard but in many, finer pieces. However, Jane herself was more important at the moment. She must have been frozen, the clothing she was wearing was thin enough, made for comfort not warmth and even with Silver's coat it was cold enough out to cut though that with little effort, making Silverfang worried about Jane's health.


    He growled in vexation and he was so fixated on Jane and her predicament that he did not notice the man with the Fox mask approach until the man spoke.
    "Do you need a hand?" He asked, causing Silverfang to jump, let out a strangled yelp of surprise and then take a sharp intake of breath as pain ran though his body again. The Fox - mask hid the man's features and his emotions, and but that didn't stop Silverfang glaring suspiciously. Masked people didn't simply appear next to a fur lined man standing in front of an unconscious girl and offer to help without so much as a question of the situation.
    Things like that just did not happen; the man's sudden arrival was too precise to be Happenstance, or even coincidence. It had to be planned. The man must have read Silverfang's wariness as he offered an explanation.


    "I came here at the request of his Sister, it was quite a rush, but I managed to get here on time, however, I could not see to the girl as I had to make sure Shadow was properly gone and not just hiding somewhere close by" He explained, his voice sounded odd, as if the mask had a voice - box in it that changed the tone of his voice. However odd that was and the phrase 'his sister' was also rather odd, but Silverfang was more interested with the fact that the fox - mask man had fought Shadow.
    "You fought Shadow? How, he is like, seriously strong" Silver said in disbelief, trying to save his own ego.


    "Yes, he is quite a monster in strength, but there is always a bigger fish" the Fox masked man told Silver and though the voice - box distorted it slightly, the tone sounded as casual as when Shadow had broken into the house. "Now, we should see to that side of yours" he said, pulling his scabbard out of its resting place in his belt. For some reason, Silverfang knew he wasn't going to try anything with the sword and so didn't move to stop him. The man then tapped the handle against Silver's side and he suddenly felt an indescribable feeling. After a few seconds he was left with a mild case of pins - and - needles but his side did not feel as if had Shadow caused a large amount of pain there barely half an hour previously, his jaw felt a lot better as well.
    "Err, thank…." Silver started, but the fox - masked man was no longer there; Silver frowned but then realized that Jane was shivering and so picked her up and headed back to the house at a much greater speed than he had headed out at.


    II: For the second time in so many hours Jane found herself resting in bed, the key difference this time was that everyone was in the room rather than just Silverfang and everyone looked worried. Also, Beth's beautiful, perfectly curvy - bodied Familiar Satyr was also there, looking on with a slightly worried look. Avrion looked as if she was a bit doped and so when she opened her eyes the first thing she asked was if Avrion was feeling alright.
    "I’m fine, Shadow broke a few ribs, but Satyr managed to fix me up." Avrion replied rather slowly, but her smile never faded. Jane nodded and then turned to Silverfang, who seemed the most relieved that she had woken up.
    "Thank you for finding me Silver" Jane said, blushing slightly as she looked at him. His fur had retracted and his face - and the rest of his body - was now smooth. "I'm sure your all curious as to what happened, so gather round and I will recite it the best I can" Jane said, everyone then moved around, sitting on the bed at different angles so they were in a semi - circle around Jane, who cleared her throat and began.
    "As Shadow was carrying me down the road, a guy stood in the way, he was an odd sort of guy, with a strange, fox mask on" She told them before Silverfang piped up.
    "I met him, he used a voice box to hide his real voice for some reason and his sword thing was really odd. He tapped my side with the handle and the pain just vanished, I tried to thank him but he had vanished as quickly as the pain did" Silverfang told everyone, before nodding towards Jane, signalling her to continue.


    "He was definitely an odd guy. He even made Shadow go into his Familiar form just by standing there with this sheathed sword. Anyway, Shadow dropped me from his shoulder - which really hurt by the way - and then clipped these things on my wrists and as soon as they locked, my arms went dead. All the feeling vanished in that moment and they flopped uselessly. I think I'll call them the Arm - Deadeners" Jane mused, going off on a tangent before Beth coughed, causing Jane to snap back, if slightly slowly.
    "What? Ohh yes, Shadow. Anyway, after those Arm-Deadeners got clipped on, Shadow moved towards the Fox - mask guy. I was interested in what was going to happen, so I tried to pull myself into a better position to see. However, it was awkward, and by the time I had, Shadow's sword had been severed and he had a narrow, but long - and clearly deep, from what I could see - opening caused by a sword on his coat. The odd thing was that despite the wound underneath the coat there was no blood and the fox guy's sword was still sheathed.


    Shadow then backed up and fell into the shadow he was casting on the ground - which was amazing by the way, I never knew he could do that - and as he did that the Arm - Deadeners crumbled into tiny shards, which I was grateful for. But, as I moved to get up, I suddenly felt a bit off balance. It was like getting out of a swimming pool after being in there for a good while.


    Then, a couple of seconds later I closed my eyes, to see if it would help abate the odd feeling, then I must have fallen unconscious because the next thing I remember was waking up on this bed." Jane finished. Beth - and pretty much anyone who wasn't Satyr - appeared rather enthralled by the story, as if they were getting into it.
    Satyr, however, was thinking - as usual, she was always the smartest person of the group and always the thinker - about the story.


    "To be able to stand toe to toe with Shadow you would need a Powerful Familiar at the very least, but from Jane's story the man didn't have a Familiar with him, just a sword that remained sheathed for the parts Jane saw. And the time - frame for drawing his sword, severing Shadow's and delivering a blow to his chest, then replacing the sword is not big, only a few seconds at most. Combine that with what seems like a blood - drinking sword and I can think of only one person that would do that. Sean Woodhouse." Satyr said, speaking her thoughts to the group.


    "But why the hell would he be around here? Isn't he busy being rich and famous?" Silverfang asked. The town they were in was far away from any kind of famous place so it was not like he was simply going slightly out of his way.
    "Why don't we ask him?" Jane said to everyone, smiling at them as if she had not just woken up from being dragged down the road by a far - to - calm familiar for what he was doing then saved by one of the most famous people on the planet, a man with a name no one would not immediately recognize. However, with the looks she was getting Jane quickly continued. "I mean, he has to still be in the area right? So we could contact him" She tried to explain, but Satyr shook her head.


    "No, there are only a few Teleporting tricks, known to the stronger, older Familiars but most of them have quite a long range. Shadow's shadow trick is known as one of the shorter ones and even that has a maximum range of 40 miles" Satyr told Jane. Silverfang snapped his fingers as if he had just remembered something.
    "The Fox - mask man said that he had come at the request of 'his Sister' not 'my Sister' which means it was someone else's Sister that had called him here, to this exactly spot, at this exact time to rescue Jane." Silverfang told everyone.
    "Going off the assumption that the man is Sean Woodhouse - "Satyr started, but Silverfang stopped her.


    "No, I don't think it is Sean. For one, he has a reputation for completely lacking any amount of seriousness despite the situation and an obsession with making as many people know that it is him doing the thing in question and not someone else. I don't think Sean would have worn a mask, or kept such a level head. You know, I would not be surprised if the fox - masked man was Balance, he had the build for it and from what I have heard he had the skill as well" Silverfang told Satyr, putting his point across. Satyr looked vexed at being interrupted but took a breath to start again; however before she even got anything out Eliot spoke out.
    "Still does not explain why he is here, he is meant to be somewhere else, doing famous things" this caused Satyr to look really rather annoyed. Jane picked up on this mood and moved to get out of the bed.


    "Well while you are doing the smart stuff I am hungry" She announced. Silverfang, also picking up on Satyr's vexation and decided that - being one of the reasons - , he would remove himself as well.
    "There is some meat left in the kitchen" he said, helping Jane out of the bed and following her downstairs.
    When they reached the kitchen Silverfang reached out to the microwave and opened it, a plate of meat was sat in the middle and so he took it out and handing it to Jane, who pouted.


    "I can take food out of the microwave you know" she snapped, putting her fists on her hips. Silverfang hated it when girls did that, it made them seem scary.
    "I was just trying to help" he told Jane with a half cheeky, half loving smile, holding the plate of meat out for her. Jane laughed and took the plate.
    "I know, but I'm stressed, with good reason. Sorry I snapped." She apologized.
    "Don't worry about it, if I was in your shoes I'd be stressed as well. And my snapping hurts a lot more, sharp teeth and all" Silver said, gnashing his teeth softly and doing what he did best; making a joke to ease the tension that was building up. His ploy worked and he was rewarded by the soft giggle from Jane.


    She and Silverfang stood in the kitchen for the next minute, eat meat and complaining about how it was going to give them bad wind the next day. Then Beth and Satyr came down the stairs and headed straight for the coat rack, pulling on their shoes and coats rather quickly and heading for the door.
    "We are going out, we won't be long, just need to pick something up" She said before exiting the house without another word.
    "Err, I feel like I missed something" Jane said, Silverfang - who had taken a piece of meat from Jane's plate and was now chewing it - nodded in agreement. Fortunately, Eliot and the two remaining girls came down the stairs at a slower rate. They saw the bemused looks on Silverfang and Jane's faces and decided to explain.


    "Satyr and Beth started to talk about a book when you left; we quickly got left begin in the dust. I have no idea where they are going, only that they won't be long" Eliot explained as best he could, not that it was much of an explanation. But then, not many people could explain the winding, Labyrinth - like train of thought that Beth and Satyr followed nearly every day. Jane simply shrugged and returned to get plate of meat.
    "Well, if they are not going to be long then maybe we should do what we were planning on doing in the first place." Silverfang suggested, but Avrion yawned, quickly followed by Nehvna, then everyone else caught up in the infectious wave that yawning always brought. It was odd how one yawn could make a whole room yawn, but then - Jane thought abstractly - it was like a smile, if you smiled then chances where someone else would start smiling and that would make another person smile. She liked to share her smile with as many people as she could when her father let her out, which was not often and nearly all the situations that he dragged her to where no places for smiles, most where a place for the complete opposite of smiling, which crashed Jane's happy train of thought. Avrion brought Jane back to reality by speaking to the group, which was a nice distraction.
    "I'm tired, I'm going to catch some Zs while they are out, I'll come back down later" She told everyone, Nehvna nodded and sleepily followed her Familiar up the stairs.
    "Fair enough, just don't break anything" Eliot told them with a playful smile.
    Last edited by LillyanaKabal; June 14, 2014 at 10:19 AM.

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    Default Re: The Earth Daughter.

    CHAPTER THREE: THE VISIT
    I: Satyr looked at Beth as they walked down the road. She couldn't believe that, after all this waiting, it was finally time. The shackles would be thrown off and they would ascend, away from here, something Satyr had been waiting to do for quite a while now.
    "It is glorious that it is finally time, don't you think?" Satyr asked Beth, who shook her head.
    "It is simply the first step on a long road, Satyr; plenty of work is required before we can bear fruit" Beth replied, Satyr sighed and nodded.
    "I know, I know. But still, we are setting out on the long road after such a time of waiting, there is just something about that start that...Just...Mmm" Satyr ended with a noise, rather than a word since she didn't have a word for it.


    "That is true dear and I am rather ecstatic, but it is not like anything we have faced before. Three walls - that we know of and there might be more. The first has already been broken, and the plan for the second has worked out but the third…" Beth trailed off, staring at the sky. After a while she shook her head. "But, we are at the start and that is something. Better than what was before" She finished. Satyr nodded in agreement. The two girls then began to speak about more mundane things, like the weather and how much they liked Eliot's newest Kitchen experiment, until they arrived at a rather large house. It stood out from all the others with its ornately carved statues of a woman wearing a dress made from leaves and holding a globe that, on further inspection, looked very similar to the Earth. The way the statue's eyes where carved made it seem as if the holder owned, or had created the orb.


    Satyr had seen it a few times and knew what it represented, but little other people did. The rest of the house was made from equally large - both in length and width - quarry stones that looked distinctively fresher than the rest of the street, which made it stand out from the rest of the red-brick houses even more. There was a feeling that this house had not existed for very long, or at least not as long as the other houses on the street.
    "Never could blend in, could he?" Satyr asked rhetorically as they opened the gate and walked up to the door, pushing it open without so much as a knock.


    The Inside of the house was devoid of practically everything, there were no tables, or clocks, or chandeliers that someone would have expected, seeing the outside. There was not even any boxes that would explain the bareness, it was simply an empty hallway, stretching on until it reached a set of stairs, the stairs then went up to another bare hallway, this one dotted with several, unpainted doors. Beth had seen it before, it was obvious considering the owners favourite pass-time. As she walked through the hallway, her footfalls light and hard to hear, she heard a thudding sound, as if something very heavy was moving on the second floor. She smiled and looked up as a bare-chested mountain of a man - easily thirty stone and topping six and a half foot - his muscles where so large that his bare-chested appearance was justified, since there was no shirt or jacket he could wear without his monstrous girth ripping it in half.


    His muscles where mainly around the top half of his body, but his leg muscles where well developed as well, if not to a clothes-ripping extent. To most people, the man would be terrifying to an extent that they would probably run and hide from him. Beth, however, had grown used to the bulk of the man and was not bothered by it, much. There was still a wariness of him, but it was suppressed.
    "Hello Glee, is Niall in?" She asked, Satyr stayed close to Beth's side, she was considerably more wary of Glee, as she was to everyone or everything that could crush her skull with a single hand and little effort.


    "It's Mr. Glee, not just Glee. And yes, he is in, what do you want with him?" Mr. Glee asked.
    "I want a book" She replied, obviously not planning on giving much - if any - more than that.
    "Fine, follow me" Mr. Glee said with a sigh. Beth and Satyr headed up the stairs and followed Mr. Glee along the hallway and into a room, as bare as the rest. Niall was sat on the floor with two women who were standing, the man was tall, six foot easily and has well-toned muscles, or though they were nowhere near the size of Mr. Glee's. Beth explained it to Satyr the first time she asked as concentrated strength, the muscles could exert as much strength as Mr. Glee's, but where a lot smaller. Niall wore a t-shirt and had hair that reached the middle of his back which was the opposite of Mr. Glee's bald, bare-chested look.


    "Beth, what brings you here?" Niall asked, upon seeing Beth and Satyr arrive.
    "I need a book. A very specific book. It is time" She told him and Niall needed no more. Mr. Glee looked more alert than he had before, and even cracked a grin.
    "Finally. Been a while, eh?" Niall asked, getting up and heading for the door, followed closely by Beth and Satyr, Mr. Glee to bring up the rear.


    Niall led them to a room that was miles, upon miles of bookshelves. How this was possible would have boggled the brain of a normal person, but Beth took it as par of the course. There where lights hanging overhead, as if it was a warehouse with full bookshelves rather than a room in someone's house. Niall took confident strides though the stacks, looking left and right for a moment before striding onwards.
    "So, how do you know you way around here? I never really asked before" Beth asked, always one to aquire new knowledge.
    "Well, you just have to stroll with purpose, and the shelf you want will present itself. Aha" Niall finished, walking over to one of the shelves and pulling a book from it.
    "There you go, one book." He said, beaming widely. "I shall be along later. Good luck with your endevours" He finished, to which Beth and Satyr nodded and thanked Niall, turning around to see the door to exit the room a few feet away.
    "Always love how that works" Satyr commented, before following Beth out of the giant libarary.


    II. When the girls got back to the house Eliot was playing cushion to Avrion and Nehvna, it was so cute to see him being a cushion but it was ruined a second later by Beth and Satyr barging though the door, jolting the two girls awake.
    "I'm up" Nehvna squeaked as she sat up, Beth and Satyr went upstairs without saying anything to anyone and ignored all the curious looks. However, everybody followed the two up the stairs after only a few seconds of debating. But when they arrived at the bedroom that had been used to keep Jane's unconscious form - twice - in there was nothing understandable to be nosey at when, Satyr was sat reading the book and Beth was looking at her, the book had a lot of names followed by strange symbols that Jane had never seen, Satyr did not seem to pay them any mind so Jane simply ignored them, passing them off as unimportant.


    Satyr flicked though the book for a few minutes before pointing to one of the names, Jane did not see it before the book was passed to Beth.
    It was at this point that Jane noticed a paint pot next to Beth, a few seconds where spent wondering what she was going to do with it or even where she got it from before she took the brush out and began painting the symbols Jane saw on the book. When Beth had finished painting the last symbol they glowed with a bright light before a holographic woman appeared, but it was a fuzzy quality and Jane couldn't make out any details other than she was a woman.


    Satyr however didn't seem to need any detail and said something in a rather confusing tongue that Jane had never heard of. The woman nodded and the symbols stopped glowing, then the woman disappeared.
    "You see? Nothing to worry about" Satyr told Beth, Beth looked rather on edge about the whole thing but relaxed when Satyr comforted her.
    "I was worried that we would get the wrong one" she told Satyr before standing up and seeing the confused looks on everyone's faces.
    "We made a phone call" she said simply before heading past them. Jane and Silverfang looked at Eliot who simply shrugged.
    "You expect me to know what she means?" he asked so they all followed Beth and Satyr down the stairs like a game of follow-the-leader. When Jane asked Beth what she meant Beth stared looking rather annoyed.
    "You use phones to call people. That is why it is called a phone call" She said, annoying Jane.
    "Fine, keep your secrets" Jane said in a huff, returning to Silverfang who had sat on the couch.
    "Sorry about your party idea" she said, snuggling into Silverfang.
    "Don't worry about it, today has been much more exciting" He told Jane, relaxing so that he would be a more comfortable pillow.
    "Yea and much more painful" she said, looking at the bruise on his chin from her vantage point.


    While Jane and Silverfang where snuggling Eliot had not given up on finding out what Satyr and Beth had been doing.
    "Tell me who you were calling" He said, giving up on asking for the content.
    "Rose, I assumed that since she was the one in use then she would be the one handing things around here" Satyr told Eliot, ignoring his gormless look.
    "Rose? You mean Scarlet Rose? How can you just call her?" Eliot asked, throwing several questions at Satyr who was beginning to look annoyed.
    "Yes I mean Scarlet Rose and I can just call her because I got the phone book from Niall and that allows me to call any Familiar registered." Satyr said to him, shedding light on what she had just done.


    "So you are saying that with that book you can call any Familiar in the world?" He asked to which Satyr simply shook her head.
    "No, only the ones registered, Familiars are registered by default but people can opt to unregister them so people can't contact them, don't ask why though." She said before heading into the kitchen, an obvious sign that the conversation was over.
    "This day keeps getting weirder." Eliot said, scratching his head.
    "Give it time, the best is yet to come" Beth told him before following Satyr and leaving Eliot with a befuddled look.


    After a minute Eliot gave up and walked back into the front room, flopping down on one of the chairs. "What is with Satyr being so cryptic?" he asked, rhetorically but Jane answered all the same. "Because she has a secret and you know how she is with secrets". Eliot was not expecting an answer so it took him a second to realize that Jane was talking to her.
    "But she has never been so…secretive" Eliot told her, sighing heavily, Jane - for her part - simply shrugged.


    "Satyr and Beth, are extremely greedy for knowledge, they are the kind of people that would destroy half the world if they thought it would give them the secrets of the other half" Silverfang told Eliot like he did not already know.
    "I know but that does not mean I am not annoyed about it" Eliot replied.
    Jane looked at Eliot and Silverfang before smiling, she had no plans to return after what her father did to her. "So do you want to retry your night or do you think someone is going to interrupt it again?" she asked, the cheeky grin giving more weight to her words
    "Well since we are expecting Satyr's guest whenever I guess we should just wait and not try anything that is going to get interrupted in an hour or so" Eliot explained so Jane simply shrugged and snuggled into Silverfang again.


    III-2 Shadow's face screwed up as his last wound was stitched up.
    "I can't believe you got beat" the man who was stitching him up said with a slight amused tone. "Watch it Doc or you will be your next patient" Shadow growled but this did not stop the man from chuckling slightly.
    "I believe we have not given this man the attention he deserves" the doctor said, cleaning the blood off his hands and leaving for the door. He opened it and turned back to Shadow.
    "I think you are going to need a better sword, or a new partner, before you go up against him again" the doctor told Shadow who smiled an evil smile.
    "I was thinking both actually and it has already been taken care of" his voice had taken on a dark undertone to it.


    "So I am to expect an addition soon then?" The doctor asked to which Shadow nodded.
    "Always good" the doctor said, leaving the room.
    Shadow stood up and rubbed the large shoulder stitching before picking up his tattered coat. "Working for a runaway to chase down a legend. How far can I fall?" he asked himself before leaving the room. This place was a nice haven for the unwanted people of the universe, the only question ever asked around here was 'how much will it cost' and even that one was not really asked that much, questions around here tended to get you on one of the beds, or in the morgue. Shadow liked that about here. As he walked down the hallway he saw the man he was going to be working with now, he had that same feel, that same aura around him as the man that had cut his chest open and that was one of the reasons Shadow was working with him, but not the only reason. He wanted revenge and power and the opportunity to kill people. With this man, he would have all that.
    "Any leads?" Shadow asked, putting his coat on.
    "One...you shall investigate" The man - Shadow was not sure it was really a man, just had the look of a man - growled. Shadow nodded and headed towards the main entrance, he wasn't treated with the respect he wanted, but it was better than being with Mark. Here he wasn't underestimated and here he had freedom, to an extent.

    CHAPTER FOUR: THE ARRIVAL



    I. Jane woke up. She didn't know that she had fallen asleep but she must have done, you rarely wake up without falling to sleep. Upon waking up she saw a new person in the front room, the hole in the wall had been fixed over the course of her sleep which made her ask how long she had been snoozing.
    "About an hour" Silverfang informed her before catching the questioning look. "That's Scarlet, she came down about ten minutes ago and has been talking quietly with Beth and Satyr for the past nine and a half" he told her, glaring at them, it was so bumming to be left out of a secret conversation. Jane looked at the new girl for a few seconds before she remembered something.
    "Where's Nehvna and Avrion?" she asked Silverfang scratched his head.
    "They are asleep somewhere, they told Eliot they were tired and so probably crashed on one of the beds, not sure which one though" Silverfang told Jane. She was satisfied with this answer as she laid back down on Silver's lap.
    "So this Rose? She isn't Scarlet Rose is she, Sean's Familiar?" Jane asked rather sceptically, not believing that she would come here. However, she did seem similar to that hazy woman Satyr and Beth where talking to.


    "Probably, I don't know. It was just 'Scarlet' so it could be Rose, or it could not be." Silverfang replied so Jane simply shrugged and snuggled back into him.
    "Wake me up when they let us in on the conversation." Jane said with an underlying grumpiness before going back to sleep.
    Jane was awoken half an hour after she went back to sleep.
    "They are involving us now" Silverfang told her, Jane was groggy but interested.
    "I have talked with Satyr and she tells me that you are the one Shadow tried to kidnap" Scarlet said, looking at Jane.
    "Yea, he is my dad's Familiar and so he tried to drag me back home" Jane explained, Scarlet simply shook her head.
    "No, I'm afraid Shadow is no longer your father's Familiar because your father no longer is. And he did not take you for your father, he took you for himself" Scarlet said in a neutral voice, but with a slight tone of pity.
    "Ohh, well then he was my father's Familiar" Jane reiterated, seemingly unperturbed by the announcement of her father's death, she was a bit confused as to what she meant by 'for himself' but she didn't really care to know the answer. "So, who offed the old….can't find a good word for him really." Jane admitted.
    "Actually it was Shadow that killed him" Rose informed them casually, as if it was common knowledge that Familiars could kill their partners. The look of confusion on everyone but Beth and Satyr's faces however, told Scarlet it was not.
    "But I thought Familiars couldn't be here without a partner, so killing their partner would immediately cause them to disappear" Jane said, stating everyone's question.
    "They can if they have a new master before killing the old one" Rose replied, this did nothing for the confusion however.


    "Familiars can change partners?" Silverfang asked before Jane could.
    "Ahh, I forgot that humans and their Familiars where largely ignorant of the way in which Familiars work" Rose said with a slight smile, she looked as if she was going to speak but was interrupted by Silverfang.
    "You make it sound like humans aren't the only people that have Familiars" He said sceptically, unsure if this Rose was trying to trick him or actually though that people where really stupid.
    "You're an idiot" Rose told him, unintentionally answering his question. "The Orion–Cygnus Arm holds a lot more than just this system. And then there is the rest of the galaxy and then the other galaxies beyond that. The universe is a big place, so incomprehensibly large that only a half dozen beings have true omnipotence within it and you are trying to say that you are the only race to reside in it? Humans really are some of the densest sentient beings around" Rose told everyone, sighing slightly with vexation, she then spoke quietly to Satyr for a while, ignoring everyone else, before leaving.
    "He's coming soon" Silverfang heard before Rose left. Silverfang then approached Beth and Satyr with a rather un-amused look. "I have a few questions for you" He said with a strained voice, dragging both of them upstairs despite Satyr's protests that she needed to wait downstairs.


    "Right, stand there a second while I work out where to start" Silverfang told Beth as he dragged her into the guest room.
    "Start on what?" Beth asked, genuinely confused for one of the first times.
    "Probing you for answers" he replied, but before he could think of a question a voice came from the doorway.
    "Is there a problem?" it asked in a rather calm voice that had an underlying tone of such seriousness it would make the most prude man's voice seem silly.
    "No thank you Eliot, we are fine" Beth said before noticing that the voice was completely different to Eliot's, however when she looked over at the doorway there was no one there. Forgetting Silverfang for the moment - and he did not seem to mind being forgotten as he followed Beth - she walked over to the door and looked around. There was no one in the hallway or on the stairs. With her curiosity now at extreme levels Beth headed downstairs.
    "Has anyone come in yet?" Beth asked with a confusing scanning of the room.
    "Your Rose friend left only a minute ago, why would anyone be here yet?" Eliot said, answering her question with a question of his own and looking at Beth's confused face with his own face of confusion.
    "He has a point; it's not like Rose is even where she is going yet. And people can't just appear in houses with such a large group without anyone seeing them." The calm, serious voice said, but the speaker was gone by the time Beth had looked around.
    "This is not just me going nuts it is?" Beth asked but the looks on everyone else's face indicated that was not the case.


    "It wouldn't be the first time you have gone nuts" The bodiless voice said, a hint of amusement entering its voice. This time the voice spoke, a look of recognition crossed over Beth's face, quickly followed by a look of extreme annoyance.
    "I'm going to feed you to some dogs, kill the dogs and then feed them to some bigger dogs. Then kill them dogs and burn their remains" Beth threatened.
    "Scary" The voice replied with no deviation from its normal tone. "You don't mind if I draw on these walls do you?" It asked and obviously didn't wait for a reply because a second later a very realistic drawing of a Giraffe appeared on the walls. "Giraffe is such a strange name, but then so is Hippopotamus" the voice mused in a tone that was getting increasingly amused. Beth had already walked over to the cutlery drawer and was currently picking out a dozen knives.
    "I like Dobermen, them massive dog - bear - things, the only problem is that things tend to get really hairy around them" the voice said, laughing at its own joke. Jane and Avrion also forgot the strange events for a second and laughed while the boys just stood with confused looked on their faces.


    Beth then stormed over to the spot she was standing on and threw the dozen knives in the direction of the drawing. Several of the knives thudded into something and the knife part turned red quickly, a sharp "Ow, that hurt" rang out, the only one without a look of shock and confusion was Beth, who simply had an annoyed look on her face. "Et tu Bethee?" The voice asked before a thud rang out and the knives moved downwards, near the floor, but floating in the invisible man.


    Beth waited for a second before walking over to the area where the knives was and looking down. "Now stop pissing about" she said in a commanding sort of voice.
    "Trust you to ruin my fun" The voice said as the knives flew up again and pulled themselves out of whatever it was lodged in. The knife spun one and then it was devoid of any blood that stained it, however the blood was not on the carpet or the surrounding walls, it had simply vanished.


    "You're not seeing me though, I need to make my dramatic entrance, talking of which, is nearly here. Put the kettle on, I want a cuppa tea" The voice said and a couple of seconds later the knives lost their fight with gravity and plummeted to the floor. Beth then proceeded to pick up the rest of the knives and did her best to ignore all the confused looks she was getting from Eliot and the rest of them.


    "Wha?" Jane asked as Beth gathered the last of the knives and began to wipe them one by one and put them back in the drawer. She then filled the kettle up with hot water and started waiting for it to boil. Seeing that she would not get an answer out of Beth she turned to Silverfang. Nehvna and Avrion came down the stairs, yawning and stretching.
    "What was with all the noise?" Nehvna asked, but whatever reply she would have gotten was cut off by an extremely loud roar of an exceptionally powerful engine that came from outside, it was so powerful that things in the house started vibrating from the intensity of the noise. The noise sustained for a few more seconds, and then cut off.
    “Bloody ‘ell, he could wake the Kabals with that racket” Beth muttered as there was a knock at the door.


    "I’m not getting that, I remember what happened last time I answered the door" Eliot said, making Beth chuckle a bit as she opened the door.
    "Hello" the man at the door said with a smile before Beth punched him in the face.
    "Somehow that looks familiar" Eliot said, watching her punch the man.
    "You have a very strange way of showing your affection, you know" he said, rubbing his nose.


    "Yes well you are just very strange Sean, so I am allowed to have very strange ways" Beth told him before letting him inside to the ogling people. Nehvna gasped as she saw who was at the door, and moved close to Jane's ear to whisper in it, not wanting the others to hear.
    "I've got a crush on him, he is so scruffy in hair and clothes but he pulls it off so well he looks better than he would in a suit. He devilishly charming and the most chivalrous person I have ever seen, there is just something about him that makes me feel all gooey when I see him, even on the T.V, so him being here in person is...It's just...Ohh" Nehvna devolved into a squeal and was a hairs breadth away from jumping up and down. Jane looked at Nehvna with a smile before whispering back.


    "Nehvy, that just makes you like every other girl on the planet" then adding with thought 'except me, I can't fathom what the others see in him' she thought. Sean had walked into the middle of the room in the time between Nehvna and Jane's conversation; he then looked around at the people and bathed in the awed looks.
    "Everyone loves me, everyone thinks I am awesome, everyone - "he began but Beth cut him off sharply.


    "Don't make he have to stab you again you egotistic maniac" She said handing a cup of tea to Sean and sitting down, ignoring the scowl she was getting from Nehvna.
    "Well it seems I have won over the women around here, now all I need to do is win over you" Sean told Beth who scowled at him.
    "I seriously will stab you if you carry on" she said, taking one of the knives out of her sleeve to prove it. Then she thought for a second on what he had just said. "Does that mean you don't think I am a woman?" she asked, brandishing the knife rather dangerously for Sean's liking.


    "I’m just saying you're the only one not won over" He told Beth, pacifying her, as the knife vanished back up her sleeve. Sean took a sip from his cup of tea and then looked over at Jane, smiling like he was going to cause some mischief.
    "Awww, I want her as my sister, we could have so much fun" Sean said, causing Beth to throw the knife at him. It sunk into Sean's head and forced it to roll back before it returned to its original position. However, he didn't slop any of his tea and the rest of his body was unaffected by the knife.


    "Dammit woman, stop throwing knives at me. It’s a party trick only “he said, pulling the knife out of his head.
    "How..? How..?" Jane asked, her questions just trailed off to nothing.
    "Well this is a book, so I can do anything I want" he told Jane with an "I know more than you" type of smile before holding up a book.
    "How does that help you pull knives out of your head?" Jane asked again.
    "It doesn't. I wasn't even talking about this, I just thought it was a good book and decided to show it to you all" Sean told them before lowering the book, it disappeared from his hand after a few seconds.
    "Then what book are you referring to?" Jane asked, Beth was right; this day was getting weirder and weirder. Sean looked like he was about to say more but a very stern glare from Beth made him silent.
    "Well enough about that, I guess I should get down to why I am here. And to help me I have brought someone you might know" he said, nodding his head to a man stood with a good posture. He was the polar opposite of Sean with straightened hair and a posh suit. Even his body language was different, the new man was standing serious and looked "to the point" sort of person while Sean's stance was a lot more chill and, as he had just demonstrated, looked to be the person to have some humorous banter before getting down to business.


    "Balance, stop being a stiff" Sean said, taking another - this time larger - sip from his cup, Nehvna made a slight squeal as she found out who the new person was.
    "I am, by nature, a stiff. I am the serious person, you are the bantering person. Together we make the team" Balance told him, there was the memory of his words but no memory of him actually having spoken.
    "Stop showing off Balance, we can all do that, we just don't because showing off is only good if the crowd will appreciate it." Sean told Balance, his words made it appear that he was annoyed but his tone and body language showed that he was not.
    "My apologies" Balance told Sean, this time it was a normal way of speaking. He then looked at the people in the room. Five of them where looking bewildered, one of them was looking annoyed and one of them was looking bored.
    "Are we going to get to the Shadow problem yet?" Beth asked, she had heard then banter a hundred times and it was highly annoying.


    "Ohh yea, the Shadow problem. He took out Mark so he must have a new master, Shadow is not the kind of person to do such a thing unless he thinks it will get him further that staying with Mark but then let's face it, Mark is a dweeb and there is a billion people on this planet alone that could get him further than staying with Mark, so it is a bit of a redundant statement" Sean said, stroking his chin to make himself look like his thoughts where more deep. Silverfang picked up on the stance and smiled.


    "I do that as well" Silverfang said, which caused Sean to smile as well.
    "It is an awesome thinking pose" Sean replied, draining his cup before catching Nehvna's eye. "Why is there some shy looking beauty staring at me?" He asked. Nehvna's face quickly turned bright red and soft squeaks escaped her as she clung to Jane for support. She had never been called a beauty before and it was Sean calling her that as well, she couldn't handle this pressure, it was all too much. She wanted to stop the embarrassing squeaks coming out of her mouth but she had no control over them at all. Jane spotted how Nehvna was feeling and so decided to step in, to salvage the situation while she still could.
    "She is my sister and she can be shy at times, so please be nice" Jane told him, giving Nehvna a hug to comfort her.


    "Hmm, If I marry her then I could be Jane's brother in law" Sean said with a scheming smile, Nehvna's squeaking doubled as the prospect of marriage entered it and she buried herself in Jane's chest, not wanting to be seen by anyone, now that her cheeks rivalled the sun for brightness.
    "Sean. Focus" Beth told him, making two separate words and adding a large amount of emphasis to both of them. He spun round and spoke in single words.


    "Yes. Shadow. Right." He then returned to the use of proper sentences "From what I have seen already jumped ship, took him long enough as well. I'd head to Klass directly but I need to pick up a very important someone and such a jump would be hard to do undetected" Sean told Beth, plastering the over used look of confusion on everyone's faces.
    "Who is Klass" Eliot asked, Jane had apparently let him do the speaking this time.
    "Ahh, Klass, an old friend. He used to be a planet hopper, going from one planet to the next gathering holidays and festivals while spreading the holidays and festivals from the last planet; he takes about two, gives about two and then leaves for the next planet. He does this because he is a Thaui, a being that draws strength from being known. It is similar to Celestial style but require simple knowledge rather than prayer. I met him after one of his visits to a new planet and invited him into a…." Sean failed on the word and simply repeated "a" until Beth spoke.


    "You are simply making more questions with your explanation" Beth told Sean.
    "Yea that sort of happens a lot" he replied, looking at all the gormless faces, the only one that didn't look like their brain had jumped ship was Beth, but she had heard it all before.
    "He is a friend" Sean said simply, he disliked such simplicity but it was necessary for these people.
    "Try keeping on track, Shadow is bad, tell us your plan" Beth told him, he glared at her before speaking again and keeping it simple.


    "He has gone, I'm going to find out what he is up to and I want you to take them to Klass' place, that is why I brought him up" Sean told Beth, but Jane piped up with a question.
    "If Klass if a planet hopper" Jane spoke the word strangely, as if it was hard to comprehend herself saying it "Then where would his 'place' be?" She asked, fully expecting an answer she couldn't properly understand. Sean nodded, rather impressed, Jane had taken the knowledge rather well and was thinking laterally as well. He decided to voice his approval, because he was like that.


    "That is a very good question. He settled down after a while, I could tell you where but you would not understand where it was" Sean told her, it was not as confusing a reply as usual but it still shocked everyone.
    "So, this off planet is…actually leaving the planet. That…sounds…unique" Silverfang said eventually, finally managing to get the words out. "So, how are we going to get there?" He asked.


    "That is also a good question, as I don't have a space - ship stuffed down my pants, despite what people might think" He said, a rather lewd smile spread across his face before Beth glared at him.
    "Umm, sorry about that, well just watch the birdy for a second" Sean then lifted up his empty cup of tea and everyone was drawn to it, as if it was the most interesting thing in the world. It was Jane that first noticed the different surroundings. He then dropped the cup on the floor and it vanished as soon as it touched the carpet.


    "Why have the walls changed?" She asked, causing Sean to smile, he looked like he was going to go into a massive explanation when Beth starred at him and made him give the simple one.
    "We changed houses. And islands, we are now in Ireland, I moved with a certain amount of subtlety since I want to stay relatively under the radar for now." Sean explained.
    "And what radar is this?" Jane asked, she didn't know there was radar for people instantly changing islands.
    "The Radar. Explanation would be confusing." Sean replied, hating how he had to keep so brief.


    "Is that how we are going to go 'off planet' then?" Jane asked, it was not in any way how she though planet travelling would be like. The others had made Jane the 'Question Asker' as everyone else was staying silent.
    "No, same planet travel is nice and quick but going to other planets requires a bit more, especially when you move with the subtlety that I am moving with" He explained again, he was doing a lot of explaining but then he liked explaining so it was all good.
    "So what does this 'bit more' look like then?" Jane asked, the only person not completely stunned by the change of surroundings, but then she was a lot like Beth in that respect, she liked to know what was going on all the time.
    "Well it is going to look like the insides of your eyelids, since you are all going to take a nice nap while I set it up" Sean replied, as he finished Jane yawned, she had not felt tired a minute ago but now her eyelids where so heavy and hard to keep open. Everyone around her started yawning as well, Jane was uncertain if they looked more confused or tired but she herself was too tired to think about that.


    "What's happening?" Jane asked in a slurred voice, hardly pronouncing the words. She felt like she hadn't slept for a week and would like nothing better than to lie down and close her eyes but she kept them open with sheer force of will to at least get the answer from Sean before she crashed.
    "I simply suggested that you should take a nice nap while I sorted the whole planet thing out. You are the ones who are now heeding my suggestion and taking a nap." Sean said, his smile made it blatantly obvious that he was lying though his teeth but Jane could not stay away any longer stay awake. Several thuds where heard in rapid succession as everyone collapsed from extreme exhaustion. Beth, Sean and their respective familiars where the only people left standing at the end of it, he smiled in a satisfied manner and turned to his sister.


    "Mind giving me a hand? Planet travel is easy enough but when you have to cart such a large group of people around it gets slightly more difficult to move subtly" Sean told her, she shrugged and got up.
    "You know you didn't have to be so forceful with them, it was even affecting me with the force you put into that." Beth replied. The feeling of tiredness had gone from her body but everyone else was sleeping soundly, it would be nearly impossible to wake them up with the fatigue they were feeling.


    "Well I don't really have a guide to tell me what her resistance is, so I erred on the side of caution" Sean explained, kicking the carpet. A small obelisk, roughly 5 foot, rose out of the ground with four sides; each side had a space carved specifically for a person's hand. Beth, Satyr, Sean and Balance all put their hands on the obelisk and it glowed two different colours, A deep, lush green for Sean and Balance and a shocking violet for Satyr and Beth, The obelisk shone the two colours for about a minute and then the walls changed again and the whole atmosphere felt different, even the air smelt different and flowed down your throat in a different way to the air on Earth.
    "Well, now that that is done I'm going out. Watch the kids" Sean said, heading to the door. The obelisk sank back into the ground, its job done.
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    CHAPTER FOUR: THE DREAM
    I: A dream. Jane was definitely in a dream. After all, real life didn't have purple wombats with six arms. But then if she factored in the craziness of the day she had just had it would not surprise her to see them hopping around when she woke up.
    "This is not how I usually have a dream, I know they are usually vivid but this is a bit to vivid" Jane said, looking at her hand, she clenched it and then unclenched it, for some reason she was conscious of her actions and they worked just the same as when she was awake. She took a step and felt the ground beneath her foot; she took a breath and felt the air in her lungs. Everything was so real that it was starting to be a little bit creepy. While she was walking on the oddly multi - coloured floor that appeared like someone had had an acid trip in the countryside and crafted this place to reflect that she observed her surroundings. People of all shapes and sizes where popping in and out at regular intervals, they did not seem to be bothered by wombats hopping around and some people actually engaged in a conversation with them, further enforcing Jane's believe that she had gone absolutely bonkers.
    A person popped into the strange place and looked at Jane with a big smile, she didn't recognize her but there was a feeling of knowledge about this person in front of her. The mystery was solved the moment she spoke.


    "I wasn't expecting to see you here" The person said with a very jubilant tone, giving Jane a hug, Jane was to shocked to reply or even hug her back. After a few seconds the woman broke off the hug and looked at Jane. Jane recognized the tone; she knew exactly who this person was, regardless of their change in appearance. However, she was too stunned trying to work something out to say and as a result she didn't say anything.
    "Are you alright Jane?" She asked, a tone of worry creeping into jubilant speech.
    "Mum...you" Jane whispered, failing to finish her sentence, tears started to spill out of her eyes and roll down her cheeks. Jane's mum pulled a tissue out of her pocket and began to wipe the tears away.
    "No tears Jane, this is a joyous time, not a time for tears" She said as she finished wiping the tears away from Jane's eyes.
    "You left" Jane told her mother, still incapable of speaking anything more than a few words at a time.
    "It was not a voluntary leaving dear, I came down with a slight case of death" She said with a slight giggle. Some small being that Jane had not noticed on her shoulder stood up and spoke with a voice that Jane would not have expected from someone so small.
    "Elana, death is never slight, unless you don't actually die. But then it isn't dead, so death is never slight" The shoulder being said.


    "Ohh shush Enkia, I’m trying explain to my daughter about stuff, or thought I have a feeling it is going to be very Hard" She replied, the shoulder being Enkia didn't look pleased with the reply but he sat back down anyway, seeming to fade from view as he did so. "Sorry about that, you know how Enkia is" Elana told Jane, who was still staring in disbelieve.
    "You died?" Jane asked still completely shocked.
    "Only a little bit, man didn't know how to finish the job so I am here until I can get somewhere else to live." Elana told Jane before realizing it explained nothing. "Think of someone burning down your house, you no longer have your house but you still have yourself" She explained, or at least tried to explain.


    "I...I think I understand that, you are you, but have lost your house..." Jane said finally, basically repeating what Elana had just said. Then Jane spoke more heatedly. "How are you here? And while we are at it, where is here?"
    "Well, I’m here because this is where I live for now and here is the Astral Plain, where all thoughts go and all dreams come from. All people are attached to this place somehow, but only a few people out of the connected can come here properly. Somehow, I don't think you came here voluntarily, I don't think you can do that. Not Just yet anyway." Elana explained.


    "No, I didn't do anything. Sean just told me I was sleepy and then I fell asleep. Which was really weird, but then he is really weird, all that playing with pulling knives out of his head and...grrr he just he just irritates me" Jane told her mother, who understood.
    "Ahhhh. Well that I can explain. You see, Sean sent you to sleep and gave you the push you needed to get here, you have always been on the edge of this place which is why your dreams where always so vivid but Sean gave you that nudge you needed to get over here" She said, Elana saw that Jane didn't understand that part and sighed.
    "Don't worry; it will all seem clearer later. But for now it looks like you are going" she said, nodding to Jane's slowly disappearing body.


    "What...what is happening?" Jane asked frantically as she turned ghost - like.
    "Your grip of this place was borrowed, so you can't control it. You're waking up now and leaving here slowly." Elana told Jane calmingly.
    "I don't want to leave you" Jane replied, reaching out for Elana.
    "Don't worry, you will return soon" She said as Jane's eyes snapped opened. She sat up and took a sharp breath before looking around; everyone else was still asleep apart from Beth, Satyr and Balance, who were milling around the room.
    "Quite amazing, that you are up so soon. You shouldn't be up yet. “Beth said, helping Jane off the floor. She shook her head a few times and looked around the room.
    "It, feels different. I feel different. I can feel things more" she spoke generally and as confusingly as Sean. Beth frowned but she understood it clearly, it was just early was all.
    "That's fine, it's just a side - effect" Beth said quickly, swiftly making a lie and telling it flawlessly. Jane nodded and then looked at the door.
    "What's out there?" She asked, causing Beth to smile widely.
    "Out there, well dear, let's go have a look" Beth said, opening the door, sunlight poured though the ajar door into the room.
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    Quote Originally Posted by LillyanaKabal
    My dear readers, I so love your silent, unwavering support. And as such I have decided to finish chapter one and start chapter two.

    “Silent and unwavering support” is kind of my style lol. I am surprised that other people haven’t commented on this story, so I will comment. You are crafting an excellent story here! Your punctuation and grammar can be improved upon, but overall I am able to understand and enjoy your story. Personally, I love science-fiction and fantasy and so I am looking forward toward the next update of this wondrous story. I wish you good luck in your writing! Cheers! WC

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    Terra Magic, Homunculus, Golems, Dreadnaught space ships, planets going boom, witty one liners. All this and more in the (not so near) future of this book.

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    CHAPTER FIVE: THE FIRST DAUGHTER
    I. A horrible smell wafted in from the door and Jane clenched her nose in disgust.
    "That is horrible, the first place you take me in a cesspool?" She asked, pinching her nose to stop the smell from getting in, Beth on the other hand smiled, seemingly undisturbed by the smell. Balance, however, was not so immune, and wrinkled his nose.
    “Not even the Kabals could sleep though this stench” he commented, wafting his hand in front of his nose.
    "Well this is not where we are stopping - you should have been out for this part - but Sean had to make a quick stop to pick someone up." She told Jane, the rest of the people in Eliot's house appeared to be waking up - something Satyr noted with interest - and gathering around the door, trying to find out what the horrid smell was and what a new planet was like. Several of the people on the street where looking into the house with mixed emotions, greed and lust where the predominant ones but they quickly scurried away as Balance appeared in the doorway.
    "This is not the safest of places to be, we should find Sean quickly and move on" Balance suggested in a tone that sounded more like an order than a suggestion.
    "Yes, your right. Let's go" Beth said with a sigh, stepping out of the house with everyone else in tow.


    "Wait" Jane said, stopping in her tracks "Where are Nehvna and Avrion?" she asked, not wanting to leave them alone in the house in this place.
    "Don't worry about them, no one could get into that house and they probably went back to sleep as they were woken up by the car, just let them sleep a while" Beth said, continuing to walk away from the house. Jane's stomach growled and Balance pulled a sandwich from his pocket, how it had gotten there - and how it had stayed in such a pristine condition - was beyond Jane but she was happy for the food so she took it from him with a quick "Thanks" and bit into it, the sandwich tasted so good and it filed her up a fair bit. She guessed that it was more of the weird stuff that had been going on so much recently and decided not to think any more of it. Silverfang broke off from the pack and moved down to Jane at the back. He smiled softly at her as she ate the sandwich.


    "How are you holding up?" He asked, referring to all the craziness that had happened.
    "I'm doing alright" she replied, finishing her sandwich and taking his hand, a smile appeared on her own lips as she walked down the street with her Silverfang. The only thing that made this scenario bad was the terrible smell and leers of passerbys. "I hate how they are looking at me" Jane said to Silverfang quietly, clutching to his arm tighter.
    "Don't worry, ill protect you" He said, secretly he liked how Jane clung to her, Jane - for her part - realized that she was pressed tightly to him and blushed.


    "Where are we going Beth?" She asked to change the subject before it got too much for her to handle.
    "To Sean, we are going to meet up with him and then get off this place, I just hope he has done what he needs to do by the time we get there" Beth told Jane, before slightly picking up the pace. They small band walked along the road and nine out of ten people glared at them or leered in some way, Jane got used to it eventually as it just became common place. Eventually they arrived at a large and sinister looking building, Beth was not put off by the look and opened the door, the sounds of gunshots echoed from within so she shut the door again.


    "He isn't done yet" She said simply, as un-put-off by the gunshots as the sinister look of the building. The rest of the group however had varied reactions, Eliot and Silverfang looked shocked, Jane looked shocked but also looked accepting, as if it was just par with how her life had been going so far and Balance looked as if he had seen this situation far too many times.
    "Those…those…those where gunshots!" Eliot eventually managed to shout, getting over his surprise and managing to be vocal again.
    "Yep, they were, one of the two things you get when you fire a gun, the other being a bullet" Beth said sarcastically, leaning against the building with a sigh. While Eliot was panicking and Silverfang was trying to look protective Jane looked up at the sign above the building. The letters where in some foreign alien language but somehow Jane knew what they said.


    "The Human House?" She read aloud, making the tone into a questioning tone. Beth was shocked at the speed in which Jane was progressing and Balance had to speak up before she noticed.
    "Yes, it is a place where people are sold to other people - the name is just a base translation, it doesn't exclusively sell humans - , one of the many stains on this planet" he explained, scorn entering his voice at the end of it. Whatever reply Jane was going to make was cut off by Silverfang, who had begun sniffing the air.
    "Is that…smoke?" He asked, causing the others to sniff the air as well. Beth sighed and started counting.


    "Five…four…three" as she got to zero the doors crashed open and Sean walked out, a large revolver in each hand and a tall, green haired girl next to him, she looked about eighteen or so and was wearing ragged, old clothing.
    "I hate the clothes these places give you, so itchy" The green haired girl said, scratching herself in several places, the sub - standard clothes appeared to strain against the girl's large breasts and looked as if it was going to split at any moment.


    "Well, Nena, you will get yourself into these messes" Sean said, a large amount of smoke pouring though the building behind him and the fire not far behind. "Now, if no one objects I suggest we move on before we all burn to death" He said cheerfully, discarding the revolvers and stalking off down the street without waiting for anyone.
    The green haired girl - Nena, Sean had called her - walked off after him, a man leered obviously at her large breasts and so Nena swiftly head - butted him and carried on.
    "Do you know her?" Jane asked Beth as the rest of the people carried on at a slower rate so they didn't seem to be a part of the same group.
    "Ohh yes, I know all about Nenatalev" Beth said smiling but not revealing anything else despite Jane's repeated probing.


    II: Sean strolled into the 'Human House' and looked around. It took quite a bit of constraint not to pull out the obscenely large .500 revolver he had in his jacket and start firing off rounds at everyone in the building. He really hated these places and the only reason he was blending in was before if he started on a rampage right now was that he was not sure what he was looking for was actually here, and would never find it if he started just randomly killing instead of waiting. He was intercepted by a man - all smiles and fine clothes - who led him to a large hall, the sign marked it the 'Auction hall' and Sean knew this was where he was going to find her. He was led to an empty seat and given a handle with a number painted on it, then instructed to raise the handle when he wished to buy the person appearing on the stage. Sean forced a smile and thanked the man, it was the hardest thing he had done in a while. But then he made up for it be thinking about how he was going to set fire to this place and mercilessly massacre everyone who took part in this heinous market.


    The auction started and Sean gritted his teeth as people were dragged onto the stage and the man announced what race they were, what planet they came from and if they were famous or not. With his deep green eyes he could see the fear, anguish and unbridled horror on most of the people's faces. One man however, did not have any of that. He had the face of a man who was not going to give in to the overwhelming odds he was faced with and would stand defiant until his life was extinguished. The man was introduced as 'Captain Zann of the Khani military' which peaked Sean's interest.


    The Khani where old friends of his and he couldn't allow such a man to be bought. He was going to blow the hell out of everyone anyway, but it was a principle thing, little more than that. He raised his handle - feeling very dirty at doing so; regardless of the reason he was doing it - and another man in the crowd raised his. Sean had to raise his own four more times before his opponent gave up, it would have drained his funds rather considerably if he was going to pay.


    The auction went on until it came to the last one. The 'best for last' as the announcer said and then a girl - barely 18 by the looks of her - was dragged on stage. The chains where very thick, the handcuffs and ankles reduced her movement speed to a crawl and she nearly fell over when the chain around her neck was yanked, dragging her on stage. The announcer appealed to the crowd a bit with his rather effluent skills before telling them who she is.
    "This one, our greatest catch in a decade, is Nenatalev Woodhouse.


    She is known to be one of the much sort after Demios and a prize for any collector. She will be difficult to tame, but we believe that it is worth the challenge to have one of these rare beauties. Bidding starts at 100 million" He announced. Sean thought that was quite a good price, considering her flaws. But then the seller wouldn't tell them until they had received none - refundable payment. At any rate, Sean now saw who he had come for and stood up. A few people behind him complained that their bidding sticks would not be visible, as many people where raising their own sticks in hopes of bagging this magnificent opportunity.
    Sean, however, had a different idea. He drew the revolver from his jacket and fired it at the announcer; the mammoth round flew from the barrel of the equally mammoth revolver. The bullet head was pushed in slightly, making the already powerful bullet hollow point round and allowing it to cause much greater damage on impact.


    However, it never made impact, as the bullet smashed into a protective shield, a red ripple flung out around the impact area before dissipating. Sean had expected something like that and so had fired the bullet with expectations of failure, now his expectations had been met; he had properly gauged the gaps in the shield. He stomped the ground and a stalagmite ripped out of the wooden stage that the announcer and Nenatalev where standing on, ascending upwards until it caught on Nena's handcuffs. Nena quickly gripped the stalagmite and her whole body started glowing a deep earthen green. She then quickly parted her hands - the cuffs that where restricting her movement snapped like wet paper - she then parted her feet and they followed in the footsteps of their wrist - kin, pieces of chain scattered across the stage and she reached up and pulled the metal collar off.


    Sufficiently de - chained, Nena turned to the announcer with a smile. The man pulled a gun from his coat - it was a very small gun compared to Sean's - and fired it at Nena. Either he was a poor shot or Nena moved out of the way of every bullet, since she was not hit once on her slow approach. His clip ran dry just as Nena arrived at him.
    "I don't like being chained like that. I think I'll show you what happens to people that try" she told the announcer, punching him in the ribs. The force of the punch rippled through his entire torso and rib shards ripped their way through his opposite side, killing him quickly and very, very painfully.


    She watched the man crumple to the floor and smiled, glad that another one of them was not to see the light of day again, they would be more, there always was more, but this one at least was finished. She then stretched, the chains had cramped her muscles and it felt good to give them some exercise again. With her business out of the way, she looked over to the audience stand and saw her dad, firing his gun into the crowd, shooting security and patrons alike. He was also splaying his free hand and stamping the ground, balls of compact earth where smashing into several people, stalagmites where hewing threw dozens of patrons with a single rupture and large walls rose up, then fell down again, crushing even more people under its stony embrace.


    A group of people reached the door and the man at the head frantically reached for the handle, but as his hand gripped it sharp spikes fired out, impaling the fleeing patrons. Nena had not seen Sean do such a vindictive thing like that in quite a while and that look in his father's eyes was not something she had seen often. It was determination and hatred, two things that did not suit Sean in any way. The hatred was understandable - even for Sean, despite his usually calm demeanour - but that determination to end life for someone that worshipped Gaia and respected all life, was unnerving. But then, worship was a strong word, it was rather more respectful acknowledgment. However, it was still scary to see him go all out like this. Nena sighed, she needed to get in there and start lightening the load, so he could get back to his smiles quicker. Nena didn't want his father to be like this, it was not right. She may have claimed to dislike him, and tried to show that dislike in everything she did, but sub - consciously she cared for him. He was her father after all.


    Nena approached the shield and looked at it, this close she could see a faint crackle in front of her, so she punched it. The red ripple flung out from the point of impact again, but the shield failed to maintain itself under this impact and so it shattered. Nena heard the generator explode from behind the stage, which made sure that the shield really was down.
    She hopped off the stage and slightly - faster - than - walked over to Sean; however by the time she had gotten there nobody was left alive. He had drawn a second mammoth revolver and added a second gun to his lead - wall of death, mowing down the people before Nena could get to him.


    "Well, that was…bracing" Nena said as Sean smiled, but it lacked any warmth.
    "Just wait, it gets better" He told her, twelve red glyphs appeared around him and then flew away, slapping themselves onto the walls of the building. "Well, then. Time to go" he said, dropping the sheen on the door and kicking it open, he still held his two revolvers in his hands and Nena saw the reason why as a few security guards that were locked out of the Auction Room ran at him. Sean fired his two guns at them and they impact caused the areas where the bullets him them to explode.


    She then heard the activation of the glyphs in the auction room and could immediately smell the smoke, thick and acrid as it roared through the building. Sean didn't seem to care about the fire or the dead bodies he stepped over as he walked towards the front door, when he had arrived there he kicked open the door and looked at the confused, somewhat scared looks of the group surrounding the now burning Human House. Nena decided to defuse the situation with an off - hand comment.
    "I hate the clothes these places give me, they are so itchy" She said, scratching herself to further reinforce her point. Sean picked up on what she was doing and decided to throw his bit in.


    "Well, Nena, you will get yourself into these messes" Sean said, the building was really going up in flames now and so he added some more. "Now, if no one objects I suggest we move on before we all burn to death" He said cheerfully - a disconcerting thought considering what he had just done - , discarding the revolvers and stalking off down the street without waiting for anyone.


    III: Sean and Nena had a considerable head start on the rest of the group and it took them a fair amount of time to arrive at the house, when they did they heard the sounds of a shower coming from a bathroom that did not exist when they set out, which must have meant that Sean had been doing his odd stuff again. Jane entered first and decided to make a joke, since Sean was looking a bit down; he had another cup of tea in his hands, which was half empty. She was sure they were not that far behind, but then he was strange so it was possible.


    "So you can do pluming then?" Jane jokingly asked.
    "Yep, I’m also Italian" He replied, equally as jokefully. He was obviously not going to let anyone see how he was really feeling and so was covering up with jokes.
    "Well then go jump on Shadow's head" Beth told him, rather exasperated with his antics. Beth didn't seem to catch on to Sean's mood, or probably thought that Sean couldn't feel down, that he was simply immune to negative emotions. Sean could wear a person out just by being more than a ten mile run. Jane laughed at Beth's comment, she wasn't usually so grumpy. It must be her brother.


    "So, is this that Klass person's planet?" Silverfang asked, hoping it wasn't.
    "Nope" Sean replied, making Silverfang sigh in relief. "I just had to pick up my daughter, she is a nightmare sometimes but hey, she is family" He continued, shrugging casually. However casual he was acting, Jane was staring at him with a look of pure shock.
    "You have a daughter?" she asked, nearly screeching in surprise.
    "Yes, I have a daughter, why is everyone surprised to learn that? I am a lot of other things, and no one is surprised to hear that." Sean replied in comically annoyed tone.
    "I don't know any of the other things!" Jane shouted.


    "Well then, stop shouting" Sean told her softly before draining his cup and throwing it over his shoulder; it sank into the wall and vanished a few seconds later. Jane looked like she was getting ready to throw another crazy shouting fit but Silverfang stepped in.
    "So, how did that hallway and shower, get here?" He asked, changing the subject and trying to control Jane who had suddenly developed a temper.
    "I made it, the shower as well. Not very complex really, just convinced reality that there was a hallway and shower there" Sean said with a nonchalant tone as if what he had just said made perfect sense.


    "You….you convinced reality?" Silverfang repeated, not quite sure that was what Sean had said. After all, it made no sense at all to say you convinced reality of something.
    "Well of course I convinced reality, who else am I going to convince? Chaoz sucks at plumbing, unlike me." Sean told Silverfang, piquing Eliot's previously uninterested curiosity.
    "Who's Chaos?" He asked Sean, who raised a finger.


    "It isn't Chaos, it is Chaoz. More of a zed towards the end rather than an ess" Sean told Eliot, pronouncing his name more clearly.
    "But that just makes no sense at all" Eliot replied, Sean simply shrugged.
    "I don't make up the rules. Or rather I do, but I don't make them make sense" Sean said, shrugging again before walking over to a couch and lying down.
    "There is no time to be lying around Sean, we have a ship to catch" Beth told him, causing him to groan. He sighed and got up from the couch.


    "Fine, let's go" he said, heading to the door. Balance coughed to get everyone's attention.
    "Are you forgetting someone?" He asked. A look of realization slowly dawned on Sean's face.
    "Ohh yea. Nena. Forgot about her" Sean laughed as the shower cut off. Nena walked out of the bathroom, fully dressed and with shining, slightly wet hair. The hallway closed off when Nena exited it as if it had never existed. Everyone didn’t seem as shocked at the sudden disappearance of the hallway however, like they were getting used to the rampant disregard for normality.


    "We off then?" She asked, flicking her hair out of the shirt she had pulled over it and joining the group.
    "We are" Sean confirmed, opening the door and ushering everyone out before shutting the door behind him.
    The walk to the Space port was stinky but otherwise uneventful, people usually avoided a large group on this planet - Nena’s glares reinforced this avoidance - aside from Nehvna and Avrion catching up to the group and grumbling about being left behind.


    Sean snapped his fingers and announced that he knew he had forgotten something then blamed Beth for not reminding him. She shrugged and replied it that it was not her responsibility to act as his memory. As the group arrived at their ship - a rather small thing, designed to carry only a few dozen people at most - a mountain of a man was waiting there for them and a tall, but not nearly as large man was stood next to him.
    "Hey Niall, come to see us off?" Sean asked, smiling, to which Niall nodded.
    "Not exactly, I am coming with you. I got Orders from Her." He said,before gesturing to the small ship behind him.
    "Her 'aye? Well, that's cool, but how are we all going to fit in that?" He asked, to which Niall stared for a few seconds, and then deflated.
    "I have been told to expect a lot less than what finally arrived. My apologies." He told Sean, who waved his concerns away.
    "It's cool, I'll contact Scarlet, see what she can do for us" Sean replied. Eliot then looked over and frowned.
    "How is Scarlet yours when Balance is also yours? I thought a person could only have ever had one Familiar" Eliot asked, his tone conversational. Sean smiled as he remembered that Eliot was a human and humans have sub-standard knowledge about Familiars.


    "You can have as many Familiars as you want connected to you at any one time; there really is no limit to how many Familiars you can call your own, as long as the Familiars get along alright, if they don't then you are in for a rough ride. However there is a limit on how many you can have at your side. Familiars use you - "He gestured at Eliot to reinforce his point" - to anchor to this world. The greater your strength in….I guess humans would call it spirit, or willpower. Anyway, the greater your 'spirit' the more Familiars you can anchor to this world at one time." He explained, Eliot was nodding as if he understood, but didn't say anything so Sean asked him a question.


    "Have you ever tried to summon a second Familiar?" Sean asked, Eliot shook his head.
    "No, I never knew it was possibly. And I don't want to, I got lucky with Silverfang but I don't want to risk summoning a Familiar that is my opposite and then being stuck with them for the rest of my life" Eliot told Sean, who smiled - obviously as something Eliot had said.
    "You do know that you don't have to bond the first Familiar you summon right? You can try the summoning a hundred times to get a Familiar that you feel you could feel you could be with" Sean explained again, the look on Eliot's face was an amusing one, he then looked at Silverfang - who seemed to be looking at Jane, for whatever reason, and spoke.
    "We are going to try something" He said franticly, dragging the protesting Familiar into the Space port and heading for somewhere less open that the runway, leaving Sean alone with his daughter and Balance.


    "So, how's school?" He asked awkwardly, his skills rather lacking in this sort of thing.
    "How's school? How's school?! We haven't seen each other in nearly a thousand years and you ask the crappiest, most overused and over - rated question in the entirety of creation! If you ever cared to take notice of my life, I finished school a long time ago" She shouted at him, getting off all the frustrations she had since the last time she saw her father.
    "Well I was just trying to break the ice. I suck that that sort of thing, usually I am great at breaking things which makes this a lot more difficult to understand" Sean replied, shrugging. Nena simply sighed exasperated and walked off. "Try not to get captured again" Sean called after her.


    "Try not to go on another murdering spree" she shouted back, feeling bad as soon as she had said it, but there was nothing to do, so she simply stormed into the space - port. Sean then looked at Balance, who had been eyeing him as if he wanted to ask something but didn't want to interrupt the family chat.
    "What are you planning?" Balance asked, causing Sean to smile.
    "A more apt question is what am I not planning, which would be breakfast tomorrow." He paused for a few seconds before continuing. "I have decided. Pancakes" he told Balance, who shook his head in despair.
    "I'm going to do stuff" Balance told Sean vaguely. before he faded from view, simply not being there a few seconds later.
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    Good job, once again, LillyanaKabal!

    You never cease to produce creative additions to this finely tuned serial, that is for sure!

    I would make the small recommendation of revision of each chapter, for proper grammar, of which I noticed a few instances where you have question marks and periods, however, others have no punctuation to separate the ending quotations from the descriptive support that follows.

    I will be the first to admit that this is a tiresome, often uninspiring and tedious task, but I find solace in the fact it relieves a contrite feeling about my own pieces.

    I look forward to see more from you!

    +Rep

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    PART TWO
    CHAPTER ONE: The Wolves
    I. Eliot looked at the Familiar circle he had just made. Silverfang watched from the corner, he had been told that people, all people, could have as many Familiars as they care to summon, the only limit being the amount out at one time. Silver had not heard this before and was sceptical, but he was humouring Eliot, because he was a good cook. Amongst other things.
    "Here goes something, on the word of a mad-man" Eliot muttered to himself, activating the circle. It shone a deep red and the light emitted from the circle, then a flash filled the room and a girl was stood in the now unlit circle. The girl looked passed Eliot and to Silverfang, a visage of awe on her face.


    "My King. I am at your service from this day hence, until my death" She said, bowing before Silverfang, whose own visage was one of complete confusion.
    "Err….that is nice and all. But he was the person who summoned you" Silver told the girl, pointing to Eliot.
    "I care little for who summoned me; it is you that I pledge my blade to" She replied, drawing a long polished blade, the drawing of such caused Silver to back away slightly.
    "Whoa - ok, let's put the swords away and calm the hell down" He told the slightly crazed girl. Whatever Silver thought of her, she did sheath the sword and stepped away.
    "I am sorry to have startled you my King. It seems you have lost your former glory. The humans have dulled your senses and your blade. It will be difficult to retrieve them, but I shall persevere for all Lupus Kind" She told him, holding her head high. It was then that Silver noticed a pure white wolf tail swishing between her legs.
    "Why…why are you calling me King, I’m not part of any hierarchy" Silver told that quite insane new Familiar.
    "You mean you do not even know what you are? I have some work ahead of me, Amarok lend me the strength to percevie" The wolf girl muttered, to low for the others to hear.


    Several minutes later, after managing to get the wolf girl to promise not to stab anyone, Eliot and Silverfang returned to Sean. He was stood facing a shirtless man who had a buckler shield forearm and a sword fitted though his belt on the shield side. He appeared to have the muscle and the skill to use them both flawlessly and Silver would not like to get on the wrong side of him, it would probably turn out like his fight - if that is what you could call it - with Shadow.


    The man's hair was short and brown but with a touch of grey in it, showing his age. He also had a thick beard the same colour of his hair. He had a pair of brown - grey wolf ears on his head and a tail sprouting out of his back. They were conversing about something Eliot couldn't hear and stopped when he came close.
    "It worked, amazingly. You're not so insane after all" Eliot told him, Sean smiled but the wolf man was more interested in the young girl they had just summoned, Eliot was getting a bit miffed at all the ignoring but didn't voice it. He smiled and walked over to the girl, giving her a tight hug.
    "Hey dad" the wolf girl said, snuggling into his dad's chest.
    "Hey Nailah, how are you?" the wolf man asked and the two wolves started speaking about all sorts of things that Eliot didn't think he should eavesdrop on and so turned his attention to Sean.


    "So, who's the big guy?" Silverfang asked, referring to the wolf man.
    "That's Takanuva - Tak, or Taka to most people - , he is one of my Familiars, apparently Scarlet is out, so he is the one that's going to get me a ship." Sean replied, Silverfang looked at the large man, and wondered if he was mad as well.
    "So you're the King of Wolves then eh? You don't look like much, but then Nailah has told me you have lost your glory. Don't worry about that, we will get that back" Takanuva told him, a solid, determined look in his eyes.
    "That…that's what Nailah says, I didn't really know until she told me; still don't understand what it really means either" Silverfang told Takanuva, stammering slightly at the sight of the large wolf man.


    "So, is this ship going to take long to get here?" Eliot asked, curious to see how long they where going to stand around here displaying their muscles. Niall and Bliss where already showing their muscles to Jane, who looked rather scared and was clinging to Beth. However, Sean simply waved his hand.
    "Pah, it will be here in a small while, which I will use to find my Daughter and you lot could use getting acquainted with each other. See you in some Earth minutes" Sean told the group before tipping a hat that was not there - or was possibly invisible, it was hard to tell with Sean - and walking off towards the entrance of the space port. He vanished as he walked through the doors however, obviously waiting a bit more speed than walking would provide. Silverfang stood for several minutes in silence, listening to Takanauva go on about how great the Hierarchy of the Wolf was, but then there was a break, and Silverfang tried to get a question in. however an ear-shattering explosion roared from the city, the cloud of fire and debris rose up in the air and cutting off what he was going to say. The flaming debris fell back to the floor with a clatter and the smoke rose up until it disappeared in the atmosphere.


    Sean and Nena appeared from thin air at the star-port doors a few seconds later. Sean was slightly amused as he had a small smirk on his face, Nena looked irritated but pleased. It was clear even before they arrived that they had caused the explosion and as they did arrive they smelt heavily of smoke and ash clung to their clothes.


    "Our ride is here; let's get out on with the awesome chase scene that isn't really going to be that awesome unless you like to stare at the stars." Sean told the large group. As Silver turned around to see what Sean was gesturing at, a ship had landed, reletively large, and able to gold the group with ease. Sean and Nena walked in with a touch of haste to their gait and were followed by Eliot everyone else. Sean headed directly for the cockpit and after a few seconds the ship started humming and then it took off and flew towards the sky, building up the speed necessary to escape the planet's gravitational pull. The group of people filled out in the ship, Beth having a disterbing knowledge of space-ship layout, but was followed anyway by Jane. Biss and Niall took to a large room, and began to talk amongst themselves. The girls, Nevhna, Avrion and Nenatalev, all followed Beth to her little room, while Nailah stuck with Silverfang and Eliot, who where in-turn followed by Takanuva. It took about a minute to arrive in Space and those few minutes where rather amazing for Eliot and Silverfang, they had never been in Space before and the whole thing was quite exciting. However, the glamour quickly wore off as they realized that most of Space was just that - empty space - and there was little to see apart from the planet they had just been on, which was covered in a brown coloured cloud and looked generally unwell.
    Sean looked back at the people on board, and grinned, it was always nice to speak to people.
    "That planet's air tastes really bad and their Ley-Lines are coated in some foul sticky…bleeh" he finished his sentence with a grimace, sticking his tongue out to reinforce the show of his displeasure.
    "Well, we are off it now and unless someone - "Tak started, before looking at Nena, who had suddenly arrived in the cockpit - and continuing "Makes us go back, we will give it a wide berth" He finished.
    "It wasn't entirely my fault, I heard that the Demios had fractured, so I came to investigate and then got captured by someone who knew what they were doing far too much for it to be coincidental" She explained, Sean sighed and rolled his eyes in reply.
    "Great. So someone is playing silly buggers with the way the Universe works. I guess it is only expected, considering, but I still don't like the extra work this entails" Sean said, again speaking generally.


    "Who are...?" Eliot started before the ship lurched, putting Silverfang and Eliot on the respective arses; however it didn't seem to affect anyone else. Nena had vanished again, as if she was only here for the quick conversation that had her in it, but everyone else in the cockpit seemed fine.
    "What the hell was that?" Eliot demanded to know from the floor. Sean frowned as he looked at Eliot, obviously confused to find him on the floor. Then he worked out what had happened and answered Eliot's question.
    "Ahh yes. Sorry about that. That's the Hyperdrive kicking in, most of us are used to that pre-jump lurch and so it doesn't affect us and it didn't occur to me to warn you about it." Sean finished with a shrug but he helped the two up all the same.
    "Well please warn us next time something like that is going to happen" Silverfang told Sean and then fell over again as the ship lurched a second time.


    "Hmm, that was quick." Sean mused before looking out of the window.
    "Let me guess, that was the Hyperdrive stopping?" Eliot asked rhetorically, but he was still answered, sarcastically, but answered none the less.
    "Indeed it was, very astute judgement" Taka's voice was layered with sarcasm but he helped the two off the floor anyway.
    "Huh, we aren't meant to be here. Must be something wrong with the Hyper-drive" he muttered, before Nena arrived again - this time walking in, not just appearing - with Jane, who looked frantic and guilty.
    "I'm really sorry, and I didn't mean to and I never could before and I don't know where it even came from!" Jane yammered, with some important looking piece of Ship in her hand.
    "And I felt like I was being over-shadowed" Nena told Sean, a lot more calmly, with an equally important peice of ship in her hand.
    "Great, between 'ya you have dismantled the Hyper-drive navigation system. We could be anywhere" she scoffed, before shaking her head. "Nena, you tell Jane about what's going to be happening to her now, I'll land and look around" he said, taking the 'wheel' of the ship and directing into the ground. Nena then lead Jane out of the cock-pit again, seemingly not wanting to stay there for any period of time, while Eliot and SIlverfang where talking vaguely to Nailah and Takanuva.






    Nena sat Jane down on one of the seats in an unoccupied booth, and smiled.
    "Right, you got to be careful now. Something happened recently, and you are going to have flushes of power that will allow you to break pretty much any mortally created object with little problem. A lot more things will come flushing to you as well, like a mental ability to disconcern any language, and a combat instinct to put a Reaver to shame" she explained, to Jane's glared eyes.
    "Ok..." Jane replied, in her best understanding voice, not even trying to understand what or who the Reavers where.
    "Glad you understand. A few other things might be happening later, but I don't know to much about them. To be fair, I don't know to much about what is going on right now, but then I really kinda know just enough to explain it to you. It's wierd like that" Nena told Jane, before looking at that brain-dead expression and giving the girl a hug. "Just, be careful, ok?" Nena asked.
    "Now that, I can do" Jane replied, grinning before the ship learched slightly.
    "Ahh, we're here, lets go see where we are" Nena suggested, leading Jane out of the ship, and down the ramp. They where the last ones out, which was odd, considering they only took a few seconds to get out of the room themselves, but then everything was odd these days.


    "Royos, the purple district. Not a bad place to get robbed" Sean said, having deduced the planets identity and where they were. He then took a large swig from his Thermos.
    "So, why are we staying here then?" Eliot asked, confused.
    "Well, the girls broke the Hyper-drive, so we gotta get new parts, or failing that a nice place to stand" He repiled, before walking towards the doors of the space-port, with the trail of people behind him.

    "Well, the girls broke the Hyper-drive, so we gotta get new parts, or failing that a nice place to stand" He repiled, before walking towards the doors of the space-port, with the trail of people behind him. Sean led the group down streets, and up alleys, with each looking as safe as the other. During this time, Jane got a strange feeling, followed by a slightly larger party than their own. Which was an unerving thought, considering they numbered near twelve. But then, Sean could survive getting stabbed in the head, and Niall looked like he could take a fair beating as well. Still, even with all these people, she didn't like the idea, and so she stuck close to Silverfang, and Nailah and Takanuva as a result.
    "Something wrong Jane?" Silverfang asked, seeing her a bit weary, and constantly looking around.
    "I just get a feeling we are being followed. By a fair few people." she muttered, to which Taka growled softly.
    "Probably. Everyone follows someone around here. And with us being the new faces, we are very likely suspects for being followed" He explained, seemingly unphased by the idea as Jane was.
    "But, isn't being followed a bit creepy? What if they try to rob us?" Jane asked, and as if to awnser her question, a few men appeared in front of Sean, brandishing second, or third hand weaponry that looked like it would crumble to dust when fired. The man in the front smiled at Sean, who aptly returned the favour.
    "G'd day mate. You look rather new to this place, can we 'elp ya at all?" The front man asked, in a horrible accent, mangling every other word he said. However, it didn't seem to bother Sean.
    "Ahh, hello. i believe you can. See, we have just docked here after some unfortunate malfunction with our Hyper-drive, and now we are looking for a shop to buy a replacement for it." He explained, as if oblivious to the intention of these would-be robbers.
    "Ahh, we 'ave just the thing you need my friend. If your group o' peeps will just follow me." the man offered, to which Sean accepted gracefully.
    "Well thank you. So nice to see friendly people around here" Sean replied, with a stupidity that everyone knew he didn't have.
    "Why is he doing this?" Jane asked, as Sean set off following the men, and then everyone else followed for their own reason, from curiosity, to dispair, and even not wanting to be left behind.
    "Because he is Sean. And Sean thinks on a different level to us. It is possible he has created a plan and this is it in action. Be prepared for anything, it could turn into a barbeque as much as a blood-bath" Takanuva told Jane, who quickly took on a look of suprise.
    "Blood bath?" She asked, but restrained her voice, to not alert the people in the front. "I don't want to be in a blood-bath. It'd ruin my hair for one" she exclaimed, not quite sure where the last part had come from, but it was still valid.
    "Ahh, don't worry. I'll protect you and the young pup. But get used to death girl, the universe is full of it. Every planet, sector and galaxy is one big blood-bath waiting to happen. And Empire getting to full of itself can tell you that. Why, humans where or-" He was then suddenly cut off by Beth, who started a complete new topic.
    "Well, this ought to prove interesting. Nena has procured a Trench coat from somewhere, and looks pretty good in it" She commented hastily, grinning.
    "Humans where originally what?" Jane prompted, not wanting to let the comment go.
    "Indeed she does. I wonder how the manage to procure clothes out of thin air like that" Taka replied, overtly ignoring Jane. The group was moving at quite the grueling pace, and so he hoped to get where they where going before Jane cracked him. Jane didn't seem to like being ignored like that, and took a few seconds to concentrate. Didn't Nena say she would be able to do things?
    "Awnser me, Takanuva" Jane commanded, her voice resonating with power that even the stout wolf man found hard to resist.
    "Well, you see, the thing is.."he stuttered, trying his hardest to not reveal what he had accidentally started. Luckily, before he could spit anything out, Sean spoke up loudly.
    "Is that your shop? Doesn't look very shop like, does it?" He asked, looking at the warehouse they where being led to.
    "Ohh, we can't really afford a shop and a warehouse, but just a shop won't fit all the parts in, so we joined the two ideas together. It worked marvolously." The man replied, obviously have practiced the line.
    "Well, aren't you intelligent?" Sean exclaimed, still playing the doppy tourist.


    The party was ushured though a reletively small door for the size of the building, and the door was then shut behind them. Inside, there was nearly three dozen men, all with the same merciless, vindictive look.
    "i'm no expert, but this doesn't look to be a Hyper-drive store" Sean said, looking around and making a show of not seeing the intentions of the men.
    "Yea, well. We are robbing you, so hand over all your money and valubles" The man said bluntly, and Sean recoiled in shock.
    "Wow, I wasn't expecting that. But, sorry, we don't have many of them. You are welcome to search us, if you want." He replied, calm as a monk on Morphine, in direct oppersition to his recoil moments eariler, as if he had only done that because it was expected of him. The now-obvious thief frowned for a second, before jerking his head, clearly the ring leader.
    "Well go on then." He prompted, snapping several people out of their daze and making them hurry over to the party, with Sean, Nena and Nevhna being near the front, with a large man, over six foot and covered in scars starting to pat down Sean, not that there was much to pat down. Once the man had finished patting Sean's chest, an odd aura blossomed from him, and the man backed away, clearly terrified. But, Sean hadn't done anything, he was just taking the frisk with a smile.
    "What the are you doing?" The leader demanded, placing a hand on the large man's back to push him forwards again. Before that could happen, a sickening crunch was heard, followed by a choked gargle. Every eye turned to Nena, who had her hand in the man's chest, ironically very near where the man's own hand still laid, cupped across Nena's considerable breast, and with every intention of giving it a squeeze. When Nena saw everyone else looking at her, she casually pushed the man away, pulling out his heart which was quickly discarded.
    "He groped my boob" she stated simply. While Sean seemed to take it as a acceptable reason, the men in the shop did not. Guns where drawn - much better quality than the ones first displayed - and the theives glared with hatred. On Sean's side, Taka and Nailah drew their sword, while Taka also withdrew his shield. Beth used the power of glaring, and the Earthlings panicked.


    However, out of all of them, the two most resounding reactions where Sean and Nena. Sean drew his giant revolver from it's usual place - nowhere - and grinned at the people.
    ".500 Revolver, hollow-point round. 8 pounds empty, power of a smooth-bore cannon" He read off, a discription which disterbed a few of the men, but not all of them. There was no way he could kill them all with five bullets. Nena, after looking at Sean's revolver, and then reached into her trench coat, and brought out a monster of a firearm.
    "Ten gauge, triple barreled leaver action shotgun, incindery rounds. A hell of a lot of pounds empty, power of...well, probably a Main Battle Tank hitting you at 60 miles an hour" Nena exclaimed, directing it more towards Sean than anyone else.
    "Dam, I think my E-peen has shrunk three sizes just now" Sean muttered. The brigands seemed very shocked by Nena's new gun, as did Sean's Party, and decided not to give them a chance to fire, releasing a wave of lead at them, some firing automatic rifles, the others semi-auto pistols. However, each and every bullet stopped dead, an inch from Sean, something not even Taka was expecting, since he had raised his shield in defence of Jane and Silver.
    "Oi, that was rude" Sean exclaimed, looking out to the floating field of stationary bullets. The ominous, Fear Aura - as Jane pictured it, considering what it did to the man - expanded from Sean again, and the pupils of ever thief dilated, before they dropped, one by one, and didn't move. It seemed like all their organs had stopped working, or something similar.
    "Wow" Jane muttered, at the same time as Nena rounded on him, replacing her shotgun.
    "Hey! That was cheating, plus, what ever happened to staying stealthy? Every bugger within a million miles would have felt that" She exclaimed, before looking back to the stunned faces of the group, and sighing. "Just, get us out of here" she muttered, shaking her head.
    "What the hell was that?" Eliot asked, shaking his head.
    "Yea, I'm curious as well" Jane put in.
    "I'll tell you later" Sean told them, before turning, replacing his gun, and staring into space. After small while, Jane frowned.
    "Has he fallen asleep?" She asked as a large, pitch black hole opened up in front of Sean.
    "Na, just making a hole. It’s a whole hole, not half a hole." Sean replied, grinning.
    "You expect us to go through that thing?" Jane asked sceptically with a raised eyebrow, to which Sean nodded.


    "Yes, I do. And this hole is a she, not a thing. Don't hurt her feelings or she might drop you in a volcano" He commented, nodding approvingly in the direction of the hole. "Or, you might get dropped into some strange other place where this whole thing is just a creation of someone else, a work of literature, to be enjoyed and the person creating this is having a lot of fun making all this stuff up" He droned, but most people had ignored him by this point.
    "If someone was making this stuff up, he must be the craziest kind of person" Jane commented before taking the lead and walking up to, and though, the hole. A few seconds of trepidation passed, and a few less than trusting glances where shared, but the rest of the group followed Jane though the hole anyway. Sean then went through last, the hole closing behind him.
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    Great update. Long overdue, but certainly worth the read

    I want to go to Disneyland too, now!

    Only a billion miles away

    +REP!

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    By the end, there will be no Disneyland.

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    Holy flying balls batman. What the hell was that all about? Ill try making a new post, it is neatly paragraphed in my book. Honest.
    Last edited by LillyanaKabal; September 07, 2013 at 08:05 AM.

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    Spent twenty minutes working on the spacing, and it didn't work.
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    Hmm, try downloading NotePad++ (http://notepad-plus-plus.org/)

    It's a REALLY useful tool to assist you in spacing, among other things that could really help with copy/pasting.

    I use it and it meshes well with this forum! Keep up the great work

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    Thanks Dance, you save my literature once again. Ill get it to work, then post Chapters 2 and 3.

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    Third time's the charm. Spacing is hap-hazard since I just proof-read 81 pages for mistakes and such, so its flow might be a bit buggered, but its better than the Wall of Text it was.

    CHAPTER TWO: THE SECOND DAUGHTER
    I. Jane arrived on the other side of the hole-clearly a portal of some description from the way it had worked- and was nearly knocked over by someone running past with what seemed to be a pair of pants in his hand. He was laughing manically and seemed to be having a great time. Jane stared oddly at the man as the rest of the party entered though the pitch black hole, it shut behind Sean as soon as he stepped though. A few seconds later another man ran past in his boxers, clearly chasing the man with the pants.

    "Oi, come back with my pants you dirty little rat-bast" He shouted, waving his fist as he sprinted down the street.
    "That's not normal, just so you know" Sean explained in response to the stares he was getting. "Well, it is normal for them, but they are the only people that do it" He continued. Jane glared into space for a few seconds before turning to Sean.
    "Why do I get the feeling he is going to be pinned down by a Siberian Tiger?" She asked, causing Sean to bellow with laughter.
    "I think we should stay here, it will be amusing" Sean commented.
    Meanwhile, down the street where the pant thief and the pantless man had run down, the pant thief had been knocked off his feet by a Siberian Tiger leaping out from one of the alleyways. It was currently perched on his chest, growling and baring its large teeth. The pants thief didn't seem very worried however.

    "Morning Katrine, nice weather ehh?" The pants thief asked the tiger, grinning rather nervously. The tiger smiled as only a tiger could smile, eyeing him before the pantless man caught up.
    "Caught you. Or rather, Katrine has caught you, but still, you are caught, regardless of catcher. Now, give me my pants." He said, taking the pants out of the thief's hand and putting them on. "Now, unless you want to get some quality time in with Katrine here, I suggest we go see Sean" he announced, nodding at Katrine, who got off him. The strong tiger muscles shrunk, the teeth and fur receded and the tiger slowly stood up right, a woman in a t-shirt and jeans was the end result of the transformation.
    "Andrew was an easy catch, he wasn't even trying. If he was, the guy'd be on the back of Time, about a mile in that direction" She explained, pointing to the sky. Andrew, however, seemed to be displeased.
    "It’s Andy, and don't forget it, or I’ll make you Time's chew toy" he told Katrine coldly.
    "Oh don't be so stiff, it’s only a name. The words used in yours hold no bother. The name of the Kabal however holds great power" Katrine told the group.

    "Pahh, if anyone can say it properly. Now, let’s not keep our old codger waiting” The man now in pants told Andy and Katrine, heading back towards the party they had ran past a good minute ago.
    The trio arrived at the newcomer party and was greeted by Sean, who always seemed to take command of things. He spoke to the man who had his pants stolen first.
    "Hey John, glad to see you are now wearing pants. It was not a pretty sight, your boxers." Sean told John-who glowered but stayed silent- before turning to Katrine.
    "You didn't get in a quick nibble while he was down did you? A tiger nibble can cause some serious problems" He joked, causing the tiger-girl to laugh.

    "No, I have enough self-control to not nibble people. When I am a tiger at least. It’s a different matter when I’m humanoid" Katrine replied, equally joking. She then approached Nena and stood next to her, they clearly had some sort of bond with each other. Eliot studied this new girl and and spoke up.
    "So, you’re a tiger, but you don't have a tail, like Nailah does. How does that work?" Eliot asked, in a quiet, questioning tone, but it was over-ruled by Jane, suddenly screeching at Sean.
    "You! How did you do that invisible trick, the one when you first arrived" Jane demanded, pointing at him and glaring.
    "It’s complicated. You need to grasp the ability to move between here and the Astral Plane first, and then be able to bend light around your spectral image you leave behind when you keep a foot in this plane." He explained, causing Jane to stare blankly, the usual reaction when Sean explained something.

    "I’m sorry I asked" Jane replied. Sean then turned on his heel and pointed down the street, to a large building.
    "We are all heading in that direction. Let’s go, we don't want to miss it!" He shouted, storming off down the road and not letting anyone get a word in edge-ways.
    Eliot tried to ask Katrine about why she didn't have a tail but couldn't get her attention properly. Then, walking down and wondering about it, he suddenly stopped, realization kicking in. Jane spotted this and tapped Beth, who stopped Sean's war-march.

    "What's up?" Jane asked Eliot, who ignored her and turned to Silverfang.
    "Why don't you have a tail?" He asked Silverfang, who took on Eliot's highly confused face.
    "I...I don't know. I just assumed it was normal not to have one. I don't even have one in my Familiar Form" He said, befuddled at the new development. Sean, however, scoffed at the comment.
    "You call growing some hair, and slightly elongating your teeth a Familiar Form? It’s a terrible, half-baked concoction that only humans could be pleased with. Honestly, I don't see how you can be sentient and still be so stupid" He ranted, as he did when it got onto the topic of humans. "You haven't got a tail because you have a half-assed summon that doesn't let you call half of your proper strength to bear. Its like having a Mini cooper engine in a Dodge Viper chassis." he continued before sighing loudly. "But, you have me now, so Ill teach you how to be proper later." he finished before continuing down the road, leaving everyone stunned at his rant.

    "Wow. That was, unexpected." Jane commented, being the only person that could gather enough coherency to speak. Sean simply shrugged.
    "Yep. It happens" He replied, marching down the road. Everyone else simply followed him in stunned silence.
    A good minute later the group arrived at a large building, several signs outside displayed things that Jane couldn't comprehend at a glance. One sign-whatever it was made out of seemed to be moving very slightly- had 'Universal Schism' written on it, in English. She thought, it was probably her mind doing stuff again, like it did with that Human House. She pointed to the sign and spoke to the group. She was more bothered about if it was in English rather than what the Universal Schism was.
    "That is in English, right?" she asked, not sure what she wanted to hear from the two. Eliot replied quickly, and shortly with a 'sure it is' but Silverfang was more articulate.
    "Yes, it’s in English. Why?" he asked, it was strange when someone had to ask about a language they were reading. Jane simply shrugged.

    "I don't know. I just thought it might be something else" She said, Sean seemed to know what she was talking about, and nodded.
    "You think that the thing at the Human House is going to be common ground now? Don't worry, it probably won't be until you get better. And the board is made out of Shifting Sands, it changes from viewer to viewer, and shows the language they are most fluent in." He explained, before nodding to Tak. "What are you seeing?" He asked.
    "I see Agnaet Erít cam, the Wolf Language. I thought the ability to write such was lost with Lupia. It is an interesting substance Sean." Takanuva replied.
    "It is. And really helpful for Tourist heavy places such as this place. Anyway, let’s get in" he announced, but Jane stopped him, clearly looking for a second question.

    "Isn't a Schism a division, usually between two groups?" She asked, not many band names made sense, so she didn't really know why she was trying to figure this one out. Sean looked at the board for a few seconds before nodding.
    "Yea, but they probably didn't know that when they named it, probably just thought that it was a really cool name" he explained, and then turned to the building and opened the door. a blast of noise roared out of the doorway, invading the groups ears.
    "Dam, that is some good noise reduction" Katrine commented, wide-eyed.
    "In we go." Sean all but ordered, entering the building. The group had no other option than to go in, which they did after varying levels of hesitation.
    As the group entered the building, they saw Sean talking-or though the level of din meant he was more shouting to be heard- a large man, clearly a bouncer. They clearly missed the start of the conversation, or it was a very strange conversation.
    "Well, I would like to think I am a very important person to her. or though, I am not sure" He shouted, to which the bouncer nodded. He then looked at the group that had walked in and approached Sean, flanking his back half.
    "Your entourage has to stay here though, we get to many crazies" He shouted back, gesturing for Sean to follow him.
    "Where do you think he is off to?" Jane asked them, looking around as Nena shrugged and followed Sean.
    "Probably backstage. He knows one of the members in the band that is playing here. That was who was shown outside." Beth explained.

    "Right..." Jane said slowly, this was a gig they were at, apparently.
    Whatever went on in that room Jane didn't know, but when Sean walked out of the backstage room carrying a large unconscious man, Beth shook her head, and Satyr just scoffed.
    "Can't you go anywhere without knocking someone out?" She asked, to which Sean shook his head.
    "Nope. It’s a necessary, like drinking tea." He replied before whistling softly, to a point where it couldn't be heard over the din of people. The bouncer sprang into life, looking around and straightening his suit.
    "Going to tell us what went on in there?" Jane asked Sean.
    "Nope" Sean and Nena said in near-sync, as the bouncer guy spoke to them.
    "Hey, the band will be on stage momentarily, have fun" The bouncer told them, trying to remember the last few minutes of his life.

    "Just like that? No ticket, or pay at the door?" Eliot asked, it was very strange.
    "Yep, San likes to keep people entertained, so this place has something going on all the time. And its free, the bouncer just keeps out guys that look unsavoury." Sean explained, leading the group though the now open double doors and deeper into the building.
    II. The group where lead into the main area, where thousands of people where gathered. Considering it was a closed area with thousands of people all dancing around, it was surprisingly cool. The earthlings where looking surprised at every feature, but the others treated it like every day things.
    "So, how do they keep this place so cool?" Jane asked as the others were staring at everything and everyone. There was a lot of non-human species around to catch the Earth eyes. Some looked like fish, lions and other animals from Earth, and some of them where so strange that they had no base of comparison with anything from Earth. However, Jane was more interested in learning more about everything.

    "Basic air magic. San has a few dozen magi around, and they keep the current fresh and cool. They trade out every few hours, and get to eat, sleep and spend the money they earn doing this" he explained, before thinking for a second. "On a controlled basis, I don't see why you couldn't try it. Air is easy to use, due to its abundance, and the amount of stray mana around here should make casting simple, even for a novice like you" Sean continued, before flicking a finger at Jane. A breeze ruffled Jane's hair.
    "I would love that, magic seems pretty cool. So, any tips to make this easier?" She asked, running her hand though the air, she could feel it but it didn't move to her command.
    "Hmmm. Well, magic has been all myth and fable for you, so there is a sub-conscious block in your mind, so it will be hard. Try feeling the air. If you can get the sense of what the air is, then I am sure you can do a bit of air-flicking" He said, their conversation was brought to an unofficial end as Lilly's band came on stage, and started playing. the guitar playing was amazing, and the drumming was highly proficient, but she couldn't make out any of the words.
    "What are they saying?" She asked very loudly, and even then it barely got though.
    'Tele-speak darling. It’s easier in this kind of situation' Sean said into her mind, causing a touch of shock. She waited a few seconds and then thought something, with Sean in mind.

    'Darling? Are we back in the 80's?' she asked, knowing it got though because of a smirk.
    ‘Na just felt like it. And the mike they are using should have a translation enchantment on it, strange you can't understand them. But they are doing a song about trusting people; you probably haven't got it down at Earth. It’s a popular song, and Lilly plays great on the guitar' Sean explained, which Jane nodded to.

    'Ok, I’ll just listen to the music, it’s nice, even if I can't understand It.' she replied, and did just that.
    Jane felt the air around her, trying to make it move to her whim, as the band played. She got nowhere with it, and the band played several songs-including on she thought she recognized, from Earth- before the lead singer spoke up.
    The crowd was whipped into frenzy by this point, and Jane felt bruised and tired from the constant bumping she had endured.
    Sean didn't seem bothered though, either that or he simply did something to avoid getting bumped. She wouldn't be surprised to hear he had sent every bump into another dimension or something equally crazy. However, he had a truly pleased smile on his face, as if watching his daughter play in the band had made him happier than most things could. She thought that he had rushing so quickly, without vaguely explaining the situation and leaving everyone confused before walking off at with a smile on his face. He must have dragged everyone here with such speed because he wanted to show this band to everyone. it was a nice idea, and she could get where he was coming from with his enthusiasm, something she wished her parents to have with her. Lilly was truly lucky to have such a parent.

    "It’s great to see we are so loved in this house of entertainment. However, some of the older members of the audience are giving me glares fit to kill an ox, so I think I shall appease them" she told the crowd before turning to Lilly, who played a long, deep note. The singer seemed to take something off the end of the microphone and singing into it. The song was different to the others she had been singing, they were fast paced and loud, this one was a slow song. It had an operatic style, and the only instrument playing was Lilly's guitar, and even that only played the single note. The song was sombre, boarding on sad. It had pacified the raging crowd in a few seconds, and how everyone was just stood around, looking up at the stage. It reminded Jane of something she had never seen, which she thought was really rather odd. But with Sean in the room, it was about par of the course. Jane found herself transfixed by the song, as well as thinking about how it did what it did.
    Suddenly, as if summoned by her thoughts, Sean appeared by her side.
    "You ready to go? There is a lot more to this planet than just this building" He explained. The song that she had lost herself in was over-the band had left the stage their set over- and tears where running down her cheeks. She hurriedly wiped them away and smiled.

    "Sure, sounds good" she told him, heading out of the band area, past the confused looking bouncer and into the open again. Lilly was outside waiting for them as they arrived, she didn't look like she had just be on stage, playing a guitar with astounding skill, for so long and thrashing around as if she had something under her skin. She there was not a single drop of sweat on her, and her cheeks where not even slightly flushed. There was-like everything that was related to Sean in anyway- something else, something about Lilly that wasn't being announced, for whatever reason.
    "Thanks for coming down, I am glad you could make it" Lilly told Nena, giving her a hug before turning to her father. "You 'n' all, never thought you would be here" She said to Sean, grinning as she gave him a hug as well.
    "You’re welcome dear, wouldn't miss this any more than I would miss Nena getting sold in a auction and getting to kill every one of the little bastards that where there" He replied, grinning widely. His other smiles seemed rather maniacal-not that this one didn't have manic traces- or even a bit forced at times, but this one was the first Jane had seen that was proper.
    "Well it was a lovely break, but we got to get back, San is busy and we have to help him" Andy said, shocking Jane slightly by breaking the silence he had held. "I know I don't, exactly, but I stick by this one through thick and thicker" He continued, gesturing to John as he did. "I’ll probably see you up there in a bit Sean, but for the rest of you down here, goodbye and have fun" he finished, giving them all a light wave and heading off, followed by John and Katrine.
    Jane tried to take advantage of the momentary silence in Andy's wake but Lilly took the opportunity first.
    "That is great hair. How did you get it to grow so long?" She asked, running a hand down it. Jane blushed as she did whenever someone complimented her hair, and simply shrugged.

    "I am not sure, it just grows. My dad never cared enough to cut them, and I liked to keep it this long. It felt good." She replied before turning to Sean. She had two questions, but the song that made her-and a lot of other people, from what she could see- cry was not something she wanted to think about. "There was a song they played, the second one, and I recognized the guitaring in it" she told him, as Lilly ran her hand though the deep jungles of her hair. It felt a lot like a comb going though, for some strange reason.
    "Yes, I thought you would pick up on that." he replied to Jane's question, taking a breath to launch into one of his massive explanations.

    "On that note I’m off, going to take Nehvna and her lovely dear shopping for clothes, shoes, hair styling or Wave Motion Cannons. Whatever the shops sell." Beth announced hastily, dragging a softly complaining Nehvna by the hand off down the road. Lilly then removed her hand from Jane's jungle and pointed to the building behind them.
    "I best be getting back as well, always more things to do" She told them before opening the door and going back inside.
    "What cheek" Sean said in wake of Beth's leaving, he shook his head before turning to Jane. She seemed a bit confused-probably didn't know what a Wave Motion Cannon was, but he would explain it later- but attentive. "Anyway, about the song. You humans are an ignorant, self-destruction race bent on stripping every last scrap of wealth from the ground and killing yourself with either the pollution of your factories, or the unbridled fury of the sun, whichever comes first." Sean started, and Jane didn't seem to be in the mood for another anti-human rant.

    "Yes, I got the general idea that you don't like us. Now, can we talk about the song?" She asked him, which made him chuckle.
    "If you'd let me finish. Now, once in a blue moon, when the stars allign and cows give birth to three headed offspring, you humans come up with a flash of creativity, and make something that doesn't actually blow up, ignite, cut apart or otherwise harm anything. So it could be said that your music is on a level that some other species enjoy it to the extent that it is copied and played by their musicians. And some species like your creative impulses and would like to take you and have you impulse on their planet, but unfortunately its illegal and carries a high punishment, so that doesn't happen often" he explained, finishing with a nod and generally looking pleased about himself.

    "So, you like our bands?" Jane simplified, deflating Sean. He flopped his shoulders and glared.
    "Yes. You music good. We like. We copy." Sean used short, sharp sentences, much like a person just learning to speak.
    "Ok, ok. No need to speak like a caveman" Jane replied, sighing before shaking her head. "I guess you have important you stuff to do, so I am going to follow Beth's lead and drag my boys-and girl, since Nailah is here- around to check out the shops." Jane told Sean, turning to Eliot and Silverfang with a grin.
    "Sure-sure. Me and Tak will head up to San's and talk business with the big man. But first, you lot will need money" Sean said, pulling a card out of his pocket and giving i to Jane. "That is for one of my accounts here at San's place. I am sure that you can't spend all that is in it, so go nuts. I’ll see you peeps later" he told them, but Jane looked like a light bulb flashed in her brain, and she stopped him.

    "Just one thing before you go. Is, or was Atlantis real?" She asked, and from Sean's hysterical reaction she thought herself rather stupid for asking.
    "Ahh girl. That question is complicated, I’ll tell you about it later" He replied, turning and walking away, followed closely by Nena. Jane shrugged looked at the card for a bit and then walked up to Silverfang and put her head on his chest.
    "I think this is the first time we have been alone since your house" She said, looking at Eliot as she spoke. "So, who's up for some shopping?" She asked. Eliot shrugged indifferently, but Nailah grinned, looking rather excited.
    Silverfang simply shook his head.
    "Really? Out of everything you can ask him for, you ask if Atlantis is real? That is just...well it’s just you really" he told Jane, holding her tighter to his chest so he wouldn't get hit. "Anyway, shopping sounds good".

    CHAPTER THREE: THE LAIMENT OF SHADOW
    I. Shadow looked at the ferry shuttle in the port with a sigh, he knew he could make the Warp to The Hive-so called because it was a beacon to every pirate, mercenary, assassin and just about everyone with a broken moral compass- with his new Master but he didn't want to draw attention to himself, he didn't know where the Daughter's people where, and he wanted to keep silent, and maintain the element of surprise for as long as he could. As he boarded the ship, he saw a couple of the fish-people looking at him, and so he decided to kill them when they departed onto The Hive. He didn't like being looked at by fish-people, it irritated him a great deal.

    "Ferry setting off, estimated time of travel, one hour, twenty three minutes" the tannoy system said. Shadow nodded to it, not that he needed to, and sat down on one of the seats, far away from the fish-people. The person sat next to him turned to Shadow and spoke.

    "Hey dude, what’s taking you to The Hive?" He asked, leaning into Shadow. However, when Shadow stared at him like a lion staring at his prey, the man quickly fell silent again, a state Shadow preferred him in. His mouth stayed shut throughout the rest of the journey, and the fish-people didn't look at him again, so he considered not killing them, he was in a hurry after all.
    The ferry lifted off and escaped the gravitational pull of the planet fairly quickly, it lacked any hyper-drive systems but the engine had sub-light capabilities, and was fast enough for planetary arm travel. Shadow usually avoided this type of travel, as did anyone that had the ability to Warp, but then it was necessary to keep a low profile, and so he endured it, for now. As the ferry reached its half-way point, an hour into the flight, Shadow changed his mind again about the fish-people. He was irritated and wanted to kill something, and they did look at him very purposefully, so they deserved killing in his book, which was a very strange book to everyone who wasn't him.

    Shadow was bored and thus annoyed as the ferry touched down on The Hive, it had been a boring ride, but his neighbour had been itching to speak but dared not for fear of what Shadow might do. However, that had not been enough to keep him entertained, and the fish-people would have to be forgone, since his informant, the man who Shadow had come here to see, was not at the landing area. This meant that Shadow would have to go hunt him down and find out why, which left no time for the stalking and killing of irritating fish-people, but then, from the way they were speaking he could tell they were going to be killed by someone else before the end of the day. Tourists didn't belong in this place, but it made good revenue for the thugs, bandits and thieves in the streets.

    Shadow knew that this place was a dangerous place for a person alone, so he took on his Hybrid form. His new master had given him the ability to get a proper Familiar Form-the form he would have used in the fight where his blade was destroyed, but his master at the time didn't have the strength to allow him that- but that would have been overkill for this place. His Hybrid form was much the same as his old Familiar Form, except for a deep red light in the centre of his skeletal eye, and his coat's hem and cuffs where lined with the same deep red-his own little addition to it, now he could control the form at will- which made it look all the more intimidating. As Shadow walked down the street, several shady people with large coats, perfect for covering weapons until they were needed, stared at him, but a quick glare with his skeletal eye sent them running with a panicked, somewhat fearful look. A few scantily clad girls also winked and him, some flirted openly, but he ignored them as he ignored the large people in the background, but just close enough to be at the girl's side if anything untoward happened. Shadow told himself that he was here for business, not pleasure. However, he compromised with himself by mentally saying he might pick one up on the way back, depending on his mood.

    It did not take that long to get to the office where his informant was, and so he pulled the handle down and pushed the door open hard, so it slammed against the wall, he wanted to make an impression and scare the man a bit, so he was easier to talk to when it came to the reason why he wasn't there to meet him. However, he could be the scariest thing in the universe, he could be Fear Incarnate and he would not scare the man that was he was looking at. Well, the piece of him that remained at least.
    "This day gets better and better" He said to himself sarcastically, walking up to the bloody remains of his informant and observed it, trying to find out who, or what, killed him. The man's torso was all that remained, his arms, legs and head had been brutally pulled off with great force, leaving ragged stumps and blood soaked clothing. It only took him a few seconds of observation to show that nothing he knew killed like this. That meant it was someone was trying to hide as something else, and they were not doing a good job. But then, he didn't know who was doing this-either what he was trying to hide as, or the thing that actually did it, so thinking about it, they were doing a great job of hiding who they were. Shadow knew that it wasn't anyone on this planet, they made have been evil, hedonistic murderers, but they didn't kill like this, not that they had the strength to make the stumps like this. Even if a man dark enough to make this kill had come to town, he would have had it in a place more people could see it. Shadow knew that people this bad didn't hide their kills in the shadows; they wanted it to be seen by everyone, which made this body a problem. It wasn't exactly hidden, but few people had a reason to come in here, his informant didn't really advertise.

    The secondary question of where the man's limbs had gotten to was solved with a quick look around. They were dotted hap-hazardly around the room, as if the assailant didn't know what to do with them after he had pulled them off, so he simply threw them over his shoulder. Shadow had never seen anyone killed like this before, and he had hung out with a few murderers. He then turned away from the scene, his one lead into the location of the Daughter gone, and turned to the door. A door he had unfortunately left ajar. This meant that the Prementari where stood there, looking at him. They may have been little more than thugs that the head people called 'Law Enforcement' but they had enough pull to arrest people that where to sloppy with their mis-deeds. The look on their face clearly meant that they thought Shadow was the man who had made this kill and his skeletal eye and shiny red light was not helping to convince them otherwise. They also had rather powerful guns, and his sword was little more than a fractured piece of metal. He might have taken this party out, but the Prementari had developed a quick response to people stupid enough to resist them-a response that was a simple EMP to knock out everything the running person could use to escape, and then the shutting of the city gates- so he wouldn't get anywhere with that. And if he tried to Warp off planet, it would make the hellish ferry ride pointless. With these odds stacked against him, all he could do was put his hands up, casually exasperated.

    "It wasn't me" he told them, not expecting them to believe him. They didn't, and quickly shot him with guns, which turned out to not be the explosive kind he was expecting, and instead dart guns filled with a toxin that paralyzed its target in seconds. 'I hate today' he thought as his body collapsed onto the floor. A single dart would only delebate him slightly, but the trigger happy Prementari hit him with half a dozen of the buggers.
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    CHAPTER FOUR: THE EXPLORATION
    I. Jane grinned as she skipped down the street. From what Nailah was saying, there was so many shops here, with so many things to sell, Silverfang however was being a bit annoying, which was killing her buzz.
    "What made you ask about Atlantis? It was so, strange and sudden" Silverfang stated, which made Jane stop skipping and glare at him.
    "I don't know, it just popped into my mind. 'Hmm, he knows a lot, let’s ask about Atlantis'. I don't really know where the thought came from, it was just there, and so it had to be asked" She replied, having lost her giddiness to skip, she simply walked at Silver's side.
    "I think it was a cool question. I'd love to find out about the myths of home. The Yeti, the Lock Ness Monster, Shangra La, El Dorado, the lot of them." Eliot said, musing about Earth.
    "Wasn't El Dorado the name of some guy that covered himself in gold dust?" Jane asked.
    "Yea, but it was also made into a place by the Spanish, which might possibly exist" Eliot replied before Nailah pointed out a shop.
    "We are going there first, and replacing them terrible rags you call clothing" she told the group in a tone that would brook no argument, but she argued anyway.
    "Hey, I am happy in this. It is a serviceable outfit" Jane told Nailah, who ignored her complaints and pushed Jane into the shop.
    The woman at the counter when Jane stumbled into the shop had shiny skin, and strange, staring eyes. There was no hair on her hands, and on close inspection, several places of her skin appeared scaly, rather than the one piece look of human skin. However, she was friendly enough.
    The woman grinned as she saw Eliot enter cautiously, immediately clocking him as a human. She didn't get humans in her shop very often, so she loved to play with them when she could. The human at the front, being pushed by the wolf girl, smelt strange, but she didn't dwell on it.
    "She needs a dress, and I will get her in one of if I have to tie her down" Nailah told the shop keeper, grinning.
    "What is with the sudden desire to get me a dress?" Jane demanded, paying little attention to the shop keeper, if she had her way they would be out of here in a flash.
    "You would look lovely in a dress, and I will be dammed if I let you walk around in such scruffy clothes and waste all that potential." Nailah replied. Nailah herself did not suit a dress, so whenever she found a girl that did, she made sure that they wore one. The shop owner moved fluidly from behind the counter, and stood in front of Jane, and observed her figure.
    "Yes, I have just the thing" She told Jane, rolling her s, making it almost like a hiss.
    "Seems rather strange, this person" Eiliot muttered to Silverfang, but didn't voice anything. Nailah was-in his opinion- too eager to pull her sword out and swing it around.
    "Right this way, Miss" The shop owner announced, rolling her s again as she lead them into a separate room.
    "We are going to look for more manly things to shop for" Eliot told Nailah before she entered the room.
    "With what? And anyway, you should stick around. It won't be long" She replied. Nailah then entered the room with Jane and shut the door.
    Beth was staying true to her word and treating Nehvna to a pampering session. Or at least, she tried to. When Nehvna saw how they were brushing their customer’s hair, she had to intercede, teaching them a few tricks she found convenient for Jane's hair. It didn't take long for the news to spread, and Nehvna found herself unofficially employed and working combs though people’s hair gracefully, and with no shortage of enjoyment. For Nehvna, there was nothing better than freeing a person's hair from the mess of knots, and cleaning the grease from it. After a couple of people had left with hair in a much better state than they had come in with, she found herself with Beth on her seat.
    "This was meant to be a pampering, not you getting a job" Beth told Nehvna slightly irritated.
    "It’s unofficial, and this is pampering. I love working with people's hair Beth, it would never get old or boring for me." She replied, working her comb though Beth's hair slowly, methodically removing all the knots without tugging on the hair itself. Beth had to admit that she was good at this sort of thing, but that wasn't the point, she still had a spa day planned for the girl. Beth then looked over at Avrion, who was sat on a chair in the corner, looking apologetic at everyone who offered her a glance, she had no backbone outside of a fight, which made things awkward at most times.
    Beth hesitated for a few seconds, weighing the pros and cons before speaking "So, I am just going to have this wonderful spa day by myself? It would be strange".
    "Yep. You just go and have you spa, with your mud masks and your foot massages, I’ll work on people hairs here." Nehvna replied, finishing her brushing and leading the chair over to the sink to wash her hair.
    "I know, but I was going to take you to the lovely Topaz Star's house. Her and her girls are amazing with their hands." Beth told Nehvna over the sound of the shower-head, making it sound like it meant more than just massaging.
    "You can have your great stars, I am staying here with the hair, and that is final. But take Avrion with you, she looks like she is about to cry, and needs a good day out to cheer her right up. If it is at all possible. I am beginning to think she can't be cheered up, but I am prepared to try. Or let you try at least" Nehvna then switched off the shower-head, having finished with Beth's hair. She softly combed it though again, straightening the remaining knots and getting out the excess water before placing a towel over it and starting to dry one section.
    "Fine, I’ll take your sulky girl out while you play with people's hair" Beth replied, slightly miffed by glad to have someone to take out.
    When Nehvna was done with Beth's hair, the door opened, and a tall man in a black hooded cloak walked in. He eyed Beth, as if silently asking to talk with her, but before Beth could reply, he was accosted by Nehvna.
    "My god, are you part hedge?" She asked in disbelief.
    "Excuse me?" he replied in a confused tone, not quite sure how to reply.
    "Your hair. I haven't seen anyone with it in that condition and I have seen a lot of hairstyles. Sit down, this is going to take some time" she told the man, ushering him into the seat Beth had just gotten up from and brushing her hands down it, doing a quick check before getting to work.
    "I’ll take your girl out then, have fun" Beth said, clearly amused at the way Nehvna had handled the man.
    "Sure, just be good" Nehvna told Beth, but was clearly focused on the man-who seemed very surprised at the way the events had turned- and his terrible hair. Beth was still giggling softly as she took Avrion out of her seat and out of the door.
    "Now, let’s get to work on this" She said to herself, brandishing her comb like a weapon of war.
    II. Sean and Nena made their way up to the massive hall that sat on the top of a slight hill, overlooking the rest of the buildings. To simply look at the building gave the looker a slight feeling of jubilation, and problems-while not outright dissolving- seemed to have less weight. Sean could feel the effects as he moved closer to the building, and he was sure that Nena could as well. This was-like many things in his life- something he had planned, so he didn't totally alienate. However, as they approached the giant building there was a man leaning against the wall with a smile-clearly he felt the influence of the building- and disproportionate armour, that seemed to strain against his bulky body. The thing that stood out the most was the two large bull horns on his head, looked very sharp and very strong. Despite his intimidating look-the smile did nothing to lessen this- Sean smiled upon seeing him, which was not something Nena had seen him do a lot, so she relaxed.
    "Hey Taurus. What brings you down here?" He asked, looking at the giant doorframe as he spoke.
    "The Council demands an audience with you. They know you have found her, and they want to see her" Taurus told him with a strong, but not very deep, voice.
    "Yea, well the Council can kiss my ass. They have no right to demand anything from me, and sending you down is very unofficial you know. Strange, considering how much of a stickler Aries is for the rules." Sean replied, approaching the door.
    "I told them that you would not be amicable to this route, but they insisted. I shall relay your message". Taurus explained, but Sean waved his hand dismissively-at the comment, not Taurus himself.
    "Na, no need to rush back to that place, comes have a few with San." Sean offered. Taurus thought for a few seconds before replying.
    "Very well. I have been meaning to learn more about your daughters anyway, so I guess I can start with the eldest" He looked at Nena and nodded, to which caused a smile.
    "Always nice to have fans" Nena said before turning to Sean, who pushed the large doors open and stepped inside.
    A very large man-over nine foot tall and a mind-boggling amount of pounds in weight- was walking around the hall, periodically booming with laughter, and carrying a Stein that could bath a baby in, had it been filled with water, and not the alcoholic liquid that it was currently holding. He then saw the door open, and turned to see who had opened it. When Sean and his small party walked though, the large man's face grew even jollier.
    "WELCOME FRIEND!" He yelled, with such volume to burst a lesser man's ear drum. Sean smiled grinned and waved.
    "Want to say that a bit louder San? I think they missed it in the Tarvantar" he joked, walking up to the man-who seemed to shrink to a more reasonable size- and giving him a hug.
    "You deserve such volume! You are a great man, worth of song and equally great volume!" San announced, his voice quieter, but still very loud. He did not seem to notice the vast volume he was speaking at, and neither did anyone else in the building. "And anyway, you know that things need to be much louder to get though the glyphs you daughter made!" he continued, swinging his Stien, which seemed to have shrunk with his size, around before taking a deep drink from it. "Come my friends, Stiens for everyone!" he finished, gesturing to a table behind him. Nena seemed almost gleeful as she walked over to the table. The men and women greeted her, and she was instantly sucked into the conversation, and aura of jollyness.
    "I shall have a Stein of tea." Sean said, a clear smile on his face, but his regular calm seemed to eminent from him, as usual.
    "Very well, a Stien of tea for my friend Sean, and a Stien of Krouberry for Taurus!" San bellowed to his hall. A few seconds later two women in attractive dresses an abundance of mirth approached with the requested drinks, and then left again once the drinks had been taken. Taurus took a gulp of his drink and pure bliss crossed his face.
    "It has been a long time since I have had this. The Council doesn't let any sort of drink apart from water in. It gets annoying. Now, if you will excuse me, I will go dance. It has been long time since I have done that as well" Taurus told the two, trotting off to a large area of the hall, where people where dancing around a fire that cooked a giant hunk of meat.
    San watched Taurus go off to dance with a grin before turning to Sean again.
    "Now, as I see it, you have brought several other people to this planet! Several, human people!" San's voice got lower than it was, but it still boomed.
    "Indeed I did, and one of them is very important." He replied, rather cryptically before taking a drink from his Stien.
    "You mean you have found her!?" San asked, his voice increasing again in anticipation.
    "Indeed. She is here, and she is on the Third Wall as well. No idea how to break it yet, but give me some time. When have I ever failed?" Sean asked, looking into his Stien. It was great tea, but then, San and his people where true artisans with all things liquid. San bellowed in laughter and then turned to the hall and shouted.
    "Time for a celebration, a feast for everyone!” A collective cheer ran though the hall in reply to his bellow, but one of the attractive women approached San.
    "Umm, sir. We don't have enough food stocks for a feast, we have The Ball coming up" She explained, and for the first time San lost his jolly look.
    "I don’t like this news, bring me some other news" he muttered-his mutter was on par with a normal speaking volume- and then turned to the hall again. "Scratch that, a feast for no one!" He bellowed again, and was met with a collective groan of disapproval. San's jolly look returned as two women-beautiful enough to make San's servers look plain and drab- approached.
    "Hello Sean" The taller, clearly older one said. Sean took another swing of his Stien before replying.
    "Hello girls. How goes things?” The older one looked at the younger one, who smiled at Sean.
    "We feed on the ones you point us at, the streets crawl less with their ilk, and so we come here. We just need to stand and feed off the residue." The younger one informed him. San laughed as they finished speaking.
    "Trust you to have an entourage of two Succubi!" San laughed, clearly amused.
    "Well, they are just like any other women. You feed them, treat them well and save them from someone who is trying to kill them, and they are like putty in your hands" He joked. Two swift kicks to his shins cut his laughter short however.
    "Very dangerous putty that!" San put in, before laughing again.
    "Well, it’s no fun if they are tame, right girls?" he asked the two Succubi, who seemed to be glaring at him in a playfully angry manner that made Sean chuckle. His face then changed, and he quickly added something else to his sentence. "So, where is the bone-head and his friend? Where'd ya send them?" He asked San, who tapped his nose.
    "To work!" He replied, as cryptic as Sean could ever be.
    Jane was amazed at the speed and finesse that she had been undressed with. She was not at all bothered by her state of undress, even in front of this stranger. She had an unfortunate amount of experience in being undressed in front of strangers, but she hoped to put that all behind her and move on now. The slithering shop-keeper started to measure Jane's height, which caused a great deal of confusion.
    "I thought you said you had the perfect dress for me, so why do you need to measure me?" She asked, to which the woman smiled.
    "I have every dress in here, for basic travel robes, to a ensemble fit the Kabals themselves. Not that I sell many of them" She said generally, marking down Jane's height, and beginning to check her width. The answer simply gave Jane more questions to as though.
    "The Kabals? I have heard them mentioned a few times. Who are they?" She asked, feeling the tape measure around her breasts. This woman seemed a proper dress maker, not that Jane had a bust worth mentioning.
    "There is four of them, and they are the reclusive, hermit-esque rulers of Tarvantar-some say they are myths, since they have not been publically seen in a extremely long time- and hold sovereign over the Kabal Empire, which is only challenged in military and economical might by the Khani empire, ruled by the Kami of death Chaoz." Nailah explained, and looked like she was going to go on, but Jane interrupted.
    "Chaoz? Sean said something about him, said he sucked at plumbing" she put in, which shocked Nailah slightly.
    "Ohh. Well. I guess he wouldn't be too good at plumbing, being the ruler of a very large...I am not actually sure what the Khani call their collection of planets." She confessed, to which Jane raised her eyebrows in surprise.
    "So, these Kabals, and Khanis stretch across multiple planets?" She asked. The snake woman had since scurried away to find Jane a dress that suited her, and matched her measurements.
    "Yes, and then there is the Galactic United Union. They were kicking up a fuss a while ago, but the Kabals managed to push them back and raze their sector when the Khani came to assist them. The Kabals and the Khani have been allies for a long time, so maybe Sean is affiliated with one of them, in some way" she mused.
    "So, is it common to 'own' a sector?" Jane asked-it was quite baffling to go from single planet existence to learning that the universe was in no way a quiet place- trying to get all the information she could. Translating languages was all well and good, but she wanted to know about the universe a bit more.
    "Kind of. It is less common for a sector to have more than two official rulers, and more often than not they are allied with each other, but having sole ownership over a sector is rare. There is only four instances of a sector being owned by a single ruler, and two of them sectors only hold a single planet. The other two are the Kabals and the Khani" Nailah continued. Jane thought about it for a while, the one planet sectors must be very abnormal, and she was going to ask about them, but another question sprang to mind.
    "So...who owns Earth then?" she asked, hoping it wasn't a stupid question. Nailah laughed at Jane, but it wasn’t' a cruel laugh, it was more amused.
    "No one. The sector is considered holy ground by the worshipers of Gaia, and so most people leave them alone. Not that humans would allow anyone to do anything openly in that sector anyway, with all them inter-planetary demolition devices." Nailah told Jane, looking as if she was preparing to explain more, if asked. However, the question asked was not the one she expected.
    "What inter-planetary devices? We only have space rockets, and they are more for moving guys, not blowing things up" Jane asked, confused as to what Nailah was getting at.
    "The things that you call nuclear bombs. What else are they for if not blowing the bollocks off the person that dares make a settlement on the planet next door?" Nailah asked. She was in no way ready for the statement that followed. A statement that Jane seemed reluctant to give.
    "Ohh, them. Yea. They were kind of used to kill ourselves. But then we realized how much damage they do, and now we just have them at hand and glare at each other with them, sort of like a standoff". From Nailah's facual expression, Jane knew that distain for the human race had just reached an all-time high.
    "Wow. I mean, I know you humans where fond of killing yourselves, but that is just..I have no words for it." Nailah finished, shaking her head. Jane stood, naked and ashamed, in silence until the snake woman returned with a dress.
    It was a deep green- the same colour as her eyes where- and had beauty in its simplicity. Jane instantly fell in love with it. It was an empty dress, there were no patterns or embroidery, and it was all made of one material. But from Jane's point of view, they would simply cheapen the dress, and take away from whatever it was that made it look so good. Jane was surprised at how much she liked the dress, considering she didn't like any sort of dress than Nehvna had tried to get her in over the years, and was visibly impatient to try it on.
    "I thought you would like this one. It was just a hunch I had. Now, give me a second and I’ll get it on you" The shop woman said, slipping the dress onto Jane with as much finesse as she had taken Jane's old clothes with. The dress itself felt like it was made out of some natural cloth, something that had grown undisturbed, until it was time to fashion it into clothing. Jane felt at ease in the dress, which was strange, she hadn't felt at ease for a long time.
    "This dress...its, amazing" Jane commented in a breathless voice, rubbing her hand down the skirt part.
    "I am glad you like it. To any other it would be expensive, but to you it is my gift. You wear it better than any I could have sold it to, and that alone is payment enough" The snake woman told Jane, who could not find the words to express how she was feeling, and so simply stood there with her mouth open like a seal awaiting food. Nailah rose from her seat and took Jane's hand, the earlier dispute al but forgotten.
    "Come, let’s go see the boys, shall we?" Nailah asked, taking Jane out of the room.
    As the two girls and the snake woman exited, they were greeted by Eliot holding Silverfang's hand and looking as if he was concentrating very hard. Silverfang looked equally concentrated, and neither heard Nailah and Jane approach.
    "What are you two doing?" Jane asked, causing the pair to jump and turn to her.
    "Dam, you snuck up on me" Silverfang announced, taking deep breaths before looking at Jane's dress. His eyes just stared, and no words came from his open mouth.
    "I did no sneaking, you were just not looking." Jane retorted, before seeing Silverfang's eyes. "And now you concentrate on my figure with equal gusto. Am I really so alluring?" Jane asked, approaching Silverfang and sliding her hands around him.
    "Yes, you are to most alluring thing I have ever laid eyes on. Your allure is more than the alluringness of the alluratron" He babbled before leaning down and kissing Jane softly.
    "I love it when you babble, you mash words to make a dictionary cringe" Jane replied, feeling extremely content at the moment. A moment that was interrupted by Eliot.
    "Well, unless you two wish to find a bed and consummate your new found relationship, I suggest we check out the rest of this district" Eliot announced, which earnt glares from Jane for ruining the moment, but agreement from everyone else.
    III. Nehvna had just finished the hardest hair-dressing she had ever done. Even Jane's hair didn't get like this man's, and hers wasn't even washed. Not that her ex-father would let her wash it.
    'He won't be not letting anyone do anything again.' Nehvna thought, and then was quickly stunned by the confusing state of the sentence, and how cold it was towards Jane's father, regardless of how nasty he was. She quickly snapped back to reality and smiled at the now shiny haired man.
    "Don't let it get in such a state again, its not good for hair this length" Nehvna commented, running her hand down the shoulder length hair.
    "I shall endeavour to do so" The man replied, a sad voice, but with the will to bare it. He then stared into Nehvna's eyes, piercing black pits boring into her mind. "Now tell me, where is the Daughter of the Earth?" He asked her, his voice silent, and yet as loud as a volcano erupting. Nehvna opened her mouth to speak, without the action being run by her brain first.
    "She is in this part of the city. I am not sure where exactly though, Sean might know. He knows everything." She told him, bringing a nod from the tall man.
    "Thank you, I shall seek him out" he told Nehvna before turning to the door and entering onto the street, leaving Nehvna mesmerized for a few more seconds after his departure before she regained control of her senses.
    "Wow, what the hell was that?" She asked herself out loud.
    "That-" someone behind her said, making Nehvna jump, she forgot she was in a public place. Nehvna turning to see who was behind her, and saw a girl. She looked young, and was rather petite in stature. However, despite her bodily structure, she had a very commanding presence, and she appeared slightly regal. There was nothing in her eyes however, since they were covered by a strip of cloth, much like a blindfold. There was something strange-Sean level strange- about the blindfold, but she didn't dwell on it. San's place was apparently very popular, so it was entirely possible that she was royalty from somewhere. And they had already visited three planets other than Earth, so what was to say the rest of the universe wasn't active as well?
    "You have a sharp mind, I nearly cut myself with my little probing" the small girl commented, smiling softly to herself. Nehvna had no idea what probe she was talking to, and Sean had taught her not to ask if she didn't want a few more dead brain cells, so she asked something different.
    "You made it sound like you knew what that man had done." Nehvna prompted, hoping for the girl to continue.
    "Yes, I did. And I do. It was a low level mesmerisation. Suitable for people with low to no understanding of magic. The aftereffects should have lasted for a while longer. You have a strong mind Miss." The blindfolded girl informed Nehvna. It seemed that however magic worked in this universe-Sean had not explained that point yet- this girl seemed to be well versed in the art.
    The blindfolded girl smiled to herself, which was strange, there was no reason to smile, Nehvna hadn't made any jokes that she knew of.
    "No jokes my dear. But Sean has not explained how magic flows, because you have not asked. He is trying to lay off explaining without prior prompting. It is working well for him so far." the blindfolded girl told Nehvna, seemingly very in the know about pretty much everything. She then sighed, and shook her head.
    "That man, he searches for the Daughter with random people, but he could have just asked me. Never was too good at using them two orbs he calls eyes." she muttered, but loud enough for Nehvna to hear, which brought up a point she was meaning to ask, but felt awkward asking.
    "Umm, if you don't mind me asking. I mean, sorry if it offends you but-" Nehvna verbally stumbled, before the girl tittered.
    "You wish to ask about my blindfold, yes?" She asked which shocked Nehvna.
    "Did you...did you probe me again?" She asked in trepidation, wondering how much bad stuff constant probing would cause.
    "No, it is a question that everyone asks. And there is no 'bad stuff' attached to constant probing, I can probe you as much as I like, and it won't do you any harm" she told Nehvna, before thinking about her sentence and blushing. "Great, I just had to think of it like that, didn't I?" she asked Nehvna rhetorically. "In any case, I am blind. You might have guessed that. I was born blind, and I have never seen the world with eyes that where my own. But I see better than most, without them, and have never had them, so I don't know what I am missing. It can't be that good" she explained, to which Nehvna nodded, in fake acknowledgement.
    "And you see with magic? Lovely." she said, making a comment to solidify her knowledge. A comment that turned out to be wrong.
    "No, I just see. It’s the same way you see with your eyes. Now, seeing more than I see, that is magic." She said confusingly before heading for the door.
    "You’re going to follow the tall man?" Nehvna asked, and saw eyebrows rise from behind the blindfold.
    "And they say my mind is unreadable. Yes, I am. He means no harm, but can get into trouble sometimes." She said before grinning. "Want to come along?" she offered. Nehvna fought with herself for several seconds before nodding.
    "Yes, I do".

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    I miss Dance.

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