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    A thousand years before Robb Stark was hailed as King of the North by his countrymen, there existed another line of kings. At this time, the Targaryens were busy crawling out of the ashes of Old Valyria and far from Westeros, yet there was no shortage of fire and blood in this land of shifting seasons. Indeed, the First Men and their Old Gods had been engaged in bitter warfare for generations against the Andals, the new folk from the east who brought with them a new religion - a new way of life. House Mudd was besieged on all fronts by the petty Andal Kings, its Warrior King Tristifer IV successful in war, yet to fight his hundredth battle. Lannister and Gardener were calling their bannermen, ready to tear each other apart; while the great Falcon and Storm King's looked on.

    These are tales for another time however, as our story is of one people tearing themselves asunder. One thousand years before Aegon's landing, the Starks had been reigning the North from Winterfell for generations. The head of House Stark and King of the North during this era was Beron, the Halfling. The son of the King Beyond the Wall, Breal the Bard, and a Stark woman, Beron and his supporters claimed that he was the heir of the Stark legacy.

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    Behind them stood the greatest houses of the North. The Greystarks, Umbers, Glovers, Flints, Tallharts, Karstarks, Burleys, and Ryswells were among the strongest. Yet all these houses' influence paled in comparison to one family.

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    House Bolton of the Dreadfort have always been the rivals of the Starks. Equal in greatness to the Starks and more savage in war, they were the one House that has always been a threat to Stark hegemony in the north. Indeed, it was their Lord who called into question the legitimacy of Beron's kingship. Lord Domeric of the Dreadfort was mistrustful that the son of the King Beyond the Wall sat on the Northern throne. He did not trust the man to guard the realm from his father, and was worried that the Dreadfort was the greatest target for the northern hordes due to its proximity to Breal's realm.

    Beron himself had no love for the Boltons, viewing them as disloyal and barbaric. Relations between the two rulers became further strained when Beron refused to consider a marriage contract between his heir Brandon, and Lyra Bolton, the daughter of Domeric. While Beron rejected the union due to Prince Brandon's insistence that the match could never work, Domeric refused to listen and felt that his House was slighted.

    Shortly after, Beron set out north past the Wall with his chief lieutenant Ondrew Umber to confront his father. He gave governance of the realm to Prince Brandon, and made his master-at-arms, Rickard Cassel, the castellan of Winterfell. Beron ordered his greatest lords to each send soldiers to support the expedition. Umber, Karstark, Glover, Tallhart, and Dustin each sent a great contingent of troops. Torrhen Greystark sent word that he was mustering men, but the rest of the major lords appeared more hesitant. The Flints raised levies, but each brother sent word to Beron that they were expecting attacks from the Ironborn and Arryn's, and as a result could not partake in the expedition. Lords Burley and Ryswell later sent word via crow that men were being sent up through the Dreadfort to aid Beron; yet Domeric was silent.

    In a great battle, the Stark host under Beron engaged Breal the Bard in an epic battle. Aided by the nights watch, Beron was able to scout out his father's host as it gathered a two days ride out from the wall, and crushed it in a battle that lasted several hours. The Wilding army was routed when Beron slayed his father in personal combat, and the threat was no more.

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    Yet this was only the beginning. Hugo Karstark, the heir of the Lord of Karhold, was invited to the Dreadfort by the heir of Domeric, Vayon. Here the Karstarks were formally invitated to a plot to overthrow Beron and install a new regime in the North, one ruled by the Boltons. Hugo was shocked to count the Flints, as well as Lord Burley of Ramsgate and Lord Ryswell in on the plot. But nothing prepared him for hearing that Torrhen Greystark, the Lord of the Wolf's Den, was the primary supporter of Domeric.

    Domeric told Hugo how they all mistrusted Beron and saw him as a Wilding, the people they have always kept out of their realm. Not only that, but word had arrived that Beron had killed his father in personal combat, a job he should have left to Ondrew Umber. Now Beron was formally a kinslayer and would be cursed in the eyes of the Gods; it would not be long until the realm would be punished if they accepted this sacrilege. Each Lord also had problems with decisions and policies that Beron was responsible for, and agreed that it was time for him to go. Hugo agreed to deliver the message of the plot to his Lord father, and promised the support of Karstark.

    Letting Hugo leave the Dreadfort was perhaps the biggest mistake Domeric made in the course of his rebellion, as it was not long until ravens were flying west and north to alert the Starks as to what Hugo had learned. Domeric realised his mistake too late, and angrily sent riders after Hugo. He also chastised his children for placing their trust in the young man, for it was their idea to include him. It was said that Lyra Bolton and Hugo had developed feelings for one another, and Vayon always got along well with him, seeing him as a close friend.

    Beron the Halfling now marches south past the wall, and rests at Last Hearth, ready to disband his levies. The Lord Commander recieved Hugo's raven, and despite the Night Watch's policy of neutrality sends a rider south to find Beron and deliver the message, perhaps in graditude for the help he gave with the Wildings. As soon as Prince Brandon got the news he raised all the troops his could muster and marched out of Winterfell ready to await his father's instructions, and take the initiative if need be. Hugo races to his friend's side to keep him out of danger, but feels torn between duty and friendship as he will surely come face to face with Vayon in battle.

    The rebels seek to make the most of what little element of surprise remains. Domeric force marches north to crush Beron beneath the walls of Last Hearth before he can catch wind of the rebellion. Torrhen Greystark musters his men yet finds himself at a crossroads. He has no desire to shed Stark blood, yet some purpose pushes him towards the Boltons. Burley and Roose Flint seek to unite their hosts and push forward to crush Brandon.

    The North has been torn asunder. As the flayed man reaches out to grab the wolf by the throat, only one thing can be approaching.

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    House STARK of WINTERFELL and their greatest bannermen.
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    Beron Stark, the Halfling: King of the North, and Lord of Winterfell; also known as Beron the Kinslayer. An adept warrior king who has no idea about the impending crisis.
    Prince Brandon Stark: King Beron's legitimised bastard, made the heir to the North, and current Regent. Has yet to prove himself in battle, but commands a mighty host.
    Arnolf Karstark: Lord of Karhold. Tending to his realm, he has no idea of the impending crisis. His son didn't have time to warn him. Known to be harsh but very loyal to the Starks.
    Hugo Karstark: Heir of Karhold. A man of mixed loyalties, has a cruel and vicious streak.
    Rickard Cassel: The current castellan of Winterfell. An able general, ordered most of the guard to follow Brandon to war, and leads a token garrison.
    Ondrew Umber: Perhaps even more loyal than the Karstarks. He is Beron's chief supporter, and has no love for the Boltons. Lord of Last Hearth.
    Galbart Glover: Leader of House Glover. Another Stark loyalist unware of the war, on the lookout for ironborn raiders. Lord of Deepwood Motte.
    Torrhen Tallhart: A man of mixed abilities. Seen as unremarkable, yet he holds a vital castle for the Starks. Master of Torrhen's Square.
    Bowen Dustin: Lord of Moat Cailin, tasked with guarding the north from the Andals. Vulnerable to Bolton attacks from the North.



    House BOLTON of the DREADFORT and their allies.
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    Domeric Bolton: King in the North, Lord of the Dreadfort; vicious to his enemies, very loyal to his allies. Seeks to usurp the Crown of the North.
    Prince Vayon Bolton: Heir to the Bolton kingship, and capable for his age. His position makes him a natural rival to Brandon.
    Lyra Bolton: Daughter of Domeric Bolton. Along with Vayon, is a friend to Hugo Karstark.
    Ramsay Snow: A cruel and mysterious figure, his true lineage is unknown. Rumoured to be a Bolton bastard.
    Torrhen Greystark: Known as Torrhen Turncloak to the Stark loyalists. Has opted to side with the Boltons, to the surprise of many. Lord of Wolf's Den.
    Roose Flint: The older Flint brother. A competent defender and ruler, but perhaps more suited for peace. Lord of Widow's Watch.
    Rodwell Flint: A soldier who has gained experience fighting with the Ironborn. Lord of Flint's Finger.
    Kyle Burley: Lord of Ramsgate, sworn to Torrhen Greystark. He follows his liege to war against the Starks.
    Larence Ryswell: Seen as a buffoon by many, he more than makes up for his lack of ability with loyalty. Lord of Barrowtown.


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    I really enjoyed this read! I'm eager to see the action.

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    Hope that you plan on using some of that talent on Fire and Blood =]

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    This is great!

    extremely small note: Torrhen Tallhart is not Lord of Torrhen's Square but Master seeing that house Tallhart is of masterly rank.

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    Chapter I: The Scattered Pack

    "Night gathers, and now my watch begins. It shall not end until my death."

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    South of the Wall.


    A lone rider speeds south from the Wall with a special mission. Rodrik the Ranger was no stranger to the politics of the North, and it was perhaps for this reason that the Lord Commander picked him to ride towards the Halfling's host. The members of the Night's Watch had an official policy of staying out of worldly affairs - but politics dictated that the guardians of the wall had to maintain good relations with the land owners they protected. It was these Lords they relied on for recruits from the prisons, and even soldiers when a King Beyond the Wall arose. Rodrik also knew that they owed the Starks a lot. It was their King who marched north and slew their foe. Besides, if House Bolton's rebellion was successful, the Watch might find itself with less recruits if the rumours were true. A breathing prisoner is a more useful recruit than a flayed man. With this grim thought Rodrik pressed on, hoping the Halfling was still alive.
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    Last Hearth, the seat of House Umber.


    "Lord Greystark never arrived," Ondrew Umber spat. It was said that all the great Northern lords took pride on being steadfast and loyal. The Greystarks, and more recently the Karstarks, point to their blood ties to the ruling Starks as evidence to their boast. The Umber's preferred to show their loyalty by cutting through Wildings and Arryns beside their liege lord.
    "Torrhen has had his hands full with incursions into the White Knife. He is nothing if not hesitant to leave his seat. Yet I'm concerned. many of the Northern houses are missing in our host." Beron had pressed on north at half strength - he was nothing if not restless. He was however surprised to have not received any messages on the return march to Last Hearth.
    "Beron. You know as I do that something does not seem right."
    "Agreed, I will ride south through the Dreadfort on my way to Winterfell to see what Bolton has to say for himself." Ondrew cleared his throat.
    "Allow me to come with you."
    "No. I need you to hold Last Hearth and wait for any possible messages from the Nights Watch. Just in case the Wildings return. I shall return to the camp and dismiss the levies." Beron replied. "May the Gods keep you."

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    The Stark camp.


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    South of Winterfell, the lands of House Stark.


    Hugo Karstark rode at the front of the large Stark host with the Prince. "Brandon, we MUST turn around march hard north-east now. Join Beron and crush Domeric before this rebellion can grow." The Prince looked hard at his cousin.
    "For the last time Hugo, we would never reach the wall in time. Besides, my father commands a large host. The rebels are scattered throughout the realm, it makes more sense to head east and cut them in two. I also want the chance to talk Torrhen Greystark down. And I would much rather have the force of Winterfell behind me when I confront him and his host, lest he is truly lost and seeks to capture me."
    "Brandon, for the last time you are making the wrong decision!"
    "Cousin, I have heard everything you have had to say." Brandon responded. "I considered the options available and this is the best we can do. I'm sorry your father has no idea about the threat he is facing, but he is not alone. My father and Lord Umber have a great force, and they are no doubt marching south now to confront Domeric. We are best suited to confront the other rebels before they can unite." Hugo clearly was not happy, but Brandon would have none of it. He would be king one day, and while he always desired to surround himself with trusted councilors, he would not be slave to them. There had been too many weak kings throughout the ages, and their realms always suffered for them.

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    The Dreadfort, seat of House Bolton.




    Everybody in the council chambers looked towards their new king, standing at the end of the table. A tall but stoic man, Domeric Bolton kept his hair combed and his beard cropped; he was considered a handsome yet prematurely aged man. Wearing his grey iron armour with the flayed man of House Bolton etched into his armour, he was prepared for the coming war. Beside him stood his heir Vayon, a young man of eighteen. Among the small crowd of officers gathered the other Boltons stood. Lyra Bolton sat on a wooden chair at the back of the candlelit room, fidgeting with a silver coin, minted in the North by a distant Stark king. Beside her stood the mysterious bastard, Ramsay Snow, wearing the pink of House Bolton, with the sad figure of the flayed man stitched into the material that covered his battle armour.

    "Your Grace, the men have begun the march as per your instructions. They should arrive at Last Hearth in a matter of days," one of the captains reported. Domeric looked at the man who spoke.
    "I am not the King yet, not until the Halfling is in our custody." the rebel lord replied. He continued, "Snow, I want you to march across the northern bridge with your group of men and swing around west. You're to head towards Last Hearth and take it by storm once Umber has left it to reinforce Stark. I have no doubt that the garrison should be small enough for your little band of followers."
    "It will be done, my lord. Umber will be dead before the week is out," Ramsay Snow replied as he made to leave. To this, Domeric moved towards the bastard.
    "No." He turned to his captains. "To reiterate. I want Umber, Karstark, and Stark alive. I want them and their families in our control. If we want the support of their houses in the future, it would be wise to ensure that we have not killed their beloved family members. I'm sure that with the recent expedition of Umber and Stark, that the three of them will be a welcomed addition to the Nights Watch." Domeric then turned to Vayon. "Take the troops I have given you and ride east. I counted two ravens sent, and it is possible Arnolf Karstark received one of them. Cut him off, as I do not want him charging towards my flanks at the climax of the battle. Beat him back to Karhold and take him into your custody." To this Vayon nodded, and left after Snow. "Finally, my beloved daughter. I have a small escort ready for you outside the gate, as you have been informed, you are to ride south with all speed to the Wolf's Den. Torrhen is a valued member of our cause, and I want you to be seen around him. Bolton and Greystark together." To this Lyra look up.
    "Am I just to make an appearance, or shall I be doing more?" she replied.
    "You have an unfettered discretion, just do not shame our House. If you doubt Torrhen's faith in our cause, suggest the possibility of a marriage contract with his son Ethan. Use your wits, and do what you can to help our cause there. I wish to be kept informed, daughter." He then turned again to his captains. "We ride to war."

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    The eastern fort, north of Wolf's Den.




    Torrhen Greystark peered at his men. For the past week he had been conducting his troops in drills, and supervising the building of forts at either end of the bridge north of the Wolf's Den. He did not relish the possibility of warring with his Stark kin, but every choice a lord makes in life is never easy. He would rather fight Brandon than Vayon, even if he would be labelled as a betrayer. Afterall, it was Vayon whom he had help raise as one of his own sons.

    Torrhen's thoughts were quickly interrupted by one of his captains. "My Lord, a message from Lord Bolton via raven." Torrhen took the message from the man's hand and looked at its contents. "What is it, My Lord?"
    "Roose Flint and Kyle Burley march west with all haste. Winterfell may have been alerted to our plans. Soldier, order the outriders sent and double the watch. I will not have our camp jumped in the middle of the night."

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    River crossing, north of the Dreadfort.




    Vayon had ridden ahead of his men and dismounted near the bridge where they were to cross. His scouts had previously ridden ahead and assured him that the area was clear, but he wanted to inspect the bridge. He had also deemed in necessary to ride ahead, as to not slow down the quick march of his small host. The bridge appeared steady to Vayon, no obvious sabotage had taken place. He walked to the other end of the bridge and slumped down on the grass to await for his men to catch up. Vayon was struggling to believe the situation, that soon he would have his first taste of war. It seemed strange to him, as he always thought he would spend his years warring against the Andals who liked to raid up the White Knife. Yet here he was, about the engage in war with the father of his best friend, it made him uneasy. Hugo Karstark and Vayon Bolton were both the wardens of Torrhen Greystark, the Lord of Wolf's Den, in their formative years.

    Suddenly, Vayon heard the trampling of hooves from behind him, and he quickly spun around, about to draw his sword until he recognised the pink of House Bolton. "My lord, there is no sign of any Karstark men," the outrider reported.
    "That makes me uneasy, hopefully they simply have not caught wind of my father's plans. If that's the case, we can advance of Karhold and have the element of surprise. Othewise..." the boy trailed off. He would have to do his part, and hope his lord father was safe. He knew that things could go very bad for them all if they did not catch Beron by surprise.

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    Last Hearth, the seat of House Umber.


    A rider in the dark. The knocking of a leather gauntlet against a wooden gate. The cursing of the gate guard. The shouting of a message. The urgent running of feet. The loyal lord arising from sleep to the face of the messenger standing outside his door. The realisation. The lord speaks.

    "Beron has left, he is marching towards the Dreadfort! He will be doomed if he is caught in ambush, we must alert him to the danger! Gods, I pray that these traitors are not upon us yet."

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    The Trap.


    "The lone wolf dies but the pack survives."
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    Chapter II: The Giant Who Wields Ice

    "Ice had its own beauty."

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    Winterfell, the seat of House Stark.



    Rickard Cassel had been busy at work ever since the raven arrived from the east. Brandon had insisted on taking the majority of the garrison with him when he marched south, even taking the other half of the elite Winterfell guard that his father had left behind. Now, the old castellan of Winterfell was working overtime to ensure the seat of his King would be protected if the Bolton traitor should march on it.

    The castellan was well past the prime of his life, but it would take more than the arrival of grey hairs and the weakening of his sword arm to slow Cassel down - and he had indeed been working busy. Black ravens had been send to Deepwood Motte, Moat Cailin and Torrhen's Square asking Houses Glover, Dustin, and Tallhart to prepare for war. Cassel had also been conducting drills with the levies and men-at-arms that still remained, to better prepare them for battle and siege.

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    "Sir!" a voice called out from behind him. Rickard turned around to see one of his soldiers standing clutching a bit of paper. Just as he made movement towards the soldier to take the message out of his hand and read it, the soldier looked up at him. "It's a message from Oldtown. Autumn is upon us."

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    Beron the Halfling was riding up and down his lines preparing his men for battle and shouting out orders. The Halfling King still could not believe the news that the Umber outrider had delivered. Lord Bolton had revolted, and had taken half the realm with him. As soon as Beron went about ordering his troops to arm themselves, a second message was delivered by one of his scouts, the Bolton Rebel was upon them. Beron was thankful for the few minutes gained from the earlier message. He had managed to form a battle line quite quickly, but there was no doubt his men were nervous. The news of preparing for a sudden battle did not please them, and the majority of them had not yet heard the news in regards to who the foe was. Beron Stark could only hope Umber could arrive in time, to bolster the moral of his men as well as their flanks.

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    As planned, the Bolton host advanced out of hiding at dusk. Domeric's scouts had informed him that the Halfling King had arranged his host for battle. While Domeric was angered that his surprise had been ruined, he was still ready to push onwards to battle. While the Stark host was formidable, it was grossly unprepared, and he knew that the opposing host would be on the defensive. Domeric planned to use this to his advantage.

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    The Bolton Army.

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    The right flank is made up of heavy infantry. Exposed on the far right, its job was to hold the line and prevent flanking movements, buying time for the Bolton left to win the battle.


    The Bolton middle is a long line of Bolton spearmen, designed the hold the Stark line in place for flanking movements. Behind them, Domeric placed a line of heavy infantry to plug the holes that will surely form during the battle as his spearmen will no doubt falter in the course of the fight with the more experienced Stark host. In front of these two rows are three units of archers, to soften up the loyalist host throughout the fight.


    The only need to hold for the short amount of time it will take Domeric and his elite soldiers to win this battle. Domeric had placed himself in command of the left flank. As the battlefield is raised on the far left, it allowed him to see what was going on during the battle. He was surrounding by his bodyguards, and supported by his heavy cavalry. In front of them stood heavy infantry, and the fearsome Bolton cleavers - the nickname given to the household guard of House Bolton.



    Domeric planned to use excessive force on his left flank to crush the opposing Stark right. This would enable him to swing around, surround the Stark host, and crush Beron. A risky plan, but Domeric decided that this was the best way to win the day. The opposing host was no doubt disheartened to hear of having to fight a battle out of nowhere. A long battle may steady their nerves, a quick display of ultimate force would have the opposite effect. He had faith in his captains, they would do the tasks he had given them.

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    Red represents House Stark, the green represents House Bolton. Ondrew Umber races to the battle to join the Stark left flank. The Bolton right is woefully unprepared for him. (Unseen: Umber and his forces at the rear left; as well as the Stark cavalry, off to the right).



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    Umber charges hard towards the Bolton left.



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    The Stark and Bolton hosts converge.

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    A Bolton captain raises his arms, and the archers let their arrows soar. Horns on both sides blow, and the shouting of men can be heard. A green boy is more used to hunting game than men, but they all bleed and scream the same.


    A captain in pink commanding a unit in the Bolton centre looks towards his foe. He can make out the emblem of the wolf in the distance. A nod from a mounted noble, and the captain shouts an order. His men advance. The weapons of their foe glint in the fading sunlight.



    Domeric Bolton turns to his left, and meets the eye of one his captains - a pale man with scruffy ginger hair. "Let us begin this wolf hunt." A wry smile formed on the Rebel Lords face, and then a nod. The Bolton cavalry took off at a brisk pace, and then the howling began. Starting with the bodyguards of Domeric Bolton, the howling of furies began. It spread along the Bolton line, until the opening of the forest that the battle was taking place in was taken over with the cries of hell

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    The Bolton cavalry charged forwards and engaged that of the Stark. Men fell. Screaming was all around. Orders were being yelled. The men of the North were lost in a blood lust. The civil war had begun, and no mercy would be shown - woe to the side who loses.



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    It appeared to Ondrew Umber that he had arrived in the nick of time. He saw the Stark archers on the left of his King's host under attack from the traitor's men-at-arms. "Men of Last Hearth, straight ahead. The Bolton traitors have charged forward and broken their cohesion, and gaps have developed. Into the breach, my friends. Send them running now, and we can march onwards towards the Dreadfort!"

    The fearsome men of Last Hearth plunged into the Bolton right, and suddenly the banners of the flayed man was in retreat. Umber led his men forward to charge them down, but the Bolton reserves that were placed on the right flank charged headfirst into the fray. Ondrew Umber hacked and slashed, and it was not long until his steed was covered in the blood of his enemies. Slowly but surely, the Boltons were being pushed back. Before long they would break, and the Bolton centre would be susceptible to flanking.



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    The Stark centre was more than doing its job. Led by the elite Winterfell Guards, they had utterly crushed the first wave of Bolton attackers. Now their enemy was on the back foot, and the loyalists were pushing against the Bolton rear guard - the seasoned northern infantry. Behind their foes, the loyalists could easily make out the lose formation of the Bolton archers, and then an empty expanse. Their morale had been fired up by their success, and they were fighting hard. The howls of the Bolton attackers had been replaced by the shouts of the loyalists.


    The Bolton line was growing thin. Their enemy was fierce and by no means inexperienced, but it was the loyalists who had ventured beyond the wall and crushed the Wilding King.

    The Bolton defenders were desperate, and their line was now now only a few men deep. A spear was caught in a Bolton kite shield; the attacker quickly replaced his lost weapon by drawing his sword, and plunges it into the his adversary's face. The crunching of bone is heard, and another life leaves the mortal realm.


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    The Bolton left had broken through, and the Stark right was in a rout. While they were chased by men-at-arms sporting the flayed man House Bolton, Domeric lead his more disciplined cavalry around to circle around the Stark host and hunt out the Halfling, while the cleavers turn to the right and plunge into the Stark centre. The clevers howl like banshees as they engage their foes, their axes cutting right through the shields of their enemies. With many of the captains on both sides of the battle dead and dying, there was little chance of any orders being able to be communicated to the men. This was it, the climax of the battle. Every man was now focusing on surviving the day, as he hacked the flesh off of his foe. The Stark right was starting to find itself on the backfood as they began to curve backwards. However, their morale was quickly bolstered by the arrival of the Winterfell Guard.





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    Beron Stark turns to find Domeric Bolton hot on his heels. He orders his guards to make a sharp turn and then charges towards the enemy general. Each army has suffered a shattered flank, and all sense of order on the battlefield disappears as the battle turns into a vicious melee. Behind this, Beron and Domeric's bodyguards engage.



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    Ondrew Umber takes a second to look onwards. The opposing Bolton forces have been shattered, and are routing. It would take a simple charge to cut down the enemy archers, but the Lord of Last Hearth thinks he is needed elsewhere. His small unit of cavalry would not be able to do much after such a move to the massive mass of Bolton men engaing in the melee. No, it would be far better for him to look for Beron.

    Umber looks to his right, and sees the large Direwolf banner of his king, right next to a banner of a flayed man. He turns around, and makes a charge straight at the Rebel King.




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    Lord Umber arrived in the nick of time. Beron and his guards were cutting through Domeric's guards, but the traitor had been reinforced by some foot soldiers. The loyal Lord charged in and began to get to work on any man who was foolish enough to be wearing the pink of House Bolton on this day. As he looked ahead, he could make out the form of Beron enganging with a Bolton rider. Futher inspection of the situation revealed that the rider was the last bodyguard between Beron and a dismounted Domeric. Ondrew Umber charged forth.

    Beron slashed at the steed of his foe, which causes it to collapse in agony as its lifeblood left it. The rider managed to roll away, and plunged his sword towards Beron's horse. The steed of the Northern King screamed, and threw its master off. Beron got back to his feet engaged his adversary. His foes weapon was no match for his valyrian blade, and shattered. Beron pushed on and cleaved the Bolton bodyguard's face in two. The Halfling then look around and charged towards the Domeric Bolton, who turned to face his nemesis and raised his iron sword high.


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    An arrow pierced the Halfing's throat, and he recoiled in shock. As he tried to form words his life blood left his throat and mouth. The Rebel Lord was startled by the development, but quickly regained his composure. The Rebel Lord raised his sword. Ondrew Umber could only watch in horror as Domeric Bolton quickly dispatched Beron Stark.



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    The result was instantaneous, the Stark host broke. Umber charged towards the Bolton traitor, but he was too slow. The enemy general found a horse to mount and was away.



    The Bolton host was quick to fall upon that of the Stark, and it was over. Umber charged towards his fallen king in horror and dismounted.



    He saw that the enemy was upon him. He reached for the valyrian blade of his former friend and took it in his hand. The blood of Beron the Halfling ran down the handle, but the Giant of Last Hearth held Ice tight in his hand. He then mounted his steed and followed the soldiers of the fallen king in their rout.


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    When Domeric Bolton returned to his camp, he was very pleased with the situation. The battle was a near run thing, he knew. However, he had cause to be proud. His risky plan was a resounding success. While the actual fighting was equal, the Bolton army managed to kill many Starks in their retreat. While Domeric would have prefered for Beron Stark to be in his custody in order to force the surrender of his supporters, he was not all too bothered. Beron's army was crushed, and he could march on Last Hearth, and then Winterfell. His son would no doubt capture Arnolf Karstark, and he had no doubt that Torrhen Greystark had the soldiers to tie up Brandon Stark. There was much work to be done, but the wolf was dead.

    Domeric made his way to his tent, to meet with his captains. As he entered, his senses were immediately overcome with the stench of death, but that was to be expected. His captains were covered in the blood of their fallen enemies. "Well done. Each of you have all performed your duties excellently. I want to inform you that we have captured the Stark camp, and that there will be a feast for the officers. Inform the common men that they will have the day off, and triple rations for the night." Each of the captains looked euphoric; after all, it was their victory as much as his. As he looks around at them he notices the absence of the man with scruffy ginger hair. Such is the cost of war and victory, he knows.

    "Lastly, set about ordering ten men from each unit to form patrols around the camp. I will also arrange for the outriders to circle the vicinity to look out for ambushes as well as Stark stragglers."
    One of his captains started to speak. "What are we to do with the wounded Stark men on the battlefield?" he inquired.
    "If they are noble, the men may take them as randsom. They expect riches from war, and I will not have them looting in the future."
    "And if they are not noble, my lord?"
    "Finish the job."


    He stepped outside of the command tent, and looked up to see the banner of House Bolton fluttering in the wind.

    "The sigil looked like a man dipped in blood."

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    Thanks for reading! I do appreciate feedback. If you find any spelling mistakes, or errors in relation to confirmed lore, then please let me know and I will fix it up.
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    Default Re: [AAR] The Destruction of the Starks *Song of Ice and Fire spoilers*

    Very good read!

    I highly enjoy this, please continue.

    One small note: sometimes your characters refer to the Faith of the Seven and the Seven Hells, that is not what Northerners do. They believe in the old gods.

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    Default Re: [AAR] The Destruction of the Starks *Song of Ice and Fire spoilers*

    Thanks for the input! I saw one reference to the seven hells which I edited. Let me know of any other specific religious errors so I can fix them. I'm a bit hazy on the old gods, are expressions that refer to "the gods" generically okay? I want to avoid refering to them as the old gods, as they certainly wouldn't seem old to the Northerners - but it will get difficult if any southerners show up to distinguish between the gods of the First Men and the pantheon of the Andals.

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