Poem Corner of Hospitality - UPDATED 14/7/2013

[Philip Regent of Hospitallers]

POEMS OF EVERYTHING

POEM I: One´s Road Ending

So it supposed to end here,
sadly I wasn´t the seer.
At least didn´t drop two years
of pointless and useless tears.

Now I go and say :"Screw this!!"
and should take for that.
But yet until I´m not frozen
I won´t stop until chosen.

First eight lines greatly shows
the time, what I had thrown.
When I had seen the answer,
it was like getting a cancer.

I was utterly damned and wronged,
learned that even kinds are thorned.
To avoid, I would had before gone,
alas, knowledge was in me like none.

(Sorry for posting first one again...deletion of previous thread allowed, if needed)


POEM II: Why me...and not her?

It all started pretty neat,
just needed a few tweaks.
Seemed very almost perfect,
and thought it wont be secret.

As time passed along my heart
Suddenly all got very dark.
Found myself situation bad,
hoped to get help from lad.

Every day as she passes me,
I go say, think, love and see.
She seemed alike angel from sky,
but I was blinded foolishly thy.

She never looks me with joy,
yet alas, made myself crappy toy.
Really hoped this could work out,
when she had heard of it...growled.

Now everything is at the end,
no chances to somewhere bend.
Her and I since then never greet,
but still made her heart-shaped seat.

"What is wrong with you?"...I ask,
in the unglory of lightness bask.
She seemed very kind-hearted,
in the end, she was thwarted.

[Shankbot de Bodemloze]

Hello. We like seeing new faces around here.

Your poems are off to a good start, although I'm sure one of the more knowledge guys will come and offer you some proper critique! I loved the rhyming on the first one.

Oh and I've deleted your old thread for you.

+rep and I hope to see you around!

[Philip Regent of Hospitallers]

Well, thanks for your "thumbs up" I do hope to see, what more experienced writers or poets think of mine Maybe starting sotry as well And last but least, thanks for the welcome and deletion

[Philip Regent of Hospitallers]

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POEM III: Sporty fun

One day I was on very long run
and had also a lots of fun.
If you are doing it as well,
then later you can go and tell.

It depends how to view it,
or how to see this well-fit.
Yes, sports are very great,
with all advantages you take.

If you like to take it seriously,
my advice - don´t make furiously.
Then it brings bad case injury,
with less and less of glory.


POEM IV: Senseless rows

Reminded my middle school days,
yet it won´t say: "See, it fades!!"
Surely don´t have the reason
why should I make the treason.

First rows seemed so non-sense
or made me think of tenses.
Yet I have to go and see
has someone payed of a fee.

Here and now, go and think
can you see colour of pink??
This all runs out of a point,
suspect me of getting a joint.

So here are another series of my poems...

[Shankbot de Bodemloze]

Hey mate, why not post a notice on the Advertising board? It may get more people commenting on these poems.

[Tigellinus]

I am in no way at all a expirenced writer. I havent got the honour to call myself that yet

That was a good poem mate. You are a amazing poet keep up the good work!

Thanks

Tigellinus

[Rex Anglorvm]

Welcome to the creative writing section; I'm more of a story teller than poet I'm afraid, but good luck with your creative works

Rep+

Rex

[Philip Regent of Hospitallers]

Thanks for the support, I also am participating in TOTW, wrote short story as well I´ll see soon enough how that fares But mostly I do poets more than story...though have been planning AAR for sometime

[Philip Regent of Hospitallers]

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POEM V: Desert Fury

One day in the desert we marched,
suddenly something was scorched.
Didnt get what it could have been,
since it was under sand to be seen.

Sadly our time got by the day short,
There was no place to be called fort.
Our party seemed to have gone lost,
That is how deserts make us toast.

Now all alone at wide untamed land,
only thing I can see here, is the sand.
Yes, now "we" go see and search,
meanwhile sun is like our torch.

(Sorry for the double post, but I was unable to edit my last one )

[Philip Regent of Hospitallers]

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POEM VI: Eternal Curse

Went one day after eternity,
all I found, was severity.
Suddenly I am being cursed
and eyes on fire are burst.

Every moment gets more angry,
Every sight has hit me badly.
If trying to attempt run off
Breathing makes you to cough.

Light - see it fades away
Dark - see it comes to bay.
Once again arrives eternity,
and with it my severity.

(Also, I plan to release my very first AAR soon...the date is yet to be "announced That much info I give it is England long campaign on hard/hard difficulties with battle time limit)

[Shankbot de Bodemloze]

I preferred the first one (Desert Fury) out of the two.

Oh and good luck with the AAR.

EDIT: 4000th thousand post.

[Philip Regent of Hospitallers]

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POEM VII: Child´s first snow

I remember my very first snow,
tried to put it all into cone.
Was very white and funny,
but also very very shiny.

In happiness tried it to eat,
probably didn´t get the beat.
Caused me a hurtful throat,
and staying inside was no boast.

At least no freezing brain,
but playing with toy train.
Suddenly cried - OH JOY, OH JOY
I can go out again to play!!

This poem is dedicated to this year´s first snow, what already fell here Quite unusual time for my country

(Further info about AAR project: first plans are to release 1st part of AAR in November 18, this is due my school (senior year in high school))

[Philip Regent of Hospitallers]

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POEM VIII: 1000 PÄEVA

Meenutades mõne aja tagust aastat - 2010,
mõtlesin, kas tõesti kukkus juba mulle sülle?
Taaskord koitis uus etapp õpingutes,
ent ka uusi võimalusi loosungites.

Sellest hoolimata tekkisid komplikatsioonid,
pannes oma silmade asemele implandaadid.
Nägin ennast või mind hoopis märgati,
oleks pidanud ütlema - "Ei andke mu tilguti!"

Nüüd juba aasta 2013 ja mais kukub 1000 päeva,
millega seda tähistada - joo täis ja haud kaeva.
Vaata, kus kalender vähemalt hädas aitab,
Kas peaks sellele vastama - "Ära su hävitab?"

Pärast seda sulgegem see uks ja avades viis uut,
ikkagi valigem ainult üks, valigem oma marsruut.
Kus me teed kord kokku said ja üheks muutsid,
siis kord tuleb ka päev, mil kõik eemalduda suutsid.

Now decided to make one poem here, which written in my mother tongue (Estonian)...hope you like it, after you may have translated it some how ...It is called "1000 days"

[Philip Regent of Hospitallers]

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POEM IX: Save the world, save the humankind

Don´t count the days, but so you do still
As I go, move and run, I write my will.
Go ahead and see, observe and live
But you shouldn´t make any easy give.

Walking in city of grey and grim streets,
there is not much hope for any greets.
As I, you or anyone else makes a go,
don´t trouble too much, if you see a toe.

Every day we hear new horrors around us,
no matter, what you move by - car, truck or bus.
Still I dream always about perfect world,
alas it is more likely to make a hurl.

It is said, that days are not brothers,
but does this saying at all bothers?
Sadly most of us don´t care of the poor
and we won´t for them open the door.

As once upon a time there were two,
by now there is not of us a few.
Going up and even faster rate,
shall we be given to God´s fate?

One day, with all this, the bubble blows
and along that we all will fade and flow.
World then is empty, dead and lifeless,
because resource loss made us spineless.

Take up your minds and brainstorm,
can we unite under one possible form?
If we can´t - we all shall for sure perish.
If we can - we all shall for sure cherish.

[Philip Regent of Hospitallers]

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Poem X: Short and Sweet

This shall be my shortest so far
since I am doing while in a car.
Also I try eat a ice cream so sweet
and all the time I only tweet.

We get all wrapped up in social media,
but why not to read instead Wikipedia?
It seems that no one has no time for facts
and we always find a way to get some snacks.

A, B, C, D, E, F, G,
Where is the cast of Glee??
Please good sir, give me one lemon,
because I have son named Devon.

This and that or little bit of "it",
this is the chair where I tend to sit.
Now I say to you goodbye,
I will be back, when there is time.

[ImperialAquila]

I'm not an expert and I'm one of the newbies here but I say you've written some good poems. Have a +rep

[Philip Regent of Hospitallers]

Thanks for the rep, I appreciate a lot...also feedback is very welcomed here!!