Quote Originally Posted by Alwyn View Post
The last chapter was posted before I joined TWC, and I wasn't aware of this story until you asked whether people would like to see it revived. I read the first few chapters and enjoyed them. I like near-future, 'what-if' science fiction and post-apocalyptic fiction and this story does those well. I like the flashback at the start of part 1 of chapter two and of your idea of using real-world images as part of the basis for the storytelling, with occasional links. I hope that you will revive this.
Quote Originally Posted by Caillagh de Bodemloze View Post
Like Alwyn, I joined too late to read this when it was posted originally. So you've just given me the opportunity to read it - and it would be great to see more of it, if you'd like to edit and post chapter 14.
Christ that makes me feel old...

Alright I'll definitely look into it.

Problem is I wrote 3,000 words and I just don't want to scrap the whole thing. I might just do a partial rewrite and post it, save the excised part for some other time. It's a conversation that can realistically happen anywhere to be honest.