Hey how's that going pals.
I'm Paragon (NEW INFORMATION OVERLOAD WOOT!), and 18 years old Spanish guy who's writing something serious in English for the first time. It's also pretty much the first time since I was... ¿12-13? I try to write something seriously, so this community is helping me to improve as a writer by giving me a self-challenge.
The first thing I'm searching for is knowing what things I'm doing wrong while writing. Perhaps is because of getting few comments, or perhaps it is because people who see something they dislike or a mistake simply closes the tab instead of explaining it on a comment, but I only get a couple "I liked that part!", and the only thing I can guess is "well, I'll try to keep doing that thing that way", instead of "you did that wrong, correct it" with gives a greater improvement. The language barrier is also something I seek to destroy, stomp, and more hateful verbs.
And maybe I might even I dunno meet people!
PS: Halp, pony invasion.
PS2: Complete noob, I'm a complete noob, like a Song of Ice and Fire, and have had problems with the laptop recently. What I mean is stop plagiarizing me