Constructive criticism is highly appreciated and sought. I hope this was a good read.
Constructive criticism is highly appreciated and sought. I hope this was a good read.
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Haha, Legalism does have its impact but it probably is the least school that has influence in Chinese history, largely because Qin Dynasty was ended because the brutal doctrine of Legalism and hence the emperors of Han Dynasty had tried to keep minimum influence of Legalism in its government.
I suppose I should have emphasized the point its effect was most noticeable during the Qin Dynasty. But it still had a noticeable effect throughout time.
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Such as? Following government law was not some ideas that invented by Legalism; in fact the chief focus of Confucius was to revived the law code of Zhou Dynasty, is Confucius a Legalist too?
Generally, there are two features of Legalism that set it apart from others:
1. It believes that everything should have a law to control it, and those laws must be enforced with extreme brutal punishments by state.
2. Legalists believe only brutal punishments would work because they believe men are naughty, evil creature that only obey to strong force.
If we examine it closely we can see there are some basic elements that are shared by legalists and fascists - both believes government should control the state by fear and strict laws, with little confidence that its citizens would act by their own good will. Study the Chinese history, we can say that few dynasties have such characteristics.
Well, I could make the argument that it was legalism ideals that had a hand in unifying China under a single, strong ruler after over two hundred years of turmoil. But, as you said, legalism also had a hand in ending it, though the unified China persisted for quite some time before being broken up again, if I remember correctly.
Perhaps it is a weak argument but it is a start. I'd have to re-read some of the books I have read to provide a more concise argument.
I have read, however, that legalism blended with Confucianism later down the line, and as we know, Confucianism has had a continuing effect on China throughout its existence.
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That is true, since it did transfer the political structure of Kingdom of Qin from feudalism towards a centralized government quicker than other kingdoms; however we also need to remember that other six kingdoms had also adopted certain degree of centralization without legalism. Overall, I would say the economical reform of Kingdom of Qin performed by Shang Yang, which abolished feudal holding and allowed a more capitalist practice (for example, allowed land be traded freely), played a bigger role in Qin's rise.
There were two chief reasons why Qin ended; one was of course the overbrutal punishments for petty crimes, and another was local nationalism that were still strong in many people's mind. Remember that, the concept of China did not become mature until East Han Dynasty.
It did, this person played the most important role to introduce Confucianism we familiar today.
A good read.I'm not an expert on Chinese history, so I can't really comment on your topic, other than that I enjoyed reading about it. Overall you're writing is very good. You can double check your verb tenses and a few commas when proofreading. You might also try to organize your points a bit better and create transitions between each topic/paragraph to help guide the reader along the way. I've made just a few comments/suggestions below.
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