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    Age of Assassins


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    It is complete.
    Death of an Immortal (Set in the final hours of the Age of Janak)

    The man sat still on his marble throne and stared out at the large mahogany doors, with full knowledge of what fate had in store for him. Flanked on both sides of the doors hanged the banner of the Empire, navy blue adorned with a two headed imperial eagle grasping a cross pattée. He had debated on whether to dress ornately or not and decided to dress modestly in comparison to his position.

    My emperor, you must evacuate, we cannot hold the enemy for too much longer.

    No, my fate has already been decided. Your fate has not. I do not doubt that this empire will be resurrected, but I fear that it will not be guided by the creed that our empire holds dear. To prevent this, I want you to head to the archives and grab the Immortal Doctrine. Afterwards I want you to leave the city and then find and protect refugees. Bring them to Auglarla, I am sure the people there will be more than willing to help our people.

    The emperor hoped enough time had passed for his guard to complete the first two objectives. He was deeply sad about the tragedies that were occurring outside his throne room, but was not concerned for his own fate. How many lives will be lost he wondered. His thought process was broken by the sound of talking men who were coming towards the room. Less than a minute had passed before the throne room doors had opened and a group of five foreign dressed men carrying blades and crossbows walked into the throne room and toward the emperor.

    “I presume you are the Immortal Emperor? Good. Looks like all of your guards have left you.” A man who looked like the leader announced. The emperor did not respond, he only stared at the men.

    “I am here to inform you that your immortality has come to an end. I don’t know about you but I am excited, I've always wanted to kill an immortal.” The man continued.

    Finally the emperor spoke, “I have never seen dress like that in all my life, but I do know that accent. Is Regia that cowardly it needs to disguise its soldiers so as to not suffer the wrath of the entire world? Assassins, that is what you are, men disguised as someone they're not so as to not reveal the true perpetrator.” The emperor accused. The armed men halted a few yards away from the throne. “The damage you have caused will send the entire world into chaos!”

    “I have no time for debate,” the leader looked at two of his men “Shoot him.” The men aimed and fired. One bolt hit the emperor causing a fatal wound, the other went wide.

    The emperor slid off his throne and with his last breath looked at a banner that had a hole where a bolt had pierced; the hole had erased the head of the eagle that stared into the past.

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    "I can hardly believe we found it." Said a staggered and amazed John, pulling the rag from the lower half of his face, revealing the clean skin around his jaw - a staunch contrast to the rest of his dirty features.

    "I told you it’d be in here, the legends aren’t just children’s tales you know John." Elizabeth’s voice was softer than John’s, but her delicate skin was just as filthy.

    Hunched over what John had in his hands, they studied its surface. The jewel in the center had a sheen and luminance so royally blue, it was as if it had been polished everyday for millennia, not lying in a tomb.

    "Well, the first part of the story is true. The Pharaoh’s Amulet does exist. If the second part is true, I’ll eat my ruddy hat." John looked up at Elizabeth with a vivacious and self sure smirk.

    "If only you had knowledge as bountiful as your arrogance, my dear John."

    ~


    "Is this it?" Demanded John, with deflation in his voice. "This is The Assassin’s Crypt? This is what we've been traipsing around the desert for?" Before them was a circular slab of stone in the sand, no bigger than a wagon wheel.

    "John, my love, you must learn to look before you cast doubt." Elizabeth said in a patronizing tone, bending over to dust off the slab. Underneath the sand, there was a network of intricate etchings in the stone, that all seemed to gesture towards the center, where there was a deep, peculiarly shaped gouge.

    "It seems a mere layer of sand was enough of a disguise to throw you off the scent." She said, smiling over her shoulder at an embarrassed John.

    "Enough mocking, what does it say?" He questioned excitedly.

    "Here shall Ptah be cursed to roam for an eternity. Let this be a demonstration to those who defy the Pharaoh." Elizabeth read, whilst pressing the amulet into the gouge. It was as if she was taught how to open the seal. The slab rotated and split into two, revealing a staircase. The sand poured in before settling.

    "Lizzy! How did you–" John’s question was cut short by the presence of a blade at his throat – with Elizabeth at the hilt.

    "Sorry John." Were the last words that John would hear before his demise at the tip of his spouse’s dagger. Elizabeth turned and walked remorselessly into the crypt, sheathing her blade. She descended the stairs, before walking into the small and dusty room at the bottom, holding the amulet in front of her like a torch.

    "Ptah! Rise, my ancestor, my creed brother! The creed has been preserved, the prophecy fulfilled! The power of the Pharaoh’s Amulet has broken the seal, and you are freed of your curse." There was a crumbling, cracking, and then groaning noise in the darkness.

    And thus, the Age of Assassins was reborn.
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    A Blade in the Shadows

    Age of Assassins.

    I looked out from the shadows, the hood covering my face making a darker shade of black within the darkness. A few people scurried home sensing the menace in the air, but I'm hidden from all but the keenest eye, people too busy to notice or too wise to look closely.

    I check my blades, the hidden ones drop smoothly into my hands, the mechanism lightly oiled to drop into place with a snick, a flick of my wrist and they slide back into the sheath. My sword is held in to my side, a fine blade forged by a master smith with folded steel, light yet strong, and honed to the keenest edge. A blade that has tasted blood many times and will feast on much more in the days to come.

    My disguise in place, I check the street once more. I see my target, the guard captain strolling towards me with two companions. I shrink back into the deepest shadow, their raucous laughter and heavy footsteps at odds with the quietness, strutting and shoving, pushing their weight around as bullies are wont to do.

    Oh how I enjoy my work at times like this. They pass with barely a glance at my hiding place. I step out quietly behind them, my knowledge of the streets twists and turns will be the death of him. He lingers, to ogle some poor wretch, and as his companions turn a corner ahead, I strike.

    The knife slides out of my sleeve, with a quick grab and stab, he takes his last breath. I'm up and climbing the wall, over a window ledge and ducking behind a chimney before his guards find his crumpled body. The streets below are stirred into a hornet's nest of shouts and running feet but no-one sees me as I slip away, my task complete.

    Now my way is clear to use the rooftops, a slide, a jump, and slowly I make my way back to a safe house.

    Ezio Aldatore strikes once more. A good time to leave Assassins Creed Brotherhood for tonight, save game, system off, time to walk the dogs.

    Last edited by Ybbon; May 03, 2012 at 05:38 PM. Reason: entry

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    Ahh got it done in time.
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    August 21, 1422.

    The time has come to end this war. Our great kingdom has suffered battle after battle against the retched English. Now they plan to install their king as King of France! Henry the 5th shall die today by the blade ofan assassin.

    En route to Château de Vincennes, Henry marches his troops to their destination. His eyes are alert as perspiration ran down his face. He lost many good men during his Campaign but now he would reach Paris very soon at the rate he was going. Ravaging the countryside for supplies had kept his men’s morale high and had made life comfortable.

    Ordering his scouts to search for farms around the area, he dismounted to rest. “Only a few more months and France will be mine” Henry said to himself. His armor bearer came to relieve him of his heavy battle suit. “Bearer, please inform my guards that I need to go relieve myself,” Henry commanded. “Yes my liege,” The armor bearer said as he quickly ran toward the guards.

    Henry went to the edge of the woods. Looking up, he saw the golden sunset of a beautiful evening. However something was off. Henry quickly turned his gaze toward the trees. Shrugging it off, Henry turned his head but out of the corner of his eye, he saw- movement. “Must be my imagination” He thought.

    Walking back, he had found that he had been gone for a long while. Walking back to guards and generals he told them of the plan for the rest of the day.

    Meanwhile, the armor bearer had been gathering berries from the country side. Placing berries into his basket, he noticed a glint in the bushes. The armor bearer went toward the bush to inspect it, thinking it was silver. “You must not have much knowledge on how assassins work” the bush said. The armor stepped back, confused. Then the glint returned; flying in to the bearer’s chest. Mouth agape, eyes staring in horror, the bearer falls over with the last bit of life leaking out of him.

    Henry was worried. His bearer had not repaired his armor and it was completely dark. Looking outside he heard footsteps. Pulling his sword, he walked outside. “Ah, looked who has returned to fix my armor, where have you been?” Henry asked. The bearer kept his hood on moving slowly forward, then pushing King into the tent and drew some daggers. The king realizing the disguise quickly charged the assassin. He came around and sliced into his shoulder and dodged a swing from the sword. Grunting in pain, the king charged the assassin and knocked him down to the ground. Dodging the next sword blow, he ran out of the tent to run into guards.

    One stabbed him in the chest and he fell. “Our creed…has won… king… has 10…” The assassin says in his dying breath. The guards looking at each other stare wide eyed in fear.
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    The Song of the Assassins

    THE SONG OF THE ASSASSINS

    Being a true account recorded in the medium of folk song, the words here from those of Jake McCready, NY State 2012, aged 67


    Jan Polder was getting older and his purse was ever golder.

    Joe Chung was ever young and his purse with coins low hung.


    John Kean was deadly lean and his purse the largest ever seen.


    Jordy Jones had fresh new bones and his purse was only loans.


    Johan Simevic was a son-of-a-witch and his purse was rather kitsch.


    Johan Simevic wanted to be rich, leave those guys dead in a ditch.


    Johan Simevic had a guilty itch and his eye a nervous twitch.


    Jay Burridge sought carnal
    knowledge and died in a ladies college.

    Johan Simevic on the hockey pitch took his money to be rich.


    Jan Polder's
    blade did ever moulder and droop did his left shoulder.

    Johan Simevic saw this glitch and left a cut that bore no stitch.


    Joe Chung was covered in dung and his hip jeans low slung.


    Johan Simivec saw this niche and swapped them with a dirty switch.


    John Kean was a silly bean whose act was a false smokescreen.


    Johan Simivec so did bewitch and the soil with blood enrich.


    Jordy Jones had brittle bones which were broken easy by stones.


    Johan Simivec a ride did hitch and left him dying in that ditch.


    Johan Simivec hid that ditch and prayed for no-one to snitch.


    Johan Simivec became dirty rich left this world with a guilty itch.


    Jack Stallone was left alone with money he did not own.


    Each
    assassin died, their creed no disguise, for he who ever haunts us.

    All men must die, we should not deny, all that remains for us.


    Is death.

    ~

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    I apologize for writing this in such haste Claudia, but my guide awaits me. I would have done it earlier, but I could not find words for my feelings. I am truly sorry for this and I hope you will answer my letter.

    Ever since Leonardo died I have been in unrest. It is not sorrow, but rather a feeling that I have not accomplished what I was born to do. What our father started. I have destroyed the Borgia; none of them except Lucrezia is still alive. But our father searched for something. Some deep knowledge , hidden in the fortress of Assassin’s : Masyaf. My path leads me there, the place our father could not go to. What will I find there? Will the legendary Altaïr’s library be open for me? Or will I only find death in the ruins of Masyaf? Will my blade stay sharp enough to make way to the roots of our Creed, or will I have to disguise myself as an old man, seeking wisdom? I do not know the answer to these questions, neither do I know what will await me in Masyaf. I only hope the people have not forgotten how the Assassins used to keep the village safe from harm and that they also remember the evil that is Templars. Because I fear our enemies will be there. The people of Caanan speak of a strange people, coming from the north, pillaging and destroying. If my strength fails me, do not despair as I am just another man, in a world filled with peril.
    Ezio Auditore da Firenze
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    His Night
    The boy moved slowly, nearly invisible against the dark wall on which only few of the stars above shone their silver light. Using this disguise to his advantage, he had been able to creep near his target.

    Tonight, would be his night. Tonight, he would enter The Circle, kill whilst honoring the Assassins’ Creed. He shivered. Cold sweat formed on his skin, his hands were shaking while he looked over his shoulder to see if there was anyone on the road.

    The wind swirled around him, blew open his rope to reveal the blade which was lingering there. For one moment, the stars were able to catch it in their beams, as the lad’s heard stood still. Quickly, he readjusted the layers of cloth to restore his cover.

    He was panting, sweating, almost fading in anticipation of the great moment. That moment that would come, which was to be his finest hour.

    Time crept on, his despair was growing, until finally he saw a shadow emerging from the streets. It was a monstrous being, all his knowledge could not help him to understand what it was. It came nearer and nearer, it’s eyes lighting up with a yellowish glow, as if it had come straight from hell to grasp him. It’s breath was roaring in his ears, while it came closer and closer, close enough! He jumped forward, his blade shining with a silver light as it flashed down on the monstrosity. He felt the skin parting, warm blood sprouted over his hands as the shrieks of his dying enemy filled the sky…

    Frozen, he stood still on the middle of the street. He recognized the noise. He knew what he was touching, what kind of hairs where filling his hands as he tried to get hold of his opponent. It was like the abyss opened in front of him, and he would rather have jumped into it when he had been given the opportunity to do so.

    For the flesh which was stuck on his blade was not that of Leonardo. It was not human at all.

    It was a cat.

    The boy fled, utterly ashamed by what he had done. After this grave mistake, he would never be able to face the brotherhood of The Circle again.

    He sank down on the ground, and for a last time the stars were able to catch his blade in their silver glow. It came down, blood flowed and spread out all around his body until he floated away on the slow waves of the river.

    Tonight, would be his night. For this night, he departed on his final journey to those places where none of us lingering on the shores of Earth can follow.

    Tonight. His night.


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