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    Carl Von Clausewitz’s most famous, and often quoted, dictum that “War is a continuation of policy with and admixture of other means”[1] has never been truer of a conflict than of the Franco-Prussian war. In this essay, I propose to discuss the role that the policies of Otto Von Bismarck played in the build up to war. I will use the examples of Bismarck’s handling of the Hohenzollern Candidacy and his provocative re-writing of the Ems Telegram in his attempts to provoke the French. It also seems helpful to discuss the role that Helmuth Von Moltke (the elder) played, as chief of staff, in Prussia’s readiness for war. This readiness then lead to a rise in tensions and a sort of arms race between France and Prussia. I also propose to explore the tangible effect that the war had on the creation of a unified German state under one Kaiser. This single united Germany would de-stabilise European power-politics and would eventually lead to the outbreak of World War I.
    The origins of the war can be traced back to the Sleswig – Holstein affair in 1864 where Bismarck used the tempting bait of French acquisitions to keep them quiescent during what was a rather shameful land-grab by Prussia[2]. The promise of glory proved too much for Napoleon II whose regime was desperately in need of a prop if it was going to survive[3]. The swift victory over Austria was a stunning reaffirmation of all that the ‘revolutionaries’ of Scharnhorst had set out to do after the humiliation of Jena-Auerstadt.[4] Bismarck used this sensational victory to tighten his grip on the deputies of the Reichstag; he also used the strength of the armed forces as a base for further diplomatic action. The real question that came to be on everyone’s lips was whether or not, from 1866 onwards, Bismarck was preparing for war with France. The Hohenzollern candidate, which he was at pains to point out was a matter for the Royal Family and not of the Prussian state[5]. When news of Leopold’s decision to ascend to the throne became public knowledge an outcry began in Paris. Gramont, who was head of the French diplomatic corps, sent le Sourd who was the Charge d’Affaires in Berlin to enquire at the Foreign office of Prussia if this ‘base plot’[6] was anything to do with the Prussian state. Sourd was brushed off by the foreign office when Under-Secretary Thile said that “he, and by extension the foreign office, knew nothing of this” Smarting at this offhand rebuttal le Sourd informed Paris of this lack of progress. Gramont then ordered Benedetti to come back from his holiday and try to resolve the situation.

    Benedetti, who was the French Ambassador in Berlin, was then sent to Bad Ems to speak to the King directly. William, who was not at all in favour of seeing a Hohenzollern on the throne of Spain agreed to withdraw Leopold from the candidature. Bismarck was then telegrammed and told that Leopold had ‘voluntarily stepped down’[7]. Galvanised, Bismarck came from his estate to Berlin, thence to Ems. It was now that Napoleon played directly into Bismarck’s hands and lost the opportunity to win a stunning diplomatic victory. Napoleon, via Gramont in a private order, told Benedetti to get from the Prussian King that he approved of the withdrawal and a refutation of any future designs on the Spanish throne. Napoleon’s going behind the backs of his deputies was to have grave repercussions later, but the most immediate result of this foolishness was that Bismarck was able to intercept and re-write a telegram sent by the King to Gramont. The text of the infamous Ems telegram read thusly
    -“The King had informed the French Ambassador through his A.D.C that he had nothing further to tell him”-
    This was an obvious and calculated snub, designed to enrage French national sentiment[8] When Bismarck reported this in the Reichstag, he also claimed that Benedetti had come up to and addressed the King against his will, which was a grievous slur on the Royal prerogative. In truth the King had addressed Benedetti, but by the time he knew of the affair it was too late for him to change course. Bismarck had, in a master stroke, sent the telegram to papers in Munich, St. Petersburg, Paris and London. When the King opened his paper he declared “But this means war!”[9] The King, who was the only one with the constitutional power to declare war, had effectively been sidestepped by Bismarck. In France meanwhile, the cabinet was in a state of extreme agitation and in a cabinet meeting in the Tuileries they voted unanimously to call out the reserves. This overt preparation for war was guaranteed to make the already tense situation untenable, in effect they had voted for war, though the declaration had not yet come.
    The French were confident that they had the military advantage and according to the minister of war Marshal le Boeuf that “everything was prepared and that France had a start of at least fifteen days over Prussia”[10] this belies the arrogance and pride of a French military that had not engaged in a large European war since the ill-fated expedition in the Crimean. Yet despite these assurances the cabinet dithered for four days until, forced by the popular will and the hostile deputies, they declared war on Prussia. This uncertainty and dithering by the French, so reminiscent of the Prussians before Jena-Auerstadt, was to continue throughout the entire war. While the Prussians acted with a unity, speed, aggression and efficiency not seen in Europe since the days of Napoleon.[11]
    One of the other, less noted, factors was the Franco-phobia of Helmuth Von Moltke who had been preparing for a war with France since eighteen sixty-seven[12]. Indeed Prussia, never known for its pacific tendencies, was now under the rule of a professional soldier. It was the King’s predisposition towards soldiers and their craft that allowed the Prussian General Staff a free hand in preparing the logistics, transport and plans for invasion. Naturally the preparedness for a war against France led to a rise in confidence that the French could be beaten swiftly. Prussia had possibly the most advanced rail system on the continent and in Von Moltke had a man who had been fascinated by rail since before the first line was even laid in Prussia[13] this enabled the armies of Prussia to move six times faster than had those of Napoleon, giving both an added edge and a greater challenge to the army and the general staff.
    Meanwhile the French, after modernising their military equipment, did not have the funds to prepare adequate infrastructure for rapid mobilisation against Prussia[14] la Boeuf’s ill-informed assertion aside. It was this very disparity in speed that would so shock the world, particularly France, when war opened. After the declaration of war the Prussian general staff took control of the forces of the armies of all the German states. The French armies meanwhile were on the defensive, with the emperor Napoleon taking personal charge of the ‘Army of the Rhine’. Instead of following the French strategy and attacking into the Palatinate or further south, Napoleon with his ever-present indecisiveness (so different from his forbearer) waited to see what the Prussians would do. The Prussians meanwhile advanced into France on three axes, because of some last minute changes in the deployment order by Napoleon the French mobilisation, already chaotic, was almost incapable of putting up an organised resistance.[15]
    Within weeks the Prussians had pushed the majority of the French forces into the fortress at Metz. Napoleon put himself at the head of an army to go and relieve the fortress, this relief force was attacked by the Prussians at Sedan and on the second day of fighting Napoleon was made a prisoner of war. Napoleon offered the surrender of his sword to William and Bismarck seemed to take this as the surrender of the French, this was not, however, to be. On the fourth of September Napoleon was declared to have lost his throne and in his place arose the third Republic, led by a ‘Council of National Defence’ in Paris. Thus began the legendary commune of Paris, and the armies of national liberation in the south. The final six months of the war saw a dangerous build up of bitterness on both sides, the Prussians resented the pointless prolonging of the war while the French were outraged at the treatment of the Francs-tireurs and the city of Paris.[16]
    The two most far-reaching after-effects of the war were the toppling of the second empire and the rise of the third French republic and the creation of a unified German state under the new German Empire under Kaiser William I. The coronation of the Kaiser had a smack of the surreal about it, he wrote to his wife, complaining that this was ‘the most morose day of his life’[17] the reason, as Eyck puts it, “makes not a blind bit of difference to an uncrowned head” the King wanted to be Emperor of Germany not German Emperor. Because Bismarck insisted the new-crowned Kaiser openly and humiliatingly snubbed Bismarck by not even looking at his ever-faithful ‘Iron Chancellor’[18]
    Scant days before William ascended to the imperial purple Bismarck was carefully weaving his way between the maddening small German princes, trying to get them to accept William as Kaiser. The oddest of these was the King of Bavaria, Louis II. Bismarck had to get the Bavarian King to write a letter to his King so that he would feel duty-bound to accept the crown.[19] Louis II had previously stated that he would never allow a Hohenzollern on the throne of Germany, yet it would seem that Bismarck paid him an exorbitant bribe from the vast fortune taken from George V of Hannover.[20] Bismarck’s reason for doing this was that the King would not accept the purple if he thought it was coming from the people, should it come from his ‘brother Princes’ then he would feel compelled to accept. Even with the letter from Louis II, William did not give his assent, demanding similar requests from every German Prince. The reason for the King’s reluctance was that he did not want to lose the power that came with being the King of Prussia, and as Eyck puts it “There was no room in his head or heart for anything but Prussia”[21]
    Once Bismarck rushed the approval for the coronation through the Riechstag they were discarded, set to re-write the constitution to allow for the Kaiser and the Reich, no representative from the Reichstag was invited to the ceremony in the Hall of Mirrors in Versailles. Another man rendered conspicuous by his absence was Prince Luitpold of Bavaria. Yet with the coronation of the Kaiser the unification of Germany had been achieved by the liberal use of both stick and carrot. That this unity was achieved in the reflected glory of a victorious campaign amongst heightened nationalistic sentiment served to make it all the more attractive to the majority of Germans and served to make the unity strong enough to have lasted to the present day.



    The real fallout from the Franco-Prussian war was the handing over of the hegemony of Europe. Hitherto France had been acknowledged as the most powerful state on the continent. After the dazzling Prussian victories had cemented the Imperial crown on the head of Kaiser Wilhelm I the balance of power tipped decidedly in the favour of Germany which was a united empire for the first time. Gone were the fractious princes, in their place was a modern and unified Germany with Prussia solidly at its centre. In France meanwhile the loss of Alsace-Lorraine was a bitter blow, as was their military humiliation. They set about building up a decidedly ant-German power bloc with England and Russia as their main allies. The build up to World War I and all that followed has its roots in the brilliantly Machiavellian policies that Bismarck followed. While the military machine that fought Europe to a standstill was learning still more from their most recent victories.[22]


    [1] Clausewitz C Von. On War (Paret and Howard)

    [2] Eyck E. – Bismarck and the German Empire

    [3] Howard M. – The Franco Prussian War: German Invasion of France

    [4] Holborn H. – The Prusso-German School: Moltke and the Rise of the General Staff.

    [5] Eyck E. - Bismarck and the German Empire

    [6] Steefel L. D. – Bismarck, The Hohenzollern Candidacy and the Origins of the Franco-German war of 1870

    [7] Eyck E. – Bismarck and the German Empire

    [8] Steefel L.D - Bismarck, The Hohenzollern Candidacy and the Origins of the Franco-German War of 1870

    [9] Steefel L.D - Bismarck, The Hohenzollern Candidacy and the Origins of the Franco-German War of 1870

    [10] Steefel L.D – Bismarck, The Hohenzollern Candidacy and the Origins of the Franco-German War of 1870

    [11] Howard M. – The Franco-Prussian War 1870-1871: The German Invasion of France

    [12] Rothenberg G.E – Moltke and Schlieffen Pp. 296 - 325 in Makers of Modern Strategy (Ed. Paret P.)

    [13]Holborn H. The Prussio-German School: Moltke and the Rise of the General Staff In Makers of Modern Strategy Ed. Paret P

    [14]Holborn H. The Prussio-German School: Moltke and the Rise of the General Staff In Makers of Modern Strategy Ed. Paret P

    [15] Grenville J.A.S – Europe Reshaped 1848 - 1878

    [16] Grenville J.A.S – Europe Reshaped 1848-1878

    [17] Eyck E. – Bismarck and the German Empire

    [18] Eyck E. – Bismarck and the German Empire

    [19] Eyck E. – Bismarck and the German Empire

    [20] Eyck E. – Bismarck and the German Empire

    [21] Eyck E. – Bismarck and the German Empire.

    [22] Rothenberg G.E – Moltke, Schlieffen and the Doctrine of Strategic Envelopment in Makers of Modern Strategy Ed. Paret P

    Bibliography


    · Darmstaedter F.B. – Bismarck and the Creation of the Second Reich Transaction Publishers 2008
    · Dawson W.H. – The German Empire – 1867-1914 Allen & Uniwn 1966
    · Gall L. Bismarck Vol I - 1815-1871 (Trans Underwood J.A.) - Allen & Unwin 1986
    · Gall L. Bismarck Vol II – 1871 – 1898 (Trans Underwood J.A) – Allen &Unwin 1986
    · Holborn H. The Prussio-German School: Moltke and the Rise of the General Staff Pp281 – 295 - In Makers of Modern Strategy: From Machiavelli to the Modern Age Ed. Paret P. O.U.P 2010
    · Howard M. The Franco-Prussian War Methuen & Co Ltd 1981
    · Pflanze O. – Bismarck and the Development of Germany Princeton 1963
    · Rothenberg G.E. – Moltke, Schlieffen and the Doctrine of Strategic Envelopment Pp 296 – 325 in Makers of Modern Strategy: From Machiavelli to the Modern Age Ed. Paret P. O.U.P 2010
    · Williams R.L. – The French Revolution of 1870-1871 Lowe & Brydone 1969
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    Hello again, this essay doesn't presume to be exhaustive (obviously) and if anyone knows more about the French reasons for going to war please let me know!! Anyhow I hope ye all like it.
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    ut Iberni in rebellionis scopulum impegisse censendi non sint si pro religione, rege et patria tuenda.
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    French reasons to go war were:

    1. Internal unrest against Napoleon III; the failure of Mexican campaign, poor economy and restricted political freedom had badly damaged Napoleon's popular support. It was why Napoleon was hoping to launch a successful military campaign to bring back the credibility of his government.

    2. French long insecurity of its border; this insecurity can trace back up to Middle Age, and although Louis XIV partially solved this insecurity by pushing France border up to Rhine river (and it is possible to say Louis XIV's campaigns were largely motivated by this reason), it continued haunt French people afterwards. Napoleon III solved this problem by having a firm control on Southern German states such as Bavaria, but the result of Austro-Prussian War ended up with Prussia's influence expanded into South Germany. This alarmed France enough that in late 1860s Napoleon government started a politic of "Other Side of Rhine" - a campaign aims to at least creating a pro-French buffer state on the German side of Rhine, or at very worst a French province on German Rhine. This was part of French war goal during Franco-Prussian War.

    3. United States of Europe with capital on Paris; this has been a wet dream of French since Napoleon I and I don't want to go too deep about it. Nevertheless Napoleon III was quite hot about this idea and had motivated many of his foreign policies such as the support of Italian Independence.
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    Hellheaven, any sources from those quotes? Not doubtin' just curious...
    Also Napoleon I wasn't the first to dream of a united Europe, there was a mad french Philosophé who had done so as well, but I can't remember his name atm. (I'll dig it out and get back to you)
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    "The Franco-Prussian War: The German Conquest of France in 1870-1871" by Geoffrey Wawro.

    The three points are just the summary of Chapter 1 of this book.
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    Very nicely written and sourced article.
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    Overall, a well researched and written essay. I had a hard time getting into in though as the intro could use some work, imo. I've made a few suggestions below on how to make the intro better.

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    Carl Von Clausewitz’s most famous, and often quoted, dictum that “War is a continuation of policy with and admixture of other means”[1] has never been truer of a conflict than of the Franco-Prussian war. (Why? Tell us why Clausewitz's statement has never been truer. Providing some background and context here and then make a succinct thesis statement will be a major improvement for the intro) In this essay, I propose to discuss the role that the policies of Otto Von Bismarck played in the build up to war. I will use the examples of Bismarck’s handling of the Hohenzollern Candidacy and his provocative re-writing of the Ems Telegram in his attempts to provoke the French. (Show us this in the body, not in the intro) It also seems helpful to discuss the role that Helmuth Von Moltke (the elder) played, as chief of staff, in Prussia’s readiness for war. (Why is it helpful, save this and show it in the body, not the intro) This readiness then leads to a rise in tensions and an sort of arms race between France and Prussia. I also propose to explore the tangible effect that the war had on the creation of a unified German state under one Kaiser. This single united Germany would de-stabilise European power-politics and would eventually lead to the outbreak of World War I. (Merge these two sentences with the "In this essay" sentence into a singe thesis statement)

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    I don't have the time to fully read this at the moment (I might later), but the use of the first person in the opening paragraph is weak, in my opinion. Your authority as a historian comes from your use of source material and through your ability to contextualize and report its meaning. Your authority does not come from your ideas and therefore the first person tends to distract from the purpose.

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    @43rd Foot, I fail to see how setting out the points to be discussed in your essay can be classified as weak? If you take the time to read the entire essay you might perhaps see that I do not rabbit on about my own opinions but instead put forward my arguments supported by secondary sources.
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    @43rd Foot, I fail to see how setting out the points to be discussed in your essay can be classified as weak? If you take the time to read the entire essay you might perhaps see that I do not rabbit on about my own opinions but instead put forward my arguments supported by secondary sources.
    I don't see how in a short paper like this that you would need to utilize the first person. Let your arguments stand on their own. If you need to explain what you are doing, then you aren't being clear enough in your writing. Utilizing the first person like this is as training wheels, or that it's meant to make it easier for you to present what it is you are doing and therefore prevent a loss of purpose. A truly well crafted paper does not need to rely on such structures.

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    Indeed, well then next time I'm writing an essay for college I'll leave that out and watch my grades plummet through the floor then yes? A truly well crafted paper you say? So any article that is prefaced by the author setting out their arguments smacks to you of training wheels? Also, I think you'll find I do not rely on the first two sentences of my introduction throughout the whole essay.
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    ut Iberni in rebellionis scopulum impegisse censendi non sint si pro religione, rege et patria tuenda.
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    Quote Originally Posted by MagisterEquites View Post
    Indeed, well then next time I'm writing an essay for college I'll leave that out and watch my grades plummet through the floor then yes? A truly well crafted paper you say? So any article that is prefaced by the author setting out their arguments smacks to you of training wheels?
    If you need those training wheels to get a decent grade, then I suspect your professors have made it mandatory. When that happens the professor is simply trying to make it easier for you, to allow for the less talented to point a spotlight on what it is they are trying to say. Put it like this: a history paper, like a good joke, shouldn't have to be explained before it is put forward. If you have to explain what it is you are doing by openly stating "In this paper I will..." then you are not comfortable enough with your command of language to make it clear in another fashion.

    And yes, there are certain articles that are not written particularly well. One of the evidences of lack of skill is the use of the "In this X I will Y..." construct. There are plenty of academics, too, who are capable enough with their writing to present to the reader in a lucid manner what their argument is without falling back on the first person crutch. There is a time and a place for the first person, but a short paper or article is not it.


    Also, I think you'll find I do not rely on the first two sentences of my introduction throughout the whole essay.
    Then it is evidently not necessary to include.

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    Well I frankly disagree, a history essay is (however short) in need of an introduction, it is basic essay structure. While my arguments may well bear themselves out (which I hope they do) it still behooves me to point out to any potential reader what arguments I will be making and how I intend to deal with them. This is a common nicety if nothing else.
    Also I am fairly confident in my abilities as a writer, with good reason. Perhaps you should look at your own sentence structure before being overly critical of others?
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    ut Iberni in rebellionis scopulum impegisse censendi non sint si pro religione, rege et patria tuenda.
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    43rdFoot is correct, at least from an American perspective. In a upper level history course in the US your paper would probably receive a C simply because of the intro. (rest of the paper is good though! ) Are you from Britain Magister? I suspect there may be some difference here between countries. I've seen other essays from European posters that have a similar introductory style.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MagisterEquites View Post
    Well I frankly disagree, a history essay is (however short) in need of an introduction, it is basic essay structure. While my arguments may well bear themselves out (which I hope they do) it still behooves me to point out to any potential reader what arguments I will be making and how I intend to deal with them. This is a common nicety if nothing else.
    Also I am fairly confident in my abilities as a writer, with good reason. Perhaps you should look at your own sentence structure before being overly critical of others?
    I never said my own writing was perfect. I tend to have overburdened sentences that don't express what it is I am trying to say in the most clear way possible. I think your advice vis-a-vis sentence structure may be something you may want to think about, as the first sentence in this post is somewhat awkwardly written.

    That said, my own writing errors do not negate my point. First off, you are misunderstanding me. I never said that a paper shouldn't have an introduction. I also never said that an introduction should not make clear how your paper will make and support your argument. All I said is that the first person structure is a weakness in what otherwise appears to be a strong paper.

    For example, here is the introduction of a paper I wrote recently which attacks Victor David Hanson's thesis of a timeless western way of war. This isn't perfect, as there are some points which could have been written more elegantly. That said, I think I effectively elucidate what my argument is and how I am going to make it without resorting to the handicap of the first person. Evidently my professor agreed as I received a decent grade on it and it was used as an exemplar for the rest of the class.

    When Victor Davis Hanson published The Western Way of War in 1989, it was at a point in the Cold War where the division between the first and second world was never more clearly marked. Hanson argued that the ancient Greeks developed a culture of war that emphasized face-to-face combat to the death on open terrain between roughly equally equipped opponents who were free citizens of their respective states, and who were not professionally trained soldiers, and that this culture differentiated them from the forces of the “Orient.”(This sentence is too long and is a bit of a mouthful. It could, and should, have been better written.) In other words, the Greeks eschewed the petite guerre for formal battle between citizen soldiers. Hanson further argued that this culture has been the norm for the Western world ever since, and that the West is naturally imbued with a disgust for irregular conflict, which has been the norm when engaged with forces from the East. Hanson’s thesis is highly flawed and in the years since it was initially put forth many have made both direct and indirect criticisms of it. Critics correctly assail his monolithic approach to both the West and “the rest,” and likewise his assertion that the “Western way” has endured through the ages (if it ever existed in the first place). The “West” has never had a singular way of warfare, as either a martial culture that all western nations identified with or as a trend which extends through time.

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    I'm from Ireland StealthFox, It's simply considered common courtesy to introduce your essay like that. The paper would still work perfectly well without them, to be honest the only reason I took great offence is that 43rd Foot felt the need to blast the entire paper based on the opening sentences, not an attitude that I consider becoming in an historical/academic debate. Style differences are all very well and good, but saying your way is better than any other is overbearing and arrogant.
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    ut Iberni in rebellionis scopulum impegisse censendi non sint si pro religione, rege et patria tuenda.
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    Quote Originally Posted by MagisterEquites View Post
    I'm from Ireland StealthFox, It's simply considered common courtesy to introduce your essay like that. The paper would still work perfectly well without them, to be honest the only reason I took great offence is that 43rd Foot felt the need to blast the entire paper based on the opening sentences, not an attitude that I consider becoming in an historical/academic debate. Style differences are all very well and good, but saying your way is better than any other is overbearing and arrogant.
    I never blasted your entire paper. In fact, I limited the entirety of my comments to the introduction. I never said anything particularly harsh or unfair, either. If I seemed curt and direct in my evaluation of that part of your essay it's because those who read your work in real life will be even more so.

    I presented a case as to why using the first person is problematic. If you have a counterargument I would love to hear it.

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    Default Re: Causes and Effects of the Franco-German War

    Quote Originally Posted by MagisterEquites View Post
    Carl Von Clausewitz’s most famous, and often quoted, dictum that “War is a continuation of policy with and admixture of other means” has never been truer of a conflict than of the Franco-Prussian war. Otto von Bismarck was one such man who took this idea to heart, and the outbreak of the Franco Prussian war is directly tied to his government policies. Bismarck’s handling of the Hohenzollern Candidacy and his provocative re-writing of the Ems Telegram, in particular, demonstrate his attempts to provoke the French. In addition to Bismarck, another important individual to examine in this conflict is Helmuth Von Moltke (the elder). As Chief of Staff for the Prussian Army, Moltke played a decisive role in preparing the Prussian army for conflict. The readiness of the army then lead to a rise in tensions and an arms race between France and Prussia. Finally, this war is particularly notable for the creation of a unified German state under one Kaiser after France's defeat. This single united Germany would de-stabilise European power-politics and would eventually lead to the outbreak of World War I.
    Have to chime in for 43rd here, if any of my history professors see an "I" in a paper which isn't quoted from somebody, grades drop precipitously. There is your intro edited out of the 1st person.

    I must say though, what is your thesis here? As an essay or article, you need an argument, while this is more of a report. It's a fine report on the historical facts of the F-P War, but it's scattershot. You have multiple thesis options in here, but nothing clear, and that's even worse than the 1st person. To illustrate what I'm talking about, here was my thesis statement for a paper on the creation of the Ulster identity.

    "Northern Ireland rejected the Irish Free State not only for religious reasons but for economic, cultural and historic reasons as well"

    In my introduction, I discussed previous historiography, particularly focusing on how N. Ireland=Protestant and Ireland=Catholic. Then I put forth my thesis statement with a built in roadmap.

    Here are the options I see and how you might turn this into more of a research paper/article then a report.

    1. F-P as the best example of Clausewitz's theories and as an examination of Realpolitik. For this you would want to have your first main point be an examination of Clausewitz and connecting it to Bismarck's conceptions of Realpolitik. Then go back and point out contrary examples, nations not following this idea, either prior or at the same time (perhaps look at the Italian Wars of Unification). Then examine how Bismarck draws France into war etc. This paper is more of a Political History/Diplomatic History/Poly Sci type

    2. Examination of innovations in the Prussian army, why Prussia was able to win so handily. This would be were you talk about Moltke as Chief of Staff etc. More of a military history/maybe economic (cause of the I.R.).

    3. Impacts of the F-P war. This is more a diplomatic history paper which handles formation of the second Reich.


    As an example, I wrote a paper for my 400 level Military History course on the F-P War. I'd be glad to post it, though I need to dig it up first. My thesis was basically: The F-P War was by no means ended by the Battle of Sedan and the Germans could have still lost the war. It was a lot nicer than that, but that was basically it. I drew a lot on Bismarck memoirs and primary source books about the war etc. In retrospect, I did neglect possible French sources, but it's an undergrad paper, there are bound to be flaws.

    History papers aren't supposed to simply be pretty recaps of what happened, but rather put forth an argument or present new information/research.






    Rest in Peace Smokin Levon Helm

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