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    Default Re: A Goblin Tale: the Lazy Bunch chapter 1 - 39. Updated: 26th Oct 2012

    Never undersitmate the powers of furry animals with hats. ^^

    Thanks to Boustro'

    And today come Part 39: The Prosthetic of Sauron
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    Default Re: A Goblin Tale: the Lazy Bunch chapter 1 - 40. Updated: 27th Oct 2012

    Today I present Part 40: The Goblin, The Nazgûl and the Alpha Chief

    The second last chapter in A Goblin Tale, for all who awaited its demise haha
    Beside part 41 there will also come an additional Epiloge revealing least some of what happened to all our friends and foes we met along the way. 42 is the answer after all.
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    Default Re: A Goblin Tale: the Lazy Bunch chapter 1 - 41. Updated: 28th Oct 2012

    Last chapter, Part 41: The End of Doom is out
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    Default Re: A Goblin Tale: the Lazy Bunch chapter 1 - 41 + Epilogue. Updated: 29th Oct 2012

    And now it all comes to an end
    Thanks to all encouragement and appriciation along the way as we know have reached Epilogue: The Goblin Goes Ever On

    Best regards Ngugi
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    Default Re: A Goblin Tale: the Lazy Bunch episode 1 - 41 + Epilogue. Updated: 29th Oct 2012

    GIANT WINGED FIRE SPIDERS!!!!! I DEMAND IT TO BE IMPLEMENTED IN VANILLA TATW!!!!!
    I really hope they have wings

    Thanks, Ngugi
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    I have deduced, from your knowledge of Middle-Earth background, that you read scrupulously History of Middle Earth. Given your close-minded opinion on various aspects of Tolkien lore in detriment of TATW interest and gameplay, I believe that
    you are better suited to that reading activity, and suggest you go back to it.
    I guess it could work for some guys with Battle of Middle Earth as well...

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    Default Re: A Goblin Tale: the Lazy Bunch episode 1 - 41 + Epilogue. Updated: 29th Oct 2012

    They do have a certain appeal I have to agree upon haha!
    Concerning wings, well, just as in the case with the Balrog wings: thereon dispute the loremasters ^^

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    Default Re: A Goblin Tale: the Lazy Bunch episode 1 - 41 + Epilogue. Updated: 29th Oct 2012

    Ngugi, you are a GODDAMN author! I've just started reading LotR in English, and I think you're almost as good as Tolkien. And, with your lore information, you know it's a lot.
    (yeah, yeah, I'm fin player of TATW 3.2...

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    Default Re: A Goblin Tale: the Lazy Bunch episode 1 - 41 + Epilogue. Updated: 29th Oct 2012

    Great appracial there Bowmaster, thanks back to you
    I will not claim myself a Tolkien (yet ) but I'm very glad my texts are appriciated and give folks a good laugh!
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    Default Re: A Goblin Tale: the Lazy Bunch episode 1 - 41 + Epilogue. Updated: 29th Oct 2012

    So Gimli and Legolas drowned together? Perhaps a ship tried to save them, but Gimli couldn't reach it? Perhaps Legolas offered to throw him but Gimli replied,
    "NOBODY tosses a DWARF!" Then inspired by his pride Legolas bade the ship leave and the two went down together.

    Honestly that is how their tale should've been written by Tolkein.

    Still, marvellous book, and I am sad that it is over.

    Also, a question. Do you find writing as the bad guy more entertaining?
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    Default Re: A Goblin Tale: the Lazy Bunch episode 1 - 41 + Epilogue. Updated: 29th Oct 2012

    Hahaha, stuff for entierly new chapters in those ideas alone ^^

    Thanks, very kind words

    Many actors say that to play villains are more entertaining, and as long as you do not make them flat and stereotype (I get really bored with "I do evil stuff, because I am evil, because I am evil"-kind of villains) I'd say indeed they have a good shot at being more fun than 'good' guys; good heroes are seldom goodie-goodie after all.
    It do not have to be much at all, as simple as a strain of humanity even in a maniac who lost all sense, but as soon as you give them some dept they are very fun to follow (as I often view my writing) since they have no constraints beside what they themselves consider proper to do. It allows you to write more freely and creative IMO.
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    Default Re: A Goblin Tale: the Lazy Bunch episode 1 - 41 + Epilogue. Updated: 29th Oct 2012

    That was seriously a beautiful ending!

    Ngugi, I absolutely loved this series. A great humorous book based on lotr.

    You're not even close to being as good as Tolkien, though, sorry. Too many grammatical errors, language is way below his knowledge and your style is too way different to even compare the two of you. This to say: BECOME AN AUTHOR, MAN.

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    Default Re: A Goblin Tale: the Lazy Bunch episode 1 - 41 + Epilogue. Updated: 29th Oct 2012

    For such a long series, as it came to be, a worthy ending is a must

    Thanks; and don't worry haha, I do not seriously compair myself to a linguistic professor like Tolkien, he for sure even knew Swedish grammar better than I do haha. Still I have my niche and will take good help from translators if my WIP novels will enter the english market
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    Default Re: A Goblin Tale: the Lazy Bunch episode 1 - 41 + Epilogue. Updated: 29th Oct 2012

    I'd very much like to read them, anyhow. You could in return read some of my stuff, and then we could review each other's writings.

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    Default Re: A Goblin Tale: the Lazy Bunch episode 1 - 41 + Epilogue. Updated: 29th Oct 2012

    My big novel project I've been working on for 9½ years now, but still not written anything on the novels themselves [sic!], but just the background stories and info about the characters etc (is a fiction about the human future history about 2500 year ahead).
    However if you want to read something more of what I've written, which is almost never of A Goblin Tale-character I might note, there's always The People of the Pillars, the short story from the Writing Competition summer 2012 as I contributed with and as can be found in the spoiler box in my signature
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    Default Re: A Goblin Tale: the Lazy Bunch episode 1 - 41 + Epilogue. Updated: 29th Oct 2012

    Interesting. I could point a few spelling mistakes here and there, and I would've done some things differently, but I really liked it. You're certainly a better author than I am

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    Default Re: A Goblin Tale: the Lazy Bunch episode 1 - 41 + Epilogue. Updated: 29th Oct 2012

    Thanks! And damn, you read all of that so quick? You've a talent there ^^

    Can't say anything directly about your and mine skill but I have 3 direct tips;

    1) Read, and read a lot. Either good books to train to copy good books (but only to get a feeling before you retur to your own style, with new input) or bad books (to be made aware of how you would not write something that has a good idea; what I myself actually prefere)

    2) Get a good person to give feedback. Not someone who point out grammar but reflect on the story. Like 'why did that not happened before X because of/why did that not happened later on because of' or 'Shouldn't he/she say something more like...' etc etc

    3) Write. Each time you write you level up, in msall or big matters
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    Default Re: A Goblin Tale: the Lazy Bunch episode 1 - 41 + Epilogue. Updated: 29th Oct 2012

    1) I read a lot. Just finished the Talisman, now taking on LOTR again.

    2) I have some friends I occasionally ask for advice.

    3) I write in play-by-post role-playing forums, which is good for your character building skills.

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