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    Prologue

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    The Free Peoples were losing he war Dale had fallen and Lothlorien was the now under siege and Thrandiul had fall died defending his halls Eraidor remained untouched. In Rohan only Ederas ,Dunharrow and The Hornburg remained. Sauron now was sending an army to Minas Tirith. Saurman had Captured Eomer the third Marshel of the mark. Eomer was bribed into telling Saurman about Ederas's defenses.Then Suarman Makes Eomer The Cheiftian of Dunland.


    Chapter 1 The fall of Dunharrow

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    Eomer had 20000 Uruk-hai at his Command he came over a hill and saw a valley filled with tents with a Forest to the East and West. He ordered him men to hide in the woods . He walked to the camp . The Rohriiom cheered about his return but then Uruks ambushed and kiledl the whole camp in a few seconds and Eomer said This is Dunharrow men and it has fallen to Isenguard. At Isenguard Saurman Said Now it is time for an attack on Ederas.Eormer and his men prepared for the march.


    Chapter 2 The End of Ederas

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    Eomer knew that the Rohirrim would not patrol the land but he kept watch any way and this time his army was 40000 strong he knew now that he would bring down Ederas but how.He suddenly came up with an idea lets all burn the walls down. So the marched until they had finally reached Ederas then he gave all of his men torches and told them burn and kill they were burning by the time the garrison had notice half of Ederas was in flame the Uruks were all most at the golden hall. The Rohirrim charged on foot and the were met by orcs slashed an hacked till only there commander remained he was named Alric, Eomer Dismounted his horse and marched up the street to the golden hall and Alric and told him to Fight me. Eomer Tried to cut off his head but missed instead cut of his left arm Alric kept fighting and tired to cut of Eomers right arm but missed and Eomer cut off his head. the dead lay every were and the buildings had fallen Eomer had lost over quarters of his army the end of rohan was near.


    Chapter 3 The Last stand of the Rohirrom

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    Eomer received word that Gondor had fallen He laughed now none can save the horse lords he was also supposed go to the hornburg to Defeat Rohan for the last time. He marched to the Hornburg with 300000 he had Built Siege towers and a battering ram. He order his men to take the walls and to bring down he gates. His mem marched to the walls the gate had fallen his men rushed inside while the walls had been reached with the siege towers. His men had all mot reached the top of the hornburg. The Rohirrim on the walls had fled to the keep the orcs were battering down the gate then the gate had broke open and Eomer started walking into the keep his men were killing men left and right.Then Eomer saw Theoden and stabbed him in the back. After that the Rohirrim were all dead. Eomer now learned hat the Elves of LothLorien and the dwarves of Erebor and the Blue Mountains had fallen.Now all that was left was Eraidor and Lindon.

    Chapter 4 The Attack on Lindon
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    Eomer was told that all of Elves were fleeing to Valinor but had ot wait on a ship from Cirdon the shipwright
    very few elves had left Middle Earth since the the war of the ring but many were now fleeing.Now Sauron wanted all of his Evil Vassles to bring down Lindon Sauron had made Eomer the Leader of Armies that would bring down Lindon. Eomer Ordered the Corsairs of umbar to surround Lindon with there navies. While the Mumkil form harad would take down the enemies docks while Goblins were to cut down the trees near by the Uruks and the orcs from morder would soround and forcing the elves fight or stave and or drown. the elves boarded there only ships and tired to break the blockade and idea all the elves had die but few and these had so little fighting skill that they charged the orcs and were demolished. Eormer learned that Imladris had fallen now all that remaind was the ring and Eraidor.


    Chapter 5 Last Stand of the Free Peoples
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    Sauron's servants had raided Eraidor so much they eventually took some risk and took all of it over except for Bree. Suaron knew that all of his foes were there Aragorn and Bororimir and Gandalf. He actually relied on Eomer to do his bidding Eomer had killed all of his disobedient subjects. Eomer Now had to walk with over a milloin men and the leaders of Sauron's Vassles and Sauron him Self. Sauron had found the Ring in hobbiton. Eomer knew if Sauron won He would rule over all of the Men of Middle Earth. The finally arrived at bree was now was a stone fortress with towing walls.But Sauron had threw them down.Now his Men started to kill they went Berserk killing left and right. till only Aragorn Borimir and Gandalf were left Suaron said only Eomer, The Witch king and Himself would get kill any of these three men. The Witch kings Steed had killed Borimir before he had told it kill him.Gandalf was injured and then imprisoned beyond Middle Earth. Only Aragorn reamained Eomer tried to stab his heart but missed Aragorn tried to decapitate Eomer thee evenly matched they kept tired to kill each other but missed unilt finll while Aragorn was trying Decapitate Eomer Cut Aragorn in Half.


    Eplouge

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    Eomer now sat in his gold throne in his capital of Eomer. He now had to put down Suaron's most reblesome servants the orcs out side of Mordor. Eomer went With The Balrog and the Nazgul they were his personal body guard. He saw that they were fleeing from him eventually he made it to goblin town and captured them he immedilty marched to Mordor.He now ponderd. wich of his sons would rule his realm His first son Leofara was aggressive and warlike but his other son Nirthor was clam and cool headed but would follow orders to the death. He died on January 24 4th age 30 His son Nirthor became king and eventually the Valar came to get rid of sauron. Nirthor fought The valar and they were imprisoned with Gandalf Sauron Freed Melkor and the world became a place utter madness.
    Last edited by Aragon150; December 04, 2011 at 06:37 AM.

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    Is this an AAR without pictures or a fan fiction or whatever? Or have you just sorta... Made it up
    Good base, but you need some punctuation and some screenies.
    English is your second language I take it?

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    Not bad, a few punctuation errors (not to be a grammar Nazi ) but it sounds like English is not your first language either so I won't hold it against you

    You should do another that's longer with pictures maybe. Even if it's just random battles from Custom Battles. +rep

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    thanks guys for your input im just bad revision and editing cause i cant spell sorry

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