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    Icon7 TotW 102a: "They're Burning Futures in the Mountains"


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    Default Re: TotW 101a: "They're Burning Futures in the Mountains"

    Second try is a charm!

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    Default Re: TotW 101a: "They're Burning Futures in the Mountains"

    Quote Originally Posted by Stultus View Post
    Second try is a charm!

    Bam!!!!.......

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    Default Re: TotW 101a: "They're Burning Futures in the Mountains"

    The other thread can stand forever as a testament to how bad I am with computers. I swear that enter key tried to mug me. :

    I tried to have a few different types of images. Hopefully it'll get those creative juices flowing for everyone.

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    Default Re: TotW 102a: "They're Burning Futures in the Mountains"

    Yeah your right {for me it's the 2 key that sticks} and believe me,NO-One is more computer clueless than me......

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    Default Re: TotW 102a: "They're Burning Futures in the Mountains"

    Quote Originally Posted by Mega Tortas de Bodemloze View Post
    Yeah your right {for me it's the 2 key that sticks} and believe me,NO-One is more computer clueless than me......
    Well... I wouldn't be so sure of that

    Btw. nice pictures

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    Default Re: TotW 102a: "They're Burning Futures in the Mountains"

    Thanks.

    I had gathered five pictures and then remembered this is a Total War forum, so I scrounged up the last picture.

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    Default Re: TotW 102a: "They're Burning Futures in the Mountains"

    I'm back. And I'm Reserved.





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    Default Re: TotW 102a: "They're Burning Futures in the Mountains"

    Ah, meant to get in on the rain one, but alas. This could have formed a nice antithesis to what I would've written for that one. Anyway, I'm looking forward to popping this week's cherry, so to speak.

    The King and the Mountain.
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    They were an ancient people, their years seemingly incalculable by the standards of our measurement. It's doubtful there was a time when they didn't live there, in those mountains, practicing the ancient rites of their culture. And there were many rites indeed, each pertaining to the society in it's own way. The sapêr'nub fa'fonishan,” the “dream kings” of their society, the priests who interpret dreams, or the “shü't je'an je'sh'en,” the “mountain runners,” the messengers between the people. Yes, it was a complex culture, full of obscure and seemingly pointless rules and mores. But to them, it is life.


    It was that life which the King could never fully understand. He had met many peoples in his time, the simplistic plainsmen, who were assimilated easily, or the civilization of Nevas, who, given their small army and focus on science and the arts, were destroyed. But these people puzzled him. On the surface, they seemed to be simple hunters and traders. They showed no affinity for the art of war, and yet every attack he sent was repulsed. They turned to hunting men as if it was a new breed of deer. He wished he could assimilate them, as he did the plainsmen, but he knew that could not happen. Their cultures were too different. So he reviewed his options. Give up? Out of the question. His reputation was built on crushing all who opposed him. How could he give up and save face? He couldn't, so another option was to be cosidered. An option any other opponent would not have required.


    Shol was the son of the village dream king, a blood line which gave him considerable stature in his community. He was, therefore, chosen as the delegate from his village to go to meet with this outside force, the “yisha”as his kind called them. They were marching through the mountains at that moment, following the path they knew would lead them to the yisha's camp. They were no further than thirty zopish'an (a unit of measurement the people used, equivalent to around 20 yards) away from where they believed the camp was when they met a yisha. He must have been young, for his stature was slim and short. Shol approached him, saying, “Shaton've. Kinâ she? Kinâ shä Shol. Fo'tak fo'shä damês, shotün ka fonishan.” The boy stared up at him, bewildered. Another of the delegates quickly reprimand Shol for speaking their language, stating that the boy would not speak it. Shol laughed, realizing his mistake. He turned back to the boy, now pointing at himself while saying Shol. He then pointed at the boy. The boy's eyes lit up, and pointing at himself, he said “Jake.” Shol then made a circle around his head, and glared at the delegates. The boy made a mock scepter to clarify, before saying “King!” But just as they reached that moment of clarification, they heard a noise behind them, and felt heat. Shol turned around, quickly, and saw the mountain on fire. The heat was unbearable, and the smoke filled Shol's lungs. He turned around to run, only to see that the way was blocked by fire. Shol didn't know how it had spread this far this fast, but he knew it was over. As he drew his last breath, he collapsed, and was burned to ash.


    The King was brushing ash of his cloak when his son ran up to him, smiling. “Did you do what I asked you to do, my son?”the King asked. The son nodded. “You dropped that torch where I asked you to? You did it exactly when and where I told you to?”Again, the son nodded, saying, “Yes, father. I waited until I saw the mountainmen, before dropping the torch. I made sure they didn't see me do it, either.” the King nodded, gazing out at the fire raging on the mountain. He let out a slow laugh, barely percievable but for the shaking of his shoulders. He turned back to his son, put him on his lap, and said, “You did well, Jake. You did well.”

    A bit choppy, I know, but bear with it. I think you may even enjoy it a little.
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    Default Re: TotW 102a: "They're Burning Futures in the Mountains"

    Reserved for glory!

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    Default Re: TotW 102a: "They're Burning Futures in the Mountains"

    Glory eh? I shall strive to beat you sir! Nahh who am I kidding....

    *reserved*

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    There was quite some time since my last post here, thought I would give this another go







    A Spartan battle hymn.
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    The phalanx is the clenched fist, raised in defiance against an oppressor.
    The hoplon, our shields, a bulwark for our enemies upon which to exhaust themselves.
    The duro and xiphos, tools to bring the demise and utter defeat of our adversaries.



    Our flesh made to be molded, strengthen and sacrificed to protect our homes.
    Our plight to stand ever victorious in the face of overwhelming odds.
    Our goal to pass judgement in the eyes of the gods.



    Ares, god of war, grant us strenght!
    Apollon, god of prophecy, grant us resilience!
    Zeus, King of gods, grant us victory!



    Blood to be run from the throats of defeat.
    Blood is the price that we all have to meet.
    Blood in the rivers and blood on our chest.



    We are the chosen.
    We are the defense.
    We are sparta.


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    Reserved.

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    Reserved. I've got a couple of ideas floating around in my head.



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    Come, come, don’t be scared, it’s only a bit further. There, do you see it? No? Come closer then. Right there through the trees, yes right there across the lake. Do you see it? There lies the hidden land. A land of magic and mystery. One can only go there when he knows the secret. Do you want to see it? Come and I’ll show you. We must hurry though, the sun has almost disappeared. Right, here take my hand. Now, when you see the sun disappear behind those mountains you jump. Just hold my hand and I will guide you. Are you ready? Close your eyes aaaaand…..jump! Don’t let go of my hand. Keep holding it, we’re nearly there. Almost… yes we’ve landed. Now open your eyes, no not too fast. Let them get used to the light. Yes? Fantastic, have a look around. Do you see them? No? Try again, but this time focus on the bushes. You see them now? Right there! Yes of course they are real, they live here. What? In mushrooms? No, those are just fairytales. This is real. They live in tiny houses build under the trees. Oh! Now they’ve spotted us. See how quick they are? They are called Kinstruffel, but you probably know them as Gnomes.
    Well they are gone now. Let me take you further, there are many more things to see. For instance, there on that branch. Beautiful isn’t she? A living flower. Ah she heard me, hear her giggle. ‘Come down little one, I want you to meet someone.’ Here, just hold your hand up and she will fly right towards you. Hah, didn’t I tell you? Her name is Lilly and she’s a fairy. ‘I’m sorry little one, but we have to continue our journey. There’s so much to see and we have so little time. What? Yes of course I’ll come back. Now off you go Lilly.’ Ah the innocence of a fairy. They’ll trust anyone and they’re very curious.
    Come one let’s go. Watch out for that plant… yes better walk around it. It’s evil that thing. Flesh eating, many creatures fell prey to it’s wonderful scent. No, not all that lives here is beautiful. Here too are evil things… *cough* No need to become emotional. Just follow me and I’ll show you the cottage of Madame Hurban. She’s a witch. No not an evil one, she’s a friendly old lady who helps anyone who has need for it.
    What! Look at the time, we’ve been here for hours! Yes hours, time here goes much faster than in your world. We must head back now, before you’ll be forced to stay here forever. Come on run! Yes, grab my hand I’ll lead you. Right through there, now up here. Yes it’s a shortcut… come on faster the sun has almost reached the horizon. Ah finally we are here. Right you know what to do. Close your eyes and hold my hand. Three, two….one and jump.

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    behold, the glory of the one I had in my pocket from the Undiscovered Country

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    Six months ago, as I left all I had ever known, I could not even fathom what I now stand here gazing upon today. My life began on the streets of Dublin, where I remained for 20 years, picking up scraps not even fit for a rat, and even getting into fights over them. I remember when the redcoats came and cleaned the streets, sent us off to orphanages. But I escaped, I returned to the streets, Lord knows why. After twenty years of hard living, carefully earning money from the most hellish of jobs and subsequently frittering it all away on drinks and assorted ladies of the night, I saw a ship. This ship was the most majestic ship I had ever seen, her clean deck awash with a flurry of activity as men prepared to make sail. Her gold paint sparkling with dew in the shining light slowly peeking over the horizon. And I stood there, watching as deckhands greeted the Bosun, as the captain, in a splendid uniform stood perched on the poop watching his crew with a sense of delight only seen in men as they watch their sons. I began walking toward the ship with a wide gait, I felt hundreds of eyes slowly come upon me, wondering who this stranger was. As I reached the ship I was seized by a Marine. "Stop" a stern, yet kindly voice shouted. It was the captain, "Who are you?" I had been frozen unable to speak anything but a long, slow "um, ah..." "Well, Um Ahh, are you seeking employment?" The captain asked. I shook my head, dumbfounded at the prospect of leaving Ireland, and being able to touch this beautiful ship. I ventured aboard to begin my new life on this ship bound for America. I was to become a clerk, and I was taught to read in the first three weeks of my new emplyoment. This life was paradise, at least, until the fifth week.

    It became hell. As we neared America, and the storms constantly assailed our ship. Each day we would lose an upwards of five men, cast into the unforgiving seas. As we neared Cape Cod, our destination, the ship racked violently. Men were spilled overboard into their death by Neptune, as an ungodly sound could be heard as our ship moved forward. It was rocks. Our hull had been torn away, we were sinking. A massive wave was cast upon the deck, taking my feet from under me, and I was cast into the raging seas. The next morning was calm. The ship was gone, and I saw nobody left. I took hold of a piece of wood, and just paddled for shore: my only hope of life. Not three hours later was I hoisted out of the water by benevolent fishermen, I decided that I should now begin yet another life, one in America.

    When I arrived in Boston, I had nothing, it looked as if my life was to go the same way it had in Dublin. I would do odd jobs and fritter away my money, no way for a man to live as I look back on it. But there was one thing different: I was free. Free from the tumultuous struggles of the old world, from the yolk of the monarchy, Here I was free to let my vices control me, or put them behind, which is exactly what I did. I worked for another month, but saved my money. I bought food and supplies, and met several other men doing the same thing. We pooled our resources and marched west: into the undiscovered country. Now I stand here, on the other side of the Mississippi river, gazing out over this beautiful land, with its unending skies, filled with birds of every kind, dotted with puffs of clouds; Majestic rivers, their water providing the livliehood for the few who have decided to live here, and crowded with such numbers of fish that it is difficult to calculate; The seas of grass, waving across the prarie, and crisscrosed by Buffalo and native alike; and immaculate mountains, guardians of freedom, standing tall gazing down upon the whole of the nation, with their snow capped peaks filling the horizon. As I gaze forward, I know that this is a land of freedom, though undiscovered it may be. I look back to my partners, and continue forward. As I make my step I continue to explore this undiscovered country.



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    Default Re: TotW 102a: "They're Burning Futures in the Mountains"

    Damnit, Gunny. You're too good at this.
    I thought about writing something clever, but then I remembered I'm not clever enough.

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    I'll have a submission up before the next storyboard. Busy week this week.

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    Four stories in. Goes to vote Monday morn so Hurry hurry with your stories or get leftbehind as a rollover....

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    They're Burning Futures in the Mountains

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    We could only look on as the fire destroyed our homes. Flames licking at the timbers and blazing though the thatch. The flames destroyed everything, our homes, our livelihoods, our futures. There was nothing we could do to save any of it; the red-coated soldiers that lit the fires guaranteed that fact.

    Our landlord had decided he could make money using our land for sheep. Sheep, for Christ’s sake! We would lose everything for sheep. Instead we would be forced to leave the homes our ancestors had lived in for generations. Forced to travel across the mountains in the winter snow with our women, children, elderly and sick to take ship to America where those of us that had survived would have chance to make a new life. We would face starvation, disease, the highland winter, exhaustion and other great hardships so someone can make a few more pounds tending sheep. And so it is that we turn our backs on the past that was burning to ash and took the first steps towards an uncertain future in a far off land.

    Is it any wonder why our women cry and the men’s heart burn with a fury as hot as the flames that destroyed our lives?



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