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    ON HIATUS


    Pre-face

    Before I begin, I'd just like to point out that my computer is made out of garbage. So if you notice anything...errr...ugly. I apologize



    Summer, 222.
    Royal Council
    - Aquitaine

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    The year is 222. With the passing of the Great Torment, the royal council seeks to restore the Royaume (Kingdom) to its former glory, and so the Grand Chevaliers (Great Knights) gather in the capital of Aquitane to decide the kingdoms future...
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    "We must strike now!", roared Guy. "Every minute we spend here talking gives Avalon that much more time to muster its strength. We must take Eragon before they do!"

    Raymond gave Guy a sly grin. "My lord...", he began, his voice dripping with sarcasm, "how do you plan on taking the walls? Even a Vexille knows how to close a gate." At this the royal guards laughed.
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    Raymond stood, turning his back to the council table, and walked towards the window. Looking out from the great hall, Raymond could see the buildings of the town watch. The barracks was an assorted jumble of makeshift houses, and the training yard was little more than a patch of dirt.
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    He sighed. "Our scouts report that Lord Baldwin has fifty, maybe sixty, knights garrisoned in Eragon. Plus the typical rabble one can expect to be mucking about."

    "We have sixty knights as well," spoke Bohemond, "and at least four hundred levies."

    "Lesser knights", added Guy, "may I remind you, brother? Barely above a commoner."
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    "Four hundred arms is all I need," said Guy. "Before winter ends, Baldwin will be dead."

    Raymond cocked his head back and let out a guffaw. "You mean to kill him, my lord? How so, by drowning him in your blood?"

    In an instant Guy was on his feet, the Meravangi blade poised at Raymond's throat. Raymond's smile was gone. The Meravangi and Tarante royal guards began to draw their swords as well, but the Roi's (King's) voice sent them all clattering to the floor. All, except for Guy's.
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    "Enough! I will not have my hall turned into a brawler's pit! Guy, if you feel you have been dishonoured, then issue your challenge on the jousting lists." Roi Philippe rose from his throne. "A chevalier does not allow words to guide his actions. That is the role of peasantry. A chevalier allows action to guide his words."

    Guy sheathed his sword and slowly sank into his seat, his eyes never leaving Raymond's. Just then, the great doors of the hall flew open as a messenger hurried inside. He knelt before the council table, then made his way towards Raymond, who was still standing by the window. The messenger whispered something into Raymond's ear, and when he had finished, Raymond was smiling once more. "Forgive me, Roi, but there is an urgent matter that I must attend to at Chateau de Tarante. May I have your leave?"
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    The king nodded his consent, and Raymond left the hall. The messenger again knelt before the council table, before following his lord. Not until Raymond had left did Guy loosen the grip on his hilt.


    Winter, 222.
    Siege of Eragon

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    Under cover of night, Guy lays siege to the Vexille town of Eragon.
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    A unit of levy spearmen is sent to the gates with a battering ram.
    But then...
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    ...a sudden twist; the ram catches fire!
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    A combined force of levy and mercenary spears is sent to the western wall to salvage the situation.
    They must take the wall if the Chevalier are to have any chance of opening the gates...
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    After some fierce fighting, the men take the wall.
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    The hired band of freelancers sees the gates open, and charge towards the town.
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    The prince and his knights follow shortly after.
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    Baldwin waits in the center of town to make his final stand.
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    The Vexille fight valiantly...
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    ...but they are no match for the Royaume knights. (The peasants helped a bit too.)
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    Eragon is taken!
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    But at what cost?
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    .....

    Meanwhile, in faraway Eiffel.
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    Absolutely nothing of importance happens whatsoever.
    Last edited by EleventyK; February 01, 2011 at 02:38 PM.

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    Default Re: The Last Ride of the Chevalier

    Nice start! I like the way you combine pictures and text.
    +rep

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    Quote Originally Posted by toluas View Post
    Nice start! I like the way you combine pictures and text.
    +rep
    Thanks! I wanted to include a battle in my first post, but I couldn't get the Cinematic Editor to work.
    I'll probably just stick with the print-screen button

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    Default Re: The Last Ride of the Chevalier

    Not an expert on CineEd - though I remember a thread on this board about it! - but Fraps is a pretty good tool for taking screenshots; in case you're interested.

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    Quote Originally Posted by toluas View Post
    Not an expert on CineEd - though I remember a thread on this board about it! - but Fraps is a pretty good tool for taking screenshots; in case you're interested.
    I did find a thread for the CineEd earlier, but apparently I'm too dumb to follow the instructions properly. I might try again tomorrow.
    As for FRAPS...no thank you! My computer is slow enough as it is, FRAPS just makes me want to off myself

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    Default Re: The Last Ride of the Chevalier

    Oh you never said you were going to write an AAR, EleventryK !

    Ill see if i can whip up something for ya.

    Edit:translation: New Chevaliers textures in the pipe.

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    Default Re: The Last Ride of the Chevalier

    A nice start,I like the way you portray the feuds one could expect in a Bon Chevaliers court.

    And that placeholder is EPIC!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Daraunon View Post
    A nice start,I like the way you portray the feuds one could expect in a Bon Chevaliers court.

    And that placeholder is EPIC!
    Probably better than most "real" pics!

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    Nice! I like it! +rep

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    Wooo! A Bons Chevalier AAR! A great start by the way and I really like the use of pictures combined with the text.

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    Quote Originally Posted by EleventyK View Post
    Meanwhile, in faraway Eiffel.

    Absolutely nothing of importance happens whatsoever.
    This made me lol! Nicely done again,and your use of pictures is quite interesting.

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    Quote Originally Posted by EleventyK View Post
    Absolutely nothing of importance happens whatsoever.
    Nicely done!

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    Default Re: The Last Ride of the Chevalier

    This is great, I will definitely be following.

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    Default Re: The Last Ride of the Chevalier

    I expect my glorious knights to be riding out in style in this AAR !

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    Quote Originally Posted by Massive_attack View Post
    I expect my glorious knights to be riding out in style in this AAR !
    I've been planning to do just that, but unfortunately have gotten rather busy with life.
    I liked it better when I had nothing to do but play video games

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