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  1. November 09, 2010, 08:42 AM #1
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    Default My manga drawing attempt...

    Hey guys I would like you to give me some feedback on this page I did for my manga. Rate it and tell me what I can improve etc...

    IT'S WIP

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  2. November 09, 2010, 12:52 PM #2
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    Default Re: Some feedback please...

    ANYONE????
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  3. November 09, 2010, 01:23 PM #3
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    Default Re: My manga drawing attempt...

    It's good, I think you're on the right path, but it obviously needs a lot of improvements. Not that I could do better myself, but if you want it to compare to "normal" manga...
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    My manga drawing attempt...


    Wow...Very nice... +Rep I'm sooooo jealous of you guys that can draw.... Thanks for sharing...
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  5. November 09, 2010, 01:40 PM #5
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    Default Re: My manga drawing attempt...

    Quote Originally Posted by Mega Tortas de Bodemloze View Post

    Wow...Very nice... +Rep I'm sooooo jealous of you guys that can draw.... Thanks for sharing...
    Thank you

    It's good, I think you're on the right path, but it obviously needs a lot of improvements. Not that I could do better myself, but if you want it to compare to "normal" manga...
    How can I make it look more proffesional?
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  6. November 09, 2010, 02:06 PM #6
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    Quote Originally Posted by Sulphuristical View Post
    It's good, I think you're on the right path, but it obviously needs a lot of improvements. Not that I could do better myself, but if you want it to compare to "normal" manga...
    Proportion(?) I think. That's difficult for me when I draw. I notice it when I watch my drawing after few hours. And remember little details, like finger joints etc.

    Still great work, better than my drawings
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  7. November 09, 2010, 02:37 PM #7
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    Quote Originally Posted by ☠Hawk Eyes Mihawk☠ View Post
    How can I make it look more proffesional?
    Get better at drawing depth, that's a good start. For example the guy with the gun looks rather... flat. Admittedly, it looks as good as flat can look, but it requires some more depth to feel real. Can't give any advice on how to achieve that other than practice, practice, practice.
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    Nice. I like his shoes.
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  9. November 09, 2010, 07:09 PM #9
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    Nice job, with more practice it could be exceptional. Keep it up.
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  10. November 09, 2010, 08:40 PM #10
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    Default Re: My manga drawing attempt...

    Work on your anatomy its a little clunky and too boxy

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    What exactly is manga? is it different from anime? people watch this kind of thing as porn?

    Why are some Westerners into it?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Dodge View Post
    What exactly is manga? is it different from anime? people watch this kind of thing as porn?

    Why are some Westerners into it?
    Anime is animation, manga is like this picture a cartoon magazine and hentai is porn. Am I correct?
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    What exactly is manga? is it different from anime? people watch this kind of thing as porn?

    Why are some Westerners into it?
    Manga is A japanese comic illustration with the characteristics of anime. There are both manga and anime called hentai and they are depicting sexual acts.

    And thank you for the replies people
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    Extremely well drawn, Panman. +Rep
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    Default Re: My manga drawing attempt...

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  16. November 10, 2010, 06:42 PM #16
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    Post your drawings in The Graphics Workshop.


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  17. November 11, 2010, 12:21 AM #17
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    Quote Originally Posted by Tzar View Post
    Post your drawings in The Graphics Workshop.


    P.S.
    Good job
    I think this is the wrong place also in any case it should be in the sub forum not in the workshop area...

    P.S. Great work I would work a bit on the faces.



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