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    Quote Originally Posted by Darkan View Post
    Great update, two battles to slowly introduce us to the Rus way of life (and death), the novgorod exile story, I bet he will play a part in events to come, escpecially in dealings with Novgorod. So yes indeed my good sir, a very well done update, nicely balanced between fighting and sorytelling. (still wayting to break the 50 post barrier, don´t think I forgot I owe some nice rep to many good AARtists). I know we will have to be patient and let the story evolve but maaaaaannnnn, it just eats at me. I must say I have thought of at least 2 different things about Oleg and what his fate could have been ....*breathing slowly, trying to calm down*...ok, I´m better now.
    Thank you Darkan! I was lucky to get a guy with "Novgorod" in his name. The random events have been very generous for my plot development in this campaign so far. I have a few variants for Oleg's story based on what the campaign will provide. But I am glad that the Cumans attacked as now there is the chance to reach Azaq... well, eventually.


    Quote Originally Posted by Ottheinrich View Post
    Great Story so far!

    I really hope that some cuman derriers will be kicked, because I failed many a times defending Pereyaslav with only Archers and Junior Militia.
    Thanks, I'm glad you enjoy this! The Kievan Junior Militia was a somewhat unpleasant surprise for me, they look cool and have large shields, but not super useful otherwise. Well, they are cheap. But I have to rely on them a lot, and that's one reason why I have quite high rates of casualties.
    The one thing that puzzled me with this attack is that the Cuman armies are not exactly full (or even half) stacks. But there may be some follow up guys under the fog, who knows?

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    Brilliant start, mate!
    But is isn't possible to match "The Chronicle of a Hungarian Freeman", or is it?
    Well, not really. But I'll try.
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    Hi Radzeer,

    Interesting chapter. I agree to say that the most important thing was your new character, from Novgorod. I just hope the Smolensk people won't consider him like a traitor and attempt to kill him. But as you said, it is still better than a Kiev guy...

    Moreover, I'm pleased to notice that Oleg had been taken deep in the Cuman steppes. I forecast epic open battles. For your story, it seems to be the best and most original to fight the Eastern front , instead of the western one.

    And good battle, obviously (the one with the monastery ).

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    Quote Originally Posted by la coupe est pleine View Post
    Hi Radzeer,

    Interesting chapter. I agree to say that the most important thing was your new character, from Novgorod. I just hope the Smolensk people won't consider him like a traitor and attempt to kill him. But as you said, it is still better than a Kiev guy...

    Moreover, I'm pleased to notice that Oleg had been taken deep in the Cuman steppes. I forecast epic open battles. For your story, it seems to be the best and most original to fight the Eastern front , instead of the western one.

    And good battle, obviously (the one with the monastery ).
    Thank you! I, too, like the epic feeling of the steppes. I also like the landscapes that are generated for the battles. The area looks much less impressive on the campaign map.
    On the other hand, some of my western neighbors appear a bit trigger-happy. Fortunately a crusade was called on Cairo, so that should keep them busy for awhile... although those experienced troops will come back at some point. Go Fatimids!

    The next update will be a longer one, three battles, 40+ pictures... hopefully I can write it up by Sunday or so. I got to the point where the rebels are mopped up, so it's time to get some real TW action.

    Thanks for reading!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Radzeer View Post
    The next update will be a longer one, three battles, 40+ pictures... hopefully I can write it up by Sunday or so. I got to the point where the rebels are mopped up, so it's time to get some real TW action.
    This sounds GREAT! I can´t wait to see some bloodshed and witness sword-forged events. Let the enemy taste RUSsian steel and be trampled by their mighty horses. Muahahahahaha Hmmm , that was a bit much....Or was it?

    Oooh, by the way, I wanted to ask what Alexios thinks of the Holy Grail ...he is a priest after all. (I hope I´m not getting ahead of the story)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Darkan View Post
    This sounds GREAT! I can´t wait to see some bloodshed and witness sword-forged events. Let the enemy taste RUSsian steel and be trampled by their mighty horses. Muahahahahaha Hmmm , that was a bit much....Or was it?
    No, that was ok.

    Quote Originally Posted by Darkan View Post
    Oooh, by the way, I wanted to ask what Alexios thinks of the Holy Grail ...he is a priest after all. (I hope I´m not getting ahead of the story)
    Just a little bit.
    There will be a section on the role of the Grail in the update after the next one. (I wrote that section up already.)

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    Oops, sorry Radzeer, I didn't have the time to come up to TWCenter, and I couldn't vote for your previous AAR, apologies, sorry

    This AAR really has another interesting storyline, I really like it And the screenshots are just getting better and better, I really enjoy looking at them (So you use the "ENTER" advice you've been given by Iberia? I never thought of that as well...xD)

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    oh damn dude, it looks like the Cumans have had enough of Kiev, but I'm interested in whats that little Roman army is going to do near Oleshe.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mr. Bean Laden View Post
    Oops, sorry Radzeer, I didn't have the time to come up to TWCenter, and I couldn't vote for your previous AAR, apologies, sorry

    This AAR really has another interesting storyline, I really like it And the screenshots are just getting better and better, I really enjoy looking at them (So you use the "ENTER" advice you've been given by Iberia? I never thought of that as well...xD)
    Thanks, I'm glad you like the story too. And yes, the 'enter' trick has helped a lot as I now get the whole width of the screen (no gray arrow). But I can only think of that as still...


    Quote Originally Posted by S6k6l6v View Post
    oh damn dude, it looks like the Cumans have had enough of Kiev, but I'm interested in whats that little Roman army is going to do near Oleshe.
    Yep, they have had enough, but now the feeling is mutual. On the Romans... I have no idea. They've been sitting there since I took Oleshe. I'm allied with them, but I cannot draw that army into a battle because of the river.

    Thanks for reading and commenting everybody! The writeup of the next update is almost ready, so the Sunday update seems certain.

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    I finally got the time to read the latest update. Great job at Smolensk! I loved the backstory around it, and the battle seemed really close! Sucks about the Cumans though, hope you drive them back and reach Azaq, where hopefully a clue could be found.

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    The next update will be a longer one, three battles, 40+ pictures... hopefully I can write it up by Sunday or so. I got to the point where the rebels are mopped up, so it's time to get some real TW action.
    Nice new.
    You are a very prolific writer. Knowing the level of your pictures, you are making alone a "experimented screenshot thread".

    And it is good to know that you erased all those rebels. Plots and alliances will go on...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Thokran View Post
    I finally got the time to read the latest update. Great job at Smolensk! I loved the backstory around it, and the battle seemed really close! Sucks about the Cumans though, hope you drive them back and reach Azaq, where hopefully a clue could be found.
    Thank you, Thokran, I appreciate your support! The Smolensk battle was the most fun so far. Now Azaq is a priority, not just because of the plot but because of the campaign too.

    Quote Originally Posted by la coupe est pleine View Post
    Nice new.
    You are a very prolific writer. Knowing the level of your pictures, you are making alone a "experimented screenshot thread".
    And it is good to know that you erased all those rebels. Plots and alliances will go on...
    Well, thank you, but I do have my writing limitations. Sometimes it is just less obvious.
    The screenshots are more simple now that I know the "enter trick". But I guess my maxed out resolution also helps. The Kievan units look great - and I can finally recruit some higher tier units too (coming soon in the story)!

    The next update is up within an hour.

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    4. The road to Azaq

    Yaropolk, Rurik, and the rest of the defenders of Pereyaslav watched in anger how the Cumans burn the houses and farms around the city. The attack surprised everybody. The good news was that the besieging army was somewhat smaller than Yaropolk’s and lacked a noble commander as well as strong infantry units. The Cumans fielded horse archers in great numbers that terrorized the countryside but were less useful in sieges. At least that was what Rurik thought.

    It was already September when the Cuman assault on Pereyaslav began.



    Yaropolk put his two militia companies at the gate, and deployed his only archer company on a small elevation on the right. This gave an opportunity to fire at the Cumans when they approach the gate. Yaropolk hoped that they can kill as many as possible before the attackers get in.



    Behind the militias, there was a company of mercenary heavy infantry. Yaropolk hired them recently as reinforcements to the south, but they could not leave before the Cumans besieged the town.



    The assault has begun. In front of the gate, the Cuman light infantry and lancers were targeted by fire arrows. Unfortunately, the Kievan archers were not professionals, and the arrows did not have much effect on the enemy.



    The main gate was soon breached, and the Cuman infantry and horse archers attacked the defenders with a concentrated charge.



    The fight inside the gate favored the Cumans. The Tatar lancers were stronger than the Kievan militia and the horsemen pushed the defenders back.



    Yaropolk knew that the battle has quickly turned against him. He decided to attack the Cuman commander who was still outside the walls with his reserve infantry. Yaropolk hoped that if he could kill him, the attackers may become disorganized. He opened the side gate, and stormed out with his knights.



    The Cuman captain saw the Kievan riders approaching, and recognized Yaropolk’s banner. Trusting that his reserve infantry outnumbers Yaropolk’s bodyguards, he led them against the Kievan riders. Rurik knew that this was a fatal mistake. They all spurred their horses and clashed into the Cuman infantry ranks.



    Meanwhile, inside the gate the situation has turned critical. The attackers outnumbered the militia, and one after another the Cuman horsemen got behind them. Some of the riders took two or three Kievans to be brought down.



    Eventually the militia companies broke and fled back to the main square. Now it was up to the mercenaries to hold their ground. The Cuman horse archers got inside the gate and opened fire at the Kievans who ran back.



    The company commander of the Kievan archers on the right led his men closer to the gate to have more effective shots at the attackers. Fire arrows rained down on the Cumans, this time with more success than before.



    But the Cumans were deadly bowmen. They turned toward the Kievan archers and it took only one volley for most of the defenders to fall. Only a few of them remained, and their company commander was also among the dead.



    The sacrifice of the archers was not in vain though. The mercenaries used the short break to charge the Cuman riders at the gate. Now in close proximity, the Cuman bows were useless and the better armor of the mercenaries provided a crucial advantage over the attackers.



    Meanwhile, outside the walls, Yaropolk and his bodyguards still fought with the Cuman commander’s infantrymen. The Cumans realized their mistake, but their captain did not flee and decided to fight until the end. Yaropolk cut down many and was covered with blood, some from his enemies and some of his own. He was the main target of the Cuman infantrymen, but he was relentlessly giving deadly strikes left and right, and finally was able to kill the Cuman captain too.



    Inside the gate, neither side could gain the upper hand in the fight. Then suddenly Yaropolk and his knights appeared just outside after finally defeating the rest of the Cuman infantry.



    The attackers were exhausted and they fled. Nobody knew if any of them could get back to their lands. The first attempt to take Pereyaslav has failed.





    Yaropolk was recognized as a brave and promising commander. But although it was a victory, the costs were terribly high. Only about a third of Yaropolk’s army survived the battle, and many of them were wounded too.





    Yaropolk knew that he cannot stand a chance against the next attack. The besieging Cuman army was not large, which meant that another one might arrive soon. The closest place to get support was Oleshe. He did not know that another Cuman army attacked in the south. He was looking for a fast and daring messenger to ride to Oleshe and bring support.

    Rurik volunteered for the task. He was an excellent rider and was eager to go. He knew the Cumans very well, spoke their language and had a better chance than anybody for reaching Oleshe. Yaropolk wished him luck, and Rurik left the town a day after the battle. He rode for a week, day and night, only resting for short periods of time. No rain or storm could stop him. It was his country, the land he loved and cared about, and he knew that there was nothing for him to fear.



    When he arrived to Oleshe, the field in front of the city was covered with abandoned siege engines, machines, tents and supplies. The city gates were open, and Rurik saw a Rus camp by the Dnieper River. Over the largest tent in the camp there was the banner of Prince Mstislav. Rurik could not even hope for such good news. The presence of Mstislav meant significant war preparations in the area, and Rurik was optimistic that now there will be troops that he can take to reinforce Pereyaslav.

    It seemed that Oleshe was besieged yet Rurik did not see any traces of the fight. As he was walking toward Mstislav’s bodyguards, suddenly a cleric stepped in front of him. He had a smile on his face, but tears in his eyes. Rurik was speechless for a minute, but soon the two brothers were having a long awaited conversation in Alexios’ tent.

    “On the road from Kiev, Mstislav hired as many mercenaries as he could,” explained Alexios. “When we reached the villages around Oleshe, we met Cuman scouts. Our soldiers killed several of them, but a few must have had a chance to alert the besieging army. They fled before we arrived.”

    “Where are they now?”

    “Most of them crossed the river into Roman territory. They are not at war I believe, so they can get back to the east. Or maybe not. The Romans don’t like the raiders any better than we do. But I don’t think that they will try to attack Oleshe again, at least not as long the Prince is here.”



    “Do you think the Prince can spare some troops to reinforce Pereyaslav?” asked Rurik.

    “You need to ask him,” said Alexios cautiously. “I am sure he will understand that his brother needs help there. And your victory inspires all of us. But the biggest question at the moment is Patrikeev.”

    “When I was here last year, the Grand Prince was very disappointed in him. Did that change?”

    “No, and we don’t know anything about him, or what the Cumans are planning in that region,” answered Alexios and sighed. “If he had taken Azaq last year…”

    “I know, brother,” said Rurik sadly. There was a moment of silence. Then Rurik’s eyes opened. “But there may be an opportunity now. Prince Mstislav is here with an army, and he might march on Azaq.”

    “I wouldn’t be sure about that,” Alexios was less enthusiastic. “The Prince was told to secure Oleshe first. Now Pereyaslav needs help too. If he decides to send troops there with you, I don’t think he will risk an attack on Azaq. Not this year at least.

    “But we are so close to find Oleg, closer than ever!”

    “Yes, we are. And we will do everything.” It was the calm and clever Alexios again. “Go and talk to the Prince, brother. Tell him about your victory at Pereyaslav. He will be eager to hear about Yaropolk too. But then we will have some time here, and we can use that to visit the monastery. There are a few things I wanted to ask you about it anyway.” Rurik put down his empty cup and nodded. He was very tired and suddenly felt the weight of all the hardships of the battle and the long ride. But he could not stop thinking about Azaq.

    Georgii Patrikeev was an unhappy man. As the governor of Tmutarakan, he was a powerful lord, but his failure to take Azaq last year made his position uncertain in Kiev. He was not a member of the royal family, so he needed the goodwill of Grand Prince Vladimir to stay in his post. He wanted to make sure that the Grand Prince will not be disappointed in him again. Thus, when he heard about the Cuman attack on Oleshe, he decided to act fast and marched on Azaq again. Soon he ran into a Cuman army in Rus territory, indicating that the Cuman attack was planned to be a full scale war.



    Patrikeev knew that he cannot allow his troops to be spent before reaching Azaq. He decided to use only a small part of his army to defeat the Cuman raiders who were on a hill covered by the morning fog. He ordered most of his infantry to stay behind.



    Patrikeev sent in a company of Pechenegs to engage the enemy horse archers. They turned out to be a different tribe of Pechenegs.



    The enemy horsemen quickly gave up the fight, or maybe they did not want to kill their own, and fled the battlefield. Patrikeev’s horse archers then targeted the Cuman infantry that was shaken by the quick flight of their cavalry.



    When the Pechenegs ran out of arrows, Patrikeev sent in one company of mercenaries to finish off the weakened Cuman spearmen.



    The first line of the Cumans routed soon. Then the mercenaries charged the Tatar troops, the last of the enemy companies.



    The Tatar spearwall proved to be tough to break, and they were fresh too. The Kievan casualties increased with every minute. Finally, Patrikeev decided to charge the Tatars, and that move decided the battle.



    It was a clear victory, but the casualties were too high. The battle did not improve Patrikeev’s image as a great commander, although his personal bravery was noted by his troops.



    Patrikeev’s army has not met other enemy troops before reaching Azaq. It was late in the season, and he had to hurry with the siege as he wanted the city to provide winter quarters for his troops. Moreover, the scouts have indicated another Cuman army coming to reinforce the Azaq garrison. Thus, on a cold November evening Patrikeev ordered the assault.



    His army was three times as large as the Cuman garrison. But similarly to his previous battle, he wanted to spare some of his troops. Azaq was not a friendly town, and it was far from the heart of the Rus. Patrikeev decided to use an archer company and two of his mercenary heavy infantry companies for the attack, supported by Pechenegs.



    The snow was fresh on the ground when the Kievan troops marched toward the walls.



    As soon as the archers were close enough, they started to fire at the defenders behind the walls. A small group of mercenaries was trying to ram the main gate, while another company attacked the walls with the siege tower.



    When the gate was breached, the enemy infantry tried to fall back without a fight.



    By then, however, the Kievan mercenaries took the walls and stormed out of the tower inside.



    The mercenaries knew that they have to stay close to the withdrawing Cuman infantry, because enemy horse archers appeared in a large mass on the main street.



    The Cuman commander sent all of his horsemen to attack the Kievan infantry.





    Meanwhile, a Cuman ballista company tried to get to shooting distance on one of the empty streets leading to the main gate. Patrikeev ordered the Pechenegs to attack them before they can take firing positions. The ballista crew was massacred within minutes.





    The mercenaries were able to contain the Cuman horsemen, but could not cut through their numbers. Patrikeev saw that this is the time to redeem himself for the previous failed campaign. He knew that he has to take the town or die trying. He charged the Cuman riders that fled after a brief fight.



    Patrikeev now had the momentum on the battlefield. He took the lead and charged the last Cuman company, a group of archers who had no time to fire even one volley.



    By dark Patrikeev was victorious, and Azaq was finally taken by the Rus. But everybody in Patrikeev’s army knew that holding the town may prove to be more difficult than taking it.



    The Kievan casualties were acceptable, and Patrikeev had enough troops to control the town and face a possible Cuman attack.



    His army was still bigger than the Cuman relief force which was only a few days march away from the town. But the local population was openly hostile, and the pagan priests were preaching against the Orthodox faith. It was truly the frontier of the Rus, and Patrikeev could not expect reinforcements before the spring. The situation was barely under control, and the future looked uncertain.


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    Perfect.
    Azaq had been captured. Let see what is, or had been the fate of the younger brother.

    From a external point of view, it seems that your troops are now scattered and have dificulties to hold the cities in the eastern steppes.
    It is cool , because we fear a little for your characters.
    Maybe the Cumans are preparing a massive raid. I hope so...

    Very nice chapter Radzeer.

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    Very nice battles Radzeer and great storytelling.

    I doubt the Prince will leave for Azaq very soon, not with that Cuman army scouting Oleshe from a distance... (and I don´t think Rurik and Alexios will leave on their own) maybe the Romans can help with that Cuman threat. Keep up the good work and worry not, your armies shall prevail.
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    probably should have exterminated Azaq, to take the population less hostile But that'll probably not fit into the story about a glorious and just Kievan Rus

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    Quote Originally Posted by la coupe est pleine View Post
    Perfect.
    Azaq had been captured. Let see what is, or had been the fate of the younger brother.

    From a external point of view, it seems that your troops are now scattered and have dificulties to hold the cities in the eastern steppes.
    It is cool , because we fear a little for your characters.
    Maybe the Cumans are preparing a massive raid. I hope so...

    Very nice chapter Radzeer.
    Thank you, la coupe! Yes, indeed my troops are scattered. For some reason the Cumans kept sending small stacks at the beginning, so it has not been very difficult yet. But I really wish for a massive raid as you said it. The toughest battle so far was the Smolensk rebel stack...
    But I'm sure that there will be a time when I will really want these turns to come back.


    Quote Originally Posted by Darkan View Post
    Very nice battles Radzeer and great storytelling.

    I doubt the Prince will leave for Azaq very soon, not with that Cuman army scouting Oleshe from a distance... (and I don´t think Rurik and Alexios will leave on their own) maybe the Romans can help with that Cuman threat. Keep up the good work and worry not, your armies shall prevail.
    Thanks, Darkan! And no, the prince has other things to do. But the two brothers may embark on some adventure soon.


    Quote Originally Posted by S6k6l6v View Post
    probably should have exterminated Azaq, to take the population less hostile But that'll probably not fit into the story about a glorious and just Kievan Rus
    Yes, it would not have been appropriate... These are still Rus people, just been under the Cuman yoke for some time...
    On the other hand, I use longer assimilation, so the first turn after taking a place is rebellion anyway.

    Thanks for reading everybody! The next update is scheduled for late Wednesday (before the holiday breaks out here ).

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    Very nice update indeed! I really enjoyed the story, and the pictures came out great too! It'll be interesting to see the Rus take an eastward turn toward the Steppe against the Cumans. It looks like taking Azaq was just step one. Can't wait to see what's next.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Thokran View Post
    Very nice update indeed! I really enjoyed the story, and the pictures came out great too! It'll be interesting to see the Rus take an eastward turn toward the Steppe against the Cumans. It looks like taking Azaq was just step one. Can't wait to see what's next.
    Thank you for your support, Thokran! I am looking for some eastward expansion as I seldom fight in that area. I can also promise that some time the Rus will march against the infidel too. Our Roman brothers will surely need support!

    Update is coming soon.

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    5. Trouble in the west

    Grand Prince Vladimir who spent the winter in Kiev was impatient. The news from the east came slowly. The only noteworthy event in the Court was that Princess Eupraxia was approached by a suitor, Milogost Fominskii. He was more of an administrator than a military commander, but he was known as a loyal and honest man, thus Vladimir granted his request. He appointed Fominskii as the governor of Zhytomyr, which both provided sufficient income for the couple and solved one of Vladimir’s problems who could not find a man for that position yet.



    Shortly after the wedding, the Court learned that the Pope called a crusade against Cairo, and most of the Catholic kingdoms were eager to respond. Vladimir had mixed feelings about this. He thought that the crusade will keep the Catholics occupied for some time, but also feared that when their armies will return, their rulers would need to find other uses for them. He did not need veteran Polish and Hungarian troops looking for a fight at the Kievan borders.



    A few days later the Polish ambassador asked for an audience. Vladimir thought that the ambassador will officially inform him about the crusade. But to his great surprise, he demanded money to contribute to the expenses of the Polish crusaders. Vladimir was greatly offended by this demand. The ambassador also implied that if Vladimir will not comply, the crusader army may move across the Rus on its way to Egypt. Vladimir’s response was firm: if Polish troops enter the Rus they will be greeted with arms. Furthermore, Kiev will not support their adventure, but to show his goodwill the ambassador can keep his head on his neck.



    The ambassador left empty handed, but Vladimir was now more concerned than before. He alerted Fominskii who just arrived to Zhytomyr to send scouts to the Polish border. If Poland attacks, Zhytomyr will be the first target. Vladimir was relieved that at least the city finally has a governor.

    While the Grand Prince was occupied with state and family matters, Yaropolk spent the winter months to hire mercenaries around Pereyaslav. He only had a few Kievan troops and knew that it may take months for Rurik to bring reinforcements. On his return to Pereyaslav, he ran into a small Cuman force.



    Both armies were on high grounds separated by a small valley. Yaropolk decided to wait, and hoped that the impetuous steppe raiders cannot be contained for long.



    His waiting paid off. After some time, the Cuman light cavalry and horse archers attacked across the valley.



    This ensured that Yaropolk can fight the battle on his own terms. As soon as the enemy was close enough, his ballistae opened fire into the ranks of horsemen.



    The mercenary crossbowmen held the high ground and decimated the Cuman horse archers. The Cumans proved to be less effective, partly because they faced the sun above the hill where the Kievan soldiers were.



    By the time the Cuman infantry attacked, the battle was decided. After a short fight, the enemy fled.



    Yaropolk thought that if this army joined the one that besieged Pereyaslav earlier, the Cumans would have taken the town. They may be fierce raiders, but it takes more than that to succeed beyond the steppes.



    The Kievan casualties came mostly from the first line of mercenaries that were exposed to the Cuman horse archers for a long time.



    Meanwhile in Oleshe, Prince Mstislav finally decided that he will go to Pereyaslav personally and consolidate the Kievan rule on the steppes from there. This gave Alexios and Rurik some time to do family business, and on a cold but clear day the two brothers were heading for the monastery.

    “This was the place where the gypsy woman stopped us,” said Rurik when they arrived at that spot. “I still wonder who she was. I don’t think we’ll ever know.”

    “God works in mysterious ways, brother.” Alexios’ response sounded a bit hollow. Then he looked at Rurik. “I need to ask you something. Did you notice anything strange about the Holy Grail when you found it?”

    Rurik tried to remember the circumstances, but he did not pay much attention to the Grail as he only had Oleg in his mind. He spoke slowly. “We all were very surprised. And of course some of us were terrified because of the sacrilege. But the grave was empty, which the monks could not believe, and that lifted any possible accusation of sacrilege. At least that’s what the Grand Prince told us. It was a miracle, and a good sign for us that the Lord wants the Rus to succeed. Do you have any concerns about it?”

    “What I tell you brother, should stay between us,” said Alexios. He whispered although nobody was there. “The problem is that nobody knows how the Grail looks like. Some even say it’s only a metaphor. But the Patriarch of Kiev accepted it as real, because it elevates the prestige of his church. The Grand Prince also accepted the Grail because it strengthens his position. As a cleric, I should praise the Lord that He guided us to this magnificent relic. And as a chronicler working for the Grand Prince I should be happy for anything that lessens the chance of a conflict within the Rus. But as a person, I am uncertain that this is indeed the Holy Grail which was said to be lost many years ago."

    “But even if you have doubts, what does that mean?” asked Rurik who did not understand his brother’s concern. “Will you challenge the Patriarch?”

    “No, of course not,” replied Alexios quickly. “That is not possible. But my concern is about the Holy Grail becoming the source of power. I’m afraid that’s what Grand Prince Vladimir wants it to become. You may not know this, but the Grand Prince is simply the first among equals. Mstislav, Yaropolk, and even Yurii who will come of age next year, are his sons but also his equals. It is tradition and power that defines who the Grand Prince is, not symbols. Mstislav is the announced heir and his succession seems certain. He has no reason to cause trouble. You know Yaropolk well, he is noble and would not challenge his father. But Yurii is different. He is the youngest, and the youngest son always has the least power. If the Grail becomes the most sacred source of power, a challenger would only need to have it to become the first among equals. And thus, the sacred relic becomes a source of conflict.”

    Rurik became dizzy from all these. The world for him was clearly defined with powers and responsibilities. Now his brother, who was undoubtedly more informed about the court politics, talked about some frightening possibilities. He could not say a word.

    “Don’t worry, brother,” said Alexios who recognized Rurik’s confusion. “Things may not go wrong. But you are the only one with whom I can talk freely. Forget about all this, and let’s see what this monastery holds for us.”

    Upon their arrival, Alexios was greeted by a friendly monk. A minute later he recognized Rurik too. When Alexios asked him to lead them to the old soldier, he started walking without a word. A few minutes later he stopped at the small cemetery. There was a fresh grave. Rurik felt as if the sky would fall on him. Alexios sighed and started to pray.



    Later the two brothers learned that the soldier died peacefully a few weeks ago, and he left them a letter.
    My final hour is close, as my weak body cannot keep my soul anymore. But before I meet the Maker, I asked one of the brothers here to write this down for you. I don’t know where you are, but I hope that some day one of you will return and read this.
    Rurik, after you left I started to remember more and more from those years I spent as a slave. Maybe the Lord did not want me to take this to the grave, for which I am eternally grateful. You already know how Oleg and I were taken to Azaq. There we were separated. I was sold to a trader who sailed the sea between Azaq and the Roman cities in the south. I worked as a sailor, and although I had some chances I did not want to escape as I hoped to free Oleg somehow. He was sold to a Muslim merchant in town. I don’t know his name, but he was the only one in Azaq who traded with spices from the east. I saw Oleg once in the market, but he did not notice me. I don’t think I would have been allowed to talk to him anyway. But he was alive.
    Then a few weeks later a storm caught our ship and we were washed ashore not far from here. I was trying to get to Oleshe when outlaws attacked me in the forest. I woke up in this monastery not remembering anything, not being able to talk for a long time, and not seeing God’s world anymore. But now my heart is glad as you may be able to go to Azaq and find Oleg.
    It has been twenty years ago, but I remember you very well, three little boys hiding behind a barrel in that burned house. I don’t know who your parents were, but I know that you have always been brothers who loved and supported each other. That love is stronger than anything, and I know that you will succeed. God bless you, my sons.
    A few days later the news about taking Azaq finally reached Mstislav and the two brothers. But they could not go there just yet. Rurik had to return to Yaropolk and ask for permission, while Alexios was still appointed as Mstislav’s chronicler. The road for both of them led to Pereyaslav first.

    Just as Mstislav was ready to leave, a local noble called Boris Netshin ignited a revolt. He lost his lands when the Rus took over Oleshe, and was openly hostile against the Kievans. Over time he became the lead figure for all who opposed the Kievan rule. Mstislav knew that he has to defeat him to ensure that Oleshe will not revolt once he leaves.

    The two armies met on a beautiful spring day.



    Mstislav had militia companies, a few mercenary spearmen and crossbows, and two units of ballistae. Netshin’s troops were mostly spearmen and crossbowmen, supported by a company of Pecheneg raiders. At the center of the battlefield there was a hill, and Mstislav sent his infantry in a hurry to occupy it.



    The rebels missed their chance to take the hill from where their crossbows would have been lethal.



    Netshin was too late to send in the Pechenegs. By the time they got to the hill, the Kievan crossbowmen were already there.



    The Pechenegs could not stand the arrows for long. After a few volleys those that survived decided to run for their lives. Meanwhile, Mstislav’s artillery arrived at the hill and opened fire.



    Netshin was shocked when his lieutenant was killed by one of the missiles just in front of him.



    Mstislav continued to pound the enemy lines. The rebels were unable to return fire.



    Then under the cover of the ballistae, the Kievan militias attacked.





    The rebel spearmen put up a strong fight. Mstislav had to send in the veteran mercenaries who finally broke the enemy lines.



    The Kievan soldiers then ran down Netshin’s reserve troops too. He proved to be a worthless commander, making many mistakes on the battlefield that eventually cost him his life.



    Mstislav then charged the enemy crossbowmen who tried to run to the mountains. Only a few of them could make it.



    The prisoners were executed, and with that the rebellion was over.



    By summer, the good news reached Kiev too. Oleshe and Pereyaslav were firmly held by the Rus, and Azaq was taken. This gave confidence to Grand Prince Vladimir to be more aggressive in the west. Since there were no Cuman raids from that direction, Vladimir took it as a sign of weakness and decided to march against the Cuman stronghold of Baia, the center of West Cumania. Given his good connections to the Romans, he was able to convince them to launch a supporting attack from the south.

    The governor of Baia was the high chief of all Cuman tribes in the west. His name was Aepak, and he was an experienced and able commander although his loyalty to the Cuman Khan in the east was not particularly notable.



    Vladimir’s army was great in numbers, but less so in quality. The bulk of his troops were militia units from Kiev and Zhytomyr, infantry, archers and javelinmen. He had mercenary spearmen and a company of Bulgarian archers too. The Cuman forces were mostly horse archers trapped in Baia, together with some spear infantry. Vladimir thought that his numeric advantage as well as the limited use of the enemy horse archers inside the walls will bring him an easy victory.



    The Grand Prince positioned his Kievan troops in front of the main gate. He wanted to use his numbers to attack on a wide front and outflank the enemy as soon as possible.



    To further spread out the defenders, Vladimir positioned his mercenary companies with siege ladders facing the west walls. Their order was to wait with the attack until the Kievan assault draws most of the defenders to the main gate.



    The Cuman defenders were deployed to face the main Kievan army. Their infantry and archers were on the walls, while the masses of horsemen waited just inside the gate.



    The Kievan militia companies advanced with confidence, especially after seeing that the enemy archers targeted the siege tower on the left.





    When the fight started on the walls, the horse archers arrived there to support their troops.



    Soon the Cuman spearmen guarding the west wall were ordered to move against the Kievans.



    This was the time for the mercenaries to attack.



    Meanwhile, the Kievan troops finally breached the main gate. Aepak, the Cuman commander led his bodyguards against the militia to support his weakened infantry. The Cumans in Aepak’s company were the best warriors in the region and they ruthlessly massacred most of the lightly armed militia soldiers. That company had many new recruits from Zhytomyr who were terrified by the Cuman war cries and ferocity.



    After routing the militia, the Cuman riders stormed out the main gate to attack the Kievan archers and javelinmen. After a few volleys of concentrated fire, however, they had to fall back.



    Their return was also necessary because the mercenaries took the abandoned west wall. The Bulgarian archers had clear shots at the Cuman horsemen from the top, while the spearmen were ready to advance to the keep. Aepak and his bodyguards charged them and a desperate melee followed.



    While one of the mercenary companies kept Aepak at the west wall, the other moved quickly to attack the remaining horse archers in the center. By this time, the walls were taken, but the Kievan casualties were alarmingly high. Vladimir realized that he may run out of soldiers before he can defeat the Cumans.



    Fortunately for him, the mercenaries saved the day. The Bulgarians kept sending arrows at the Cuman riders from a great distance, pinning them down while Vladimir reorganized his troops.



    Eventually, Aepak routed the mercenary spearmen. He lost most of his bodyguards in the process, but he was still a feared warrior. Vladimir saw that he has to attack himself. He led the Kievan knights who killed the remaining Cuman bodyguards, and finally cut Aepak down too.



    The last act of the battle was defeating the rest of the Cuman infantry on the main square.



    When the remaining Kievan soldiers gathered on the main square, Vladimir saw how close he was to lose the battle. He lost half of his army, and had numerous wounded soldiers too.





    Vladimir knew that he cannot stay in Baia for long, but he had to be sure that the Kievan positions are secure. Finally, he got word that the Romans took the last stronghold of Western Cumania. With that the once proud nomads were reduced to a few scattered families in the region. What Vladimir did not realize immediately was that he swapped a relatively weak neighbor for a much stronger one. The Rus was now bordering not only Poland but Hungary too.

    The Grand Prince left his troops in Baia and arrived back to Kiev as a celebrated hero. He spent the rest of the year there. He was almost 60, and started to feel old age. The last campaign took a toll on his health, and he did not plan to lead another one. He decided that after this campaign season he will call Mstislav back to Kiev, and leave the eastern operations to Yaropolk. And his third son, Yurii was also eager to try himself as a commander for the first time.

    The news brought by two messengers over the winter completely destroyed his plans. The first messenger came from the east and reported that Azaq is under siege. Vladimir was expecting this, but the disturbing part of the message was that Patrikeev left the town before the attack. He was caught off guard, and now Vladimir had another reason to be disappointed. Yet he hoped that Azaq will hold.



    The second messenger brought much worse news.



    The Hungarian attack came when the Polish situation was still uncertain. Every able commander was in the east fighting the Cumans, except Fominskii but Vladimir wanted him to stay in Zhytomyr and keep an eye on Poland. Thus, it was the old Grand Prince himself who had to take arms to fight for Baia again.
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