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DESARC92 / Product Design
Once known as MarcelP | Product Designer | Under the Patronage of Legio
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Please be gentle...xD
Last edited by Mugg; August 07, 2010 at 10:18 AM.
Wrath of the Norsemen Researcher and Historian and Second Age Total War 2D Helper
Added a rule i forgot. a rule to help those criticizing know what you were going for.
@Killerbee, you only need to post something once if you get good feedback, no point in posting something that no one knows what can be improved.
Gregory, i think the grungy overlay, especially those lines going trough the Sig is a nice touch. Now for things to improve:
- It looks rather flat, the lines going trough it are straight lines, which only enforces that. Another thing that is causing this is that its all rather light. I'd suggest darkening the blacks a bit, and maybe to make the area below the gun, and the top left darker, to increase the depth.
- The guy is placed well, the diagonal composition gives it a bit of motion which is a lot more interesting to look at, and gives it a bit more action. nothing to suggest here.
- The border is rather simple, try different things to create more exciting ones. a light/dark gray ~3px border set on overlay maybe.
- The sig is rather square, this imo makes sigs a bit less attractive. making it a bit less high, and maybe even a bit more wide would do wonders.
- add some more color, a gradient map set to overlay, with lowered opacity can be useful. If you darken some areas a bit more this might not be so needed tho, but currently the color is rather plain, mostly grayish
DESARC92 / Product Design
Once known as MarcelP | Product Designer | Under the Patronage of Legio
Marcel's Modder's Resources | Tutorials | The Graphics Workshop
Absolutely. I like it, a lot. I would add some more light to the text as it's very hard to read as it is.
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i will edit it today . thanks a lot .