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    Default I'm trying my hand at writing fluff

    Well, the title is only partial correct. My chances of it ever getting accepted are slim (read: not going to happen).

    Anyways, it focuses on the Raptors (Or Raptor Legion as it used to be called...) by looking through the eyes of a marine rising from scout and going onwards.

    Of course, this thread is a bit premature, since I'm not even done with the first chapter Hell, I'm not even exactly sure when I'm going to set it. Even more than that, I've still got a lot more to learn about the 40K universe.

    Anyways, I just posted this thread to see if anyone thinks that this is an interesting idea.
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    sounds a bit interesting if u need help with info in 40k universe ill try to help

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    cool, thanks.

    I hope to be receiving my codecies from ebay (Oh wait, I need to order them first...)
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    what made u choose the raptors?

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    Because Chaos Raptor is one of most awesome groups in 40K.

    I do suggest writing something about your Lord Abaddon the Incomplete to boost up his falling reputation now.
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    Quote Originally Posted by hellheaven1987 View Post
    Because Chaos Raptor is one of most awesome groups in 40K.

    I do suggest writing something about your Lord Abaddon the Incomplete to boost up his falling reputation now.
    Nothing could save Failbbadon from his own incompetence. Nothing short of the Dark Gods.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Outlawstar15a2 View Post
    Nothing could save Failbbadon from his own incompetence. Nothing short of the Dark Gods.
    Lay of Mr Topknot.............
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ulysses S. Grant View Post
    Lay of Mr Topknot.............
    Why is he your new apprentice? If so you need to slap him with a Chaos Spawn's arse. Because he's overly stupid.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Outlawstar15a2 View Post
    Why is he your new apprentice? If so you need to slap him with a Chaos Spawn's arse. Because he's overly stupid.
    I only helped him get his sword. He seemed like an alright guy. The pressure just gets to him.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ulysses S. Grant View Post
    I only helped him get his sword. He seemed like an alright guy. The pressure just gets to him.
    But that's part of being a soldier of Chaos. Hell, do you think I have it easy? It's not all Daemonette honey pie and wine for me. I still have to pull my weight.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Outlawstar15a2 View Post
    But that's part of being a soldier of Chaos. Hell, do you think I have it easy? It's not all Daemonette honey pie and wine for me. I still have to pull my weight.
    It must be terrible to have to use your legs for movement purposes................
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ulysses S. Grant View Post
    It must be terrible to have to use your legs for movement purposes................
    It is, my friend, it is.

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    I really enjoyed the fan made fluff where a terran marine got transported to 40k.
    "WE WILL SMITE THE INVADERS FROM OUR SKIES! Though they sweep over our lands like the sands of winter, never again will we bow before them; never again endure their oppression; never again endure their tyranny. We will strike without warning and without mercy, fighting as one hand, one heart, one soul. We will shatter their dreams and haunt their nightmares, drenching our ancestors' graves with their blood. And as our last breath tears at their lungs; as we rise again from the ruins of our cities...they will know: Helghan belongs to the Helghast." -Scholar Visari

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    Quote Originally Posted by hellheaven1987 View Post
    Because Chaos Raptor is one of most awesome groups in 40K.

    I do suggest writing something about your Lord Abaddon the Incomplete to boost up his falling reputation now.
    Wrong Raptors, bloody-minded fool.

    These guys: http://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/Raptors_(Chapter))

    You know, the ones I defected from.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Slaytaninc View Post
    Wrong Raptors, bloody-minded fool.

    These guys: http://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/Raptors_(Chapter)

    You know, the ones I defected from.
    Your Chapter is non-existed.

    By the way, Chaos Raptors, the job I had before I join Khorne.
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    Quote Originally Posted by hellheaven1987 View Post
    Your Chapter is non-existed.

    By the way, Chaos Raptors, the job I had before I join Khorne.
    I thought you were a barmaid on Meridian before you joined Khorne's ranks.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Outlawstar15a2 View Post
    I thought you were a barmaid on Meridian before you joined Khorne's ranks.

    What??

    I was once member of Blood Disciples, which came from Emperor's Wolves before falling into Chaos. I join Khorne's side during Gothic War (yes, I did serve under Failddan's Black Crusade).
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    Hellheaven, sometimes you remind me of King Canute trying to hold back the tide, except without the winning parable.
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    Cameron is midway between Black Rage and .. European Union ..

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    Quote Originally Posted by knight of virtue and valor View Post
    I really enjoyed the fan made fluff where a terran marine got transported to 40k.
    Link?




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    Quote Originally Posted by hellheaven1987 View Post
    What??

    I was once member of Blood Disciples, which came from Emperor's Wolves before falling into Chaos. I join Khorne's side during Gothic War (yes, I did serve under Failddan's Black Crusade).
    *Pours Hellheaven a glass of Slaaneshi wine*

    And for that my friend you should be rewarded with a good drink. To wash away the embarrassment and pain of serving in Abbadon's army.

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    Quote Originally Posted by hellheaven1987 View Post
    What??

    I was once member of Blood Disciples, which came from Emperor's Wolves before falling into Chaos. I join Khorne's side during Gothic War (yes, I did serve under Failddan's Black Crusade).
    poor bastard. got a few skulls i presume?


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