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    Blood of Zeus
    Chapter 3, part 2 - On The Run

    “Wine, Karus?”
    “Please.” The impeccable officer smiled and held out his cup for Flavius, who filled it from an ochre earthenware vessel. As the red liquid quietly gurgled and trickled into the wooden cup, Flavius turned to the lokaghos’ wife. “And you, ma’am?”

    “Agrippina.” She said, smiling and giggling slightly as he gave a little theatrical bow and then filled her cup. Karus remained relaxed. The man was hardly going to steal his wife.

    Flavius dragged out a stool from under the little table and took a refreshing and fruity sip of his own wine, savouring the strong flavour as the sunshine blazed steadily down on the passers-by. It was near midday and Flavius’ flat was a cool haven from the heated air of the streets.

    He motioned to Karus with a hand. “What brings you to Sicily then, commander?”
    “A good deal of secrets.” Karus grimaced and smacked his lips. After a heartbeat he laughed at the worried expression on Flavius’ face. “Don’t worry, Flavius. I won’t turn you in, least of all for being curious.”

    To be curious about that which is not one's concern while still in ignorance of oneself is ridiculous.”

    Both men turned with uncomprehending looks to Agrippina. She blushed. “Plato.” she said. The men continued to stare. She laughed. “I don’t know… I know it’s not relevant, I just, ah…” She kissed her husband’s cheek and grabbed his muscular arm with her soft hands. “So much for that useless tutor of yours!” He smiled and he kissed her quickly. Flavius felt almost unnerved to see this officer - a man trained to look above everything else - just talking on an everyday level. He sipped his wine again. “How did the Fates bring you lucky two together then?”

    “We met when I was stationed at the barracks in Arretium - the training camp. 10 years and 2 kids later, here we are about to be shipped out to…” Karus covered his mouth. “Whoops! Trade secret there, m’afraid. Anyway, we’re here in Sicily now - what I can tell you, Flavius, is that almost the whole army’s here!”
    “No!”
    “Yes! All 10 Syracusian field armies - including my own, the 1st Pannonian. We spent 3 years in Arretium training for this expedition, and…” He stopped speaking and frowned. Flavius heard a trumpet ring out 3 clear notes from a tower in the city, and evidently it’s use was well rehearsed by these weary travellers; Agrippina sighed and set down her wine. Karus nodded and she went to fetch their children, who had been innocently playing in another room with small wooden swords that Karus had kept from the days his own son had lived there. But, as his thoughts turned to this, Flavius shook his flabby cheeks and forced himself to dispel the thought of his vanished offspring, as the family hurried outside once again. Flavius himself stood up and shook hands with Karus.

    “I have to report to my Strategos for my initial briefing now that the army’s safely arrived in Sicily, but I hope we can meet again soon.” Flavius smiled and nodded, waving as the soldier and his family left.

    “A pleasure!”

    *****

    “Euclides, you’re dismissed.”
    “Sir.”

    The messenger stood to attention before hastily saluting and marching out of the room to deliver the general’s arrival report to Syracuse, where the High Command Polemarchoi would address the Presidential council on the preparations for the invasion. Meanwhile, the Strategos turned and looked out the window over the bustling port and the dancing, sparkling waters of the ocean. Africa. It was out there somewhere.

    Clisthenes of Oricus may have been derided as a short, weedy recruit when he first joined the Syracusian militia many years ago, but through the conquests of a continent he had risen steadily, proving himself through his own unique brand of iron-will, determined generalship - the sort of man who would rather his troops follow him into battle than the other way round. Now almost 40, his age was far from gentle, giving his look a ring of steel colder than ever.



    He was aware of the gravitas of what he was about to try and achieve. Although sometimes outshone a little by other, more ‘stylish’ generals, he was he main reason this army was here, spearheading the most audacious invasion attempt in history. 10 armies, each with 20 lochoi of varying sizes… there must be at least 20,000 men here, infantry and cavalry all. Not including the navy and the support crews, and slaves, and supplies and… it made his head ache now. But the prize was worth it. An eternity of fame as ‘Clisthenes the Great’, the man responsible for the Syracusians’ greatest conquest… The wealth and women… the prestige. He might even desire a higher station.

    They were already whispering, some of his more optimistic supporters… that when he was ready, the laurel wreath of President could be replaced with a crown of Empire, even if he had to place it upon his own head.

    A knock at the door,
    and Clisthenes flipped out of his self-interrogative mood, now a hard-to-impress General that demanded perfection and ultimate discipline from every single last one of his troops.

    “Yes?”

    A tall, swarthy African entered who the Strategos already knew by name - you didn’t win as many victories as he did without knowing all of his senior officers and being sure the were up to the job. Karus, he knew, was dependable yet a little too emotional for the army perhaps, a little too keen to appease the locals and safeguard the lives of his men. But he was no coward.

    “Sit.”

    Karus saluted and removed his helmet, doing as he was told. A moment of silence.
    “Well? Make your report, Karus.” Karus nodded.
    “No travelling casualties sir, save a few seasick troopers on the transports from Rhegio. We’ve received our full inventory of replacement equipment, and the baggage train is on schedule.” Clisthenes raised his eyebrows and Karus continued.

    “Scheduled to arrive before dusk, sir.” he said.
    “And the men? How are they holding up with the marching?”
    Karus frowned as he replied. “Well fed and watered Sir, but...” Clisthenes’ face contorted into a near snarl. Karus mentally cursed himself for his hesitancy. He had once seen Clisthenes reduce an officer to a gibbering wreck who he then had whipped for this very same reason.

    “… there have been problems… with the locals.” Clisthenes was torn between flogging the man for his useless sympathies and a desire to make sure he did not earn a public reputation for ruthlessness - ‘discipline’ and character, but not simple-minded tyrannical anger. For once, he gave his subordinate a second chance.

    “Don’t fret about the locals, lokaghos. We’ll be off their hands soon enough and out of this s hithole.” Karus forced himself to keep a level countenance as he replied. “A ‘s hithole’ with people who are probably similar to those who shall soon be subjugated under our banner with this coming campaign, sir.” He restrained himself from emphasising the word ‘s hithole’, but still delicately tried to imply a question to his commander… no-one below the rank of strategos knew where they were being sent, though it was fairly obvious that it would be Carthage. Why else would the whole army be waiting for transports in Sicily’s biggest port?! Still, Karus knew that these High Command officers never liked to speak in simple Greek, preferring to go any roundabout route over straightforward if one was available.

    “I take it, commander, that you are displeased about the uncertainty surrounding your destination?” Clisthenes said, fixing Karus with an icy stare from behind his desk. He twirled a stylus between his slender fingers as he spoke and Karus found the repetitive ritual unnerving. He was transfixed by it. “No sir, not…”

    Clisthenes exploded and his chair fled in terror, skidding over the wooden floor as he rocketed to his feet. Karus’ eyes widened yet remained somehow on the stylus as his mind became focused on his commander. It flew at his face and nearly took his sight as the strategos descended into a rage.
    “DON’T LIE TO ME, AND LOOK IN MY EYES WHEN I’M SPEAKING!”
    Karus’ eyes were already obeying.
    “You useless, temperamental little black s hit! I’m running the f ucking army, not a Corinthian brothel! Do you think you know better than me, or simply imagine that I would not tell you of your destination unless it was for the benefit of you and every last soldier in this army!” He finally sat down, and breathed in deeply through his small, trimmed nostrils.

    He sighed. “Well, Karus, you’ll have your wish.” Clisthenes saw the worried look in the officer’s eyes, but wouldn’t have the man flogged - he had a much better use. A twisted use. Aye, a sinister use but a use nonetheless. Incapacitating an infantry commander would merely lead to a vacancy in the infantry officer corps that needed to be filled - and he knew no-one in the army was yet deserving of that promotion, though he was sure that by the time the campaign had ended, that would not be the case.

    Karus was curious about this little man, both impressive and diminutive all at once. However, he had been spared the humiliation of a flogging or demotion, and he knew he had only Fortuna and Athena to thank for that. He decided the best thing to do was but to listen and let the general continue.

    “It’s 20 days till we sail, Karus.”
    “The Saturnalia.”
    “Exactly - to ease our departure from the locals. You’ll be pleased to hear that I’m giving you and the other lokaghoi your orders - a written copy will be sent to your quarters tonight. No doubt you’ll have heard the rumours and formed your own ideas, Karus.”
    “I wouldn’t dream of…”
    “You’d be a fool not to.” Clisthenes retorted. “Well, we’re not going to Carthage, so the rumours are wrong lokaghos. Sorry you’re not going home, but our sights are set far further afield.” Karus remained impassive, waiting for his commander to cut the tension, but Clisthenes was slow in getting to the point.

    “No, most of Sicily’s trade comes from Africa. The City itself would suffer from the effects of a war with Carthage - a war that would be protracted, especially with that lethal lightning-child Hannibal Barca rampaging across Numidia and Mauretania. Although Carthage will sleep beneath a Greek flag sooner than you might think, our current plans do concern Punics such as yourself.”

    Clisthenes revealed a map on the wall with a sharp tug on a cord. With a flourish, a map of the western Mediterranean appeared. Sicily appeared shaded in blue on the far right, but it was the rest of the map that astonished Karus. Various red arrows spanned the cavernous space between Sicily and… Iberia. Karus couldn’t believe his eyes.

    Clisthenes sat down, now more like a bored accountant than a vivacious general. He began to scribble away at a wax plate, writing a letter to the President. He didn’t look up as he dismissed Karus - “You have your orders, lokaghos - see to it that your men are ready when the time comes. The 1st Pannonian will be gaining a beachhead and assaulting Saguntum - your lochos will be one of the first into action.” He seemed to not care about the importance of this information. “Go, I am expecting others…” Karus knew it would be foolish to ask any more of his superior officer; he smartly saluted and marched out. He closed the door behind him and quickly stomped out of sight of the guards, round a corner. Karus realised he had hardly been breathing. He closed his eyes for five seconds then opened them and sighed, rushing off to change his uniform and inform his wife of this latest development.

    He headed for a small bakery on the other side of the city as Clisthenes heard a knock at the door. At last, she was here…

    The door opened and two figures appeared. The guard, a hardcore mountain of muscle officially robed with a silent face, held the girl tightly by the arms. She now struggled a little, weakly protesting as he thrust her forward and pushed her roughly over the threshold. His mind was as scarred as his battle-hardened limbs, and he felt no ill at forcing the innocent girl in and locking the door behind her. She cursed him in a strange lilting dialect that spoke of her far-off origins. A particularly fine specimen, thought Clisthenes - Illyrian, perhaps. Her shiny hair perfectly framed her smooth face and plump breasts, hardly hidden by the deeply slashed chiton she had been given.

    The spoils of war.

    The little Greek threw her onto the floor and knelt down, the anger and stress of the last few weeks about to be assuaged…

    *****

    Flavius looked up and waved as he saw Karus approaching. “Ave!” He cried out, before frowning. Karus looked agitated, marching forward with determination showing on his face. Agrippina rushed out and grabbed him in a loving embrace, but then she too looked worried.

    “Darling… what’s happened, what’s wrong?”

    Karus shook his head and smiled in disbelief. As Flavius raised his eyebrows, he looked him in the eye and said, a little breathless, “You won’t believe where I’m going, Flavius…”
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    Very nice update. This Clisthenes guy is going to get on my nerves, I think. All the better. What's a tale without a character to hate?
    Invading Iberia...should be fun.
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    Clisthenes seems like a loose canon! should be an interesting campaigne.

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    Great update . +Rep

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    Thank you very much, all three of you! I hope that thid next chapter is every bit as good as the last...
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    Blood of Zeus
    Chapter 3, part 3 - Eclipse

    Karus sighed as the heavy wooden boat hauled itself through the brilliant azure blue of the Tyrrhenian Sea. Under a burning sky, the troopships were leaving for Iberia, though it would take them 2 weeks of non-stop sailing to reach Saguntum. It was an extremely tight deadline, but then the effort going into the campaign was incredible. Flavius hoped this would be enough to keep Karus alive.

    It had been nearly 8 months since Karus had arrived in Messana, and in that time Flavius had experienced a friendship as strong as any he could ever remember. Karus and his wife Agrippina spent most days having lunch with him and letting the children play with his nephew, a little boy of their age. Karus sometimes had to stay at the barracks to keep his lochos well trained and up to standards, but luckily he normally had time for this later in the day.

    It had been obvious to Flavius, but a few months ago Agrippina had finally admitted what was becoming increasingly obvious with every passing day; she was with child. However, their happy little existence continued as, so it seemed to Flavius, it must have always done. It was as if life before they had arrived was so unfulfilling it was not deserving of his memories. They talked of Karus’ exploits in the army, their childhoods in Italy, Africa and Sicily, of the children both born and unborn - of the future for them all. Flavius skirted around the uncomfortable truth that he had no heir to run the family business and no wife, and the other two sensed this, but delicately ignored it whilst trying to show that they were sympathetic. He got the message, and somehow comfortably knew that he was with people he would never forget.

    And before any of them could accept it, Karus’ deployment had arrived. As Flavius walked through the thronging crowds of locals in the docks back to his bakery, he remembered seeing Agrippina hugging Karus and crying as she whimpered and sobbed. Flavius remembered his face falling, and seeing Karus hold her close, looking over his shoulder to where Flavius was standing. His eyes were mournful but his expression was determined. He would be strong for her - no, for the three of them, for Flavius was as close to them as any bond of family could be.

    Now that brave man was sailing for the horizon - a safe horizon, hoped Flavius. He returned to his little bakery to find Agrippina waiting there with an official looking guard from the barracks, one of the Agema. Agrippina greeted Flavius as optimistically as she could, though still clearly tormented by the fact that she would not see her husband for months, if ever again: no, he pushed such morbid thoughts from his head. The guard nodded and left, his mission to escort Agrippina through the rough end of Messana done.

    Over the next two weeks they talked about the baby - what his name would be, whether it would be a he or a she, whether it would look like her or Karus. Flavius was touched beyond words when she said that one of the baby’s names would be Flavius, in honour of the kindness he had shown them - “We could never have imagined these last months as anything other than a boring hell sat waiting in the barracks…”

    Their little routine continued fairly normally until some days later when Agrippina did not arrive at Flavius’ house in the morning. He made the journey to the barracks and the guards recognised him - after a quick search for weapons, he was shown to her chamber.

    “Agrippina?” Flavius called out. He saw no-one there. He walked forward slowly, moving towards the second chamber.
    “Agrippina?”
    He turned the corner and saw a figure standing over a large bed, head bowed. A folded chiton lay on one half of the bed, the other was disturbed and had been used recently. He realised that this must have been Karus and Agrippina’s bed, and that she had kept this half pristine, waiting for him to return and warm her in these ever-colder November nights - warm her, hold her… love her.

    She stood motionless, staring at the smooth side of the bed. Flavius walked over slowly, cautious of her emotion. He realised with a sudden spasm of realisation that the fortnight had passed - this morning, while the city continued with it’s usual hectic life and moved around them, Karus would be landing in Iberia and marching upriver to assault Saguntum. She slowly looked up and he saw tears welling in the corner of her eyes. So much for the imperturbability of Roman women, thought Flavius.

    “Relax.” He told her. “He’s a strong man. He’ll survive, just you wait and see.” She smiled and sighed. “I only wish I could believe you, Flavius. I wish I could.” She turned and stared out the window. Flavius was sure that a woman who had such a close, passionate bond with her husband - the fruits of which bulged in Agrippina’s ever expanding stomach - she must be tethered to him by thin strands of eternity. When they had become close, they had woven a web of intricacy: of feeling and hope around themselves, threads finer than any silk. Men may break these bonds or let them die of ignorance, but she felt them linking Karus’ heart to her soul. Karus walked over and tentatively placed his hand on her shoulder. His tone was reassuring as he spoke.

    “Agrippina…”

    She cried out and collapsed backwards, her legs giving way. She began to breath heavily, writhing in pain. Flavius tired to help her, but only after a few seconds had she calmed down enough to speak. He grabbed her cheeks to stop her head shaking. “Is it the child?” The guard from outside had also rushed in by now, and he asked if he should fetch a midwife. Agrippina shook her head, tears flying off and darkening the pure white line sheets on the bed. Flavius looked into her eyes and tried to calm her down.

    “What is it? What’s wrong?”

    She shook her head and let her hands rest on Flavius’. “It’s him.” She inhaled deeply before speaking again.

    “It’s Karus. He’s hurt - I felt it like a knife at my back. He’s hurt, I know it.” She sobbed and her eyes rolled upwards in longing for that tall, muscled African who she loved as much as anything, as much as the delicate seed growing in her belly.

    She cried out again and Flavius asked her again “Has something happened? Has he been hurt again?” She shook her head and gasped, before groaning. Flavius heard a dripping sound and looked down. Agrippina’s chiton clung to her around her crotch, and the waters dripped onto the wooden floorboard. Flavius knew what this meant…

    “GUARD!”
    The man was there in an instant.
    “Change of plan - we’ll be needing that midwife!” The man nodded before Flavius had finished speaking and was already on his way out, to the tent of the officer’s wives.

    Flavius reassured Agrippina, patting her on the cheek as he propped her up on the bed more comfortably with cushions. He looked up as he held her, almost as if he could see out of the city and over the seas to look Karus himself in the face.

    He prayed that his friend was alright as Agrippina convulsed, her nails digging into her arm…

    *****

    A young boy in the back of the landing craft, a new recruit, vomited noisily with the tossing and rolling of the lumbering boat as it crossed the last few feet of Mediterranean waters to give the Syracusians their first foothold in Iberia. The weeks of sea voyage had been hard on these men, land-lubbers the lot of them, firmly believing that the sea was full of Poseidon and his demons that ate men -any fools who wished to traverse it could do what they liked, but were still fools.

    As one of the older men, a veteran, clapped the boy on the back and gave him a rag to wipe the stinging bile from his mouth, Karus received a nod from the helmsman of the small boat. He stood up, his helmet tilted back over his head, and grasped his spear. He thrust it into the heavens, and the hundred men on the boat mimicked him, shouting out to raise their spirit’s a little and prepare them for battle in the cool morning breeze.

    “1 STADIA TILL WE HIT THE BEACH!”

    The men cheered again, then fell silent before the commander they trusted more than any other.

    “Remember the drill! This is where your training will pay off! Stick with your contubernium and try not to alert every bloody Iberian that we’re here! Use your dagger before your xiphos get to your meeting points before dawn. Your squadron-leaders know the objectives…” The men in question all nodded at this, distinguished from the rest of the infantry by the black crests on their hoplite helmets.

    Karus looked over his shoulder.
    “100 feet!”

    He turned and nodded grimly to his men.
    “I know this is only the start of many battles for years to come, but if you don’t f uck up completely, we should all make it to the city without a single one of us missing.”

    “Where we’ve been given the honour of being one of the units to spearhead the assault on the city…”

    Karus’ head snapped to the side and his eyes fell upon one of his squadron-leaders: Macro, an arrogant man who everyone could tell would soon be on a charge cleaning latrines by the look in their lochagos’ eyes. In fact, he probably would have been refused this command if it weren’t for his impressive swordsmanship. Karus drew his sword and pointed the elegant tapering blade at Macro, eager to exercise a sharper form of discipline than his soldiers were imagining.

    “The important word in that sentence, squadron leader, is honour. Maybe you’ll learn a little about it when your contubernium has the privilege of leading our lochos into the fray…”

    The men’s eyes widened as they realised that there was no room for error. The ship’s flat bottom grazed a sandbar just off shore and Karus picked up his ornately decorated Corinthian helmet. He spoke one last time.

    “Here we go. Get out of the craft and spread out as soon as possible - if they’re preparing an ambush I don’t want to lose the entire lochos to a single volley of arrows! Make sure you think, and fight well with your comrades!”

    He looked at Macro.
    “Fight ‘honourably’, Macro

    The men pulled their hard bronze helmets over their face and were instantly shielded from reality; metal-faced demons. Karus knew that his men would fight as well as any on Zeus’ good earth. As the helmsman ran forward to lower the ramp at the bow that would let the sword-toting hoplites off the landing craft, Karus held his sword aloft and shouted the Syracusian battle cry as other commanders did so along the wide stretch of bow-stave beach.

    “In the name of the President; for my home, my woman, and for THE BLOOD OF ZEUS!”

    The men cheered and ran forward in a great rustling of metal armour, shields ready for any assault. They jumped down into the ankle deep water and began to run up the sand… completely unhindered. It was something of an anticlimax, but there were no Saguntines lying in wait. At least, if there were, they didn’t know what in Hades they were doing. Karus was almost disappointed, but no man had the chance to stop and wait. Their orders were clear, and men funnelled up through gaps in the dunes, spreading out into their 10-man contubernia as the city of Saguntum appeared further upriver at the head of an enormous mountain.

    Normally the men fought as a lochos, but this way they would hopefully not be so obvious to the defenders of Saguntum as several square blocks of mass infantry formations marching steadily up the valley road. It would be tough, of that Karus had no doubt as he led the senior squadron along the riverbank. There had been reconnaissance - enough to tell them that there would be plenty of defenders, that the walls were stone but gates wooden, but little more. Did they know the Syracusians were coming? Had they been preparing for it? It would be hard enough getting over the walls in the first place - certain units had been selected to try and capture the gatehouses whilst the settlement was still asleep and unaware of it‘s approaching invaders. Karus almost felt nervous, then brushed the weakness aside. That job had fallen to his eastern gate - he would not let the rest of the 1st Army, the Pannonians, down.

    Within minutes the whole lochos had reformed further up the valley, in the cover of a leafy wood near the city. No-one stirred behind the walls and no watchmen appeared to raise a hue and cry. Karus looked back down the valley and saw it teeming with Greek infantry lumbering up the gentle slope laden with their armour and weapons. Behind them, more ships arrived on the beach, bringing portable siege artillery in case Karus and the other spearhead units failed to capture the walls. Within minutes, the Saguntines would surely notice the mass of warships and Greek warriors. He had but minutes if he was to succeed.

    He checked his men - not one lost, and not one reported contact with locals. He then waved his sword and silently ushered them to follow him. None spoke as they ran up to the walls - there was always a chance they had not yet been seen. Other men mimicked them on either side, using specially prepared grappling hooks to get onto the ramparts of the wooden walls. Stakes were pulled up to leave a clear path to the walls and Karus threw the heavy iron hook over the wall. He tested the weight and it held firm. Karus turned to Macro and held the rope out before him.

    “Since you care so much about being the first into action Macro, you can have the honour of being the first over the walls.” The sarcasm in ‘honour’ was clear, but Macro dared not strike his officer - at least, not while such an offence carried the death penalty. As he placed a hand on the rope, a bell rang out.

    He froze, hanging on the rope. Karus smacked him in the back with the flat of his sword, and Macro quickly scuttled up the rope as more bells began to ring out over the city. They had been spotted.
    “MOVE YOU WHORESONS, MOVE, UP THE ROPES NOW!”

    Men began to quickly follow Macro’s lead and ascend the other ropes. Karus followed his men over the precipice. As he regained his footing, something dark and sleek whistled past his face and buried itself in the ramparts. As the arrow quivered from the energy of the shot, Karus drew a throwing knife and unleashed it on his enemy. The Iberian gasped, clutching his neck as blood spurted from his severed arteries. Even as he fell, Karus’ sword hoplites were spreading out in both directions, mechanically dispatching the poorly armed militiamen on the walls.

    Even as Karus’ men opened the gate to the approaching hordes of heavy infantry, it was clear that the city had awoken. The sound of heavy footfalls and marching boots came from one corner of the city, and citizens were already in a frenzy, screaming at the top of their lungs and fleeing from the enemy soldiers on the walls.

    Karus led his unit off the walls as soon as they were firmly in Greek hands, and received orders from Clisthenes. His squadron-leaders were waiting for him when he returned, giving his horse to an aide with a nod of thanks. As the men waited, he shook his head disparagingly.

    “Bad news… the Strategos himself has ordered me to take the enemy guardhouse…” He pointed across the deserted streets in the direction of the enemy troops. “… no matter what the resistance.” Before any could protest, he threatened them accusingly with the point of his sword, looking every man in the eye.

    “No buts, men. If any man wants to leave the army and forget about his contubernium, I’ll accept his resignation…

    …after we’ve captured that bloody guardhouse.”

    It drew a little smirk from the men but was better than nothing. Karus formed the unit up around him, the organised block of men easily forming ranks as their training took hold. They marched with swords drawn.

    They marched for so long that Karus was wondering whether they would ever reach the enemy… but he was rudely awakened as the lochos rounded a corner. They ran into a group of javelin-toting skirmishers, and Karus reacted instinctively.

    “Shields up!”

    His men were one step ahead. The front rank crouched and held the shields over their chests, whilst the men behind used those in front to cover their lower body as they braced their aspis shields for any impacts. The enemy were quick to unleash their missiles, but despite the ferocity of their attack, the drill and training in Sicily had paid off. Karus held his shining blade aloft as one man was struck in between the eyes pitched forward dead before he could scream, his place taken instantly by the man behind.

    HOPLITAI… at the pace, ADVANCE!”

    The men responded with a loud shout of acknowledgement and moved forward one step at a time, their defensive formation intact. A man’s shield splintered under the pressure of multiple javelins and he ran for the rear of the formation as he was replaced. An opportune Iberian flung out an arm, sending a javelin flying that pinned the man to the ground.

    Every step the Greeks took was accompanied by a leonine roar, echoed by the ringing metal helmets.

    The fire stopped, and as Karus peered over his shield, he saw enemy spearmen heading their way.

    “Formation…repel infantry!”

    The men echoed the command as loud as they could, locking shields and holding their swords to poke through the gaps and create a wall of steel and wood to the Saguntines. The enemy charged, breaking formation as they felt the heat of battle begin. Karus’ men all swiped upwards in a vicious windmill stroke as the enemy hit them, splitting many jaws and smashing skulls. The enemy faltered, stumbling over the lifeless front rank. Karus himself stepped into the fray, and the men followed him, charging over the first corpses they had created to send blood and gore flying over the stumbling enemy ranks.

    The badly armoured defenders fell quickly and retreated further into the city. As Karus pursued them, he saw a large stone building ahead with heavy Thorakitai infantry pouring out of it. The guardhouse!

    His mood got the better of him for once. He ran forward and knew no official orders were needed. The sooner this whole mess was over, the sooner he could see Agrippina again… and the child…

    “CHAAAARGE!”

    The group broke formation and charged down the street, weapons glinting boldly in the sunlight as they threw themselves upon the enemy. The battle became a mêlée.

    For what seemed like hours the lochos fought off as many enemies as they could, gaining an inch at a time as they fought suicidal to stem the flow of enemies from the guardhouse. Or they would have, had all the defenders not already sortied; capturing the guardhouse was useless, save for a little bit of positive symbolism on behalf of the Greeks.

    No, there was no point in capturing it. But they would fight on regardless, knowing that the Strategos would destroy anyone whom he thought a coward. They couldn’t have escaped if they’d wanted to: little groups of men hacked savagely at their well-armoured, disciplined opponents with their lethal, wickedly sharp xiphos swords.

    Eventually, Karus’ troops took a deep breath and realised that they were alone. The enemy were busy engaging other Syracusians, and it was only a matter of time before the city fell!

    They cheered and hugged each other, slapping each other on the back and resting, sipping from their canteens. Karus allowed the men a moment’s rest, but then realised that Clisthenes would soon be here, and they still weren’t in the guardhouse…

    He felt something ominous shouting at him in his mind, but ignored it. “Don’t get comfortable, you lazy louts! The guardhouse is over-f ucking-there, and we’re not in it! Move!”

    His words fell on deaf ears as he realised how many of his men were dead. The men who had been celebrating were already beginning to tend to the wounds of the dying, and tend to the corpses of the dead. He counted 20 dead and 15 wounded out of his unit of 100. The street fell silent for the first time since the attack had begun that morning.

    “Macro…” Karus knelt down and grabbed his shoulder, watching as this beefy lump of emotionless Italian muscle wept like a mother over the body of a dead boy next to him. The squadron-leader had seen his fair share of dead comrades, but Karus knew this must be different. This was the Greek military - they might rip into a lad and take the piss at every moment (especially the Italians), but for what it was worth Karus knew that most of them took a bedmate from amongst the ranks at one time or another. The officers didn’t complain. More women for them, and fewer tents needed on campaign.

    Macro looked at his officer and shook his head, back arched like a little child cradling a cut finger.
    Sir…” His voice trembled and quivered in agony, his metal mask of invincibility lying useless by his side. As Karus looked up into his eyes, he saw a shadowy figure edge over the lip of a rooftop above. He realised…

    No time to think.

    He couldn’t do anything. He called out, but knew that only the gods could save them. Grabbing his shield, Karus sheltered beneath it as a hailstorm of arrows punched downwards through the air, mercilessly seeking out flesh. The initial volley bounced off his shield, but few of his men were so lucky. Most had to rely on their armour - and most had taken off their helmets. Now those who had kept them on felt the metal’s reassuring resistance, felt arrows splinter and recoil from greaves, lamellar armour, and even shields for the fastest among them.

    Lamellar armour is an extremely intelligent composite armour, light yet strong due to thin layers of bronze and linen. It was rumoured to withstand a spear thrust and certainly an arrowhead, but these arrows were being fired downward, at point-blank range. Most simply hit the head or the arms, some killing instantly. The ferocity of the blast meant that those receiving it were nearly silent, their groans and swearing overpowered by the whistling arrows.

    One arrowhead managed to punch through his thick shield and bury itself in Karus’ forearm: he grunted and looked around, hoping that their armour would save them. Never had the phrase ‘Made by the lowest bidder.’ been so rigorously and memorably rammed home.

    They had to get to the shelter of the guardhouse. This battle just didn’t want to lay down and die. He didn’t have to tell the men. They were already scuttling away like crabs, hoping that their thick shells would protect them from the predators above.

    Karus turned to make sure that none were left behind.
    “MACRO…”
    He shook the man’s body, but the 3 arrows protruding from his chest were 3 inescapable truths - the man was dead. Karus felt a bitter shame that he had not pulled his men through it… He would resign from the army. He could not do this any more. He would live out life with Agrippina and it would be peaceful, so peaceful…

    Another arrow struck him in the foot, shattering the little toe on his left foot.
    “S hit!” Can’t stay here.

    He crawled over to where his men were hiding. Catching his breath, he counted all his remaining men on both hands, the remainder dead or dying as the archers pummelled any remaining breath from them. Even as Karus smashed his fist into his thigh and cursed again, a division of Cretan archers, supported by heavy infantry mercenaries from the Bosporus, came into view.

    They fired on the skirmishers, who quickly fled. Their commander halted his men and strolled over to Karus. The man looked almost nonchalant as he extended a hand. Karus kept his steely gaze on the man and extended his hand… pushing the man back to collapse in a heap. As his soldiers protested in a flurry of angry Peloponnesian Greek, he tromped over to the guardhouse, his feet carving great troughs in the sand.

    He sighed. Would this ever end?

    He opened the door and took a step. Smack. An ironclad fist smashed into his sternum, and he stumbled backwards, staring at the preposterous feathered stick in his chest, grating against his ribs. A warm stain began to spread across his chest and drip from under his armour. He laughed feebly.

    “You bastards… you, you… shot me.”

    He cackled again, and very slowly and deliberately drew his sword. Syracusians were running forward as they saw what was happening, but the men in the dark stood ready to draw, arrows nocked.

    He looked them all in the eye, then raised his sword.
    “THE BLOOD OF ZEU-”
    Smack.

    An arrow. He gasped and staggered forward, clutching his elbow.
    Another. And again.

    He fell backwards, and a final missile sent him flying out the door, throwing him in the air.

    *****

    Agrippina screamed again and Flavius shuddered. Childbirth was tough, but this was like a battle.

    A wrinkled old woman robed in fine linen had appeared and was tending to Agrippina, making sure that the baby survived. Blood stained the sheets as Agrippina clasped at Flavius’ hand. He thrust a piece of wood into her mouth and she bit down on it, sobbing as the pain coursed through her.

    “Nearly there, pet.”

    The midwife softly spoke to Agrippina, soothing her as she approached the end. Agrippina gave a final banshee’s wail and then gasped, nearly fainting as with a slick sound the midwife caught the child. The life-cord was cut and tied closed as the alien little thing, white as chalk yet covered in bloody slime, began to cry and holler immediately. The midwife smiled and examined the baby’s limbs.

    “You’ve got yourself a healthy little boy here, Agrippina.”

    Agrippina nodded slowly, her hair straggled about her face as she beckoned for the child, her eyes wide and focused in it constantly. The room, loud and rife with pain for hours and hours, was now a source of tranquillity, a fount of new life.

    Flavius stroked her head to comfort her. “He’ll make you happy - I just know it.” She smiled. “Of course he will. He’ll make his fath…” She stopped and her eyes became fixed on some imaginary point in space. Flavius trembled as she said “Something’s wrong, Flavius.”

    She looked deep into his eyes, and Flavius felt his soul touched as if an Oracle itself sat before him.

    “Something’s wrong with Karus…”

    *****

    Karus looked round the door into the small room. Agrippina was staring out to sea, leaning on the windowsill for support as she recovered from her painful childbirth she had undergone only 3 days ago. Her eyes strained towards Iberia in the far distance, and Karus realised that this woman, with crow’s feet at her eyes but a young woman’s heart was hardened veteran who had been through this before. She would survive… unlike some, he suspected.

    Even as he moved, she knew he was there.
    “They sent the message in this morning.”
    A scroll lay open on a small table. She exhaled with a sigh that spoke of eternal longing.
    “Unfortunately, it is my duty to inform you that Lochagos Karus Sabrata was killed in action 3 days ago. He led his men by example and was doing his duty to Syracuse, to me his strategos, and to you as he was shot. He died a warrior’s death, and I apologise sincerely for your loss.”

    She spoke the words with an icy venom laced into her voice. Her eyes continued to stare towards the distant corpse of her husband.

    “Loss… what does he know of ‘my loss’? Did he bear Karus a child, a strong boy whom he could be proud of, or die with him ‘doing his duty’?Her voice rose from a mutter to tortured anguish.

    “Did he know about me, you, our whole life… he has lost nothing! He knows nothing of our loss, he has lost nothing for us!”

    Bitter resignation.

    “He has destroyed us…”
    “No.”

    Flavius had been sanding behind her as she spoke, and he watched his arms as they encircled her shrunken belly and squeezed gently and affectionately. Her head moved back slowly onto his shoulder and she exhaled with the knowledge the moment, softly holding his arm in her beautiful yet wrinkled hand.

    She turned to face him.
    “I can’t live without him, Flavius.”
    “We already are.”

    They kissed softly, not out of youthful desire but somehow of the knowledge that… this was what the Fates had chosen for them. And they wanted it. It wasn’t love.

    But it was beautiful.
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    Ouch, too bad about Karus. I was starting to like him. But it was inevitable, really. Quite a bit of hinting at his demise from early this installment. Nice chapter overall, a few typos, though, if you'd like to take care of them:

    As he placed a of, a bell rang out.
    She spoke the words with an icy venom laced I her voice. Her eyes continued to stare towards the distant corpse of her husband.
    I think that's it. Looking good, I'm eagerly awaiting the next update!
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    shame about karus, you really shouldnt get us attached to a character, if you are going to have him killed off. great update.

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    Blood of Zeus
    Chapter 4, Part 1 - Ocean Drive


    Dew soothed the ancient earth as it sighed in birdsong at the coming of the dawn. The sun lifted it’s head and gently warmed everything in sight, sending smiles down from the heaven to sit on the face of everything under it’s gaze. Every creature stopped, animosities and struggles forgotten, looking to that great eternal orb as it boiled away the tranquil droplets that trembled fearfully on their grass-top purchases.

    Bugger.

    Flavius Gracchus swore, his bathos ruining the poetic moment. He had run out of writing room on his wax tablet, and he knew he had no spares left. He sighed. It was as if nature didn’t want him to record this beautiful moment, but to keep it a secret in the memories of men and beast alike. He obeyed and resigned himself to a less spiritual morning.

    Gracchus walked back down the grassy knoll towards the rest station where he had spent the night. As the sun rose, the isolated building was just beginning to wake up. The first early travellers bid their goodbyes and set their reins to their horses; trotting off into the day ahead, hooves slapping metallically on the hard surface of the final feet of the Syracusian Highway. The 16th of the great roads, it had been built to give the Empire a land connection to the great Greek power of Massilia, the formidable city state in south-west Gaul.

    This inn was a fully stocked rest stop for travellers to or from that megalopolis. Fresh horses, food, a bed for the night… It was good to know that someone out there was making the effort, thought Gracchus. Genoa had faded into the distance behind him and this rest stop was his last port of call before he crossed the border and travelled into the great city itself, the forbidding Alps towering over him to the north.

    The metalled surface of the highway ran out against the freshly shod hooves of his fresh horse, and the wind brushed Flavius’ cheek. It was as pleasant a morning as any he had seen in the Empire - and he had had many moments such as this to reflect as he had passed over the thousands of cities, towns, villages - the people that constituted one of the most powerful Empires the world had yet seen, rivalled only by Alexander’s great Persian swathes of land and the vast tracts now held by his successors.

    Gracchus was one of a new and obscure brand of man. 10 years ago, upon the great conquest of Italy by Hiero the Great and the foundation of the Empire, the Presidents ever since had begun to hire ιστορικοί - historians, sent to travel the Empire, all expenses paid, as they documented various sectors of the Empire. People’s stories, the land beyond the frontiers, conquests… yes, the had to submit a sample every few months to ensure that they were doing so in a ‘favourable’ light, but as far as Gracchus was concerned, provided that you were literate and at ease with words it was the best job in the world.

    He had been close enough to the front line during the conquest of the Bastarnae to feel the thrill of the campaign, hunting the enemy, but not in the action itself. He had watched many battles in his time - and written about them - and he was sure that the men he served were by far the most skilful in the world. Egalitarian he may be, but that didn’t stop him swelling a little momentarily with pride for the Hellenic race.

    Gracchus’ work had taken him through Athenian symposiums, Roman slums, Byzantine markets - to Pontic pirates in Pantiakapon, the elegant and modern colonnades of Pergamum, and the assault on the senses that was the noise and bustle of the great docks at Carthage. He had been born on one of the windswept islands of Illyria, and knew that beautiful coastline well also. Now, he was heading to what he knew would be one of his latter destinations. He had amassed plenty of money and friends - he would retire and marry early, his sweet future securely guaranteed by the generosity of the President. What would his defining memory of Massilia be?

    Gracchus eagerly handed over his horse to an attendant near the city gates, pushing through the stout walls to reach the bustling paths within. His eyes invaded shop fronts, market stalls and humble yet homely looking wooden dwellings that flanked the busy streets on all sides. He made his way to the city hall, reflecting on this odd place. It looked like Greece, with similar buildings, fashions and occupations - even the guard at the city gates had conversed with him in fluent Syracusian Greek, with more Sicilian and Latin influence than his own ‘Gallic’ toned Greek. But the city was distinctly different. Blond haired Germans with trousers and loose linen shirts walked the streets and talked amongst others, unaware of each other as toga-robed nouveau riches ambled by in complete harmony. The city’s buildings were also quite old fashioned and local, yet looking over the seafront and the bay (the Lacydon, as the locals called it). Goods flowed in and out in every direction as freely as wine flows from amphorae.

    The city was a keystone of the world yet apart from it’s troubles.

    And as his own lonely thoughts echoed around in his own confined cranium, Gracchus could not help but wonder if he too might end up apart from the world, with no wife or child to share his experiences with.

    Dragged out of this morose reverie by his arrival at the centre of the city, Gracchus handed over a small bag of silver: a bed at a fine inn, wine, food and a guide around the city awaited him. He requested the man to take him to the Massilian Scriptorium - a well reputed centre of learning, literature and general academia where Gracchus was sure he would find a quiet place to collect research for the writing of his report on Massilia.

    He entered the colonnaded stone front - beautifully designed and painted - into a space lavishly emboldened by mosaics and incensed candles, all brightly lit by wide skylights that permeated the suffused air of concentration and learning. It had the serene atmosphere of a great temple.

    Gracchus left his guide to himself, and wandered over to a vast bank of scrolls on local history, his own abstract thoughts about the place idly chasing themselves around like pigeons in a barn loft. He tentatively leaned forward to grasp one of the larger looking rolls of papyrus near the bottom of the shelves.

    “I wouldn’t take that if I were you…”

    A gentle yet slightly haughty voice whispered to Gracchus. It was a female tone that despite it’s high-born roots entailed friendliness in it’s sounds.

    Gracchus turned to speak… and nearly gasped out loud.
    The sight took his breath away, and his eyes fed on the sight.

    She was perfect…

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    As I read this (yes im still alive btw lol) I get a sense of the battles sounding like great movies I've watched. Your descriptions are as always great and give a pretty damn good veiw of what is going on such as:

    " He entered the colonnaded stone front - beautifully designed and painted - into a space lavishly emboldened by mosaics and incensed candles, all brightly lit by wide skylights that permeated the suffused air of concentration and learning. It had the serene atmosphere of a great temple."

    When I compare this to the beginning of your last AAR its like you are not even the same person and have evolved into a great writer here on the forums that I havent had alot of time for lately.

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    Blood of Zeus
    Chapter 4, Part 2
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    Her sea blue eyes stared remorselessly, the kind face around it creasing into a frown. Gracchus realised he was staring. She shook her head as he regained his composure, reaching down to realign the scroll he had taken. Gracchus dared to look down, and her smooth, curvaceous body glared at him through her soft linen dress, buttocks and breasts brash and beautifully prominent.

    Thank Zeus it was only her eyes he’d been staring at, or he might have been asking for more than a frown.

    She rose smoothly, her back arching gracefully as a diving swallow. Her blonde locks swayed gently on her shoulders as she turned to face him again, and the movement put Gracchus in mind of seaweed fronds ebbing at the beck and call of the gentle, all powerful tides. The brown discs in her eyes questioned him again.

    “Not the talkative type are you?”
    Gracchus couldn’t think - a witty reply - something clever to effortlessly throw out…
    “Even for a Roman bookworm…” She turned and dismissed him with evident confusion. Gracchus’ instincts reached out and claimed her back. The Fates couldn’t have this one; she was his.

    “I…”
    She turned.
    “I’m sorry, I just…”

    Her eyebrows quizzically sat in lazy impatience, framed by her long, shining blonde hair.

    “I haven’t been here before. You surprised me, I was…”
    She rolled her eyes. “Libraries are such confusing places, aren’t they Mr…”

    “Gracchus.” Flavius regained some of his regular composure. “Flavius Gracchus, Syracusian historian.”
    “Fascinating.” A sigh. “Well, Gracchus… maybe you’ll grow up and get on with what you’re meant to be doing.”
    “Which is?”

    She smiled and clicked her tongue. “Cheek! So you do have a sense of humour! The gods bring us new wonders every day…”
    Gracchus tried to smile suggestively… she responded with the most minute of subconscious adjustments. An eyebrow hauled itself a little higher above her smooth Mediterranean eyes, her shoulders lapsed back, her smooth, moist lower lip curled forward playfully. The air heated between them.

    “You don’t even know me.”
    “Maybe if you told me a bit more…” The mysterious girl’s voce was somehow harsh, yet you only wanted to listen to it all the more.
    “If you meet me later, I can tell you everything.”
    A jarring shiver ran down his spine. He had gone too far… why did he always do this…?

    “Could be interesting…” She turned and slowly walked out, her hips cycling smoothly like waves lapping against a ship’s hull. Her devilish parting smile gripped his heart.

    “How will I find you?” Gracchus beckoned to her, trying to capture the incredible image with his hand. He was afraid that the beautiful sight would slip away and be lost forever. He would die for it… he realised he still did not know her name. She called back to him.

    “At the market, noon…ask for Katea…”

    Gracchus watched her go, then sighed and returned to reality. How long was it till noon?

    *****

    Tensing his hands nervously, Flavius Gracchus allowed himself one more nervous look around. Gracchus’ fists clenched and unclenched mechanically as he tried to calm his nerves - but his thoughts betrayed him. She still isn’t supposed to be here for a little while yet. His thoughts strayed to the lingering impression left by Katea as the market behind him continued to writh and twist behind him. A now cold drink sat abandoned in it’s cup in front of Gracchus. The voices of the haggling customers and traders carried across the small stone square as he returned to reality and struggled to discern his target’s curvaceous form amongst the endless dun shawls and dirty white tunics.

    In the midst of his reconnaissance, Gracchus’ instinctive observation picked up on the more permanent details, mentally jotting already. The square’s surface was old and in many places dirty, but hawkers and prostitutes, although common in Massilia, were nowhere to be seen. Most locals were below equestrian class, but did not struggle; they looked happy, content. Which, he ironically noted, made the motive of the coming encounter all the more seedy…

    “Haven’t forgotten me, have you?”
    Gracchus’ eyes snapped forward and locked on to the origin of that seductive voice that he had only known a few hours, but knew he would not forget in a hurry. He could not ignore the rapidly accelerating hammering in his chest… Katea was here.

    Here eyes held his, their incredibly smooth blue discs a magnet for his gaze. As she sat, her flowing stola gave a grace to her movements, and subtly emphasised her wide hips and breasts… Gracchus could not think of a more elegant description than the fact that they were, well… enormous.

    So much for the eloquence of love.

    Nodding suggestively to a waiter, his cup was refilled, and it steamed heavily as Katea leaned back and tucked her blonde hair behind her ears. She gave him a demeaning look.
    “If you do want to tell me anything, or start a conversation, now would be a good time.”

    Flavius shifted in his seat, his eyes looking away and a smile crossing his face for a moment in that way people can have when trying to summon the right, humourous words.
    “I guess you might want to know why a ‘bookworm’ like me was at the library.”
    “MY library.”
    He frowned - She laughed and shook her head. “I mean, I spend so much time there…” The little flaw in her perfection was a comfort to Gracchus.

    “Though I did wonder what a Syracusian - ” she said. Flavius grimaced.
    “Please - Flavius. Flavius Gracchus at your service.” He bowed his head theatrically. She mimed applause and sniggered in a away which was so… below her that it threw Gracchus’ guard for a moment.

    “You’re frowning again… and staring. It’s like you want to open my head and see what makes me tick.” Gracchus put on a thoughtful expression, as if to say That’s not such a bad idea… She giggled and stuck her tongue out at him. Returning her laugh, Gracchus took a sip from his hot drink. Katea motioned for his cup and he handed it over, watching as the drink slid down her smooth throat. Of course, like any man in such a situation, he used it as a welcome chance to take a glance downward… now his blood felt warmer in his veins.

    As Gracchus reached over to take the cup back, his fingers relaxed and the cup spilled its dregs over her front - now it was his face that warmed as he felt it turn red with embarrassment. She gasped, surprise mingling with laughter - she almost looked pleased in a bizarre way. Cutting off his apologies, all Katea could say when she had stopped giggling was “I should thank Athena that I chose not to wear white!”

    *****

    Within an hour the two were walking between the neat stone houses of Massilia’s inner suburbs as the sun crawled low over the rooftops and began to retreat to dusk. Gracchus broke the short silence - “So.. Who would normally be your chaperone in these streets on any other night?”

    She shook her head and looked up at him, unbelieving, from under her long eyelashes, her look showing how naïve she believed he was. Before he could question her, she grabbed his arm and twisted it behind his back. He gasped and tried to free himself, but could not. He was not a particularly strong man, but she still revealed the presence of some muscle hidden amongst the beauties of her flesh.

    Gracchus freed himself and she turned to face him; he recovered his breath and smoothed his toga. Realising that she was standing on her own doorstep, his senses heightened and adrenaline coursed through his system.
    “Well, you’re strong, I’ll give you that…”
    Katea giggled and mocked a curtsy. “Thank you, sir.” in a girlish voice which only served to highlight how strong and vivid her womanhood clearly was.

    He tried to overcome his natural nervous feelings… “Well…” Gracchus said, “… it certainly makes things more interesting.” She lowered her eyes at him. “How exactly?” He shrugged, then fixed her eyes with a clear, penetrating stare.
    “More… possiblities…”

    She leaned forward towards him slowly, stooping a little from her high doorstep. “I guess you’d like to come in and try some of these possibilities out, would you Flavius?”
    “What makes you think that?”

    Her ear brushed his cheek as she whispered in his ear.
    “Because men can’t disguise their feelings when they’re wearing a toga…”

    As she drew back to her full height, he looked down to his groin and sure enough… Gracchus looked back up to her, and could tell that she was struggling not to laugh. Within seconds, he had taken her inside and thrust her onto a couch, where he lowered his head to her chest.

    Katea giggled, then gasped as he ran his mouth and hands over her now exposed chest, feeling the smooth texture that melted in his hands and felt like nothing else. Gracchus only remembered that he had never felt such pure ecstasy in his life…

    *****

    They say there is a second, for men, when the mind goes blank and nothing exists, when they are with a woman… Gracchus’ mind was as empty upon waking the next morning. Realisation slapped him across his dishevelled face as he lifted his head from Katea’s couch. The historian was alone once more.

    Turning his face to the sun, squinting, Flavius Gracchus departed Massilia, the city where he had met a woman he desired more than any other, but who now lingered only in his vivid memories.

    Work goes on, but love lingers.

    In the mind of Flavius Gracchus.
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    Right - finally finished this short story! I'm hoping to get back into this AAR, but tbh, this might be a one off! All the stories have their purposes, this is basically (clearly) the attempt at writing a - bluntly - erotic one. Though, if i continue, Flavius Gracchus will return in a later story. It would help if i hadn't buggered up RTW - RS1.5c on my computer!

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    I've been reading it. The last update was superb and put you in the spot as you were reading it. I had see an SoA style of writing now i think, when i remember back to your previous AAR. Vivid descriptions, and perfect wording. Please do continue, and hopefully ole Flavius will recover from his lust lol. The way you lay out the history of the Empire within every paragraph makes it seem so real as if Syracuse actually conquered most of the world in our universe. Good stuff.

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    (BTW, thanks for your comment Red )

    Chapter 5, Part 1 - All Along The Watchtower

    Arsaces Peithon shook his head.
    “Don’t fancy that bunch of sorry pricks much for recruits, myself…”

    Alexander was his centurion, a slender man in his mid twenties. His close shaved skull, defined muscles and Corinthian helmet marked him out as a solider who took his chosen career seriously; so did the silver band which marked his rank. His commanding officer might have seemed, at first glance, to be inferior. The man was stocky and had a face rutted like an old dirt track by the ravaging effects of some fever earlier in his life. Of course, his mixed ancestry didn’t endear him either to many amongst the prejudiced of the High Command, the ‘pure’ Greeks.

    This had led to him being sent on increasingly suicidal missions, each one of which he had survived, leading to him becoming as excellent a lochagos as any in the Syracusian Army, and certainly with more decorations than any. However, it was his turn on the books to train a new batch of recruits.

    Alexander knew his lochagos had no intention of taking it easy on the recruits marching through the eastern gate of the Segestica army depot, the long ascent up the hillside tiring them.
    “Everyone was a new recruit once, Sir.”
    Arsaces’ reaction was delayed, his train of thought clearly interrupted. He grunted.

    “Huh?”
    Alexander nodded in the direction of the squabble in front of them.
    “That was you once, Sir.”

    “Bollocks was that ever me. Does this look like it ever belonged to a pussy-faced recruit?” Arsaces pointed to the jagged scars running across his forehead.
    “I’m sure you weren’t always such a bastard, Sir.” Alexander knew when Arsaces was in a mood where he could take the piss, at least a little. His commander rolled his eyes and looked back to the column shrouded in dust.
    “F *** off…”

    Alexander permitted himself a smile for that. Arsaces continued to keep an eye on the new men, his cane rigidly held under his arm.
    “Bloody recruits.”

    *****

    The rumble of feet sounded all around the young men as they trudged forward. Marius Arrius Laterensis awoke from his daydreaming and looked up from his sweaty sandals. The men around him were of all shapes and sizes: tall, short, fat, thin, muscled, coloured, the variations went on and on. Subconsciously, they had all formed into small clusters, often of similar origin. Marius was convinced he saw one group which consisted of nine brothers, so close was the resemblance between each man and their easy manner around each other. To his left, Marius heard one man puff out his cheeks against the strain of the slope.
    “I’ll die before I reach this stupid fort at this rate.”

    Looking around, Marius saw the man from whom the remark had come, a gluttonous hulk with features that were almost comical in shape: buck-toothed, a double chin, enormous nose, ruddy cheeks and sloppy fringe. A shorter man - with a rust coloured beard and dark eyes - looked up at him in disgust.
    “You better keep going, fat man - we’ll need you when it comes to dinnertime, the blubber on you could feed everyone in this godforsaken place.”
    The fat man continued to squint ahead at his hilltop goal, ignoring the slight.

    Another recruit turned to the outburst. Marius did not miss his thick Athenian accent and the xiphos hanging from his belt. The man seemed to regard his fat companion with equal disgust. “You have a name, you fat bastard?”
    “Uh… Maximus… Porcius… Paetus.”
    The man seemed to stumble thinking of each word. The last one caused the Greek to sigh and shake his head. “You Romans, giving yourselves bloody ‘cognomens’ and pretending you’re Syrakusoi.”
    “Hard to find anyone with a single set of ancestors nowadays.”

    The eyes of the little group flitted to the new speaker, an immaculately groomed man with well shaped, handsome features and a low, husky voice. The Greek pointed a finger at him. “Bet your father couldn’t keep his dick out of some innocent Greek woman, eh?”
    The man held up his hands and tilted his head in submission - “Hey, more Greek than Roman here - Theodoros Ptolemos Nerva.” He held out his hand in greeting. The Greek made no movement towards him.

    “Fortuna won’t thank you for that.” The Greek turned his angry stare to a brown haired, smiling man with enormous patches of red, blotchy skin across his neck. He responded - “Screw Fortuna. The Fates have in store something far better than your Etruscan gods…” He spat. The other man grinned.
    “Who said I worshipped Roman gods? I’m a Dacian, Dapyx Lupus Ambustus.”
    The Greek hawked and spat. “I’m Scorillo Neoptolemos, and I don’t bow to any gods other than the Olympians…”

    Arrius piped up. “Scorillo… remind me, is that Epirote or Macedonian? I was labouring under the delusion it was Latin…” Scorillo’s face turned red as those around him began to laugh. Arrius shrugged and looked away. “Guess it must have been your mother Theodoros’ father was f ucking.”

    Scorillo launched himself at Arrius, but was neatly tripped with a quick sidestep and outstretched leg. He rolled onto his backside as Arrius stood over him.
    “Want a hand, Scorillo?” Scorillo stared at Arrius’ hand, breathing out heavily through his nostrils like a bull. “Or would you prefer to sit on your arse all day?”
    Scorillo hauled himself to his feet and trudged off ahead of the group. Arrius, Theodoros, Lupus, Maximus and the short, red bearded man - who was revealing himself to others as Dicomes (Meclides Ahenobarbus) - watched as the angry Greek marched off ahead of them, in the shadow of the fort’s grand archway. Lupus wiped his forehead with a clean white cloth and shifted his pack on his shoulders. “No need to be so uncivil…” His eyes settled on the officers ahead of them. He drew in another hard breath.

    “Bloody officers.”
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    Aargh, too many names for my simple mind to comprehend. I'll blame the cognomens.
    What a great update. This and the last, I missed the rest.

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