Borissomeone's Tales of Thera (Fan Fiction)

[midterm360]

Now I like how this is starting to play out, I bet you're having alot of fun with the story; so many ways it could go. + rep for you

EDIT: Well as soon as I spread some around , oh yea... first post!!! WHOO HOOOO

[toluas]

That's cool! I'm really eager to know what will happen next!

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Did I already mention that I wanna see more of Chenghei?

[Borissomeone]

Now I like how this is starting to play out, I bet you're having alot of fun with the story; so many ways it could go. + rep for you

EDIT: Well as soon as I spread some around , oh yea... first post!!! WHOO HOOOO

Thanks, its going to get messy.

That's cool! I'm really eager to know what will happen next!

Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

Did I already mention that I wanna see more of Chenghei?

Thanks and you asked so heres a little snippet of Chenghei's life.

Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

Chenghei stood in the baking sun, small swirls of dust danced around his feet as he stood ready, his long blade drawn, slightly curved and etched with these words, when wealth is lost, nothing is lost. When health is lost something is lost. When integrity is lost everything is lost. Chenghei’s father had given him this blade; the words running along its gleaming length, he knew these words were another lesson from his father, always lesson, and now he faced his next. Chenghei now faced five men his father watched from up above, his face painted by the constant frown he wore when looking at him. Today he became a man or he died trying, the men he faced all had volunteered for this task, they would either kill him earning prestige for killing the young man who had only the best training, or they would spill their blood and gain honour for blooding another Warlord for the Lao Che. Only honour could be gained today for these men and only death for Chenghei if he failed, and shame for his father as his son failed to become a man.

Each man stood wearing only loose pants and carrying long blades similar to Chenghei’s, this fight would be over in moments but could change lives forever. Movement, it all came down to movement now. The men came as one and Chenghei flowed forward, the first came at him blade held high in the classic pose, the man was fast but he was faster. His blade opened the mans neck, turning his blade he then sliced another’s leg, opening a main artery, continuing forward he rolled as a blade just missed his head, coming to his feet he buried his blade in the next mans chest. Two men left, their blades came in one high one low, the clash of weapons rang out in the still hot air, as blows were blocked and blades knocked back Chenghei risked a high kick, his bare foot connecting with one mans face, as the man fell back he turned his blade removing the hand of the other man, blade and limb dropped to the ground. Spinning so fast his blade was but a blur he neatly beheaded the last man.

Stillness was what was needed now. Looking up to his father he waited for the nod of approval when suddenly a powerful arm wrapped around his neck. The handless warrior knowing he would be dead soon tried one last time to earn honour for his family and his soul. Chenghei sent his head back and butted the man, his nosed smeared across his face, but still he wouldn’t relinquish his grip. Both men dropped to their knees, Chenghei tried to pry the arm away, the grip was like iron, he again butted the man, his grip loosened slightly, that was all he needed. Breaking free he staggered up right as the man remained kneeling, finally blood loss took its toll and he toppled over. His father just looked at him before speaking.
‘Always be aware.’ He turned and disappeared from view. Chenghei stood staring at where his father had stood, soon the sounds of the city drifted back into the training area where he’d just been granted manhood by right of combat. The need to wash the blood that caked his body finally made Chenghei make his way back into the life filled streets of Kara Korum and away from the stinking blood soaked training area.

[The Holy Pilgrim]

Very nice Boris (as always). +rep

[toluas]

As you promised, a bloody and messy affair. But I like it... (a lot!)

[Borissomeone]

Very nice Boris (as always). +rep

As you promised, a bloody and messy affair. But I like it... (a lot!)

Thanks guys your support is greatly appreciated.

So the next up date will be big, five armies coming together.....oh this will be fun. I gotta say I never had some much fun writing . And on that note more praise for the makers of this mod, no other mod has let my imagination run so wild, thanks Thera for making a big nerd so happy.

[AgentSmith]

You make Agent Smith smile.....

Seriously your stories are really good. I bet if you take all the stories you wrote and put them together, it would make a history book, biography, and a cool novel of Thera.

Oh Yeah almost forgot.......+REP!

[Borissomeone]

You make Agent Smith smile.....

Seriously your stories are really good. I bet if you take all the stories you wrote and put them together, it would make a history book, biography, and a cool novel of Thera.

Oh Yeah almost forgot.......+REP!

Thanks man, I smile when other people smile. None of this story would have happened without this mod. So again THERA ROCKS (wild music plays in the background as Boris head bangs at his desk, and again taking things to far proceeds to knock him self out with one to many head bangs).

Oh and I'm in the tale of the week comp, please have a gander and if you like what I've done please vote for me or one of the other fine tales there.

http://www.twcenter.net/forums/showt...24#post6867924

[midterm360]

Hmm maybe i'll join into that comp sometime and see how I do...you've got yourself a competitor now Borris

[Borissomeone]

Hmm maybe i'll join into that comp sometime and see what I how I do...you've got yourself a competitor now Borris

Cool do it man, more the merrier.

[toluas]

Consider yourself voted for...

[Borissomeone]

Consider yourself voted for...

Your a good man (I know I say that alot,but I only speak the truth). And thanks to everyone else who voted, the Tale of the Week is a great comp (midterm360 I'm waiting to see your story there). Good speed and God bless.

Boris.

[The Holy Pilgrim]

I would vote for you, but I don't know which one is you.

I personally think that you are the best writer I have ever witnessed in the TWC. You defenitely deserve any/all votes towards you. I hope 100% that you'll win.

[midterm360]

midterm360 I'm waiting to see your story there. Good speed and God bless.

Boris.

Haha thank you but that wont be till the next competition

[Borissomeone]

I would vote for you, but I don't know which one is you.

I personally think that you are the best writer I have ever witnessed in the TWC. You defenitely deserve any/all votes towards you. I hope 100% that you'll win.

Massive thank you, means alot when I know you guys enjoy what I do.

Haha thank you but that wont be till the next competition

All good friend I'll see you on the battlefield.

[midterm360]

Unfortunately my only chance of beating you would be a 100% David and goliath situation if that comparison is appropriate

[Borissomeone]

Unfortunately my only chance of beating you would be a 100% David and goliath situation if that comparison is appropriate

Hardly true, but thanks. You know I really enjoyed your AAR, so again, sharpen your pencils, ready your fingers, dust off that keyboard and charge (well write) .

[chainsawfist]

I'm not sure if this is the correct place to put this, but I have a report.

The terrain is . . extremely bland. I get the impression that no one lives there. All I see are plains, plains, plains, and more plains. The occasional mountain chain, and spot of vegetation. Maybe it's because I'm in the south as the Romuli, maybe it's because the provinces are so huge and therefor there is a low concentration of cities, I don't know, something they'd want to work on.

So far it's my main complaint, great job otherwise.

[toluas]

So the next up date will be big, five armies coming together.....oh this will be fun.

Not wanting to sound impatient, but can we expect that soon-ish?

[Borissomeone]

Not wanting to sound impatient, but can we expect that soon-ish?

To be honest I have plenty of notes but no actual story started (yet). But I plan to start either today or tomorrow and maybe post a sneak peek.