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    Default TotW 71a: For the Empire....{Masterly crafted by Thallian}



    For those of you new to Warhammer, a lore guide by Ethien http://www.twcenter.net/forums/showthread.php?t=331759


    IMPORTANT FOR ALL CONTESTANTS

    It has come to my attention that some of you still have problems with the word limits that where set up for this competition. I will check all entries personally to see that no one violates this rule. Contestants who violate this simple rule will be disqualified.


    RULES :

    1. Post a short text about this picture, with min. 200 max. 500 words, in a spoiler. Learn this rule by heart guys. No more violations will be tolerated.


    2. If you are a contestant you are honour bound to not read other contestants' writings until you have submitted yours.

    3. The winner gets 1 point on the Leaderboard, if there are at least 4 contestants.

    4. Deadline: last day of each week (Sunday).



    Attention Please: You'all shall have Til March 1st to craft your masterpieces. That will put us back on the regular weekly schedule
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    Default Re: ToTW 71: For the Empire....{Masterly crafted by Thallian}

    Let´s give this a try

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    I hang. I hang with my family, with all my brothers and sisters. Together we are one, but separated we will be when we fall. I see many men, thousands. They cannot compete with our numbers though, not nearly. We will fall, we will all fall and we will make some of them fall. They will curse us, or say we are a bad omen. But they don't know why we fall. Do we? I don't know. I only know that I see men, walking. Walking in steel and the skins of others, like they always do. They are ashamed of their real selves, so they hide behind the skins not meant for them, and their steel. I know that if they walk in steel, they will try to kill others. For that they cut down trees and make long sticks, tipped with steel. They make sticks of steel. Sometimes the steel will be sharp and pointy, other times blunt but big. Yes they're all big, but we will engulf them when we fall. Because we are one. They will put steel in others, trying to take their lives. These will do it for the bearer of the poleaxe. I think they call him "king". Yes, that was the word. They march, for their king. The king doesn't march. He just stands atop his wooden moving ground. He orders them forward, hoping to make himself mightier by killing others. He will succeed, the others will fall. But we will fall infinitely longer. We will engulf them and their enemies, then we will flow back together or drown. The time has come. Now I will fall with my family. We will separate and fall. We will fall hard and annoy them. We will sicken them. We will make the ground mud and we will make the slip. We will fall and we will ruin their banner. The time has come. We fall, I fall. I fall and I land on the king. He wipes his face and mutters curses to us, but we fall.
    Exactly.

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    Congrats Czone.....

    You just broke the record for a ToTW story entry. +Rep w/o even reading it... Btw welcome the the TWC Forums...


    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    { unless you've already been around a while}

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    I've been around, but not actively. I noticed this thread about ten minutes after you posted it
    Good luck everyone else
    Exactly.

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    Well, we're very glad to have you with us.... Please let us know if you have any questions bout stuff....

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    Reserved and I will do it this time!




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    Ooh this is awesome! A perfect match to re-enter TotW with.
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    So is this a TATW TOTW?
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    Find out why Democrats are just as bad as Republicans.

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    Last edited by Mega Tortas de Bodemloze; February 17, 2010 at 01:45 PM.

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    Sorry! The only mods for M2 I've heard of are BC, SS, DLV and TLR!
    Quote Originally Posted by Kip Specter View Post
    Quit this train of thought lest the Hedge Clippers of Shut the Up be loosed upon your posts.
    Find out why Democrats are just as bad as Republicans.

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    To each their own, in they're own way... Well that's where this week pic came from anyhow. It's from the "Call of Warhammer" screenshots thread.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Major Darling View Post
    Reserved and I will do it this time!

    Same goes for me.


    Ambush in the City
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    Today we got the word that me and my company of men were being assigned to gaurd
    the Emperor in his yearly travel across the Empire. I gave word to my men and we
    prepared for the march. We all though this would be a cake walk , but little did we know
    how wrong we were. Two days later we sat out on the journey along with the Emperor, our
    first destination a small town on the edge of the Empire, this was where we ran into
    trouble. We saw smoke sprawling over the horizon. Even though this sine did not bode well
    we continued on. An hour after we saw the first somke, we made it into the town. Fires
    were raging on things that could be set ablaze, in the center there were a pile of bodies,
    all the vilagers were murdered, but by who. No sooner than we began to march out of the
    village , a great noise roared on all sides , Orcs. Normally orcs aren't very smart
    people, but these were smart enough to ambush us. We were all taken by suprise. The brawl
    that followed was some of the worst I'd ever seen, Orcs decapitating anyone in site and us
    fearing the worst for our Emperor, were takin by suprise when we saw the Emperor take up
    his Great Hammer, His "War Hammer" if you will, and fought with all his might but still
    yet it was not enough. He was felled with one swing from an Orcish Sword. We fought to
    regain his body , but to no avail. We realized it was hopeless and finally retreated ,
    even though we knew that we'd be hung for our actions. We arrived in our Capital and told
    them of our misfortune, but mercy wasan't betaken on us. My men were executed and I am now
    serving a lifetime of pain and torture in the castle's dungeon amung lowlives and
    criminals.
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    Reserved, but I know nothing at all about warhammer except that it has a weird style that I don't like .

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    Good, good, good, you'all.... now please bear this in mind.....


    You'all have til Eaaaaaaarly morning of the 1st of March to submit this entry. Once the door shuts, If ya ain't in the ark, you gonna get wet.
    {if the dog ate your pixels, ya better find me before midnight on the 28th......kay..}.

    Don't know about WarHammer...{straches head}, ahhhhh, no matter, the pic is limited only by the flow of your pen. if ya really want some background, sound off and we'll get you some...

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ko4Q0cgo1N8

    WarHammer..."The Chosen Ones"....
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    1st of March? That's more than a week away my friend! We could squeeze two competitions in that amount of time to cap off February.

    Reserved by the way.
    Storeh goez heeeaa

    Woo!
    "Muscovy", as its rulers have previously called it, is a sleeping giant, with age-old traditions and ways of doing things. Here, the feudal way of life has become so entrenched that the serfs are as tied to the land as cattle, and with almost as few rights. It is a vast, deeply conservative and religious country: Mother Russia and the Orthodox Church are the two pillars of national belief. The Tsar may be the father of his people, but by tradition and practice he is a stern parent. Ivan the Terrible was well named, and he has not been the only ruler with an iron will. Russia is the "Third Rome". The last bastion of Orthodox Christianity.

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    tis true, tis true...However we stand at mid week so to be fair to all, I would'nt cut someone short on time....

    Tell ya What....If ya wan't someone, throw some pics up and maybe we'll have two offerings for this time slot......Kay...

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    Default Re: ToTW 71: For the Empire....{Masterly crafted by Thallian}

    I'll try to get some good pics (But I'm not to good of a photo taker)

    They will be from some different Rome Total War Mods (EX. 77bc, 56bc, TGW, DTW, RTR)]\


    Nevermind My Pictures are worse than Turbo Lover by Judas Preist.
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    Hello, this is the first time taking part in this fine competition I hope you enjoy my tale called 'The Song of War'. I wrote this one awhile ago but have changed it to suit the great picture by Thallian.


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    The Song of War

    The song of war plays around me, the constant drone of weapon on weapon, the screams of man and beast as they are cut apart, ah how the song of war makes my heart sing. The wind adds its song to the one that roars around me, it moans and sweeps around us as we struggle. The pelting rain adds its own tune upon my armour as I stand waiting and watching, the banner of Sigmar snaps and cracks behind me adding another beat to the song.

    A new note is added to the song, a horn blares over us, almost drowning out the mantra of war; the remaining men surge forward adding their voices to the song.


    The rain comes in waves, driving sheets that threaten to drown out the song I so love to hear, I march in time with the beat of war, my hammer smashing down foe after foe ending their part in the chorus of death and despair that is this day. Knights of Chaos come to me; armoured forms take up the sky. I swing, crushing one foul head, dark blood adds fresh colour to the washed out shades that paint the battle field. With each blow I end one part of the song but it does not take long for another to join in the wailing, screaming and clash of weapon upon weapon that make the song of war.

    The sudden crash of cannons adds a deep and dangerous tone to the battle, Knights of Chaos explode in balls of fire, once part of the song and now part of the landscape, a wide grin claws its way over my face, ah how the song makes my soul dance to its wild rhythms as we of the Empire push this foul army back.

    A rumble and grumble, thunder overhead and then the sudden flash of lightning, an image is etched into my eyes from the sudden brilliant light, man against Chaos captured forever in one frozen moment, each combatant highlighted in radiant detail. A man of the Empire staggers past as my eyes clear, one arm missing his scream is loud in my ears as his wound pumps blood in time with the song of war, reaching new levels of madness we make it to the final chorus for today’s act.

    A great moan bubbles forth from the bloodied army of Chaos, is this the end of the song? I cast my eyes over the battle field, thick smoke billows here and there, pleas for help caress my ears. Ah but it seems the forces of Chaos no longer want to be part of this fine choir as they finally break and run, it does not matter for tomorrow I’m sure we will start to sing again as the rain continues to caress my skin washing away the stink of this day. Tomorrow we will start another melody, one that will rival today’s little refrain.

    Last edited by Borissomeone; February 17, 2010 at 09:08 PM.

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    I will try to participate in this old boy!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mega Tortas View Post
    Good, good, good, you'all.... now please bear this in mind.....


    You'all have til Eaaaaaaarly morning of the 1st of March to submit this entry. Once the door shuts, If ya ain't in the ark, you gonna get wet.
    {if the dog ate your pixels, ya better find me before midnight on the 28th......kay..}.

    Don't know about WarHammer...{straches head}, ahhhhh, no matter, the pic is limited only by the flow of your pen. if ya really want some background, sound off and we'll get you some...

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ko4Q0cgo1N8

    WarHammer..."The Chosen Ones"....
    I have this Warhammer lore compilation that will be of great assistance to those new to the universe. You can find it here.
    Total War Live Commentary: Click Here
    Call of Warhammer: Reikland
    Third Age Total War: Dwarves with MOS
    Hyrule: Total War: Forces of Twilight
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