I would like to give some constructive critisism.
I think that you should make the pieves, or future pieces less crowded with instruments, and that you should remove some of the 'tackier' sounding elements such as the bell shouds. The tune is fine, its just I think that a smaller simpler choice of instruments would be more memorable and effective.
Right now it all seems a bit too 'all at once' and a bit 1 dimensional: instead of having all instruments at the same time, make different bits have different instruments.
Anyways, it still sounds great, and you are working hard at these, as well as GCSE mocks (not looking forward to those
).
Good Luck m8,
Evan
P.S. Perhaps you could use some of the pieces from Shogun as inspiration and to interperate what I mean more clearly: listen to the soundracjs from here:
http://www.totalwar.com/index.html?lang=en