2 Vote per person!!
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2 Vote per person!!
Read and vote.
Share your comments.
Last edited by molls; December 14, 2009 at 06:18 AM.
Voted.
Land of the Free! Home of the
Since we are endeavoring to assemble those that would judge and dissect our stories I thought I would give it a throw... Going against my personal essence I said I would also cast a vote{s}. Alas I cannot bring my self to do so and this is why. Each tale I see before me has it's own life's breath and distinct flavor, and believe me I tried. Each entry casts it's javelin at the mark taking a distinct trajectory.
Salute!....Gentlemen & Lady authors take a bow. You have all rendered masterpieces in your own unique ways....Doing the review shall require closer focus and committed time, but I shall try...
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VOTED
Very funny and old tale of Mordor. The grass is always greener.
Epic Tale of Thera, simply a masterpiece . Borissomeone's Tales of Thera.
Voted.
All 5 were surprisingly well done...it was a difficult choice.
Lots of voters for this one!
Land of the Free! Home of the
A Lion serves in Winter, then perhaps a Unicorn for the Spring.
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If you cannot stand behind what you say.... then do not speak. If your words are taken out of context,
then the weight of the evidence will still fall in your favor and carry the day
The Casual Tortoise: Mega's Guide to Fast Turtling
voted
voted!
"Muscovy", as its rulers have previously called it, is a sleeping giant, with age-old traditions and ways of doing things. Here, the feudal way of life has become so entrenched that the serfs are as tied to the land as cattle, and with almost as few rights. It is a vast, deeply conservative and religious country: Mother Russia and the Orthodox Church are the two pillars of national belief. The Tsar may be the father of his people, but by tradition and practice he is a stern parent. Ivan the Terrible was well named, and he has not been the only ruler with an iron will. Russia is the "Third Rome". The last bastion of Orthodox Christianity.
Great to see the high turnout, and a good set of stories for them to choose from too.
I found that The Hunt had the biggest impact on me, for its sheer relentlessness.
No Honour Among Thieves was potentially a great story, except for a slight lack of focus, perhaps it was just trying to do too much in 500 words.
Of Death and Determination a good poem, but I had trouble connecting it with the picture, or even forming a strong impression of exactly what it was about, perhaps due to its staccato nature (or maybe it's just me). Poems are much harder to write than prose because they condense layers of meaning into a few very carefully chosen words. So a poem long enough to qualify as a TotW entry needs immensely more effort to achieve the same quality as an equivalent length of prose.
Duty was a fascinating exploration the narrator's search to find a justification for the abhorrent act of slaughter he performs. He is even willing to imagine he is doing it for money, any motive no matter how base being preferable to the truth that he merely plays out the cruel demands of his Duty like an automaton.
The Revenge of the French is clearly inspired from playing M2:TW, but I found it difficult to care about the characters since they were not developed. I think this story needs a tighter focus, there needs to be a central idea or conflict which can be resolved or explained by the concluding line.
2 and 4.
I agree completely with Juvenal on his comment of the 5th submission.
Actually, #5(Mine) wasn't about playing M2:TW. I just like to explain the conflict and how it started instead of telling about one or more individuals in it. After all, that type of game is a RPG. Total War is an RTS/TBS. I just like to stick to the Theme.
Plus, I came up with them being French from their saddles. All Four have the French Emblem on it.
when the union's inspiration through the worker's blood shall run,
there can be no power greater anywhere beneath the sun,
yet what force on earth is weaker than the feeble strength of one?
but the union makes us strong.
My apologies. I need to distinguish between fact and opinion.
What I should have said is that the story felt to me very much like playing the game, the characters being of interest only so far as they were contributing to success for the faction.
Well spotted with the French emblems.
Voted, A big thanks to all who contributed regards, mags
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1. Easy to read. emotional.
2. Easy to read. vengeful.
3. Thought provoking, stabs to you.
4. Descriptive, honor bound.
5. Fateful.
A Lion serves in Winter, then perhaps a Unicorn for the Spring.
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If you cannot stand behind what you say.... then do not speak. If your words are taken out of context,
then the weight of the evidence will still fall in your favor and carry the day
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i'm curious who made all those screenshots?