The plot always thickens! Great writing and I cant wait for the next installment! + rep
The plot always thickens! Great writing and I cant wait for the next installment! + rep
The White Horse: Hanover AAR (On going ETW AAR)
Tales of Acamar: Legends WS Yearly Award Best Plot Winner (On-going CW Piece)
The Song of Asnurn: An Epic Poem MCWC VI Winner (On-hold CW Piece)
Tales of Acamar: Outbreak (Finished)
To Conquer the World for Islam A Moor AAR (Finished)
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They've finally made it to someplace where they can find relief. Interesting to see if Nicole will continue dwelling on the father of the new child. If she finds out for sure there maybe devastating consequences. Great update!
The White Horse: Hanover AAR (On going ETW AAR)
Tales of Acamar: Legends WS Yearly Award Best Plot Winner (On-going CW Piece)
The Song of Asnurn: An Epic Poem MCWC VI Winner (On-hold CW Piece)
Tales of Acamar: Outbreak (Finished)
To Conquer the World for Islam A Moor AAR (Finished)
I have to say Thokran, great AAR I even think it might be better thanLetters Of An Aragonese KnightAccounts From Aragon: A Mediterranean AAR
Keep it up Looking forward to seeing what the birth of this child will mean
By the way, what font is that?
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Nice chapter - interesting to see the dynamic between Nicole and Marie. Still can't help thinking this can only be bad news for Gilbert though..
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Finally read through all of it (only from the restart though) and have to say fantastic =D
Would like to see more of the insane sadistic Byzantine princess though...
Also admirable to keep updating and have such an original campaign! Brilliant!
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Nicely written chapter again!
After all this long journey and the tension and emotions between the characters, I wonder if the oasis would calm a few things down (or maybe flare them up) - that is if the green is indeed an oasis and not a mirage...
Belated congrats on the MAARC victory, a worthy tale indeed!
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Another wonderful chapter. I see the Byzantine temptress is back by popular demand
You sir are probably the best of anyone here at writing these intimate scenes - unlike me using innuendo to dance around the matter gingerly in my own work
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I think what the comments are trying to say is that this could well be the Kama Sutra of AARs you dirty dog
May the Roman Empire live on with the mad !
As always astounded by the originality and flair on show here, love Africa as a setting, you've really made it work
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Short quiz, only one question:
What do you get, in both name and content, if you combine the two tv-shows "Paradise Hotel" and "Lost"?
Very thrilling update and well written! Poor Nicole, she deserves better. She's grown into quite a noble character. Have some most well-earned +rep.
By the way (since you have played CoW), Morathi and Hellebron are meekly toads in comparison with Isabella. I'm looking forward to "The fall of Ostermark" where she assumes her proper place among her heartless people...
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The Misadventures of Diabolical Amazons - Completed.
An Orcs Tale, a Third Age AAR - Completed.
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My Dread Lady, a Warcraft Total War AAR - 27 chapters done.
Home to Midgard, a Third Age AAR about two dwarves, a spy and a diplomat - Completed (pictures remade up to chapter 19).
Reviewed by Boustrophedon in The Critics Quill
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I always have this feeling when I read your updates that this is really a great character story with some background fighting and some very distant campaign. And I also think that you are cutting edge here in writing female protagonists and capturing those scenes.
But all this wandering in Africa makes me think that our heroes will eventually walk into Makuria somehow...
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