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Thread: [SS/SV AAR] Heaven's Descent, Cyprus Reborn: A Crusader AAR (Updated 7/13)

  1. February 29, 2012, 11:40 PM #141
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    Default Re: [SS/SV AAR] Heaven's Descent, Cyprus Reborn: A Crusader AAR (Updated 2/27)

    Dum dah dum dah! Marie has turned into an assasin. I like the fact that the monster you use was a hippopotamus instead of a crocodile which i thought it was until I saw the picture. They are truly dangerous animals. Your writing is superb,cant wait for the next chapter!!!
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    Default Re: [SS/SV AAR] Heaven's Descent, Cyprus Reborn: A Crusader AAR (Updated 2/27)

    Wonderful update. Marie's turn of heart was quite the surprise I must say. The pictures are quite stunning.

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    Default Re: [SS/SV AAR] Heaven's Descent, Cyprus Reborn: A Crusader AAR (Updated 2/27)

    Also, I want to provide a friendly reminder that the MAARC XXXV is up and running! Don't forget to go and vote for your favorite AAR, as there is a stellar selection of competition this month!
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    Default Re: [SS/SV AAR] Heaven's Descent, Cyprus Reborn: A Crusader AAR (Updated 2/27)

    Excellent update as always - one of my favourites since the restart. Very complex emotionally - the feeling of satisfaction at Gilbert and Marie plus Gilbert's fading (or just jaded?) feelings towards Nicole. The last sentence tops it off really. I sense lady trouble up ahead for our Gilbert

    Look forward to the fight against the Berbers, Marie killing Richard(?), their journey eastwards, in no particular order
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    Default Re: [SS/SV AAR] Heaven's Descent, Cyprus Reborn: A Crusader AAR (Updated 3/4)

    Another great update! I wonder if our heroes will ever make it back home or are forever doomed to adventures aboard in exotic lands?
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  10. March 12, 2012, 10:50 AM #150
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    Default Re: [SS/SV AAR] Heaven's Descent, Cyprus Reborn: A Crusader AAR (Updated 3/12)

    Interesting turn of events, though I can't help but feel this is not the end of their troubles.

    Marie's announcement was quite the shocker - no doubt it hangs over Gilbert like a giant rock as they leave the desert
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    Default Re: [SS/SV AAR] Heaven's Descent, Cyprus Reborn: A Crusader AAR (Updated 3/12)

    Another astounding update! I surely was surprised by the appearance of the tuaregs and Marie's surprise shocked me as well!
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    Default Re: [SS/SV AAR] Heaven's Descent, Cyprus Reborn: A Crusader AAR (Updated 3/12)

    Best wishes to her and you, mate. Hope she gets well soon.
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    Default Re: [SS/SV AAR] Heaven's Descent, Cyprus Reborn: A Crusader AAR (Updated 3/12)

    Quote Originally Posted by cisse View Post
    Best wishes to her and you, mate. Hope she gets well soon.
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    best wishes to you both.
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    Default Re: [SS/SV AAR] Heaven's Descent, Cyprus Reborn: A Crusader AAR (Updated 3/30)

    Well, these are some interesting developments... I'm sure this child will make the plot turn in quite a few ways in the future. Great job with this story, I really enjoy it!
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    Default Re: [SS/SV AAR] Heaven's Descent, Cyprus Reborn: A Crusader AAR (Updated 3/30)

    It will be interesting to see what they make out of this situation.They are in the middle of nowhere,and nobodys helping them.

    Nice read.

  20. April 08, 2012, 12:03 PM #160
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    Default Re: [SS/SV AAR] Heaven's Descent, Cyprus Reborn: A Crusader AAR (Updated 3/30)

    Not sure why I didn't comment on this until now. Brilliant update as always. Nice to see the dynamics between Marie and Gilbert in the face of their ticking time bomb

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