[SS/SV AAR] Heaven's Descent, Cyprus Reborn: A Crusader AAR (Updated 7/13)

[Exarch]

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[Thokran]

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[Shankbot de Bodemloze]

Gilbert, Gilbert, Gilbert... I fear he may have gone round the bend.

Great update mate. I wonder how long they'll stay here though. The Mamluks can't be that fair behind.

A few things I noticed:

Noone was to blame for that, as no one had expected to be out in the desert for this long in the first place.

Should that be No_one?

IN the distance, dark-skinned villagers plied their craft,

In?

Sorry to point them out...

+rep and I'll look forward to the next one, and hopefully my favourite Queen will feature.

[Robin de Bodemloze]

Why do I feel like dark days are ahead despite their temporary respite..

Great chapter. Liked the conflict between Gilbert and Phillip a lot. Moar please

[Paragon]

Hi!

So I'm in the process of reading your AAR (still in chapter XXII though) at first I thought it was terrible that the plot jumped 200 years just when it was getting interesting (with the jihad and all) but you managed to make a story so interesting with barely any support from the game! Specially after Isabella's introduction. I also really liked Dracul's appereance.

I post here without reading everything and doing a proper critique because I think I found three typos until now that aren't corrected. If you still mind about typos so many updates ago, I could try to find them back and point them out!

With nothing more to say (for now) I'm still reading and plan to finish it soon.

Edit: Finished it already! It's great! I bet you hold the record for amount of text out of a gameplay action/turn!

Als Gilbert is a slut, there isn't a single princess he sees that he doesn't try to bed with! Young people these days, they truly do not respect traditional values

Still, what year is it in the game? I must have mixed it, because I thought it was a really late campaign, yet Sicily is not part of he Kingdom of Aragon yet...

Also Laurence is so sadly incompetent you feel sorry for him

I hope we can read more from you soon, it's getting really interesting!

[Thokran]

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[Shankbot de Bodemloze]

Well the main thing is that the RL problems are getting sorted, and I'm sure you will enjoy Law School.

I'll look forward to these barrage of updates for sure. It's good to have you back.

[Robin de Bodemloze]

THOKRAN! Good to have you back. Now how long do you need to make up for all those missed updates?

Great to see you - best of luck with everything.

[Radzeer]

Welcome back! So the next update comes tomorrow, did I read it right?

[Thokran]

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[Paragon]

So next update is yesterday, did I read that right?

Welcome back.

[Marakulous]

Wow! This is a great story, better than any novel I've read in the last year I think! Thokran you are a great storyteller and you even got me to stop lurking(been doin that for a while). I just found your aar's this thanksgiving break and couldn't believe that you were gone for so long and just came back 2 days ago. I can't wait for your next update! You're right there with the legendary Skantarios as the best Aartists I've read. Thank you and keep up the good work

[Paragon]

It sure feels good to know that we'll have an update in less that 72 hours!

[Thokran]

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[Scottish King]

Yay! An update and a great one to make your return with. Hopefully everything works out for our group of wanderers. + rep

[Maltacus]

They had certainly waited too long if even the lazy variety of amirs had time to summon the energy to lead an army against them.

Don't tell me Richard of all people is going to rise as respected leader now...ewwww...

Who is Philips retainer, the monk? Maybe you have mentioned him but in that case I forgot.

[Thokran]

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[Robin de Bodemloze]

A great update as always. Great to see you back my friend.

[Radzeer]

So I have to admit that I went back and re-read the whole story... it was some time ago and I forgot some of the details...
Anyway, nice update, and it is great to have you back and see this story continued! Good luck with law school, and if you have time read some of the cool new stuff people write these days.

[Thokran]

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