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    Hesus de bodemloze's Avatar The Gaul
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    Default And the Tale of The Week 47 winner is.

    Congratulations



    Juvenal wins ToTW 47 and is also rewarded with the gold medal for his victory.



    Apotheosis

    The ragged band, all that remained of the Order of St. Lazarus, had been walking
    now for what seemed like an eternity across the Lithuanian scrub forest, hoping to
    reach the safety of Christian holdings. Their infrequent meals were at the expense
    of the locals, who ran off when they saw the horned helms, but there was little fodder
    in this grassless wasteland, and the horses were dying.

    Every Knight of the Order had fallen in the lost battle. These few survivors were squires
    and retainers, clad in the spare armour of their masters, their righteous certainty given
    way to despair. Perhaps they were not the chosen of God after all, for the Lithuanian
    devils in human form had not been struck down by Divine Anger, and the Holy Knights
    had been slaughtered like cattle. God had allowed the brave to die, preserving only the
    cowards, who now huddled in their stolen armour, fearful of the future.

    “We are unworthy, God has forsaken us!” wailed Heinrich, chief among the doubters.

    Ignaz: monk, warrior and
    unofficial leader, saw things differently. “Wash out thy
    foul mouth, God has chosen to test us. Only the pure will return to rebuild our
    wayward Order.”

    But Heinrich was unbowed. “The Empire is rotten, the Black Death creeps from
    house to house, taking virtuous and sinner alike. Not even the Church can offer
    sanctuary from its scourge!”

    Ignaz struck him with the flat of his sword. “Silence! Do not presume to question the
    judgement of God!”

    Their conversation was interrupted by a cry from Giuseppe, youngest and weakest
    of the squires. No explanation was needed, Lithuanian riders were clearly visible
    bearing down upon them. Ignaz bawled at them all to mount up, but they knew
    there was no escape.

    Ignaz's eyes blazed: “This is a happy day, we are to be martyrs my brothers! Let us
    sell our lives dearly!” and with that he spurred his horse into a charge, followed to
    the best of their ability by the rest of the band.

    But the charge was quickly spent and a confused fight with the Lithuanians ensued.
    Heinrich saw Giuseppe, who had fallen behind, engulfed by a mass of pursuing
    enemy horsemen.

    In a burst of fury, Heinrich dispatched an overconfident opponent and turned to
    help Giuseppe, but he was already dead. A burly Lithuanian was stripping his
    corpse of its armour, revealing a pale thin boy streaked with filth, his emaciated
    body covered with unhealed sores. As he pulled the hauberk over the boy's head,
    Heinrich saw the unmistakable swellings in his armpit, and everything suddenly
    became clear to him.

    Ignaz had been right all along! They were indeed instruments of God. But it was
    neither their swords nor their virtue which God required, merely their death. For by
    that death, the Almighty would bring unimaginable suffering and destruction upon
    the pagans.

    Heinrich ceased fighting, removed his helm and sat, finally content, smiling at the
    Lithuanian who would kill him.




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    Congrats, Juvenal
    For the gold medal, too.
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    Default Re: And the Tale of The Week 47 winner is.

    Although I am fond of all my stories, I was particularly pleased with this one because I managed to create some emotional tension.

    It has a large helping of my usual irony, but without the bitter aftertaste of my usual cynical humour.

    My thanks go out to the electorate. There are good submissions these days, so it is an honour to win against such competition.

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    Gratz Juvenal, well deserved!
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    Congrats on the win, but foremost on the Gold medal!

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    Congratulations, a tremendous story....

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    Quote Originally Posted by Juvenal View Post
    Although I am fond of all my stories, I was particularly pleased with this one because I managed to create some emotional tension.

    It has a large helping of my usual irony, but without the bitter aftertaste of my usual cynical humour.

    My thanks go out to the electorate. There are good submissions these days, so it is an honour to win against such competition.

    Congrats, old man, and welcome to the club. Let's see, we've got two golds and one silver floating around now, right?
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    And some bronzies as well.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Theodotos I View Post
    Congrats, old man, and welcome to the club. Let's see, we've got two golds and one silver floating around now, right?
    Thank you.

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    Congradulations!
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