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Thread: Tie - Breaker - Tale of The Week 46

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    Submission 1
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    Behold the Demon

    "You have summoned the best and the worst of my army, foolish Lithuanians! I give you my children to fight in your battle. Now leave...
    And oh...
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    ...The madly evil laughter followed words of a dark and damning origin...the sound drones in my head, just like the autumn shower does upon the roofs of my hometown...
    Yet now, after having summoned them, we have a fighting chance. No...A victory at hand against those damned Christian Germanes! Teutons...monsters...Seven firstborns have been given to HIS hands, to ensure HIS helping hand in this conflict.
    A dire price...
    He who sacrifices his conscience to ambition burns a picture to obtain the ashes.
    That's the words we all heard as we left the depths of his foul realm...Grim faces remained the only expressions one could spot on any of us. We all gave our sons away for this. Now, we shall lead our people to salvation. Our men to victory...

    I feel a dark presence within me, and with secret appreciation, I can sense the same darkness around other six. I can sense the fear of my countrymen and brothers-in-arms when they look at the seven of us. Almost a terror...

    Finally, we charge, and the power of that presence surges through our bodies, and makes us leap ahead of the rest, as if we were winged.
    The moment of impact...I swing...And...

    All the field stops in one horrific moment...My body feels heavy as it always was before today...My legs shake...The sword has slid out of my hand...
    And all I can see ahead of me now, is what I know the others saw in me, a bare few moments ago...Red eyed deamon, with a dark aura of horror around him...
    The moment is over with a terrific clang of thousand bells as if gates of hell opened upon this field, and all I see is a claymore's blade cutting the air with ease and it's tip heading at my throat...
    He who keeps company with wolves, will learn to howl. Or be eaten by them...


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    Our Time is Ending


    My beloved sons and daughters, a new beast has come from the West. From his horned head of steel his voice calls on you to kneel before a new god. In his right hand he holds the sword that demands your submission; in his left is the shield adorned with the cross where his peasant-god perished.

    His god said the strong shall follow the weak, and so it has been. First came the priests of the peasant-god; they were foolish, haughty men who dared violate the sanctity of our oak groves and brought low the sacred trees that housed me and my brothers and sisters. I cried out for vengeance, and you rid our forests and glens of their foul presence. You brought back the old ways to your brothers and sisters who had fallen under the spell of the new god, and you sent to the underworld those who still clung to those delusions.

    But you have called down the anger of the metal beast. Silently he smashes through our warriors, casting aside their axes and spears like playthings, gutting their bodies like pigs. He stops at nothing, his countenance revealing naught but the grim determination of his eyes, searching for his next sacrifice to the peasant-god.

    I know little of the peasant-god, but to conjure such mighty armies and rule all of the West with commandments of mercy and forgiveness is the mark of a truly potent being. For many thousands of years, I – and my brothers and sisters – have protected you in the darkness of the piney woods, the turbulence of the cold seas, and the bitterness of the winter’s wind. But this new god brings a power we do not understand.

    Yield to the metal beast and worship his god if you must. The promise of a divine mercy that will spare you from the fires of the underworld is a tempting one indeed. If you yield, then so shall we. For only through you do we live.

    Pray to the peasant-god, but forget not the stories that were told to you as children. The oak groves still have much to teach you and your descendants, even as you accept the new god as your Lord. Forget not the household gods that protected the hearths of your families, or the witches and trolls and other fell beings that lurk in the woods, or the spirits and gnomes that see you safely on the path in the forest. Your hearts will be a dwelling-place for a new God, but that dwelling-place was built by the old ones.

    Our time is ending, but forget us not.

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