The Librarians didn't like the pooh...

[Libbi Bibbi]

Well, I thought it was well written. Especially if English is not your primary language. As to the end....Sometimes we don't get to choose our own destiney's...

I'm going to have to agree with dear old dad here.....however....in a general view it was a bit too much.....obscenity wise


I still got a good laugh out of and I appreciate the fact that you have a wild imagination like me....you can make a nothing like waste excretion into a something like a very articulate and concisest story...

[Justinian]

no pain can reach you while you’re using the toilet

Untrue.

As for the story, I wrote one and submitted it to the writing competition and it wasn't rejected. If you actually cared (which, I suspect, you do not) and seriously wanted to enter the competition you would have put more effort into it and written something besides juvenile drivel.

[Harry Lime]

Heavens to betsy!

How the hell did this stay open?

The story was quite rightly rejected by the Content department and I fail to see how 'publishing' it here is either a question, suggestion or a comment on improving the site.

Closed.