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    Lou337's Avatar Taihō no heishi
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    Default A song by me- check it out

    Hey I wrote this song some time ago...maybe 6 months ago or more and recorded it. It's about a homeless guy that likes this girl who likes coffee so he wants to buy her a cup of coffee.

    The recording is here http://files.filefront.com/Homeless+.../fileinfo.html

    the lyrics are below

    Homeless Date

    i dont even have a home
    i live on the street, all alone
    that may come as a shock,
    this is all i have
    this is my box

    hello madam can you spare a quarter?

    let's get some coffee, i have no job
    cant afford the expensive ones
    and if you like it home-made
    then im not your guy

    cause, i dont even have a home
    i live on the street, all alone
    that may come as a shock,
    this is all i have
    this is my box

    you like a tall one with some foam
    yes i know, ive seen you, sitting all alone
    maybe someday i could join you
    if shirts shoes and and pants weren't required

    but, i dont even have a home
    i live on the street, all alone
    that may come as a shock,
    this is all i have
    this is my box

    i dont even have a home
    i live on the street, all alone
    that may come as a shock,
    this is all i have
    this is my box
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    Default Re: A song by me- check it out

    The fact that you even uploaded makes it great but a Bum buying anything just somehow seems wrong lol.

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    Default Re: A song by me- check it out

    well bums are frugal...maybe he saved up just enough to buy her a cup of coffee?
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    Default Re: A song by me- check it out

    Quote Originally Posted by Lou337 View Post
    well bums are frugal...maybe he saved up just enough to buy her a cup of coffee?
    I suppose so

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    Its decent Have heard better but you have a pretty good voice.. Become a rapper and see me again...
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    Default Re: A song by me- check it out

    Sure. Here goes.

    Uh uh....uh uh uh check it out now

    i got my gold and silver
    not wrapped around my fingas
    they wrapped up in plastic coin wraps
    oops where the gold standard at!

    I tried just for you.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lou337 View Post
    Sure. Here goes.

    Uh uh....uh uh uh check it out now

    i got my gold and silver
    not wrapped around my fingas
    they wrapped up in plastic coin wraps
    oops where the gold standard at!

    I tried just for you.
    What were you trying for there? not all rap is about materialism and attainment.

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    Lou337's Avatar Taihō no heishi
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    Default Re: A song by me- check it out

    Sure but in this case this rap was not about bling bling, but gold and silver bullion coins. If you guys want an unmaterialistic rap here goes..

    i ain't seen my baby daddy in 5 years
    now we here alone in da atmosphere (this is really bad )
    and i dont even know if i can breathe
    all i can see is that i cant leave

    edit: word.
    Last edited by Lou337; April 27, 2009 at 10:30 PM.
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    Default Re: A song by me- check it out

    Damn you Filefront!

    This is the first time a download didn't work.
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