Last edited by Juvenal; March 31, 2010 at 08:22 AM.
Developer for Roma Surrectum 2 || Follow my move to the USA in Calvin's Corner
Son of Noble Savage || Proud patron of [user]Winter[/user], [user]Lord of the Knights[/user] and [user]fergusmck[/user]
Great idea, great new issue, thanks for the writers and the editor too.
The quotes are missing. It has a huge meaning to mine and Juvenal's review it has an impact on it. Calvin, where are you? Fix the quotes immediately!
Seriously, this is a good issue. Especially when it's my birthday and I'm happy to be wished a Happy Birthday .
I will blaze once more.
Wo-lo-lo! I will leave again !
Happy birthday
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Happy birthday Aster! And great work to the contributors of the Critics Quill!
It looks good up there doesnt it? Congrats to my fellow reviewers/
Well done gents and welcome to the fold.
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A very good publication, with good reviews. A very fair review of my AAR, its encouraged me to get off my lazy arse and get it finished. Before I started mine I never really read any of the older Rome/Med stories, I did'nt realise there were so many good authors out there.
Btw, should we get an announcement in the AAR forum? The people directed by the reviews don't see it here and they are the expected audience for us. I must apologize a bit when I say not all people read the ES though. And some might miss the part when it was said that we merged. People still know us by the AAR fora.
Not a bad read, but I found the Cold Winter's People - A Russian AAR Review a bit harsh. I know there are many AARs around that simply are not great nor high standing, but beating on one AAR like that, when there are far worse around just did not do it for me. In my opinion its an "ok" AAR..but not an awful one that people should "stay away" from...
There's a bit of problem too.
In the legend tags for The Pontic Expedition. The author is Austen Bin and not Austin Bin.
ReD_OcToBeR, I know there are a lot of those kinds of AARs. And it may be harsh because tuore has experience making AARs before. Notably the Foot of The Mediterranean Sea. Which earned a place in the Scriptorium. Do you know that only good AARs can enter there?
I would not like to go further as I may tell something I cannot tell.
After taking a look around the forums I can kind of understand the criticism now, sorry to jump to conclusions, I was just a bit shocked at first. Ah well.
Very well done guys! I have been looking forward to this coming and and I was not disappointed.
Thanks Juvenal for the fair review. I agree 100% with your critiques. Spelling has always been a problem for me, though I do tend to reach beyond my ability sometimes. Thanks for the overall positive comments, which I shall treasure!
To the rest of the staff, you all did a wonderful job! It really gives me the want to look at these other fine AAR's and leave some comments, which I don't do nearly enough.
Can't wait for the next one!
Author of The Pontic Expedition
Ah, I was surprised to see An Empire Reforged was reviewed. I didn't even know it was in the Scriptorium.
I'm dyslexic so writing doesn't really come naturally to me. I'm far better at it these days than I was in my teenage years, obviously, but still . As such, receiving positive reviews and feedback, and constructive criticism, means a lot to me.
I may still have the save on a memory stick. If I do then this review may prompt the Empire to begin expanding again one of these days. I can't be sure though, it may have been on the stick that got stolen at work recently.
The entire post and all the reviews are an excellent read overall. Well done.
Good review. Thanks. One note on the font and pictures. Font--I'm having trouble getting that worked out--it's not intentional. Pictures--all battles where Ewan is present will have color pictures. All battles where he is absent will have b & w. It's an old technique of mine.
Son of PW
Son of PW
Awesome guys, rep all around. Someone get fergus to post so I can rep him too.