[M2TW AAR] For the Motherland!

[Last of the Mohawks]

For the Motherland

A Russian AAR

Hi, I'm Last of the MoHawks, or LOTM for short, this is my first AAR so be gentle, only ideas, constructive criticism, praise, no spam, no chat, and keep comments short. As said above this is a Russian AAR, where I'll bring Russia under one banner, then invade Germany with the WW2 tactic, but I'll do this the Russian way all time unless it makes the game unrealistic.

Mod: Retrofit.

Rules: toggle_fow
No Reloads
Lose=Lose unless technical
Add/Remove trait if General gets unwanted traits like Chiv general winning first etc.

Difficulty:H/M

First chapter today, had to go out and wrote this, and don't want to lose it!

[tuore]

Looks exciting, update soon!

[Last of the Mohawks]

Looks exciting, update soon!

The Battle commences Oh and Master Tuore of AAR's have you any Ideas?

Chapter 1:
A Dark World

1080 AD. The Dark ages over and the beginning of Wars and Feuds, Regicides Civil Wars, the time we now know as Medieval time. Russia and nation in two parts, the family of Novgorod, and Kievan Rus, although the Kiev dwellers have a large nation, no one knows them, they seem like Loyal-less scum, but the family in Novgorod are known, known for brutality and Horse archers. Although being the smallest Nation in the know world.


Grand Duke Ysevold knew he would have to expand his empire soon, or he risked being over run Poland, Hungry and many other nations. The Council of Nobles had given him a mission of taking Smolensk, he decided this would be for the good of the nation, without consulting his family he took of with basic troops and a determination to kill whoever lived in Smolensk. While the Grand Duke head for Smolensk, Mikhail started a arduous journey to Helsinki. As Mikhail was the popular one from Novgorod he had a spy with him, Chernek Grechinov, Chernek knew the pros and cons of being a spy, and con was death, Mr. Grechinov knew what he had to do, and he had to do it well.
Disaster! Grechinov died! He had to get a new spy only one person he could trust and could do it, Prince Vladimir,




Mikhail sent a message to Prince Vlad immediately.
As the messanger entered the throne room he bowed and presented the letter to Vladimir.

Dear Vlad,
I'm sad to inform you a member of our infiltration team has died, he being our best and youngest member "Chernok" stated the Prince. I have to say Novgorod being the best city in the North you must have a spy hanging around, make sure no one reads this or tells this to Father.
Your loving brother Mikhail.

The Siege of Smolensk, Chapter 2: Is coming soon (Today)

[tuore]

Nice update!

[Crusading Knight]

Nice AAR. I like that you've picked a hard faction, personally tho, I prefer playing as Christian factions Back to your AAR, I noticed a spelling mistake, but I always notice, great AAR so far.

[Last of the Mohawks]

Nice AAR. I like that you've picked a hard faction, personally tho, I prefer playing as Christian factions Back to your AAR, I noticed a spelling mistake, but I always notice, great AAR so far.

Yes I noticed quite a few but I'll sort them out and make sure they ain't made again.

[axnsan]

your images are too small, remove the .th from the link so they are not shown as thumbinals

[Pink Beard]

Nice start but we (AAR readers) prefer to see big pictures. Also It can be too annoying to open every picture in a new menu (we don't all have fast modems u know? ) so u better not post thumbnails either (or atleast these pictures u have to click on to enlarge)

[Last of the Mohawks]

OK, from now on they will be big!
Sorry for no 2nd update yesterday internet went down because of snow.

[Pink Beard]

OK, from now on they will be big!
Sorry for no 2nd update yesterday internet went down because of snow.

no problem most AARs do only 1 update a (couple of) day(s) anyways

[Last of the Mohawks]

OK, I've been ill today so no Smolensk battle for a day or two.

[Crusading Knight]

This suspense is killing me, I like your AAR and want to see some more !

[Last of the Mohawks]

Chapter 2:
The Russian Revenge

I've dissed Scotland in the Dukes Speech if your Scottish miss the speech.

A stormy day began at dawn for Grand Duke Ysevold, he woke from a restless night tired and grumpy, his advisor stated it was a bad day to attack but the supplies were running low.

The Grand Duke argued with his advisor till mid day until his advisor gave up, Ysevold was tired and grumpy and wasn't going to give up.

"Now Mr. Slatovich, before I sack you and have your head lopped off for treason, will you agree we have no supplies" shouted Ysevold

"Yes," agreed Slatovich "We have no supplies, but it will rain soon and if we cant see the castle we might as well attack in the wrong direction"

"Off with your head!" And with that Grand Duke Ysevold to his broad sword and swiped at Slatovich "And I want a new Advisor! By tomorrow. Or off with his head..."

Later that day the Duke made a daring speech which would raise or lower morale in the camp "Win or you die! If you lose and survive you'll be exiled to a place with such awful people who eat sheep stomach! This place is called... Scotland!"

"Sire! Is that wise, they say they force you to die or eat haggis with a dessert of fried Mars bars! This would be awful for Russians." Shouted a Russian soldier

"It will make them win" said Ysevold sternly.

With that the Duke screamed Attack! "Watch for Archers!"

But the sly Kievan Rus still slaughtered many a man.

As the true Russian reached the walls the battle commenced.

The battle was fierce and men of both nations died, but for a good cause.

The battle was even until the Duke charged

His Horses charged straight through until he was at the back, then charged into occupied Spearmen and unarmed archers.

The battle took its toll until a victory was achieved.

But with masses of bodies,

and slug fests.

This was a great win, and a foothold in modern day Russia the battle for glory was turning

Imageshack is playing up, I'll try photo bucket for pictures.

[Kignan]

Nice AAR been reading quite a few keep it up

[Nazgūl Killer]

HAHAHAHAHAHA

"Where they eat sheep stomach, called SCOTLAND"
That line cracked me up. Very good AAR mate, honestly it took me some time to adjust to your style of writing, but it's very well done and pretty funny. Keep it up! (+rep)

[Last of the Mohawks]

HAHAHAHAHAHA

"Where they eat sheep stomach, called SCOTLAND"
That line cracked me up. Very good AAR mate, honestly it took me some time to adjust to your style of writing, but it's very well done and pretty funny. Keep it up! (+rep)

OK, I tell you what, what type do you like? I've always wrote stories like this, and I've got high levels, but some ideas would be nice.


And Pictures today if imageshack isn't playing up.

[Nazgūl Killer]

Nah mate, don't change the style you write, I mean it took me a bit of adjusting because you don't dig into details as I like to do (Read my AAR if you want to see what I mean), it took a bit of a while to get used to it, but it allows freedom of imagination.

[Last of the Mohawks]

Nah mate, don't change the style you write, I mean it took me a bit of adjusting because you don't dig into details as I like to do (Read my AAR if you want to see what I mean), it took a bit of a while to get used to it, but it allows freedom of imagination.

Precisely, people in AAR's describe people and characters, but this way its a quick read, you think as you want and you see the land how you want.

[Nazgūl Killer]

Exactly what I meant. I won't change the style of writing I do in my AAR, just maybe the division of paragraphs (), and I won't ask anyone to.

[Silent Assassin]

Nice work LOTM!!!