Originally Posted by
FarKenal
Truly great work guys, I had no idea how you were going to pull off the stubby little dwarves.
Given that this is a preview though, I thought Id share some feedback
With the Dwarven Axemen units, a lot of them have their axe poles going under their beards and coming out the side/back of their necks. I also like the green clothes to help put some differences in there, but it blends into the grass too well, maybe a slightly darker green/dirtier would suit better.
Same with the arms on the Dwarven Halberdmen, the green makes me think theres a graphics glitch and that Im looking at grass.
For the Vault Wardens with the upgrade armour, the square/high shoulder pads could do with some smoothing/refinement. One big thing I just noticed is that when they hold the spear to their chest, that it dissappears into their body and comes out at the shoulders!
The Dwarven Nobles appear to have triangle feet.
Axemen of Erebor, they all have the axe poles going through their beards
Theres a little bit of glitch problem with the Dragonslayers of Ered Luin, when they rest their axes on their shoulders and it goes under their armour.
In general I think if you could possibly get time, to add an additional different style of helmet for most of the standard units, which would pay off wonders and help prevent that cloneish feel. For the units with shields is it possible to add a wrist band or something around their arm holding the shield, as at the moment some of them look like their magically holding on.
I think that you may have one or two, too many similar units. I know that 2 are from area zone of recruitment, but with
Dwarven Warriors
Dwarven Axemen
Dwarven Nobles
Iron Guard
Axemen of Erebor
Dragonslayers of Ered Luin
General with Bodyguards
It just seems that most of them are too similar, perhaps it could be worth giving one special unit Hammers, instead of swords or axes, and give them an attack bonus versus, beasts/large creatures/armour etc.
Anyway your work looks great and sorry if it seems like nothing but criticism, but if I wrote what I liked, it would go for several pages and Im just trying to help it be perfect.