How does this sound?

[highlander7799]

I am making a Vietnam movie, and here is a basic layout of the plot:

There is a murderer in the US army. They know what platoon he's in, but not which man he is. The lutenint s.p of the platoon is in charge of finding the murderer and killing him. The rest of the movie is them in the jungle, going on patrols, fighting battles, and talking. The whole time people keep showing up dead, and as you watch the movie you cannot tell who the murderer is. In the end, when just a seargent, three soldiers, the luitenent and the murder are left, you find out who it is. The murderer shoots the seargent when he thinks everyone is asleep, and then gets shot by the luitenent. The VC then start opening up from the jungle and kill everyone except the seargent, who crawls into a nearby stream, and is later saved by Navy SEALS. He gets back to America and he gets interviewed, and narrarates the whole story throughout the movie. He commits suicide at the end.

If you have any suggestions feel free to add them

[bomberboy]

Sounds good, are you going to make any improvements? Or are you currently writing the script.