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    Default 12th Pheltorian Rifles

    I've decided to create a regiment from scratch.For the story I m thinking about writing. I m gonna call it the 12th Pheltorian Rifles. Heres the basics:

    12th Pheltorian Rifles
    Colonel Arves Logoni
    Major Jessen Werchmac
    Regimental Commissar Phillieas Caesar (PLACEHOLDER NAME)
    Mechanized 1 Chimera per Squad.
    Six Companies
    1st Company is the largest due to it’s the Administration, Logistics, and Overall Command Company. 390 men
    2nd, 3rd, 4th, 5th are the main fighting force. 260 men each company
    6th is the Sentinel Company. 12 Sentinels plus Support/Maintenance. 70 men.

    The 12th is an Urban Combat specialist Regiment, so their Body Armor is Black over Urban Camo scheme fatigues.

    In 2nd-5th company every 5th platoon is an Assault Platoon. Basically Grenadiers (Carapace Armor and Hell guns)

    10 man Squads. 1 Sergeant, 1 Corporal, 8 PFC’s or Privates.
    2 Squads per Platoon plus 5 man Command Squad.
    10 Platoons per Company plus a 10 man Command Squad.

    Heavy Weapons are: Flamers, Heavy Stub guns or Bolters, and Missile Launchers.
    Feel free to give advice.
    Edit: or to leave input.
    So is its a good regiment or not?




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    Lt. Morph Roslit, of the Pheltorian 12th Rifles Regiment, peered through the rain and scanned the street. Except for the falling of the rain not a sound could be heard.
    “Squad Two, move to the objective, Squad One will cover.” Roslit indicated the apartment complex 400 meters up the street. “Execute”
    Sgt. Nevillen signaled his men to advance. They moved by fire team, one provided cover while the other advanced, then their roles switched, then they repeated the cycle. Second Squad made it to the objective, taking defensive positions when they got there. “Nevillen here sir, we’re at the objective.”
    “Roger Nevillen, Command Squad move to objective Squads One/Two provides cover. Execute.” Roslit then dashed out of cover and advanced up the street. He was half way there when up ahead there came the sounds of intense lasfire. Taking cover behind an overturned ground car he signaled Nevillen on his vox. “Nevillen come in, what’s your situation?” only static. “Nevillen I need a sit-rep over”
    “Nevillen here, we’re engaging a small force, maybe platoon strength, lightly armed, we’ve got the upper hand sir, but could use some back-up”
    “Roger Nevillen, First Squad move up and assist Second Squad, Execute” Roslit got up and continued his advance to the complex. The command Squad reached the skirmish as the enemy was trying to flank second squad, thus catching the flankers in the flank; the enemy lost 4 men before they even knew what hit them. After a few minutes the enemy retreated into the complex. Roslit walked over to Sgt. Nevillen, “Any loses?’’
    “Yeah we lost Cpl. Pelozi, took one in the chest, didn’t penetrate, then he took one in the face as the enemy fell back. Werso and Biste have minor wounds, just a glancing blow.”
    “That’s unfortunate Sergeant” turning he saw First Squad had made it to the objective. “Men orders are to hold here till 5th, 6th 8th platoons get here, then we’re taking the building, so get some good positions, pray and prepare to cleanse the enemy.
    Last edited by Phillieas_Caesar; April 10, 2008 at 11:12 AM.


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    Good start, so were the enemy Chaos?
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    No, they are...

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    insurrectionists, who believe the Imperium is too corrupt to do the Emperor's will.


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    Default Re: 12th Pheltorian Rifles

    Quote Originally Posted by Phillieas_Caesar View Post
    No, they are...

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    insurrectionists, who believe the Imperium is too corrupt to do the Emperor's will.
    Oh so their like the Soul Drinkers.
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    Nice start Phillieas.

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    working on the Second part, but have been super busy at school and work.
    try to get the second part up by Monday. if i do i'll edit the first post and put it there so you dont have to search the thread.


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    Now a New Question: I haven't decided on Morph Roslit's wargear yet. I can't decide between having Roslit have a Laspistol and a Sword, or a Boltpistol and a Sword.

    Maybe a Chainsword? or just have him carry a Lasrifle and a secondary bladed weapon.


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