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    Default [M2TW AAR]Reconquista: An Iberian Romance AAR -- Completed!

    Well we can't all be Ryoken but I too have decided to enter this contest. This is the information and link thread so feel free to respond. I'll be updating this post as I finish a chapter or respond to comments. I'm not sure how long the AAR will be, perhaps 3-4 chapters but for now the opening chapter is up. It is a powerpoint presentation. I actually don't have word, I use Open Office. However, it is a standard power point, and you can see it in Microsoft's Power Point Viewer 2003 (a free download). Part of the reason I chose powerpoint was because it was the most forgiving way to format something, at least I think so. Please note that it is optimized for square screens, not widescreen monitors.

    You'll note though, if you followed the Turks 2, that I already have kingdoms. I'm doing this because I like telling stories and enjoy competition and because I like the game. If by some chance I were to win, I'll either give it to the second place winner or donate it to Child's Play or something.

    EDIT: As usual, I have to reload the file to fix a few typos. I need a proof-reader, blech.
    EDIT2: Corrected version is now up.
    EDIT3: All done! Thanks go out to my girlfriend for proofreading the last two parts.

    Reconqusita: An Iberian Romance
    A pair of royal outcasts find their purpose as the fires of piety engulf the peninsula!

    Part 1
    Part 2
    Part 3
    Part 4
    Part 5

    Slight Edit: Did a little grammatical fixing, replaced the sword picture in Part 4, and added a new picture in Part 5 that I just found. I knew it was there somewhere but I hadn't been able to find it. Files have now been updated to reflect that.

    Rodrigo's General's Unit with the Umayyad Banner.

    Editor's Notes Part 1:

    A word about the title: I'm using the word "romance" in a way closer to the medieval idea of romance than the Victorian era and in particular I looked to Amadis de Gaula, of the very early 16th or very late 15th centuries. As it stars an Iberian I felt it was a good place to get some inspiration.

    On History: To begin with, I was unable to find any evidence that Rodrigo, the Spanish faction heir, existed. Urraca and Teresa the princesses at the start of the game certainly did and I've picked events from Urraca's life to mix with what happened in game and what you can infer to create the AAR Urraca. The "brother" Rodrigo talks about is Sancho, the son of Alfonso VI Valiente. The battle described in the AAR (the pictures are grayed because it's a flashback!) is the Battle of Ucles where in real history, Sancho was killed in battle. Rodrigo's very existence changes that history.

    Galiana is my own creation. She was inspired by the tale of Zaida and her relationship with Alfonso VI (hence the rumors about Urraca). Her existence also provides part of the "Romance" of the title.

    I've taken several liberties with both the way the game is balanced in 1080 and with actually history in terms of telling a good story, that is, my story is not necessarily dependent on what happens in game but is illustrated by and based on M2. For those impatient, the battle starts on slide 6. It's about 2.7MB so it's hefty but manageable.

    Editor's Notes Part 2:

    The second part was harder to write. I experienced an extreme form of writers block that lasted a long time and had to toss two attempts one of them quite far along. When it finally broke I wrote something like 7 slides in 30 minutes. Luckily I have an idea about how this is going to turn out now. The second part is 2.8 MB so a little bigger but still smaller than a song.

    Content wise I suppose the important thing to note is Rodrigo isn't married so no complications there, and that while the Hashshashin really did gain fame around the time of the First Crusade, they were around before then. In effect these are a branch of the Hashshashin that are less focused on assassination than combat--as they are portrayed in game.

    From now I will be adding editor's notes to the files themselves.
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    I have PPT at work, so I will view it there.

    I will not comment on your "We cant all be Ryoken" statement.

    We shall see who gets the free copy of Kingdoms (I dont have it already). Then I will comment on it.

    WOOT!

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    That was a really neat way of presenting your story line.

    I'm going to go on a whim and guess your general has an adultress?

    Excellent writing, and good story.
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    Nice work.

    What unit is that on slide 9 in the bottom frame? The soldiers in gray with spears? I dont recognize it.

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    Thanks for taking the time to read it. That unit is the Dismounted Arab Cavalry with the second armor upgrade (level 4), defensively it's the highest level spear unit the Moors get.

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    Ah, I love that unit. I just never got it to insanely high armor upgrade level. Cool!

    How do they have such good armor on the field at this early point in the game?

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    In my copy I've adjusted a few things for balance. One of those things was making the Moors stronger, as Cordoba rivaled Constantinople in the recent (game) past so I added a port, roads and gave Granada a few upgrades so it doesn't start so poorly. It definitely makes things more of a challenge and reflects the historical reality a bit more closely. I did the same thing with Constantinople. Since the timescale is 6 months a turn, the Moors have had a lot of time to build up peacefully.
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    I'm not an expert on AAR, but I loved your style, Pabs! I would rather read a character driven story than a turn-by-turn breakdown of a campaign any day.

    I had been contemplating writing a similar style AAR myself and found your work an inspiration to actually get on with it!

    Good stuff! Looking forward to Part Two.

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    I demand a part 2

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    I actually sat down last night and plotted an outline of the rest, should be about 4-5 chapters total. Chapter 2 hopefully on Thursday with 3 on Sunday. I'll also probably hit 3rd Scroll this afternoon when I have a bit more time....

    Edit: Removed.
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    Updated, see first post.

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    Part Four Added

    Part Five Added

    Story Complete! How'd it go?

    Happy Thanksgiving!

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    Damn, production is high in Reconquista town.

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    I really want to read this but when I try to download power point from the link you supplied it just hangs there with a working in background curser, any chance you could offer it on filefront with your story. cheers

    edit: its ok I got it

    Wow m8 excellent story and read the whole lot in one go I couldnt stop

    do not read spoiler below unless you have read the story

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 
    I laughed when Urraca chased they moor general from Toledo tho, that was unexpected, I thought she was a gonna and the castle, I'm sure you where even more surprised. It was a pity about the prodigy moor general not showing up in the fight but at least Sancho took care of him, even if it did cost him his own life. brave Sancho. LONG LIVE SANCHO. LONG LIVE KING RODRIGAZ AND HIS QUEEN!!!!!!
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    That was a lovely story, excellent writing and a very good set up. It was a great read.

    However, I'm not sure if medieval Spanish culture is the same as modern, but they celebrate "La Dia de Los Muertos" or the Day of the Dead. They don't really mourn losses, they celebrate them. They consider death a part of life. Also note, when a Spaniard says he's dead, he says "Estoy muerto" (muerte?) which doesn't really mean a lot if you don't speak the language, but 'estoy' essentially means a temporary condition of which he is. This just puts death into perspective.

    Note, I'm studying Spanish Language & Culture, and while I'm far from fluent I consider myself fairly proficient. Of course, if The Day of the Dead wasn't celebrate in 1100, then I need to put my foot in my mouth.
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    Quote Originally Posted by supekele View Post
    That was a lovely story, excellent writing and a very good set up. It was a great read.

    However, I'm not sure if medieval Spanish culture is the same as modern, but they celebrate "La Dia de Los Muertos" or the Day of the Dead. They don't really mourn losses, they celebrate them. They consider death a part of life. Also note, when a Spaniard says he's dead, he says "Estoy muerto" (muerte?) which doesn't really mean a lot if you don't speak the language, but 'estoy' essentially means a temporary condition of which he is. This just puts death into perspective.
    Day of the dead is a largely Latin American celebration that has its roots in the ancestor worship of the MesoAmericans so I'm not sure how appropriate it would be to Medieval Spain. The funeral itself was written to match the image in the game as were a few other things. Spain is a very traditional Catholic country at this time not really in the tradition of the Catholicism with pagan influences that characterizes Latin America as far as I understand it.

    Also the Pabs in SSJPabs is short for "Pablo" so I completely understand what you are getting at by differences in es/estar!

    Thanks for reading and commenting! Glad you enjoyed it.
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    Wow, this AAR is getting interesting and I only finished part 1! But its kinda late here (Argentina) so I will read them tomorrow... Finally I find a spanish AAR!

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    This is a great piece of work.

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