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  1. Sticky: Poll: Re: MAARC LIII! - 2nd Place Tie-breaker!

    A tie in a tie breaker! How ironic.

    Also, only one other voter apart from myself! Come on people, we can do better than that.

    So what now, Scottish King, is there another tie breaker?
  2. Re: [SS 6.3] Raiders across the Sea: A Denmark AAR

    Liked the last two chapters. Great to see you writing again.



    Me every battle.
  3. Re: A Missionary's Perspective: The Diary of Tullio de Sao Joao

    Interesting start and a new and fresh perspective. As McScottish said, perhaps remove the 'dear diary' it's a bit unnecessary. It'll be interesting to see if and how long it takes for the priest to...
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    Sticky: Poll: Re: MAARC LIII - Vote Now!

    Yeah those were the days.

    God we sound like old men.
  5. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 11 - 17.10.14

    A Meji supporter! Ahh is this where we finally get some FOTS action? The plot twists keep coming and I love each one! Great work my friend.
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    Sticky: Poll: Re: MAARC LIII - Vote Now!

    I don't know how I cannot. I have brought great dishonour upon myself. *lines up tanto ready to plunge it into him but then suddenly a messenger comes with news of the new vote and he quickly throws...
  7. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    That's fine with me. I'll just bring this little fellowship I've got together with me ;)
  8. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 10 - 11.10.14

    Great job, Hitai, really liking it. Who is this Tsukaru Shinji though? Can't wait for yet another chapter.
  9. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    I think begin CQ editor, mod developer and moderator is getting to m's head. Either that or he's finally discovered the ring of power.
  10. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVII 24/9)

    The word count so far stands at 54, 678. May I ask why you're asking this? It totals 92 pages so far and I'm wondering how big it is going to be in the end considering we're only 16 chapters through!...
  11. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 9 - 3.10.14

    Well if you're having fun writing it then that's the best thing and it is already coming through with your writing
  12. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 9 - 3.10.14

    You're 10 chapters ahead? I'm not even 10 words ahead when I post my updates!

    Interesting twist. I feel sorry for poor Norito, Akashi is too harsh on him. I wonder what happens now for the both of...
  13. Re: A Stroll through the Tulips… A United Provinces Fan Fiction

    Where's the new edition?

    Just a piece of advice, the head of the Netherlands at the time was called the Statdholder instead of the President. Calling him by the former might help add some realism...
  14. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVII 24/9)

    Ill re read over the chapter and possibly make some changes to it. All i wanted to show is a father being pushed over the edge by his arrogant son, not a schizophrenic. Thanks for the feedback.
  15. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 8 - 26.9.14

    Sorry I haven't commented in nearly a week but I was away so I didn't get a chance to read it.

    The plot twists just keep coming and coming. I really liked this update, the cliffhanger you left was...
  16. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVII 24/9)

    Thanks for reading. Sorry I put those in as place holders until I got the name from in game. Do you mean his inner monologue seemed schizophrenic or more his actions. i wanted him to appear cool but...
  17. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVII 24/9)

    Thank you for the support guys, the next chapter won't be out for another two weeks at least because ik currently on holiday. Anyway, it means a lot for your support
  18. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    If you want massive play Europa Universalis
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    Sticky: Re: MAARC LIII! - Submissions

    Way of the Bow: A Chosokabe AAR

    1545- Sengoku Jidai. The Age of the Country at War. For two hundred years the Ashikaga Shoguns have ruled from Kyoto. Great splendor and power were theirs. Now, the...
  20. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVI 1/9)

    Chapter XVII: The apple falls very far from the tree

    1559- Spring
    Chosokabe Kunichika

    Chosokabe Kunichika gleamed as he scanned a newly arrived letter.

    “What is it?” Asked his son,...
  21. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 7 - 19.9.14

    You mean I have to wait nearly a whole week!

    You are a devil, Hitai
  22. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 7 - 19.9.14

    *cue dramatic music*

    I seriously hope you're going to update this soon otherwise I might die from that cliffhanger
  23. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVI 1/9)

    Im sorry for the delay, my computer died the other week and of course my story was one of the only documents that wasn't saved to iCloud but I have it now as I recovered my hard drive. But I couldn't...
  24. Re: The Wings of Destiny - a FotS AAR (Updated Chapter 10 - Sep 13)

    Another great chapter. Interesting to see which way the battle goes.
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    Re: ARASOI 争い

    I hope you still have plans for this. Just wanted you to know all the images seem to have gone. It says that the user moved or deleted the images.
  26. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 5 - 5.9.14

    Great stuff, things are not seeming to get any better for our two detectives.
  27. The Daily Dealings of a Merchant Commentary

    Let thy comments come........
  28. The Daily Dealings of a Merchant

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    The Daily Dealings of a Merchant
    Hath not a Merchant eyes? Hath not a Merchant hands, organs,dimensions,...
  29. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 4 - 1.9.14

    But still wouldn't the narrator use the first name?
  30. Re: In the Light of Dusk - Chapter Seven Updated 10/07/2014

    I think having two characters so far apart with no real connection to each other might only take away from the story and confuse the reader. Furthermore, I think it would also slow down Nobunaga's...
  31. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 4 - 1.9.14

    Ahh ok that makes sense because at first I was like wait what another police duo but now it's clear. But shouldn't it still be Kyoumu and Tsuya because they are their first names?
  32. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVI 1/9)

    Maybe I'll make him a long-running joke. He'll just pop up in various times and places:)
  33. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 4 - 1.9.14

    Great stuff, but who are these new people. Whoever they are, I'm sure they add an interesting element to the story. I wonder if there might be a clash between these two dynamic duos.
  34. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVI 1/9)

    I'm glad you like the chapters. I wasn't planning on bringing back the Yumi commander but now that you mention it.

    The next chapter will be out in two weeks(that's probably now my schedule) but...
  35. Sticky: Re: Advertising Board - Subscribe to get the latest updates.

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    Yuki is yet again confronted with the horrors and...
  36. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter V 17/8)

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    Chapter XVI: Celebration and Grief

    1559-Spring

    Jubilation and joy was what I had expected. Yet, I was...
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    Poll: Re: MAARC LII - The Vote

    Votes good luck to all
  38. Re: In the Light of Dusk - Chapter Seven Updated 10/07/2014

    Thanks for clearing that up about his age, I am rather forgetful these days (god that sounded old!)

    I think they stuff you have planned for Nobayuki and Nobunaga is great. Its going to be great...
  39. Re: In the Light of Dusk - Chapter Seven Updated 10/07/2014

    Yes, I believe shudo in this case would be bordering on Game of Thrones-esque (and not in the good, unpredictable, backstabbing plot way either).

    I think you went well in incorporating other...
  40. Re: In the Light of Dusk - Chapter Seven Updated 10/07/2014

    Great update with the chapter, I liked the dialogue between Nobunaga and Nobushige as well as the part from Nobayuki's point of view, he had an interesting sense of naivety, much in contrast to his...
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